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2 - @Krystal318 Hi. Thanks for being a consistent part of the forum! I hope that my feedback gives you insight...
Writing FeedbackKrystal318 - Nov 14, 2019Maria - 2 days ago
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2 - @emilywang2002 Hi there. Thanks for being a part of the forum! I hope that this feedback will give you...
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2 - @ppham2020 I really like the way you describe your journey to becoming a leader. I also really like the...
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5 - @izecsony5 Hi @izecsony5, thanks a lot to your valuable feedback and directions for my essay structures is really recognized...
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3 - I think there are too many short paragraphs so, you should combine certain lines in one paragraph to give...
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3 - Hi @spideymaniac, similar with @Maria I found it difficult when I read your essay. At first, I thought your...
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|"Individuals should not be allowed to carry guns as it increases crime and violence in society".
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3 - @Maria Your feedback is appreciated! I think I messed up task response a bit too. Will try to rewrite...
Writing Feedbackisshi - Nov 13, 2019isshi - Nov 13, 2019
|The quantity of water usage by different ways in the world and water consumption in Brazil and Congo
2 - @roswita116 Hi there. Welcome to the site! I am hoping that the feedback you receive here will be useful...
Writing Feedbackroswita116 - Nov 13, 2019Maria - Nov 13, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 - The only way to reduce the traffic jam is by reducing the need for people to travel.
3 - @roswita116 Thank you very much!!! Your advice was really help. i will take it and try to stand at...
Writing FeedbackPOR HWA - Nov 12, 2019POR HWA - Nov 13, 2019
|Write to Matt and tell him what you will do to improve your English in this new school year.
2 - @Archie97 Hey, welcome here. Hopefully, my feedback is sufficient in giving you insight on how to improve your writing...
LettersArchie97 - Nov 12, 2019Maria - Nov 13, 2019
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2 - @Dogmidoo Hey. Welcome here! I hope that this feedback helps you somehow. First and foremost, you still lack...
Writing FeedbackDogmidoo - Nov 12, 2019Maria - Nov 13, 2019
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2 - @munomita Hi there. Welcome to the forum. Hopefully, all of the feedback you receive here will be useful for...
Writing Feedbackmunomita - Nov 11, 2019Maria - Nov 13, 2019
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2 - @Shiva_kh Hi there. Welcome to the forum! Hopefully, my feedback will give you insight on how to improve your...
Research PapersShiva_kh - Nov 11, 2019Maria - Nov 13, 2019
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2 - @Dinaol1234 Hi there. Welcome to the forum! I hope that this feedback gives you clarity on what you need...
UndergraduateDinaol1234 - Nov 11, 2019Maria - Nov 13, 2019
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2 - @Tranthuytrang Hi there! Welcome to the forum. Hopefully, my feedback will give you insight on how to improve your...
Writing FeedbackTranthuytrang - Nov 10, 2019Maria - Nov 13, 2019
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2 - @Winter Hi there! Thanks for being a consistent part of the forum. Hopefully, this feedback will give you insight...
Writing FeedbackWinter - Nov 10, 2019Maria - Nov 13, 2019
|Presence of teachers and student learning - computers cannot replace teachers
2 - @lamnguyen Hi there. Thanks for being a part of the forum! Welcome here. Hopefully, my feedback will give you...
Writing Feedbacklamnguyen - Nov 10, 2019Maria - Nov 13, 2019
|Utilizing alternative sources to build a sustainable economy and society - IELTS WRITING TASK 2
2 - @banhdauxanh Hi there. I would like to give you some feedback about your writing. 😁 As I read...
Writing Feedbackbanhdauxanh - Nov 10, 2019roswita116 - Nov 13, 2019
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3 - @lorimyl Hi there. Good luck on your upcoming IELTS examination! Hopefully, my feedback will give you an idea on...
Writing Feedbacklorimyl - Nov 9, 2019Maria - Nov 13, 2019
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2 - @unigirl123 Hi there. Welcome here! I hope this feedback gives you an idea on how to improve your writing....
Undergraduateunigirl123 - Nov 9, 2019Maria - Nov 13, 2019
|The animals should not be kept in the zoos - such isolation is harmful for them
2 - @jorash Hi there. Welcome to the forum! Hopefully, my feedback sheds light on how you can improve your writing....
Writing Feedbackjorash - Nov 8, 2019Maria - Nov 13, 2019
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2 - @ngthuhien Hi there! Welcome to the forum. Hopefully, my feedback will give you insight on how to improve your...
Writing Feedbackngthuhien - Nov 8, 2019Maria - Nov 13, 2019
|Popular hobbies and interests as a reflection of trends and fashions
2 - @snowflake817 Hi there. Thanks for coming to the forum! Sorry for the delay. Hopefully, this feedback still somewhat helps...
Writing Feedbacksnowflake817 - Nov 8, 2019Maria - Nov 13, 2019
|I have to write an email to all the employees to announce the office renovation plan.
2 - Hey SoulPanCake, Congrats for the new office in 2020.That is a really well draftred email with to do points....
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