|Whether people should choose high paid jobs that they dislike or low-paid jobs that they enjoy.
Writing FeedbackVeronica11 - Aug 5, 2020kays - Aug 6, 2020
|IELTS- Task 2: Selection of students based on their qualifications
4 - Your opinion should not have been stated in the opening paraphrase. You should only be repeating the discussion instructions...
Writing Feedbackbaotram1812 - Aug 5, 2020Holt - Aug 6, 2020
|It is argued that railways are taking over roads as the most important transport
3 - You are misleading the reader. YOu have changed the discussion topic and discussion slant because of your improper prompt...
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|Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss.
3 - thank you !!!...
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|Ielts task2: computers are considered to be the most crucial and noticeable invention
3 - This is not a comparative essay discussion. Why did you approach it as such? You cannot "partly" agree with...
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|Due to unemployment should students learn the work skills instead of studying?
4 - Your paragraph presentations tend to be confusing at times. The confusion most likely comes from your lack of proper...
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|GKS Undergraduate Scholarship 2020 Personal Statement Philippines
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|Controversial information should be kept as secret or not.
3 - There are supposed to be 5 paragraphs for this essay: Par. 1: Prompt Paraphrase + discussion instruction Par. 2:...
Writing Feedbackemillia2003 - Aug 5, 2020Holt - Aug 5, 2020
|Ielts Task 1: The table given depicts forest area in six distinct regions in 15 years from 1990
Writing Feedbackminhquan20 - Aug 5, 2020minhquan20 - Aug 5, 2020
|Task1- You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant.
2 - You did not capitalize the proper nouns referring to the name of the company you represented (Forbest Ltd.). The...
Lettersyounelsnuk3 - Aug 5, 2020Holt - Aug 5, 2020
|Whether smartphones have caused more harm than good to our society.
Writing FeedbackVeronica11 - Aug 5, 2020Veronica11 - Aug 5, 2020
|The Intake of four different kinds of meat in a European country
4 - You should merge the first and second paragraphs to create a single presentation. That way the sentences are not...
Writing Feedbacktraitorakali - Aug 5, 2020Holt - Aug 5, 2020
|Writing task 2: newly built houses should follow the old style or people can choose freely
3 - You not accurately delivering the paraphrase for the prompt. Examiners score down students for making exaggerated claims within the...
Writing FeedbackDiepVu99 - Aug 4, 2020Holt - Aug 5, 2020
|Some people assume that university education should be free of charge for all students
3 - There is a minimum of 3 sentences and a maximum of 5 sentences per paragraph. Your introduction and conclusion...
Writing Feedbacklekimha1999hy - Aug 4, 2020Holt - Aug 5, 2020
|KGSP PERSONAL STATEMENT INTERNATIONAL RELATIONS / Role Model
3 - I'd like to take out the first paragraph and please do let me know if there's anything unnecessary...
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|LIVING ALONE OR IN SMALLY FAMILY UNITS - POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE ?
3 - The paraphrase you created is missing one sentence to meet the minimum paragraph requirement. You did not paraphrase the...
Writing Feedbackbdmqnh - Aug 4, 2020Holt - Aug 5, 2020
|Whether it is better to work as a team than as an individual to succeed
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|IELTS Writing Part 2: HEALTH TOPIC / Walking
3 - You are using too many word fillers in this essay. You need to learn to open your paragraphs with...
Writing Feedbackjustikatanu - Aug 4, 2020Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|IELTS WRITING PART 2 : EDUCATION and Exams
2 - Normally, the extent essay does not accept a "partly" response because it does not create a clear opinion for...
Writing Feedbackalice06 - Aug 4, 2020Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|GOING OVERSEAS TO LEARN LANGUAGE AND CULTURE - AGREE OR DISAGREE?
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|In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books
3 - It is unfortunate that our scoring services are no longer part of the free essay review service. You must...
Writing Feedbackmario95 - Aug 4, 2020Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|Convenience foods will replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation
2 - You have provided the discussion paragraphs for the essay. You forgot the most important part of the task 2...
Writing FeedbackThuyPhan - Aug 4, 2020Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|The line graph compares and contrasts data on the changes in the proportion of Australian export
3 - The summary overview should include the list of the countries involved. Remember, this is a summary of the report...
Writing Feedbackkaisergod47 - Aug 4, 2020Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|IELTS TASK 1 The table illustrates the number of technological researchers in the five countries
3 - You presented a good summary overview. However, you should have listed the other 3 countries in a creative manner...
Writing Feedbackminhkhue16 - Aug 4, 2020Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|IELTS Writing task 2. Less sleep. Why? Effects?
3 - The prompt response is incomplete. You forgot to include the effects of lack of sleep. That is why your...
Writing Feedbackjackjixam13 - Aug 4, 2020Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|Many universities charge higher fees for foreign students. Why do they do this?
3 - This is not an opinion essay, this is a research paper. The length is not in accordance with the...
Writing Feedbackquynhanhvo - Aug 4, 2020Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|There is a view that reporting about celebrities by media has negative influence on teenagers
5 - @cummin gungugu As much as I would hate to comment but I believe your argument is correct to an...
Writing Feedbackcummin gungugu - Aug 3, 2020birto delti - Aug 4, 2020
|No values - Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
3 - You have to make sure that your prompt restatement is an accurate retelling of the original prompt. You do...
Writing Feedbackmariye - Aug 3, 2020Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|TASK 1: information on the percentage of people who were unemployed in the US and Japan
2 - I do not feel that you have written enough words to justify your English writing skills. Writing only 151...
Writing FeedbackThieu Quynh - Aug 3, 2020Holt - Aug 4, 2020
|IELTS TASK 2: Only people with special abilities can make art.
3 - Your prompt paraphrase is incorrect as it does not properly reflect the original discussion presentation. Rather, it contains exaggerations...
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