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Development Impact Plan - Theme: Science and Technology - Commonwealth

2 - Your response is widespread but common. It does not present a proper representation of each development issue as it...

Scholarshipzaineb0131 - Mar 29, 2021Holt - Mar 30, 2021
The proposed study will have a vast impact on my professional career - Australian awards scholarship

3 - @Abl steven Hi, let's me to add some feedback. first of all, as there is a limited word in...

ScholarshipAbl steven - Mar 28, 2021MsC - Mar 29, 2021
Self-employment became popular among the majority of people. Why is that?

6 - @NMU123 thank you, I'll try to rewrite this topic with the suggestions you've mentioned :D...

Writing FeedbackMsC - Mar 25, 2021MsC - Mar 29, 2021
Why did you choose your proposed course and institution*? AAS; Crawford School of Public Policy

4 - use the more specific reason for university choice rather than the reputation reason. what course you interested and why...

Scholarshipyanbro - Mar 24, 2021DA786 - Mar 29, 2021
My Interest in Life Sciences - NUS Personal Statement

NEW - Hi, I need some help in cutting this essay down to 2000 characters and structuring it better. I also...

Undergraduaterebecca02_essays - Mar 29, 2021 -
GKS-G Global Korean Scolarship | Personal Statement | Ph.D. in Cybersecurity

3 - Thanks for your feedback. I rewrote the personal statement: Hello, my name is Oscar Llerena. I am the...

Graduateresearcher182 - Mar 25, 2021researcher182 - Mar 29, 2021
To afford a house instead of renting one is tremendously essential for people in some nations

3 - @Holt Firstly, I want to thank you for giving me those comments. Secondly, I want to make this clear....

Writing Feedbackgiangkc1811 - Mar 28, 2021giangkc1811 - Mar 29, 2021
Possibility of space tourism and its impact on astronomic

2 - Right off the bat, I can tell you that this essay will not get a passing score because of...

Writing Feedbackphong4703 - Mar 29, 2021Holt - Mar 29, 2021
Study plan for master's of enterprise management for university in China

2 - This is not a study plan. This is a personal statement. There is nothing in this presentation that represents...

Graduateasya - Mar 28, 2021Holt - Mar 29, 2021
Not one without water - Personal Statement for Commonwealth Shared Scholarship

2 - There should be an expanded discussion in relation to the second paragraph. Consider how you contributed to solving the...

Scholarshipchhena96 - Mar 28, 2021Holt - Mar 29, 2021
Writing task 1: The chart show households in renting and owning accomocation in English and Wales

NEW - Houses owned vs rented 1918-2011 The chart illustrates how purchasing and renting houses of people in England and...

Writing FeedbackLe Minh Hien - Mar 28, 2021 -
Going to school or homeschooling

5 - The way that you are using to divide your essay is inappropriate. There should not be just one sentence...

Writing Feedbackmiraitowa - Mar 19, 2021giangkc1811 - Mar 28, 2021
Autobiography to apply scholarship study abroad

5 - @giangkc1811 Ok. I will try to write again. Thank you so much 😊...

Scholarshiptuongvy1992003 - Mar 27, 2021tuongvy1992003 - Mar 28, 2021
NZ International businesses - Is this a well thought out Introduction and Thesis Statement

2 - You cannot jump from first to last without representing the discussion topics in between. You have the right idea,...

Writing Feedbackkartstar113 - Mar 27, 2021Holt - Mar 28, 2021
Master in Local Government - How will the proposed course will contribute to your career?

3 - @Holt thankyou for your valuable comments. Murdoch University is also providing Master of Arts in Local Governance. I think...

Scholarshipassad12 - Mar 26, 2021assad12 - Mar 27, 2021
Learning Korean - GKS - Statement of Purpose - Language Study Plan

2 - The language study plan is normally responded to within 1-2 paragraphs that immediately outline the pre-Korea and post-Korea language...

Graduateiyo - Mar 26, 2021Holt - Mar 27, 2021
Future people will not buy printed newspaper or books, they will read everything they want online

3 - Hi, I think you could diversify your presentation by using synonyms for 'printed newspaper" instead of the word itself....

Writing FeedbackHodiep - Mar 23, 2021LadyOfClockwork - Mar 26, 2021
The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in million tonnes from four different sectors

5 - Hi. As a reader, I'm not happy with the "enormous change" sentence. First, I think you could make...

Writing Feedbackngockhanh181107 - Mar 19, 2021LadyOfClockwork - Mar 26, 2021
GKS-G Korean Scholarship | Personal Statement | M.S. Public Policy (Environment/Green Development)

3 - Thank you for your response. I've checked and do qualify under a new Korean Heritage category, provided neither...

Graduatescoriae - Mar 25, 2021scoriae - Mar 26, 2021
Some are born with talents. Some are not. But an appropriate approach can help.

2 - You have an almost perfect presentation here. The only problem, is that you used your personal opinion as a...

Writing Feedbackhungprovip0089 - Mar 25, 2021Holt - Mar 26, 2021
Topic: Some people believe that children are required to obey the rules of their parents and teacher

2 - A prompt restatement is always helped by a clear opinion being presented at the end of the final thesis...

Writing Feedbackthanhvo - Mar 25, 2021Holt - Mar 26, 2021
Why I decided to take up science? Bachelor of Engineering or Bachelor of Aviation

3 - @Jesus1 I get this input and I think you will find it helpful as well. The question...

ScholarshipJesus1 - Mar 24, 2021jackkenshi - Mar 25, 2021
My Demon - The verdict of my diagnoses

NEW - THE VERDICT The pain in my shoulder had not changed by the time of my appointment with Dr. Reed....

Writing Feedbackmjdmartin - Mar 24, 2021 -
Personal Statement for M.Eng. Mechanical Engineering at University of Alberta

2 - The ideal SOP presentation has a maximum word count of 750 words. I find this essay to be extremely...

GraduateDioBrando69 - Mar 23, 2021Holt - Mar 24, 2021
In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family

2 - There is an unnecessary discussion point in your restatement. The part about the main reasons why people would spare...

Writing FeedbackTri An - Mar 23, 2021Holt - Mar 24, 2021
New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers

3 - Thanks for your feedback. 1. I totally agree with exceeded word limit comment. I will work on limiting it...

Writing Feedbackdipsy07 - Mar 22, 2021dipsy07 - Mar 24, 2021
Discuss both views: joining university or leave school to get a job

4 - @lynguyen2912 Here's a structure you can use for this which works everytime with this question prompt: INTRO: Restate...

Writing Feedbacklynguyen2912 - Mar 21, 2021Ahmed adobewan - Mar 23, 2021
Personal Essay: History - a concept, theory, or topic you have explored.

2 - You told the reviewer what topic is of interest to you. It was explained quite well. The reason you...

Writing FeedbackPocket Friend - Mar 22, 2021Holt - Mar 23, 2021
SHOW HOW THE WORLD HAS CHANGED SINCE THE INVENTION OF THE MOBILE PHONE

2 - If I am right and the original prompt of this essay was based on how people's interaction has changed...

Writing FeedbackNguyenMy19055 - Mar 22, 2021Holt - Mar 23, 2021
Study plan for Canada Study Permit. Canada - people from around the globe are welcomed there

2 - There is a need for you to address your thesis as a part of your study plan. Since you...

Letterssintiash59 - Mar 22, 2021Holt - Mar 23, 2021