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A wind turbine consist of tower, generator, wind sensor, and blades controlled by a computer.



ashelarisa48 36 / 47  
Aug 30, 2016   #1
The diagrams present the components of a wind turbine and where it can be placed. A wind turbine consist of tower, generator, wind sensor, and blades controlled by a computer. The best locations for the wind turbine is in a free landscape area with windy condition. It can be below sea level, on the highland and in domestic area.

The tower functionate as the cantilever of other parts. It is made of steel and constructed high. At the upper point of tower, there is a generator which can produce 1,5 megawatts of electricity. It is equipped with the wind sensor to control speed and direction of turbine, which connected to a computer in a small building not far from it. At the opposite of wind sensor, there is blades which made of fiberglass or wood and rotate when the wind comes then produce the electricity.

The optimum place to install the wind turbines is in the landscape area which is free from any tall buildings and has maximum wind strengths. It also can be located near from houses, called 'domestic turbine' but it only produce the lower output about 100 kilowatts.


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  • a_wind_turbine.jpg


Erpin92 3 / 3  
Aug 30, 2016   #2
there is blades = there are blades (plural)

it only produce = it only produces (present tense)
akbarmappiare 31 / 445  
Aug 30, 2016   #3
Hi Ashela.
I am pleased to read your writing because you have held the positive progress. Actually, you can diminish your mistake if you need much time to review before you upload. There are a great number of micro mistakes which can be tackled.

However, you will master for this skill.


A wind turbine consistS of A tower, A generator, A wind sensor, and ...
... in a free landscape area with A windy condition. It can be below THOSE AREAS CAN BE SEPARATED INTO THREE LOCATIONS; THE sea level, on the highland and in THE domestic area.

The tower functionateS as the cantilever ...
It is made ASSEMBLED of steel and constructed high. At the upper point of THE tower, there is a generator which can produce GENERATED 1,5 megawatts of THE electricity.

... control speed and direction of THE turbine, which connected to a computer in a small building BEING not far from it. At the opposite of THE wind sensor, there is ARE blades which made CONSISTED of fiberglass or wood ...

... is in the landscape area which is free from any tall ...
... but it only produceS the lower output about 100 kilowatts.


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