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Should school-aged kids be compelled to partake in local volunteer projects without payment or not?

3 - unpaid community services should be a compulsory subject -> community service is not a subject -> simply " should...

Writing FeedbackNguyenviet - Aug 8, 2022cherryblossom - Aug 10, 2022
IELTS TASK 2 : the media empowering too much attention to the celebrities' personal life

3 - "empowering too much attention to". "follow the breaking news" I think these collocation does not exist. Your limited understanding...

Writing Feedbacklenannhien - Aug 9, 2022jasmine4 - Aug 10, 2022
Ielts Writing Part 2: Criteria for schools to choose student.

3 - @hklinh2792001 -"Firstly, students, who get a good mark throughout the process of learning, are usually considered ..." --> I...

Writing Feedbackhklinh2792001 - Aug 9, 2022Thuy Tran 07 - Aug 10, 2022
"I want to be a superhero" - Gks-u personal statement

3 - Thank you so much for your valuable time and review. I will correct the mentioned things....

ScholarshipTan18 - Aug 10, 2022Tan18 - Aug 10, 2022
The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited four different attract

2 - The summary overview should have been divided into 2 sentences + the trending statement. The 2 sentences should have...

Writing Feedbackchaminh306 - Aug 10, 2022Holt - Aug 10, 2022
The questionnaire about opinions of club members and general public for the new theater in one town

2 - The writer did not perform a proper analysis of the table provided. the representation of the image should have...

Writing Feedbackjane_00 - Aug 10, 2022Holt - Aug 10, 2022
The table shows the television channels viewing figures for sports in some countries

4 - You missed the overall and even your report was quite short in my opinion....

Writing FeedbackQuangvan752 - Aug 7, 2022jane_00 - Aug 10, 2022
Vision and Science - Leadership and influence / Chevening Scholarship Application:

2 - The problem is that the applicant has discussed only the theoretical aspect of his leadership and influencing skills. This...

ScholarshipMohammedoat - Aug 9, 2022Holt - Aug 10, 2022
Government should not spend money on international aid when they have their own disadvantaged people

2 - There is no reference to a timeline within the original presentation. Therefore, including a timeline mention in the rewrite...

Writing Feedbackjane_00 - Aug 9, 2022Holt - Aug 10, 2022
What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?

2 - The essay is definitely too short to receive a passing mark since deductions will apply for writing only 223...

Writing FeedbackStellar365 - Aug 9, 2022Holt - Aug 9, 2022
Undergraduate Admission Essay - "Happy in a Surprising Way" - First Draft

2 - The discussion presented is more of overcoming an accidental challenge posed by you and encouraged by someone else. It...

Undergraduatelithomascarene - Aug 9, 2022Holt - Aug 9, 2022
Undergraduate Admission Essay - "Tell us your story" - Revision

2 - The essay clearly indicates that the story has to apply to you, the applicant, in singular form. So why...

UndergraduateGeorge Sander - Aug 8, 2022Holt - Aug 9, 2022
Technology is affecting family relationships in many ways. What are advantages/disadvantages?

2 - The writer should refrain from presenting a personal opinion within an advantage or disadvantage prompt presentation. That is because...

Writing FeedbackLinh Luong - Aug 8, 2022Holt - Aug 9, 2022
Task 1: The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows

NEW - uk residents in travel The line graph compares the trips to and from the UK between 1979 and...

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Essay regarding government spending which should be more targeted on education or on infrastructure

3 - The first body paragraph has missed the task achievement point since it is not logical : A person will...

Writing FeedbackAxis0019 - Aug 3, 2022Iloveielts - Aug 8, 2022
The graph below gives information from report about consumption of energy in the USA

4 - when you give the background information, the period of time should be placed at the end of the sentence....

Writing Feedbackquandz - Aug 7, 2022Nguyenviet - Aug 8, 2022
UIC Admission Personal Statement - Diversity and why my personal traits would stand out

3 - Thank you so much for the comment! I will add some more social activities, and maybe I will try...

Undergraduatebkhnhch - Aug 7, 2022bkhnhch - Aug 8, 2022
Impacted by corona-virus crisis. GKS scholarship personal statement for graduate program

3 - @Holt ok sir thank you for your advice if I show how I got more exposure to the language...

ScholarshipSubhratri - Aug 7, 2022Subhratri - Aug 8, 2022
Writing task 2 - Essay about public healthy and the growing presence of sports facilities

2 - The main reason that this essay will receive an overall failing score has to do with the lack of...

Writing Feedbackloanphanbich - Aug 6, 2022Holt - Aug 7, 2022
Special teaching - GKS UNDERGRADUATE PERSONAL STATEMENT

6 - which makes me sure that maybe, English is my passion. you have written this line in your essay but...

ScholarshipOlisan19 - Aug 1, 2022Subhratri - Aug 7, 2022
GKS undergraduate personal statement for media and communications major

3 - I think you should also provide some facts like how you met korean language , and this scholarship will...

ScholarshipReina - Aug 6, 2022Subhratri - Aug 7, 2022
IELTS writing task 2 about a work-life balance: related problems and the best solution

3 - @Holt Thank you very much...

Writing FeedbackKieuOanh151202 - Jul 31, 2022KieuOanh151202 - Aug 7, 2022
IELTS writing task 2 - topic: who should be accountable for the environmental protection?

3 - hi, I'm not a professor, but I'm hoping this will help you. Your essay includes too many details and...

Writing Feedbackmymyhannah - Aug 6, 2022pngnnn21 - Aug 6, 2022
The proportion of car trips made by male and female drivers for 8 purposes in the year of 2005

2 - The trending statement is over extended. A trend is a singular measurement of one activity or action. As such,...

Writing FeedbackIloveielts - Aug 6, 2022Holt - Aug 6, 2022
Evaluate my ielts writing task 2 essay about health and diet topic

3 - The first one is the mistakes with vocabularies. : sedentary lifestyle, and it usually goes with lead a sedentary...

Writing Feedbackhuyenanhmcqn - Aug 6, 2022Iloveielts - Aug 6, 2022
The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 200

3 - Thanks for your feedback, i really appriciate it! Hope you have a good day!...

Writing Feedbacktranvanson2001 - Aug 5, 2022tranvanson2001 - Aug 6, 2022
In today's world, urban life has been associated with many persistent issues

3 - The first thing is the misbalance between 2 bodies: extending the roads and improving the quality of public transports...

Writing Feedbackxuanvietmc123 - Aug 3, 2022Iloveielts - Aug 5, 2022
IELTS TASK 1 THE MOST POPULAR ACTIVITIES IN TWO COUNTRIES

3 - I apologize for not giving a graph of the data. Thanks for your feedback...

Writing FeedbackLa Da - Aug 5, 2022La Da - Aug 5, 2022
Essay for Graduate Certificate IT Project Management in Seneca College Canada with bad acads

3 - @Holt This is a statement of purpose. It was not mandatory but I want to go on and submit...

Graduaterevanth - Aug 4, 2022revanth - Aug 5, 2022
Problems living in big cities and whether the government should encourage more people to relocate

2 - The topic restatement is highly confusing. If it is a suggestion, then why did is suddenly turn into a...

Writing Feedbackalice05 - Jul 24, 2022Holt - Aug 5, 2022