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NTU Scholarship essay - event that have personal importance. The National Service

2 - It would be better if you presented the experience through a transitional phase outlook on your life. By that,...

Scholarshippongjingyang - Feb 14, 2020Holt - Feb 15, 2020
Review my Motivation Letter for Erasmus Mundus Master's In Biomedical Imaging

2 - The letter has committed a major crime. You must never use all caps and parenthesis in your presentation. In...

Lettersdpk111092 - Feb 14, 2020Holt - Feb 15, 2020
Kindly Review my Personal Statement for a Masters in Cybersecurity at Sheffield Hallam Uni

4 - Oh, thank you for your insightful response. The application only requested for a minimum of a 100 words....

Graduatestartupng - Feb 12, 2020startupng - Feb 14, 2020
UWaterloo AIF Help (Computer Science and Data Science) - reasons of your program choice

4 - Hi. I think you need to be more specific about what sparked your interest in CS and Data Science....

UndergraduateAcedia1001 - Feb 10, 2020Ulaai - Feb 14, 2020
Study plan for scholarship undergraduate Program. Business Administration majors

3 - Hi there! It's great to find someone who's applying for the same scholarship as I am. I hope I'll...

ScholarshipRifqi_ismail - Feb 13, 2020alyssa2036 - Feb 14, 2020
Ielts Task 1: Gross Domestic Product including IT and Service industries in the UK from 1992 to 2000

4 - @Holt: Thank you so much for your valuable feedback. I am working on it, that's exactly what I am...

Writing FeedbackNguyet Tran - Feb 13, 2020Nguyet Tran - Feb 14, 2020
Study Plan - applying for a Canadian study permit - letter of explanation

3 - @Holt Thanks for your response. When I wrote this study plan, I followed what instructed by my school:...

LettersV184ht - Feb 14, 2020V184ht - Feb 14, 2020
English teacher and determination -PTDF UK scholarship: scholarship with this statement of purpose.

3 - @Holt Thank you very much sir. Will redraft the essay, per your suggestions, and post again....

ScholarshipNayaya - Feb 13, 2020Nayaya - Feb 14, 2020
IELTS TASK2 About Spending money on construction of new transportation or improving old systems

3 - Let's start with your introduction.It is ok. You didn't paraphrase the question right. Grammatical errors -"Needless to say, it...

Writing FeedbackRaeeeee - Feb 13, 2020GATE - Feb 14, 2020
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] The purpose of a university degree

3 - This is a three point of view discussion paper. You did not address the discussion in that manner. You...

Writing Feedbackhien082nguyen - Feb 13, 2020Holt - Feb 14, 2020
What is your main reason to study media and communication? Bachelor Degree

2 - Okay, The first paragraph is a throw away. That means, all it is doing is taking up space in...

Undergraduatehatdenhoxxx - Feb 13, 2020Holt - Feb 14, 2020
How you can apply the knowledge and experience gained from your study time in Sweden?

3 - @Holt Thanks so much. I will revise it right away, but the difficulty is cutting it down to one...

Scholarshipeyes - Feb 13, 2020eyes - Feb 14, 2020
Any idea on how to go by this Sweden Scholarship Essay?

5 - @anantatk Thanks so much for the guide. I will start putting something together right away. Appreciated....

Essaysjessek - Feb 11, 2020jessek - Feb 13, 2020
Review my SOP for my application to German university in Computational Engineering.

3 - @Holt Thank you for reviewing my essay and your suggestions. Will make necessary changes....

Graduatesankeerthgn - Feb 13, 2020sankeerthgn - Feb 13, 2020
[IELTS TASK 2] About success: Some people are born with talents, however some are taught

5 - You should not add your personal feelings (Example: I greatly admire Messi) in your essays. Try to avoid informal...

Writing Feedbackdienrol - Feb 13, 2020lildaisy - Feb 13, 2020
Essay "Chronic Traumatic Encephalopathy and the Improved Safety in Football"

2 - Regarding the way that you wrote the essay, it is important that you focus the information on a singular...

Research Papersste2131604 - Feb 13, 2020Holt - Feb 13, 2020
Global Scholarship under Lund University Masters in International Development and Management

2 - Without the prompt requirement for this essay, I am unable to provide a comprehensive review of the content and...

Scholarshipayasmin - Feb 13, 2020Holt - Feb 13, 2020
"Why you should drink wine daily" a proposal essay.

2 - The proposal should offer an idea into how the topic will be discussed. This should be a compare and...

Writing FeedbackSjames6 - Feb 12, 2020Holt - Feb 13, 2020
IELTS TASK 2: THE BEST WAY TO TEACH TEENAGERS ABOUT THE DANGER OF CRIME IS EX-PRISONERS

NEW - In recent years, imparting teenagers about the consequences of crime is necessary. Some people consider that ex-prisoners are an...

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Ielts task 2. In recent years, people are likely to live alone instead of starting a family

5 - You should replace affect=impact And positive= benefits Negative=drawbacks...

Writing FeedbackMai Nhu Y - Feb 8, 2020corn - Feb 12, 2020
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] Pros & Cons Technology affects Social relationship

7 - I think it is better for you to use at the opposite end of the spectrum rather than nevetheless...

Writing FeedbackKieric - Feb 9, 2020corn - Feb 12, 2020
School, Education, Society - [IELTS Writing task 2]

4 - @holt @ttxnam Thank you so much for your feedback....

Writing Feedbacklinhcong - Feb 12, 2020linhcong - Feb 12, 2020
It's hard to define happiness - why? The intrinsic and extrinsic factors

3 - I really appreciate the time and effort you put into assessing this essay. I have noticed the teachers have...

Writing FeedbackHeiden - Feb 12, 2020Heiden - Feb 12, 2020
Magical Tool - [IELTS ACADEMIC-WRITING TASK 2] MUSIC'S EXTRAORDINARY ABILITIES

3 - Good work. This type of writing could very well land you within the 6 band score based on the...

Writing FeedbackNgoc98 - Feb 12, 2020Holt - Feb 12, 2020
Reducing traffic accidents by penalizing drivers? [IELTS WRITING TASK 2]

5 - It's reasonably good. But the way to improve road quality should be more specific in paragraph 3. And in...

Writing Feedbackthingoc - Feb 12, 2020shinxg - Feb 12, 2020
Student behave badly these days. Why occurs? Give solutions

3 - Since you did not provide information as to whether this essay was written as an exercise for a specific...

Writing Feedbackhtnanh2310 - Feb 12, 2020Holt - Feb 12, 2020
[IETLS ACADEMIC - WRITING TASK 2] MOBILE PHONE - ANTISOCIAL INVENTION?

4 - OMG Thanks for your comments they're really helpful to me. I think I know what I have to do...

Writing Feedbacktranggnh - Feb 12, 2020tranggnh - Feb 12, 2020
Different views about the amount of money paid to top sportspeople.

5 - Actually, I'm in favour of the perspective that athletes deserve the money they earn because their occupation demands many...

Writing Feedbackparviz - Feb 10, 2020htnanh2310 - Feb 12, 2020
Help with my Waterloo AIF! (Comp. Sci / Math [Data Science])

3 - There are two keywords in this essay that will weaken your consideration for a student slot. The words are...

Undergraduateheet - Feb 11, 2020Holt - Feb 12, 2020
Middle school teacher - The most memorable person in your life

3 - The introductory sentence is missing the subject "person" as indicated in the title of the statement. The sentence does...

Undergraduatephu nhuyen - Feb 11, 2020Holt - Feb 11, 2020