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Telecommunications and Network re: Review my anwers to AA question

NEW - Why do you choose the course and Institution? AA scholarship question? Refer to my feedback below and review and...

Scholarshipgario - Mar 23, 2021 -
The line chart below shows the percentage of Internet users in 3 countries from 1999 to 2009

2 - - What kind of graph? Be specific. The reader cannot see the image. Show your familiarity with the...

Writing Feedbackngockhanh1811 - Mar 22, 2021Holt - Mar 22, 2021
First time I wrote an essay - Questbridge: An experience that caused you to change your perspective

2 - It is not a "poor me" essay. Rather, it is a self-analysis that shows the reviewer how far you...

UndergraduatePocket Friend - Mar 21, 2021Holt - Mar 22, 2021
Writing task 1 - the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 to 2006

2 - You still have room to make the report more informative. You have only written 169 words. The target word...

Writing Feedbackvanhoa - Mar 21, 2021Holt - Mar 22, 2021
Immigrants in America. Questbridge Long Essay

NEW - Original prompt: We are interested in learning more about you and the context in which you have grown up,...

Scholarshipktran04 - Mar 22, 2021 -
An argument about whether the country should be the host for a worldwide sports event or not

3 - @Holt Thank you so much. Can I ask you what is the right pattern for comparative discussion? I'm quite...

Writing Feedbacknguyenngocanhthu - Mar 20, 2021nguyenngocanhthu - Mar 21, 2021
STUNED ESSAY. MSc of International Land and Water Management at WUR

3 - Dear Holt. Thank you very much for your great feedback! I will revise my essay accordingly....

Scholarshipns_nafsi - Mar 21, 2021ns_nafsi - Mar 21, 2021
Writing task 1 - Safety condition of endangered plants and their different living places

2 - For starters, you are not writing enough words to merit a high TA score. While the minimum word count...

Writing Feedbackpeter4904 - Mar 21, 2021Holt - Mar 21, 2021
Usage of margarine, butter, low fat and reduced spreads - IELTS TEST

2 - - Ending when? The information is incomplete. The summary must include the start and end date of the...

Writing Feedbackalexrussso - Mar 20, 2021Holt - Mar 21, 2021
iELTS essay about the internet which has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years

4 - Hi friend, I have taught that we should avoid using generalization in the essay. "nobody can deny the fact...

Writing Feedbackhphnngcquan - Mar 18, 2021juliachung - Mar 20, 2021
Gender Gaps in the Workplace (AAS Supporting Statement)

3 - @Holt Holt, thank you very much for the valuable input!...

Scholarshiprosanna89 - Mar 19, 2021rosanna89 - Mar 20, 2021
Business Management course - STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR UNIVERSITY PROGRAM AND SCHOLARSHIP

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your contribution. But as I am a high school student and I'm applying...

Undergraduatedothinganha - Mar 19, 2021dothinganha - Mar 20, 2021
IELTS Writing task 2 - Discussion - The effects of international tourism to local countries

2 - Good work on the 2 restatement sentences. You covered the interpretation excellently. However, the need for the thesis statement...

Writing Feedbackbeloyal - Mar 19, 2021Holt - Mar 20, 2021
Why becoming a GOI-IES Scholar matters to you, what you'll gain from this scholarship?

2 - This is actually an ordinary essay that does not have any stand out points or references that could catch...

Graduatemebax64893 - Mar 18, 2021Holt - Mar 19, 2021
Anesthesiologist Assistant Program Personal Statement: Experience with Healthcare Disparities?

2 - I can understand how your father's illness would have opened your mind to considering a career in healthcare. However,...

GraduateGenJen - Mar 18, 2021Holt - Mar 19, 2021
IELTS TASK 2 - WHAT ARE THE CHALLENGES WHEN MOVING TO NEW PLACES AND STRATEGIES

2 - Yes, you wrote it within 40 minutes. However, you are still over explaining and using useless sentences that do...

Writing Feedbackjuliachung - Mar 18, 2021Holt - Mar 19, 2021
Letter of Intent for undergrad Turkey Burslari scholarship application - Computer science degree

3 - I'm sorry I should've been more clear with what I intend to do with this sample, I will...

LettersAhmed adobewan - Mar 15, 2021Ahmed adobewan - Mar 18, 2021
Some people believe that owning a home is more important than renting one.

3 - Hi friend, firstly, I believe to get a higher band, your introduction should be paraphrased, not copied from the...

Writing Feedbackcecilisabella - Mar 14, 2021juliachung - Mar 18, 2021
Museums and art galleries are not needed today, because of technology

3 - Hi Long231312, I think there has been an unclear idea in your statement. Although you claim to be partially...

Writing FeedbackLong231312 - Mar 18, 2021juliachung - Mar 18, 2021
Short essay about Heuristics (Questbridge College Prep Scholars Program) 1st prompt

2 - If you are really confident that you wish to be a Cognitive Science student, then you should not be...

Scholarshipradioq - Mar 17, 2021Holt - Mar 18, 2021
Workforce Competency Development through TESOL (Australia Award Scholarship)

2 - The information you provide as an introduction is specific to only your country. You make it appear as if...

ScholarshipDA786 - Mar 17, 2021Holt - Mar 18, 2021
IELTS General Writing Task 1: Seaside Hotel Booking

4 - Dear All, I took some online course and tried to rewrite this part 1. I believe my writing still...

Writing Feedbackroy_leung - Mar 5, 2021roy_leung - Mar 17, 2021
Motivation Letter for Scholarship from a final-year chemical engineering student

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. Is there any feedback for the fifth paragraph and the rest of the...

Scholarshiphabibalaziz123 - Mar 17, 2021habibalaziz123 - Mar 17, 2021
AAS - Atmospheric Sciences - your proposed course and institution

3 - too much information for the introduction. try to focus on what course will help you and relevant to the...

ScholarshipSilvana - Mar 12, 2021DA786 - Mar 17, 2021
2022 Australia Awards Scholarship Essay - Applied economics

4 - Try to use simple words to save the limited characters and you can use them for another idea. Btw,...

Scholarshipjivrymuh - Feb 28, 2021DA786 - Mar 17, 2021
Nowadays many ecosystems in the world are experiencing problems

2 - - Whose extinction? What is this discussion about? What is the purpose of this essay? The original prompt...

Writing Feedbackpeggyhan - Mar 16, 2021Holt - Mar 17, 2021
fossil fuels are the main sources of energy,alternative energy should be encouraged for used

2 - The original prompt for this essay asks if you think this is a positive or negative development. Since your...

Writing Feedbackminhngan - Mar 16, 2021Holt - Mar 17, 2021
eCommerce - Goal of study and detailed study plan - you in advance wish you all the best

3 - I didn't see any content that describe your study plan. Maybe you have missed it so here's my soft...

ScholarshipPoKhuYu - Mar 15, 2021wyh99 - Mar 17, 2021
Japan - An event has that influenced you - STUDENT EXCHANGE PROGRAM

3 - @xin18 In my opinion, I personally think that I would not have the interest to read it to the...

Scholarshipxin18 - Mar 16, 2021wyh99 - Mar 16, 2021
Ukrainian Student - AN EXCELLENT PARTICIPANT IN THE GLOBAL UGRAD PROGRAM

3 - That's definitely! You need to substantiate more about the effect on changes in the lives of the members of...

Undergraduatevalerija - Mar 9, 2021Blackrain - Mar 16, 2021