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3 - Hi @anonym28 First of all, please insert the prompt so that essay forum members are able to give you...
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3 - Thanks Mary. I am not the graduate applicant. I am just helping some people out with their graduate application-pro...
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4 - hi @Maitouyen282 better if you change and to be comma before 'studying' In academic essay,...
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3 - @Holt Thank for your comment. I will try to fix my mistakes in next essay...
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5 - @mastindersingh Thank you so much for your support, your comment is very precious to me. I hope next essays...
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2 - Roy, your steps 2 and 3 are redundant. If you read the outlines very well, you will discover that...
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3 - @pirFena In my opinion, your essay is quite good, although sometimes I feel hard to understand. You used Academic...
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3 - Thank you so much for your help. Actually in class I was taught to write the setting in the...
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2 - Kaylee, the best way for you to write this essay is to first, do some research into the background...
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2 - Olorunwa, the personal statement is okay but lacks a presentation of the relevance of your studies to the programs...
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2 - Amber, I firmly believe that your thesis statement in the first paragraph needs more work. Try to find a...
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3 - Tammy, the tone of your letter is too informal for an appeal letter. this must carry a serious and...
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3 - I think it needs little bit of work.... try to include some instances some instances and examples from your...
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3 - @ Holt Thanks for your input. it would be great if you please point out the grammatical mistakes and...
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6 - @hain3dessay @Holt @thunga251090 Thank you very much for your opinions, I will try to improve my writing skill....
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|Being one of doctors - "the saviours of humanity".
3 - @Holt Thanks for the review. I am editing it....
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3 - @Holt thank you Holt so much! I will try to write better....
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6 - @blu Hi! I am a student and I am learning IELTS too. Therefore I will give you some better...
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2 - Jenny, this is not a bad first attempt at a draft. The idea of sending a flower to another...
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|TOEFL IBT Independent Writing: Owning smart phones or not? Your point of view
3 - @Holt Thank you, it was very helpful. I will try to rewrite this essay. Could you please take your...
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3 - Rihanna, for starters, a personal statement is not written in the form of a letter unless it indicated that...
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3 - Huynh, I am very sad to tell you that the only score this essay can get is 1 in...
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|Discussion about young people ignoring some traditional beliefs
4 - @akbarmappiare @Holt thank you very much for the comments and correction....
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3 - @Holt Thank you for the review. Please take a look at what I came up with. Growing...
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4 - I think you are conscious of using connected words, that is so valuable in your essay. From my experience,...
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|Unhealthy convenience food - Task 2 IELTS Writing module
5 - I think you no need present the history of fast food. Instead, you need to point out to what...
Writing Feedbackhadeelhekmatblu - Mar 24, 2017
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6 - So when it comes to grammar, vocabs, you did a good job. From my experience, the last paragraph have...
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3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your comment. I will try next time to do better....
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3 - I think many ideas in your essay are good and it contains a bunch of good words. But you...
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4 - I think we usually use the "wet season" rather than rain season. And, i don't agree with this statement...
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