|My personal statement of purpose-study plan for applying for KOREAN government scholarships program
3 - Nesterenko, the KGSP program has specific essay requirements, a letter of introduction, a statement of purpose, and a study...
ScholarshipKimMaruHolt - Jan 9, 2018
|I've got a ticket in my hand. So, I can go anywhere? My choice would be Madagascar.
2 - Markus, surely you can be more adventurous than this. If Madagascar is so special to you then you should...
Undergraduatemarkus12345Holt - Jan 9, 2018
|IELTS: you work at home and have a problem with the equipment that use for job, write letter to supp
5 - Your letter should follow the structure : 1) write the purpose why you are writing the letter 2) Explain...
Writing Feedbackkalnt87Tanmayzz - Jan 9, 2018
|The most important thing to me is being able to spend time with my family. UBC essay
3 - Aaron, using your family as a reference to what is important to you is incomplete. It is not your...
UndergraduateAaronTranHolt - Jan 9, 2018
|Lord of the Flies and Macbeth - essay on a comparison between 2 novels
4 - Conor, I'm not sure if you will be able to write an appropriate essay using these 2 characters because...
Book ReportsWhiteWolfHolt - Jan 9, 2018
|My SOP/personal statement/achievements/interests for my postgraduate application
4 - Here is how I prepared it within the suggested structure and please I need your comments. Thanks in advance....
GraduateHiwi_LifeHiwi_Life - Jan 9, 2018
|UBC Personal Profile. Explain the role you played and what you learned in the process.
3 - Warisha, you should try to avoid duplicating information that you have already stated in a previous response to a...
UndergraduateWarishaHolt - Jan 9, 2018
|Short essay on one page statment about something awsome.
3 - guan, the main problem with this short essay is that you are showing a lack of control over sentence...
UndergraduatemickeyguanHolt - Jan 9, 2018
|UBC Personal Profile: Explain How You Responded To A Problem
Undergraduateyounmassyounmass - Jan 8, 2018
|The adopted policy of early education of foreing languages
4 - Thanks a lot for your clear and detailed instruction for my writing! It is really helpful for me to...
Writing Feedbackyunrong49yunrong49 - Jan 8, 2018
|The only space available for building new homes is generally in the countryside
4 - Hi Kardy, I would like to offer a closing conclusion for your reference. To conclude, regional places provide...
Writing FeedbackkardymoonJimmy879873 - Jan 7, 2018
|My reaction to this article
Writing FeedbackMiKiDeMiKiDe - Jan 7, 2018
|A letter to the homestay host family. Ielts task 1.
LettersJimmy879873Jimmy879873 - Jan 7, 2018
|Motivation Letter for European Master in Law & Economics Programme
2 - Adil, you must remove the dialogue at the start of the motivation letter. This is a formal letter requesting...
Writing FeedbacknemezidusHolt - Jan 7, 2018
|Why we are producing more and more rubbish? Most of the waste are the plastic bags.
6 - Hi Tanmay, the closing paragraph is for you to wrap up all of your supporting points that you have...
Writing FeedbackTanmayzzJimmy879873 - Jan 7, 2018
|Motivation Letter for Information Technology MSc program in Germany
3 - Thank you Holt for your correction and comments. I will revise the letter as per your comments and...
LettersSamer ZekrySamer Zekry - Jan 7, 2018
|Help me revise my answers to the 5 questions asked by the UMSI（User Experience Program）
3 - Hi Mary, Thank you so much for the advice and examples. They inspire me a lot!! Actually, I also...
Graduaterobyrobyrobyroby - Jan 7, 2018
|"Stan... is something else" - UBC Personal Profile : Describing myself
2 - Stanslous, your second sentence is a run on. It is also too long. Divide that presentation into 2 sentences...
UndergraduateStan_aHolt - Jan 7, 2018
|Lafayette's rigorous economics program emphasizing on the global contemporary issues attracts me.
2 - Hien, do not close this essay with a question. Are you seriously expecting the reviewer to respond to you?...
UndergraduateMrsOngHolt - Jan 7, 2018
|Artists, poets and musicians are not as important, as lawyers, doctors or engineers
Writing FeedbackKhushbooVohraKhushbooVohra - Jan 6, 2018
|Talented people are better off working overseas IELTS writing task 2
Writing FeedbackPeterBrownMrsOng - Jan 6, 2018
|Lafayette College Supplement: Why Lafayette?
4 - Here are some of my suggestions. You should not tell Lafayette wasn't the first school you researched. This will...
UndergraduateinesanleuMrsOng - Jan 6, 2018
|UBC Personal Profile: Tell us about who you are?
2 - Warisha, this is a very uninteresting essay because you practically approached it from a bullets presentation in a question...
UndergraduateWarishaHolt - Jan 6, 2018
|"A different language is a different vision of life". My vision of life changed in the USA
3 - Marta, what exactly is the prompt that you are responding to? I don't really understand what the point of...
Undergraduatezabka10Holt - Jan 6, 2018
|Transfer Application: Community college to VA Tech
2 - Sahar, the most effective transfer application essay always contains a comparison of the education that you received in your...
UndergraduateApples19Holt - Jan 6, 2018
|My never-ending search for learning. Scad Graduate Admission Statement of Purpose
3 - Marcela, while this essay showcases your high regard and interest in your major, there is no real accomplishment to...
GraduatemarcelapinheiroHolt - Jan 6, 2018
|University of Pennsylvania supplement: What are you gonna do here?
2 - Wenbo, this is already a very long response statement. Don't you have a word limit on it? I feel...
UndergraduateUltimaWeaponHolt - Jan 6, 2018
|My Dickinson's supp essay; 'unique program through the liberal-arts lens'
UndergraduateMrsOngMrsOng - Jan 6, 2018
|Anyone feel free to Critique my Waterloo AIF for Management Engineering - application form
3 - Thanks so much for your advice. I have been trying to got proper advice from peers but most kept...
UndergraduateArcticWolfArcticWolf - Jan 6, 2018
|Art Institute of Charlotte Essay; career goals in connection with the education at AI
3 - @Holt (please make it Urgent for a new review, thank you!) Hello and thanks for your extremely constructive reply!...
UndergraduateTristinRussellTristinRussell - Jan 6, 2018