|Task 1: the percentage of water for different purpose - industry, agriculture and domestic
2 - I cannot accurately review your work without the chart / image provided for this task. Please remember to include...
Writing Feedbackkelly33 - 2 days agoHolt - 2 days ago
|"adaptable" - UBC application essay----tell us about yourself
2 - You only responded to the last part of the essay regarding what you are proud of. You failed to...
Undergraduatekarmalea - 2 days agoHolt - 2 days ago
|Engineering as a major - China student enrolling in USA
3 - @Holt I really appreciated your response, and I tried to fix my answer by the order of question that...
UndergraduateHotDragon10 - Jan 13, 2020HotDragon10 - 2 days ago
|Task 2: The problem of child abuse. How respond to this problem?
5 - ... made people become replete with ... ... towards children- susceptible victims- are ... ..., depression, orand...
Writing FeedbackThangnguyen315 - Dec 23, 2019karmalea - 2 days ago
|SOP: Why pursue Masters in Business Analytics in University X (Canada)?
3 - Since this is a statement of purpose for a masters degree, you should be focusing less on your college...
Graduateanalyticsaspiran - Dec 30, 2019Holt - 2 days ago
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - FRIENDS WITH PEOPLE WITH SAME OPINION OR NOT
4 - There is a lack of clarity in the introduction paragraph. Your paraphrase does not include a reference to the...
Writing FeedbackeNVi - Dec 29, 2019Holt - 2 days ago
|The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
4 - That was one heck of a confusing first paragraph. It doesn't really summarize the task well enough to score...
Writing FeedbackHirumi - Dec 21, 2019Holt - 2 days ago
|IELTS task2- It is often said that governments spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife?
3 - When you write the introduction, spend time in formulating the summary of the prompt. Avoid writing long sentence because...
Writing FeedbackOliverH - Dec 24, 2019Holt - 2 days ago
|IVEY AEO ESSAY (Character in Leadership)
2 - The opening paragraph doesn't hold the interest of the reader. Open immediately with the relevant discussion instead. In this...
Undergraduateyellowjello123 - Jan 14, 2020Holt - 2 days ago
|International issues - Personal Statement for Applying to undergraduate course at NUS
6 - Dear Holt, Dear Darina14, Oh my god thank you very much for your responses! your feedbacks are the...
UndergraduateLemonBreadKing - Jan 1, 2020LemonBreadKing - 2 days ago
|TOEFL ESSAY - About restriction for marketing strategies directed at kids (eg. TV's advertising)
2 - It is not a question of whether more regulation is required when it comes to advertising to children, it...
Writing Feedbackkokot - Jan 14, 2020Holt - 2 days ago
|I am putting forward my candidacy for enrollment in electrical engineering of an University
2 - Don't just rely on Elon Musk and his accomplishments in the field of neural science to prove your motivation...
Undergraduatemoog2001 - Jan 14, 2020Holt - 2 days ago
|ielts task 2; Millions of people doing unhealthy activities which are harmful
3 - The introduction must accurately summarize the content of the prompt in order for it to gain a proper TA...
Writing Feedbackmichellejoy1222 - Jan 14, 2020Holt - 2 days ago
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: THE GROWTH OF ONLINE SHOPPING
Writing FeedbackYuki Nguyen - Jan 7, 2020Yuki Nguyen - Jan 14, 2020
|I agree that the media coverage of celebrities have a negative impact on children
4 - Points will be deducted for the missing 25 words. The TA assessment for this essay falls under a 4...
Writing FeedbackPHANTAMANH - Dec 25, 2019Holt - Jan 14, 2020
|Overpopulation in urban areas has led to some serious problems. Identify some problems and solutions
3 - Your presentation is good but the ideas are little developed. It would be better if you learn to use...
Writing FeedbackNguyen Ngoc Huon - Jan 5, 2020Holt - Jan 14, 2020
|COMMON APP, is this necessary? Details of circumstances or qualifications...
3 - This part of the application essay is optional because it has to do with some factors that may exist...
UndergraduatePabloEscobar - Dec 25, 2019Holt - Jan 14, 2020
|Good thesis statment about the cause/effect on technology
7 - If you take out the online business from your sub topics, you will be able to create an interconnected...
EssaysDestinyt101yes - Jun 6, 2010Holt - Jan 14, 2020
|"Describe a meaninful experience in your life." PT school essay prompt
3 - This sounds like you are writing the beginnings of a novel instead of discussing an important experience in your...
Graduatecheyennebucknerr - Jan 7, 2020Holt - Jan 14, 2020
|Tell us about who you are. How would your family, friends describe. (UBC personal profile)
4 - It would be better if you used a different personality trait for every section required in the essay. The...
UndergraduateArmaanS - Jan 5, 2020Holt - Jan 14, 2020
|Some believe homework should be given everyday, others do not in order to success in school. Discuss
Writing Feedbackapprajapati - Jan 8, 2020Holt - Jan 14, 2020
|The internet provide us with easy connection to other people, however it also isolates us
2 - The complete prompt for this essay indicates that requires a clear degree of dis/agreement with the given topic. As...
Writing FeedbackMsm87 - Jan 14, 2020Holt - Jan 14, 2020
|Sustainable-Energy-Systems - to write a study objective for the Fulbright scholarship
3 - [/quote] Thank you, for your useful comments dear @Holt but two things should be considered in writing this essay...
ScholarshipAli163 - Jan 13, 2020Ali163 - Jan 14, 2020
|Waterloo Engineering and AFM AIF - Accounting and Financial Management
UndergraduateWaterCivEngAFM - Jan 14, 2020WaterCivEngAFM - Jan 14, 2020
|The band that I organized by myself. Activities that are most important to you
Undergraduaterichardli0124 - Jan 14, 2020richardli0124 - Jan 14, 2020
|Personal Statement for MS in Applied Data Science
3 - While there is no required word limitation on the personal statement for this university, you should not write more...
GraduateIris_viva - Jan 4, 2020Holt - Jan 14, 2020
|Who I am and background? Study plan for master's scholarship
4 - Your introduction essay should not focus so much on your weaknesses as a student. Neither should it relate too...
ScholarshipAmmaraRasheed - Jan 13, 2020Holt - Jan 14, 2020
|A step into the future I ever dreamt of - review on my Personal statement for PTDF Msc Scholarship
2 - Even without seeing the guiding prompts for this personal statement, I would have to say that the essay does...
Scholarshipminers - Jan 13, 2020Holt - Jan 14, 2020
|UBC Personal Profile: What is important to me (Ikigai - a simple, but fulfilling philosophy)
2 - The last paragraph of this essay should really be the first paragraph because that is the direct response to...
Undergraduatehumairak - Jan 13, 2020Holt - Jan 14, 2020
|Structure of SOP essay for UX and UI design
2 - The missing element in this version of your study plan is ; what is the relevance of this research...
Graduatejos3ph - Jan 13, 2020Holt - Jan 14, 2020