|Task1: The number of hours spent in British University
2 - In the summary overview, you should have indicated 2 things: 1. The measurement was done in percentages. 2. The...
Writing Feedbackclara2608 - Jul 31, 2020Holt - Aug 1, 2020
|IELTS T1 The charts below show the banana export in 1993 and 2003, the pie chart reports costs
3 - The main problem of your essay is not the content. You did well in the reporting aspect. The problem...
Writing FeedbackDolly Doloris - Jul 31, 2020Holt - Aug 1, 2020
|TASK 1:The graph illustrates the number of Chinese, Japanese and Indian students who enrolled ...
3 - I find this "the period in question" somewhat confusing. You might change it as "the same period", or the...
Writing Feedbackdinhquynhmai - Jul 30, 2020hyperephania - Aug 1, 2020
|We are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose
4 - You essay, I believe, lacks words to meet the word limit requirement. Try adding one more counterargument paragraph before...
Writing Feedbackbobi1102 - Jul 30, 2020hyperephania - Aug 1, 2020
|IELTS 2 - humans should not exploit animals - it is morally wrong and it harms animals
3 - I think your essay exceeded the word limit for an IELTS Writing Task 2. Try leaving out the two...
Writing Feedbackchaugiang - Jul 31, 2020hyperephania - Aug 1, 2020
|IETLS Task 1 - The graph includes the proportion of households owned and rented in England and Wales
4 - I believe you have wrongly used the tense, which should have been past simple instead of present simple....
Writing Feedbacktom726 - Jul 29, 2020hyperephania - Aug 1, 2020
|Nowadays, many high school graduates opt for a gap year instead of continuing higher education
5 - thank you guys so much for spending time reading and giving feedback to my essay. I really appreciate all...
Writing Feedbacklinhngan118 - Jul 30, 2020linhngan118 - Jul 31, 2020
|The number of a country's exports in a different categories and changes in each type of exports
2 - Try to write at least 175 words for the data reporting presentation. 151 words meets the minimum word requirement...
Writing Feedbackjimzz - Jul 30, 2020Holt - Jul 31, 2020
|WRITING TASK 2: ADVERTISING IS SUCCESSFUL OR NOT?
2 - You did very good work on this essay. You properly discussed both points of view with clear explanations and...
Writing Feedbackmonica0407 - Jul 30, 2020Holt - Jul 31, 2020
|Adverts all around us. Opinion on whether advertising is positive to our lives.
3 - @Holt First, I want to thank you so much for giving me assesment on my essay. Second, I'm still...
Writing Feedbackbdmqnh - Jul 29, 2020bdmqnh - Jul 30, 2020
|IELTS Writing Task 1 (The production and consumption of electricity for ten countries in 2014.)
2 - You should try to present a consolidated report of the bar chart. This would lead to a shorter and...
Writing Feedbackyiz888 - Jul 30, 2020Holt - Jul 30, 2020
|Students education with a vast combination of subjects, or specialization on one subject with depth
2 - You have written 402 words but only 126 words are actually applicable to the prompt discussion. These relevant discussion...
Writing FeedbackLinearSona - Jul 30, 2020Holt - Jul 30, 2020
|IELTS task 2:Wearing diferent clothes is a positive or negative developement
2 - Overall Band Scoring is reserved for our private consultation and URGENT services. You may contact us via our email...
Writing Feedbackthuthao283 - Jul 30, 2020Holt - Jul 30, 2020
|Many people believe that teacher should not give students tasks to do at home, others disagree
Writing Feedbackpongl0504 - Jul 29, 2020pongl0504 - Jul 30, 2020
|IELTS task 2:Traditional cultures will be lost as technology develop.Do you agree or disagree
2 - Sadly, I cannot give your request to score you on each criterion and deliver an overall band score. Those...
Writing Feedbackjohnnguyenpham - Jul 30, 2020Holt - Jul 30, 2020
|TOEFL: it has become an issue of whether advertisements make products seem more appealing or not.
2 - Your reasoning paragraph and closing statement are good. However, in the opening statement, you actually said that you prefer...
Writing FeedbackLavender0723 - Jul 29, 2020Holt - Jul 30, 2020
|Despite improvements in vehicle technology, there are still large numbers of road accidents.
3 - There is a 5 sentence maximum, 3 sentence minimum, for all paragraphs. Your first reasoning paragraph is over this...
Writing Feedbacksarinburritos34 - Jul 29, 2020Holt - Jul 30, 2020
|IELTS T2 View on shopping becoming a hobby instead of a routine domestic task
4 - I believe that your discussion is in error. You discussed the act of creating goods for shopping and its...
Writing Feedbackliz012 - Jul 29, 2020Holt - Jul 30, 2020
|Task 2 - Youngsters spend less of their free time with their family nowadays. What are the reasons?
Writing Feedbacksarinburritos34 - Jul 27, 2020Huong22082001 - Jul 30, 2020
|It has become an issue of whether it is more beneficial to travel in our own country or not
7 - Your essay is good, but it is too long and the explanations is not clearly in the second reason....
Writing Feedbackradish327 - Jul 28, 2020Huong22082001 - Jul 30, 2020
|Nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything online
Writing Feedbacklivetostudy123 - Jul 28, 2020Holt - Jul 29, 2020
|The Lion King - my favorite movie (computer-animated American musical drama)
Writing FeedbackHuong22082001 - Jul 28, 2020Huong22082001 - Jul 29, 2020
|Everything has two sides to it, and no except to cycling. Let's consider its pros and cons.
Writing Feedbackbngoc28 - Jul 27, 2020bngoc28 - Jul 29, 2020
|Computers are considered as the most vital intention of the last decade
Writing Feedbackandynguyen96 - Jul 28, 2020andynguyen96 - Jul 28, 2020
|Many people believe, that authorities are unnecessarily investing money on the arts
3 - 1/ your essay have a range of vocabularies but the word "redefine" means " give sth a new meaning",...
Writing FeedbackMindfulIELTS - Jul 28, 2020monica0407 - Jul 28, 2020
|Spending a lot of time at work - positive or negative?
Writing Feedbackbdmqnh - Jul 28, 2020bdmqnh - Jul 28, 2020
|The students need to decide whether they want to choose the social science group or a science group
3 - Even though you wrote 328 words, your essay still failed to fully address the prompt requirements. Being a 5...
Writing FeedbackAngel Yang - Jul 28, 2020Holt - Jul 28, 2020
|The graph below shows the population for India and China since the year 2000 and predicts population
2 - The summary overview is incomplete. You need to include the source of the information as indicated in the image....
Writing Feedbackchems - Jul 28, 2020Holt - Jul 28, 2020
|Survey about people's consumption behavior of purchasing coffee and tea in several Australian cities
3 - You would have failed this test because you wrote too many words. The Task 1 essay only uses 150-190...
Writing Feedbackfaizunaa - Jul 28, 2020Holt - Jul 28, 2020
|Classification of schooling subjects has always cast doubt on numerous educators
2 - Your overall essay does not properly respond to the prompt requirement which is: Subjects such as Art, Sport...
Writing FeedbackMindfulIELTS - Jul 28, 2020Holt - Jul 28, 2020