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Motivation letter for the MA in Art History in Tor Vergata, Rome, Italy

2 - I wish you had not used AI to polish this essay. It comes across as highly educated and polished...

Graduateseyedas - Jan 13, 2026Holt - Jan 14, 2026
NTU Scholarship Essay - Showcase of Leadership

2 - I realize that this is a word limited essay but the way it was portrayed was one dimensional to...

Scholarshiplucas_hanz - Jan 13, 2026Holt - Jan 14, 2026
Should the U.S. Government Forgive All Federal Student Loan Debt?

2 - The student did not even bother to try and humanize the writing of this paper. It is almost fully...

Writing Feedbackjonnycal14 - Jan 12, 2026Holt - Jan 13, 2026
Motivation Letter for Master's Degree in Management of Technology at TU Delft

2 - What has been written is a personal statement. This is not a motivational letter. Based upon the required information,...

Lettersadiing093 - Jan 12, 2026Holt - Jan 13, 2026
Motivation letter for Stipendium Hungaricum scholarship, ChemEng

2 - There is no need to share this information with the reviewer. It does not matter to him when...

LettersFriendlymarmot - Jan 12, 2026Holt - Jan 13, 2026
Motivation Letter BA in psychology for Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship

2 - The first thing you have to do is remove the outline presentation of this essay. The motivation letter should...

Lettersuntammed_talent - Jan 12, 2026Holt - Jan 13, 2026
Changing the view of AI within education

2 - I have to say, I admire you for not allowing AI to fully write this paper for you, even...

Research PapersYonnan - Jan 12, 2026Holt - Jan 12, 2026
Letter of Motivation for Master of Sustainable Development at KU Leuven (Belgium)

2 - You are approaching this letter of motivation as a personal statement. That is the wrong approach. This essay is...

Lettersbtran0303 - Jan 12, 2026Holt - Jan 12, 2026
Motivation Letter – MSc in Energy Engineering, Politecnico di Milano

2 - This is your actual motivational statement. Therefore, this must be presented at the top of the essay rather...

Lettersbiggy1621 - Jan 11, 2026Holt - Jan 12, 2026
Autobiography for National Taiwan University (Program : Computer Science & Information Engineering)

2 - This is an exaggeration. Your parents could not have supported your educational goals since birth because a baby...

UndergraduateNatethegreat2007 - Jan 11, 2026Holt - Jan 12, 2026
Automation and Robotics in the Workforce

2 - Be honest with yourself when you write a research paper. If an AI app wrote up to 75% of...

Research Papersjnolte23 - Jan 10, 2026Holt - Jan 12, 2026
Master in Information Systems and Digital Business Innovation Lancaster University

2 - Try to expand further on your international work experience. This is something that would work to your benefit since...

LettersMiftaaj01 - Jan 10, 2026Holt - Jan 12, 2026
Stipendium Hungaricum motivation letter (Mongolian student) for BSc on Physics

2 - The information that you provide in this essay is not convincing enough. You have no real ambition beyond simply...

UndergraduateBudbilguun - Jan 10, 2026Holt - Jan 12, 2026
Personal Statement for MS in Human Factors Engineering at VTech

2 - Your completed essay does not follow the information requirements for the personal statement. A vast majority of the guide...

Graduatev444rsh - Jan 9, 2026Holt - Jan 11, 2026
Motivation Letter for the Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship in Creative Arts and Musicology

2 - Unfortunately the scholarship committee is going to see right through this AI generated application essay. That will prove to...

Lettersnuilkham - Jan 9, 2026Holt - Jan 11, 2026
Computational modelling and Human-Computer Interaction - International Research Programs

2 - You haven't really provided an effective research statement here. I feel that the actual thesis statement is not clearly...

GraduatePawniwillaceit - Jan 9, 2026Holt - Jan 11, 2026
Star names - Personal Essay on CommonApp Qs. 6

2 - Do not open the essay with you referencing yourself in the third person. That does not make any sense...

UndergraduateHaranAn - Jan 9, 2026Holt - Jan 11, 2026
Private equity in hospitals and healthcare systems Eng102

2 - This is a well thought out and properly presented research and opinion paper. You have given great thought to...

Writing FeedbackZarecka - Jan 8, 2026Holt - Jan 10, 2026
How to convey feelings to the reader in a motivational essay - Stipendium Hungaricum

2 - The essay is not going to stand out among the sea of applicants. That is because of the one...

Scholarshipakiro - Jan 8, 2026Holt - Jan 10, 2026
Microorganisms and fermentation - Study plan to Taiwan Scholarship

2 - Since this is a study plan, the first paragraph of this essay is totally unnecessary. It does not contain...

ScholarshipThang0807 - Jan 8, 2026Holt - Jan 10, 2026
Motivation Letter for the Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship- Computer Science

2 - The motivational letter does not fully meet the SH candidacy requirements. Where is the reference to your college degree...

Letterskhalaf codes - Jan 8, 2026Holt - Jan 10, 2026
Application essay for Msc in critical care

3 - @Holt Thanks, sorry I didn't clerify this is a motivation letter for Msc critical care in Edinburagh Uinversity....

UndergraduateLobaba - Jan 5, 2026Lobaba - Jan 8, 2026
GKS-G Personal Statement | EdTech major

2 - Good work in using Ai to polish the content of your motivational letter. This essay has kept the human...

Graduatethaohinnn - Jan 6, 2026Holt - Jan 7, 2026
Tiktok - is it safe / user spending

2 - It is highly unfortunate that his paper has been 60% written by AI. As a master AI trainer, I...

Research Paperstressle hertz - Jan 6, 2026Holt - Jan 7, 2026
Ambition in Society - IELTS TASK 2

2 - The essay is being written from your personal point of view and therefore, should reflect an "I" statement in...

Writing Feedbackdatmt333 - Jan 5, 2026Holt - Jan 7, 2026
The graph - common activities of children of different ages

2 - This essay is not one that can be completed withing 20 minutes during the actual test. The 1 hour...

Writing FeedbackHuypham - Jan 5, 2026Holt - Jan 7, 2026
[IELTS TASK2]celebrities complain the way the media publicize their private lives.(AGREE DISAGREE)

2 - This is an over discussed essay that cannot be completed within the alloted 40 minutes of actual test writing...

Writing Feedbacktrangtrangsigmaa - Jan 5, 2026Holt - Jan 7, 2026
Theory and real-world impact - Erasmus mundus motivational letter

2 - While EM actually accepts undergraduate scholars into their program, they only accept exceptional undergraduates who show academic excellence, internship...

ScholarshipMadika - Jan 5, 2026Holt - Jan 7, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home

2 - The discussion is well developed. The prompt restatement is accurate and the writer's opinion is based upon valid thesis...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Jan 5, 2026Holt - Jan 7, 2026
It Starts with Small Act toward Bigger Impact (Erasmus Mundus: GLOCAL - Track I)

3 - Well noted. Thank you for the suggestions, Holt! I'll try to revise this ASAP for your final suggestion....

Scholarshipapnindyaa - Jan 3, 2026apnindyaa - Jan 4, 2026
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