|The proportion of Coca-Cola sales around the World - IELTS Task 1
5 - @frankie89724 I think you have to be more careful when describing the trend. You need the preposition to...
Writing Feedbackfrankie89724hi021132 - Jul 23, 2017
|Ielts task 2: high petrol price can reduce traffic?
2 - @ruby1231 I believe that the overall score for your essay would be somewhere in the 5 range. This is...
Writing Feedbackruby1231Holt - Jul 23, 2017
|My Essay for the Application to AFRICAN UNION YOUTH VOLUNTEER CORPS Program
3 - I am interested in becoming an African Union Youth Volunteer because of the opportunity it gives me to self...
Lettersesie2017esie2017 - Jul 22, 2017
|IELTS Task 2 - discuss the importance of homework
3 - Wally the whole approach that you took to discussing this essay is not in accordance with the prompt requirement....
Writing Feedbacklee1943Holt - Jul 22, 2017
|Film import in comparison to self-production
2 - Tung, your essay lacks proper discussion developments that could have better represented a cohesive and coherent discussion. I think...
Writing Feedbacktunglinh0907Holt - Jul 22, 2017
|The history of Harris. [Narrative essay] Gave Me Hope
2 - Sharisha, pay attention to the tense usage in your presentation. You tend to confuse your present and past tense...
Writing FeedbackBluecoralHolt - Jul 22, 2017
|IELTS Task 2: Saving or spend money
5 - @Holt Thanks so much, your advice is really helpful with me. I will try to concentrate on only 1...
Writing Feedbacknguyet_nguyennguyet_nguyen - Jul 22, 2017
|Honey bee diagram explanation - [IELTS Writing Task 1]
4 - Peter, when the word minimum is 150, you should not just write 150 words. You wrote just enough to...
Writing Feedbackhi021132Holt - Jul 22, 2017
|"A lot of people want to get married at later ages. Why is this trend popular ?"
5 - Hi I think your essay is good, has many academic vocab. You can write the conclusion by paraphrasing the...
Writing Feedbacknguyentramtunglinh0907 - Jul 22, 2017
|Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern life is easier than life in the past.
3 - @Holt Holt, thanks for your valuable suggestion, but I am not getting that in which area I should change...
Writing Feedbackutsiutsi - Jul 22, 2017
|Should Grades Define Your Intelligence?
5 - I agree with one of Holt's point. You repeat the same fact every once in a few sentences, which...
Writing Feedbackdfig2233Bluecoral - Jul 21, 2017
|The pie charts illustrate five sources of energy production in France.
Writing FeedbackLadyOfClockworkLadyOfClockwork - Jul 21, 2017
|Japanese people traveling oversea from 1985 to 1995; market share of Australia
2 - Phuong, kindly remember that we are unable to accurately review your essay when you do not upload the illustration...
Writing Feedbackphkhanh12Holt - Jul 21, 2017
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2, talk about marriage age limitation in which at least 21
2 - Putri, there are so many problems with the way that you wrote this essay that I cannot figure out...
Writing FeedbackputjaaaHolt - Jul 21, 2017
|[IELTS Task 1] The main reasons for study among students of different age groups
2 - Peter in terms of a summary overview, you could have had a better presentation if you had actually indicated...
Writing Feedbackhi021132Holt - Jul 21, 2017
|Having a gap year before attending college - IELTS
3 - Thanks @Holt However, I want to ask you about this sentence "Others believe that traveling after high school...
Writing Feedbacknguyet_nguyennguyet_nguyen - Jul 21, 2017
|Is it true that women make better parents than men? Discuss
2 - Atakan, this is not a comparison and point of view essay. This is a straightforward personal opinion essay. So...
Writing FeedbackElixironHolt - Jul 21, 2017
|Practice IELTS Writing Task 2 - Advantages or Disadvantages of Information Technology Development
5 - I have totally misunderstood the question and here it is my 2nd attempt, I greatly appreciate for any comments....
Writing Feedbacktsongatsonga - Jul 20, 2017
|[task 1]Surveys conducted in 1982 and 2002 show what motivate students to choose a school in the UK
4 - @LadyOfClockwork You utilizes a variety of words which interprets the overall survey very well. Like "shed light on"...
Writing FeedbackLadyOfClockworkAllentseng - Jul 20, 2017
|Is it possible for a country to be economically progressive while having a clean environment?
Writing FeedbackBoredpandaBoredpanda - Jul 20, 2017
|My points of view to the open offices.
3 - @Holt Thank you very much. I read the article here. ( time.com/4590401/open-office-productivity/ ) And then I try to...
Writing FeedbackCarol LiCarol Li - Jul 20, 2017
|[Task 1] The changing rates of crime in Newport city over nine years
7 - Hi Liza, your observations and descriptions are correct, but I think you may miss some features which are worth...
Writing FeedbackLiza2307hi021132 - Jul 20, 2017
|[IELTS Writing Task 1] The consumption of fish and different kinds of meat between 1979 and 2004
3 - Thank you for your comment. I really find it useful, especially the comment about the choice of words. But...
Writing Feedbackhi021132hi021132 - Jul 20, 2017
|Burgeoning economic growth effect. Problem and solution essay.
3 - @Sirojiddin it would be best if you can separate your discussions into the manner indicated in the discussion instructions....
Writing FeedbackSirojiddinHolt - Jul 20, 2017
|THE AVERAGE ATTENDANCE OF TOP-LEVEL SOCCER LEAGUES
Writing Feedbackthanhnguyen1011thanhnguyen1011 - Jul 20, 2017
|Cases of discrimination job candidates due to specified gender; Ielts 2
2 - Kaylee, you have shown a great deal of analytical progression and writing improvement in this response essay. It shows...
Writing FeedbackKayleeHolt - Jul 20, 2017
|Essay for Chevening Leadership question; applying for a masters degree scholarship grant
3 - @Holt Thank you for the very direct and honest reply. This is my first draft and I will certainly...
Scholarshipannrieskaannrieska - Jul 19, 2017
|Failed at Australia Award Scholarship with below statements
ScholarshipLogisticianLogistician - Jul 19, 2017
|OPINION ABOUT SHOPPING ONLINE
4 - @YuAnne THANKS, I GOT IT @Holt THANKS FOR YOUR ADVICE. USING OPPOSITE OPINION LIKE A LEVER. I LIKE...
Writing FeedbackGnadGnad - Jul 19, 2017
|Practice IELTS Writing Task 2 - Benefit and Drawback of Computer Games
3 - Hello Mr Habib, in this moment I am going to offer a few suggestions for improving your essay so...
Writing Feedbackhabibaistiqomahakbarmappiare - Jul 19, 2017