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How art changed my life since a young age -

2 - The essay does not have a clear flow of thought. There are too many references in the essay that...

ScholarshipPepperwaiting - Feb 28, 2026Holt - Mar 1, 2026
Crime prevention - AAS Master of Public Policy - Why you choose this course and institution

3 - @Holt Hi, thank you for your comment, I really appreciate your time and advice especially about the AI. To...

Scholarshipperibaik - Feb 28, 2026peribaik - Feb 28, 2026
Language and academic skills - Study plan for SeoulTech scholarship (6 universities in Seoul )

2 - There is a big problem with this essay. It comes back as being 70-90% AI written. Which means, at...

ScholarshipHoangvu3108 - Feb 27, 2026Holt - Feb 28, 2026
Motivational Letter for MATHS-Disc Master's programme (Erasmus Mundus)

2 - This letter would probably pass an AI detector test by the review committee. However, it has several areas that...

LettersVascoMarqs1774 - Feb 27, 2026Holt - Feb 28, 2026
Healthcare Worker Burnout Research paper (ENG102)

2 - I am not going to respond to your questions when you are asking me to review a research paper...

Writing Feedbackdysonsam - Feb 26, 2026Holt - Feb 28, 2026
PTDF SCHOLARSHIP 2026 STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR MSc ENVIRONMENTAL MANAGEMENT.

2 - I apologize but I do not believe that his highly polished essay stands a chance of passing the AI...

ScholarshipSaeedah - Feb 26, 2026Holt - Feb 28, 2026
FUBLRIGHT STUDY OBJECTIVES "HELP REVIEW"

2 - This essay is at least 50% AI generated in terms of improving the presentation. The format and writing are...

ScholarshipMOPATI - Feb 26, 2026Holt - Feb 27, 2026
Talking to a restaurant business owner - IELTS General Writing Task 1

2 - This letter could have been better formatted. You could have opened with the reminder to Mr. John about how...

Writing Feedbackskatare100 - Feb 25, 2026Holt - Feb 27, 2026
Personal Statement for DGIST with Advanced Intelligent Mechatronics and Control Laboratory

2 - This is a pretty solid, human written personal statement with very little AI assistance in the polishing aspect. This...

GraduateHoangvu3108 - Feb 24, 2026Holt - Feb 24, 2026
"Labor migration" - Motivation Letter for Erasmus Mundus EMGS

2 - I would like to thank you for your honesty about your use of AI in "polishing" this paper. Yes,...

LettersWifi4_55 - Feb 23, 2026Holt - Feb 24, 2026
The Negative Effects Online Pharmacies Have on Society Today

2 - Uh, how can I put this nicely? You cannot submit an 85% AI generated research paper to your professor....

Research PapersJuditza01 - Feb 23, 2026Holt - Feb 24, 2026
GOI IES Essay 1 About Benefit of GOI IES to myself, HEI, Ireland, origin country

2 - It is difficult for me to comment on a personal statement that has been at least 80% AI generated....

ScholarshipOreki - Feb 22, 2026Holt - Feb 22, 2026
The Journey of Finding Myself - SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION ESSAY

3 - @Holt How can I improve it? Please contact us at essayforum.com@gmail.com and request Hold for professional assistance....

Scholarshipha phuong linh - Feb 20, 2026ha phuong linh - Feb 21, 2026
The Effect of Social Media on the Mental Health of College Students

2 - This is one of the better, I would say 50-50 split, AI and human writing papers that has been...

Writing Feedbackdhwani - Feb 21, 2026Holt - Feb 21, 2026
Intelligent humans - Letter Of Intent - Undergarduate Turkiye Burslari

2 - It is difficult for me to give my approval to an essay that was at least 80% AI generated....

Letterslanglang - Feb 20, 2026Holt - Feb 21, 2026
Research Essay on Effects of Social Media on Mental Health

2 - So, I think it was ChatGPT that was used to polish this otherwise human written essay? The last sentence...

Research Papersalaina - Feb 20, 2026Holt - Feb 21, 2026
Application for a masters degree in Biomedical Engineering- Scholarship (1000 words needed)

2 - Your name dies bit define you academically. It however, tells the reviewer who your are. What name your...

Graduatemomoo00 - Feb 18, 2026Holt - Feb 19, 2026
Letter of Intent for Türkiye Bursları – Computer Engineering

3 - I agree with the consultant's main point. The letter focuses heavily on what you did, but it doesn't clearly...

Scholarshipwhythere44 - Feb 1, 2026momoo00 - Feb 18, 2026
Online King Sejong / GKS - master's degree study plan (language)

2 - There is no need for you to delve into the foundation of your interest tin the language. What is...

Scholarshipandi123 - Feb 16, 2026Holt - Feb 17, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - More and more people participate in extreme sports

2 - The prompt restatement is well done. It does not deviate from the original topic and the writer's opinion shows...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Feb 16, 2026Holt - Feb 16, 2026
Direct-PhD Physics Statement of Purpose for King Fahd University (KFUPM)

2 - You have delivered an excellent expanded resume in this essay. However, that is not what the statement of purpose...

GraduateHafsa - Feb 15, 2026Holt - Feb 16, 2026
GKS program / Korean drama - statement of purpose for master's degree

2 - The one thing that irritates the GKS reviewers are applicants who rely heavily on their characterization of Korea...

Scholarshipandi123 - Feb 15, 2026Holt - Feb 16, 2026
IELTS Writing task 2 - Agree & Disagree - Topic Transport (Cyclists should pass a test)

2 - A suggestion is different from an argument. This shows a lack of English vocabulary skills on your part. by...

Writing FeedbackMon4615 - Feb 15, 2026Holt - Feb 16, 2026
PTDF Masters Scholarship - Cyber Security

2 - You have effectively used AI hybrid writing to develop a masters letter of intent / motivational letter to meet...

ScholarshipJanetttt - Feb 13, 2026Holt - Feb 15, 2026
Business entrepreneurship - Turkey burslari scholarship essay application 2026

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your time You took the time to review my essay and i appreciate...

UndergraduateKpro123 - Feb 12, 2026Kpro123 - Feb 13, 2026
LETTER OF INTENT for Turkiye Burslari scholarship for medicine

2 - Since you are applying for acceptance into a college of medicine, the reviewer will expect you to have almost...

Undergraduatehelulu - Feb 11, 2026Holt - Feb 12, 2026
Motivation Letter Postgraduate Diploma in Earth System Physics The Abdus Salam International Centre

2 - I am not impressed by an application essay that is 80% AI generated. While the essay is highly academic...

LettersJeff Tetteh - Feb 10, 2026Holt - Feb 12, 2026
My Chosen UChicago Prompt: find the beauty in trash.

2 - Repeating this several times in the essay makes this declaration lose impact. Learn to position your hooks for...

UndergraduatePhanuel - Feb 10, 2026Holt - Feb 12, 2026
Becoming a scientist - my motivation letter for Stipendium Hungaricum

2 - How was this community directly affected by the drought? What was the catalyst that moved you in this...

Letterskerr000 - Feb 10, 2026Holt - Feb 12, 2026
Supply chain management - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR APPLYING MASTER DEGREE

2 - Your essay carefully balances your human context with an obvious AI polish throughout the essay. It created an interesting...

Scholarshipstarstruck076 - Feb 10, 2026Holt - Feb 12, 2026
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