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4 - Your structure is good. On the other hand, you have made many grammar mistakes and I think you should...
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|It is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
4 - Chau, while your essay speaks of valid reasons for resting the mind during leisure time, it fails to take...
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|To what extent you agree with the idea that some teenagers lead an unhealthy lifestyle?
2 - Hello Liu! Hopefully my feedback is helpful for you. I've considered your points and read your essay as...
Writing FeedbackCaliabiCDuke93 - Jan 13, 2017
|Your course of life, your view of life, study background, your hope & wishes.
15 - Thanks Holt... It is if I applying to embassy. Since my plan is applying to university, I just...
Scholarshipdigaprasiskadigaprasiska - Jan 13, 2017
|You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house and forgot your coat containing some belongings
2 - Jaya, if you are going to make up information about the value of the coat, saying you left your...
Writing FeedbackjaikrishnaHolt - Jan 13, 2017
|Personal Statement - Management Science / Business Tech / Analytics program
4 - I am not sure about what else can be added in terms of the "Why school" part of the...
Graduatetz35Holt - Jan 13, 2017
|Aspects of Colorado College which attracted my attention. Why this College?
2 - Batjin, the essay that you developed is well thought out and really displays admirable reasons for wishing to attend...
Undergraduatel3atjinHolt - Jan 13, 2017
|Writing Task 2 opinion's people about internet using
4 - Hello, I found you list lots reasons to support one statement. I think it would be better if...
Writing FeedbackFiza26Arlen - Jan 13, 2017
|Besides the economy, there are many types of progress worth our attention as well.
4 - @ngokhoa99 Thanks for your correction and I have a question that whether to have an example in essay is...
Writing FeedbackArlenArlen - Jan 13, 2017
|Internet opinion from a common user
4 - Jaya, kindly provide the complete prompt instructions for our comparison with the essay that you wrote. It is important...
Writing FeedbackjaikrishnaHolt - Jan 13, 2017
|My university essay which delivers more info about me, my life, struggles and achievements
5 - Try to find something really special and unique about your background, that way it won't sound like ordinary essays....
UndergraduateAbdulZ1997l3atjin - Jan 13, 2017
|The cinema viewing vigures for all films, in millions
3 - hai @Diazalichsan i think you should explain bit about other genres like romance and comedy, instead of describing all...
Writing FeedbackDiazalichsanayuriska - Jan 13, 2017
|What really impressed me is that TEDxZYZ is really influential. Extra activities essay.
4 - Jiang, the problem with the essay is that is focuses on the organization and how it works rather on...
UndergraduateBennyooooHolt - Jan 13, 2017
|My essay for applying for Gender studies MA offered by Centeral European University.
9 - Alireza, you should have posted this essay in the other thread since this is a continued conversation of this...
GraduatealiDCHolt - Jan 13, 2017
|USC Supplemental: A time my beliefs were challenged
3 - @masonn8 So you just told us a story of you, but you don't have your conclusion. What do you...
Undergraduatemasonn8Bennyoooo - Jan 13, 2017
|Ielts writing TASK 2 - Sports professionals don't deserve such high salaries for their work
3 - hai george, well in my opinion sportmen duty is to not just entertain citizens, but also become a figure...
Writing Feedbackkrempetkovayuriska - Jan 13, 2017
|Uni Admission Essay - I am more than just my grades
3 - Wow, you seem very well rounded and all of these awards are really impressive. I don't think your essay...
UndergraduateHSYmasonn8 - Jan 13, 2017
|Robotics and software engineering really take my interest. USC supplement essay
5 - I'm also working on the USC essays and I had a few suggestions. Admissions knows what classes you need...
UndergraduateBennyoooomasonn8 - Jan 13, 2017
|Describe an experience from my life that demonstrates my character or helped shaped it
2 - Charlene, congratulations on overcoming such a huge educational obstacle. Your story is truly inspirational and I can understand how...
UndergraduatecharadeHolt - Jan 12, 2017
|Your essay should answer the following questions: What makes you a perfect candidate for FIT?
2 - Leana, it would be best if you complete the prompt requirement that was given to you for the development...
UndergraduateLeavalerHolt - Jan 12, 2017
|Motivation letter on Urban Studies - My dream scholarship
2 - Bunheng, you have to remove the aspects of this letter that are better presented as part of your statement...
ScholarshipBunhengHolt - Jan 12, 2017
|Briefly discuss a current global issue indicating why you consider it important and what you suggest
3 - Nima, please provide us with the complete prompt for your essay. It got cut off because you tried to...
UndergraduateCrewHolt - Jan 12, 2017
|Tell us more why you intent to finish the Computer Engineering Program?
2 - Nate, when you develop your reason for pursuing this academic program, make sure to relate it to a particular...
Undergraduatenhenderson98Holt - Jan 12, 2017
|Help me to decide the content, length, structures of the scholarship essay below.
6 - Nanda, I know that you follow current events and are proud to mention these in your essays because you...
EssaysnandasharmaHolt - Jan 12, 2017
|The field of Applied Physics with specialization on Plasma Physics. STUDY PLAN for Scholarship
2 - Fauziah, when you write a study plan for your masters degree, you must present a thorough discussion of your...
ScholarshiprahmifzhHolt - Jan 12, 2017
|The brain chemistry. USC Supplemental Essay: How will you pursue your academic interests
5 - @Holt I really appreciate your feedback. Can't tell you how much it helps!...
Undergraduatemasonn8masonn8 - Jan 12, 2017
|Bucknell University Scholarship for Creative Writing - Ray Bucknell!
9 - After searching through tons of Bucknellian archives and Linkedin pages, I found references to Fire & Ice dating from...
Scholarshipgaribarigaribari - Jan 12, 2017
|The features of nursing profession. NURSING PROGRAM ADMISSION ESSAY
7 - Excellent work Chloe, I strongly suggest that you use this version of the essay for your application. It is...
UndergraduateclrHolt - Jan 12, 2017
|Essay about motivation letter for German's university scholarship. How to make aroused letter?
3 - Dewa, in terms of presentation, your letter is confused. You have accidentally mixed the content of a letter of...
Research PapersdewakresnaHolt - Jan 12, 2017
|Creationism over Evolutionism
3 - I am not a moderator or an experienced essay writer, so take my opinion with a grain of salt....
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