|Recently many film and music pieces are given online for free. Is it a positive trend?
Writing Feedbacknaz2018sfiza - Apr 22, 2018
|The line graph illustrates the number of the youngsters in Australia who ate Fast Food (1975-2000)
Writing Feedbackmike290394sfiza - Apr 22, 2018
|An ongoing discussion whether boys and girls get benefits more at mixed or single-gender schools
3 - Hi, Fiza. I think you should refer model writing IELTS task 2 essay band 7- 9 to understand more...
Writing Feedbacksfizaphuonguyen479 - Apr 22, 2018
|Essay about the ten top rice- producing countries in 1999 Writing IELTS task1
5 - Thank you. if I supplement my essay may you continue correcting my other fault, please. The bar graph...
Writing Feedbackphuonguyen479phuonguyen479 - Apr 22, 2018
|I need to convience VO that I will return back to my country. SOP
3 - I am not a graduate student, I am enrolling myself in an undergrad program in Actuarial Science. I currently...
Undergraduatesaira_aamirsaira_aamir - Apr 22, 2018
|Metal price prediction - Abstract review
2 - ... equation for the mining industry. ... cost remains the same... ... the ability of two times series predicting...
Writing Feedbackhuangjiaqi12phuonguyen479 - Apr 22, 2018
|Your thoughts on my common app essay about my life
2 - Mohamed, this is not a character building story. You are trying to impress the reviewer but in the process,...
UndergraduateabominablebrideHolt - Apr 22, 2018
|"Why did the US intervene in Somalia in 1992?" Need Help with MLA Citations
2 - You need to follow the rules for electronically sourced information in this instance. There is a specific format for...
Grammar, UsagermuellerHolt - Apr 22, 2018
|AAS Supporting Statement, Why Master of Sustainable Energy? Solutions for global energy challenges
3 - Firno, your reference to the reason why you chose this course is too vague. You cannot have a generalized...
ScholarshipfirnoHolt - Apr 22, 2018
|My Statement of Purpose for Graduate Studies (MS in Computer Sciences)
3 - Haleema, you wrote a personal statement which does not have the same function as a statement of purpose. The...
GraduatehaleemasadiqHolt - Apr 22, 2018
|Ielts - CULTURE AND CHARACTER FROM THE CHOICE OF CLOTHES?
2 - Maryam, you have confused a simple single opinion essay discussion with an extent essay. The instruction question is simple,...
Writing Feedbackmaryam syedHolt - Apr 22, 2018
|Is it possible to say a lot about person's culture and character from his/her choice of clothes?
3 - Zainab, you did not understand the task requirement. This is not an emotional extent essay. Rather, this is a...
Writing FeedbackZainab110Holt - Apr 22, 2018
|Teachers Being Armed in School
3 - @eliassasha98 I agree with the previous poster that you should perhaps offer a counterpoint in favor of teachers carrying...
Research Paperseliassasha98rmueller - Apr 21, 2018
|CBEST. Television encourage or discourage learning - or does it do both depends on circumstances?
Writing FeedbackAid1Aid1 - Apr 21, 2018
|The charts compare, in percentage terms, five expenditures in a specific British school
2 - .... were the main schooling expense expense of the school in three.... ... with the number numbers of...
Writing FeedbackGiangNguyenhaleemasadiq - Apr 21, 2018
|Building a large shopping centre in the neighborhood. My vote pro or against.
2 - Shela, there are two mistakes contained in this otherwise acceptably presented opinion essay. The first mistake is that your...
Writing Feedbackxierablind02Holt - Apr 20, 2018
|Technology and traditional values coexistence
3 - Personally, i think your essay is really quite good. However, i think you just need to repeat your opinion...
Writing FeedbackLong NguyenAmber98 - Apr 20, 2018
|Newspaper source (paper or website) - Ielts essay- writing task 2:
3 - thanks for your advice so much. this is my first essay because i have just started studying writing. actually,...
Writing FeedbackAmber98Amber98 - Apr 20, 2018
|A big chunk of people's earnings goes to purchasing material things
5 - Thank you so much for your feedback. I am trying to improve with each practice everyday before the actual...
Writing Feedbackjommiejrjommiejr - Apr 20, 2018
|Masters of Science in Accounting, Admission Essay - Becoming a CPA
2 - Patel, the information you have included here belongs in the statement of purpose, not a personal statement. You have...
Graduatepatel1067Holt - Apr 20, 2018
|My goal to become an e-business transformation consultant - IELTS PRIZE personal statement
3 - Thanks @Holt! I think the work experience is important because it made me confirmed my goal, but maybe...
Scholarshipenjoy543enjoy543 - Apr 20, 2018
|TOEFL. There's a question whether a trip should be taken with the company of a tour guide...
2 - Tess, always stick to the timed practice tests. If you fail to write an essay within the allotted time...
Writing FeedbacktaokyuhyunHolt - Apr 19, 2018
|Opening Paragraphs for Personal Statement About Interest in Medicine - which is the most promising?
3 - Lin, none of your personal statement opening paragraphs are usable for one reason, they all refer to your "childhood...
Graduatepurplesk8er7Holt - Apr 19, 2018
|Movies and television have more positive impact on young people than the negative - TOEFL
2 - Tianyi, you do not need to focus so much on your word usage because you have clearly understandable representations...
Writing FeedbackAsphodelHolt - Apr 19, 2018
|IELTS Academic Discussion Essay - Spending money on improving existing public trasport
3 - Nidaa, unfortunately, I cannot grade your work because you did not provide the complete prompt for my reference in...
Writing Feedbacknidaa91Holt - Apr 19, 2018
|Why the University of Sidney became my first choice? (AAS Suporting Statemnet)
4 - Kiki, you have to be more specific about the reasons you have chosen to pursue masters studies in TESOL...
ScholarshipKikyo_14Holt - Apr 19, 2018
|Information about AAS from Australian university websites and from attending educational exhibitions
2 - @yeniuyun Do not term your introduction to the AAS as coming from a "talk show" on campus.; That implies...
ScholarshipyeniuyunHolt - Apr 19, 2018
|Energy usage in Australia and house gas emissions. IELTS Writing Task 1 - IELTS 10 Test 1
4 - Daofan, the first thing you have to remember is that the opening paraphrase contains a specific number of sentences...
Writing FeedbackdophanHolt - Apr 19, 2018
|Scholarship application - Master of Social Work in Queensland University matches my passion
ScholarshipIvonsestiaIvonsestia - Apr 19, 2018
|My proposed study will help me to understand people better. Positive for my career and for Indonesia
4 - Thank you @abdo65619 and @holt. Your feedback gave me some insight and it means a lot.. and I have...
ScholarshipIvonsestiaIvonsestia - Apr 19, 2018