|The two pictures illustrate how the layout of the ground floor in this house will be changed
2 - The word presentation, though passing in minimum consideration, does not allow for a maximum scoring consideration. If the writer...
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|Increasing the price of fuel as the optimal solution to solve environmental problems
2 - The prompt restatement should never be over discussed. The topic presentation should not alter the original presentation by digressing...
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|The number of students in both genders who graduated in Canada between 1992 and 2007
4 - Started Starting is the number/quantity of both female and male students are were finish finished can could goes went...
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|GKS (KGSP) Scholarship Personal Statement - for degree in Fashion styling
2 - This is the wrong reason to choose a scholarship. Avoid financial benefit references. Speak of educational and career...
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|Global Korea Scholarship undergraduate (for strategic communication)
NEW - GKS application essay Please contact us at firstname.lastname@example.org for private services due to the extensive content requirements. EF...
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|IELTS Essay about DANGEROUS SPORTS needed
2 - The first paragraph does not provide a restatement + opinion. Rather, the writer entered into a direct discussion in...
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|The amount of people who took train at London Underground Station in a day for sixteen hours
4 - I can spot some grammar errors in your essay as below for your review: Overall, people generally take...
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|Personal Statement GKS Graduate 2022 University Track Master's Degree Chemical Enginnering
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|PERSONAL STATEMENT / Global Korea Scholarships (GKS-U) 2022 / Media & Communication
3 - you can try to be more clear and concise in your accomplishments, and don't belittle yourself at any time,...
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|Discuss both views. Cheap products or long lasting product. This is an IELTS essay
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|Lots of teenagers today would rather socialize online than communicate in person
2 - Repetitive word meaning. Both refer to the 21st century. Use one reference only. There is no need...
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|The chart below gives information on the per of British people giving money to charity by age range.
NEW - The bar chart compares the number of British people who gave money to charity from 18 to over 65...
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|How to build the medical health care system
2 - This is not an acceptable statement response. Consider the focus of the prompt which is building a health care...
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|GKS 2022 undergraduate major in film. "Being a part of something special makes you special, right?"
2 - The language discussion does not belong in this statement. heate a far more intricate language study history in the...
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|People are interested in finding out about the history of the house they live in. Why ? How ?
NEW - Exploring stories about the past of their accommodation is becoming increasingly popular for many people in some nations. This...
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|Information about the travelling tendency (cities visited) by people from the USA, Canada and Mexico
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|Essay about the factors bringing success - advise
2 - This creates a problem with the orginal topic rephrasing. There is no question being asked of the writer...
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|Ielts task on public, private and self-employed sectors of the economy in the UK
3 - in my point of view, you should have one more sentence in your overview ( like which field had...
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Will libraries be relevant in the future?
2 - The opinion of the writer is unclear. Do you agree or disagree? The response can only support one...
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|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] SHOULD CHILDREN DECIDE THEIR OWN CAREER?
2 - This is a topic reason deviation. It is not supported in the orginal statement. It has altered the...
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|The data on the occupation of graduated and post-graduate students after finishing college in the UK
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|Developing nations are often financially supported by prosperous nations, but poverty still remain
2 - Do not exaggerate your response. Format the answer as needed or indicated in the discussion question. This is...
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|What can art tell us about life that science and technology cannot?
2 - Kick off the discussion with a proper topic outline. The reader needs to know that you have a...
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|Statement of purpose - OSLOMET Norway- MS-Applied Computer and Information Technology
2 - Expand on this portion. Specifically, discuss academic accomplishments, related research work, and any other academic participation that will...
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|Developing countries need financial help or practical aid and advice
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|The line graph illustrates the amount of people who bought music over seven years time frame
4 - i think a conclusion is unnecessary in WR task 1. instead of that you should write one more sentence...
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|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] DISCUSS THE VIEWS OF ADVERTISING AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.
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|STATEMENT OF PURPOSE MS MECHATRONICS AND CONTROL SYSTEM.
NEW - master program application I am applying for master in mechatronics, I have written an introduction paragraph in which...
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|Beside studying, there are more significant factors that pupils have to explore
NEW - Task 2: Everybody should stay at school until the age of 18. What extent do you agree or disagree?...
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|People are damaging the environment. What goverments and individuals can do to address this problem
3 - Here is my feedback Firstly, the way linking words such as "and", "so" used throughout this essay is...
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