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How I overcame my fear of public speaking - UBC Business Tech Management Personal Profile

3 - Karin, one of the major points that you have to make with this essay is why you felt the...

UndergraduateanxjsoHolt - Jan 15, 2017
My experience of selling samosa taught me to be optimistic... UBC Pharmacy

3 - Alsa, the first thing that you have to change in this essay is the reference to "we". The essay...

UndergraduatetarotoHolt - Jan 15, 2017
Home Benefit after return, intended plan of study

3 - The first thing that you need to do is figure out what kind of national or local problem you...

EssaysKnockoutHolt - Jan 15, 2017
A paragraph with quote for my analytical essay about why does Christopher like math

3 - Jakob, you can always run a search for a quote regarding that short story. There are actually websites like...

EssaysJakobVronskyHolt - Jan 15, 2017
Mini-essay for my UBC application's personal profile. Problem and/or an unfamiliar situation.

6 - The new 2nd paragraph is better focused, even though it is not as lengthy as we hoped it could...

UndergraduatedavkangHolt - Jan 15, 2017
Letter of Motivation for Quality & Operation Management Graduate Course

9 - @Holt Thank you very much Holt. I will omit the last paragraph as you suggested. I...

GraduateStreetwalkerStreetwalker - Jan 15, 2017
Essay opening description help - College experience

NEW - Hello everyone, can someone please help me with the opening description of this supplement. a perfect college ...

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If you are smart, you'll always be humble. NTU scholarship essay

7 - Yee, your anecdote doesn't work well with the essay because there is no clear event that portrays your belief...

ScholarshipellyyeeHolt - Jan 15, 2017
FASHION INSTITUTE OF TECHNOLOGY - Creative Photography Essay

5 - Olivia, your narrative focuses too much on the photography journey that you are taking. Now, depending upon whether or...

Undergraduatelgates12Holt - Jan 15, 2017
Application Essay - Describing Experience which taught me about myself and/or those around me

6 - Christopher, it is alright for you to use the same response for different essays in different university and college...

UndergraduateCDuke93Holt - Jan 15, 2017
The graph below shows the amount of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years

5 - Thank you ayuriska. I will write more essays and I hope to receive your correction :)...

Writing Feedbackhongnguyentp92hongnguyentp92 - Jan 15, 2017
UBC Business Tech Management Personal Profile, Unfamiliar Situation

5 - Karin, The situation and solution to the problem that you discussed both times is too elementary and does not...

UndergraduateanxjsoHolt - Jan 15, 2017
Why is Organic Foods better choice/ The pupose of Organic foods then process foods

NEW - The purpose to eat Organic foods, and not processed foods....

Essayssyheda -
Looking for a way out - Alcohol Intervention

3 - Xinyi, if you are already a college student or a high school interested in writing, your school, college, or...

Writing Feedbackxinyi0913Holt - Jan 14, 2017
Home Benefit of Commonwealth Scholarship - Nigeria

5 - Good revision. You covered all of the major points required to create a notable post study plan. However, you...

ScholarshipKnockoutHolt - Jan 14, 2017
My friend need some information about my country for visiting

5 - the transportation-> The transportation (I think you should add "Furthermore, Apart from, etc. So I think the letter will...

LettersTrang Lenguyenlykimngan1 - Jan 14, 2017
USC supplement: when I'm exposed to a new perspective

5 - @Holt Thank you! I'll add a little more development. Anyway, thanks a lot....

UndergraduateBennyooooBennyoooo - Jan 14, 2017
This is an essay for admission to an American university for masters in construction management.

15 - Ratan, the purpose of your enrollment in the masters degree in Construction Management course is still not clear in...

Graduateratan251294Holt - Jan 14, 2017
Given pie charts compare the number of inhabitants in Yemen and Italy in 2000

3 - That is definitely not a good overview. It would be better to make a clear overview, to show the...

Writing Feedbackayuriskakrempetkov - Jan 14, 2017
Too much of financial dissonance in this world

4 - Your structure is good. On the other hand, you have made many grammar mistakes and I think you should...

Writing Feedbackfidel123krempetkov - Jan 14, 2017
It is important to rest the mind during leisure time.

4 - Chau, while your essay speaks of valid reasons for resting the mind during leisure time, it fails to take...

Writing FeedbackChau TranHolt - Jan 14, 2017
Writing 2: people think instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it

4 - Arlen, the discussion of colonizing Mars does not fall under the topic of living with climate change or dealing...

Writing FeedbackArlenHolt - Jan 14, 2017
To what extent you agree with the idea that some teenagers lead an unhealthy lifestyle?

2 - Hello Liu! Hopefully my feedback is helpful for you. I've considered your points and read your essay as...

Writing FeedbackCaliabiCDuke93 - Jan 13, 2017
Your course of life, your view of life, study background, your hope & wishes.

15 - Thanks Holt... It is if I applying to embassy. Since my plan is applying to university, I just...

Scholarshipdigaprasiskadigaprasiska - Jan 13, 2017
You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house and forgot your coat containing some belongings

2 - Jaya, if you are going to make up information about the value of the coat, saying you left your...

Writing FeedbackjaikrishnaHolt - Jan 13, 2017
Personal Statement - Management Science / Business Tech / Analytics program

4 - I am not sure about what else can be added in terms of the "Why school" part of the...

Graduatetz35Holt - Jan 13, 2017
Aspects of Colorado College which attracted my attention. Why this College?

2 - Batjin, the essay that you developed is well thought out and really displays admirable reasons for wishing to attend...

Undergraduatel3atjinHolt - Jan 13, 2017
Writing Task 2 opinion's people about internet using

4 - Hello, I found you list lots reasons to support one statement. I think it would be better if...

Writing FeedbackFiza26Arlen - Jan 13, 2017
Besides the economy, there are many types of progress worth our attention as well.

4 - @ngokhoa99 Thanks for your correction and I have a question that whether to have an example in essay is...

Writing FeedbackArlenArlen - Jan 13, 2017
The proportion of telephone calls in the UK

2 - Ayu, please remember the capitalization rules for proper nouns. When you are discussing the nationality of a person such...

Writing FeedbackayuriskaHolt - Jan 13, 2017