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There are several reasons why nuclear technology is really worthwhile for humans life

3 - Hi @anonym28 First of all, please insert the prompt so that essay forum members are able to give you...

Writing Feedbackanonym28yuukinohan4 - Mar 26, 2017
Urban Design - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR GRADUATE APPLICATION FOR MASTERS

3 - Thanks Mary. I am not the graduate applicant. I am just helping some people out with their graduate application-pro...

Graduatechizy7chizy7 - Mar 26, 2017
Ielts task 2 - An increasing trend of living or studing abroad

4 - hi @Maitouyen282 better if you change and to be comma before 'studying' In academic essay,...

Writing FeedbackMaitouyen282yuukinohan4 - Mar 26, 2017
Writing IELTS TASK 2 - Topic: Paper NEWS importance

3 - @Holt Thank for your comment. I will try to fix my mistakes in next essay...

Writing FeedbackDatnguyenDatnguyen - Mar 26, 2017
Fastfood is good or bad for our lives?

5 - @mastindersingh Thank you so much for your support, your comment is very precious to me. I hope next essays...

Writing FeedbackAndreiWindyAndreiWindy - Mar 26, 2017
Sentence Outline- Top 7 Steps To Make Your IoT More Secure

2 - Roy, your steps 2 and 3 are redundant. If you read the outlines very well, you will discover that...

Writing FeedbacknezumiHolt - Mar 26, 2017
Which is better for children? to grow up in the countryside or in a big city?

3 - @pirFena In my opinion, your essay is quite good, although sometimes I feel hard to understand. You used Academic...

Writing FeedbackpirFenaAndreiWindy - Mar 26, 2017
Facebook usage among undergraduate students - research study introduction

3 - Thank you so much for your help. Actually in class I was taught to write the setting in the...

Research Paperskalivukalivu - Mar 26, 2017
5 paragraph essay on Louis Riel

2 - Kaylee, the best way for you to write this essay is to first, do some research into the background...

Essayskay2Holt - Mar 26, 2017
Personal statement for Loughborough University graduate school african trust fund

2 - Olorunwa, the personal statement is okay but lacks a presentation of the relevance of your studies to the programs...

ScholarshipPhocusHolt - Mar 26, 2017
Caffeine: Friend or Foe? In the perspective of the child, the adult, and the elderly.

2 - Amber, I firmly believe that your thesis statement in the first paragraph needs more work. Try to find a...

Research PapersAMB2174945Holt - Mar 26, 2017
Reconsidering my application - how to write a good appeal for sdsu?

3 - Tammy, the tone of your letter is too informal for an appeal letter. this must carry a serious and...

Lettersttran0408Holt - Mar 26, 2017
'I have been an average student'; SOP - Good, Bad or Ugly

3 - I think it needs little bit of work.... try to include some instances some instances and examples from your...

UndergraduateVin23only1shubham - Mar 25, 2017
Cars on road, climate, and the level of pollution in many cities.

3 - @ Holt Thanks for your input. it would be great if you please point out the grammatical mistakes and...

Writing FeedbackMayank7gMayank7g - Mar 25, 2017
People can be closer eachother. How Internet affect on our life?

6 - @hain3dessay @Holt @thunga251090 Thank you very much for your opinions, I will try to improve my writing skill....

Writing FeedbackAndreiWindyAndreiWindy - Mar 25, 2017
Being one of doctors - "the saviours of humanity".

3 - @Holt Thanks for the review. I am editing it....

ScholarshipDrTarikDrTarik - Mar 25, 2017
How to support developing countries ?

3 - @Holt thank you Holt so much! I will try to write better....

Writing Feedbackfrenchfriesfrenchfries - Mar 25, 2017
IELTS writing task 2. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken?

6 - @blu Hi! I am a student and I am learning IELTS too. Therefore I will give you some better...

Writing FeedbackbluMaitouyen282 - Mar 25, 2017
Flowers are something I feel; One thing to represent human race

2 - Jenny, this is not a bad first attempt at a draft. The idea of sending a flower to another...

Writing FeedbackjennnyyyyHolt - Mar 25, 2017
TOEFL IBT Independent Writing: Owning smart phones or not? Your point of view

3 - @Holt Thank you, it was very helpful. I will try to rewrite this essay. Could you please take your...

Writing Feedbackhain3dessayhain3dessay - Mar 25, 2017
Graduate Marketing Degree - Scholarship personal statement

3 - Rihanna, for starters, a personal statement is not written in the form of a letter unless it indicated that...

ScholarshipRihannaHolt - Mar 25, 2017
Should children do household chares?

3 - Huynh, I am very sad to tell you that the only score this essay can get is 1 in...

Writing FeedbackHilary88Holt - Mar 25, 2017
Discussion about young people ignoring some traditional beliefs

4 - @akbarmappiare @Holt thank you very much for the comments and correction....

Writing Feedbackzealzeal - Mar 24, 2017
Benefit to Home Country Essay - The Impact of My Work

3 - @Holt Thank you for the review. Please take a look at what I came up with. Growing...

ScholarshipCardinalCardinal - Mar 24, 2017
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Is it useless to keep traditional skills and ways of life?

4 - I think you are conscious of using connected words, that is so valuable in your essay. From my experience,...

Writing Feedbackenglishholicdaiha20082009 - Mar 24, 2017
Unhealthy convenience food - Task 2 IELTS Writing module

5 - I think you no need present the history of fast food. Instead, you need to point out to what...

Writing Feedbackhadeelhekmatblu - Mar 24, 2017
SOLUTIONS ON CLIMATE CHANGE

6 - So when it comes to grammar, vocabs, you did a good job. From my experience, the last paragraph have...

Writing Feedbackfrenchfriesdaiha20082009 - Mar 24, 2017
Writing IELTS Task2: Topic Food products. Imported or local?

3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your comment. I will try next time to do better....

Writing Feedbacknguyensonhdtk94nguyensonhdtk94 - Mar 24, 2017
6th NIDA summber camp 2017 on "Sustainable Community Development" In Thailand.

3 - I think many ideas in your essay are good and it contains a bunch of good words. But you...

ScholarshipShamsher singfrenchfries - Mar 24, 2017
'networking between Indonesia and the Netherlands' Stuned Scholarship

4 - I think we usually use the "wet season" rather than rain season. And, i don't agree with this statement...

ScholarshipPikapikakuroRoselanim - Mar 24, 2017