|The quantities of goods moved using four kinds of means in the UK between 1974 and 2002
5 - dear @Abrahamlincoln, A few corrections from me.. Watch the grammar. In paragraph 1, The line graphs compare...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincolnnuradiapuspa - Feb 22, 2017
|Minimizing the traffic issue - proposed ways
7 - As mentioned, your introduction paraphrase should give your opinion for agree or disagree questionnaire. 2 or 3 rd...
Writing Feedbacknuradiapuspajaikrishna - Feb 22, 2017
|The bar chart indicates the figure of time spent in billions of minutes by UK people on phone calls
9 - Hai @Maitouyen282 These are few corrections from me. Hope it could be helpful :) 1. In paragraph...
Writing FeedbackMaitouyen282nuradiapuspa - Feb 22, 2017
|Define the highlights of your most crucial accomplishments or tasks inputs.
4 - As I mentioned in my previous response, your contribution should be something that has a personal meaning to you....
UndergraduateTrouvaille 05Holt - Feb 22, 2017
|Marriage in early adulthood
3 - @Holt Thank for your advice. It took me two hours to think about main ideas for this essay. I...
Writing Feedbackthichankemthichankem - Feb 22, 2017
|Emerging care system market for the elderly in Taiwan. SOP for Actuarial Science in the USA
3 - OK, I see. I will try it. thanks for your suggestion.[/b][/b]...
Graduaterobin963arobin963a - Feb 22, 2017
|Civil service in Korea. KGSP Self Introduction Content
20 - This is a good paragraph. It has a sneak peek into how you developed your point of view about...
EssaysgckiHolt - Feb 22, 2017
|This great impact of DNA for human being. SOP - Stuck in the Study Plan for KGSP Scholarship
7 - @Holt May I ask a question regarding study plan here? I will delete this if it wasn't allow. ...
ScholarshipCCA92Nitivat - Feb 22, 2017
|Artificial environments. Positive and negative sides of zoos
4 - Hi @adamrahimov Don't you think you need to switch the opinion paragraphs? It will flow better (even though it...
Writing Feedbackadamrahimovd2ny - Feb 22, 2017
|[REFERENCES LETTER] She has demonstrated an exceptional ability to grasp the rigorous demands of job
7 - Sehat, keep the continued balance in your referral letters. Always present one professional and one extra curricular / socio-civic...
Writing FeedbacksehatdinatiHolt - Feb 22, 2017
|Personal statement; I am applying to Pharmaceutical Analysis and QC one-year masters course
7 - Hanady, it would be best if you write a totally new essay instead. One that is better slanted towards...
ScholarshiphanadyzHolt - Feb 22, 2017
|My idea is about making SAMSUNG the only leading company in Africa
10 - If you will just change the way that you wrote the word Samsung from all upper case to first...
Scholarshipdawit359Holt - Feb 21, 2017
|Korean dramas and K-pop - letter of self introduction...KGSP scholarship
7 - @Holt like you guessed I still don't have any work experience nor internship. I also think lack of professional...
Scholarshipcj24cj24 - Feb 21, 2017
|Waterloo "reasons for choosing" essay - two portions answer
10 - Thanks a lot for your patience with me :D Writing isn't really my strong suit but I try to...
UndergraduateEiad21Eiad21 - Feb 21, 2017
|This is an essay for admission to an American university for masters in construction management.
29 - Like I said, this essay is good enough to submit. You have done your best to represent your intentions...
Graduateratan251294Holt - Feb 21, 2017
|I have a dominant character with good personality. CHEVENING ESSAY LEADERSHIP AND INFLUENCE QUESTION
6 - @BeautifulDay Dear Kenneth, please give me a significant input. The title even doesnt matter in Chevening, because we...
Scholarshipsehatdinatisehatdinati - Feb 21, 2017
|'all my sacrifices lead to a reward' - KGSP Graduate scholarship / Letter of self introduction
3 - @Holt Thank you so much! I'll do the changes you suggested me! I just have one question that I...
Scholarshipmolgumolgu - Feb 21, 2017
|500 WORD ESSAY EXPLAINING WHY YOU WANT TO STUDY IN FRANCE!
6 - You have to remove your fixation about the studies that you did in Canada. This is the constant issue...
ScholarshipadventureabroadHolt - Feb 21, 2017
|task2; The pros and cons of living longer for human being
4 - Hi Jing, I will admit that this is one of the better developed essays that I have come across...
Writing FeedbackAllen1988Holt - Feb 21, 2017
|Statement of purpose for Master's course in English Linguistics/ English Literatures and Cultures
3 - I am very grateful to you for your priceless advice. I will definitely follow it. Thank you...
Graduatealinakarimova714alinakarimova714 - Feb 20, 2017
|Reading has become less significant to Americans.
7 - @akbarmappiare Thank you so much for your feedback. Can you give some suggestions regarding smooth transition from one paragraph...
Writing FeedbackPKMPKM - Feb 20, 2017
|After finishing my postgraduate, I plan to go back to my current company - CHEVENING CAREER PLAN
3 - @Holt Dear Mary, I think so. I didnt do enough research to catch up what Chevening has...
Scholarshipsehatdinatisehatdinati - Feb 20, 2017
|CHEVENING ESSAY NETWORKING QUESTION: One of my most prominent character is extrovert
3 - @Holt Dear Mary, Thank you for your comment. I'll revise it soon, and send it here....
Scholarshipsehatdinatisehatdinati - Feb 20, 2017
|This figure illustrates some new construction in the town of Garlsdon
4 - @MH_tw Dear Deng, other than you miss many information from the figure, your words is only 146 though....
Writing FeedbackMH_twsehatdinati - Feb 20, 2017
|You took your family to a nearby restaurant. Disappointed with the meal and complain to manager
4 - @jaikrishna Dear Jaya, let me give some inputs, more less about the "writing." My name is Jaya...
Lettersjaikrishnasehatdinati - Feb 20, 2017
|"Move Forward' My Letter of Self-Introduction for KGSP
14 - Thank you again @Holt, you are amazing!...
ScholarshipNitivatNitivat - Feb 20, 2017
|Born in Mexico City, moved to United States at age of 8. KGSP Self Introduction for Graduate School
3 - Carina, your essay lacks focus and a clear purpose for your study. This is nothing but a highly confused...
ScholarshipYennicallHolt - Feb 20, 2017
|My career path is not straight. College Transfer Essay - Statement of Purpose
2 - Morgan, try to focus on the actual purpose behind the reason for your transfer. If you are transferring based...
UndergraduateMorgannhHolt - Feb 20, 2017
|I have grown up with a great passion for learning foreign languages - self-introduction letter; KGSP
5 - @Holt Last year, I have been chosen along with other 11 girls to have a special teaching trainning, and...
Scholarshipamelhopesamelhopes - Feb 19, 2017
|Planning to meet a stranger and asking him his interests.
3 - @Holt Thanks, Holt. Yes, putting the question mark is always an issue for me. I know we can still...
Lettersmastindersinghmastindersingh - Feb 19, 2017