|Discipline, family, climate - WHAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU AND WHY?
2 - @chopraribhav Welcome to the forum. Here, I'm going to provide you with feedback on your writing. Firstly, be...
Undergraduatechopraribhav - Oct 8, 2019Maria - Oct 11, 2019
|Essay about whether the natural talent is important or not
2 - @futasodi Hi. Good luck with your IELTS! I hope that receiving this feedback would help motivate you as well...
Writing Feedbackfutasodi - Oct 8, 2019Maria - Oct 11, 2019
|Better gain a tertiary education or equip with soft skills to achieve great success in working?
2 - @tranglv80 Seeing as you're new here, welcome. I'm here to give you feedback on this essay. Firstly, the...
Writing Feedbacktranglv80 - Oct 8, 2019Maria - Oct 11, 2019
|Abstract - Socio – ecological resilience of mangrove-shrimp models under salinity intrusion
NEW - the new hydro-ecological system The mangrove-shrimp based livelihood model has been considered as one of the hydro-ecological systems...
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|A sense of belonging - Students identify Lafayette as an excellent fit for countless reasons.
2 - @pramodk18 Welcome here! I hope that this feedback somehow gives you insight on writing. Don't hesitate to always approach...
Undergraduatepramodk18 - Oct 8, 2019Maria - Oct 11, 2019
|To develop and demonstrate my leadership via my academic life and professional career - Chevening
3 - Thank you so much for your constructive feedbacks, Maria! I'll try to update accordingly and get back to...
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|About My Father - Princeton Supplement Essay - a person who has influenced you in a significant way
NEW - Please comment on my essay. Your help is much appreciated!!! he gave me the life and made me...
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|Welfare of others - Leadership Skills - Chevening Scholarship
3 - @Maria Thank you for the feedback. Kindly see the updated version. The passion and commitment to empowering...
ScholarshipIyanus19 - Oct 6, 2019Iyanus19 - Oct 10, 2019
|Part-Time job interview. Beginner level
NEW - interview for getting a job - with an employer's representative I'm 28 years old and I'm Kim Yoon-na....
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|Employees's appearance - Writing 
NEW - Hello everyone, it is the first time that I know this helpful website. My name is Dang and i...
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|My Gender - Common app 4 - A problem of significance to you and steps that can be taken to solve it.
NEW - "You are a girl, you can't..." Any feedback will be appreciated First Draft "You are a girl,...
UndergraduateStephVan - Oct 10, 2019 -
|EVERYONE IS BEAUTIFUL. Help me check my short essay.
2 - Hi, I've just fixed some mistake about grammar and vocabulary in your essay. First, there's one word that I...
Book ReportsCorvo - Oct 9, 2019trinhyennhi - Oct 10, 2019
|Twelve different nations and the number of medals that they have achieved in Olympic events
NEW - IELTS Writing Task 1: Bar chart The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by...
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|Several people argue that a part of secondary school programs should be a social job for free
Writing FeedbackMasrurotin - Oct 8, 2019Masrurotin - Oct 10, 2019
|Who have the pivotal role for teaching pupils to become the responsible society members?
2 - @Ali20 Hi! Thanks for being here once more. I hope this feedback is helpful for your learning endeavors. If...
Writing FeedbackAli20 - Oct 8, 2019Maria - Oct 9, 2019
|Teaching International Language at Primary School (IELTS Task 2)
2 - @Ali20 Hi. Thanks for being back again. I hope this one will give you insight on your writing. ...
Writing FeedbackAli20 - Oct 8, 2019Maria - Oct 9, 2019
|Ghana agricultural commodity - Chevening (Career plan) essay
2 - @RichmondERA Welcome to the forum! I hope that this feedback helps you in your writing endeavors. If it does,...
ScholarshipRichmondERA - Oct 7, 2019Maria - Oct 9, 2019
|A recommendation letter for my student from Information and Communication Technology teacher
2 - @asifulislamshant Hi, welcome to the forum! I hope that the feedback you see here helps you somehow in your...
Lettersasifulislamshant - Oct 7, 2019Maria - Oct 9, 2019
|IELTS 1 - the statistics between marriages and divorces rate and marital status of adult Americans
2 - @roswita116 Hello! Thanks for being consistent in the forum. I hope this feedback somehow helps you with your upcoming...
Writing Feedbackroswita116 - Oct 7, 2019Maria - Oct 9, 2019
|Investigations of the committed crimes and the right to view on offenders' past convictions
2 - @athachng2002 Hello. Thanks for being back again! I'm here to give feedback on your writing. Firstly, well-done on...
Writing Feedbackathachng2002 - Oct 7, 2019Maria - Oct 9, 2019
|My intention to take a graduate level computer science programme in the UK - application statement
2 - @Asphodel Thanks for continuously being on the platform. I hope you are doing well, and that you find this...
GraduateAsphodel - Oct 7, 2019Maria - Oct 9, 2019
|Flying - Purdue Opportunities Essay. How do the opportunities at Purdue support my interests?
2 - @suckasmack Hi! Welcome to the forum. I hope that this feedback becomes helpful. Firstly, the first sentence immediately...
Undergraduatesuckasmack - Oct 7, 2019Maria - Oct 9, 2019
|Why my major and what opportunities at Georgia Tech will prepare me in that field after graduation?
2 - @Shkr Welcome to the forum! I'm here to provide you with feedback on your writing. I hope this truly...
UndergraduateShkr - Oct 7, 2019Maria - Oct 9, 2019
|Chevening - why I've chosen those three Master of Science courses in the UK?
2 - @jhonb Hey, welcome to the forum! I apologize for the slight delay. But, here's my feedback on your writing!...
Scholarshipjhonb - Oct 6, 2019Maria - Oct 9, 2019
|Description of methodologies and results while solving a problem - Texas Mccombs MSBA Essay
NEW - founding solution for a problem Essay Question: Imagine that you are in a job interview. The interviewer asks...
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|Student Living in schools - it bring real benefits
2 - Hi @noname12, Basically, I think you should work more on grammar and vocabulary. There are many repeated words...
Writing Feedbacknoname12 - Oct 8, 2019athachng2002 - Oct 9, 2019
|IELTS Task - Essay about "Environmental problems... who should take care of it?"
Writing Feedbackjacgomes - Sep 17, 2019jacgomes - Oct 8, 2019
|Choosing between learning in a group or by yourself
2 - your ideas are clear and coherent however, you should use wider range of vocabulary like replaced studying alone by...
Writing Feedbackpmhdaflowerboy - Oct 7, 2019futasodi - Oct 8, 2019
|Televisions and movies can affect us either in a bad way or in a good way
5 - @anhngocngoc11 human's lives,life (n) televisions also makes make, cause it plural. "the main idea of watching TV of...
Writing Feedbackanhngocngoc11 - Oct 6, 2019Ali20 - Oct 8, 2019
|Waste Recycling and the necessary legal measures - Writing Task 2 - Help me to get Band 9
2 - @rakasuraka Hello bro, these my comments which it may improve your writing quality 1. for getting band score...
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