|Children to know right from wrong - IELTS 10 Test 1 Writing Task 2
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|The Art of Streaming - Research Paper - Intro, Conclusion and MLA Citations review
2 - The first part of the essay requires more proper in-text citation. You are referring to Flynn and others in...
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|IELTS task 2: Time spent by young adults with their family
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|'Museums should be open to everyone' - IELTS Task 2 - Many museums charge for admission
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|Household living - WRITING TASK 1_BAR CHART_CAMBRIDGE 13 TEST 2
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|Many people recommend that we should use more public transports for our sake. Do u agree or disagree
2 - As a task 2 essay, I would have to caution you against writing less than the minimum word count....
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|Our planet's nature - writing IELTS Task 2 cambridge 14
3 - Some grammar error you need to note: 1. important environmental problems. 2. In addition, on in a busy...
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|General Training, Task 2 - Type: Direct Questions - Subject: Prepare students for the world of work
2 - Dear, although your essay is lengthy enough, there are problems with coherence that I want you to ponder: ...
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ( Topic: science & research)
4 - Some grammatical and spelling mistakes: -THE governmental scientific staff -THE scientific industry -.. and A huge budget -these...
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|Australian household energy use and greenhouse gas emissions. Task 1: IELTS - CAMBRIDGE 10
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|Giving possibility to choose subjects students prefer or enforcing obligatory subjects at schools?
5 - Some grammatical and spelling mistakes: - ... they have AN interest in ... - ... to reach the...
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|Mental Health Disorders and their Causes
3 - @Daniirish2804 OK, some grammar error: 1- forty six => forty-six It appears that you are missing a hyphen with...
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|Taking a rest: Do you notice that mobile phone is killing you?
3 - Since this is a research paper, you have to avoid using a personal point of view in the presentation....
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|Writing task 2: Academic knowledge vs Life skills
3 - Since you did not provide the original prompt and there are several essays that fall under this topic, I'll...
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|Some individuals claim that the only purpose of movie is to entertain. Others have different opinion
4 - dear @Holt The full topic is "Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. Others...
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|Ielts task 1 - line graph shows changes in the amount of fast food consumed by Australian teenager.
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|Export revenues from five different products - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - Two charts - Cambridge 14
3 - The summary overview is creative but, it is lacking in representation. There are 5 categories represented in both the...
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|Development context - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution*?
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|What can be done about the hunger crisis? Advanced agriculture and lack of food.
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|The chart - information about the age of women in Australia who give first birth
2 - The first problem with this presentation has to do with the summary overview. You forgot to mention: - The...
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|Motivation letter-fellowship Postdoctoral position
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|Topic: Television is harmful for communication skills of people. Why?
3 - There are actually 2 different prompts that apply to the Task 2 essay topic you have chosen. Unless I...
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|Dangerous automobile drivers
3 - As an English writing exercise, you did not do a bad job. You actually have a coherent essay presentation...
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|IELTS Task 1: Process diagram: Generating electricity
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|Australia Awards Scholarship Supporting Statement (Master of Commerce)
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|Problems - New technologies have changes the way children spend their free time.
2 - Okay, the original prompt asks you to consider if the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. That means that your approach...
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|Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read
2 - This is a 5 paragraph essay based on the discussion outline requirement which was provided in the original essay....
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|AAS International Security - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution
3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your suggestion. The problem is this essay is limited to only 2000 characters...
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|Distant-learning and telecommuting
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|Resurrecting the Extinct, Detracting from Evolution
2 - What is the point of the discussion? You do not have a clear thesis statement at the start of...
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