|Ielts Writing Task 1 bar chart The average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different
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|CHANGING SCENERY; Loyola Marymount University application question - Critical thinking
2 - This is a somewhat correct response to the prompt. Depending upon what your word allotment is, you could have...
Undergraduatekevinjbarr - Feb 17, 2020Holt - Feb 18, 2020
|Reasons for seeking happiness and successful in foreign countries.
3 - This is an IELTS Task 2 question. Are you practicing to take that test? You did not specify if...
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|Sustainable and Innovative Resource Management (SINReM) - Motivational Letter
2 - Not all of the information contained in this essay provides itself as useful to a motivational letter for the...
Lettersgamemaker - Feb 17, 2020Holt - Feb 18, 2020
|IELTS Task 2 - Railways development or Roads development
3 - On the contrary, you did not do a very good job on this essay because you did not immediately...
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|General Training - Task 2 - Type: Agree or Disagree - Subject: ban smoke, public areas, countries
4 - I wrote a new version of my essay taking into consideration the comments made. Could you please check if...
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|Truth in relationship between people
4 - Some grammatical and spelling mistakes: -... the truth is, to be honest, and DO not lie. -... easy...
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|My views on Online Courses Learning
3 - Some grammatical and spelling mistakes: -THESE days there are ... -... network speed and EQUIPMENT OR PIECES OF...
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|Encouraging a sense of competition in children or teaching them cooperation?
2 - Since you are self studying, the first thing I want to call attention to is your word count. Always,...
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|Essay about the link between correctional healthcare & public health in the United States
2 - In the first paragraph, that is your thesis paragraph so you should not be using any quotations or references...
Research Paperswallaby1992 - Feb 17, 2020Holt - Feb 17, 2020
|The popularity of different Scottish attractions between 1980 and 2010
4 - While the general review that you did in the second version is acceptable, you should also be looking for...
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|Life is better today than it was 100 years ago. Do you agree?
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|Computer technology vs Maintaining public libraries
4 - Some grammatical and spelling improvements: - In the modern life... - ... important part IN our lives. -...
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|Essay about a place - Ho Chi Minh
2 - I'll assume that you are practicing to write in British English and use that as the reference point. Remember...
UndergraduateThnhNgn - Feb 16, 2020Holt - Feb 17, 2020
|Ielts Writing Task 1: spending on three different telephone services in the USA
2 - You forgot to include the inclusive years of the graph, in the overview summary. This means that your summary...
Writing Feedbackthiendinh3 - Feb 16, 2020Holt - Feb 17, 2020
|Most people are not as fit and active, as they were in the past. Problems and solution
3 - Your prompt paraphrase is incomplete and lacking one sentence to complete a paragraph. You have not indicated the discussion...
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|"Positivity is second to none" - NTU Scholarship essay
3 - @Holt Thanks for the feedback. To clarify, my response to the prompt is based on positivity as a value...
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|Writing Task 2 - Education - Higher Education - Both Views
4 - Hi @Holt and @shinxg, Thank you very much for your feedback and comments, which help me so much....
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|Ielts Writing Task 1: the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester
3 - To me, you should replace spend most hours for on watching; - had climbing --> climbed as this activity...
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|Email to Penpal Friend form Singapore about the studying of English
3 - @Holt Hello Mr Hold, thank you for your presious advice. I will take note all of your comments and...
LettersIAMROSE - Feb 16, 2020IAMROSE - Feb 16, 2020
|The computer provides us with convenience and eliminates manual work
3 - @Holt Thanks for your advice. I will try a mixture of singular and plural ownership pronouns in later writing....
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|Tell us about a concept, theory, or topic you have explored. Questbridge Prompt (200 words)
2 - Your response lacks a key element in your presentation. How do you plan to further pursue this concept, theory,...
ScholarshipDubemikael - Feb 15, 2020Holt - Feb 16, 2020
|IELTS Writing task 2: High consumption of soft beverages - reasons and solutions
3 - Some grammatical mistakes that you could fix: ... essential part OF ... ... in THE competitive market...
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|Review My Personal Statement For a Master Degree In Data Science at Columbia University
3 - @Holt Thank you for your valuable feedback! I do realize that the Essay was pretty lengthy, I just...
Graduatetangc2 - Feb 14, 2020tangc2 - Feb 15, 2020
|The Disciples of Christ Church - Chapman Personal TRANSFER essay
2 - I believe that you misunderstood the instruction for the discussion. It is not asking you for your path throughout...
Undergraduateaanselmostudent - Feb 15, 2020Holt - Feb 15, 2020
|Crime in two countries comparison. REVIEW MY IELTS WRITING OF LINE GRAPH
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|What are the causes and effects of global warming? Suggest some possible solutions to this problem.
2 - I will assume that this was written as an English writing exercise and that you were allowed to research...
Writing Feedbackstella52 - Feb 15, 2020Holt - Feb 15, 2020
|Describe a film/movie you would like to share with your friends
2 - Spoiler Alert! You were being asked to do a movie review, without telling the whole story of the movie....
Writing Feedbackson2409 - Feb 15, 2020Holt - Feb 15, 2020
|IELTS task 2 - adolescents have to take part in campaigns to contribute to the community
Writing Feedbackminnadoan - Feb 15, 2020Holt - Feb 15, 2020
|Double Degree in France (Motivation Letter)
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