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Sales & Marketing Manager - solving a challenge and to implementing change or reform

2 - Take out the "etc." reference in the essay. That is a highly unprofessional reference/word and should not be used...

ScholarshipYun Bo Bo - Apr 19, 2022Holt - Apr 19, 2022
Traveling in a group or alone?

2 - This is a word phrase error. Going outside means that one merely steps outside of the home. It...

Writing FeedbackZustK - Apr 19, 2022Holt - Apr 19, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - CRIME AND THE LAW - THE DEATH PENALTY

2 - The prompt restatement should not include a reference to the global scale of death penalty agreement as that is...

Writing FeedbackKhoa Le - Apr 19, 2022Holt - Apr 19, 2022
AN ESSAY OF MY CONTRIBUTION TO HOME COUNTRY DEVELOPMENT AFTER MY STUDIES ABROAD FOR A SCHOLARSHIP

3 - Thank you sir I will do as you have directed...

ScholarshipRichieRaph - Apr 18, 2022RichieRaph - Apr 19, 2022
Msc Human technology in Sports and medicine - my motivation letter

3 - @Holt Thanks a lot for the reply. Yes, I will consider the changes you have recommended. Thank you...

LettersVk18luv - Apr 18, 2022Vk18luv - Apr 19, 2022
Benefits of learning English

3 - That's great! Keep it up! I reckon that you should learn how to use compound and complex sentences to...

Writing Feedbackchurongcon - Apr 12, 2022Khoa Le - Apr 19, 2022
Young people who commit crimes should be treated the same way as adults. Agree or Disagree?

4 - If I were you, I would write my conclusion with 3 sentences. One is paraphrased from the topic, then...

Writing FeedbackThhuytien - Apr 12, 2022Khoa Le - Apr 19, 2022
IELTS Task 1 essay about regular physical activity of different age groups with both genders

4 - Do not fool yourself. Since you committed the same errors as the last time, you cannot make any claims...

Writing FeedbackLemonade312 - Apr 15, 2022Holt - Apr 19, 2022
Cerebral Palsy in infants

2 - The work has too many in-text citations from the very beginning. The writer relies heavily on the other person...

Research PapersAlmashi - Apr 18, 2022Holt - Apr 19, 2022
The chart compares the outcomes of a research on the customers' buying and drink habits in Australia

6 - @elalan You're welcome! I'm glad I could help you....

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Melbourne University Master of Education; Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?

3 - I appreciate the comment. I need more private help. Let me know further information plz. Please contact us at...

ScholarshipMika Fly - Apr 11, 2022Mika Fly - Apr 19, 2022
School band member - Applying for Kaist undergraduate scholarship

3 - Is selling flowers online (Instagram) considere as a business ?? I used to have a small project me and...

Scholarshiplaylay1234 - Apr 16, 2022laylay1234 - Apr 18, 2022
The expansion of multinational companies produces positive effects for everyone. Agree or disagree?

2 - This is a single opinion essay that bases the opinion defense paragraphs on the agreement or disagreement of the...

Writing Feedbacklinlin8 - Apr 17, 2022Holt - Apr 17, 2022
Cold Cookies and Culturalism: AP Research paper on cultural upbringing and biology

3 - @Holt I don't necessarily include a 'psychological review'-that portion of my introduction was meant to serve as an argument...

Research Paperssiyeonish - Apr 16, 2022siyeonish - Apr 17, 2022
Incredible core courses and field of studies - why this course and institution?

2 - There is a need to present 2 course choices at 2 universities. This is a requirement that allows the...

ScholarshipHeain - Apr 16, 2022Holt - Apr 17, 2022
Importance of Universal Health (UHC) Coverage in the US and Modern World

2 - The introduction is less of an original thesis presentation as it is composed mostly of cited material from the...

Research PapersCSheppard13 - Apr 16, 2022Holt - Apr 17, 2022
IELTS Writing Task 1 - Revenues and Expenditures of a Children's Charity in the USA.

2 - The opening summary will immediately result in a lower GRA consideration due to the run-on nature of the presentation....

Writing Feedbackmahfuj840 - Apr 16, 2022Holt - Apr 16, 2022
Give the cause and solution of pneumonia and diarrhea in children

2 - This essay is suitable only as an English writing exercise and not an IELTS Task 2 essay. The reason?...

Writing FeedbackNtrang1510 - Apr 16, 2022Holt - Apr 16, 2022
Master of Landscape Architecture - proposed course and institution

3 - I plan to create and design a good living environment for humans, which reminds them closer to nature and...

Scholarshipmustofa798 - Apr 14, 2022mahfuj840 - Apr 16, 2022
COVER LETTER APPLY TO SCIENTIFIC DEVELOPER POSITION AT SCHRODINGER, INC.

2 - The letter is not clear about whether the position being applied for is currently open or if the applicant...

Lettersdolong2110 - Apr 14, 2022Holt - Apr 15, 2022
Australia Awards Scholarship Application Supporting Statement: Contribution to solving challenges

2 - The problem is the constant alternating between "we" and "I" in the presentation. Focus on the "I" aspect only....

Scholarshipthebigmade - Apr 14, 2022Holt - Apr 14, 2022
Hosting an international sporting competition is a beneficial chance for a country; true or false?

2 - The restated opinions must be presented as 2 stand-alone sentences. These separate sentences will allow the reader to better...

Writing FeedbackTruong Bao Long - Apr 13, 2022Holt - Apr 14, 2022
Mechanical Engineering BS - educational and career goals and the reason for choosing your major

2 - As far as the reasons for the course choice are concerned, the reasons are vast but lacking in development....

UndergraduateMARCOVLD - Apr 12, 2022Holt - Apr 13, 2022
Letter of Motivation PhD (research-based, with pre-defined research topic)

2 - Seeing how the motivation for your studies stems more from related experiences after completing the masters course, the molrational...

Lettersedgmin - Apr 12, 2022Holt - Apr 13, 2022
Living on their own or living at home during school days.

2 - Good work on the prompt restatement. It is a well integrated sentence presentation that shows control over sentence structuring....

Writing Feedbackjdchan - Apr 12, 2022Holt - Apr 12, 2022
Master Environment and Energy Management Motivation letter

2 - I would have to say that the writer over-developed the content of the letter to the point where it...

Lettersvincdels - Apr 12, 2022Holt - Apr 12, 2022
The differences in ownership of technology devices and the number of hours spent doing households

2 - The writer should be able to create a shorter report for these 2 images. Due to the 20 minute...

Writing FeedbackRosalie Yang - Apr 12, 2022Holt - Apr 12, 2022
Causes of crime and activities to prevent this rise in criminal activity. Reasons with examples.

2 - We are in the 21st century, not the 20th century. To avoid such mistakes, do not try to make...

Writing Feedbackrussia autumn - Apr 12, 2022Holt - Apr 12, 2022
Serving humanity / Social work - Why did you choose proposed course and institutions? AAS

2 - The writer has provided a personal statement that is informative but not fully applicable to the information expectations of...

Scholarshipmkuria - Apr 11, 2022Holt - Apr 12, 2022
IELTS Writing Task 1 The graph shows the value in US dollars (in millions of dollars) of investment

2 - The summary overview is best presented over 2 sentences or more. The sentences must separately indicate the following data:...

Writing Feedbacknamle - Apr 11, 2022Holt - Apr 11, 2022