|Why do you want to attend one of the military service academies?
2 - Isabel, I have a tip for you. Try to relate your desire to help amputees with the experience on...
UndergraduateIzRiveraHolt - Apr 19, 2017
|I choose Subsea Engineering at the Curtin University, because...
2 - Nurul, there needs to be an equal discussion coverage of both the reasons why you chose to enroll in...
ScholarshipNurulNavalHolt - Apr 19, 2017
|I choose to further my education in Canada high quality education and security
4 - Nguyen, just summarize your educational background and experience in one paragraph. This essay will be presented to the visa...
Undergraduatethanhhien271Holt - Apr 19, 2017
|To Kill a Mockingbird Essay - Atticus's Advice
3 - Johnny, this is an opinion essay so there absolutely no reason for you to reference any outside sources. Therefore,...
Book ReportsnootnootHolt - Apr 19, 2017
|Compare/Contrast Research Paper, help with grammar/conventions, only present tense and no 1st person
2 - Caitlin, you need to change up the use of the word "perpetrator" and "abuse" in your essay. Get a...
Research PaperscntoniazzoHolt - Apr 19, 2017
|Introduction - The influence of celebrity worship on college students
2 - Vanessa. the thesis statement and purpose of the study is not really clear in the opening statement. What is...
Research PapersvanessaaleungHolt - Apr 19, 2017
|IELTS TASK 2 exclusion of women in certain jobs
2 - @ayat_555 I think you need to change your introduction paragraph. The first sentence should be the topic of your...
Writing Feedbackayat_555adib_yz - Apr 19, 2017
|Future IELTS exam preparation. The graph compares the number of visits to two new music sites on web
3 - @akbarmappiare Thank you very much. I didn't realize those big mistakes in the writing. I spent money on a...
Writing Feedbackdilinkdilink - Apr 19, 2017
|Master of Environment - proposed course and institution for Australian Awards Scholarship
3 - @Holt Hello Holt, thanks for your feedback. Actually the next question in supporting statements needed in the scholarship application...
Scholarshipfillingthedotsfillingthedots - Apr 18, 2017
|An individual beyond grades and test scores; Personal Statement for Graduate Admission for Korea
Graduateeiriashhareiriashhar - Apr 18, 2017
|I decided to do running - there are many advantages of running to our body
2 - Weijjiang, you should focus on only one aspect of running for your essay instead of trying to develop a...
Writing FeedbackWeijiang123Holt - Apr 18, 2017
|Which media do you prefer? Why? 100-125 WORDS
2 - Hello Ismael, your sentences in this have needed improvement. If you wanna answer the question, please you don't give...
Writing Feedbackismaelvrakbarmappiare - Apr 17, 2017
|The typical destinations for students after graduating. IELTS Writing Task 1: Comparing the chart
Writing FeedbackFarinda UrfahFarinda Urfah - Apr 16, 2017
|Writing IELTS task 1 - Inflow of Foreign Workers in Australia 1992-2001
2 - Hi Muhammad Rinul, I have read your writing closely.Honestly, you have needed some improvements to finalize this writing. ...
Writing Feedbackmrfwijayaakbarmappiare - Apr 16, 2017
|My reasons of choosing master of health management.
6 - Thanks you all indeep for your comments and suggestion. I will rewrite my essay with all of your suggestions....
UndergraduateMyo ChoMyo Cho - Apr 16, 2017
|The value and quality of women's work should be more appreciated
3 - Ngai, you have inaccurately discussed the paraphrased statement. The opening statement needs to only deliver your understanding of the...
Writing FeedbackhoiovoHolt - Apr 16, 2017
|The prevalence of Western clothes.
Writing Feedbackfrenchfriesmrfwijaya - Apr 16, 2017
|Destination most of students after graduation
3 - Please see my correction of some grammatical errors in the first two paragraphs. ... show about the ratio of...
Writing FeedbackMuhammad Afifaz23 - Apr 16, 2017
|Research on Ethics of Cloning (Wooly Mammoth)
2 - John, you are trying to discuss too many topics all at once, without giving yourself the benefit of a...
Research PapersJoSmoBoBoHolt - Apr 16, 2017
|Discuss the disappointments, failure, or risks in your life so far and your responses to them
5 - @Holt Hmmm I see . The problem is that I don't have any other stories that talks about disappointments...
ScholarshipBluemoomBluemoom - Apr 16, 2017
|How to Deal With Angry People Essay
2 - Melissa, this paper is a bit confusing to read. At the start, it sounds like you are writing an...
Research PapersmelluvsuuHolt - Apr 16, 2017
|Specific examples of dealing with difficult situation, providing a good change
4 - Ayu, let's get one thing straight, the issue you are supposed to present has to do with your most...
ScholarshipmissayufitriHolt - Apr 16, 2017
|IELTS writing task 2: Poor memory in modern life
Writing FeedbackLinkKiki31415 - Apr 16, 2017
|Translation of a short movie to my little brother at school
5 - Bluemoon I have not practiced writing or speaking in English since the last August So I forgot everything ...
Writing FeedbackSawsanaSawsana - Apr 15, 2017
|Choosing an university which is far from home or in your country? (write a compare & contrast essay)
Writing FeedbacksamanhbBluemoom - Apr 15, 2017
|Question about if it is not recommended to argue an idea that isn't very dominant in a book.
3 - @Holt Thank you for that input. Yeah, I think so too. I guess I've ruined myself with the two...
EssaysWontonWonton - Apr 15, 2017
|The Evolution of Board Games and Their Future in Society
5 - Maybe in the conclusion you should add some personal opinion (could be written in a passive voice) whether it's...
Research PapersKKearneyRich Monte - Apr 15, 2017
|Driving offenders must face consequences
2 - Muhammad, the English sentence structure of the essay is not very good. It usually confuses the reader while reading...
Writing FeedbackmrfwijayaHolt - Apr 14, 2017
|Destination of UK Graduates and Postgraduates in 2008. Describe Table IELTS Task 1
3 - Hello Nindy, Overall, it is good writing but I have several notes for you. 1. You should better to...
Writing FeedbackAnindyaNindy17mrfwijaya - Apr 14, 2017
|The percentage of students who studied at four types of secondary schools over a period of ten years
4 - Hello Phanh, it is typical essay for IELTS writing task 1. Overall, it is good but I have several...
Writing FeedbackPhanhmrfwijaya - Apr 14, 2017