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4 - Jaya, kindly provide the complete prompt instructions for our comparison with the essay that you wrote. It is important...

Writing FeedbackjaikrishnaHolt - Jan 13, 2017
My university essay which delivers more info about me, my life, struggles and achievements

5 - Try to find something really special and unique about your background, that way it won't sound like ordinary essays....

UndergraduateAbdulZ1997l3atjin - Jan 13, 2017
The cinema viewing vigures for all films, in millions

3 - hai @Diazalichsan i think you should explain bit about other genres like romance and comedy, instead of describing all...

Writing FeedbackDiazalichsanayuriska - Jan 13, 2017
What really impressed me is that TEDxZYZ is really influential. Extra activities essay.

4 - Jiang, the problem with the essay is that is focuses on the organization and how it works rather on...

UndergraduateBennyooooHolt - Jan 13, 2017
My essay for applying for Gender studies MA offered by Centeral European University.

9 - Alireza, you should have posted this essay in the other thread since this is a continued conversation of this...

GraduatealiDCHolt - Jan 13, 2017
USC Supplemental: A time my beliefs were challenged

3 - @masonn8 So you just told us a story of you, but you don't have your conclusion. What do you...

Undergraduatemasonn8Bennyoooo - Jan 13, 2017
Ielts writing TASK 2 - Sports professionals don't deserve such high salaries for their work

3 - hai george, well in my opinion sportmen duty is to not just entertain citizens, but also become a figure...

Writing Feedbackkrempetkovayuriska - Jan 13, 2017
Uni Admission Essay - I am more than just my grades

3 - Wow, you seem very well rounded and all of these awards are really impressive. I don't think your essay...

UndergraduateHSYmasonn8 - Jan 13, 2017
Robotics and software engineering really take my interest. USC supplement essay

5 - I'm also working on the USC essays and I had a few suggestions. Admissions knows what classes you need...

UndergraduateBennyoooomasonn8 - Jan 13, 2017
Describe an experience from my life that demonstrates my character or helped shaped it

2 - Charlene, congratulations on overcoming such a huge educational obstacle. Your story is truly inspirational and I can understand how...

UndergraduatecharadeHolt - Jan 12, 2017
Your essay should answer the following questions: What makes you a perfect candidate for FIT?

2 - Leana, it would be best if you complete the prompt requirement that was given to you for the development...

UndergraduateLeavalerHolt - Jan 12, 2017
Motivation letter on Urban Studies - My dream scholarship

2 - Bunheng, you have to remove the aspects of this letter that are better presented as part of your statement...

ScholarshipBunhengHolt - Jan 12, 2017
Briefly discuss a current global issue indicating why you consider it important and what you suggest

3 - Nima, please provide us with the complete prompt for your essay. It got cut off because you tried to...

UndergraduateCrewHolt - Jan 12, 2017
Tell us more why you intent to finish the Computer Engineering Program?

2 - Nate, when you develop your reason for pursuing this academic program, make sure to relate it to a particular...

Undergraduatenhenderson98Holt - Jan 12, 2017
Help me to decide the content, length, structures of the scholarship essay below.

6 - Nanda, I know that you follow current events and are proud to mention these in your essays because you...

EssaysnandasharmaHolt - Jan 12, 2017
The field of Applied Physics with specialization on Plasma Physics. STUDY PLAN for Scholarship

2 - Fauziah, when you write a study plan for your masters degree, you must present a thorough discussion of your...

ScholarshiprahmifzhHolt - Jan 12, 2017
The brain chemistry. USC Supplemental Essay: How will you pursue your academic interests

5 - @Holt I really appreciate your feedback. Can't tell you how much it helps!...

Undergraduatemasonn8masonn8 - Jan 12, 2017
Bucknell University Scholarship for Creative Writing - Ray Bucknell!

9 - After searching through tons of Bucknellian archives and Linkedin pages, I found references to Fire & Ice dating from...

Scholarshipgaribarigaribari - Jan 12, 2017
The features of nursing profession. NURSING PROGRAM ADMISSION ESSAY

7 - Excellent work Chloe, I strongly suggest that you use this version of the essay for your application. It is...

UndergraduateclrHolt - Jan 12, 2017
Essay about motivation letter for German's university scholarship. How to make aroused letter?

3 - Dewa, in terms of presentation, your letter is confused. You have accidentally mixed the content of a letter of...

Research PapersdewakresnaHolt - Jan 12, 2017
Creationism over Evolutionism

3 - I am not a moderator or an experienced essay writer, so take my opinion with a grain of salt....

Research PaperstollikyTRaw98 - Jan 12, 2017
UNC supplement essays, University of North Carolina - something inspiring

5 - Jiang, by definition, an elder is described as any of the following persons: 1. a person of greater age...

ScholarshipBennyooooHolt - Jan 11, 2017
Letter of Intent - MFA Child Culture Design - University of Gothenburg

4 - Ade, try to combine the first and last paragraph of your essay in order to create a more informative...

GraduateameadeliaHolt - Jan 11, 2017
Are the real teachers replaceable?

4 - Hello, I found you've tried to discuss the both sides and, in my opinion, I think it is...

Writing FeedbackvonhuoclanArlen - Jan 11, 2017
The possession of car in a proportion of no car, one car, two cars, and more than two cars in Canada

4 - Hello, First of all, the words account doesn't meet the 150 words requirement. I think your sentences address...

Writing FeedbackilmuholicArlen - Jan 11, 2017
The Urgency of Prohibition to Mobile Phone Utilization in Public Places (Writing IELTS Task 2)

4 - Thanks for your suggestion @nandasharma. I have to admit that i did it intentionally, and that is my method...

Writing Feedbackilmuholicilmuholic - Jan 11, 2017
Another late night at the hospital. Constructive Advice Needed on Nursing Program Entrance Essay

7 - Hi Chloe. I must say that you effectively applied the suggestions that I made for the improvement of your...

UndergraduateclrHolt - Jan 11, 2017
Writing Task 2: People claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled.

3 - Arlen, you have to clearly show your opinion. It seem that there is no a completion in your writing....

Writing FeedbackArlenilmuholic - Jan 11, 2017
What do you plan to do after completing your master's degree in Sweden?

3 - @Holt Thank you very much Mary. I am really grateful to received valuable comments for my essay. I will...

ScholarshipStreetwalkerStreetwalker - Jan 11, 2017
The Ethical Pitfalls of Orphanage Tourism

2 - George, your discussion regarding "Orphanage Tourism" is very one sided. It does not deliver a balanced discussion because you...

Research Papersgeo2149457Holt - Jan 11, 2017