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Pharmacy chose me - Graduate Statement of Purpose

3 - Thank you for the feedback. Very much appreciated....

Writing Feedbackshegzdr - Jun 23, 2024shegzdr - Jun 25, 2024
"We do not remember days, we remember moments."

2 - You may want to expand on this discussion and find a way to make it more relatable to...

UndergraduateADITI PATEL - Jun 23, 2024Holt - Jun 24, 2024
SOP for Information science focus on intersection of security and privacy with human-computer.

2 - I find the discussion to be very general in presentation. The purpose is somewhere there. You have kept it...

ScholarshipHallenjay - Jun 23, 2024Holt - Jun 24, 2024
Smoking - Writing task 2: Topic- Social issues

2 - Use the first person pronoun "I" in this case. The essay will not write itself. The essay does...

Writing FeedbackThang2910 - Jun 23, 2024Holt - Jun 24, 2024
Writing task 2 The media should limit how much bad news they report

3 - In addition to what the consultant has said, you may want to carefully proofread essays. You have written 'awaring'...

Writing Feedbackmelee - Jun 21, 2024mvo_rey - Jun 23, 2024
Bachelors to Direct PHD - KFUPM

3 - @Holt Thanks for valuable feedback. But as this isn't a regular PHD program it is direct PHD after 4...

Graduatemarsad1998 - Jun 22, 2024marsad1998 - Jun 23, 2024
In this complex and fast-paced world, it is essential for young people to equip basic pecuniary skil

2 - I believe that you wrote this as a part of your IELTS task 2 essay preparation. Unfortunately, you overwrote...

Writing FeedbackIamSallyNguyen - Jun 22, 2024Holt - Jun 23, 2024
Essay about ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework

2 - There are 262 words in this essay. I assume that you used more than 40 minutes to write this...

Writing Feedbackdung_284 - Jun 21, 2024Holt - Jun 22, 2024
Writing task 1 - the chart shows the number of enquiries received by the tourist information office

2 - Always divide your summary overview into 2 sentences. There is a 2 sentence and 40 word requirement for that...

Writing Feedbacktakaleon - Jun 21, 2024Holt - Jun 22, 2024
Essay about the money spent by British parents (Ielts writing Task 1 )

2 - Keep the task 1 essay to only 200 words. By writing 243 words, you will more than likely cut...

Writing Feedbackpthanh_0419 - Jun 20, 2024Holt - Jun 22, 2024
computers are becoming a part lessons at school Discuss the advantages and disadvantages

2 - I don't know where to begin in terms of correcting your essay. You have 14 misspelled words, that affect...

Writing Feedbackhoangn109 - Jun 20, 2024Holt - Jun 22, 2024
Prolonging lifespan - life expectancy is increasing.

3 - "Some people would argue that longer lives could bring more positive aspects. From my perspective, in contrast, I do...

Writing Feedbackhnaht - Jun 18, 2024mvo_rey - Jun 22, 2024
The maps below show Colwick Arts Centre in 2005 and today.

2 - Your descriptive report is only 149 words. Though minimal, you will still receive a small deduction for not meeting...

Writing FeedbackLemonChi - Jun 20, 2024Holt - Jun 22, 2024
The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.

2 - The first thing you have to learn about the task 1 essay is that you have to properly identify...

Writing Feedbackkhoivuive - Jun 19, 2024Holt - Jun 21, 2024
ielts writing task foreign cultures introduced

2 - You focused so much on vocabulary usage in the first paragraph that you lost sight of the original topic...

Writing Feedbackduan2207 - Jun 18, 2024Holt - Jun 21, 2024
Essay on 'why should we consider you?' for a scholarship

2 - The response is a bit murky. The reviewer will not understand how you came to be exposed to this...

Scholarshipmvo_rey - Jun 18, 2024Holt - Jun 21, 2024
IELTS Task 1 demand for electricity and how electricity is used.

2 - The summary overview must be composed of at least 2 separate sentences. You have written a run on sentence....

Writing Feedbackrubie - Jun 17, 2024Holt - Jun 21, 2024
Writing task 2 - Topic Education Study Subjects

2 - You don't have to say this anymore. The examiner will understand the writing instructions based upon how you...

Writing Feedbacktrangmon - Jun 17, 2024Holt - Jun 21, 2024
Is it better to read books on paper or digital?

2 - You have missed the point of the prompt. This is a single opinion essay. Your answer should be based...

Writing FeedbackbonnieBux - Jun 16, 2024Holt - Jun 21, 2024
Anxiety VS College Students first draft

2 - Maybe consider focusing on the audience for the research paper and the pool from which the test results will...

Research Papersisabella05 - Jun 15, 2024Holt - Jun 21, 2024
All children should be made to wear school uniforms. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2 - The word force is too strong for this discussion. You should be using positive words instead of negative...

Writing FeedbackHan Yujin - Jun 14, 2024Holt - Jun 21, 2024
Personal Statement for Common App Essay about Cultural Identity

2 - This is a very engaging essay that clearly shows your cultural background and what it means to your youth....

Undergraduatescnwanna - Jun 13, 2024Holt - Jun 21, 2024
The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008.

2 - The summary overview is not very effective seeing as it is a run-on sentence. This should be divided into...

Writing Feedbackhynnie - Jun 13, 2024Holt - Jun 20, 2024
IELTS TASK 2 about focusing on endangered animal or human problems

3 - So I should give my opinion in the introduction and summarize my points in the conclusion right. And the...

Writing Feedbacknatalia3k - Jun 8, 2024natalia3k - Jun 17, 2024
My passion for justice - Personal statement as a law student applying for gks

3 - @Holt Thanks. One essay per thread please....

UndergraduateJessie345 - May 29, 2024Jessie345 - Jun 15, 2024
Blood of Hope (Columbia GS Admission Essay)

7 - @marietovlerone This essay is really beautiful, and in my opinion, the drama of the beginning can work in your...

Undergraduatemarietovlerone - May 25, 2024scnwanna - Jun 13, 2024
unpaid work - compulsory or not

3 - @Holt so could you examine this essay in all 4 criteria of the ielts writing test? thank you so...

Writing Feedbackdohkyungsoofc - Jun 8, 2024dohkyungsoofc - Jun 13, 2024
youngsters should be required to have full-time education until they are 18. Agree or disagree

2 - I know this is a task 2 writing essay. Why are you shouting about it? You should temper...

Writing FeedbackKimkimsuzi111 - Jun 12, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in

2 - The essay is short of the minimum requirement by 2 words. That is too bad. You will still receive...

Writing FeedbackNglinh177 - Jun 12, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
A short motivation letter for studying mathematics - 400 to 500 words, but involves change of fields

2 - This letter is very weak. It is not the kind of motivational letter that would catch the attention of...

Lettersraj8799 - Jun 11, 2024Holt - Jun 12, 2024
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