Hello, You have a great interesting topic! I wanted to read on and on. I was just unsure ( as a reader) if you were speaking of the graphs or the graphs and a topic, or just a mixture. Just make sure you point out to the reader what you are referring to. You have a great opening, middle, and closing.
The two graphs below provide a breakdown information of global and urban population figures in distinguishable ( Which regions?) regions, from 1800 to 2100 and 2015 to 2040. They are measured in millions. ( Who is they? What is measured in millions? The people? The population? world growth?)
(Make it clear to the reader by adding rich details about your topic)
It is noticeable in the diagrams ( are we referring back to the graphs?) that world population growth will be at its highest point in the near future. Afterwards, the population will decline. When it comes to the urban population in different world regions ( This sentence is a little unclear, are you referring to the sentence before or after this statement?). Developed regions will remain constant throughout many years, whereas developing regions will be steadily increasing its population.
In regards to the first graph, it reveals that at first, the population stood at 1000 million of people in 1800. This number will keep continue to rise to 8000 million of human( beings?) and following in 2040. This substantial increase from 1940 to 2040 is an was an increase of 6000 million of people. This figure will be plummet to 6000( million?), a decrease of 2000 million of folks, in 2100.
( For this paragraph be clear with your first, second, and last sentences describing the human growth) Also, when describing words attached to numbers, be consistent. If you use '2000 million' you have to use that same form of speech throughout the paragraph.
A shift to the second paragraph( did you mean graph?) illuminates that the developed countries stayed at roughly 1200 million of people during the period of 2015 to 2040. In the meantime, the developing regions will continue to climb from 2100 million of human people to 4000 million people, under the examining year.
Any thorough comment is welcome!
The topic is timely and you have a good bit of information to get started. Rather than beginning the essay reporting data, however, you might introduce your main theme and the points you will discuss in a more general, but concise, way. Your second paragraph expresses your topic more generally and could be used as part of the introductory paragraph. For example:
Population growth rates vary widely across continents, countries and regions. Although the world's overall population growth rate has been declining since the 1960's, the growth rate in developing countries has increased dramatically.
Once you clarify your topic and purpose in the introduction, you can present your data in the paragraphs to follow. Try to present your data very clearly and group major themes together. For example:
The world's population grew slowly but steadily from about 1800 to the 1940's. In the 60 years to follow, though, the world experienced a substantial increase in the rate of population growth; an increase that is projected to continue until 2040. Population growth rates are then projected to begin to decline.
Generally, you have a good start and some good information. Adding an introductory paragraph and writing about your data very clearly should get you moving.
