Essay about using technology in class - it's a part of the learning evolution

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I wroted this essay:

Using technoloogy in class is part of the evolution of learning and suggest an obvious solution to modern challenges. Stundents of today are different from older generations and already have as routine using internet.

Technology has advantages and disadvantages too.
Firstly,using different devices we can easily find learning resources. For example if you use a video projector in class the hour become more interactive and easilier.

A disadvantage is that technology can have a negative effect on health if it's not used moderately.
Secondly,technology is quite accesible for everyone and it is enough to type a word or a sentence and you will find information in any fiield. If you want to look for a word in dictionary there is no need to browse several pages,just insert the word and answer will appear.

Another disadvantage is that technology it could distract from learning and then the teacher should took off your phone.
In conclusion,technology presents both advantages and disadvantages,but it help us to find more information quickly despite has few advantages.

The essay have 176 words and i need a essay about 200-220 words. Can someone add some ideas for me and correct my essay.
Thank you in advance.

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Hi @andrewrld4
Let me check your essay

Using technoloogytechnology in class is part of the evolution of learning and suggests an obvious solution to modern challenges. Stundents students of today are different (...) routine using the internet.

Firstly, using different devices ...
For example, if you use (...) interactive and easiliereasier .

I have read your essay, be careful to your spelling, to enlarge your idea try to explain your main idea with a/some supporting idea, you can give the example after your explanation to support your statement and then what is the result or a consequence,

try to read a lot sample answers.

Ok. Thank you.
And if you can to change my essay to a 250 words essay? If you can. Thank you.

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