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2 - You are being asked 2 direct questions at the end of the original prompt. You are required to give...
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|IELTS TASK 2 - THERE ARE NOT ENOUGH POLITICAL ACTIONS TO STOP GLOBAL WARMING
6 - Hi @juliachung As far as I know, the primary cause for global warming is not overconsumption of plastic...
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|Universities should focus on specialist subject - this is a much better choice. IELTS Writing task 2
5 - Hi @CBQ. I'd love to discuss the sentence "it leads to undergraduates' poor motivation..." I don't think the...
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2 - Your discussion is heavily focused on the reasons why you want to study MSc in Public Health. You failed...
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|Learning Success - Personal Statement - GKS Graduate University Track
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the review. You are right about what is missing and I will definitely...
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|Motivation Letter For Master's in Embedded Systems at the University of Saarland, Germany
5 - @fassehmemun10 Ok. When you said starting with the second paragraph would be a good start, do you mean...
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|The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australia universiti
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|Essay about University entrance exams
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|HOW YOUR PROPOSED STUDY RELATES TO: A) DEVELOPMENT ISSUES AT THE GLOBAL.. -Commonwealth Scholarship
NEW - Hi. I am writing my development statement for Commonwealth Scholarship. Please leave useful comments for revisions in the essay...
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|Question about AAS Support Statement for Master of Business Administration
4 - You need to revise your essay in way that is aligned with former paragraphs in a logical fashion....
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|AAS Scholarship for public policy
3 - Hi Dlsm, I think you need to be more careful also about active-passive form in your sentences. Your opening...
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|Supporting Statement AAS Scholarship for Master Degree in Public Health
4 - Hi Hanna, I think the sentences in your essay are too long and complex. You might want to break...
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|[KGSP-U] Our Future is Determined by Our Reactions, Not by Our Situations
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|Industrial Revolution 4.0. Statement Of Purpose for MSc in Human Resources
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|We need to take an action - daily diet and physical activities to reduce the number of obese kids
NEW - Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Then-First Lady Michelle Obama, who is one of...
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|The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed driving test-task1
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|Treasury operations / Accounting - How will the proposed study contribute to your career*?
3 - The first problem this presentation has is formatting. Divide the short, medium, and long term plans into paragraphs. The...
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|"Raising in a middle-class family was indeed demanding" Commonwealth Scholarship Personal Statement
2 - The essay is on point until you get to the last paragraph. Since it appears that you are going...
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|Is society's overall success more important than individual well being?
Writing Feedbackanubhavkaro - Apr 1, 2021Holt - Apr 2, 2021
|SHORT ESSAY FOR LLM PROGRAMME AT THE UNIVERSITY OF EAST FINLAND
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|IELTS writing task 2: Punishing children at an early age, agree or disagree?
NEW - I need help to check errors and identify the band score. It is important for children to learn...
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|Personal Statement for MSc Data Science scholarship in Sweden
3 - Thank you for your advice. Do you mean that I need to combine Machine Learning, Business, and Big Data...
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|SOP MCs Computer Science - EPFL - academic background and career strategy
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|For a happier tomorrow - The American University in Cairo essay
2 - You described what the university is best known for in relation to Psychology. You have not described how you...
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|Writing task 1 the alteration of country's export of several products for one year from 2015
2 - Your information in the first sentence is incorrect. First of all, there are two images represented, a table chart...
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|Motivation Statement for AAS - applying for a master degree in Public Health
8 - @albertedwn keep fighting! you will pass the scholarship at the right time. so, actually what I mean is...
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