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|UC Davis Waitlist Essay - my mendeavors to study the Social Sciences
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|Prescription Drug Abuse among kids, Teens, and Adults
2 - Noah, I can see that you have included a listing of your reference material at the end of the...
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|SHOULD GOVERNMENT REGULATE THE FAST FOOD INDUSTRIES
2 - HI...when analyzing your essay, I have to say it is a nightmare for you. Despite less grammatical errors, your...
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|In my opinion railways are more important than roads. Government support. IELTS- writing task 2
2 - Halo Lin Yi, It seems that you still have a problem with grammatical understanding. Some sentences you made are...
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|Fatally Ill People's Choice
2 - Without pain and suffering, there is no existence (not to mention 'no pain, no gain). Life is by design...
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|Study Objectives Essay For Fulbright Scholarship Program 2018 From Pakistan
5 - @Holt @Monica26 I've taken advice of y'all and edited my essay which took me 12 days. Please let...
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|Different-an "other" which revealed to you your sense of self and your relationship to humanity
2 - Claudia, you have too many things going on in this essay. I realize that this trip left an impact...
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|I need a peer review of a 10 page research paper about the effects of TV viewing on young children.
2 - Kassi, the firs thing that I noticed about this paper was that the title was misleading. If you are...
Research PapersklaytonHolt - May 12, 2017
|Kids skills and familiarization in using new gadgets
5 - It's pretty good, but you failed to discuss how the technology would help children learn about the real (not...
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|Parents often let their children play a lot with computer and tablets in order to improve skills
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|IT sector business and childrens impact
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|Play a lot with gadget in the early age
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|Writing IELTS Task 2 parents let children playing computers and tablets
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|Empowering Gadgets to Access World
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|Children are very familiar with their electronic 'toys'
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|Essay ielts task 2 (Improve technolgical skill)
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|Punishment on educating children
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|Various cases of people living abroad
4 - Let me give your advice, pay attention with the connective word like between. Not between to, but between, and....
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|Progress Report English Course
6 - please attention your grammar and punctation, because there are some mistakes in your sentences. so, try to use complex...
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|Museums and artworks are important for the country, for the history, and culture from international
Writing FeedbackdaxXx_ryan31maily257 - May 10, 2017
|Research paper about the life of a jazz musician in the 1920s
2 - Allison, you have not properly discussed this essay. The instructions asked you to choose one side of the 3...
Research Papersasilver427Holt - May 10, 2017
|Provide College Cafeteria with suggestions
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Lettersadambacon813asilver427 - May 10, 2017
|Flying should cost less - benefits and drawbacks
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Writing Feedbackdearbaoeminhaqi - May 9, 2017
|An email massage to a Professor seeking for his supervisor ship for Masters Degree in Engineering.
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Graduatechumaessaychumaessay - May 9, 2017
|Discuss about the roles of metabolism and nutrient on one's ability to perform exercises.(400 words)
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|Research paper for an English 102 class about the dangers of social media
2 - Cameron, you cannot quote actual information in your opening statement. That is not allowed in an academic paper because...
Research Paperscollinscameron11Holt - May 8, 2017
|Should Parents Vaccinate Their Children Rough Draft. Need help on content and in-text citations
2 - Ryan, your thesis statement is not clear on the first paragraph of the essay. While you did present the...
Research PapersbigdogmadnessHolt - May 8, 2017
|IELTS Writing TASK2 - Women participate in the armed force
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|Write a letter to a company for information about voluntary work in a developing country.
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