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Writing ielts Task 1: The chart shows the percentage of car manufacturer's total sales in USA

4 - Your vocabulary and grammar are very good. In IELTs writing part1, the topic sentence should be one sentence: "The...

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When people succeed, it is not only because of hard working but also luck.

6 - My first impression is that you have quite many spelling errors and use informal language. If you want to...

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The Best Squash - UBC Sauder Questions About Handling a Problem

3 - this essay was very impressive and you made the reader roll up with you but i did not get...

UndergraduateAlaana - Jan 2, 2021A7zanany - Jan 8, 2021
International Security - Personal Statement - Erasmus Mundus IMSISS Scholarship

3 - i think it should be ... paradigms that prevent individuals to live from living in a safe environment...

GraduateSofiaM - Jan 7, 2021A7zanany - Jan 8, 2021
Motivation Letter for Scholarship in BSc of Computer Science

3 - @Holt Thank you for your advice. It means a lot to me....

Letterswnmnd - Jan 8, 2021wnmnd - Jan 8, 2021
Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum, for Bsc in The Electronics Industry field

3 - Dear @ Holt Thanks for your advice. I will post the revised Motivational Letter based on your points....

Scholarshipmnajib7 - Jan 7, 2021mnajib7 - Jan 8, 2021
Dublin - Personal Statement for Erasmus Mundus in GLOCAL Programme, Global Markets

2 - Your first paragraph sounds more like something out of the website rather than an original thought that is supposed...

Scholarshipclaffec3 - Jan 7, 2021Holt - Jan 8, 2021
OVERCOMING THE BEAUTY STANDARD - UNDERGRADUATE ADMISSIONS ESSAY

3 - @Holt Thank you for your advice!!!! i will be sure to make that change!!!...

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Study at the University of Padova as dual degree masters in sustainable Agriculture student

3 - Thank you for your comments@Holt...

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MOTIVATION LETTER FOR INDUSTRIAL MANAGEMENT MASTER'S PROGRAM

3 - @Holt Hi Holt, thank you for your feedback. It means a lot to me. I want to ask some...

Lettersbhaktisitumorang - Jan 7, 2021bhaktisitumorang - Jan 7, 2021
To Yale Silver from Belarus startup industry

3 - @Holt Thank you for the advice! I rebuilt it a bit. Does it seem stronger? However, my commitment deals...

GraduateMaximDeykalo - Jan 7, 2021MaximDeykalo - Jan 7, 2021
Study Plan for Canada study permit - MA in Educational Studies at university of British Columbia

3 - Thank You so much for your prompt respond. My professor's name is mentioned in the letter of acceptance. However,...

Lettersmshirdelpour - Jan 7, 2021mshirdelpour - Jan 7, 2021
How to apply to Glocal Erasmus Mundus Track D Industrial dynamics and sustainability

2 - Shorten your relevant experience and background. Simplify that presentation so that you will still have space to discuss how...

ScholarshipDavidCA - Jan 7, 2021Holt - Jan 7, 2021
Motivation letter for Stipendium Hungaricum - Technical Management (TM) or Electrical Engineering

2 - As this is a motivational letter, you have to present 2 solid areas of interest or motivation for the...

Letterssmonasterys - Jan 7, 2021Holt - Jan 7, 2021
It is true that salary is a crucial factor for numerous people opting for a job

2 - Nobody should mark your essay here. A student who dares to mark your essay will find his account suspended....

Writing Feedbackpinkey123 - Jan 6, 2021Holt - Jan 7, 2021
In some nations, home ownership, not renting, is gaining more and more popularity

2 - There are two sentences that became unclear with the presence of two unnecessary word s in the prompt restatement....

Writing Feedbacknvhl372 - Jan 6, 2021Holt - Jan 7, 2021
Statement for Purpose for Masters in Game Design/Development

3 - Thank you very much. I tried to incorporate your suggestions and here are the revised 3rd and 4th paragraphs....

Graduatewhaj47 - Jan 6, 2021whaj47 - Jan 6, 2021
Personal Statement, Erasmus Scholarship: GLOCAL Master program, study track Sustainable Business

4 - This essay has good structure and flow. My suggestion is you have proof-read and grammar check for your essay...

ScholarshipACx - Jan 4, 2021felicity96 - Jan 6, 2021
Egypt student - what does make you candidate for this program?

3 - it is for summer program in Tulane university and how can I edit on it please could you help...

ScholarshipA7zanany - Jan 5, 2021A7zanany - Jan 6, 2021
The Blue Crew & Counterpoint - Additional Essay to Wellesley College

3 - Thank you @Holt. What you said is true that I'm not good at imagining the future. Thank you a...

Undergraduatetoodii2102 - Jan 5, 2021toodii2102 - Jan 6, 2021
Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods

2 - Avoid changing the discussion reference from the original prompt. All your restatement references should have supporting factors or a...

Writing FeedbackKrystal318 - Jan 6, 2021Holt - Jan 6, 2021
Subject: Letter of Intent to apply for a National Visa Type D to study in Germany

2 - Ali, you are not applying for admission to a university through the visa officer. You are trying to justify...

Writing FeedbackAli_0 - Jan 6, 2021Holt - Jan 6, 2021
The graph shows the percentage of four different types of fuels in use between the years 1800 / 2000

2 - You have a neatly presented summary, but, it is more of a run-on than a complex sentence presentation. The...

Writing Feedbackdiewithoutn - Jan 5, 2021Holt - Jan 6, 2021
Parent or teacher who should be more responsible for the child in his attitude?

2 - Since the TA section profiles your English comprehension skills based upon how well you can explain the original prompt...

Writing Feedbackgwenaafkar - Jan 5, 2021Holt - Jan 6, 2021
Children as a good member of a society. What are the best ways to learn about it?

2 - If I were to base the score of this essay on it restatement of the original prompt, then this...

Writing FeedbackRGAP - Jan 5, 2021Holt - Jan 6, 2021
Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship for MSc inn Electrical Engineering

2 - You have covered almost all of the required information in the given discussion list. However, the first part, is...

ScholarshipMurtaza Ali - Jan 5, 2021Holt - Jan 6, 2021
Writing Task 2 - Mountain or Beach for Holiday time

3 - I've checked for your grammar errors. Here are some: First paragraph: ....that people can do to enjoy... Climbing the...

Writing Feedbackekprtiwi29 - Jan 4, 2021Krystal318 - Jan 6, 2021
IELTS- Task 2: Should young people be encouraged to come to theatre?

7 - I'm checking for your grammar errors. I guess you meant "the descent" (= the decrease) instead of "the descendent"...

Writing FeedbackPriscillia - Dec 25, 2020Krystal318 - Jan 6, 2021
Household power - IELTS writing task 1, diagram

4 - Don't forget to post pictures with this type of writing task. Besides, I think you should paraphrase the question...

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[IELTS Writing task 1] Diagram: Transformation of a university campus

3 - Thank you so much Holt! I'll keep practicing based on your advices....

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