|The Internet, despite being the most significant breakthrough in history, is indeed a mixed blessing
2 - Anna, I think you can score a 6 with this essay. What lowered the score for this otherwise strong...
Writing Feedbackanna1239Holt - Dec 3, 2017
|Cooperation between individual and global governments to cope with environmental problems
Writing FeedbackTuan Anh 10cTuan Anh 10c - Dec 3, 2017
|Essay about "several languages die out and many people think this is a good thing, do you agree?"
4 - khaled, please remember to always provide the complete original prompt with your essay. It is not to be used...
Writing FeedbackkhaledQasem25Holt - Dec 3, 2017
|One who pretends to be a friend but he/she is not, so called a fair weather friend
4 - @Holt Though I do appreciate your feedback, however, somewhere down the line, I still have doubts regarding what all...
Writing FeedbackTanveer775Tanveer775 - Dec 3, 2017
|Animals do feel. Express an opinion on animal treatment.
2 - @happyfunny I cannot help you fix your essay because you did not provide the complete original prompt for me...
Writing FeedbackhappyfunnyHolt - Dec 3, 2017
|The bland food reflects my bland, although exciting, life - CWM Essay
2 - Jingxuan, you should try to combine your point of view about life with your love for bland food. You...
UndergraduateJingxuanHolt - Dec 3, 2017
|A successful researcher from Africa. Statement of Purpose (Business Administration, PhD)
2 - Kweweli , since you are applying to be admitted to a PhD program without the prerequisite MS degree, you...
GraduateEschaHolt - Dec 3, 2017
|A discussion has been ongoing regarding the development of roads and railways
3 - fiZa, Actually, in the scoring procedure for IELTS, you are asked to represent only your understanding of the prompt...
Writing FeedbacksfizaHolt - Dec 3, 2017
|Complain about the restaurant service.
2 - @happyfunny what are the parameters given to you for the writing of this letter? This is a very badly...
LettershappyfunnyHolt - Dec 3, 2017
|Same-sex Marriage and The Effects on the Society
2 - Jesse, your essay is heavy on theory, but lacking in examples and additional information that will support the data...
Writing Feedbackray8171Holt - Dec 3, 2017
|IELTS task 1: People who lived in Charlestown
3 - Hi Peter, let me show what you are supposed to improve. Please, meet my notes and deal with them....
Writing FeedbackPeterBrownakbarmappiare - Dec 2, 2017
|Cover letter for a trainee program position at Daimler Greater China company
5 - @Honghaoli Thanks for your help. You are right, I should not tell the HR again the things I have...
LettersStandingsStandings - Dec 2, 2017
|The school system should start teaching foreign language class at primary school.
4 - @Holt thank you for your feedback , im a little confused because im getting different advice , the ielts...
Writing FeedbackRobaaRobaa - Dec 2, 2017
|Essay about learning how to ride a bike and what it taught me
Undergraduatemmenesesmmeneses - Dec 2, 2017
|Essay on a career. Out of hundreds of thousands of careers out there, it is hard to pick just one.
2 - Arjun , your essay does not provide the required explanation for your response. First up, you need to choose...
UndergraduatextrimixHolt - Dec 2, 2017
|Personal Statement for a UK University - Marketing Master Level
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your sincere advise, dear. I thought I should mention something that I have...
GraduateMariamMMariamM - Dec 1, 2017
|The top performing sportsmen earn huge amount of money as compared to people in other professions
5 - @chinkybehl22 hello, I have read your whole essay. as per my knowledge I have rearrange your essay to...
Writing Feedbackchinkybehl22sfiza - Dec 1, 2017
|Canadian flag debate, Medical care act, Terry Fox's marathon of Hope/ Canadian History
Research PapersSyedShahriarbozka4251 - Dec 1, 2017
|IELTS TASK 1-The chart gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity
4 - This intro looks incomplete to me You could have mentioned that the results were measured in percentage. Also...
Writing FeedbackUlicaPeterBrown - Dec 1, 2017
|IELTS WT2, Fast-food companies should not be allowed to give away free toys with their food
4 - Kay, you have set an admirable goal for yourself with regards to your desired score for the IELTS test....
Writing FeedbackmacbzHolt - Dec 1, 2017
|A university education should include an internship or some type of work experience.
2 - Trà , which of the English tests are you preparing for? IELTS or TOEFL? Also, what is the complete...
Writing FeedbackSakiCCSHolt - Dec 1, 2017
|Olin business school Master of Finance required essay--- I want to learn real expertise
Graduateyxhzxpyxhzxp - Dec 1, 2017
|Statement of Purpose for M.Sc. application to UK universities - Mathematics
GraduateDylan620Dylan620 - Nov 30, 2017
|What motivates you and write about a topic that reflects your values
4 - @Holt and Macbz, thank you so much for this great feedback. It's helpful and i will incorporate the comments...
Scholarshipwinday209winday209 - Nov 30, 2017
|IELTS writing part2, congestion and traffic jams are a common and major problem in most cities.
Writing Feedbackmacbzmacbz - Nov 30, 2017
|The information superhighway was greatly transformed the way man conducts his activities today
Writing FeedbackErica TinHolt - Nov 30, 2017
|Statement of Purpose for Master of Science in Chemical Engineering Practice
5 - @admission2012 thanks for your kind comments and valuable suggestions. I have implemented like you suggested. Looked really better after...
GraduateWiGiGWiGiG - Nov 30, 2017
|PT PROMPT: what qualities do you feel are necessary for success as a physical therapist?
4 - As the patient performed her exercises ... ->The following is my suggestion of the sentence ->The significant...
GraduateAnirtakErica Tin - Nov 30, 2017
|IELTS Writing Task 2 : Material Possessions or Kindness/Trust?
Writing Feedbackzeqiyasinhappyfunny - Nov 30, 2017
|Explanation for poor grades during study abroad program and GRE - Extenuating situation statements.
5 - @admission2012 Thanks for the feedback. That definitely gives me an absolutely new point of view to how I to...
Graduateekngen22ekngen22 - Nov 30, 2017