|Project Management Reference Letter for Chevening
Scholarshiparaku13araku13 - 2 days ago
|Professional sportsmen have become very popular and their salaries are a lot of money.
4 - dear,@KCN in this essay, introduction is not able to present full prompt. please focus on how to paraphrase...
Writing FeedbackKCNsfiza - Dec 8, 2017
|Statement of Purpose for US University (NanoEngineering, Ph.D.)
2 - Hu, this is a pretty strong and intricate personal statement. In terms of information presented, you have covered all...
GraduatehuyaoqiaoHolt - Dec 8, 2017
|I am ready to pursue a higher academic degree - Personal statement
2 - Jin, this is still an academic related presentation that relates to your statement of purpose. You were asked to...
GraduatewangjinHolt - Dec 8, 2017
|Criminology essay - in relation to cultural goals
2 - KR, for this particular prompt, you should consider looking into the way that cultural conflicts in the country have...
EssaysSun118Holt - Dec 8, 2017
|Much ado bout nothing essay
Essaysbozka4251bozka4251 - Dec 7, 2017
|LSE Msc Finance essay-I want to make an impact in the financial industry
5 - Hello everyone, I revised the essay on your advice. Below is my second draft, hope you can read it...
Graduateyxhzxpyxhzxp - Dec 7, 2017
|Personal Statement for MSc in Clinical Immunology in an university in the UK
6 - @Holt Mary, thank you very much for your insight. I am uploading it to Grammarly right now to correct...
Graduatetika89tika89 - Dec 7, 2017
|Personal Statement for UCL Masters Financial Risk Management - why this program and school?
4 - Dear all, thanks for the valuable feedbacks. I will amend my statement accordingly and i hope that i...
Graduatejtankxjtankx - Dec 7, 2017
|"My mom watched Power Puff girls with me" Statement of intent SVA - Computer ART
3 - @Holt Thank you Holt Your feedback is really helpful for my SOP!! I will try to read more sop...
Graduateannie6079annie6079 - Dec 7, 2017
|Shapeshifter - College essay about self love and realization of ones self
4 - From a person who is non religious (like the other colleges you are applying to), I think this is...
UndergraduateNathanEttaTheMistyMolly - Dec 7, 2017
|Internet is a convenient place for finding the information, provided it is used wisely.
3 - I agree with the person above , the discussion portion can be a little more elaborate. I see your...
Writing Feedbacksvirmanimichelle1234 - Dec 7, 2017
|AIM SMALL, MISS SMALL - NTU SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY (MY VALUES AND BELIEFS)
Scholarshipdunn4dunn4 - Dec 7, 2017
|Spread the positivity! - Global UGRAD program: Why would you be a great participant?
2 - Lutfia , I have to say that this essay is fun to read, informative, and hopeful. However, it does...
UndergraduateLutfianuriHolt - Dec 7, 2017
|Applying for Master program in Artificial Intelligence at CC University - Motivationletter
Scholarshipcool_Yucool_Yu - Dec 6, 2017
|Rainfall in Johannesburg and Cape Town from January to December//IELTS TASK 1
Writing Feedbacknewrakisbina - Dec 6, 2017
|Educated people are more valuable? Direct questions essay.
Writing FeedbackJimmy879873Jimmy879873 - Dec 6, 2017
|Recommendation Letter for Applying for Master in International Business Program
2 - Faiz, you should clarify that this person worked with you in two capacities, one are your educator, the other,...
ScholarshipFaiz AhadinaHolt - Dec 6, 2017
|We should help minority nations to keep their languages for the cultural diversity
6 - Hi Ernazar, I believe the reason that you failed in this essay is not about off-topic but rather, an...
Writing FeedbackernazaralakozJimmy879873 - Dec 5, 2017
|Important things in our life. Text for presentation.
2 - Jane, the opening presentation needs more work. It does not really make me care about what you have to...
SpeechesfuyufydtydtHolt - Dec 5, 2017
|PTSD Service dogs research paper. There are many ways that a dog can lend a helping hand..
2 - Donna, the information in the essay is highly interesting. However, the hook does not effectively entice the reader. The...
Research Papersdonna21Holt - Dec 5, 2017
|Tax reforms proposed by republicans. Three categories in which you feel my essay could be stronger
NEW - Why Tax Cuts Are Bad For The Middle Class Taxes are considered to be one of the certainties of...
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|Information in a specific sector should be shared freely or not
2 - bism, your essay does not follow the appropriate discussion instruction. You were asked to discuss both points of view...
Writing FeedbacksbinaHolt - Dec 4, 2017
|A situation of the government schools and their students
Writing FeedbackTanveer775giangchu210 - Dec 4, 2017
|Hoping to grow my knowledge and experience at UNCW, Admission Essay
4 - So I revised the essay quite a lot, hopefully, it describes my want and excitement to be at the...
UndergraduateChacobosChacobos - Dec 4, 2017
|It is needless to use libraries because everyone can get all information they need on the Internet
4 - Hi Trang, I would like to offer a paraphrasing of the original prompt for your reference. In our...
Writing FeedbackLonar213Jimmy879873 - Dec 4, 2017
|This prestigious university Texas A&M will put me in the best position possible to reach my goals
2 - Mario, the response that you gave is not really impressive nor complete. The first paragraph contains irrelevant information from...
Undergraduatealberto936Holt - Dec 4, 2017
|Flame The Patriotic Into Integrity Unity and Creativity
2 - Indah , there are a few points for further development in your essay in relation to the thesis statement....
Writing FeedbackindahmuthmainnahHolt - Dec 3, 2017
|5 different kinds of communication service which were used by people over 6 years
2 - @dotuananh2001, you forgot to include the image that your analytical essay is supposed to be based on. I cannot...
Writing Feedbackdotuananh2001Holt - Dec 3, 2017
|SOP. I aspire to take up a role within an organization where I can effectively utilize my skills
GraduateYashaHolt - Dec 3, 2017