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4 - @Tony999 Hello, these my comments! 1.The given graph depicted data on ... depicts. 2. Your writing is monotonous....
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|IELTS1- the forecast increase in world oil production
3 - @s410377088 Hello, these are my comments which perhaps offer improvement for your writing. 1. Your overview is overload because...
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|Learning from leaders - Chevening scholarship
4 - Hello, all the best with your applicaiton. I would suggest you use the STAR (situation, task, action, result) method...
ScholarshipRITAH - Oct 2, 2019JohnR05 - Oct 7, 2019
|IELTS - the amounts of waste produced by three corporations from 2000 to 2015
3 - @vancandoit Hi, there. I would like to give you some advice about your introduction and overall. 😁 1....
Writing Feedbackvancandoit - Oct 2, 2019roswita116 - Oct 7, 2019
|Should schools be entertaining or educating?
4 - Hi renzito, I think there're some aspects you need to work on more to make your essay better. ...
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|Statement of Purpose for Ms materials science and tech
3 - Hi Xphire99, After reading your essay, I can conclude that you do have a passion, talent are responsible for...
GraduateXphire99 - Oct 6, 2019athachng2002 - Oct 7, 2019
|"media have a greater influence over people's lives than politician" What is greater influence
3 - Hi~ I think your opinion is quite clear from your first and last paragraph, but I just feel it's...
Writing Feedbackanne127 - Sep 28, 2019Asphodel - Oct 7, 2019
|Tendency to replace old products with the new ones. Why?
3 - Hi Maria, Thank you for your feedback. It has certainly boosted my confidence and proved that I am...
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|Will the children benefit from the additional income? Or will they lack support from their parents?
2 - Okay, first things first, I will like you to correct some grammatical errors in your write up. For example...
Writing Feedbacktheamazingshao - Oct 6, 2019Xphire99 - Oct 6, 2019
|The bar - the percentage of Australian working out
3 - 1. The bar graph "depicts" the percentage of Australian men and women doing regular exercises in 2010. -->your first...
Writing Feedbackbagongcamen - Oct 5, 2019s410377088 - Oct 6, 2019
|My elder brother has great impact on my life - influential person essay
3 - Hi Maria, this is my feedback with your paragraph. My english is still limited, but you can check if...
Graduatesaeed147 - Oct 3, 2019soulpancake - Oct 6, 2019
|UVA "quirk" supplemental essay topic choices
Essaystlauren726 - Oct 5, 2019soulpancake - Oct 6, 2019
|Letter of recommendation for The Master of Information System
3 - @ThaiHoangLoc Hi, welcome to the forum! I'm here to give you feedback on this text. Aside from what has...
LettersThaiHoangLoc - Oct 3, 2019Maria - Oct 6, 2019
|SOP for MS on Cyber Security for UK. Jan 2020 entry.
2 - @sujithbro Hi. Thank you for being here! I wish you the best of luck in your application. I'm here...
Graduatesujithbro - Oct 4, 2019Maria - Oct 6, 2019
|Governments ought to allocate their budget to railways rather than roads
4 - @sharkonguyen Hey, welcome to the forum! Here is my feedback on your writing; I hope it helps! First...
Writing Feedbacksharkonguyen - Oct 1, 2019Maria - Oct 3, 2019
|The Red River Delta And Reasons Why It Is An Ideal Place For Rice-exporting
2 - @Havanle Hey, welcome back to the forum! I hope this feedback becomes beneficial for your writing endeavors. If it...
Writing FeedbackHavanle - Oct 3, 2019Maria - Oct 3, 2019
|IELTS - public transport, money on faster or other priorities
2 - @thunguyen92 Hi there. Thanks for approaching us again! I'll be happy to assist you in going through this essay....
Writing Feedbackthunguyen92 - Oct 2, 2019Maria - Oct 3, 2019
|The table illustrates data about changes in types of travel in Britain over a 15-year period
3 - @Maria Hi Maria, can you further explain the meaning of 'For instance, the introductory phrasing of the first paragraph's...
Writing Feedbackalice1426 - Sep 29, 2019alice1426 - Oct 3, 2019
|Many children these day have an unhealthy lifestyle - it's the government problem
3 - this is no academic essay , your 1 paragraphs should introduce the topic and refine the question + your...
Writing FeedbackAnh Pham - Oct 2, 2019renzito - Oct 3, 2019
|How the Australian Bureau of Meteorology gathers up-to-the minute information on the climate
3 - Thank for your most trustable feedback@Maria Even when I'm writing the body of this task, I still get confused...
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|UBC personal profile - who am I? My natural ability and determination.
2 - @celinehb Hey, welcome to the forum. I'm here to provide you with feedback on this writing. I hope this...
Undergraduatecelinehb - Oct 2, 2019Maria - Oct 2, 2019
|The initiative - Leadership and influencing skills for Chevening scholarship
ScholarshipAnima - Aug 18, 2019Anima - Oct 2, 2019
|Benefits vs drawbacks - start their own business instead of working for company or organization
Writing Feedbacktandat - Sep 29, 2019renzito - Oct 2, 2019
|Nowadays modern people can lead a much longer life. How this phenomenon can be judged?
Writing Feedbackjocelyne001 - Oct 1, 2019renzito - Oct 2, 2019
|The proportion of people in Australia who did physical exercises frequently
Writing Feedbackvanmaianh - Oct 1, 2019vanmaianh - Oct 2, 2019
|People act differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree or not?
4 - 'people act differently when ...' should be replaced by ' people show strange behaviour because of the different clothes...
Writing FeedbackGlearning - Sep 30, 2019julius234 - Oct 2, 2019
|IELTS/ TASK 2/ Advertisements are good or bad for the society
2 - The first sentence of the second paragraph should be "on the one hand" "parents always ... thing which is...
Writing Feedbackjulius234 - Oct 1, 2019thunguyen92 - Oct 1, 2019
|Applying For Master Degree majoring in Strategic Marketing Management
3 - @Maria Thank you for your kindness and contribution. Wish you all the best. I will try to enhance my...
LettersVanthao - Sep 30, 2019Vanthao - Oct 1, 2019
|Applying to Masters in Science in Anesthesia programs to become an Anesthesiologist Assistant
2 - @mad14f Welcome to the forum! I hope this feedback becomes beneficial for your writing endeavors in the future. If...
Graduatemad14f - Sep 30, 2019Maria - Sep 30, 2019
|Famous sports athletes should earn a lot of money
2 - @renzito Hey, welcome once again. I'm here to provide you with feedback on this essay. I hope this somehow...
Writing Feedbackrenzito - Sep 30, 2019Maria - Sep 30, 2019