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Impacted by corona-virus crisis. GKS scholarship personal statement for graduate program

3 - @Holt ok sir thank you for your advice if I show how I got more exposure to the language...

ScholarshipSubhratri - Aug 7, 2022Subhratri - Aug 8, 2022
Writing task 2 - Essay about public healthy and the growing presence of sports facilities

2 - The main reason that this essay will receive an overall failing score has to do with the lack of...

Writing Feedbackloanphanbich - Aug 6, 2022Holt - Aug 7, 2022
Special teaching - GKS UNDERGRADUATE PERSONAL STATEMENT

6 - which makes me sure that maybe, English is my passion. you have written this line in your essay but...

ScholarshipOlisan19 - Aug 1, 2022Subhratri - Aug 7, 2022
GKS undergraduate personal statement for media and communications major

3 - I think you should also provide some facts like how you met korean language , and this scholarship will...

ScholarshipReina - Aug 6, 2022Subhratri - Aug 7, 2022
IELTS writing task 2 about a work-life balance: related problems and the best solution

3 - @Holt Thank you very much...

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IELTS writing task 2 - topic: who should be accountable for the environmental protection?

3 - hi, I'm not a professor, but I'm hoping this will help you. Your essay includes too many details and...

Writing Feedbackmymyhannah - Aug 6, 2022pngnnn21 - Aug 6, 2022
The proportion of car trips made by male and female drivers for 8 purposes in the year of 2005

2 - The trending statement is over extended. A trend is a singular measurement of one activity or action. As such,...

Writing FeedbackIloveielts - Aug 6, 2022Holt - Aug 6, 2022
Evaluate my ielts writing task 2 essay about health and diet topic

3 - The first one is the mistakes with vocabularies. : sedentary lifestyle, and it usually goes with lead a sedentary...

Writing Feedbackhuyenanhmcqn - Aug 6, 2022Iloveielts - Aug 6, 2022
The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 200

3 - Thanks for your feedback, i really appriciate it! Hope you have a good day!...

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In today's world, urban life has been associated with many persistent issues

3 - The first thing is the misbalance between 2 bodies: extending the roads and improving the quality of public transports...

Writing Feedbackxuanvietmc123 - Aug 3, 2022Iloveielts - Aug 5, 2022
IELTS TASK 1 THE MOST POPULAR ACTIVITIES IN TWO COUNTRIES

3 - I apologize for not giving a graph of the data. Thanks for your feedback...

Writing FeedbackLa Da - Aug 5, 2022La Da - Aug 5, 2022
Essay for Graduate Certificate IT Project Management in Seneca College Canada with bad acads

3 - @Holt This is a statement of purpose. It was not mandatory but I want to go on and submit...

Graduaterevanth - Aug 4, 2022revanth - Aug 5, 2022
Problems living in big cities and whether the government should encourage more people to relocate

2 - The topic restatement is highly confusing. If it is a suggestion, then why did is suddenly turn into a...

Writing Feedbackalice05 - Jul 24, 2022Holt - Aug 5, 2022
IELTS Task 2 - Essay about whether they will choose traditional materials or read online freely.

2 - The writer obviously misunderstood the discussion requirement for the essay. He has not responded in the manner that will...

Writing Feedbackviethoangpham - Aug 1, 2022Holt - Aug 5, 2022
Task 1: different types of waste disposed of in one country

2 - The trending paragraph should be simpler in presentation. It should not a total report paragraph unto itself as is...

Writing FeedbackIloveielts - Jul 30, 2022Holt - Aug 5, 2022
A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited and have same rights as humans

2 - Wow! A dictionary exploded all over this statement. It is like the student decided to look up word descriptors...

Writing Feedbacktrong - Aug 4, 2022Holt - Aug 5, 2022
The outcomes of a survey on coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

2 - The summary overview does not identify the type of image nor the number of images. The listing of cities...

Writing FeedbackHomayoun khan - Aug 4, 2022Holt - Aug 5, 2022
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of being famous individual

2 - The opening sentence would have better served the presentation had it been used as the introduction to the personal...

Writing Feedbackpngnnn21 - Aug 4, 2022Holt - Aug 4, 2022
Task 1 : production of vegetables in 5 different countries.

2 - The trending statement is overextended. There needs to be only one trend presented since the amount of potatoes produced...

Writing FeedbackIloveielts - Aug 1, 2022Holt - Aug 4, 2022
Task 2: Several laborers are struggling to achieve the work-life balance

2 - The essay is heavily reliant on word and phrase fillers to meet the word count. These are what made...

Writing FeedbackIloveielts - Aug 2, 2022Holt - Aug 4, 2022
Sources in the overall energy - IELTs writing task 1: Chart summary

2 - While the word count is impressive, the lack of proper sentence structuring and sentence type representation will hold back...

Writing Feedbackkhanghoang - Aug 4, 2022Holt - Aug 4, 2022
Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, causing many health problems

2 - Try to limit your writing to 300 words. That will allow ample time for proper editing and finalization of...

Writing Feedbacktanuzky - Aug 3, 2022Holt - Aug 4, 2022
It is often said "when in Rome, do as the Romans do." Do you think people should adapt and accept...

3 - "hands-waving in Greek..." you mean hand-waving since you use only one hand while waving. Also better to use either...

Writing Feedbackngnnthu - Aug 2, 2022Axis0019 - Aug 3, 2022
Is the only reason for learn languages is to travel and work overseas or not. Discuss both views.

2 - The writer shows incorrect punctuation usage in the presentation. Any student of written English knows that the basic punctuation...

Writing FeedbackEsther Lee - Aug 3, 2022Holt - Aug 3, 2022
The usage of electrical devices and the number of hours used for housework per household; IELTS 1

2 - Please post only one version of the essay next time. Multiple postings in the same thread will result in...

Writing Feedbackhaiyen0903 - Aug 3, 2022Holt - Aug 3, 2022
TOPIC: The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors (in thousands) to three different area

2 - The essay will get a failing score due to the poor writing abilities of the writer. He has obvious...

Writing FeedbackWangne - Aug 3, 2022Holt - Aug 3, 2022
IELTS1: Bar Chart: international students graduating from universities in various Canadian provinces

2 - The summary overview fails to properly recognize the type of graph provided because it used a cut and paste...

Writing Feedbackpthtnh - Aug 2, 2022Holt - Aug 3, 2022
In some cultures, the old is more valued, while in other cultures youth is more valued. Both views

4 - In place of on the other hand you can use however or apparently Like you compared both the...

Writing FeedbackJared26 - Aug 2, 2022Lebica_97 - Aug 3, 2022
Ielts writing task 2 topic hobbies; Industrial revolution 4.0

3 - On the one hand, people who greet new things outside are more creative, not only seize the opportunities for...

Writing Feedbackchauminh - Jul 30, 2022Iloveielts - Aug 2, 2022
Some people believe that keeping pets is beneficial while others believe that it is a bad idea

5 - In my opinion, having pets is an overall positive practice due to the great psychological advantages enjoyed by owners....

Writing Feedbackjasmine4 - Jul 29, 2022Iloveielts - Aug 2, 2022