|Extensive Networking Open many doors for personal and professional growth
2 - Your network should support your career progression. The networks need to be developed via seminars, conferences attended, training participated...
Scholarshipgatluakdthon - Oct 12, 2020Holt - Oct 13, 2020
|Formed not born - Leadership Experience - Chevening Essay
5 - Hi! I would start with the second paragraph and then explain what Leadership means to you, that could be...
Scholarshipdsari1602 - Oct 12, 2020enjoplin - Oct 13, 2020
|Struggling to answer UBC personal profile prompts because of my personal circumstance.
UndergraduateDragonlady - Oct 12, 2020Dragonlady - Oct 13, 2020
|Focus, responsibility, attitude - leadership and influence (Chevening)
7 - Hi, Should definitely put less focus on teamwork and focus on what you were able to accomplish. Probably...
Scholarshipdhienie - Sep 23, 2020kte3005 - Oct 12, 2020
|Scholarship Help--------Erasmus + Smart Cities and Communities Motivation letter
4 - Dear all, i write my revision below, and need your kind responses, thank you This letter expresses my...
Scholarshipkakikunadh - Oct 9, 2020kakikunadh - Oct 12, 2020
|Motivation to Create Sustainable Environment - Chevening Studying in the UK Essay
3 - You have not explained how your undergraduate studies have prepared you to take on more challenging classes as an...
Scholarshipimhana - Oct 10, 2020Holt - Oct 12, 2020
|Writing TASK1- The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007
2 - Use the present time frame reference for this essay since you are summarizing (not summarized) the report at the...
Writing Feedbacksooooo314 - Oct 12, 2020Holt - Oct 12, 2020
|Personal Statement for IAESTE Mechanical Engineering Internship
3 - Wow , your essay is very insightful, well stated and detailed . Hope you aren't asked to submit some...
GraduateLordAli - Oct 11, 2020IntegrityFaj001 - Oct 12, 2020
|Personal Statement for Uk University - Consulting Company Experience
2 - You have not written a personal statement. This is a curriculum vitae. It is not considered a proper personal...
Undergraduateabdullahmo - Oct 11, 2020Holt - Oct 12, 2020
|Single-gender vs. Mixed-gender schools
4 - Clearly, dividing boys and girls demands more educational expense on facilities- How? This point is not clear in your...
Writing Feedbackparadis_149 - Oct 11, 2020Preeti gupta - Oct 12, 2020
|Inspiring people to search for the common good and making a positive effect in our personal growth
4 - @imhana Hi! Thank you for your feedback, I will try to be more specific with my skills. Also,...
ScholarshipJuan_J_JC - Oct 9, 2020Juan_J_JC - Oct 11, 2020
|Team Work is the best relationship - Networking skills for Chevening scholarship
3 - The grammer and the style of the essay is close to be professional, One the other hand the references...
ScholarshipZainab Eid - Oct 3, 2020Ali Elias - Oct 11, 2020
|Essay for MasterCard Foundation Scholarship at University of Edinburgh in leadership skills
4 - @Holt please Holt, can I ignore the introduction paragraph in leadership essay? or it is necessary needed .. thanks...
ScholarshipMessiah - Oct 10, 2020newchevening - Oct 11, 2020
|What I think the world will be like in 100 years
4 - thank u so muchhhh actually my limitation is that i am asian so my english is probably not very...
Speechesreichardine - Oct 10, 2020reichardine - Oct 11, 2020
|Should parents let their children decide the job they will do in the future? What's your opinion?
Writing FeedbackPlagg - Oct 11, 2020Holt - Oct 11, 2020
|Leadership as an IT Specialist - Leadership skills for Chevening scholarship
Scholarshipdanigouken - Oct 10, 2020Holt - Oct 11, 2020
|The average number of students per class in primary and secondary schools in six regions by 2006
3 - Actually, the only error you made was that you said the comparison was based on a world average when...
Writing Feedbackamira11545 - Oct 10, 2020Holt - Oct 11, 2020
|WRITING TASK 1 The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 19
NEW - total world population - analysis of the chart The given bar graph provides information regarding the proportion of...
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|The Dangers of Putting Too Much Pressure on Kids
5 - First, there must be no contractions (like ''couldn't'') in an academic essay since it is formal writing. Second, I...
Writing Feedbackblueberry_vn - Oct 8, 2020paradis_149 - Oct 11, 2020
|IELTS PART 2- Being a well-known personality - benefits or disadvantages?
3 - because your 2nd paragraph only has 2 reasons, instead of using firstly, secondly, I suggest using For example, Furthermore....
Writing Feedbackaxr - Oct 2, 2020thphuong1911 - Oct 11, 2020
|Writing task 2: Is it good for school and university students to take part in a part-time job?
6 - A part-time job can help ... They could improve their time ... --> these sentences seem do not link...
Writing Feedbacktieumylinh - Oct 3, 2020thphuong1911 - Oct 11, 2020
|Writing task 2: Release auto-driving vehicles. Advantage or Disavantage?
7 - Following are my feedbacks: - 2nd paragraph, you should add the topic sentence such as there are a variety...
Writing FeedbackDoanloc - Oct 7, 2020thphuong1911 - Oct 11, 2020
|WHETHER WHAT CHILDREN WATCH ON TV OR THE AMOUNT OF TIME SPENDING ON IT CAN AFFECT THE BAHAVIOR
3 - You did a great job by addressing all the questions in the task. However, I suspect you should work...
Writing Feedbackstudyingabroad - Oct 8, 2020amira11545 - Oct 10, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF INCREASES IN LIFE EXPECTANCY
3 - Hi 1st paragraph, you mentioned "this trend". I suggest you should have short description of what this trend is...
Writing FeedbackSophie1108 - Oct 8, 2020thphuong1911 - Oct 10, 2020
|Job Satisfaction or Salary - IELTS Task 2
4 - Hi, Your writing's very good. I just have some minors feedback. First of all, I would expect you give...
Writing Feedbackmngyn - Oct 9, 2020thphuong1911 - Oct 10, 2020
|Common App Essay - Prompt 4 "how I defeated my social anxiety"
3 - With the limited word count that you were provided, it is impossible to accommodate a highly intricate explanation of...
Undergraduateaklflol - Oct 9, 2020Holt - Oct 10, 2020
|Discussion about men and women parenting skills ( IELTS )
3 - You have written the right number of words to get maximum scoring considerations for this essay. However, you still...
Writing Feedbackkhue2211 - Oct 8, 2020Holt - Oct 9, 2020
|Numerous criminals have been seen to re-offend. Give causes and solutions.
2 - Your second paragraph is too long. You should only write within the 275-290 word parameter. You have written 327...
Writing Feedbackgin 279 - Oct 8, 2020Holt - Oct 9, 2020
|Autobiography about myself - for university scholarship
2 - This is an excessively long essay. I am sure that you were provided with a minimum and maximum word...
Undergraduatehuean217 - Oct 8, 2020Holt - Oct 9, 2020
|Career plan in consulting and digital business in the long run - my chevening essay
2 - Stop referring to research links in the essay that is irrelevant to the reviewer. Since this is a Chevening...
Scholarshipvuyunzokta - Oct 8, 2020Holt - Oct 8, 2020