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The two pictures illustrate how the layout of the ground floor in this house will be changed

2 - The word presentation, though passing in minimum consideration, does not allow for a maximum scoring consideration. If the writer...

Writing Feedbackambery - Sep 23, 2021Holt - 2 days ago
Increasing the price of fuel as the optimal solution to solve environmental problems

2 - The prompt restatement should never be over discussed. The topic presentation should not alter the original presentation by digressing...

Writing Feedbacknartarus2000 - Sep 22, 2021Holt - 2 days ago
The number of students in both genders who graduated in Canada between 1992 and 2007

4 - Started Starting is the number/quantity of both female and male students are were finish finished can could goes went...

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GKS (KGSP) Scholarship Personal Statement - for degree in Fashion styling

2 - This is the wrong reason to choose a scholarship. Avoid financial benefit references. Speak of educational and career...

ScholarshipSomnium - Sep 22, 2021Holt - Sep 23, 2021
Global Korea Scholarship undergraduate (for strategic communication)

NEW - GKS application essay Please contact us at essayforum.com@gmail.com for private services due to the extensive content requirements. EF...

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IELTS Essay about DANGEROUS SPORTS needed

2 - The first paragraph does not provide a restatement + opinion. Rather, the writer entered into a direct discussion in...

Writing Feedbackjangchul - Sep 21, 2021Holt - Sep 23, 2021
The amount of people who took train at London Underground Station in a day for sixteen hours

4 - I can spot some grammar errors in your essay as below for your review: Overall, people generally take...

Writing Feedbackmonicaaa0017 - Sep 18, 2021Kim2989 - Sep 23, 2021
Personal Statement GKS Graduate 2022 University Track Master's Degree Chemical Enginnering

3 - try to better connect one paragraph to another! :)...

Scholarshipshriibk - Sep 9, 2021may4 - Sep 23, 2021
PERSONAL STATEMENT / Global Korea Scholarships (GKS-U) 2022 / Media & Communication

3 - you can try to be more clear and concise in your accomplishments, and don't belittle yourself at any time,...

Undergraduatedearzhongli - Sep 19, 2021may4 - Sep 23, 2021
Discuss both views. Cheap products or long lasting product. This is an IELTS essay

3 - @Holt Thank you. I really appreciate your feedback which helps me improve my essay....

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Lots of teenagers today would rather socialize online than communicate in person

2 - Repetitive word meaning. Both refer to the 21st century. Use one reference only. There is no need...

Writing Feedbackqnhuluong - Sep 21, 2021Holt - Sep 22, 2021
The chart below gives information on the per of British people giving money to charity by age range.

NEW - The bar chart compares the number of British people who gave money to charity from 18 to over 65...

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How to build the medical health care system

2 - This is not an acceptable statement response. Consider the focus of the prompt which is building a health care...

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GKS 2022 undergraduate major in film. "Being a part of something special makes you special, right?"

2 - The language discussion does not belong in this statement. heate a far more intricate language study history in the...

Undergraduatemay4 - Sep 20, 2021Holt - Sep 22, 2021
People are interested in finding out about the history of the house they live in. Why ? How ?

NEW - Exploring stories about the past of their accommodation is becoming increasingly popular for many people in some nations. This...

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Information about the travelling tendency (cities visited) by people from the USA, Canada and Mexico

3 - @Holt thanks for your feedback...

Writing Feedbackpapcaii - Sep 20, 2021papcaii - Sep 22, 2021
Essay about the factors bringing success - advise

2 - This creates a problem with the orginal topic rephrasing. There is no question being asked of the writer...

Writing Feedbackhelloitssheila - Sep 20, 2021Holt - Sep 22, 2021
Ielts task on public, private and self-employed sectors of the economy in the UK

3 - in my point of view, you should have one more sentence in your overview ( like which field had...

Writing Feedbacknobodycares19 - Sep 20, 2021papcaii - Sep 21, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Will libraries be relevant in the future?

2 - The opinion of the writer is unclear. Do you agree or disagree? The response can only support one...

Writing Feedbackchantran - Sep 20, 2021Holt - Sep 21, 2021
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] SHOULD CHILDREN DECIDE THEIR OWN CAREER?

2 - This is a topic reason deviation. It is not supported in the orginal statement. It has altered the...

Writing FeedbackItsthu - Sep 20, 2021Holt - Sep 21, 2021
The data on the occupation of graduated and post-graduate students after finishing college in the UK

3 - it is clear that a minority majority of UK graduates ......

Writing Feedbackkimkhanhnguyen - Sep 19, 2021spandya - Sep 21, 2021
Developing nations are often financially supported by prosperous nations, but poverty still remain

2 - Do not exaggerate your response. Format the answer as needed or indicated in the discussion question. This is...

Writing Feedbackvvananh88 - Sep 19, 2021Holt - Sep 21, 2021
What can art tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

2 - Kick off the discussion with a proper topic outline. The reader needs to know that you have a...

Writing Feedbackdanlenze - Sep 19, 2021Holt - Sep 21, 2021
Statement of purpose - OSLOMET Norway- MS-Applied Computer and Information Technology

2 - Expand on this portion. Specifically, discuss academic accomplishments, related research work, and any other academic participation that will...

Graduateshroud - Sep 19, 2021Holt - Sep 21, 2021
Developing countries need financial help or practical aid and advice

5 - You should take care of using proper words and sentence structures....

Writing Feedbackgintoki7 - Aug 18, 2021spandya - Sep 21, 2021
The line graph illustrates the amount of people who bought music over seven years time frame

4 - i think a conclusion is unnecessary in WR task 1. instead of that you should write one more sentence...

Writing FeedbackMrshangaung - Sep 18, 2021papcaii - Sep 20, 2021
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] DISCUSS THE VIEWS OF ADVERTISING AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

3 - @paleodietcorner Thank you so much, I really appreciate your feedback....

Writing FeedbackTraphan - Sep 20, 2021Traphan - Sep 20, 2021
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE MS MECHATRONICS AND CONTROL SYSTEM.

NEW - master program application I am applying for master in mechatronics, I have written an introduction paragraph in which...

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Beside studying, there are more significant factors that pupils have to explore

NEW - Task 2: Everybody should stay at school until the age of 18. What extent do you agree or disagree?...

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People are damaging the environment. What goverments and individuals can do to address this problem

3 - Here is my feedback Firstly, the way linking words such as "and", "so" used throughout this essay is...

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