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TU Delft - Motivation Letter for MSc Geomatics for the Built Environment

4 - I agree that you should limit yourself to 3 thesis presentations only if your interest in each is comparable...

Lettersluisog - Oct 19, 2025Holt - Oct 23, 2025
As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?

2 - This is not acknowledged in the original prompt. It is an idea that is implied and is therefore,...

Writing Feedbackannie280412 - Oct 23, 2025Holt - Oct 23, 2025
VIDEO RECORDS ARE A BETTER WAY TO LEARN ABOUT THE WAY OTHER PEOPLE IN THE WORLD LIVE THAN DOCUMENTS

3 - Revised version: Some people say that it is better for them to explore foreign cultures through videos rather than...

Writing FeedbackBao Anh - Oct 10, 2025Bao Anh - Oct 23, 2025
"From the linoleum to the marble" - Personal Statement

2 - Kindly include the prompt that you are writing in response to next time so that I can give a...

Undergraduatelolgiancarlo - Oct 22, 2025Holt - Oct 23, 2025
Nepal education - Motivation letter for scholarship

2 - The way that you discuss your education in the essay is confusing. You are from Nepal but you studied...

Lettersrandooi - Oct 22, 2025Holt - Oct 22, 2025
Motivation letter for admission to bussiness technology master program in University of Twente

2 - You have some pretty good ideas presented in this essay. However, the way it is presented could be better....

LettersMiftaaj01 - Oct 21, 2025Holt - Oct 22, 2025
To work as a policy analyst - ERAMUS MUNDUS MAPP ISS-TRACK APPLICATION

2 - I find the start of the motivational letter a bit confusing. There is something missing in the middle. I...

Scholarshipheppichee - Oct 21, 2025Holt - Oct 22, 2025
Some people believe that online learning will replace traditional classroom in near future.

2 - This entry will not be considered a prompt restatement. Rather it will be read as the opinion of...

Writing Feedbacktahasid31 - Oct 20, 2025Holt - Oct 22, 2025
Requirements for Germany Scholarship

3 - For the motivational letter, what should I write if have some accomplishments or achievements that are not related to...

Student TalkDanicaRamirez - Oct 19, 2025DanicaRamirez - Oct 20, 2025
Suitable candidate - motivational letter Finance Stipendium Hungaricum for Master

3 - Merged: Master's program in Finance - Motivation letter for Stipendium Hungaricum Hello, I would like some feedback...

LettersThe Paragon - Sep 7, 2025The Paragon - Oct 19, 2025
It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents.

2 - Kindly stay within suggested 300 word limitation for the Task 2 essay to ensure that you will be focusing...

Writing Feedbackscorpions009 - Oct 18, 2025Holt - Oct 19, 2025
A culmination of nihilism and existentialism.

2 - The essay was difficult for me to read because of the lack of pauses between the ideas presented. There...

Writing FeedbackRasberrysparkle - Oct 16, 2025Holt - Oct 18, 2025
GKS U 2026 SOP for Business administration + finance

2 - The essay is too creative in presentation. It focused too much on the telling of a story that it...

UndergraduateShubhay07 - Oct 14, 2025Holt - Oct 15, 2025
International Aid - yes or no?

3 - Sounds a good essay, however you have not adhered to simple structure, thesis statement - important (what you have...

Writing Feedbackchihuahuahuahua - Oct 13, 2025Guest - Oct 14, 2025
Nigeria and Economic Constraints - Statements of Purpose (S.O.P)

2 - You should not open the statement of purpose with a reference to the thoughts of someone else. The reviewer...

UndergraduateMystro_Dynamic - Oct 13, 2025Holt - Oct 14, 2025
Being Excluded in a project - Waterloo AIF Question #3 - Experience Reflection

2 - The reason why you were sidelined by the group in meetings should be clearly explained in the statement. You...

UndergraduatePancakes2 - Oct 13, 2025Holt - Oct 14, 2025
Starting a music club at my school - Waterloo AIF question #2 - Community Involvement

2 - This leadership statement is too self focused. There is a lack of teamwork, consideration of the needs of the...

UndergraduatePramodChavali - Oct 12, 2025Holt - Oct 12, 2025
My Passion for Music - Waterloo AIF question #1

2 - The passion aspect is a bit thin in this presentation. It started off on the wrong foot as well....

UndergraduatePramodChavali - Oct 12, 2025Holt - Oct 12, 2025
Undervalued at a hackathon - Waterloo AIF Question #3 - Experience Reflection

2 - While your story shows how you eventually recovered from being undervalued by your teammates, it took time for you...

UndergraduatePramodChavali - Oct 12, 2025Holt - Oct 12, 2025
Passion for Game Development - Waterloo AIF Question 4 - Goals for Waterloo

3 - Hi Holt, Thank you for your response, and sorry for the late reply, I thought I responded to...

UndergraduatePramodChavali - Oct 6, 2025PramodChavali - Oct 11, 2025
GKS-U 2026 Personal Statement - Food Science and Food Engineering

3 - Firstly, thank you so much for your valuable advice. And secondly, I apologize for the late reply. ...

Scholarshipgeulsseth - Oct 6, 2025geulsseth - Oct 11, 2025
Data analytics - KUAS enrollment essay - Why KUAS ties in with my future goals

2 - The second paragraph does not justify what will make you a good candidate for a student slot at KUAS....

Undergraduateumohon - Oct 11, 2025Holt - Oct 11, 2025
The Sound of His Steps - Common App Essay

2 - Please do not ask me which aspects you should cut from this essay because it is a personal decision...

UndergraduateThienAnhLe - Oct 11, 2025Holt - Oct 11, 2025
It is popular in many parts of the world that young people are doing research on their ancestry

2 - Do not make any reference to age in your restatement as the original prompt did not do this....

Writing Feedbackapolaza - Oct 10, 2025Holt - Oct 11, 2025
From Bangladesh to the US - personal statement for Hunter College TESOL grad school program

3 - Thank you so much for your suggestions !! Here is the revised version. Personal Statement - Hunter College...

Graduatesheriecherie - Oct 8, 2025sheriecherie - Oct 10, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Essay on unwinding mind with video games or outdoor activity.

2 - The prompt restatement is incorrect. As the writer you are supposed to reframe the original topic, without changing the...

Writing FeedbackfaiqaFARHEEN - Oct 7, 2025Holt - Oct 8, 2025
NATIONAL TAIWAN UNIVERSITY AUTOBIOGRAPHY 'Ten fingers will all have different lengths'

2 - A personal statement should, in my opinion, not be more than 300 words in length. That is because the...

Undergraduatesnowblossoms - Oct 7, 2025Holt - Oct 8, 2025
Younger or Older Leaders in Corporations? IELTS Writing Task 2

2 - There are 2 immediate errors that will fail this essay in terms of preliminary Task Accuracy requirements. The first,...

Writing Feedbackmquan1997 - Oct 7, 2025Holt - Oct 8, 2025
Standing Behind, Seeing Beyond (COMMON APP PERSONAL STATEMENT)

2 - One thing that the applicants always make a mistake with when writing the common app essay is that they...

UndergraduateThienAnhLe - Oct 7, 2025Holt - Oct 8, 2025
7.5 IELTS OVERALL! - IELTS WARRIOR

3 - @mquan1997 I did not remember honestly. But I tried to keep my essay simple, clear and easy for examiners...

Student TalkMr Calma - Oct 6, 2025Mr Calma - Oct 7, 2025
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