|Finance and accounting - Personal Statement for NUS/NTU/SMU undergrad
2 - The essay needs to focus on one particular aspect of interest and its development on your part. For this...
UndergraduateVidushi - Sep 16, 2021Holt - Sep 17, 2021
|International students in the UK attending and achieving second or even higher class degrees
4 - First of all, I would like to understand where this note was written. This is definitely not an article,...
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|Task 1 The results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in Australia
3 - In my personal opinion, I think using the word "illustrate" would be a poor choice when talking about...
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|Children's Literature, Media and Culture (CLMC) - Erasmus Mundus Scholarship Essay
4 - Merged: My Second Revision of Erasmus Mundus Personal Statement (CLMC) Hello, I am Soca from Indonesia, and...
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|The most wanted destinations for British travellers and their purposes of travelling abroad
2 - Avoid the temptation of a run - on sentence when writing the summary overview. The rule of thumb is...
Writing Feedbackmonicaaa0017 - Sep 14, 2021Holt - Sep 16, 2021
|The analysis regarding the income of coffee and bananas in five different areas between 1999 & 2004
2 - Incorrect. There are 2 seperate tables presented for this report. This is automatically a 4 paragraph report due...
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|[KGPP] PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR UNDERGRATUATED SCHOLARSHIP - BUSINESS ADMINISTRATION
2 - There is a disconnection between gender discrimination and your ambition. Mostly because, for all the national significance of your...
Undergraduatekaitlyn280123 - Sep 15, 2021Holt - Sep 16, 2021
|IELTS 2; What is the most appropriate place for children to study and develop - a school or home?
3 - For the conclusion you can say Although (...) method, attending schools is a way better because children can...
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|CHARACTERISTIC OF LEADER (LEADERSHIP AND INFLUENCE ESSAY FOR CHEVENING SCHOLARSHIP)
7 - @nitakajole Hi, I think your leadership essay is good, but I haven't been able to find an example of...
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|LEADERSHIP IS NOT A TITLE BUT AN ACTION - CHEVENING LEADERSHIP ESSAY
5 - @monicaaa0017 Hi Monica, in my opinion, the experiences you have described have illustrated how the leadership factor is there,...
Scholarshipmonicaaa0017 - Sep 8, 2021Socapanggiring28 - Sep 15, 2021
|More Money Should Be Spent On Adult Education Than on Children's Education.
2 - The topic begs the writer to consider the importance of education based on the age of the learner. The...
Writing Feedbacktrypheenee - Sep 14, 2021Holt - Sep 15, 2021
|Preserving friendships with our old friends or finding new friends?
2 - Well, the writer definitely makes a convincing arguement for keeping old friends and its importance to the social development...
Writing Feedbacksina_toefl - Sep 14, 2021Holt - Sep 15, 2021
|FINANCIAL CRIME INVOLIVING IDENTITY THEFT IS INCREASING
2 - While the essay meets the word requirement, it does not meet the paragraph / response format scoring expectations. This...
Writing Feedbackheounin - Sep 14, 2021Holt - Sep 15, 2021
|[WRITING TASK 1] The table shows the export values of various products in 2009 and 2010.
4 - I suggest that you replace "categories of clothing and manufacturing" with "clothing and manufacturing categories"...
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|Many people think that fast food companies should not be allowed to advertise while others disagree
Writing Feedbackkhanhdang2001 - Sep 11, 2021Goldengoat - Sep 14, 2021
|TOPIC: What causes young people, especially university students, to feel negative?
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|WRITING TASK 2: Should government funding be used for new house instead of restoring old building ?
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|Money parents spent on their children's sporting activities and how many kids participated in sports
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|The global water use and the water expenditure in Brazil and Democratic Republic of Congo
3 - @Holt i don't think my coherence is bad, in the first chat, i illustrate the diffenrent period of the...
Writing Feedbackhoangdepzai3904 - Sep 9, 2021hoangdepzai3904 - Sep 14, 2021
|The statistic of ticket buying online based on age and how the internet was access in 3 countries
3 - If you want to give a comparison, you should compare between two variables only. For example, you can talk...
Writing Feedbackgreencoconut - Sep 13, 2021monicaaa0017 - Sep 14, 2021
|PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR KGSP/GKS undergraduate Scholarship/ Mass Communication Major
2 - The applicant is applying for the wrong undergraduate course. Rather than Mass communications, he should be applying as a...
Undergraduatehaving100issues - Sep 13, 2021Holt - Sep 14, 2021
|BEGINNER-WRITING TASK 1: Recycling process of aluminium cans
5 - I think for the introduction you can say The diagram gives the information of the process of how aluminium...
Writing Feedbackhominhthu15 - Sep 7, 2021monicaaa0017 - Sep 14, 2021
|The Importance of owning a house
2 - There are 2 seperate sentence ideas here. This run-on is not good for the idea clarity in the...
Writing FeedbackDieulinhngoc27 - Sep 12, 2021Holt - Sep 13, 2021
|An aging population is one of the most alarming issues among the countries in this day and age
2 - The response format of the essay does not relate to the orginal discussion topic or discussion instructions. The presentation...
Writing FeedbackAntoshi123 - Sep 12, 2021Holt - Sep 13, 2021
|Why owning a home rather than renting one is important for people? Is this negative or positive?
2 - The prompt restatement veers away from the orginal presentation because, rather than simply restating the topic, the writer has...
Writing Feedbacktuna0709 - Sep 11, 2021Holt - Sep 13, 2021
|What is an effective life?
2 - The essay does not make its intention clear to the reader. Is the point to define an effective life...
Undergraduatesinojisak02 - Sep 11, 2021Holt - Sep 13, 2021
|TASK 2; The idea that people should have their own house instead of renting one
3 - I think your whole idea was correct but the way you deliver the idea was incorrect and not in...
Writing FeedbackDungBui - Sep 7, 2021monicaaa0017 - Sep 12, 2021
|Help with common app essay idea - my name as a challenge I faced
3 - I could say, your initial idea can be anything at will. Your unusual name might work just as well...
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|One of the most increasingly ubiquitous trends today is online shopping
2 - - Merits and drawbacks are in plural form. Therefore the plural form of the pronoun "this" must be...
Writing Feedbackgiang12345 - Sep 10, 2021Holt - Sep 11, 2021
|Personal Statement for KGSP Undergrad '22- The inscrutability [of economics] is perhaps not unintent
2 - It is best to avoid using quotations to explain yourself in the essay. The reviewer does not need to...
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