|IELTS1: the percentage change in house price in five different urban areas in different countries
Writing Feedbackvuthuylinh2611 - Mar 23, 2020vuthuylinh2611 - Mar 23, 2020
|The salmon passes from infant to adult during the natural process known as the life cycle
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|"Flipped" - Write a movie review that you are interested.
3 - @Holt I'd like to thank you for your contribution. This is the first time I try to get accustomed...
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|The production level of main fuels in a European country
2 - Since you did not post the image that goes with this data report, your essay cannot be reviewed for...
Writing FeedbackJannes - Mar 23, 2020Holt - Mar 23, 2020
|Task 2 IELTS TENDENCY TO WASTE FOOD
7 - @xtunx Dear Author, It will be better for you to add thesis statement which states the intended message...
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|'I like to work on ambitious projects' - cover letter for a PhD in astronomy
2 - You wrote a personal statement, not a cover letter. A cover letter is written in a short 5 paragraph...
Lettersmixren - Mar 22, 2020Holt - Mar 23, 2020
|TASK 2 BEGINER - YOUNG PEOPLE SHOULD SPEND MORE TIME ON CULTURAL ACTIVITIES AND LESS TIME ON SPORT?
8 - Firstly, you did not write 250 words. Secondly, it isn't allow to use short form like 'can't'....
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|Will printed media soon be a thing of the past? What is your opinion ?
4 - @nguyenluuphuchao Your essay is lacking example. First, you suppose that the prolonged exposure to these digital devices will take...
Writing Feedbacknguyenluuphuchao - Mar 21, 2020phong3baotap - Mar 23, 2020
|[Task 2 IELTS] Communication between employers and workers is the most important factor
3 - @lovewriting You might consider the alternative: 1) ... and present my own position. (the word "own" seemed to create...
Writing Feedbacklovewriting - Mar 20, 2020phong3baotap - Mar 23, 2020
|IELTS- Ad-Dis Essay. More and more people are starting to work from home.
2 - The response is inaccurate. You are being asked to choose only one aspect of the topic to discuss. Either...
Writing FeedbackOlivia1989 - Mar 22, 2020Holt - Mar 22, 2020
|Young professionals - the way of describing from the essay below:
3 - Since you did not include the image with the essay, your work cannot be reviewed in terms of content...
Writing Feedbackmiraichan19 - Mar 21, 2020Holt - Mar 22, 2020
|Economic globalization - IELTS Academic Writing Task 2
2 - Ok. Let's review your essay using the scoring guide. It will be easier to explain your mistakes and correcting...
Writing Feedbackhuynhmai1707 - Mar 21, 2020Holt - Mar 22, 2020
|Seeking advice for a statement of purpose needed to apply for a master in robotics at EPFL.
3 - Hi holt, your feedback has been really welcome. The MSc is indeed targeted to people just finishing their BSc....
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|Because wild creatures are on the brink of extinction so that there is no point in protecting them
2 - Aside from the fact that you misrepresented the original prompt in your introduction paraphrase, you also wrote an essay...
Writing Feedbackratter - Mar 21, 2020Holt - Mar 21, 2020
|DEVELOPING COUNTRIES AND ADVANCED COUNTRIES ON THE ENVIRONMENT ( IELTS TASK 2 )
2 - I think your essay has shown a standard format for a discussion essay. About the ideas, I do not...
Writing Feedbackxtunx - Mar 20, 2020ratter - Mar 21, 2020
|Australia Awards Scholarship Supporting Statement (International Business)
3 - Hi Thank you so much for your feedback! It's really insightful. I'll have them revise accordingly....
Scholarshipdedjabs - Mar 20, 2020dedjabs - Mar 21, 2020
|Show the relationship between psycholinguistic and first language teaching
2 - So, you are talking about the relationship between psycholinguistics and first language training. Based on what you have said,...
Essaysmaitrang95 - Mar 21, 2020Holt - Mar 21, 2020
|GKS2020 Embassy Track Master of Communication & Media Personal Statement
2 - Remove all references to researched content in this essay. You are writing a personal statement, not a research study...
Graduateattalicious - Mar 20, 2020Holt - Mar 21, 2020
|Personal statement for applying a MAs educational leadership
2 - The essay tends to be mundane overall. It doesn't really catch the eye of the reviewer. It is descriptive...
GraduateCutecarrot - Mar 20, 2020Holt - Mar 21, 2020
|Personal Vision of an Ideal Company
3 - @Holt Wow, thank you! This is actually my first time posting a thread in this forum. Never thought that...
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|APPLYING FOR A SCHOLARSHIP - GOI-IES - my educational career
3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback, I edited the write-up but it turns out it wasn't posted. Okay I...
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|Some people think that strict punishment for driving offences are the key to reduce traffic accident
2 - You forgot to count the discussion topics before you wrote the prompt restatement. This is a comparison of points...
GraduatePheobe - Mar 20, 2020Holt - Mar 20, 2020
|My poor diet - need help with grammar and sentences!
2 - Was the instruction for this exercise to have you write a statement only? The reason I ask is because...
Writing Feedbackduyendang1012 - Mar 19, 2020Holt - Mar 20, 2020
|Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results
2 - It is unfortunate that your body of paragraphs, as well as your prompt restatement does not follow the required...
Writing Feedbackquynhchi24 - Mar 19, 2020Holt - Mar 19, 2020
|THE BOY IS GOOD AT ALL - Essay scholarship for a 10-grade student.
2 - Never hashtag your academic essays. You are not writing an Instagram description nor are you Tweeting a message. You...
Scholarshipbaross - Mar 19, 2020Holt - Mar 19, 2020
|How to write a research proposal on smart port development?
6 - What about to start with a structure of essay? Use google to create a "skeleton" of your paper work,...
Essaysphuongthao19 - Mar 10, 2020validator111 - Mar 18, 2020
|Essay scholarship - Government of Ireland - International Education Scholarships
2 - The first 2 paragraphs of the essay are not necessary for the presentation. Neither does it improve the presentation...
Scholarshipchrisnguyen - Mar 18, 2020Holt - Mar 18, 2020
|DISCUSSION ESSAYS: Horizontal city vs vertical city
2 - This is a comparative essay discussion. The body of paragraphs should have been composed of 3 representations, in no...
Writing Feedbackleanhtu121 - Mar 18, 2020Holt - Mar 18, 2020
|Politicians or individuals? Essay about the environment protection responsibility
3 - Your prompt paraphrase is not changed enough from the original prompt to qualify as a new rendition of the...
Writing FeedbackMinh Huynh - Mar 18, 2020Holt - Mar 18, 2020
|Optimistic people who have more opportunities to make positive changes to the world
2 - The first 2 sentences in your prompt paraphrase are really difficult to understand. It isn't a very good re-framing...
Writing Feedbackbellapham - Mar 17, 2020Holt - Mar 18, 2020