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IELTS TASK2: THE IMPACT OF THE INTERNET, POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE? Communication and quick information.

4 - Thanks a lot for your advice and correction! It really helps me a lot and let me know...

Writing Feedbacksandyhsu - Feb 18, 2020sandyhsu - 2 days ago
Is it necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains?

5 - @Holt Thank you so so so SO SO SO MUCH. You've pointed those mistakes that I haven't noticed before....

Writing Feedbackxtunx - Feb 20, 2020xtunx - 2 days ago
An essay with the usage of certain words

2 - Why don't you try to write an essay about a festival you have attended, a family occasion, a vacation...

Grammar, Usageedzish - Feb 20, 2020Holt - Feb 21, 2020
Accept a bad situation, or work hard to improve such situations

3 - This essay has directly disregarded the prompt instruction for a comparative discussion of the 2 points of view before...

Writing Feedbackdivectorwuam - Feb 20, 2020Holt - Feb 21, 2020
Introduction about my country - Somalia

2 - The main problem with your essay is the lack of capitalization throughout the presentation. You did not capitalize the...

Writing FeedbackBrahim7777 - Feb 20, 2020Holt - Feb 21, 2020
IELTS task 2 Technology has made men less/more sociable. Opinion essay

2 - In a 3 paragraph discussion essay, you have to present the following body of paragraphs: - 1st POV...

Writing Feedbackserbinax - Feb 20, 2020Holt - Feb 21, 2020
In the modern world, there is a movement away from written exams to more practical assessment

4 - There are several problems with your writing. The first is that you are not achieving the minimum 3 sentence...

Writing Feedbacktanpro1010 - Feb 20, 2020Holt - Feb 21, 2020
I am willing and able to share mentioned skills and competence with MBA's classmates.

4 - @serbinax Thank you for your valuable feedback. I'll try to rework it somehow and again will send it here....

Graduatealmas_kz - Feb 19, 2020almas_kz - Feb 21, 2020
Living alone is trending, do you think it is positive or negative

5 - Your essay have some wrong spelling, but overall you have good vocaburary and ideal. Good job....

Writing Feedbackcorn - Feb 12, 2020linhcong - Feb 20, 2020
IELTS 2: prevent climate change or find a way to live with it

2 - Your essay is quite clear, however, it is still lack of attractiveness and conviction to readers in your overall...

Writing Feedbackshinxg - Feb 20, 2020xtunx - Feb 20, 2020
WRITING TASK 1 - number of graduates of different gender in Canada

5 - "Tree years later" --> I think you missed the typing, it should be "three years later" And again, you...

Writing Feedbackshinxg - Feb 16, 2020Nguyet Tran - Feb 20, 2020
The line graph below illustrates how much waste was generated per year by three different companies

3 - Hi shinxg! The introduction and overview caused me a bit confusion. Firstly, the unit are not mentioned (tonnes) in...

Writing Feedbackshinxg - Feb 19, 2020Nguyet Tran - Feb 20, 2020
IELTS essay task 2 Imprisonment vs education as a solution to crime

5 - @Holt Thank you for taking time to go through my essay and giving valuable comments. I really appreciate it....

Writing Feedbackserbinax - Feb 19, 2020serbinax - Feb 20, 2020
IELTS 1: the layout of an island as it was earlier, with the development of its infrastructure later

5 - After all the comments, I rewrites below The given diagrams compare the transformation in an small island which...

Writing Feedbackkhahungkts - Feb 19, 2020khahungkts - Feb 20, 2020
IELTS WRITING TASK 2. Discuss about the importance of History and Science and Technology

5 - The essay failed to fulfill the Task Accuracy requirements in the first paragraph. You did not properly restate the...

Writing Feedbackthuyduong2711 - Feb 19, 2020Holt - Feb 20, 2020
Fostering dreams - My QuestBridge Bio Essay #2!

4 - @Holt First off, I'd just like to say thanks for all the advice you gave me! I really took...

ScholarshipDevaii - Feb 18, 2020Devaii - Feb 20, 2020
IELTS1: Earnings generated by the selling Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in five countries

5 - Grammar issues: On the other hand, the Denmark, ......

Writing Feedbackphong3baotap - Feb 19, 2020shinxg - Feb 20, 2020
Fulbright essay personal statement - the fight against cyber criminality.

7 - I studied network and telecommunication at Ecole Africaine de Developpement for three years 2011-2014 and ended up with a...

Scholarshipschulschenko - Feb 14, 2020schulschenko - Feb 19, 2020
People visiting nations - a line chart bellow by summarizing the information

4 - Can you explain this comment...

Writing Feedbackmaitrang95 - Feb 18, 2020maitrang95 - Feb 19, 2020
Do young people have influence on society's decisions that determine the future of society?

2 - There is evidence of researched material in the presentation, which means you would not be able to write this...

Writing Feedbacksou78 - Feb 18, 2020Holt - Feb 19, 2020
IELTS task 2: International aid - opinion essay

3 - @Holt Thank you very much, I will work on my introductions and run-on sentences. Yes, I want to score...

Writing Feedbackserbinax - Feb 18, 2020serbinax - Feb 19, 2020
IELTS task 2 Reading Ebooks vs watching TV and playing computer

5 - @Holt Thank you so much for your feedback, I think I can see where my mistakes are....

Writing Feedbackserbinax - Feb 18, 2020serbinax - Feb 19, 2020
NZ Scholarship: Enhancing my skills and knowledge in quantification of renewable energy works.

3 - Whao @serbinax. Thanks for this....

Scholarshipoladipokj - Feb 18, 2020oladipokj - Feb 19, 2020
My tryst with technology - motivation letter for Erasmus Degree in Medical Imaging and Application

3 - The main problem with this motivational letter is that it does not signify your professional motivation for higher studies....

Lettersks1419 - Feb 18, 2020Holt - Feb 19, 2020
Writing task 2: Jobs and assigned genders

3 - Without knowing what the actual prompt is, I would not really be able to provide a complete review of...

Writing Feedbackbartex - Feb 18, 2020Holt - Feb 19, 2020
Wrting task 2 - Foreign students in English-Speaking countries to learn English

4 - @sandyhsu @Holt thank you so much. I will fortify again...

Writing FeedbackVictorvu - Feb 18, 2020Victorvu - Feb 19, 2020
I got it from my Moma - Questbridge bio essay

3 - @Holt Thanks for your feedback! I really appriciate it and will keep it in mind while revising!...

ScholarshipDevaii - Feb 18, 2020Devaii - Feb 18, 2020
[ IELTS TASK2] About - socialize online trend

5 - @Holt @V184ht Thank you so much for your advice!...

Writing FeedbackIsabella00 - Feb 17, 2020Isabella00 - Feb 18, 2020
IELTS task 1: Diagram on electricity generation from tides

3 - You misspelled "sea" as see. "See" means to have something in sight while "sea" is a body of water....

Writing Feedbackvuthuylinh2611 - Feb 18, 2020Holt - Feb 18, 2020
IELTS Task 1: In the chart - British Men and Women in further education

4 - @Holt Thank you very much for your comment...

Writing Feedbackvuthuylinh2611 - Feb 17, 2020vuthuylinh2611 - Feb 18, 2020