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2 - The essay you wrote does not meet the 250 minimum word requirement. 231 words is still substantially far enough...
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|IELTS TASK 1: MIXED CHARTS ON EDUCATION IN SINGAPORE
3 - Rather than saying "According to", use the phrase "Based on" instead. It is more academic sounding since you are...
Writing Feedbackamira11545 - Oct 18, 2020Holt - Oct 19, 2020
|IELTS essay: fast food availability
3 - The maximum word count for this Task 2 essay is 290 words. You have written 347 words and not...
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|Common Application Essay about the Fashion Industry
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the feedback! I'll get rid of the first 2 paragraphs and shorten the...
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|Advocated student groups - UT Austin supplemental - Diversity short answer
2 - You did very weel in the background section and the outside the classroom discussion. Your essay is missing the...
Writing Feedbackcarot2103 - Oct 18, 2020Holt - Oct 18, 2020
|Common App Essay: Khushi Means Happiness
3 - @Holt The word count this year is 650. How can I make it more engaging? Do you think shortening...
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|Chevening - Leadership (Policy Development and Environmental Movement)
2 - There is a lack of clarity as to whether these are all amateur leadership and influencing experiences or, if...
Scholarshiprawraisin - Oct 17, 2020Holt - Oct 17, 2020
|IELTS Essay. Job satisfaction versus job security, which one is more important?
3 - Kindly use a timer when writing your essay next time. Set it for 40 minutes. I believe that you...
Writing Feedbacktctc8797 - Oct 17, 2020Holt - Oct 17, 2020
|Essay about the causes and solutions of teenagers prefer socializing online to meeting in person
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Writing Feedbacksurithienan - Oct 17, 2020Holt - Oct 17, 2020
|Skills with technology - Chevening scholarship - Leadership and influence essay
3 - Thank you so much for your feedback 🙏 I will revise my essay and pay attention to everything you...
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|In-class instructions and online learning. Which one suits you best?
2 - Is there a word count for this essay? It somehow feels like you stopped discussing the topic before you...
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|IELTS Essay: Some cities have vehicle-free days, when private cars, trucks, motorcycles are banned
3 - Your second paragraph is under developed in terms of explanation. After you present an example, you should work on...
Writing Feedbacktctc8797 - Oct 16, 2020Holt - Oct 17, 2020
|Those three chosen courses to build up my present capacity in interior design
2 - You speak of inspiration and reasons for choosing the courses at these universities. However, there is a failure on...
ScholarshipAlshaimaa - Oct 16, 2020Holt - Oct 17, 2020
|IELTS Essay: Art classes, like painting and drawing, are not as important as other subjects
3 - The essay that you wrote does not respond in any way to the provided discussion question. Let's do a...
Writing Feedbacktctc8797 - Oct 16, 2020Holt - Oct 17, 2020
|Why I hate the questions where are you from
7 - @MattiaPiaggi I think only last part of your essay indicates why you want to be in NYU. I would...
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|Using foreign languages - IELTS writing task-2 practice
3 - @tctc8797 Thanks for finding this out. I need to think about clarity! Actually I wanted to give a conclusion...
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|Leadership is People Development
3 - Since you asked for some help , herewith is my thougths. Your third sentence, you have be specific about...
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3 - As a part of your preparing to study in Korea, reference that you are taking formal Hangul classes, and...
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|Leadership is more than just giving orders - Chevening Leadership Essays
2 - Your college leadership and influencing experience is too lightweight. It needs to be more specific. Why were you chosen...
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|Studying in the UK Chevening Scholarships - Data science careers
2 - You are over the word count by 4 words. That is because you over expanded on the discussion of...
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|How do you change the world
2 - You are not really responding to the question. You are giving what we call a non-response. A whitewash. An...
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|MasterCard Foundation Scholarship at University of Edinburgh about a chosen program
3 - The essay will be better served if you combine the first sentence with the second paragraph references instead. The...
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