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|The proportion of female members of parliament in 5 countries in Europe over a 12-year period
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2 - The first problem with this essay is that you over wrote. I understand that you will be taking the...
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2 - Okay, you misunderstood the prompt. The topic was about aid that rich countries give the poor countries to help...
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|Which books are best to read - science based or fiction?
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2 - The 400 word allotment of this essay should be used to explain how each course at each university will...
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2 - The essay should take a clear position right off the bat. Do you agree or disagree with wearing uniforms?...
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|IELTS 2 It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment
2 - Do not always rely on using "former" and "latter" when referencing groups of people or other situations where the...
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|IELTS Writing -- Are the older generations' ideas still useful nowadays?
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|Analyzing the Future of NCAA Athlete Compensation
2 - Good start. The analysis makes sense. It has a solid foundation in terms of hypothetical discussion and your factual...
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3 - Why does this essay sound like you ran it through a tremendously inaccurate language translation program? This sounds like...
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|Kindly review my Essay for AAS in Commercial law in Melbourne Law School
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|A street market in summer in a hot climate. Write a short descriptive paragraph.
2 - When you write a descriptive paragraph, you should use the present tense descriptive format. That way you can take...
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|Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school.
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|Nowadays, entering higher education at overseas has gained popularity
3 - You totally missed the point of the essay. You were being asked to deliver a personal opinion regarding the...
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|The High Renaissance - Leonardo da Vinci´s Mona Lisa. (Rough Draft)
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|It is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research
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|Millions of people have now the Internet access, surfing online has become a common thing
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|Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private
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|IELTS Writing 2 - adapting to the climate crisis rather than trying to prevent it from happening
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