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2 - Linh, when you write the opening statement, you need to make sure that you accurately reconstruct the original prompt...
Writing Feedbacktunglinh0907Holt - Aug 14, 2017
|Some people think that the government have the duty to ensure its citizens have a healthy diet...
Writing Feedbacksinhchocuatt - Aug 14, 2017
|One interest that makes me different from other students
5 - hi I think your essay is good and full of interesting stories. It would be better to include your...
ScholarshipMartin101tunglinh0907 - Aug 14, 2017
|Common App 2018: Accomplishment, event or realization that sparked a period of personal growth
3 - Thank you so much for the advice! I will definitely take it into consideration as I make revisions....
UndergraduateSazy1022Sazy1022 - Aug 13, 2017
|"the act of leading a group of people" - Leadership. Essay for Chevening application
4 - @Benji31 Truth be told, that was a good essay; well structured and presented but I would go with...
ScholarshipBENJI31Bankyfolarin - Aug 13, 2017
|[IELTS] - Larger shopping areas or corner shops?
2 - Cu, your essay is not clearly focused on the discussion. The location being discussed is a shopping mall, not...
Writing Feedbackcuthilananh2000Holt - Aug 13, 2017
|Different attributes of men and women at work
Writing Feedbackchocuattchocuatt - Aug 13, 2017
|The proportion of active Australian citizens in different age groups and sex. [IELTS]
Writing FeedbackAkairoi0213Holt - Aug 13, 2017
|[IELTS Task 2] ...reward members of staff...by giving them extra money...
Writing FeedbackAudrey01Audrey01 - Aug 13, 2017
|[TOEFL]Some people consider that our life is more complex than it was in the past
3 - @Holt Happy to see you again, I say this because after the first you read my article titled as...
Writing FeedbackRoman123Roman123 - Aug 13, 2017
|Ielts task 2 | Health (The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems)
4 - Ngan, your essay presentation needs work. The opening paragraph does not provide an accurate outline as required for the...
Writing FeedbackDinaDinhHolt - Aug 12, 2017
|[Toefl] an effective leader should try to make others part of the decision making process
Writing FeedbackRoman123Roman123 - Aug 12, 2017
|[IELTS Task 1] the trends of the accessibility of current technology in homes in the U.K.
Writing Feedbackzealzeal - Aug 12, 2017
|Idolization and its effects
3 - Linh, this is not a comparison essay. This is a singular opinion essay as indicated by the prompt instruction...
Writing Feedbacktunglinh0907Holt - Aug 12, 2017
|I've been living in a bungalow my whole life - influenced environment
6 - Hi, I personally think your essay is good. However, there are a few grammar mistakes in your essay such...
ScholarshipMartin101tunglinh0907 - Aug 12, 2017
|The pie chart compares the proportion of energy production in four different energy sources
3 - Abu, when you write the summary overview, always make sure that you do it as a complete paragraph that...
Writing Feedbackabubakar07Holt - Aug 12, 2017
|My leadership twofolds my professional and social life.
3 - Leadership requires a deep commitment in order to lead team members towards development. I am a kind of leader...
ScholarshipAlereAlere - Aug 11, 2017
|Task 1 Ielts: Bar graphs about the sales of music albums
4 - I can only suggest you to improve visuals of statistical graphs by creating them in microsoft.com/en-gb/store/b/office because they looks...
Writing Feedbacktran14ulanter - Aug 11, 2017
|NYU Tisch Dramatic Essay - "Hear My Notes"
7 - @Hiddengrace Thank you so much. This is reallly helping my story and also my story telling capabilities. I never...
UndergraduateKiera9473Kiera9473 - Aug 11, 2017
|[IELTS Task 2]Should museums charge for admission
Writing Feedbackmtnnnntmmtnnnntm - Aug 11, 2017
|Begin learning foreign language in primary school, advantages and disadvantages?
3 - @Holt Thank you for your comment. I will acquire and I will write better at next essay. Thank a...
Writing Feedbackminsamminsam - Aug 11, 2017
|Should a city try to preserve its old buildings or replace them with modern buildings?
4 - Here are a number of errors made in the essay. 1) Incomplete sentences. 2) Too simple overview....
Writing Feedbackminhphuccttvtran14 - Aug 11, 2017
|Everyone should become vegetarian
Writing FeedbackAndreiWindytran14 - Aug 11, 2017
|The emissions of carbon dioxide (CO2) in metric tonnes per person [Ielts]
4 - @wuchunhung0927 Hi. You should have given your essay a second look when you succeeded in posting your thread. Images...
Writing Feedbackwuchunhung0927LadyOfClockwork - Aug 11, 2017
|Essay about the punishment for children
3 - Chan, your essay is not very understandable. The English sentences that you developed are not coherent and lack a...
Writing Feedbackvincent0801Holt - Aug 11, 2017
|The Story of ANOTHER placement test (Essay for the Common Application)
2 - Peter, could you just summarize the story about the test? It became the focal point of the essay that...
UndergraduatepeterkHolt - Aug 11, 2017
|[IELTS TAKS 2] CAMBRIDGE 12 TEST 5 - INFORMATION SHARING
4 - It is considered by some that accessing to scientific research, business and academic world should be free while there...
Writing Feedbackhailunghailung - Aug 11, 2017
|Do you agree or disagree with the following comment? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth.
3 - Thao, grammar issues, which are minimal in consideration, aside, this is a very well thought out and defended essay....
Writing Feedbackitsjjj16Holt - Aug 11, 2017
|IELTS Essay task 2: Food can be produced cheaper if we use...
Writing Feedbacknamchun99namchun99 - Aug 11, 2017
|Early cultivation of children's interest in learning second language
2 - Lucy, this essay is very confusing to read. You failed to properly paraphrase the prompt requirements in the opening...
Writing FeedbackLucy KaoHolt - Aug 11, 2017