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Increasingly large numbers of students are undertaking their higher education in other countries.

2 - Do not keep writing just for the sake of writing more words in the essay. Make sure that you...

Writing FeedbackPhuonghoaneu - Apr 11, 2022Holt - Apr 11, 2022
You have received an email from the manager of Science club

2 - The sentence structure and word usage in this letter is so bad, the letter loses all its meaning and...

Lettersquynha1603 - Apr 11, 2022Holt - Apr 11, 2022
Many people complain about teenagers' lack of moral and self-discipline. Write causes and solution.

2 - The last part of the restatement paragraph is called the opinion statement for a reason. The writer is expected...

Writing Feedbackngmngoc9269408 - Apr 11, 2022Holt - Apr 11, 2022
IELTS writing task 2: Some universities offer online courses. Is this positive or negative?

2 - The writer responded to the discussion question in the concluding paragraph. That was the only part of the essay...

Writing FeedbackVanan - Apr 10, 2022Holt - Apr 10, 2022
Compulsory study. Young people should be forced to stay in full-time education until they are 18.

3 - I think "knowledge" is an uncountable noun so you should use "is" instead of "are in that sentence. Another...

Writing Feedbackthuongha - Apr 9, 2022Vanan - Apr 10, 2022
Many people suggest that instead of celebrities the media should focus on the public interest

4 - "The life of ordinary people will be improved ..." I think instead of this sentence you should write "...

Writing Feedbackdominic2795 - Apr 4, 2022Vanan - Apr 10, 2022
Does a country benefit from a large proportion of young university students?

2 - Do not provide your personal opinion in the opening statement. Always integrate that into your personal opinion as the...

Writing FeedbackLingDung - Apr 10, 2022Holt - Apr 10, 2022
Either We Choose to Overcome It or Give Up

2 - Whatever opinion I have of you as a student is irrelevant as it may not be the same as...

Scholarshipmrkmdms - Apr 9, 2022Holt - Apr 10, 2022
International exchange visits will benefit teenagers. Advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

2 - The writer has not taken his time allotment and editing considerations into account while writing this essay. The essay...

Writing Feedbackyondolly123 - Apr 9, 2022Holt - Apr 10, 2022
Letter of recommendation for Berea College

2 - The recommendation letter is highly individualistic in focus. It speaks only of the solitary nature of the student. This...

Lettersyejiitzy - Apr 9, 2022Holt - Apr 10, 2022
Only governments and large institution can create new development for the society, not individuals.

2 - The writer has not responded to the question in the expected format. Although he did an excellent job in...

Writing Feedbackdinhngocthu18 - Apr 9, 2022Holt - Apr 9, 2022
IELTS writing task 2 about patriotism.

2 - It is important that no additional information that represents the writer's opinion integrates itself into the prompt restatement. The...

Writing Feedbackldt0931117093 - Apr 8, 2022Holt - Apr 9, 2022
Personal Statement - Applied Computer Science at University of Gottingen (300 word limit)

2 - The reference to "an early age" could mean anytime from birth to puberty. It is a misleading term that...

Graduateanakin487514 - Apr 7, 2022Holt - Apr 8, 2022
Indonesian-Chinese misunderstandings. AAS: Solving a challenge and implementing change or reform

3 - @Holt Wow, thanks for your advice. I didn't expect I would get such a quick response. Actually, the language...

Scholarshipnaalasadan - Apr 7, 2022naalasadan - Apr 7, 2022
The line graph illustrates the amount of meat and poultry that US residents consumed

2 - The topic summary is incomplete as it does not refer to the measurements provided being indicative of per capita...

Writing Feedbackmanphuongdoan - Apr 7, 2022Holt - Apr 7, 2022
The amount of goods transported in the United Kingdom over the course of 28 years

3 - thank you for your useful feedbacks...

Writing Feedbacklily1996 - Apr 6, 2022lily1996 - Apr 7, 2022
Sharing knowledge - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution

2 - Go directly to the point when responding to the prompt. Why did you choose your proposed course? I...

ScholarshipVermount - Apr 7, 2022Holt - Apr 7, 2022
Motivation letter - Master of Science in Spatial data science - Munster, Germany

2 - The 2000 word maximum need not be used if the writer tends to over-extend his motivational letter with non-motivational...

LettersabdelrhmanCS - Apr 6, 2022Holt - Apr 6, 2022
Teaching and National Prizes in Computer Science - Letter of recommendation for GKS-U

3 - Hi, it is my first time here so i didnt notice that. Btw, i cant see my lor...

Lettersbritonnn - Apr 4, 2022britonnn - Apr 5, 2022
Nowadays, some people presume that sports have a big impact on the progression of society

3 - 1. You use words that don't flow naturally, it seems that you use some words just to " show"...

Writing FeedbackHoang1 - Apr 5, 2022britonnn - Apr 5, 2022
The graph below shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010.

2 - The writer wrote only 146 out of the required minimum of 150 words. There will be percentage deductions for...

Writing FeedbackHong Ngoc - Apr 5, 2022Holt - Apr 5, 2022
Fewer young people do farming work in rural areas Why?

2 - An accurate prompt topic restatement will not include the writer's opinion as to whether or not the proposed topic...

Writing Feedbackminhminhmoemoe - Apr 4, 2022Holt - Apr 5, 2022
SoP MSc Finance & Private Equity core module at the London School of Economics and Political Science

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. I am not sure how to approach a concise 4 paragraph SOP. In...

Graduateismafeed - Apr 3, 2022ismafeed - Apr 4, 2022
International Sustainable Tourism Management ESSAY FOR AAS - WHY THIS COURSE AND INSTITUTION?

2 - The reviewer is not Vietnamese so you will need to spell out what QBB means and what it stands...

Scholarshiplukaku - Apr 3, 2022Holt - Apr 4, 2022
Many young people now know more about international pop and movie stars than famous people

2 - The prompt restatement is fine. The opinion statement is non-existent as there are no responses to the 2 direct...

Writing Feedbackphuongngoc27 - Apr 2, 2022Holt - Apr 3, 2022
Some people believe that Art gives our lives meaning and purpose

2 - It will be better for the exam taker to avoid using memorized and exaggerated phrases such as "In this...

Writing Feedbackscarlettttt - Apr 2, 2022Holt - Apr 2, 2022
Nowadays, a lot of offices have open-space designs instead of separate rooms

2 - The writer shows a high level of academic writing through his use of college level words and sentence representations....

Writing Feedbackphuongngoc - Apr 1, 2022Holt - Apr 2, 2022
Essay topic: Making films and the advancement of digital technology

2 - Restate the prompt topic accurately without providing any opinion. The topic restatement loses accuracy when the writer claims "accuracy"...

Writing Feedbacktina1120 - Apr 1, 2022Holt - Apr 2, 2022
Application for the Master of Education program in Canada - plan of study essay

2 - 11 paragraphs proves to be too long for a study plan explanation. The winter takes several paragraphs before it...

Lettersjenny_ye - Apr 1, 2022Holt - Apr 1, 2022
Kiribati' Health in the Future.

2 - I am not sure if the writer is working on a personal statement, letter of intent, or motivational letter....

UndergraduateJoeleen - Apr 1, 2022Holt - Apr 1, 2022