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IELTS WRITTING TASK 1-The diagrams illustrate information about changes in a student accommodation

2 - There are 2 errors in this phrase. The first, is that you mistakenly identified a map as a...

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Ending the murdering of innocent children

2 - You cannot use a citation to open your presentation. The introduction in the first paragraph should be reference...

Research PapersSuccessful1 - Feb 24, 2025Holt - Feb 27, 2025
To overcome financial barriers - GLOCAL PROGRAM - ERASMUS MUNDUS SCHOLARSHIP

3 - Thank you for your suggestion. Regarding the rest of the essay, do you think further revisions are necessary?...

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R-GKS PERSONAL STATEMENT UNIVERSITY TRACK - MASTER'S DEGREE IN MARINE ENGINEERING

2 - I feel that the presentation is unnecessarily long. It could be more concise and interesting to the reviewers. You...

Scholarshiplailatulqid - Feb 19, 2025Holt - Feb 27, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK1: INFORMATION ABOUT DEPARTMENT STORES AND ONLINE STORES IN AUSTRALIA IN 2011

2 - The essay meets the correct word number requirement but fails to address the essay in the proper format. Since...

Writing Feedbackhsghoas - Feb 19, 2025Holt - Feb 27, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - LINE GRAPH - The percentage of the population living in cities

2 - The essay is overwritten. This should only be 200 words at the most. By writing 206 words, you have...

Writing FeedbackHY Ho - Feb 18, 2025Holt - Feb 24, 2025
The effect of technology on people live

2 - This is a task 2 essay that will receive an automatic failing score simply because it is way too...

Writing FeedbackLieuLieu - Feb 18, 2025Holt - Feb 24, 2025
Essay on the Paradox of Choice for an ETS question

3 - Your comparison is well-structured, but it could be clearer and more concise....

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Education in Biology - to achieve scholarship in DGIST

5 - Your study plan is strong, but it could benefit from improved flow, clarity, and conciseness....

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Master of Public Policy (MPP) - Manaaki scholarship

6 - @Febri0402 Looking at your essay, I agree with other commentors. Rather than describing what you want to learn, you...

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The Value of Hard Work - GKS-G Personal Statement

2 - These information should be shared in the language study plan. While you can discuss the Chinese language here,...

Scholarshipclauana - Feb 17, 2025Holt - Feb 17, 2025
Proposal Essay: Is Social Media a Negative Impact on Mental Health?

4 - You should first make your opinion on the essay prompt clear. Only then should you bring in contextualization with...

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Accounting and Management - Lund University Global Scholarship

2 - The Lund Scholarship focuses solely on merit based scholarships. The merit of the scholarship applicant should be based upon...

ScholarshipMercySpeak - Feb 15, 2025Holt - Feb 16, 2025
Friendship: Is It Really THAT IMPORTANT? - UBC Personal Profile

2 - The essay does not come off as explaining why friendship is important to you. Instead, it reflects that communication...

UndergraduateEleana - Feb 15, 2025Holt - Feb 15, 2025
Communication - What skills and knowledge do you hope to gain from your study programme?

4 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback! The character limit for what i can write is 1200 character...

Scholarshiplotuslilly - Feb 14, 2025lotuslilly - Feb 15, 2025
Social stereotype - Yale Young Global Scholars

3 - @TracySifaMagambo I don't think this text is suitable for the question you had to answer. Throughout the whole first...

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Study Plan for Political Science Master's Degree - GKS-G

4 - @Holt I've rewritten part of this essay trying to align it with your advice. If you have time, please...

Scholarshipclauana - Feb 9, 2025clauana - Feb 15, 2025
The two tables compare the number of exchange students from Europe to Australia and from Australia

2 - You have overwritten this analytical essay. The word requirement for this essay, that falls within the 20 minute writing...

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Think Tanks and Promotion of Bilateral Collaborations - Future Plan - GKS-G

3 - @Holt I appreciate the insight and will rewrite it....

Scholarshipclauana - Feb 10, 2025clauana - Feb 13, 2025
GKS-G - Language Study Plan - My road with korean language

3 - @Holt Thanks for your feedback!...

Scholarshipclauana - Feb 9, 2025clauana - Feb 12, 2025
From Acting to Action: How Theater Shaped My Path to Management - UBC Personal Profile

3 - Hi Eleana, your essay seems a little off topic from the prompt. You begin your first paragraph with...

UndergraduateEleana - Feb 1, 2025clauana - Feb 11, 2025
IELTS WT2 - Socialising online or in person

3 - Hii Gwen, I feel like your first paragraph lacks a real sense. It's too short and vague without...

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My cultural identity - Temple University Personal Statement/ College essay

3 - That was a great essay from my point of view. You got the reviewer to smoothly understand your personal...

Undergraduaterintezar - Feb 8, 2025clauana - Feb 9, 2025
GkS Graduate Scholarship For Master's Degree In Early Child Education

4 - The essay is too short and not properly written in an organized format. Try to rewrite it, ensuring...

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A circus artist and a scout - GKS graduate program personal statement

2 - There are 2 considerations that should help you decide the focus of your discussion. These are: 1. Are...

Scholarshipgabucee - Feb 6, 2025Holt - Feb 7, 2025
Argument research paper: Community Fluoridated Water and Policy Reform

2 - The research paper effectively transmits the researched information to the readers. However, merely delivering this information is not enough....

Research PapersPayne186 - Feb 5, 2025Holt - Feb 6, 2025
"it ain't over till it's over" - gks personal statement draft

3 - @Holt Thankyou for your advice.. I'll correct my mistakes sir....

ScholarshipIanKookoo - Feb 3, 2025IanKookoo - Feb 4, 2025
LPDP Essay - Personal statement and paragraph about background reasons and skills

2 - When applying for any scholarship, you must provide a strong academic foundation in terms of research skills, academic achievements,...

Scholarshipbonaventura_bb - Feb 3, 2025Holt - Feb 4, 2025
Applying scholarship GKS essay in teaching language field

2 - One of the main questions that your essay should address is "Why study a Masters in French in Korea...

Scholarshipnguyenleminh - Feb 3, 2025Holt - Feb 4, 2025
Write a short story. Imagine you wake up in a completely different city

3 - @Holt I appreciate your detailed feedback and will apply your practical advice to make the story more engaging. I...

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