How often do you go shopping? What kind of ways do you prefer to purchase goods?
These are rhetorical questions that you don't really addless in the rest of the writing. so keep your writing on target, use only related questions that you will certainly discuss for this essay, the questions should have related to the 3 main differences instead.
you need to
You need to GO
Come - verb; to approach or move toward a particular person or place: Come here.
Go - verb; the act of going, You need to go there.
or company, or anywhere.
You cannot go shopping via app at work. If caught, you will get fired from your job.
create considerately change
Improper grammar. Lack of vocabulary definition familiarity. the phase does not make sense.
Creates A CONSIDERABLE
Due to this feature, it relates the difference between these types of shopping.
Unnecessary sentence. This already clear as a marked difference in the paragraph.