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Film reception theory: The Interview Questions

5 - @kacanakya Thank you for your explanation. I got it....

Research Papersdaolenadaolena - 1 day ago
Ielts writing part 2: learning foreign language earlier

2 - Good work Lee. You were able to properly assess the topic for discussion, present the reason behind the discussion,...

Writing FeedbackbthoHolt - 1 day ago
Two Coins - A company to build a large factory near your community

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your nice comments. I really needed for such wonderful feedbacks. :)...

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Railroads vs Road Budget - IETLS CAMBRIDGE 11 TASK 2

7 - thanks for all comments here, i am really appreciate all your advices...

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Are there any special subjects or skills that you would like to include in your choice? - AAS Essay

5 - Dany, I do not have clear understanding of what you meant by the statement, "...in the same area with...

Scholarshipd2nyokorobiadimma14 - 1 day ago
"Applying for an exchange to CTU.. - Czech Technical University SOP

3 - @Holt Thanks for your reply. I am not applying for masters... I am an 3rd year undergrad applying...

Undergraduateabbukanithi09abbukanithi09 - 1 day ago
England female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom

2 - Emma, I would have approached the comparison presentation of the bar chart in a different manner. I would have...

Writing FeedbackEmma NguyenHolt - 1 day ago
Residential housing - Alteration in America Village between 1994 and 2010

2 - Hermin, as a rule of thumb, you will increase your chances of a higher score in the TA and...

Writing FeedbacktamtamiiHolt - 1 day ago
Two Shops: The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010

3 - halo Mr. @restuanlubis Halo Mr. Restu, actually I get your point about your grouping. However, I can understand...

Writing Feedbackrestuanlubistamtamii - 2 days ago
Buildings and environment - The maps and changes in an American town between 1994 and 2010

3 - @Diahkn93 Hi Diah, In my opinion, I think your essay quite difficult to understand (caused by your interpretation). You...

Writing FeedbackDiahkn93Datnguyen - 2 days ago
Sports stadium - the changes in an American town between 1948 and 2010.

5 - Andi, your essay does not put all of the information that you were provided with to good use. You...

Writing FeedbackReza_HidayatHolt - 2 days ago
People house change - the village of Stokeford in 1930

3 - Hermin, while your paragraphs are well representative of the illustrations provided, you did not really manage to present the...

Writing FeedbacktamtamiiHolt - 2 days ago
New buildings - The maps below show village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010

3 - Diah, excellent work in presenting an original take on the illustrations other than simply stating the mechanically obvious information....

Writing FeedbackDiahkn93Holt - 2 days ago
Writing IELTS TASK 2 - Topic: Tourism - influence for visited places.

6 - @yuukinohan4 Thank for your comment, it is very precious with me. I will try to improve in next essay....

Writing FeedbackDatnguyenDatnguyen - 2 days ago
IELTS Task 2 - Recent figures shown an increase in violent crime among youngsters

3 - @ Holt Thank you for the feedback. I will surely try to learn and improve on this. Also, please...

Writing FeedbackMayank7gMayank7g - 2 days ago
Change in town - the alteration of Stokeford village in 1930 and 2010.

5 - Septi, you can probably get a score of 5 with this essay. The essay could use some less mechanical...

Writing FeedbackseptyndidHolt - 2 days ago
A plant breeder - my PhD cover letter

5 - @Roselanim Thanks. I agree with you....

Lettersjasimpstujasimpstu - 2 days ago
Celebrating Food - Traditional food will change by fast food ?

4 - Hallo miss nisa, I have some mistakes from your essay. I do not only find many mistakes of your...

Writing FeedbackNisa_sultantamtamii - 2 days ago
The different condition of American town in 1948 and 1950

4 - @koganta There was a major shift in the northeastern of the town. Overall the area was not like...

Writing Feedbackkogantaagus_mono - 2 days ago
Replacing Factories : The map below shows the alteration in an US town between over 62 years

3 - @restuanlubis Pay attention on your word choosen and subject verb agreement: The maps illustrate regarding to comparing the alteration...

Writing FeedbackrestuanlubisAnhy chan - 2 days ago
Personal Statement - Operations Research & Analytics/Business Analytics for university in the UK

3 - @Holt Hi Mary, thank you very much for the feedback. For the universities I am applying to, they...

Graduatenbasuns13nbasuns13 - 2 days ago
IELTS Task 2_women who do not plan to have careers should be allowed to get post-grad degrees or not

2 - Phone, your opening paragraph was almost perfect. Almost perfect because you dropped the ball in the last sentence. You...

Writing FeedbackzealHolt - 2 days ago
Nursing is limitless; Nurse Practitioner personal statement

2 - Melissa, wanting to include the school motto or core values in your personal statement is a nice touch. Just...

Graduatemellymel11Holt - 2 days ago
State Drill Competition; Testing leadership abilities/ COMMON APP

3 - Lizzbetthe, going rogue and disobeying a higher authority is not a leadership skill that is to be admired. Even...

UndergraduatesogeilyHolt - 2 days ago
Which school facilities should receive money from the local authorities?

3 - Dang, the entire premise of the essay is not clearly presented in the opening statement. The topic for discussion...

Writing Feedbackthunga251090Holt - 2 days ago
Pitzer Transfer - music & academics

2 - Moira, rather than presenting that situation as the opening moment of your essay, it would be best if you...

UndergraduatecocomochaHolt - 2 days ago
Trips to London ;Johns Hopkins Supp/ Interests

3 - Will, there is a disconnect between the opening story and the rest of the essay. You never did explain...

UndergraduatewillyfreeHolt - 2 days ago
Pressure on Teenagers to Go to College - Research Essay Draft

2 - Ashley, the main problem with your research paper at this point is that it is composed of more than...

Research PapersAsh2146362Holt - 2 days ago
Physics major/ fitting with my interests/ my contribution; Why Columbia?

3 - Samuel, while the Ivy League colleges and universities in the United States are competitors, it is never a good...

UndergraduateBlackWaltzIVHolt - 2 days ago
"The importance of biodiversity" task 2 writng module IELTS

4 - Hi @Sabrena_amal It is really alike with the prompt, even so you really need to paraphrase the...

Writing FeedbackSabrena_amalyuukinohan4 - Mar 26, 2017