|The benefits for Vietnam as a member of international organisations
3 - From my experience ,Your essay do not go straight to the main point but the content is good ....
Writing FeedbackNguyencki - Feb 20, 2023Panjasrose - Feb 22, 2023
|Select one thing you have focused on the most from the time you entered high school until now.
2 - You are using a personal insight to respond to what should be a community and social skills development response....
Undergraduatearisuw - Feb 21, 2023Holt - Feb 22, 2023
|IELTS 1: Number of visitors to Louvre, Vatican Museums, London Science Museum, and Shenzhen Museum
3 - There are some serious issues with your essay in my opinion.... 1. This line ..... Looking at the details...........to...
Writing FeedbackDat Nguyen - Feb 20, 2023rishabhk4896 - Feb 21, 2023
|Social Science - KOREAN GLOBAL SCHOLARSHIP - GOAL OF STUDY
4 - @tsyiaa99 Hey, I face the same problem while writing "study goal." I'd suggest you read some good articles...
Scholarshiptsyiaa99 - Feb 6, 2023Okjanu10 - Feb 21, 2023
|2023 GKS-G STUDY PLAN - VETERINARY MEDICINE MASTER'S DEGREE
3 - @mvorti Write in as much detail as possible and explain how you learned Hangul, step by step. As you...
Scholarshipmvorti - Feb 17, 2023Okjanu10 - Feb 21, 2023
|Growing up in the Solomon Islands - why did you choose your proposed course and institution*?
2 - This is not an appropriate response to the writing query. These are considered vague, nonganswers to the question. You...
ScholarshipPED65 - Feb 21, 2023Holt - Feb 21, 2023
|GKS-G Doctoral in Media and Communication - Goal of Study and Study Plan (Embassy Track)
Scholarshiphzal - Feb 19, 2023hzal - Feb 21, 2023
|TASK1: The given line graph illustrates the average carbon dioxide emissions per person, 1967-2007
3 - I feel the main problem with this report is underdeveloped and incorrect data. Example of undeveloped data..It moderately increased...
Writing FeedbackDat Nguyen - Feb 19, 2023rishabhk4896 - Feb 20, 2023
|Free time on my smartphone - Writing task 2: Direct question
3 - Merged: Redone Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time on smartphones. I've rewritten...
Writing Feedbackrishabhk4896 - Feb 10, 2023rishabhk4896 - Feb 20, 2023
|Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime
3 - Okay so there are many errors in your essay but most significant are these: Spelling errors.. these can cost...
Writing Feedbackdaidang869 - Feb 19, 2023rishabhk4896 - Feb 20, 2023
|TASK 2: Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems,
3 - You used " on the other hand" twice in two different paragraph. It might lead to misunderstanding...
Writing Feedbackduonghien - Feb 18, 2023Dat Nguyen - Feb 19, 2023
|Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our environment?
3 - Modern way of transaction via social networks may not a strong argument. Because online transaction based on e-banking system...
Writing Feedbackquoctinhdk25 - Feb 14, 2023Dat Nguyen - Feb 19, 2023
|"Depression" - An experience that has shaped my character
2 - Who placed the call? I know you are going for dramatics here but, dramatics without proper buildup just...
Writing Feedbackthaonhhi29 - Feb 19, 2023Holt - Feb 19, 2023
|Ielts writing task 2: Economic growth, environment damage
2 - The first paragraph is not completely developed. You did not present your clear opinion, either in support of one...
Writing FeedbackAndrew198 - Feb 18, 2023Holt - Feb 18, 2023
|IELTS WRITING PART 2: buy product made in other countries
2 - The prompt restatement will receive a failing score as it is not a prompt restatement but rather, the beginning...
Writing Feedbackzth - Feb 17, 2023Holt - Feb 18, 2023
|In the near future, car without drivers can be created. Do you think this development is positive?
2 - This essay would normally receive an automatic failing score because it does not meet the 250 minimum word count...
Writing FeedbackPanjasrose - Feb 17, 2023Holt - Feb 18, 2023
|Motivation Essay for studying MS in Architecture - Building Technology, TU DELFT
2 - When applying to an MSc program of this type, the reviewers will always prioritize candidates who have a professional...
Lettersmanikagarg - Feb 17, 2023Holt - Feb 18, 2023
|Vaping as an alternative to traditional smoking
2 - The introduction is simple enough and creates an interest on the part of the reader to learn more about...
Research Paperspranavanil47 - Feb 17, 2023Holt - Feb 17, 2023
|People are consuming more and more sugar-based drinks. Why? What can be done to reduce sugary drink
2 - Although you have managed to achieve a good word count in the essay, I am afraid the final score...
Writing Feedbacklinaa121 - Feb 17, 2023Holt - Feb 17, 2023
|IELTS WRITING PART 2: Printed newspapers - some people say we don't need them anymore
2 - The prompt restatement and writer's opinion is well developed. The thesis statements are clear to the examiner and fully...
Writing Feedbackmatchanh - Feb 16, 2023Holt - Feb 17, 2023
|IELTS 1: The given diagram demonstrates the figure for shops closing and opening from 2011 to 2018
Writing Feedbackanhnhat - Feb 12, 2023anhnhat - Feb 16, 2023
|Social vs academic qualifications - Ielts task 2
2 - The writing task gives you a full 1 hour to complete your tasks. 20 minutes for the first task,...
Writing Feedbackredchild - Feb 16, 2023Holt - Feb 16, 2023
|The main factors causing less productive agricultural land, and how it affects three world regions
2 - This is an automatic fail essay based on the 138/150 word count. When the word count minimum is not...
Writing Feedbacknguyenthiminh180 - Feb 15, 2023Holt - Feb 16, 2023
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (topic : international aids to poor countries)
3 - @Holt I wrote the essay with 2 reasons in 2 different paragraphs. I don't really understand your comment about...
Writing Feedbackdathao - Feb 14, 2023dathao - Feb 15, 2023
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the UK
3 - @Holt Thank you for replying to me! Your advice helps me a lottt. After reading your advice, I have...
Writing Feedbackhnathu - Feb 13, 2023hnathu - Feb 15, 2023
|Improving Further - GKS - G Korean Language Study Plan
ScholarshipOkjanu10 - Feb 14, 2023Okjanu10 - Feb 15, 2023
|The pie chart below shows the share of Oscar winners by film genre for 2003 and 2008.
2 - The number of pie charts and what sections each pie chart represents should be a part of the summary...
Writing Feedbackharleneeee - Feb 14, 2023Holt - Feb 15, 2023
|Commercial Law: How will my knowledge and skills to contribute to my country's development?
Scholarshipalinariana - Feb 9, 2023alinariana - Feb 14, 2023
|Student Council - a situation that demonstrates your ability to develop new relationships
3 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback. At first, I thought the point of the question was how can I...
Scholarshipusksblm315 - Feb 13, 2023usksblm315 - Feb 14, 2023
|WRITING TASK 1: Police budget sources and their use in 2017 and 2018
Writing FeedbackPnnm604092 - Feb 13, 2023Holt - Feb 14, 2023