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|Horns of Ethical Dilemma, Choosing between Friendship or Abiding to the school code of conduct.
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|TOFEL: Do you learn a new language by traveling to another country or in your own country?
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|IELTS WRITTING TASK 2 "Art classes should not be a compulsory subject"
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|The West Park Secondary School after the first construction in 1950 and development in 2010
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|"The death penalty is the best means of combating serious crimes."
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|Natural Resources - Explain a situation, using specific reasons and examples
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|Do you think being a celebrity is beneficial or troublesome?
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|The diagram demonstrates some proposed changes of the centre of a small town which named Islip
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|Unemployment is a serious issue throughout the world. What should governments do to solve this issue
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|Some people believe that longer imprisonment is the most effective method to lessen crime rate
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|The dilemma of whether better opt to reside in apartments or tip in favor of living in houses
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|Nursing School Admissions Essay (assault, abuse, poverty, mental illness)
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|Is online schooling as effective as in-class education ?
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