|Is online schooling as effective as in-class education ?
Writing FeedbackIcedMiloCanWrite - May 28, 2020Holt - May 29, 2020
|Readmission Essay- Overcoming Academic Suspension
4 - @Holt One of the most important obstacles I conquered during my hiatus was working on my inner well-being. Coming...
UndergraduateDreamstofollow - May 28, 2020Dreamstofollow - May 28, 2020
|Are governments and corporations the only organizations that can enhance the environment?
Writing Feedbackthibe982001 - May 27, 2020thibe982001 - May 28, 2020
|The gap between the developed and the developing nations is increasing rapidly
3 - This is an issue that calls for immediate action. In my opinion, this sentence is not necessary. The prompt...
Writing FeedbackGATE - May 27, 2020RomanKoch - May 28, 2020
|What's better for students; to attending online classes or studying at traditional schools?
3 - Hi, While reading your essay, I feel it is very one sided. Your points in traditional school is...
Writing FeedbackHardy_tom - May 25, 2020IcedMiloCanWrite - May 28, 2020
|TOEFL The issue of the fuel's cost since the fuel itself has been fiercely polluting our environment
2 - You need an interesting hook for this essay. Your approach is unnecessary as you are giving a comparative discussion...
Writing Feedbackdan31652 - May 28, 2020Holt - May 28, 2020
|Benefits of Certified Nursing Assistant
2 - You have to clarify your thesis statement for this essay. If you are going to be discussing the progression...
Writing Feedbackahenry23 - May 27, 2020Holt - May 28, 2020
|Recommendation Letter for MFE Program
2 - In the paragraph that describes your passion for a topic, the professor should relate this passion to the program...
LettersRiley L - May 27, 2020Holt - May 28, 2020
|(Ielts task1) how energy is used in an average Australian household and the greenhouse gas emissions
2 - For clarity requirements, you need to present the information from the charts (including the type of chart) in individual...
Writing FeedbackMrlong - May 27, 2020Holt - May 28, 2020
|TOFEL: choose a quality that you think is most important when doing a team project
Writing Feedbacklawyers - May 26, 2020lawyers - May 28, 2020
|Ielts2 - The equal amount of money to both medical research and the protection of environment
Writing Feedbackthuhabk - May 27, 2020thuhabk - May 28, 2020
|Do you like watching films at home or in the cinema? Why
7 - I wondering if the expression 'being freedom of myself' is correct. 'having freedom of myself' might be better? ...
Writing Feedbacklamkhanh - May 18, 2020Riley L - May 27, 2020
|Write-up for CPA Society's Magazine - Impact of Culture on the Accounting Profession
3 - Hi @Holt, thanks for such a thorough review!! Agreed on most counts. I did give some serious thoughts about...
Writing Feedbackckpckp1994 - May 27, 2020ckpckp1994 - May 27, 2020
|Task 1 - Line Graph indicates the average yearly money spent on mobile phones and stationary phone
5 - You could have done individually comparison like in one para you could have gave information about cellphone and in...
Writing FeedbackSam Sam Nguyen - May 18, 2020kamal_kour - May 27, 2020
|IELTS Writing Task 1 - money paid for books. (France, Italy, Germany, Austria,)
Writing Feedbackvuduytuandat - May 25, 2020kamal_kour - May 27, 2020
|More and more children are accessing the internet unsupervised at a younger age.
2 - There is a standard rule in writing the Task 2 test. To get a high score, keep sentences short...
Writing Feedbackkamal_kour - May 27, 2020Holt - May 27, 2020
|IELTS Task 2 It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
5 - Your essay is good, but it seems that the reason why government impose a higher tax on fast food...
Writing Feedbackjustinshek - May 26, 2020thuhabk - May 27, 2020
|ielts writing task2: wheter to accept bad situation or not?
3 - You failed to discuss the essay in the proper manner. You were supposed to provide a 5 paragraph essay...
Writing Feedbackhihithk - May 26, 2020Holt - May 27, 2020
|It is neither time nor opportunity that is to determine intimacy.
3 - You won't be happy with the score that this essay might get. Mostly because you did not really discuss...
Writing FeedbackHafsa257 - May 26, 2020Holt - May 27, 2020
|GRE task 1; technology link with the deterioration in the ability for humans to think for themselves
4 - Your discussion does not really connect with the given discussion topic. The sentence structures are ESL - beginner at...
Writing Feedbackhelen123 - May 26, 2020Holt - May 27, 2020
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Nowadays, soft drinks are consumed at an alarming rate.
Writing Feedbackvotuankiet96 - May 19, 2020Hardy_tom - May 26, 2020
|IELTS Task 2 - The government should spend more money on medical research to protect citizens health
8 - Your Paraphrasing is Good but you are off the topic You should have sticked in your topic rather than...
Writing FeedbackCARACHEL - May 22, 2020Hardy_tom - May 26, 2020
|Writing Task 1 - The figure for marriages and divorces in the UK over a period of 25 years
5 - Grammatical mistakes . It can be easily to seen is not a correct statement should have been replaced by...
Writing Feedbackpha - May 17, 2020Hardy_tom - May 26, 2020
|IELTS Writing task 1: Lifespan of salmon
4 - I think you should illustrate both stages individually. You should've explained lifecycle differently and salmon size differently and please...
Writing Feedbacknhiduong2001 - May 19, 2020Hardy_tom - May 26, 2020
|People who had university degrees - IELTS Writing Task 1 (Line graph)
2 - Don't just say 15 years. The actual coverage years are referred to in the graph. So include the actual...
Writing Feedbacktuyendo762 - May 26, 2020Holt - May 26, 2020
|A street market in summer in a hot climate. Write a short descriptive paragraph.
2 - I think that the paragraph is too straightforward. It is truly descriptive, in a mechanical way. You need to...
Writing FeedbackBilly jean - May 26, 2020Holt - May 26, 2020
|IELTS Task 2 Should the international community do more to tackle the threat of global warming?
2 - I wish you had attached the original prompt that you are responding to. This question is not part of...
Writing FeedbackDbooker - May 26, 2020Holt - May 26, 2020
|The bar chart delineates the number of imprisonments in five different countries
2 - The opening summary must also include the measurement type, the complete listing of the 5 countries, and the measurement...
Writing FeedbackHardy_tom - May 25, 2020Holt - May 26, 2020
|After birth what will play a major role in one's personality and development. Nature or Nurture?
2 - If you believe that nurturing is more important than the nature of a person, then there is no need...
Writing FeedbackHardy_tom - May 25, 2020Holt - May 26, 2020
|IELTS TASK 2: Advantages and Disadvantages of being a celebrity
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