|IELTS Writing Task 2: Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
6 - Sehat due to the fact that I am a native English speaker and my opening statement covers all of...
Writing FeedbacksehatdinatiHolt - Feb 19, 2017
|I plan to get a doctorate in Clinical Neuropsychology - UNIV. OF TEXAS SOP (PSYCHOLOGY/NEUROSCIENCE)
6 - Tana, I see where you are coming from now. The essay that you wrote includes the important elements I...
UndergraduateNerveraHolt - Feb 19, 2017
|From dreams into reality. It's first self-introduction of my life. I'm applying for KGSP
4 - @amelhope Thank you very much, I will improve it. @Holt This is help me a lot. Before I...
Scholarshipnanenoiiinanenoiii - Feb 19, 2017
|Different techniques to encourage children for higher activity. Competitiveness or cooperativeness?
3 - Hi First, introduce your topic. The introductory paragraph should briefly orient the reader to the topic and provide a...
Writing FeedbackMH_twrozhnaz - Feb 18, 2017
|The figure illustrates the number of three kinds of fast food eaten by youths in Australia
6 - @foyuliu Dear @Foyuliu, 150words is the minimum words, not the maximum. Thankyou, anw!...
Writing Feedbacksehatdinatisehatdinati - Feb 18, 2017
|Percentage of the variation of old people, who are above their sixties
2 - To, you need to provide the graph so that I can confirm the accuracy of the information you are...
Writing Feedbackmaitouyen2021Holt - Feb 18, 2017
|When I was small, I have covered many wonderful places in India. Need correction and better words
3 - @Holt Thanks! and it is amazing how you choose the words to convey the same information....
Grammar, Usagemastindersinghmastindersingh - Feb 18, 2017
|PTE Summarize written text in one sentence. IT and blue-collar workers
3 - Thank you Mary! I didn't realize there are three stages. I only got the division by IT and blue-collar...
Writing Feedbackfoyuliufoyuliu - Feb 18, 2017
|Goals to implement; being professional means being successful
5 - Here is the thing, you are writing a post study plan and yo have to be truthful about this...
GraduatelukmeHolt - Feb 18, 2017
|I'm really expecting a lot from studying in Korea. SOP for applying to a scholarship (KGSP)
24 - @Holt Okay :) thank you sooooo much for your help, I really appreciate it . :)...
Scholarshipamelhopeamelhope - Feb 18, 2017
|The pie charts illustrate how the proportion of annual expenditure was changed in a UK school
4 - Add a little comment, regarding following sentences, it seems no need to mention the data in 1991 since you...
Writing Feedbackkocc2003foyuliu - Feb 18, 2017
|Task 2 IELTS The line graph illustrates amount of UK employee transporting every day
5 - You find below my example of a more properly developed overview summary statement. It includes an analysis of the...
Writing Feedbackmaitouyen20Holt - Feb 18, 2017
|Mesmerizing world of Chemistry - Personal Statement on my activities and plans for next years
2 - Pam, the only revision to your essay that I can suggest at this point is the removal of the...
UndergraduatepamveerapenHolt - Feb 18, 2017
|Evolution on people's quality of life through the making of foods
4 - For example, when you said "humans have invented enumerated tools...", you created a confusing sentence because the correct development...
Writing FeedbackjaikrishnaHolt - Feb 17, 2017
|LSE. You must present a personal statement with your application form, between 1,000 and 1,500 words
15 - Holt, I will make that final adjustment and get ready to send it off. Thank you very much for...
GraduateZak CannonZak Cannon - Feb 17, 2017
|PTE Essay: should age discrimination be made illegal
3 - Indeed, I was far away from the topic being asked, such a super mistake. Thank you Mary!...
Writing Feedbackfoyuliufoyuliu - Feb 17, 2017
|The consequences of deforestation would be even more serious than the global warming
4 - Rain, you should have place a period instead of a comma at the end of the second sentence in...
Writing Feedbackrainman9tHolt - Feb 17, 2017
|Our life is very different from this life that our parents and grandparents used to live
4 - Hi Van, You should not repeat the complete question in your answer. Also, for every 2 lines a...
Writing FeedbackVan Nhi Nguyenjaikrishna - Feb 17, 2017
|Writing Task 2 - Travelling to other countries with appreciation for different customs
4 - @Abrahamlincoln In the conclusion, the sentence seems very complicated. It is good to use complex sentences without hampering...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincolnhaleshi - Feb 16, 2017
|Writing Task 1 - how many people took computer science at university of UK?
4 - Hi Abrahamlincoln, It is important to give more stress on sentence structure. For example, Meanwhile, in the...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincolnhaleshi - Feb 16, 2017
|Modern building versus buildings from the past
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for correcting my essay....
Writing Feedbackhaleshihaleshi - Feb 16, 2017
|Chance to choose for change your future- 2017 Scholarship Letter of Self Introduction
4 - Thank you for the advices. I will re-write it again.....
Scholarshipmichaelhmichaelh - Feb 16, 2017
|TSU -- Scholarship essay about my achievements, interests, and my goals.
5 - @chizy7 I have reworded that portion of my essay to fit into this more. This is how it is...
ScholarshipJordenR99JordenR99 - Feb 16, 2017
|SOP. Goal of study, title or subject of research, and detailed study plan for KGSP Scholarship
5 - I'll be applying through the university track and the deadline is on March 26th so I was planning to...
ScholarshipCCA92CCA92 - Feb 16, 2017
|Motivation Letter for General Linguistics at Radboud University
6 - Choerunnisa, since this is a motivational letter, the information about the organizations that you were a leader of are...
Graduatechoerunnisa23Holt - Feb 16, 2017
|Ways to preserve any remaining wilderness areas.
2 - Shivam, upon close analysis of your essay, I do not believe that you can score higher than a 3...
Writing Feedbackshiv_rikyHolt - Feb 16, 2017
|We want to read about what makes you special. Tell us something about yourself
4 - When I was little, I spend afternoons teaching my toys, => When I was little, I spent afternoons teaching...
Undergraduatevcerpasalasshiv_riky - Feb 16, 2017
|I am a 23-year-old English teacher from Termez - demonstrating myself for KGSP
6 - Sabokhat, you do not have the chance to write a statement of purpose for the KGSP scholarship. The only...
Scholarshipessayforum17Holt - Feb 16, 2017
|Help on picking a research topic related to social justice - it must be controversial.
3 - Pauline, it all depends upon whether you want to turn the discussion into a socio - political discussion or...
Essayssaphire98Holt - Feb 16, 2017
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Presentation skills. Do you think public speaking skill is really important?
3 - Sinchana, the example that you gave about the doctor is irrelevant to the discussion. You presented his success but...
Writing Feedbacksinchana2017Holt - Feb 16, 2017