Write a paragraph to give advice for beginners of the English language ( About 140 words)

It's advisable that beginners of the English language should take the four following advice. Firstly, they should put their love in it. Without passion, people will find E stranger and more difficult. However, once having been absorbed in E,all of their skills are improved dramatically. Secondly, it's recommended that they not translate sentences from Vietnamese to English. Because learners are affected by their mother tongue, they tend to make silly sentences whose meanings are not clear. Consequently, they slow down their progress of English by themselves. Thirdly, English language beginners should not try to speak words that they do not know their pronunciations because it will be hard for them to pronounce correctly those words later. Above all, they should find a good English language center which definitely show them the most effective ways to learn English. In short, English a a lovely language to learn if people have found their own suitable methods.

This is a good start in expressing the sentiment you have about studying English. You are fairly succinct, and to the point. However, some pointers.

four following advice...

four following recommendations...CORRECTED

You need to guard your word choice more closely. Use a dictionary where you are unsure, and/or a thesaurus.

pronounce correctly those words later...

later to correctly pronounce those words...CORRECTED

The way you structure your sentences needs some attention. Their are English grammar books available to guide you.

You give many good thoughts about studying English, for beginners. I think, with a little more thought, this could be an excellent essay. The main areas for you to study are word choices, i.e. vocabulary, and sentence structure, i.e. grammar.

The flow of logic, and punctuation are very good. You have a pretty good mastery of the English language, yourself! Just in need of polish to convey this to the one just starting out.

Good luck!

ef_carol

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Vtnmai, first of all, WELCOME to essay forum. It's always great to welcome a new member to the EF family.

Now, your essay is good, however, you can see that I made a few corrections, I hope it helps.

Keep writing

Cheers!!!