|Writing Task 2 IELTS - conflicts about deciding subjects at university
2 - The validity of the personal opinion you present should be in the 3rd paragraph of the essay. It is...
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 about impact of social media on both individuals and society.
2 - Keep track of your word count. Always present 250 words or accept the penalties for not presenting the minimum...
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|The pie charts compare household expenditure spending on five different items in UK and New Zealand
2 - The summary overview is the presentation that gives you the opportunity to run down important information for the leader....
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|Bullying at schools. How to have a good structure in cause-solution writing type?
2 - There are a few things you have to remember when creating your restatement: - Don't refer to a debate...
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|Education is one of the most important aspects of life - GKS Undergraduate Personal Statement
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|Toefl Independent Writing - "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and working for own goals
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|The major environmental issue of our time is the extinction of many living creatures on earth
3 - This does not contain a complete thought. You probably mean that there are other pressing environmental...
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|Most people try to balance between work and other parts of theirs lives.
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|The graph depicts the percentage of four different materials recycled over the period of 28 years
2 - Incomplete image identifier. What type of graph? Review and memorize the differences. Your first trending sentence should...
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|Harder to study at school.
2 - [quote=YeuRosie19]I believe that some solutions can be carefully considered to tackle with it.[/quote] The first part of this sentence...
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|Writing #1: The graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010
2 - For clarity purposes, you must present the year coverage upfront. While the reference works as a time reference....
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|Children should be encouraged to play outdoors games that require physical activity?
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|Scientists use living animal to carry our research. Some people think it is interesting.
2 - While the topic is controversial, the presented discussion, which asks for your opinion to be presented, leans more...
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|Focus on traditional classes more or practical subjects more?
NEW - Some people said that school should focus more on teaching practical subjects such as car maintenence or managing the...
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|Computers are believed to be smarter than humans by several scientists in no time
5 - You have an inaccuracy understanding the topic. Thus, i think you can change "On top of that" ==> "Moreover"...
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|In many cities more and more people are living alone. Is this a positive or negative trend?
3 - There are some replacement needed: paraphrasing carefully about the question so you can have a better view and range...
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|Task 1: Relationships at work with supervisors and companions (survey of workers 2005 and 2009)
2 - Relationships with whom? Refer to the groups in this section first then repeat later. This is...
Writing FeedbackSally_Dao - Jun 14, 2021Holt - Jun 15, 2021
|Reasons why adults pursue education at their age and how their education costs should be allocated
2 - You missed the minimum word count by 4 words. The standard is 150 - 200 words, you wrote only...
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|The benefits of social skills and qualification skills to the company
2 - The phrase still refers to the original key phrase. LR scores are only increased by your alternate word...
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|Popularity of fish and three kinds of meat including lamb, beef and chicken in a European country
2 - [ Make this sound more professional. You could say; "The line chart shows the comparative consumption..." to...
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|Learning about the past IELTS task 2
2 - There is no collosal issue being presented. Merely a difference of belieffs. You are trying to use a...
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|A breakdown of male and female inhabitants passing the driving test in a particular Asian nation
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|Traditional newspapers are believed to hold the most vital position among news readers
3 - You just need to paraphrase the statement: Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers...
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|Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? Any solutions?
5 - In this sentence, you have incorrectly restated the idea from the topic (Bullying is a big problem in...
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|WRITING TASK 1 : The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050
4 - "From 1950 to 2050" is different from "between 1950 and 2050." In other words, "between...and" and "from...to" should...
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|Some people argue job satisfaction is more important than job security.
3 - You should look over your essay because there are some basic mistakes like: "I tend towards the viewpoint...
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|Many think that artificially intelligence robots will do all jobs eventually. Do you agree or not?
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|The budgets should be centered on illness prevention services by fostering a healthy lifestyle
2 - When you say"to a certain extent ", that indicates a limitation to your agreement. While saying " I...
Writing Feedbacknhinguyen2611 - Jun 13, 2021Holt - Jun 14, 2021
|The bar chart compares the number of crimes in five different countries of the world (1930-1980)
2 - A properly analyzed task 1 essay must be completed within 20 minutes and between 175 - 200 words. Though...
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|IELTS writing: the most common mistakes that students make when translating Vietnamese into English
2 - You should have included a clear reference to the fact that the info is based on collated opinion...
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