In today's world when human right is the same with others, mothers tend to be workers.
Well, this hook is not so relevant to your topic. Also the phrase " human right is the same with others" is not specific enough to convey your idea. I feel this is not a strong hook.
As we know that we cannot step back in time to the ancient century which built many of the historical buildings.
... you have grammar issues here.
It sounds as if ancient century built historical buildings.
Every person has the same right to get proper education without seeing their gender(stop here) and universities as the higher education have to accept the competence people without compare the number of students
... don't lengthen your sentences unnecessarily. That disturbs your flow of ideas.Every person has the same right to receive proper education irrespective of any gender discrimination.