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3 - KevinLove, your English grammar is simple enough to warrant only a few minor corrections. You have 2 problems when...
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|IELTS Writing Task 2: Causes and Solutions of International Tourism
2 - Ulfa, your opening statement is expressive but confusing to read due to your lack of English grammar knowledge. The...
Writing FeedbackUlfaidrus_flipHolt - Feb 15, 2018
|My examination essay - what is your biggest mistake
3 - @Holt I just remembered. The topic presentation is 'what is your biggest mistakes and what did you learn...
Graduatemuisasmuisas - Feb 14, 2018
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3 - In Paragraph one, you should write one or more sentence about thesis statement beacuse it can make your essay...
Writing FeedbackRumi2020Nuval_flip - Feb 14, 2018
|Participating in sports and exercises in Australia. Reporting bar charts - IELTS
4 - Thank you so much for your feedback! Can you give me an example of a complete summary overview?...
Writing Feedbackindrastiindrasti - Feb 14, 2018
|New, modern buildings - is it a good investment?
3 - Luna, the task 2 essay has a minimum word requirement of 25 words. You wrote only 184 words which...
Writing FeedbackIrisyLunaHolt - Feb 14, 2018
|KGSP study plan; There is a problem in my country I would like to help fix
2 - Tracy, your first 2 paragraphs are irrelevant to the prompt. The presentation of the problem with the mindset of...
GraduateTracy212Holt - Feb 14, 2018
|Personal statement Application for Physiotherapy - an achievement or lesson lerned
2 - Vikhram, simply getting an invitation to join this society is not an academic achievement. An academic achievement is either...
Undergraduatevik0905Holt - Feb 14, 2018
|Cover Letter : IT University of Copenhagen
3 - Diwakar, the purpose of a cover letter is to provide a summary of the content of the various essays...
Letterszer0leetHolt - Feb 14, 2018
|Why did the author choose to tell this story? Decide if the story could really happen
Book ReportsWarishaWarisha - Feb 14, 2018
|International Tourism and its Influence on the Destined Countries
2 - Hi Sanufal, I have read your essay closer and found a few suggestions for improving yours. In the first...
Writing FeedbackNuval_flipakbarmappiare - Feb 14, 2018
|Personal statement for MSc in Advanced Security and Cybercrime; The need for cyber security expert
Graduateyauwalu84yauwalu84 - Feb 13, 2018
|"Magic tricks" inspiration - Stanford (intellectually engaging idea)
3 - @Demyann I would not consider this particular activity an intellectually engaging idea. This veers more into the area of...
UndergraduateDemyanHolt - Feb 13, 2018
|I strive to be a leader in this field. Motivational Letter for MaMaSELF Erasmus Mundus Scholarship
Scholarshipbiffokadir13biffokadir13 - Feb 13, 2018
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2 - Tchalim, this essay reminds me of an example of a misunderstanding in a conversation that my professor once told...
ScholarshipBooster70Holt - Feb 13, 2018
|Ivey MSc Business Analytics - understanding of quantitative analysis tools and technical skills
2 - Funmi, your response to the prompt is too academic in approach and hence, does not have a real world...
GraduateKhristiie_xxHolt - Feb 13, 2018
|Food Technology and Packaging -Your study objectives for Fulbright application
ScholarshipBooster70Booster70 - Feb 12, 2018
|My Western Ivey MSc Business Analytics Application Essay
3 - Thank you for your reply. The MSc is geared towards individuals with 0-2 years experience. I am currently in...
GraduateKhristiie_xxKhristiie_xx - Feb 12, 2018
|Why I want to contribute to the development of the health system in my country
2 - Christi, the strength of this essay will rely on you focusing the opening statement in a manner that directly...
ScholarshipXti02Holt - Feb 12, 2018
|Reference Letter Chevening Scholarship "Global Health "
Scholarshipwomeen15womeen15 - Feb 12, 2018
|KGSP program is the perfect opportunity for my goals and dreams - Korean Scholarship essay
4 - I appreciate deeply the feedback. I've changed the focus to better reflect my interest, which is the game development...
ScholarshipMyriumMyrium - Feb 11, 2018
|Discuss the differences between the way of life in your country now and the way of life in the past
Writing Feedbacktrangnguyen2612PeterBrown - Feb 11, 2018
|Undergraduate Application for Physiotherapy Personal Statement
4 - @Holt Here is an updated version. Please do let me know how this is. Any useless information? or...
Undergraduatevik0905vik0905 - Feb 11, 2018
|Scholarship for master program in data analytics - Management Information Systems
Scholarshipkennaikennai - Feb 11, 2018
|The diagram illustrates how often Australia men and women in different age groups exercise regularly
4 - @Holt I have re-written it as below, hope to have some feedbacks on this one. Or any other welcome....
Writing Feedbackziminhongziminhong - Feb 11, 2018
|Scholarship essay (education): scholarship to help me achieve my career goals
4 - Qrystalz before you can tell the reviewer how the academic training you will get from the university can help...
Essaysrgn2008Holt - Feb 10, 2018
|Marriage or employment? PTE academic
3 - Peter, your presentation is not coming from a general point of view. You are thinking about the disadvantages of...
Writing FeedbackPeterBrownHolt - Feb 10, 2018
|The more I studied in machine vision, the more fascinated I would be - Statement of Purpose
2 - Shayan, since this is a statement of purpose for a secondary masters degree, there is no need to dwell...
GraduateshayanshHolt - Feb 10, 2018
|The same proportion between boys and girls in a tertiary education for all subjects
3 - thank u, i truly appreciate it ! Actually in the first paragraph I wrote "hardly", I mean I tried...
ScholarshipQuynhphuong1Quynhphuong1 - Feb 10, 2018
|I want to apply KGSP. I need to write a Statement of Purpose for that I wrote this.
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