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Land Surveyor - Q2 and A2 of my AAS statement

2 - You relied too much on AI for your response development, without really knowing how to properly use AI to...

Scholarshipenoch_online - Apr 14, 2026Holt - Apr 14, 2026
AAS for Master of Professional Engineering (Geospatial Engineering & Surveying)

2 - I could not help but immediately detect the AI written response in this statement. Though it reads like a...

Scholarshipenoch_online - Apr 14, 2026Holt - Apr 14, 2026
Motivational Letter for Joining the Renewable Energy and Sustainable Construction Masters Program

2 - There was a sense of the developing problem in your country, but there was definitely no reference to...

Lettersabdullahseidu - Apr 13, 2026Holt - Apr 13, 2026
AAS Essay - Future contribution as a researcher and educator in animal nutrition

2 - You tend to become redundant in your opening references for each statement. It would be best not to constantly...

ScholarshipFafa_Hadi - Apr 13, 2026Holt - Apr 13, 2026
AAS Essay - How have you contribute to solving a challenge ? - Animal nutrition specialist

2 - Your discussion is too general. It is so general in fact that it fails to specifically respond to the...

ScholarshipFafa_Hadi - Apr 13, 2026Holt - Apr 13, 2026
AAS Essay - Animal Nutrition (Master of Animal Science)

2 - The paragraph about indinesia's food strategy should not be a stand alone paragraph. Instead, you should be merging these...

ScholarshipFafa_Hadi - Apr 13, 2026Holt - Apr 13, 2026
AAS Essay - Study impact on my career as a university lecturer in animal nutrition

2 - Why is it vital? What shortcoming does this face at the moment? This should respond to the community...

ScholarshipFafa_Hadi - Apr 13, 2026Holt - Apr 13, 2026
Ethnic studies - College Essay (MLA)

2 - The essay sounds repetitive at times and does not seem to move forward in terms of information dissemination. The...

Writing FeedbackHaqiqkhan4456 - Apr 5, 2026Holt - Apr 12, 2026
Helping The Homeless: Whose Problem Is It?

2 - There are a few grammatical concerns that need to be corrected in the essay. You can easily spot these...

Writing FeedbackAdeming67 - Apr 11, 2026Holt - Apr 12, 2026
Research paper: PTSD in Modern Society: Barriers and effective treatment

2 - I would like to congratulate you regarding the effort that you placed in researching the information for this essay....

Research PapersMaevewaddell - Apr 11, 2026Holt - Apr 12, 2026
Autobiography for Feng Chia University (Technology Pre-Major Program)

2 - When you introduce your family, try to say a few things about both your parents. What did your mother...

UndergraduateSstriaa - Apr 9, 2026Holt - Apr 10, 2026
Essay for ENG102 - The Present Dangers of AI: Causing More Harm Than Good

3 - @Holt Thank you for you for reading my paper and for your feedback! However, I wanted to correct your...

Writing FeedbackDALS1 - Apr 9, 2026DALS1 - Apr 9, 2026
Computing passion - personal statement opinions

2 - The personal statement you have written carries human elements, but not enough human writing to pass the AI assessment...

UndergraduateAissa - Apr 8, 2026Holt - Apr 9, 2026
When Growth Outpaces Planning: The Strain of Rapid Urbanization in U.S. Cities

2 - Unfortunately this paper is being detected as 100% AI generated. All you did was feed the writing instructions into...

Research Papersastovall - Apr 4, 2026Holt - Apr 9, 2026
Becoming a Music Director - The Bridge Program Fellowship - CROSSROAD Essay 1

3 - The essay cannot answer questions thoroughly and lack of clear coherence. You should further describe the emotional conflicts and...

ScholarshipAbdulfataidosumu - Mar 22, 2026songoku - Apr 6, 2026
The Behind the Scene Job of Supply Chain in Healthcare - research paper

2 - This paper has the feel of a heavily AI generated paper. It has at least 75% AI generated text,...

Research Papersbrocklarayjr - Apr 4, 2026Holt - Apr 4, 2026
Applying master degree of AI. Supporting Statement for Australian Award Scholarship

4 - Yes. You need to mention it again in this section but in a different context from the previous response...

ScholarshipTemuulen_1 - Apr 1, 2026Holt - Apr 3, 2026
Personal Statement for the MBA in Marketing at Inha University

2 - The way that you prompted the AI to use your personal experience in writing the personal statement for you...

Graduategureumy - Apr 2, 2026Holt - Apr 3, 2026
Challenges & Learnings from Running a Small Museum in Virginia

2 - I had a sense that this essay was AI generated, I ran it through a few tests and was...

Writing Feedbackrixcy - Apr 2, 2026Holt - Apr 3, 2026
Paid Parental leave for families

2 - Unfortunately this paper is not going to pass an AI generation test, which your teacher will probably use even...

Research Papersvannas - Apr 1, 2026Holt - Apr 2, 2026
Motivation Letter for Radboud University (Master of Strategic Human Resources Leadership)

2 - This portion is not substantiated in the presentation. You are coming to a conclusion and dictating a belief...

Lettersannisapuspitadin - Apr 1, 2026Holt - Apr 2, 2026
Parents and Teachers Association - solving a challenge and to implementing change or reform

2 - This essay shows that you are an effective planner, but not necessarily an effective leader. The event was more...

UndergraduateS11255405 - Apr 1, 2026Holt - Apr 2, 2026
The Trophy Problem - essay reviews

2 - This section could use a bit more personal information development to help justify your point of view. I...

Research Paperstrey231 - Mar 31, 2026Holt - Apr 1, 2026
Advice for yonsei uic personal statement - what to write?

2 - The fact that you were raised in a traveling family indicates that you have first hand experience when it...

Essayslalalalove - Mar 28, 2026Holt - Mar 29, 2026
Peer review: Regulating Online Truth

2 - While I commend you for trying to write an AI-Human hybrid paper, the problem with the presentation is that...

Research Paperscai2148733 - Mar 27, 2026Holt - Mar 29, 2026
Unconscious Bias in the Maternal Health Care - Undergraduate Essay

2 - I think that the first thing you should do is fix the format of the paper. It is not...

Writing Feedbackdedee79 - Mar 27, 2026Holt - Mar 29, 2026
Limiting Cruise Ship Tourism to Protect Coastal Communities

2 - The content of this essay is not human written. It is coming across as 95 % AI generated. It...

Writing FeedbackNicajah05 - Mar 27, 2026Holt - Mar 29, 2026
Skills Study Programme / Local Plays - My Essay Answer

2 - Your response is very much generalized and lacking in specific indications that you have familiarized yourself with the requirements...

Scholarshipcalla7 - Mar 27, 2026Holt - Mar 29, 2026
ENG 102- Teaching Religion in Public Schools: Is it rude to speak of Religion and Politics?

2 - This is a well written essay that focuses properly on the discussion of religion in relation to upbringing, morality,...

Writing Feedbacksmithjarod325 - Mar 27, 2026Holt - Mar 29, 2026
The Case for Tuition-Free Public Universities in the United States

3 - @Holt Hi, I would like to push back on the AI generation of my essay. While I do utilize...

Research PapersJosh_Maltese - Mar 25, 2026Josh_Maltese - Mar 27, 2026
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