|Chevening scholarship essay on Leadership and Influence: Managing a team at workplace
3 - @pionpt Thank you so much for your response. I will omit those two sentences and rewrite the the...
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|Study in the UK - Essay Chevening Scholarship How these programs will empower me in my career
2 - Hi @yiselgarza, I'm applying for Chevening as well and hope you will find my comment helpful. Firstly, your...
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|Personal Statement: M.Eng Aerospace Engineering (McGill Mastercard Foundation)
Graduatedrae_whiz - Oct 27, 2019drae_whiz - Oct 30, 2019
|Chevening Networking Essay: How Your Network Can Influence Your Balance Sheet
2 - Good day kaybee. You are making your essay sound like a curriculum vitae. You should select one or just...
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|NAME AND IDENTITY - COMMONAPP 650 words or less
4 - @nochaelle04 I actually think that it should be a larger portion of your essay- you could dive into...
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|Leadership Essay: The Silent Trials and Burdens of Being a Leader Today
2 - @Freshguy Hello! Welcome to the forum. Hopefully, this feedback will enlighten you with your writing endeavors. If you have...
ScholarshipFreshguy - Oct 27, 2019Maria - Oct 29, 2019
|Produces of goods should be responsible for plastic products
Writing Feedbackthaitran07 - Oct 27, 2019thaitran07 - Oct 28, 2019
|Leadership and Influence in urban planning - Making decisions as a leader.
2 - Hello Loreany, to get right into it you can shorten your introductory paragraph as it doesn't add substrate to...
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|Networking in Professional Environment - Risk Management
4 - You successfully achieved The task, however your sentence structure need to be tighter. You need to show your excellent...
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|"University-hood" - Leadership & Influence Essay for Chevening
2 - First off, the question requires that you recount your experiences as a leader and your specific experiences Of influence...
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 PEOPLE NOWADAYS TEND TO TAKE THEIR FAMILY TO ANOTHER COUNTRY
5 - @Maria Thank you very much! I have learnt a lot from your recommendations. If there are any grammatical mistakes...
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|Ministry of Foreign affairs - Chevening post career plan
NEW - POST CAREER PLAN The absence of peace in all regions of my country has influenced my decision to...
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|IELTS The table depicts the average distance in miles traveled by mode of travel per person per year
2 - 1. mode->modes 2. I think you shuold use the past tense, like the "while the least ... people were...
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|Leadership & Influence - Respect every ideas and connect the team for the goal.
3 - @Praise Aninyei Thank you so mych Aninyei for the suggestion. Your comment helps me a lot. Have a...
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|'Leading crew to achieve reasonable results' - Leadership essay for Chevening
3 - @Freshguy Thank you for your comment. you right! but, I heard too much, that Chevening board focusing on political...
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: HOW TO SPEND LEISURE TIME IN THE MOST BENEFICIAL WAY?
2 - Hi, In my opinion, your content is great and well-structured. However, I notice that there are two grammatical mistakes...
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|Improving China - Chevening Essay: Leadership and influence
4 - @Haisy Hello there. Thanks for reaching out to the site. You're more than welcome here to join us in...
ScholarshipHaisy - Oct 23, 2019Maria - Oct 26, 2019
|Changes in the share of vehicle registrations of the three most common types of commercial vehicles
Writing Feedbackuyen1092 - Oct 20, 2019Quizzy - Oct 26, 2019
|My favourite Vietnamese dish - broken rice
3 - @Linyu12 I don't know which level/stage/grade you are writing this essay for but I find it too scanty and...
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|IELTS Writing Task 2 Correction about sharing information in the public
4 - @satan123 On the one hand starting a paragraph like this doesn't right. you can do without that phrase. all...
Writing Feedbacksatan123 - Oct 22, 2019Quizzy - Oct 26, 2019
|Chevening choice of course - Conflict and Security
2 - @Tobechukwu Hello! Thanks for your consistent contributions to the site. This is my feedback for this essay of yours....
ScholarshipTobechukwu - Oct 26, 2019Maria - Oct 26, 2019
|Motivation Letter for MSc Human Computer Interaction in Universität Siegen (3 years of experience)
2 - @ayunovianti Hi there! It's good to see you here. Hopefully, my feedback will be a positive contribution to the...
Graduateayunovianti - Oct 26, 2019Maria - Oct 26, 2019
|Character Analysis and Development of Montag in "Fahrenheit 451"
2 - @rachelmaddiee Hi there. Thanks for coming back to the site. Hopefully, this essay will help. I'll do my best...
Book Reportsrachelmaddiee - Oct 25, 2019Maria - Oct 26, 2019
|The graph below demonstrates the statistics of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007
3 - 1. since there are only two groups comparing, you should not use the word "all", which means you are...
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|Statement of Purpose for MSc Health Economics and Decision Science
2 - @violet2 Welcome to the forum! Hopefully, this feedback will help you in your writing endeavors. If it does, please...
Graduateviolet2 - Oct 24, 2019Maria - Oct 26, 2019
|"Evident talent" - Reference letter to Chevening
3 - @Maria Thank you for your feedback. I will amend the letter and rewrite it again and resend it...
Lettersreemanoaman - Oct 24, 2019reemanoaman - Oct 26, 2019
|Statistics (Data Science) - Personal Statement
2 - @oxford123 Hello there! Welcome to the forum. Hopefully, this feedback will be helpful for your writing endeavors. If it...
Graduateoxford123 - Oct 24, 2019Maria - Oct 26, 2019
|The charts of the domestic energy use in six different activities and the greenhouse gas emission
2 - I think your first two paragraphs are well-organized. But in the third paragraph, you express the statistics in a...
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|Things that caught my interests in Purdue - in one hundred words or less
Undergraduateomostic21 - Oct 22, 2019omostic21 - Oct 26, 2019
|Consistency and steady approach; Leadership and influence essay, Chevening Scholarship
3 - Actually your explanation about leadership in the first paragraph is interesting, but I believe you could make it better....
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