|A reflective essay on teaching English as second langauge
3 - Thank you @Holt for this general review. The problem is that I am unable to pay because I have...
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|Line graph shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in Europe. Summarise info
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|MANY WILD ANIMALS HAVE BECOME ENDANGERED DUE TO HUMAN ACTIVITIES. WHY HAS THIS HAPPENED?
2 - This is an example of a task 2 essay that will get a failing score regardless of the discussion...
Writing Feedbackhyfthuong - May 25, 2023Holt - May 25, 2023
|Government in work of dealing with environmental problems by increasing fuel prices.
2 - While I commend you for writing fast and using so many words in your essay, I cannot say that...
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|Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the atmosphere.
2 - Your prompt restatement is inaccurate as you immediately focused on air pollution when the instruction was asking you to...
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|The maps depict an industrial place in Norbiton town at the present and after the development
2 - Your use of simple English is one of the strengths of this essay. You have shown an actual ability...
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|Energy engineering - Personal statement - GKS-U 2024
2 - The essay can do with some professional editing to help with the clarity of the content. However, the confusing...
Undergraduatebibi04 - May 23, 2023Holt - May 24, 2023
|The proportion of happiness of married and unmarried citizens living in the US according to age
2 - We have to immediately address the word count of this essay. With 230 words, that means you have taken...
Writing Feedbackmarytran30072000 - May 23, 2023Holt - May 24, 2023
|How To Write A Good Letter Of Recommendation?
NEW - How To Write A Good Letter Of Recommendation? Writing a strong letter of recommendation is important to effectively...
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|IELTS2 When you are in Rome, do as the Romans do; visitors should follow local customs and behaviour
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|Reasons of teenagers' online socialization and measures for in-person relationship
2 - Your prompt paraphrasing is way off base. It is not connected in any way to the original presentation. You...
Writing Feedbackkyanh0211 - May 22, 2023Holt - May 22, 2023
|Describe your dream and the efforts you have made so far to achieve it and your future plan for it
2 - There is no real ambition being depicted in this essay. You only speak of an interest in computers in...
Undergraduatekenzierivan - May 21, 2023Holt - May 22, 2023
|Gender bias in STEM - research paper
2 - skip this factual information in the first paragraph. Focus on creating a clear thesis statement based on your...
Research PapersJay2156539 - May 20, 2023Holt - May 22, 2023
|In some countries, boys and girls are educated separately after the age of about ten years old.
2 - There are a few important mistakes made in the paraphrasing section. The first of which the information source. A...
Writing Feedbackcharissedna - May 20, 2023Holt - May 22, 2023
|Why College Athletes Should Be Paid. (Need three areas of weakness)
2 - The first 3 paragraphs need to be better compressed to prevent the current problem of redundancy in the presentation....
Research PapersAntonio128 - May 19, 2023Holt - May 21, 2023
|Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes.
2 - Since this is a part of your personal opinion, it should not be located in the paraphrasing sentence/s....
Writing FeedbackNhutherelie - May 19, 2023Holt - May 21, 2023
|Two distinct stages, which are conventional and modern methods in the production of black tea
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|The most important function of music is relieving people's stress. Do you agree/disagree?
2 - The arguments presented in this essay are very good but incorrectly presented. Since you are not contradicting your personal...
Writing FeedbackArinaNguyen - May 19, 2023Holt - May 20, 2023
|In this day and age, the number of aspiring teachers is on the decline
2 - The prompt restatement + writer's opinion paragraph is too busy, too confusing to read. You need to understand how...
Writing FeedbackTran Phuong Linh - May 18, 2023Holt - May 19, 2023
|The graph shows the number of boys and girls is playing sport in England town in 2012
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|A glance at graph provided reveals the individual carbon dioxide emissions in 4 European countries
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|The charts compare the number of people per household in the UK in 1981 and 2001
3 - I think you should add sentences that compare the numbers with each other because in the graphs in ielts,...
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|Some people think that the use of plastic bags should be banned.
2 - This essay can only receive a partial score since the response is not aligned with the writing requirements. The...
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|TASK 2: Prioritising economic progress? The government should not overlook other types of growth
2 - The summary overview is incomplete. You must restate both public opinions before presenting your opinion in support of one...
Writing Feedbackscitechalon - May 15, 2023Holt - May 17, 2023
|Task 2: Games bring demerits in terms of physical health as well as mental behavior to children
2 - Do not use an empty response to the questions provided in your writer's opinion section. The examiner scores that...
Writing FeedbackAnnienguyen - May 15, 2023Holt - May 17, 2023
|Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss
NEW - Human activities indeed lead to the creatures facing extinction and damaging the ecosystem. This essay will discuss the rationale...
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|The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and its planned future development
NEW - planned future development The graphics illustrate how the industrial park of Norbiton town will be changed for development...
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|Unisex educational institutions better than single-sex education?
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|Why should guns be enacted?
2 - The first paragraph should be revised to place the question about gun laws being enacted at the end. The...
Writing FeedbackJazming - May 14, 2023Holt - May 15, 2023
|Some people find advertisements amusing or annoying and they are not influenced by this
3 - In my point of view, i think that your essay have true reasons for annoying advertisements, but the problem...
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