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2 - Han, what is the point of this essay? The introduction doesn't make any sense. Your first paragraph must properly...
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2 - @tranvinhquang720 Hi, I would like to give you my brief feedback about the essay. First of all, I assume...
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|Punishment for Children is important for them to learn the difference between right and wrong?
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|Must the free time of kids be always educational?
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|Summary: How can parents help students survive the exam season?
2 - Hi, I thought you did an excellent job summarizing this article. You restated most of the points very...
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|University of Auckland Scholarship Essay_Skill and Knowledge gained from the study
3 - Thank you @Mary Rose for the feedback. I have revised the essay based on your comment. Please give...
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|University Scholarship Cancellation Appeal Letter
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|"Tell us about an achievement or ability not reflected in this application."
2 - Patrick, this essay covers more of the requirements for an obstacle you had to overcome instead of an achievement...
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|Too much requirements from students? Should they focus strictly on the academic subjects?
2 - Hi..You got to know that essay question with agree and disagree type can be answered by five forms of...
Writing FeedbackyuzukachanAhmadham - May 17, 2017
|The line graph: tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.
2 - Hi I think you have been working hard with pies/charts/diagrams. That's why your language use is good such as...
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|Internet Users as percentage of populations
2 - I think you need to provide a real and more detailed question. What you have here is the data,...
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|PERSONAL STATEMENT ON WHY I SHOULD BE CONSIDERED FOR SCHOLARSHIP AT HERRIOT WATT UNIVERSITY.
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|This is my first Issue topic on the desire of corporations. Evaluate and grade me.
2 - The main aim of government corporations is to work for the welfare of their people. Although sometimes they...
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|Music will never disappear from our life
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|Nowadays it is possible to use computers and mobile phones for automatic language translation
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|THE GAP BETWEEN THE WEALTHY AND LESS WEALTHIER CITIZENS.
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|It's a short story about a aunt and his nephew.
3 - @Holt Thanks for your help and your advice,I knew about that, but I'm a beginner,I wrote this story mainly...
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|Task 2: Living in big cities is bad for your health. To what extent do you agree or disagree
2 - Hi, I believe you have a wide range of knowledge about this topic or at least do careful research,...
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|Brunel University - Country Specific Scholarship
5 - A LOT OF CHANGES NEEDED: Just first paragraph done here. As an engineer working in construction field (for...
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|An essay about "How to Deal with Stress?"
Writing Feedbackconnieconconniecon - May 14, 2017
|Introduction - The influence of celebrity worship on college students
Research Papersvanessaaleungvanessaaleung - May 14, 2017
|UC Davis Waitlist Essay - my mendeavors to study the Social Sciences
2 - Syrah, though this essay is well thought out, it doesn't fully represent the method by which your past and...
UndergraduatesyrahnavidHolt - May 14, 2017
|Prescription Drug Abuse among kids, Teens, and Adults
2 - Noah, I can see that you have included a listing of your reference material at the end of the...
Research Papersnamen772Holt - May 14, 2017
|SHOULD GOVERNMENT REGULATE THE FAST FOOD INDUSTRIES
2 - HI...when analyzing your essay, I have to say it is a nightmare for you. Despite less grammatical errors, your...
Writing FeedbackarashzhAhmadham - May 13, 2017
|In my opinion railways are more important than roads. Government support. IELTS- writing task 2
2 - Halo Lin Yi, It seems that you still have a problem with grammatical understanding. Some sentences you made are...
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|Fatally Ill People's Choice
2 - Without pain and suffering, there is no existence (not to mention 'no pain, no gain). Life is by design...
Writing FeedbackeminhaqiRich Monte - May 13, 2017
|Study Objectives Essay For Fulbright Scholarship Program 2018 From Pakistan
5 - @Holt @Monica26 I've taken advice of y'all and edited my essay which took me 12 days. Please let...
Scholarshipbilal_engineerbilal_engineer - May 12, 2017
|Different-an "other" which revealed to you your sense of self and your relationship to humanity
2 - Claudia, you have too many things going on in this essay. I realize that this trip left an impact...
UndergraduateclauqmansoHolt - May 12, 2017
|I need a peer review of a 10 page research paper about the effects of TV viewing on young children.
2 - Kassi, the firs thing that I noticed about this paper was that the title was misleading. If you are...
Research PapersklaytonHolt - May 12, 2017
|Kids skills and familiarization in using new gadgets
5 - It's pretty good, but you failed to discuss how the technology would help children learn about the real (not...
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