|Development Impact Plan - Theme: Science and Technology - Commonwealth
2 - Your response is widespread but common. It does not present a proper representation of each development issue as it...
Scholarshipzaineb0131 - Mar 29, 2021Holt - Mar 30, 2021
|The proposed study will have a vast impact on my professional career - Australian awards scholarship
ScholarshipAbl steven - Mar 28, 2021MsC - Mar 29, 2021
|Self-employment became popular among the majority of people. Why is that?
Writing FeedbackMsC - Mar 25, 2021MsC - Mar 29, 2021
|Why did you choose your proposed course and institution*? AAS; Crawford School of Public Policy
4 - use the more specific reason for university choice rather than the reputation reason. what course you interested and why...
Scholarshipyanbro - Mar 24, 2021DA786 - Mar 29, 2021
|My Interest in Life Sciences - NUS Personal Statement
NEW - Hi, I need some help in cutting this essay down to 2000 characters and structuring it better. I also...
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|GKS-G Global Korean Scolarship | Personal Statement | Ph.D. in Cybersecurity
3 - Thanks for your feedback. I rewrote the personal statement: Hello, my name is Oscar Llerena. I am the...
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|To afford a house instead of renting one is tremendously essential for people in some nations
3 - @Holt Firstly, I want to thank you for giving me those comments. Secondly, I want to make this clear....
Writing Feedbackgiangkc1811 - Mar 28, 2021giangkc1811 - Mar 29, 2021
|Possibility of space tourism and its impact on astronomic
Writing Feedbackphong4703 - Mar 29, 2021Holt - Mar 29, 2021
|Study plan for master's of enterprise management for university in China
2 - This is not a study plan. This is a personal statement. There is nothing in this presentation that represents...
Graduateasya - Mar 28, 2021Holt - Mar 29, 2021
|Not one without water - Personal Statement for Commonwealth Shared Scholarship
2 - There should be an expanded discussion in relation to the second paragraph. Consider how you contributed to solving the...
Scholarshipchhena96 - Mar 28, 2021Holt - Mar 29, 2021
|Writing task 1: The chart show households in renting and owning accomocation in English and Wales
NEW - Houses owned vs rented 1918-2011 The chart illustrates how purchasing and renting houses of people in England and...
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|Going to school or homeschooling
5 - The way that you are using to divide your essay is inappropriate. There should not be just one sentence...
Writing Feedbackmiraitowa - Mar 19, 2021giangkc1811 - Mar 28, 2021
|Autobiography to apply scholarship study abroad
Scholarshiptuongvy1992003 - Mar 27, 2021tuongvy1992003 - Mar 28, 2021
|NZ International businesses - Is this a well thought out Introduction and Thesis Statement
2 - You cannot jump from first to last without representing the discussion topics in between. You have the right idea,...
Writing Feedbackkartstar113 - Mar 27, 2021Holt - Mar 28, 2021
|Master in Local Government - How will the proposed course will contribute to your career?
3 - @Holt thankyou for your valuable comments. Murdoch University is also providing Master of Arts in Local Governance. I think...
Scholarshipassad12 - Mar 26, 2021assad12 - Mar 27, 2021
|Learning Korean - GKS - Statement of Purpose - Language Study Plan
2 - The language study plan is normally responded to within 1-2 paragraphs that immediately outline the pre-Korea and post-Korea language...
Graduateiyo - Mar 26, 2021Holt - Mar 27, 2021
|Future people will not buy printed newspaper or books, they will read everything they want online
3 - Hi, I think you could diversify your presentation by using synonyms for 'printed newspaper" instead of the word itself....
Writing FeedbackHodiep - Mar 23, 2021LadyOfClockwork - Mar 26, 2021
|The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in million tonnes from four different sectors
5 - Hi. As a reader, I'm not happy with the "enormous change" sentence. First, I think you could make...
Writing Feedbackngockhanh181107 - Mar 19, 2021LadyOfClockwork - Mar 26, 2021
|GKS-G Korean Scholarship | Personal Statement | M.S. Public Policy (Environment/Green Development)
3 - Thank you for your response. I've checked and do qualify under a new Korean Heritage category, provided neither...
Graduatescoriae - Mar 25, 2021scoriae - Mar 26, 2021
|Some are born with talents. Some are not. But an appropriate approach can help.
2 - You have an almost perfect presentation here. The only problem, is that you used your personal opinion as a...
Writing Feedbackhungprovip0089 - Mar 25, 2021Holt - Mar 26, 2021
|Topic: Some people believe that children are required to obey the rules of their parents and teacher
2 - A prompt restatement is always helped by a clear opinion being presented at the end of the final thesis...
Writing Feedbackthanhvo - Mar 25, 2021Holt - Mar 26, 2021
|Why I decided to take up science? Bachelor of Engineering or Bachelor of Aviation
ScholarshipJesus1 - Mar 24, 2021jackkenshi - Mar 25, 2021
|My Demon - The verdict of my diagnoses
NEW - THE VERDICT The pain in my shoulder had not changed by the time of my appointment with Dr. Reed....
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|Personal Statement for M.Eng. Mechanical Engineering at University of Alberta
2 - The ideal SOP presentation has a maximum word count of 750 words. I find this essay to be extremely...
GraduateDioBrando69 - Mar 23, 2021Holt - Mar 24, 2021
|In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family
2 - There is an unnecessary discussion point in your restatement. The part about the main reasons why people would spare...
Writing FeedbackTri An - Mar 23, 2021Holt - Mar 24, 2021
|New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers
3 - Thanks for your feedback. 1. I totally agree with exceeded word limit comment. I will work on limiting it...
Writing Feedbackdipsy07 - Mar 22, 2021dipsy07 - Mar 24, 2021
|Discuss both views: joining university or leave school to get a job
4 - @lynguyen2912 Here's a structure you can use for this which works everytime with this question prompt: INTRO: Restate...
Writing Feedbacklynguyen2912 - Mar 21, 2021Ahmed adobewan - Mar 23, 2021
|Personal Essay: History - a concept, theory, or topic you have explored.
2 - You told the reviewer what topic is of interest to you. It was explained quite well. The reason you...
Writing FeedbackPocket Friend - Mar 22, 2021Holt - Mar 23, 2021
|SHOW HOW THE WORLD HAS CHANGED SINCE THE INVENTION OF THE MOBILE PHONE
2 - If I am right and the original prompt of this essay was based on how people's interaction has changed...
Writing FeedbackNguyenMy19055 - Mar 22, 2021Holt - Mar 23, 2021
|Study plan for Canada Study Permit. Canada - people from around the globe are welcomed there
Letterssintiash59 - Mar 22, 2021Holt - Mar 23, 2021