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2 - I do not personally believe that this is the correct prompt for this essay. Your discussion is more of...
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|More people become well-known for their scandals and wealth, instead of their exceptional talent
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|Some people have chosen to take a holiday trip away from home to other provinces
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|ERASMUS Letter of Motivation GLOCAL (Global History & Creative Industries Pathway A)
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|The percentage of household with electrical appliances and the number of hours of housework per week
2 - The importance of the number of images indicated cannot be overemphasized. The number of images and what each...
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|The Importance of Staying Active - UBC What is important to you
2 - There is a disconnection between mental health, physical health, cross country, and your stressors in life. It is all...
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|IELTS 1: Languages, other than English, that British students at a university in England can speak
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|SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION FOR ERASMUS MUNDUS FOR MASTERS IN MANAGEMENT AND ENG OF ENERGY & ENVIRONMENT
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|Motivation letter for Ph.D. in Max Planck School of Cognition (Cognitive Psychology & Neuroscience)
3 - @Holt Hi, thanks for the review. I'll try to focus on one achievement per paragraph. This is a PhD...
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|Many people prefer to work for the same company all their whole time-life of working
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|Balance - UBC Tell us about who you are.
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|Living in a foreign country can cause serious social problems
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|An emerging young adult - UBC Essay Application: Tell us about yourself
2 - Why is that so? Offer an example of your "adulting" skills in terms of being a responsible and...
UndergraduateJaydenzhang0928 - Nov 28, 2021Holt - Nov 28, 2021
|The diagrams show the flooding area and two solutions to cope with that.
2 - Please work on creating more understandable sentences for your essays. In this particular essay, you truly have a problem...
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|CHILDCARE BY AN EXTENDED FAMILY OR PARENTS?
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|"The environment is no one's property to destroy..." personal statement essay
2 - You do not need the words of others to impress your ideology regarding the environment upon the reviewer....
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|Networking Is Being With The Right Person - Chevening Networking Essay
2 - I am reviewing your essay upon instructions from the forum moderators. Focus on your professional networking skills and...
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|Essay about replacing Art, Sport and Music subjects with subjects such as Information Technology
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|Employers should give longer vacations to employees ( writing task 2)
2 - The prompt restatement + opinion is incorrect. It does not contain the original reference points for the topic basis....
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|IELTS 1 - Next year developments in an airport are illustrated in the maps provided
2 - Please get out of the compressed idea presentation per sentence mindset. The more information you try to add to...
Writing FeedbackQuang Bao - Nov 22, 2021Holt - Nov 28, 2021
|The chart below show the average proportions of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in meals
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|Academic (LOR) Letter of recommendation for MS in Energy Systems Engineering
2 - This letter is very unprofessional. It does not contain the wording and phrasing that a high level college professor,...
Letterswaihwake - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 28, 2021
|Mandatory history courses for students? Relying on the outcomes of the past events is not useful.
2 - This phrase made your opinion statement less than convincing. You are uncertain of your opinion in a set...
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|The graph shows the amount of money earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002
2 - Incorrect writing format. You cannot use the task 2 essay format for the task 1 essay. The task 1...
Writing FeedbackCheeseQuang - Nov 27, 2021Holt - Nov 28, 2021
|IELTS Task 1: the information taken from a report on the energy consumption in the USA since 1980
2 - In reality, your summary sentence is not changed enough to be considered an information restatement on your part. This...
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|Research paper on why serial killers choose to commit multiple murders
2 - The opening statement lacks impact. Try to come up with a more interesting hook for your presentation. For impact,...
Research Paperselilucero13 - Nov 27, 2021Holt - Nov 28, 2021
|WHAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU? WHY? Knowing my limits
2 - Knowing your limits refers to actually finding out what your limitations are and how you got around it. It...
Undergraduatemo6562 - Nov 27, 2021Holt - Nov 28, 2021
|These days people in some countries tend to live a lavish lifestyle
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|The consumption of sugar based drinks is on the rise. How to tackle this problem?
2 - Incorrect. These are the writer's personal opinions, which are not referenced at all in the original...
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|It is argued that schooling from early age would be ideal for the children' development
2 - While the prompt restatement and opinion is not grammatically accurate, it is still understandable enough for an ENL. Your...
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