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|Common App / "Why did I take a gap year" essay / international student / early decision in november
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|The fluctuation in monthly prices for copper, nickel and zinc throughout the year 2014
2 - The report is well developed and contains all of the necessary information. However, the paragraph presentations are uneven in...
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|Doing away with old buildings and building modern ones or restoring old buildings?
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2 - The first paragraph concerning the difficulties of international travel is well written to a certain point. The way that...
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|Too much money on repairing old buildings instead of pulling them down and constructing the new ones
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|The low productivity of agriculture land - IELTS Cambridge 8 Test 1 Task 1
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|Write an essay how adults can influence younger people's behaviour
3 - Your information feels accurate. The structure of the paragraphs could use some work and there are some spelling mistakes...
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|Benefits and drawbacks of sharing information
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|CRITICAL ANALYSIS PAPER ON JUVENILE GANGS
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|Statement Of Intent for School of Visual Arts BFA Fine Arts
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|The graph shows oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010.
2 - The presentation is good. You did your best to present the information properly and coherently to the examiner. However,...
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|Explains the effects of music and music therapy on those with anxiety and ADHD.
2 - The section marked as number 2 in this presentation should be brought up to the top of the research...
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|Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination
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|Teenagers should work unpaid, do you agree with the view? Write about 250 words
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|The different of weight in England
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|[WRITING TASK 2] To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population
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|IELTS Writing Task 1: The chart illustrates the income of households in the US
2 - The last paragraph of this essay is not structured as a mere report, which affected the overall presentation of...
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|The graph describes the changes in medical funding in four countries from 2010-2018
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2 - This is an incorrect interpretation of the original presentation. There is no dispute presented since only one public...
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|The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned development site
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|WRITING TASK 1: LINE GRAPH - CINEMA ATTENDANCE BY AGE GROUP IN THE UK
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|Motivation Letter for Ph.D in Bioanalytical Chemistry
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|AN ESSAY ABOUT THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF LIVING IN THE MODERN WORLD
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