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Writing FeedbackLeonardo NguyenLeonardo Nguyen - Jun 5, 2017
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2 - @thanhhoang12a7 your opening statement should represent the two points of view prior to the presentation of your opinion. That...
Writing Feedbackthanhhoang12a7Holt - Jun 4, 2017
|Chances do not make a major contribution to the triumph of anyone
5 - Do you guys can check my rewritting again ? It is argued that fortune plays a leading role in...
Writing Feedbackanhdt117anhdt117 - Jun 4, 2017
|The same educational opportunity should be given to both gender students
2 - Lung, you have developed a very interesting and highly appropriate discussion for the subject provided. Your lien of reasoning...
Writing FeedbackmrgreatteacherHolt - Jun 4, 2017
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Writing Feedbacktrungomegatrungomega - Jun 4, 2017
|Issue Essay for GRE AWA section - technology and human skills
3 - Thank you Holt, I will work on constructing fluent grammatical structure, I would also appreciate hint on how to...
Writing Feedbacktizentostizentos - Jun 3, 2017
|Australian teenagers and junk foods in their diet
4 - 1. You wrote: ... of eaten per year for pizza, fish ... Feedback: The article is missing before...
Writing Feedbackd2nythunga2603 - Jun 3, 2017
|The number of people smoking, divided into two different gender groups
5 - 1. You wrote: ... people smoking in Someland which is ... Feedback: Possible spelling mistake found 2....
Writing FeedbackTung Anhthunga2603 - Jun 3, 2017
|IELTs Task one: You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
4 - Hi I think your letter is not formatted right.I think you should start what is your request and...
Writing FeedbackJimmy879873Ashkan123 - Jun 3, 2017
|Sustainable Business Research based project
2 - Yes, the case studies already exist for sustainable business projects. You will normally find these case studies online using...
Research Papersbenlai1910Holt - Jun 1, 2017
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4 - little changes..... Since very early age I was interested in science; finding the truth; I took my keen...
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|The Connection between Technology and Trafficking
2 - Ashley, what is the focal point of your research? You will need to clarify the thesis statement in your...
Writing Feedbackanmart36Holt - Jun 1, 2017
|I need correct my TOEFL Independent Writing: Raising children in urban or rural areas
3 - Holt, I appreiciate your comments. I am not clear with your opinion: "It takes more than just 2 lines...
Writing Feedbacksilkwormsilkworm - May 30, 2017
|Statement explaining how the scholarship will support your educational and career objectives
2 - Lilian, all I read about here are your skills and educational background. You have spoken of possible objectives for...
ScholarshipLILIBHolt - May 30, 2017
|Essay IETLS task 2: Sponsor for national sport teams. Who should financially support the teams?
3 - Sri, although you tried your best in the introductory paragraph, it is not good enough to earn you substantial...
Writing FeedbackSri Hardiyantiokorobiadimma14 - May 30, 2017
|Ocean's Pollution - Lesson 11 Essay RD--Need on all of it
2 - Cassandra, your thesis statement is not clear in the opening paragraph. There is a sense of disconnection between the...
Research Papersccahill07Holt - May 30, 2017
|How inhabitants in UK spent their time on separate types of telephone calls over a 7-year period
2 - Khoa, where is the chart for this analysis essay? I don't have anything to compare your written information to...
Writing Feedbackdaiha20082009Holt - May 30, 2017
|Many people believe they cannot count on the same job perpetually
2 - Hsin-ya, your opening statement is really because it immediately represents your opinion of matters to be discussed in the...
Writing Feedbackhsinya0316Holt - May 29, 2017
|Transport investments. IELTS Task II, Roads VS Railways.
2 - Yong, the main problem that you have work this essay is that you are not discussing it properly. Read...
Writing Feedbacksunraise2005Holt - May 29, 2017
|K-ARTS Scholarship Self Introduction essay for Film and Media Graduate students
3 - @Holt Thanks for your valuable remarks .In this essay ,I talked about the university because they wanted to know...
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Writing Feedbackquankingokorobiadimma14 - May 28, 2017
|PERSONAL STATEMENT ON WHY I SHOULD BE CONSIDERED FOR SCHOLARSHIP AT HERRIOT WATT UNIVERSITY.
5 - @Holt I sincerely appreciate your comment. I have several academics accomplishment, but as it is now I don't have...
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4 - Thank you for your invaluable insights. I will keep in mind your inputs and incorporate a personal tone to...
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|The total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into 3 categories
Writing Feedbackhello_dmmmTJLuschen - May 27, 2017
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Letterslenhatbaolenhatbao - May 26, 2017
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4 - Bao, I must give you a thumb-up for the excellent skills you showed in summarizing the article. Stating each...
Writing Feedbackbaokhanhlqdokorobiadimma14 - May 26, 2017
|Should doctors either be engaged in more profitable activities or health-oriented
3 - @okorobiadimma14 Thanks for your suggestions. I appreciate it. I admitted that I do have the weaknesses of writing skills...
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