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The quantities of goods moved using four kinds of means in the UK between 1974 and 2002

5 - dear @Abrahamlincoln, A few corrections from me.. Watch the grammar. In paragraph 1, The line graphs compare...

Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincolnnuradiapuspa - Feb 22, 2017
Minimizing the traffic issue - proposed ways

7 - As mentioned, your introduction paraphrase should give your opinion for agree or disagree questionnaire. 2 or 3 rd...

Writing Feedbacknuradiapuspajaikrishna - Feb 22, 2017
The bar chart indicates the figure of time spent in billions of minutes by UK people on phone calls

9 - Hai @Maitouyen282 These are few corrections from me. Hope it could be helpful :) 1. In paragraph...

Writing FeedbackMaitouyen282nuradiapuspa - Feb 22, 2017
Define the highlights of your most crucial accomplishments or tasks inputs.

4 - As I mentioned in my previous response, your contribution should be something that has a personal meaning to you....

UndergraduateTrouvaille 05Holt - Feb 22, 2017
Marriage in early adulthood

3 - @Holt Thank for your advice. It took me two hours to think about main ideas for this essay. I...

Writing Feedbackthichankemthichankem - Feb 22, 2017
Emerging care system market for the elderly in Taiwan. SOP for Actuarial Science in the USA

3 - OK, I see. I will try it. thanks for your suggestion.[/b][/b]...

Graduaterobin963arobin963a - Feb 22, 2017
Civil service in Korea. KGSP Self Introduction Content

20 - This is a good paragraph. It has a sneak peek into how you developed your point of view about...

EssaysgckiHolt - Feb 22, 2017
This great impact of DNA for human being. SOP - Stuck in the Study Plan for KGSP Scholarship

7 - @Holt May I ask a question regarding study plan here? I will delete this if it wasn't allow. ...

ScholarshipCCA92Nitivat - Feb 22, 2017
Artificial environments. Positive and negative sides of zoos

4 - Hi @adamrahimov Don't you think you need to switch the opinion paragraphs? It will flow better (even though it...

Writing Feedbackadamrahimovd2ny - Feb 22, 2017
[REFERENCES LETTER] She has demonstrated an exceptional ability to grasp the rigorous demands of job

7 - Sehat, keep the continued balance in your referral letters. Always present one professional and one extra curricular / socio-civic...

Writing FeedbacksehatdinatiHolt - Feb 22, 2017
Personal statement; I am applying to Pharmaceutical Analysis and QC one-year masters course

7 - Hanady, it would be best if you write a totally new essay instead. One that is better slanted towards...

ScholarshiphanadyzHolt - Feb 22, 2017
My idea is about making SAMSUNG the only leading company in Africa

10 - If you will just change the way that you wrote the word Samsung from all upper case to first...

Scholarshipdawit359Holt - Feb 21, 2017
Korean dramas and K-pop - letter of self introduction...KGSP scholarship

7 - @Holt like you guessed I still don't have any work experience nor internship. I also think lack of professional...

Scholarshipcj24cj24 - Feb 21, 2017
Waterloo "reasons for choosing" essay - two portions answer

10 - Thanks a lot for your patience with me :D Writing isn't really my strong suit but I try to...

UndergraduateEiad21Eiad21 - Feb 21, 2017
This is an essay for admission to an American university for masters in construction management.

29 - Like I said, this essay is good enough to submit. You have done your best to represent your intentions...

Graduateratan251294Holt - Feb 21, 2017
I have a dominant character with good personality. CHEVENING ESSAY LEADERSHIP AND INFLUENCE QUESTION

6 - @BeautifulDay Dear Kenneth, please give me a significant input. The title even doesnt matter in Chevening, because we...

Scholarshipsehatdinatisehatdinati - Feb 21, 2017
'all my sacrifices lead to a reward' - KGSP Graduate scholarship / Letter of self introduction

3 - @Holt Thank you so much! I'll do the changes you suggested me! I just have one question that I...

Scholarshipmolgumolgu - Feb 21, 2017
500 WORD ESSAY EXPLAINING WHY YOU WANT TO STUDY IN FRANCE!

6 - You have to remove your fixation about the studies that you did in Canada. This is the constant issue...

ScholarshipadventureabroadHolt - Feb 21, 2017
task2; The pros and cons of living longer for human being

4 - Hi Jing, I will admit that this is one of the better developed essays that I have come across...

Writing FeedbackAllen1988Holt - Feb 21, 2017
Statement of purpose for Master's course in English Linguistics/ English Literatures and Cultures

3 - I am very grateful to you for your priceless advice. I will definitely follow it. Thank you...

Graduatealinakarimova714alinakarimova714 - Feb 20, 2017
Reading has become less significant to Americans.

7 - @akbarmappiare Thank you so much for your feedback. Can you give some suggestions regarding smooth transition from one paragraph...

Writing FeedbackPKMPKM - Feb 20, 2017
After finishing my postgraduate, I plan to go back to my current company - CHEVENING CAREER PLAN

3 - @Holt Dear Mary, I think so. I didnt do enough research to catch up what Chevening has...

Scholarshipsehatdinatisehatdinati - Feb 20, 2017
CHEVENING ESSAY NETWORKING QUESTION: One of my most prominent character is extrovert

3 - @Holt Dear Mary, Thank you for your comment. I'll revise it soon, and send it here....

Scholarshipsehatdinatisehatdinati - Feb 20, 2017
This figure illustrates some new construction in the town of Garlsdon

4 - @MH_tw Dear Deng, other than you miss many information from the figure, your words is only 146 though....

Writing FeedbackMH_twsehatdinati - Feb 20, 2017
You took your family to a nearby restaurant. Disappointed with the meal and complain to manager

4 - @jaikrishna Dear Jaya, let me give some inputs, more less about the "writing." My name is Jaya...

Lettersjaikrishnasehatdinati - Feb 20, 2017
"Move Forward' My Letter of Self-Introduction for KGSP

14 - Thank you again @Holt, you are amazing!...

ScholarshipNitivatNitivat - Feb 20, 2017
Born in Mexico City, moved to United States at age of 8. KGSP Self Introduction for Graduate School

3 - Carina, your essay lacks focus and a clear purpose for your study. This is nothing but a highly confused...

ScholarshipYennicallHolt - Feb 20, 2017
My career path is not straight. College Transfer Essay - Statement of Purpose

2 - Morgan, try to focus on the actual purpose behind the reason for your transfer. If you are transferring based...

UndergraduateMorgannhHolt - Feb 20, 2017
I have grown up with a great passion for learning foreign languages - self-introduction letter; KGSP

5 - @Holt Last year, I have been chosen along with other 11 girls to have a special teaching trainning, and...

Scholarshipamelhopesamelhopes - Feb 19, 2017
Planning to meet a stranger and asking him his interests.

3 - @Holt Thanks, Holt. Yes, putting the question mark is always an issue for me. I know we can still...

Lettersmastindersinghmastindersingh - Feb 19, 2017