|Writing ielts Task 1: The chart shows the percentage of car manufacturer's total sales in USA
4 - Your vocabulary and grammar are very good. In IELTs writing part1, the topic sentence should be one sentence: "The...
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|When people succeed, it is not only because of hard working but also luck.
6 - My first impression is that you have quite many spelling errors and use informal language. If you want to...
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|International Security - Personal Statement - Erasmus Mundus IMSISS Scholarship
3 - i think it should be ... paradigms that prevent individuals to live from living in a safe environment...
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|Motivation Letter for Scholarship in BSc of Computer Science
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|Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum, for Bsc in The Electronics Industry field
3 - Dear @ Holt Thanks for your advice. I will post the revised Motivational Letter based on your points....
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|Dublin - Personal Statement for Erasmus Mundus in GLOCAL Programme, Global Markets
2 - Your first paragraph sounds more like something out of the website rather than an original thought that is supposed...
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|Study at the University of Padova as dual degree masters in sustainable Agriculture student
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|MOTIVATION LETTER FOR INDUSTRIAL MANAGEMENT MASTER'S PROGRAM
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|To Yale Silver from Belarus startup industry
3 - @Holt Thank you for the advice! I rebuilt it a bit. Does it seem stronger? However, my commitment deals...
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|Study Plan for Canada study permit - MA in Educational Studies at university of British Columbia
3 - Thank You so much for your prompt respond. My professor's name is mentioned in the letter of acceptance. However,...
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|How to apply to Glocal Erasmus Mundus Track D Industrial dynamics and sustainability
2 - Shorten your relevant experience and background. Simplify that presentation so that you will still have space to discuss how...
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|Motivation letter for Stipendium Hungaricum - Technical Management (TM) or Electrical Engineering
2 - As this is a motivational letter, you have to present 2 solid areas of interest or motivation for the...
Letterssmonasterys - Jan 7, 2021Holt - Jan 7, 2021
|It is true that salary is a crucial factor for numerous people opting for a job
2 - Nobody should mark your essay here. A student who dares to mark your essay will find his account suspended....
Writing Feedbackpinkey123 - Jan 6, 2021Holt - Jan 7, 2021
|In some nations, home ownership, not renting, is gaining more and more popularity
2 - There are two sentences that became unclear with the presence of two unnecessary word s in the prompt restatement....
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|Statement for Purpose for Masters in Game Design/Development
3 - Thank you very much. I tried to incorporate your suggestions and here are the revised 3rd and 4th paragraphs....
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|Personal Statement, Erasmus Scholarship: GLOCAL Master program, study track Sustainable Business
4 - This essay has good structure and flow. My suggestion is you have proof-read and grammar check for your essay...
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|Egypt student - what does make you candidate for this program?
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|The Blue Crew & Counterpoint - Additional Essay to Wellesley College
3 - Thank you @Holt. What you said is true that I'm not good at imagining the future. Thank you a...
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|Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods
2 - Avoid changing the discussion reference from the original prompt. All your restatement references should have supporting factors or a...
Writing FeedbackKrystal318 - Jan 6, 2021Holt - Jan 6, 2021
|Subject: Letter of Intent to apply for a National Visa Type D to study in Germany
2 - Ali, you are not applying for admission to a university through the visa officer. You are trying to justify...
Writing FeedbackAli_0 - Jan 6, 2021Holt - Jan 6, 2021
|The graph shows the percentage of four different types of fuels in use between the years 1800 / 2000
2 - You have a neatly presented summary, but, it is more of a run-on than a complex sentence presentation. The...
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|Parent or teacher who should be more responsible for the child in his attitude?
2 - Since the TA section profiles your English comprehension skills based upon how well you can explain the original prompt...
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|Children as a good member of a society. What are the best ways to learn about it?
2 - If I were to base the score of this essay on it restatement of the original prompt, then this...
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|Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship for MSc inn Electrical Engineering
2 - You have covered almost all of the required information in the given discussion list. However, the first part, is...
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|Writing Task 2 - Mountain or Beach for Holiday time
3 - I've checked for your grammar errors. Here are some: First paragraph: ....that people can do to enjoy... Climbing the...
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|IELTS- Task 2: Should young people be encouraged to come to theatre?
7 - I'm checking for your grammar errors. I guess you meant "the descent" (= the decrease) instead of "the descendent"...
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|Household power - IELTS writing task 1, diagram
4 - Don't forget to post pictures with this type of writing task. Besides, I think you should paraphrase the question...
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|[IELTS Writing task 1] Diagram: Transformation of a university campus
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