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Writing Task 2 IELTS - conflicts about deciding subjects at university

2 - The validity of the personal opinion you present should be in the 3rd paragraph of the essay. It is...

Writing FeedbackTinhAnhNguyen - Jun 16, 2021Holt - 2 days ago
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 about impact of social media on both individuals and society.

2 - Keep track of your word count. Always present 250 words or accept the penalties for not presenting the minimum...

Writing FeedbackAli20 - Jun 16, 2021Holt - 2 days ago
The pie charts compare household expenditure spending on five different items in UK and New Zealand

2 - The summary overview is the presentation that gives you the opportunity to run down important information for the leader....

Writing Feedbackhanh_1 - Jun 16, 2021Holt - 2 days ago
Bullying at schools. How to have a good structure in cause-solution writing type?

2 - There are a few things you have to remember when creating your restatement: - Don't refer to a debate...

Writing FeedbackHolan1712 - Jun 16, 2021Holt - 2 days ago
Education is one of the most important aspects of life - GKS Undergraduate Personal Statement

3 - @Holt Ok thank you but can you tell me what mistakes did I make on my personal statement if...

Undergraduateaijia01 - Jun 15, 2021aijia01 - 2 days ago
Toefl Independent Writing - "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and working for own goals

3 - @Holt Thanks for the feedback....

Writing Feedbackackit - Jun 14, 2021ackit - 2 days ago
The major environmental issue of our time is the extinction of many living creatures on earth

3 - This does not contain a complete thought. You probably mean that there are other pressing environmental...

Writing Feedbacktrangntt255 - Jun 15, 2021niesaysi - Jun 16, 2021
Most people try to balance between work and other parts of theirs lives.

2 - Avoid using a cut and paste of the original prompt reference. This is not good for your LR...

Writing Feedbackkhanhthu292002 - Jun 15, 2021Holt - Jun 16, 2021
The graph depicts the percentage of four different materials recycled over the period of 28 years

2 - Incomplete image identifier. What type of graph? Review and memorize the differences. Your first trending sentence should...

Writing FeedbackNalanguyen - Jun 15, 2021Holt - Jun 16, 2021
Harder to study at school.

2 - [quote=YeuRosie19]I believe that some solutions can be carefully considered to tackle with it.[/quote] The first part of this sentence...

Writing FeedbackYeuRosie19 - Jun 15, 2021Holt - Jun 16, 2021
Writing #1: The graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010

2 - For clarity purposes, you must present the year coverage upfront. While the reference works as a time reference....

Writing Feedbackyiwenwen - Jun 15, 2021Holt - Jun 16, 2021
Children should be encouraged to play outdoors games that require physical activity?

3 - I try to focus in the first paragraph of your essay. (The) ... by the youngsters at...

Writing Feedbackphucnguyen0409 - Jun 14, 2021Ali20 - Jun 16, 2021
Scientists use living animal to carry our research. Some people think it is interesting.

2 - While the topic is controversial, the presented discussion, which asks for your opinion to be presented, leans more...

Scholarshipducklaconvit - Jun 15, 2021Holt - Jun 16, 2021
Focus on traditional classes more or practical subjects more?

NEW - Some people said that school should focus more on teaching practical subjects such as car maintenence or managing the...

Writing Feedbackphucnguyen0409 - Jun 15, 2021 -
Computers are believed to be smarter than humans by several scientists in no time

5 - You have an inaccuracy understanding the topic. Thus, i think you can change "On top of that" ==> "Moreover"...

Writing FeedbackVyvy201197 - Jun 11, 2021phucnguyen0409 - Jun 15, 2021
In many cities more and more people are living alone. Is this a positive or negative trend?

3 - There are some replacement needed: paraphrasing carefully about the question so you can have a better view and range...

Writing Feedbackcongbeo95 - Jun 14, 2021phucnguyen0409 - Jun 15, 2021
Task 1: Relationships at work with supervisors and companions (survey of workers 2005 and 2009)

2 - Relationships with whom? Refer to the groups in this section first then repeat later. This is...

Writing FeedbackSally_Dao - Jun 14, 2021Holt - Jun 15, 2021
Reasons why adults pursue education at their age and how their education costs should be allocated

2 - You missed the minimum word count by 4 words. The standard is 150 - 200 words, you wrote only...

Writing FeedbackLE THI QUYNH NHU - Jun 14, 2021Holt - Jun 15, 2021
The benefits of social skills and qualification skills to the company

2 - The phrase still refers to the original key phrase. LR scores are only increased by your alternate word...

Writing Feedbackthao van - Jun 14, 2021Holt - Jun 15, 2021
Popularity of fish and three kinds of meat including lamb, beef and chicken in a European country

2 - [ Make this sound more professional. You could say; "The line chart shows the comparative consumption..." to...

Writing FeedbackHarinn - Jun 14, 2021Holt - Jun 15, 2021
Learning about the past IELTS task 2

2 - There is no collosal issue being presented. Merely a difference of belieffs. You are trying to use a...

Writing FeedbackPaul16 - Jun 14, 2021Holt - Jun 15, 2021
A breakdown of male and female inhabitants passing the driving test in a particular Asian nation

2 - It would be better for your LR score ilt you use the phrase " in no particular Asian...

Writing Feedbackhuyenhoanglekhan - Jun 14, 2021Holt - Jun 15, 2021
Traditional newspapers are believed to hold the most vital position among news readers

3 - You just need to paraphrase the statement: Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers...

Writing Feedbackmorce183 - Jun 13, 2021niesaysi - Jun 14, 2021
Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? Any solutions?

5 - In this sentence, you have incorrectly restated the idea from the topic (Bullying is a big problem in...

Writing FeedbackMinh Hang Le - Jun 13, 2021niesaysi - Jun 14, 2021
WRITING TASK 1 : The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050

4 - "From 1950 to 2050" is different from "between 1950 and 2050." In other words, "between...and" and "from...to" should...

Writing Feedbackthanhtrang - Jun 10, 2021niesaysi - Jun 14, 2021
Some people argue job satisfaction is more important than job security.

3 - You should look over your essay because there are some basic mistakes like: "I tend towards the viewpoint...

Writing Feedbackmoe0 - Jun 12, 2021Paul16 - Jun 14, 2021
Many think that artificially intelligence robots will do all jobs eventually. Do you agree or not?

2 - This is an opinion essay. It is not an extent response writing task. Your answer is not in...

Writing Feedbacknam2662004 - Jun 13, 2021Holt - Jun 14, 2021
The budgets should be centered on illness prevention services by fostering a healthy lifestyle

2 - When you say"to a certain extent ", that indicates a limitation to your agreement. While saying " I...

Writing Feedbacknhinguyen2611 - Jun 13, 2021Holt - Jun 14, 2021
The bar chart compares the number of crimes in five different countries of the world (1930-1980)

2 - A properly analyzed task 1 essay must be completed within 20 minutes and between 175 - 200 words. Though...

Writing Feedbackreginaphalangee - Jun 13, 2021Holt - Jun 14, 2021
IELTS writing: the most common mistakes that students make when translating Vietnamese into English

2 - You should have included a clear reference to the fact that the info is based on collated opinion...

Writing Feedbackquynhhoang2k - Jun 12, 2021Holt - Jun 13, 2021