|IELTS Writing Task 2: Importance of Economics or Other Type of Progess
2 - Ying, this essay is lacking a proper opening paraphrase of the original prompt, an accurate 3 body paragraph discussion,...
Writing Feedbackying_chenHolt - Feb 21, 2018
|Describe clearly the key things you are looking for in a course and your reasons for choosing it
3 - Embun, your response is off target. If you review the website in relation to your masters degree course choice,...
ScholarshipEmbunHolt - Feb 21, 2018
|Training and experience in Korea - study plan and future plan - I would like apply for KGSP
6 - @TB17 you already did some addition for your research plan and method to do it but I think your...
ScholarshipTB17Jsovane - Feb 20, 2018
|Max 300 words in which you describe why you would like to attend the programme you have chosen
2 - Abdul, the first paragraph of your motivational letter is not necessary. You can skip that presentation because the motivational...
LettersAbdulJabbarHolt - Feb 20, 2018
|New Zealand and spending money - Ielts taks1 the pie chart
3 - weiling, aside from an incomplete summary overview, your essay also lacks a proper paragraph representation. You are prone to...
Writing Feedbackbig0321lalaHolt - Feb 20, 2018
|South Korea - the only country I could fit - Personal Statement for KGSP
3 - @Holt Firstly thank you for your feedback.I really appreciate it. I have never written an essay like this. I...
Writing Feedbackrashad07rashad07 - Feb 20, 2018
|My personal statement for KGSP 2019 for animation undergraduate
ScholarshipAyumuNoraDesuAyumuNoraDesu - Feb 20, 2018
|IELTS Writing Task 2: cause &solution- anti-social behavior and lack of respect to others
3 - Hi Kuan, For the two questions type of essay, I agree with your current paragraph structure. -Introduction -Main...
Writing Feedbackccalvin97ying_chen - Feb 20, 2018
|Consumer Spending Trends and Statistics
2 - Hello Kien! It's very hard to judge your work without the graph/chart for analysis. Make sure you upload...
Writing FeedbackenormanDoctorWho - Feb 20, 2018
|Can Chemistry be useful? When I use all of my theory in my real life? - Personal Statement for KGSP
ScholarshipRahma29Rahma29 - Feb 20, 2018
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: Forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.
3 - Tra, your essay is missing an appropriate summary overview, that should have been the first paragraph of this essay....
Writing FeedbacknguyenthikimdungHolt - Feb 19, 2018
|Essay about developing e-learning for maths word problems (Applying for KGSP)
4 - Hafsah, your goal of study needs an appropriate title. It should also be presented in a thesis style proposal....
Scholarshipacah79Holt - Feb 19, 2018
|STUNED Essay. Why you apply for the chosen program, what do you intend to do with your Master degree
4 - Sagita, what you have here is the preliminary work on a research paper relevant to your field of interest....
ScholarshipGITZ14Holt - Feb 19, 2018
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Agree/Disagree Community Service as a part of study
2 - Hey!! You have a well written essay. I have a few suggestions to improve on your material. It's...
Writing FeedbackUlfaidrus_flipDoctorWho - Feb 19, 2018
|Course and institution choice; word choice, confusing sentences of my answer on the question below.
3 - @GITZ14 Thank you. I will do. Let's delete our posts, just caring about plagiarism. We need to delete our...
ScholarshipAmurikAmurik - Feb 19, 2018
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Opinions of the Constructing New or Existing Transportation
3 - Thank you for your detail explanation and point out the mistakes I made. I'll improve all the above you...
Writing Feedbackying_chenying_chen - Feb 18, 2018
|Facebook, Twitter etcetera. What have they done to our society as a whole?
5 - @inderGTR Hi Thanks for your feedback could you elaborate it by giving me some examples? I would really appreciate...
Writing FeedbackPeterBrownPeterBrown - Feb 18, 2018
|KGSP Personal Statement - Learning about Other Cultures
2 - The essay could use more of a backstory regarding your decision to become a polyglot. Since you are focusing...
ScholarshipjadesingerHolt - Feb 17, 2018
|My fascination towards data analytics. SOP for Masters in Business Analytics in UIOWA
Graduatevasanthgvk3vasanthgvk3 - Feb 17, 2018
|Ielts Writting Part 2: In many city, the population is increasing...
3 - Thank you very much Holt, I really got your points and understand it. I will try to do better....
Writing Feedbackminhtrang2710minhtrang2710 - Feb 16, 2018
|Personal Statement shows how your own interests are linked to the Digital Marketing programme
2 - I think it would be better if you arrange your essay more systematically. You can state your main idea...
ScholarshipMariamMUlfaidrus_flip - Feb 16, 2018
|Tell me about yourself (family, hobbies, dreams, strongest and weakest points)
5 - I do many things for entertainment such as playing games, reading books, listening to music,and so on. However, but...
UndergraduateGia Huy CaoUlfaidrus_flip - Feb 16, 2018
|KGSP Personal Statement - I want to fix my country unseen problem
2 - Josevan, the reference to your ambition should start with high school not childhood. the reviewers do not believe that...
ScholarshipJsovaneHolt - Feb 16, 2018
|"Stipendium Hungaricum" Program - Motivation letter for Hungarian Scholarship
ScholarshipIvanovic12Ivanovic12 - Feb 16, 2018
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Two Opinions of the Internet
3 - Hi, few of my suggestions 1. social media, such as Facebook, "L"ine and so forth. (Line should be...
Writing FeedbackUlfaidrus_flipying_chen - Feb 16, 2018
|Queen's Commerce: Most important lesson you learned from a mistake you have made? (300 words)
2 - Chenlei, the first sentence is a throw away. It is not necessary to create a prompt restatement in this...
UndergraduatemorninghanaHolt - Feb 15, 2018
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Agree or Disagree of Local Police Officer Recruitment
2 - Ulfa, you need to understand something important about the opening statement. This is always presented as a paraphrase of...
Writing FeedbackUlfaidrus_flipHolt - Feb 15, 2018
|Academic study related awards, publications - not specific to any particular qualifications you hold
NEW - how to write this scholarship essay? Provide a maximum of four academic study related awards, prizes or publication...
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|Why should they choose me for KGSP 2018 ?
3 - There are a number of important points in the prompt that you have failed to address in your essay....
GraduatekopureHolt - Feb 15, 2018
|Choose to take courses in a variety of subject areas or to focus on a single subject area?
3 - KevinLove, your English grammar is simple enough to warrant only a few minor corrections. You have 2 problems when...
Writing FeedbackStephenYoungHolt - Feb 15, 2018