|Exploring Natural Resources (high demand in oil and gas) - IELTS 2: Essay Writing
2 - Riya, this essay will automatically get a failing score of 2 for the TA portion. That score is based...
Writing FeedbackIELTS_AcademicHolt - Sep 19, 2017
|IELTS Task 1 _Description of Graph - spending time on the phone calls
3 - TingTing, your essay is not within the minimum required number of words for a Task 1 essay. Don't forget...
Writing FeedbackIELTSWARRIORHolt - Sep 19, 2017
|Courageous Individual With Passion
2 - Teng, this is a very generic personal statement. It does not capture the reviewers attention nor does it relay...
Undergraduatepg13TaiwanHolt - Sep 19, 2017
|My motivation letter to make the scholarship committee would be impressed
3 - Dear Holt, Thank you so much for your correction, I appreciate it You are right that this is my...
Scholarshipferdyferdy - Sep 19, 2017
|UVA Supplement: The word "push" is my favorite and reminds me that I shouldn't give up.
3 - Holt, thanks for the comment. Your comment was very helpful. By the way, I made a new version. Sorry,...
Undergraduaterowliejohnfloresrowliejohnflores - Sep 19, 2017
|Quest Bridge Biographical Essay for College Admission
5 - @Holt I can't thank you enough for your response. Everyone I asked to remark on my essay told me...
UndergraduateDenyingerrorsDenyingerrors - Sep 18, 2017
|MBA Dream from India - does this SOP sounds more like a Personal Statement?
GraduateYearnforsuccesspg13Taiwan - Sep 18, 2017
|MY CONTRIBUTION FOR MY COUNTRY - Career Plan Question for Chevening
4 - Hello, I'm back.. It will be kind of you helping me to correct my essay whether it has answered...
Scholarshipniputusriniputusri - Sep 18, 2017
|More and more factories are being built to serve for the massive production of large enterprises.
2 - Kim, your essay will fail on the basis of your opening statement alone. You were not able to properly...
Writing FeedbackMimi123Holt - Sep 18, 2017
|IELTS writing task 1: Australian school leavers' activities
3 - @Holt I have just revised the report as you advised. My latest one: The pie charts compare three...
Writing Feedbacksarahnasarahna - Sep 18, 2017
|Common app prompt 5 college application essay : opening new doors.
2 - Ben, do not focus on the pre-travel events. Focus on the travel events instead. Remember, the essay is asking...
Undergraduatebenh44Holt - Sep 18, 2017
|Area of Emphasis Essay - Film
3 - Sabrina, what prompt are you trying to respond to? It is really difficult to review your statement since I...
Undergraduatesourcandy888Holt - Sep 18, 2017
|Statement of Purpose - Applying for M.S. in Machine Learning Graduate Programs in the US.
2 - Gibran, your hypothetical discussions are good. Your thesis project is impressive, and your ambition to digitize the records of...
Graduatedarknight99Holt - Sep 18, 2017
|Vision, innovation and dedication levels are vital to determine if a leader can reach his/her goals
4 - @Holt Thank you so much, unfortunately i followed the direction of an essay I have seen in internet. Yes...
Scholarshipfahimaibrahimifahimaibrahimi - Sep 18, 2017
|Motivation Letter - Masters in Artificial Intelligence in Netherlands
Graduatelogeekallogeekal - Sep 17, 2017
|ISSUE:-think on task rather than worry about result
5 - As a reader, there is an ambiguty in your essay.Sometimes,it is like you are deviating from a main topic...
Writing Feedbackshraddhashendeabhilashbhure - Sep 17, 2017
|Crime is a serious problem in most countries and the crime rate has tendency to increase annually
Writing FeedbackAnnie Tran 162Annie Tran 162 - Sep 17, 2017
|'To make a positive improvement' - Chevening Essay : Individuals with strong networking skills
Scholarshipbnrdhmsntbnrdhmsnt - Sep 17, 2017
|Continuous maintaining and expanding the network as an important part of my professional success
3 - @Holt I have revised as you suggested. But I am not sure my first paragraph follows your advice. Could...
ScholarshipGanesh MumarGanesh Mumar - Sep 17, 2017
|Statement of Purpose for the Data Science Graduate program.
4 - @Holt @logeekal Many thanks for your suggestions and advice. I am charting out an SOP based on your comments...
GraduateSb_Dat_gradSb_Dat_grad - Sep 17, 2017
|The job of a leader- LEADERSHIP & INFLUENCE QUESTION- CHEVENING SCHOLARSHIP
Scholarshipphamductuanphamductuan - Sep 17, 2017
|THE EATING HABIT AND LIFESTYLE OF CHILDREN
4 - @Holt Thank you so much for your assessment. I apologize for not having the question. Here it is: In...
Writing Feedbackhongphuochongphuoc - Sep 17, 2017
|Common App Essay: I'm Human (topic of your choice)
3 - Aman, these traits do not make you human, these traits make you a good person. Here is the thing,...
UndergraduateamanichopraHolt - Sep 17, 2017
|Argument Topic about the way to increase the more viewers of news programs
3 - Abhilash, your arguments are not very convincing as you do not show a higher degree of analytical thinking beyond...
Writing FeedbackabhilashbhureHolt - Sep 17, 2017
|(Obtaining a college degree) Ubc personal profile: What is important to you and why? Max 250 words.
UndergraduateBetsyyBetsyy - Sep 16, 2017
|CBEST Writing Test : Explain if you have taken any risk in your life.
3 - @Holt Thank you so much. I will try again. Can you please tell me what else needs an improvement,...
Writing FeedbackRaj1234Raj1234 - Sep 16, 2017
|Commonapp Essay: Gaining control of my life
UndergraduateWulfWulf - Sep 16, 2017
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Job Vacancies Restriction in Many Countries
4 - @ditoaji I think Your introduction did not directly relate to the question being asked. The statement of the question...
Writing FeedbackditoajiGanesh Mumar - Sep 16, 2017
|[IELTS Writing Task2] - Hiring people with only practical skills and not looking at their education
5 - I think, you could write that sentence in the following way: I agree (...) not so smoothly, but we...
Writing FeedbackpurushothamGanesh Mumar - Sep 16, 2017
|Essay about whether university students must pay all tuition fees
4 - Hai, your paraphrase is inaccurate and does not properly reflect the sentiment of the original prompt. there is no...
Writing FeedbackhaiinnnHolt - Sep 16, 2017