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A prediction that drivers would be unnecessary in the future due to the development of technology

2 - Wrong word usage. The negative representation of merit is demerit. Contrasting features is not a normal representation for...

Writing FeedbackLamahaf - Nov 21, 2021Holt - Nov 22, 2021
Allowing to visibly carry a gun in public places

2 - Why? The discussion response is complete, but the thesis outline is messing. Clue in the reader as to...

Writing Feedbackdanghaneh - Nov 21, 2021Holt - Nov 22, 2021
All youngsters should do volunteer work in their leisure time to support the community?

2 - This is an incorrect response. The provided discussion instruction pertains to the extent of your (dis) agreement with...

Writing FeedbackMing Fuong - Nov 21, 2021Holt - Nov 22, 2021
Statement of Purpose of Masters in Miage By Course IKSEM Information Knowledge Systems Engineering

2 - In all honesty, I do not believe that the purpose for studies would be valid in the eyes of...

Scholarshiplenjoy - Nov 21, 2021Holt - Nov 22, 2021
WRITING TASK 1 - BAR CHART ABOUT DIVORCE RATES IN FINLAND AND SWEDEN FROM 2011 TO 2015

3 - hi Huy Vo, lemme help you to repharase introduction ... in Finland and Sweden, a period of...

Writing FeedbackHuy Vo - Nov 18, 2021irvan - Nov 21, 2021
The number of telephone calls minutes in Finland in three different categories (period of 9 years)

3 - @Holt thankyou for this valuable feedback...

Writing Feedbackirvan - Nov 14, 2021irvan - Nov 21, 2021
The average amount of carbon dioxide emitted per each individual person in four European countries

2 - Be mindful of the writing time deadline. Practice writing with a timer in an actual exam set-up. By doing...

Writing Feedbackquynhmai - Nov 20, 2021Holt - Nov 21, 2021
The bar chart compares the number of 15-year old students chose to study French and Japanese

2 - Selecting to study what? The summary must be clear about its reference to the age group in relation...

Writing FeedbackMai 123 - Nov 20, 2021Holt - Nov 21, 2021
Writing task 2 - A look into students poor behavior; parents support importance

2 - The prompt restatement is over presented to the point where the author already shares personal insights on the topic....

Writing FeedbackJIV - Nov 20, 2021Holt - Nov 21, 2021
The developments along Olive Drive before and after the construction of new facilities 1980-2010

2 - The writer opted to identify the changes based on the year representations of the urban plan and design presentations....

Writing Feedbacktrang12345 - Nov 19, 2021Holt - Nov 20, 2021
Discuss both view about learning with teacher and learn by internet

2 - This is a failing essay had this been an actual test. The prompt restatement + personal opinion is tremendously...

Writing Feedbackvannhan - Nov 19, 2021Holt - Nov 20, 2021
Writing task2 - Team/group activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities

2 - This is a personal reflection of the author. It is not an accurate prompt restatement. Kindly remember that...

Writing Feedbackellenchen - Nov 19, 2021Holt - Nov 20, 2021
Book review: Chapter 1 of Predictably Irrational

2 - The first chapter needs to offer a solid representation of the book and its author. The first paragraph should...

Book Reportsthuongnguyen259 - Nov 19, 2021Holt - Nov 20, 2021
Identify the adverse impacts of online learning and propose solutions.

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The importance of learning English

3 - It is not recommended to describe a topic or explain it to somebody while comparing it with other topics....

Writing Feedbackcud - Nov 17, 2021lenjoy - Nov 19, 2021
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE for Vehicle Engineering

3 - Thanks for the review. I would take all your advices into consideration and arrange a better SOP. Regards....

Graduatelenjoy - Nov 4, 2021lenjoy - Nov 19, 2021
There is an argument about whether we should protect all the fauna or not

2 - When you are asked to give both views and provide your opinion, the writing method of the task totally...

Writing Feedbackministran - Nov 18, 2021Holt - Nov 19, 2021
[IELTS Task1] The proportion of women's and men's driving test pass rates in one Asian country

2 - Go for a more complex sentence structure in relation to the time measurements. Itis more impressive to say" ......

Writing Feedbackclairewuwu - Nov 17, 2021Holt - Nov 18, 2021
Discuss the merits and dismerits of online learning among students in the context of COVID 19.

2 - As this is an advantage versus disadvantage discussion, you are not obliged to give a personal opinion. In...

Writing Feedbackmyphan123456 - Nov 17, 2021Holt - Nov 18, 2021
A survey about how people in five Australian cities bought their coffee and tea (IELTS 1)

2 - Never indicate an image position to help you avoid any referencing errors. Always assume that the reader does...

Writing FeedbackAgnes Yang - Nov 17, 2021Holt - Nov 18, 2021
[IELTS task 1] The line chart compares the demand for 4 different types of meat and fish

4 - @Holt Thank you very much! I have combined my writing style from many sources, and I've always tried to...

Writing Feedbackchristian281 - Nov 14, 2021christian281 - Nov 17, 2021
IELTS 1: How much waste was collected by a recycling centre over a period of 5 consecutive years

2 - The presentation is mostly acceptable except, the writer did not proofread the report. There is a missing period at...

Writing Feedbackbinhan - Nov 16, 2021Holt - Nov 17, 2021
#ielts Some people think that changing jobs periodically is good. What is your opinion?

2 - The first few errors that caught my eye in the first paragraph are the LR and GRA mistakes. she...

Writing Feedbackbangbang83 - Nov 16, 2021Holt - Nov 17, 2021
My IELTS Practice Essay: I really need to improve my work on the gap year

2 - You are not writing a mesearch paper. You are writing a personal opinion paper of no more than 300...

Writing Feedbackemm234 - Nov 16, 2021Holt - Nov 17, 2021
Sustainable Development Goals: A Law and Economics Perspective

2 - First, you will have to familiarize yourself with the UN- SDGP goals for your country. This is a highly...

Essaysakbutt - Nov 16, 2021Holt - Nov 17, 2021
[IELTS Task 1] The chart shows the percentage of females aged 16-25 in a particular country

2 - For the summary overview. the proper approach would have been to describe itas a comparison of players vessels watchers.That...

Writing Feedbackstevehere - Nov 16, 2021Holt - Nov 17, 2021
Writing task 2: The main reasons to make people spend most their time working

5 - Thanks for your advice! I will read more news to collect ideas....

Writing Feedbackquynhchi61 - Nov 8, 2021quynhchi61 - Nov 17, 2021
Statement of Purpose - Parsons School of Design - MPS Communication Design - reasons for applying

2 - The main problem with this essay is the way it focuses a majority of the discussion on your background....

GraduateKotekSroka - Nov 15, 2021Holt - Nov 16, 2021
Describe an experience which talks a lot about you

2 - The essay that you wrote best suits the personal topic prompt. The events as you relate it do not...

Undergraduatebriannah16 - Nov 15, 2021Holt - Nov 16, 2021
The chart reperesents the amount of males and females passing their driving test

2 - First time Task 1 writers tend to limit their word count to exactly or just a little over the...

Writing Feedbacktranhin - Nov 15, 2021Holt - Nov 16, 2021