|SCIENCE Article - How Different Kind of Bias Impact Research
2 - Albert, you have too many topics under discussion in this research paper but not enough in discussion in terms...
Writing FeedbackAlbHolt - Apr 14, 2018
|"I will benefit directly" - A short essay for OFID scholarship
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|Describe the efforts you have undertaken so far to obtain information on your study options?
ScholarshiphunterSChunterSC - Apr 14, 2018
|One page essay explaining interest to attend a professional workshop on modeling
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|IELTS Essay about stressful lives of modern-day teenagers.
4 - @Holt Thanks for your valuable and honest feedback. I really appreciate your detailed guidance and will follow your instructions...
Writing Feedbackasefnoorasefnoor - Apr 13, 2018
|Save the Kids: Buy a Flip Phone
2 - Hi heather, the first thing that I noticed upon finishing the first paragraph of your research paper is that...
Research PapershlautzHolt - Apr 13, 2018
|Judging book by its cover - reliable opinion or not?
3 - Nyuyen, you will not score very well in the TA section of the scoring because you did not properly...
Writing FeedbackdinhnguyenHolt - Apr 13, 2018
|Describe one of the Seven Wonders of the ancient world and give your feeling (homework)
2 - Minh, did you write this descriptive essay in a hurry? While you did use vivid descriptions in the essay...
SpeechesMinh ThiHolt - Apr 13, 2018
|IELTS: ... To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste ?
3 - Minh, you have created a prompt deviation in your discussion which will result in the failure of this essay...
Writing FeedbackNexus54Holt - Apr 13, 2018
|Newspapers are not being read and news on TV is not being watched by young people...
3 - Ngoc, since you did not post the original prompt with the discussion instruction, I cannot advice you regarding the...
Writing FeedbackrubydoHolt - Apr 13, 2018
|My decision to enroll in CSE at TU Braunschweig - Letter of motivation for masters in CSE
3 - Haseeb, you have written a statement of purpose, not a motivational letter. The motivational letter serves to show the...
LettershaseebhashHolt - Apr 13, 2018
|The amount of money consumers use for six different items - IELTS WRITING TASK 1
2 - The chart/ bar graph depicts gives information about/ shows the amounts of money consumers ... items/the expenditure on different...
Writing Feedbackthuyanhnxphuonguyen479 - Apr 12, 2018
|The estimated amount of oil produced by 6 countries between 1990 and 2010
2 - I am impressed by your work and I could not find any grammar or vocabulary mistakes. :) ... per...
Writing Feedbacknamgiang0884cao1km - Apr 12, 2018
|Engineering; why you chose your proposed host organisation - Scholarship Application master essay
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|Scholarship essay about my educational goals, reasons for applying, and how I would help my country
Scholarshipabdo65619abdo65619 - Apr 11, 2018
|IELTS task 2: production of consumer goods vs environment
3 - To, the task 2 essay should always have 5 paragraphs presented in it. The 5 paragraph presentation helps you...
Writing Feedbacklanvt2811Holt - Apr 11, 2018
|Personal Statement for MA Conflict, Governance and International Development
4 - Wuhni, your approach to this essay is incorrect. It is too academic in presentation. There is a lack of...
GraduatefwuhniHolt - Apr 11, 2018
|IELTS TASK 1- The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public
3 - Hai, the only problem that exists in this otherwise well developed essay is the sentence structuring. You have a...
Writing Feedbackhaiilinhh7396Holt - Apr 11, 2018
|TOEFL Task 2 - Television ads targeted at young children - what is their influence on youngsters?
3 - Louvy, the above advice doesn't really apply to your work if one considers the prompt requirements which does call...
Writing FeedbackLouvyHolt - Apr 11, 2018
|TOEFL-it is my friends in college that made up my most important memories of the more grown-up stage
5 - @Holt Thank you for your constructive criticism. I've completely rewritten this essay and hope you can give more comments....
Writing FeedbackAsphodelAsphodel - Apr 10, 2018
|What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
2 - Hu, unless otherwise requested specifically in the essay prompt, do not include information such as a personal point of...
Writing FeedbackSeilaHolt - Apr 9, 2018
|The variety genres of music - which kind is more important for us?
3 - Alifa, I believe you are self studying for the IELTS test which is my you ended up making every...
Writing FeedbackalifafazaHolt - Apr 9, 2018
|DISCUSS ABOUT PLAYING VIDEO GAMES.
2 - Sarah, it is difficult for me to review your work because you failed to provide me with the original...
Writing FeedbackSarah PhanHolt - Apr 9, 2018
|IELTS Task2 Topic-The positive or negative effects of Internet
3 - Annie, what is the actual prompt you are responding to? Your prompt presentation and your actual discussion are going...
Writing FeedbackAnniehHolt - Apr 9, 2018
|Analysis Essay on Death with Dignity Laws
2 - Jeff, this is a very good discussion of the "Death with Dignity " laws. The problem is that since...
UndergraduatejeffhuanHolt - Apr 9, 2018
|Essay about analysis an online article on how use of social media relates to anxiety
2 - Jiaje, this is supposed to be an analytical essay, That means that your perspective of the information provided should...
Research PapersjiajieHolt - Apr 9, 2018
|IELTS Task 2 topic: individuals to provide environmental problems solution
Writing Feedbacklanvt2811lanvt2811 - Apr 9, 2018
|TOEFL task 2, advertising directed toward young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed
3 - Mehdi, avoid exaggerations in your presentation. Examiners frown upon examinees who sensationalize the topics given when there is no...
Writing FeedbackmehmohHolt - Apr 9, 2018
|Financial Need Scholarship Essay - how to start and make it sound appealing
3 - Shannon it appears to me that this is a scholarship that considers the family's ability to pay for at...
EssaysbloombloomHolt - Apr 6, 2018
|Review on the essay "Your Kids Phone is Not Like a Cigarette" in the New York Times by Anya Kamanetz
2 - Matt, for an article review of a New York Times article, there is almost no reference to the article...
Research PapersMatthendlerHolt - Apr 6, 2018