|IELTS Writing Task 2 about the trend of buying things from famous brands
2 - Wrong reference term. The brand is connected with the manufacturer (correct term), not the business. The...
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|Writingtask2: Society could not function if there were no rules and laws, agree or disagree.
2 - Based on what reasons? An opinion presentation is never complete without one or two supporting reasons. If you...
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|Discuss wealthy or developing nations should provide financial support to poorer countries
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|The graph indicates the number of Canadian using several social networking sites in 2014 and 2015
2 - This is a 20 minute writing task. Expert writing educators who have timed the drafting and final editing process...
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|IELTS - Everyone should become vegetarian because meat not guarantees a healthy diet.
3 - a know-how to get higher point is that you should follow a certain layout and your good grammar and...
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|Writing task 1: The amount of fish and meat consumed in a European country from 1979 to 2004
3 - @thanhtien2512 You should replace with "the line graph" "a noticeably increase", "noticeable" not "noticeably" "making chicken be the most...
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|The chart illustrate detailed information about the reasons for students' choice of UK school
3 - @thanhngoc7404 "The provided bar charts", you should replace with "the charts" "over a 20-year period from 1987", this phrase...
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|IELTS task 2: COMPULSORY TAX PAYMENT (agree or disagree)
Writing FeedbackPaul16 - Jun 7, 2021Holt - Jun 8, 2021
|Critical review: Education technology and the future of the classroom
2 - Based on what thesis? What were the discussion topics you believed to be valid? How Was his article...
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|There is an opinion that social networking sites have an adverse effect on people and the community
2 - This does not offer clear supporting reasons for your opinion. Try to offer a summary of your discussion...
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|The number of female and male teachers working in different forms of education setting in UK in 2010
2 - You need to learn how to do several things before you can actually begin to show improvement in your...
Writing Feedbacklethiaixuan - Jun 7, 2021Holt - Jun 8, 2021
|Some believe that sending students to working for unpaid community service should be required
2 - Ooops! You started the sentence in current time reference, then suddenly went into past reference. That is a...
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|Are we more dependent on each other or maybe we've become more independent nowadays?
2 - Repeating the discussion instructions works to boost your TA score in terms of comprehension skills. It does not...
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|My blog - extracurricular activities essay - Undergrad College Application
3 - Merged: Sustainability in the fashion industry - Extracurricular activities essay Please briefly elaborate on one of your...
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|"My notebooks" Personal statement for undergrad college application
3 - To me, this essay is really confusing. The different section of your notebooks that you're writing about do not...
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|"The itch to understand" Personal statement college application - a topic of your choice
3 - This is overall a really good essay. The description about you being able to respond to various problems in...
Undergraduatetechmind20 - May 26, 2021peachyfrenchfry - Jun 7, 2021
|The line chart illustrates the proportion of visitors who went to four distinct places in Edinburg
3 - who went to four distinct destinations: It should be in simple present in introductory part and rose slight ->...
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|The line chart illustrates the population growth in New Zealand between 1950 and 2050
5 - @thanhtien2512 ,Thank you sometimes i make some mistake with typos and difficulty express my train of thought. I will...
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|The use of social-sites can cause many physical and mental health problems and spread misinformation
2 - Do not close the statement after your opinion. Offer your 2 discussion reasons to help offer the supporting...
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|Fast food safety and school ban
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|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Opinion Essay on Free University Education
3 - Merged: Some say that students with any social backgrounds should be provided with free higher education Opinion...
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|Task 1, The expenditures for five major categories in the US, Canada, the UK, and Japan in 2009
2 - The bar chart is divided into 4 sections. Include that reference as the individual items are listed /...
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|People say that reading for pleasure helps people to develop imagination and better language skills
3 - If you look at the band descriptors for writing task 2, you will see the words "extend" and "develop"....
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|Do you agree that advancements in medical science and technology is one of the most important factor
2 - You did not properly respond to the discussion instruction which is: To what extent do you agree or...
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|Writing task 2 - Marine pollution. Possible causes and effects on people and animals
2 - Your introductory paragraph is a rambling mess of big words and run on sentences that takes too long to...
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|Everyone has a right to have access to university education without tuition
2 - Your second paragraph should be used to disprove the preceding reasoning paragraph. When you partly agree with the reasoning,...
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|The chart shows the proportion of women and men in one Asian country who passed their driving test
2 - In the summary overview, the image divisions need to be clearer. A reference to the number of columns representing...
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|Bullying is a big problem in many schools. Causes and solutions [ielts writing p2]
2 - You come in with a strong, although a bit grammatically incorrect (in the first sentence) prompt restatement and thesis...
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|Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. Opinion
2 - Actually, based on the original prompt, the proper term should be " much discussed" as there is no...
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|The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing chocolate
2 - Use the word "man made" in reference to its noun form for grammar accuracy. Indicate "in this man..."...
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