|SCHOLARSHIP PERSONAL STATEMENT // GKS 2022 Undergraduate Architecture
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|Higher number of youngsters move from developed to poorer countries, to do some charitable work
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|Giving jobless people access to the Internet will help reducing unemployment issue. Agree/disagree?
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|The line charts below illustrate the amount of energy consumed in the UK from 1980 to 2030
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|What is more vital: communication through word by mouth, or written language?
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|WRITING IELTS ESSAY: Mothers should spend most of their time raising their children
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Causes and Solutions topic Environment
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|AGREE/DISAGREE - CLEARING PUBLIC PARKS
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|Task 2: Traffic - a problem in major cities. Causes and solutions.
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|Real or imaginary that you plan to do this summer. Try to think topic about time with friends
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|Past and present views on damaged items
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|Money distribution from developed countries to those underdeveloped, does not stop poverty there
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|Essay - peer review America Under Siege: Combatting the Opioid Epidemic
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|The amount of money invested to study by the American government over a 28-year period
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|The essay topic: It is said that children need time to rest than just focus on studying.
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|The estimated jeans sales of the two Turkish companies and their projected market share
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|Motivation letter for master course in France
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|Hunger problem despite launched and implemented many advancements and breakthroughs in agriculture
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|Number of controversies about gender equality in community, especially in educational environments
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|Nowadays some people choose to live in the city while other chooses to stay in the countryside.
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: The graph shows information regarding the birth and death rates in New Zealand
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|Navy SEAL Impact Research Paper
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|Ticket to my higher studies
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|There are good reasons for students to be compelled to wear uniform at schools
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|Public spending on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness and medical expenses
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|Social media are popular but the nature of online platform presents a myriad of potential issues
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|Draft of personal statement for GKS / fashion design
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|Personal Statement/ GKS Undergraduate Scholarship/ Economics and finances
NEW - PERSONAL STATEMENT - Motivations with which you apply for this program - Family and Education background - Significant experiences...
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|Personal Statement/ GKS Undergraduate Scholarship/ Communication and Media Major
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|The number of hours, which women and men spend doing different, unpaid works
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