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Motivation Statement for MS Game and Media Technology in Utrecht University

2 - Like is not enough of a reason to want to study this MS course. Unless you can create...

Graduateboringjill - Nov 26, 2021Holt - Nov 27, 2021
"A suitable candidate" - Could you help me out with the Stipendium Hungaricum (Scholarship) essay?

2 - Wanting to study for free in a foreign land is not an acceptable reason to apply for the...

Scholarshipkartoshatatosha - Nov 26, 2021Holt - Nov 27, 2021
" It is beneficial for teenagers to receive pocket money from their parents". Do you agree?

2 - There are several problems with your opening statement. The first, is that you used a direct cut and paste...

Writing FeedbackHoang Trieu - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 26, 2021
IELTS writing task 2. Should students pay for their colleges' tuition fee, or government?

2 - This is highly non-academic in reference. Avoid using too much everyday English words that are informal in presentation....

Writing Feedbackbaudgy - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 26, 2021
IELTS Task 1: The price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne

2 - Two things are missing from your summary overview. The first is the number of charts. The second, is the...

Writing Feedbacknhidinh1231 - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 26, 2021
IELTS Writing task 2: Children with mobile phone discussion

2 - As a basic rule, you must not begin the discussion of your opinion in the prompt restatement + opinion...

Writing Feedbacksaklovesyao - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 26, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - ESSAY ABOUT ECONOMICS

2 - Your summary is well developed. It properly enumerates the markets involved and the trends that the collective comparison...

Writing Feedbackdaiton - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 26, 2021
The tables give information about the temperatures and daylight hours in 4 cities during same week

2 - Make it clear that the measurement was done during the same year for the same last 3 days...

Writing FeedbackZarutopath - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 26, 2021
Taking Initiative - UBC Personal Profile Admissions - What is important to you and why?

2 - There is a problem with your claim. While you did take the initiative to make your voice heard and...

Undergraduatekarenxmx - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 26, 2021
Personal Statement for MSc Finance & Accounting in Westminster

2 - I apologize for having to say this but, this is a very weak, non qualifying personal statement. It lacks...

Graduateleesol - Nov 24, 2021Holt - Nov 25, 2021
Large public places and parks are significant for cities' residents

2 - Do not begin the discussion of your opinion in relation to the topic in the prompt restatement + opinion...

Writing FeedbackHarry Yang - Nov 24, 2021Holt - Nov 25, 2021
Tell us about your expectations for the SECCLO programme, career aspirations, relevant experience

3 - @Holt Thanks for the feedback...

Scholarshipiska - Nov 24, 2021iska - Nov 25, 2021
GENERATION GAP IN LIFESTYLES, VIEWPOINTS AND BEHAVIOURS

2 - The question was , "To what extent?" The extent is missing in this response. You should have stated...

Writing Feedbackkirarara - Nov 23, 2021Holt - Nov 24, 2021
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Adults and students are working and studying from home

2 - Wrong reasoning. This question tests your knowledge of current events. How you relate the pandemic, Covid - 19,...

Writing Feedbackdanh55162 - Nov 23, 2021Holt - Nov 24, 2021
Should we encourage the youth to engage in unpaid community work?

2 - There is a difference between ordinary community work and free community service. The difference is basesd on remuneration....

Writing Feedbacktenhquameo - Nov 23, 2021Holt - Nov 24, 2021
(IELTS WRITING 1) PIE CHART The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your review, I will correct these mistakes....

Writing Feedbacksherry2345 - Nov 11, 2021sherry2345 - Nov 24, 2021
Write a letter of complaint to a store where you purchased a faulty new phone

3 - Hi poster, The letter lacks the vital information that will improve your score. You didn't give enough detail...

LettersFreya01 - Nov 21, 2021ToluTemi - Nov 23, 2021
Should the government put a tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to eat more healthily?

3 - @Holt Thanks for your comment! I am really appreciated it ^^...

Writing Feedbackxinhgaisomot - Nov 20, 2021xinhgaisomot - Nov 23, 2021
GENDER - Writing Task 2 - Several renowned organizations are headed by men

3 - @Holt @Hana146 Thanks for your feedback! This is my first essay IELTS Writing Task 2 and I made a...

Writing Feedbackhunnguyenle - Nov 22, 2021hunnguyenle - Nov 23, 2021
Essay about should the goverment funding for school fees

2 - This is a very elementary form of word usage and referencing. This is not the way a college...

Writing FeedbackJean Jatarin - Nov 22, 2021Holt - Nov 23, 2021
Nowadays people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games

2 - The techonology is not changing, which is the meaning of "alteration". Rather, the techonology is "developing" from the...

Writing Feedbackquynhanh200832 - Nov 22, 2021Holt - Nov 23, 2021
Children's success depends on their parents

2 - To provide a stronger thesis statement. Indicate your agreement with a sense of reasoning. Rather than saying "for...

Writing Feedbacknavy8303 - Nov 22, 2021Holt - Nov 23, 2021
NTU SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY - "Accept it and move on!"

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the review!...

ScholarshipRubricate - Nov 20, 2021Rubricate - Nov 22, 2021
The unlimited possibilities of engineering. Accomplishment that sparked a period of personal growth.

3 - @Holt ok, thank you, i will take a look....

Undergraduatematemrtnez - Nov 21, 2021matemrtnez - Nov 22, 2021
Writing - How to write an effective formal email

4 - @Holt Thank you verry much for your feedback. I have mistaken the writer name. Kamal Satinder is the writer...

Writing FeedbackQuyenhuynh - Nov 18, 2021Quyenhuynh - Nov 22, 2021
Hungaricum Stipendium Master Scholarships; this writing as a proof of my interest and motivation

3 - I think you should also add why you should be chosen from this scholarship that stands out from the...

Scholarshipsenasena - Nov 21, 2021kenna007 - Nov 22, 2021
The number of women aged 16-25 in particular country playing sport or watching sport

4 - The last paragraph is inappropriate, you should sum it up as a whole, not individually....

Writing Feedbackchoutwo - Nov 19, 2021kenna007 - Nov 22, 2021
The activity of cycling is admittedly no longer popular. How to change this trend?

2 - Good discussion with a few grammar and cohesive discussion problems for you to take note of. The errors stem...

Writing Feedbackthunthun - Nov 21, 2021Holt - Nov 22, 2021
Essays about Causes of stress in modern society and ways to reduce this problem

2 - The essay presentation is actually good, if I were not to consider the scoring requirements of the task 2...

Writing Feedbacknguyenminhhuyen - Nov 21, 2021Holt - Nov 22, 2021
NOWADAYS, SOME PARENTS PUT A LOT OF PRESSURE ON THEIR CHILDREN.

2 - This is not a part of the orginal topic presentation. The writer must keep his opinion to himself...

Writing Feedbackashley_pham - Nov 21, 2021Holt - Nov 22, 2021