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IElTS Writing Task 2: Plastic shopping bags are used widely and caused many environmental problems.

4 - A big numbers support (...) -> Many support replacing plastic bags with paper bags, worsening the situation....

Writing Feedbackminhhoangvn - Nov 16, 2022hopefullyUBC - Nov 29, 2022
UBC 'what is important to you?' essay "taking that next step"

3 - @Holt Hello @Holt! I greatly appreciate your advice, and I've tried to implement more elements of adaptation...

UndergraduatehopefullyUBC - Nov 28, 2022hopefullyUBC - Nov 29, 2022
My household chores is very boring

4 - There's a lot of repetition within the writing. I think you can definitely find a synonym for "chores" instead...

Writing FeedbackCiocasino - Nov 28, 2022Slyrae - Nov 28, 2022
A letter written by me to introduce one of my friends for a newspaper award.

4 - First of all, I think you explain who you are and the reason of your letter 4 year -...

LettersQuyennguyetri - Nov 25, 2022jenny0601 - Nov 28, 2022
Essay about why Nuclear Power and why is Nuclear the Better Option?

2 - The writing comes across as very bad in sections where the writer does not use in-text citations to explain...

Research PapersIncognitouser - Nov 28, 2022Holt - Nov 28, 2022
The high population density happening in metropolitan areas. Problems and Solutions?

2 - The essay is over-written. It is not possible to write a 368 word essay within 40 minutes. Not when...

Writing FeedbackLinhkhanhho - Nov 28, 2022Holt - Nov 28, 2022
(Writing Task 1) The proportion of smokers in males and females

2 - There is an inconsistency in the summary overview. The image depicts the measurements in percentage form based on half...

Writing FeedbackLuana1017 - Nov 28, 2022Holt - Nov 28, 2022
IELTS task 1 - The proportion of the use of water in several areas of the world in three categories

6 - I think you should not use the word "below" in introduction part because when you take real ielts exem,...

Writing FeedbackYukizuna - Nov 18, 2022Luana1017 - Nov 28, 2022
Three unhealthy nutrients in American daily menu - the pie charts

2 - The essay falls one word short of the 150 word requirement. As such, it will receive automatic deductions for...

Writing Feedbackstudyingwithjane - Nov 27, 2022Holt - Nov 27, 2022
The diagrams below show the site of a school and the plan for changes to the school site.

2 - Do not focus on word usage alone. There are several instances in this presentation when the word choice is...

Writing Feedbackditmemay - Nov 27, 2022Holt - Nov 27, 2022
Event that catalyzed change in belief/action - Queen's SE

2 - The main problem that I see with this essay is that it embodies the dream of someone else for...

Undergraduateyyqlin - Nov 27, 2022Holt - Nov 27, 2022
A child of an immigrant family - UBC: Tell us about who you are

2 - There is too much of "I" in this essay and not enough "they". The idea is to look at...

Undergraduatetofu9 - Nov 27, 2022Holt - Nov 27, 2022
The charts give information about world forest in five different regions.

4 - There is insigficant repetition in your essay in terms of words and the first body of the passage is...

Writing Feedbacktea555 - Nov 19, 2022ditmemay - Nov 27, 2022
Personal statement on student's foreign language acquisition before graduation.

2 - Where a general idea is presented, there is no need to exaggerate the basis. That means, the restatement should...

UndergraduateBun cha - Nov 25, 2022Holt - Nov 26, 2022
Motivation Letter - Stipendium Hungaricum Programme (computer science at Jadara University)

2 - This is a directionless letter that does not make the intention of the writer clear. Does the writer wish...

LettersEyas Alomari - Nov 25, 2022Holt - Nov 26, 2022
Tax private car owners to improve public transportation - ADVANTAGE AND DISADVANTAGE?

2 - The writer will do well to remember that a task 2 essay scores the accuracy of the information provided...

Writing FeedbackAngieNguyen17 - Nov 25, 2022Holt - Nov 26, 2022
Africa and Poverty - personal statement

3 - ... poor family and grew up in a small poor village.... I failed to see the coherence between the...

Scholarshipsimion - Nov 20, 2022Bun cha - Nov 25, 2022
Teaching children to manage money and their meaning in life

2 - The essay is definitely strong on the reasoning side. The writer fully explains his theory regarding teaching children about...

Writing Feedbacknobrand - Nov 24, 2022Holt - Nov 25, 2022
SOP for Msc. in computational science and engineering - objectives to reach through studies at EPFL

2 - Revise the presentation to be more purpose targeted rather than academically focused. When writing a statement of purpose, it...

Graduateleodanbrock - Nov 23, 2022Holt - Nov 24, 2022
Promoting healthy lifestyle or treating diseases?

5 - While people argue that (...) This is a sentence fragment. To be grammatically correct, you must add another clause...

Writing FeedbackNamFPT - Nov 17, 2022Bun cha - Nov 24, 2022
I keep a copy of every writing assignment - ubc personal profile WHAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU? WHY?

3 - @Holt yo thanks man ive been struggling to write these ubc questions but its nice to get some outside...

Undergraduatejonthanw713 - Nov 23, 2022jonthanw713 - Nov 23, 2022
Renovations in the sports centres - IELTS WRITING TEST 4 CAMBRIDGE 13

2 - ONE TASK AT A TIME. The summary overview and trending statement is not very well developed. It has...

Writing Feedbackditmemay - Nov 23, 2022Holt - Nov 23, 2022
A capable leader - Tell us about who you are - leadership and growth

2 - Do not lose sight of whose point of view is important here. While the second point of view response...

UndergraduateCW27 - Nov 23, 2022Holt - Nov 23, 2022
Master of computer science - EPFL SOP; the objectives you wish to reach through your studies

2 - The academic background goes too much into the youth of the applicant. Start the academic background from college when...

Graduatebestlife - Nov 21, 2022Holt - Nov 22, 2022
Embedded Systems. Statement of Purpose for EMECS Erusmus Mundus Scholarship Program

2 - I do not really see 2 related purposes in this presentation. As a reviewer, I will look for professional...

GraduateTajbid13 - Nov 20, 2022Holt - Nov 21, 2022
The pie charts below show units of electricity production from fuel sources in Australia and France

2 - The essay is not fully analyzed, discussed, and presented in this reporting essay. The writer has not focused on...

Writing FeedbackThao4real - Nov 18, 2022Holt - Nov 20, 2022
The nitrogen oxide produced by 4 types of transports

2 - Never forget to analyze the timeline provided in the image. There is always a clue as to whether this...

Writing FeedbackDanielDang - Nov 19, 2022Holt - Nov 20, 2022
Writing 1: The bar chart shows mobile usage in a country by age group from 1998 to 2000.

3 - you forgot to add "the" before the "highest" and the "lowest". These faults of grammar will decrease your overall...

Writing Feedbackphamthao0710 - Nov 18, 2022DanielDang - Nov 19, 2022
Writng task 2: Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime.

2 - While the writer more than met the required word count to gain proper scoring consideration based on each scoring...

Writing Feedbackkieu mai - Nov 19, 2022Holt - Nov 19, 2022
Signal Processing and communication networks - my grad school essay

3 - @Holt Apologies as I missed out information to guide your review. I will appreciate your comments with these...

Graduatetayoo - Nov 18, 2022tayoo - Nov 18, 2022