|Architects are responsible for comfortable and safe future. KGSP Personal Statement.
3 - Dear Holt, thank you so much for your comments! I updated my Personal Statement. I will be appreciate if...
Scholarshipdaisyoohdaisyooh - Feb 27, 2018
|IELTS, task2, Government payment for nursery homes.
3 - mazen, your opening statement is a bit in error when it comes to representing the opinion discussion. The prompt...
Writing Feedbackmazenteet123Holt - Feb 27, 2018
|It was worth to wait for the opportunity to apply for Master study in Korea - Personal Statement
NEW - Hi guys~ I am going to apply KGSP for Master's study. This is my personal statement for the scholarship....
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|Essay about the choice of the people between following a healthy lifestyle and relying on medicine
3 - Thank you for your feedbacks. Can you give some ideas or examples for the part "people maintain their...
Writing Feedbackdolelongandolelongan - Feb 27, 2018
|SOP for Masters in Smart Grids and Building Technology - apply for French university
3 - STATEMENT OF PURPOSE I have been working in the field of energy efficiency and renewable energy for the...
Graduateyakshkumar16yakshkumar16 - Feb 27, 2018
|Why should they choose me for KGSP 2018 ?
4 - "Korea is known for its spectacular rise from one of the poorest countries in the world to a developed...
Graduatekopuresmtn22 - Feb 26, 2018
|WSOS: how to answer this short essay topic; my academic goals address a need in the Washington state
2 - Jackson, the prompt is asking you to think of your academic interests in relation to your future employability. That...
EssaysjacksonbigbyHolt - Feb 25, 2018
|Motivation Letter for Master Degree at RWTH Aachen - Software Systems Engineering
2 - Dzaky, I read your letter from paragraph to paragraph, till the very end and I did not come across...
LettersdzakybdHolt - Feb 25, 2018
|A request letter for accommodation transfer to an another room
2 - adam, don't use a dictionary to write letters like these. Using terms such as "nocturnal" and "diurnal" indicate that...
Writing Feedbackadamjhons123Holt - Feb 25, 2018
|Marketing myself and demonstrating suitability in my Personal Statement
3 - Walter, this personal statement is too simplified in presentation that it almost seems like a draft of a personal...
Scholarshipgmeigo9Holt - Feb 25, 2018
|The lack of discipline in universities is a serious problem today
2 - Long, you will not get a passing grade for this essay. The main reason for the failure of your...
Writing FeedbackOscar TamHolt - Feb 25, 2018
|IELTS 2 - Solving food waste issue by raising awareness and generating energy
Writing Feedbackthuydunglehappyfunny - Feb 25, 2018
|The meaning of life. Need Opinions on my personal statement for pace !
4 - The meaning of life: Since the beginning of times, humans are wondered about the meaning of their existence. Many...
Undergraduatejbright234Unadelllano - Feb 24, 2018
|Personal Statement for phD scholarship in Design schools in Korea
NEW - The registration program requires the following items: Motivations with which you apply for this program / Your education and...
|I have been involved deeper into the processes that need more expertise - KGSP application
Scholarshipbatgirl23batgirl23 - Feb 23, 2018
|Qualities of a good person - faithful, responsible, kind, helpful...
2 - Phuong, if you are writing this essay only as a part of your English vocabulary development, then you have...
Writing FeedbackPhuong nguyenHolt - Feb 23, 2018
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Do you think the laws are needed to make people recycle?
4 - Chen, first up, the Task 2 essay must always have 5 paragraphs composed of an opening, 3 body paragraphs,...
Lettersying_chenHolt - Feb 23, 2018
|Student Loan Debt, High Price to Pay For a Bright Future
3 - Claudia, this is not the sort of essay that is helped by telling a fictitious anecdote at the start....
Writing Feedbackcmartinez13Holt - Feb 23, 2018
|Hook em' Horns! Statement of Purpose - transfer into UT Austin essay
4 - @Holt @hanabanana Thank you guys so much, I updated it a little I'm still struggling a little on...
Undergraduatemaxiemussmaxiemuss - Feb 23, 2018
|The essay for CBEST about a rejection or defeat
3 - Thank you @ Holt for giving feedback. I have not passed the CBEST test yet, but it's just for...
Writing Feedbackbnilakshi101bnilakshi101 - Feb 23, 2018
|The accounting and finance diploma at LSE stands out to me - reasons and motives
Graduateays1805ays1805 - Feb 22, 2018
|My nursing education and interest in the Korean Government Scholarship Program
3 - Thank you so much for your advices I will fix my mistakes.And I think I should write with Korean...
ScholarshipKubra42Kubra42 - Feb 22, 2018
|KGSP - is a big opportunity to start over, when you think that life is over
7 - Thank you, i will definitely rewrite my statement, now i see that it was to emotional and indeed not...
ScholarshipLanaVaselLanaVasel - Feb 22, 2018
|How to Deal with Depression; Three bad influences
Writing FeedbackQiuChenbox_wizard - Feb 22, 2018
|Public order provision. Study in Australia will be more related to the Indonesian's context
Scholarshipismayatiismayati - Feb 22, 2018
|What it means to me? Essay on Leadership and influence - question for Chevening Fellowship
4 - Mohit, as far as I know, Chevening is asking for leadership examples in professional settings. Therefore, in my opinion...
Scholarshipmohit2k6123hanabanana - Feb 22, 2018
|Essay about the contrast between current generation and my parents generation - IELTS
Writing Feedbackahmed_kishkcmartinez13 - Feb 22, 2018
|I can learn a lot of good things from this great nation. KGSP scholarship 2018
4 - @Holt Hello, Mary Rose~ I have revised my personal statement essay, would you mind to review it? thank you...
Scholarshipyourbaeyourbae - Feb 21, 2018
|Descriptive essay: TEN MINUTES - a nuclear war scene topic
4 - @Holt Here is the revised version of this essay~ ((I'm quite worried that this turned out to be...
Writing Feedbackbox_wizardbox_wizard - Feb 21, 2018
|You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday, you realised you had left your wallet.
2 - Inderjeet, this letter sounds like you used a very bad translator program to write it. It almost sounds like...
LettersinderGTRHolt - Feb 21, 2018