Men and women, too. "People" is a better word than "men." Too often, we use languag in a way that marginalizes women.
Our future is currently a question of right versus wrong
Our future is a question? That is intriguing, but this idea needs more explanation. Maybe you mean our future will be determined by the answer to a question of...
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throughout across the globe, but we must not assume that future generations will achieve it. Our generation has much yet to live through, much more to see. However, we have still learned much thus far.
Use semi-colons like periods. A semi-colon works just like a period, with a complete sentence on each side of it. In this sentence, use a comma instead:
As children, we did not know of such past history, but we did know of tears and of fear.
This is an awesome adaptation of the quote: An eye for an eye, in the words of Ghandi, has made and will continue to make us a blind world; a world ignorant and nonetheless unaware of the suffering of others.
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