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IELTS1: the percentage change in house price in five different urban areas in different countries

3 - @Holt Thank you very much....

Writing Feedbackvuthuylinh2611 - Mar 23, 2020vuthuylinh2611 - Mar 23, 2020
The salmon passes from infant to adult during the natural process known as the life cycle

4 - @Holt @vuthuylinh2611 Thank you very much!...

Writing Feedbackphong3baotap - Mar 23, 2020phong3baotap - Mar 23, 2020
"Flipped" - Write a movie review that you are interested.

3 - @Holt I'd like to thank you for your contribution. This is the first time I try to get accustomed...

Writing Feedbacklittledinosaur - Mar 22, 2020littledinosaur - Mar 23, 2020
The production level of main fuels in a European country

2 - Since you did not post the image that goes with this data report, your essay cannot be reviewed for...

Writing FeedbackJannes - Mar 23, 2020Holt - Mar 23, 2020
Task 2 IELTS TENDENCY TO WASTE FOOD

7 - @xtunx Dear Author, It will be better for you to add thesis statement which states the intended message...

Writing Feedbackxtunx - Feb 29, 2020ndhnif - Mar 23, 2020
'I like to work on ambitious projects' - cover letter for a PhD in astronomy

2 - You wrote a personal statement, not a cover letter. A cover letter is written in a short 5 paragraph...

Lettersmixren - Mar 22, 2020Holt - Mar 23, 2020
TASK 2 BEGINER - YOUNG PEOPLE SHOULD SPEND MORE TIME ON CULTURAL ACTIVITIES AND LESS TIME ON SPORT?

8 - Firstly, you did not write 250 words. Secondly, it isn't allow to use short form like 'can't'....

Writing Feedbacklththom - Mar 21, 2020amy_nyk - Mar 23, 2020
Will printed media soon be a thing of the past? What is your opinion ?

4 - @nguyenluuphuchao Your essay is lacking example. First, you suppose that the prolonged exposure to these digital devices will take...

Writing Feedbacknguyenluuphuchao - Mar 21, 2020phong3baotap - Mar 23, 2020
[Task 2 IELTS] Communication between employers and workers is the most important factor

3 - @lovewriting You might consider the alternative: 1) ... and present my own position. (the word "own" seemed to create...

Writing Feedbacklovewriting - Mar 20, 2020phong3baotap - Mar 23, 2020
IELTS- Ad-Dis Essay. More and more people are starting to work from home.

2 - The response is inaccurate. You are being asked to choose only one aspect of the topic to discuss. Either...

Writing FeedbackOlivia1989 - Mar 22, 2020Holt - Mar 22, 2020
Young professionals - the way of describing from the essay below:

3 - Since you did not include the image with the essay, your work cannot be reviewed in terms of content...

Writing Feedbackmiraichan19 - Mar 21, 2020Holt - Mar 22, 2020
Economic globalization - IELTS Academic Writing Task 2

2 - Ok. Let's review your essay using the scoring guide. It will be easier to explain your mistakes and correcting...

Writing Feedbackhuynhmai1707 - Mar 21, 2020Holt - Mar 22, 2020
Seeking advice for a statement of purpose needed to apply for a master in robotics at EPFL.

3 - Hi holt, your feedback has been really welcome. The MSc is indeed targeted to people just finishing their BSc....

Graduatefratopa - Mar 19, 2020fratopa - Mar 21, 2020
Because wild creatures are on the brink of extinction so that there is no point in protecting them

2 - Aside from the fact that you misrepresented the original prompt in your introduction paraphrase, you also wrote an essay...

Writing Feedbackratter - Mar 21, 2020Holt - Mar 21, 2020
DEVELOPING COUNTRIES AND ADVANCED COUNTRIES ON THE ENVIRONMENT ( IELTS TASK 2 )

2 - I think your essay has shown a standard format for a discussion essay. About the ideas, I do not...

Writing Feedbackxtunx - Mar 20, 2020ratter - Mar 21, 2020
Australia Awards Scholarship Supporting Statement (International Business)

3 - Hi Thank you so much for your feedback! It's really insightful. I'll have them revise accordingly....

Scholarshipdedjabs - Mar 20, 2020dedjabs - Mar 21, 2020
Show the relationship between psycholinguistic and first language teaching

2 - So, you are talking about the relationship between psycholinguistics and first language training. Based on what you have said,...

Essaysmaitrang95 - Mar 21, 2020Holt - Mar 21, 2020
GKS2020 Embassy Track Master of Communication & Media Personal Statement

2 - Remove all references to researched content in this essay. You are writing a personal statement, not a research study...

Graduateattalicious - Mar 20, 2020Holt - Mar 21, 2020
Personal statement for applying a MAs educational leadership

2 - The essay tends to be mundane overall. It doesn't really catch the eye of the reviewer. It is descriptive...

GraduateCutecarrot - Mar 20, 2020Holt - Mar 21, 2020
Personal Vision of an Ideal Company

3 - @Holt Wow, thank you! This is actually my first time posting a thread in this forum. Never thought that...

Writing Feedbacksuccatwriting - Mar 19, 2020succatwriting - Mar 20, 2020
APPLYING FOR A SCHOLARSHIP - GOI-IES - my educational career

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback, I edited the write-up but it turns out it wasn't posted. Okay I...

ScholarshipKnori - Mar 19, 2020Knori - Mar 20, 2020
Some people think that strict punishment for driving offences are the key to reduce traffic accident

2 - You forgot to count the discussion topics before you wrote the prompt restatement. This is a comparison of points...

GraduatePheobe - Mar 20, 2020Holt - Mar 20, 2020
My poor diet - need help with grammar and sentences!

2 - Was the instruction for this exercise to have you write a statement only? The reason I ask is because...

Writing Feedbackduyendang1012 - Mar 19, 2020Holt - Mar 20, 2020
Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results

2 - It is unfortunate that your body of paragraphs, as well as your prompt restatement does not follow the required...

Writing Feedbackquynhchi24 - Mar 19, 2020Holt - Mar 19, 2020
THE BOY IS GOOD AT ALL - Essay scholarship for a 10-grade student.

2 - Never hashtag your academic essays. You are not writing an Instagram description nor are you Tweeting a message. You...

Scholarshipbaross - Mar 19, 2020Holt - Mar 19, 2020
How to write a research proposal on smart port development?

6 - What about to start with a structure of essay? Use google to create a "skeleton" of your paper work,...

Essaysphuongthao19 - Mar 10, 2020validator111 - Mar 18, 2020
Essay scholarship - Government of Ireland - International Education Scholarships

2 - The first 2 paragraphs of the essay are not necessary for the presentation. Neither does it improve the presentation...

Scholarshipchrisnguyen - Mar 18, 2020Holt - Mar 18, 2020
DISCUSSION ESSAYS: Horizontal city vs vertical city

2 - This is a comparative essay discussion. The body of paragraphs should have been composed of 3 representations, in no...

Writing Feedbackleanhtu121 - Mar 18, 2020Holt - Mar 18, 2020
Politicians or individuals? Essay about the environment protection responsibility

3 - Your prompt paraphrase is not changed enough from the original prompt to qualify as a new rendition of the...

Writing FeedbackMinh Huynh - Mar 18, 2020Holt - Mar 18, 2020
Optimistic people who have more opportunities to make positive changes to the world

2 - The first 2 sentences in your prompt paraphrase are really difficult to understand. It isn't a very good re-framing...

Writing Feedbackbellapham - Mar 17, 2020Holt - Mar 18, 2020