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IELTS task 2: EDUCATION-TEACHERS (both views and opinion)

2 - You are the author right? Why are you referring to yourself in 3rd person when your opinion should...

Writing FeedbackPaul16 - Jun 12, 2021Holt - Jun 13, 2021
Should countries around the world establish close connections regarding culture and business?

2 - You need to better reference your restatement of the 2 ideas that were provided. Long sentences such as these...

Writing Feedbackimahunnn - Jun 12, 2021Holt - Jun 13, 2021
Write a paragraph (110 - 150 words) about what job would you like to choose in the future.

2 - You do not really prove that your father's occupation and your exposure to it influenced you to become a...

Writing Feedbacklck283 - Jun 12, 2021Holt - Jun 13, 2021
It is said that children are able to get their goals if they try their best to do it

2 - The first 2 sentences in your restatement paragraph do not reflect a version of the original. Rather, it is...

Writing FeedbackTrinh Mera - Jun 12, 2021Holt - Jun 13, 2021
People being monitored are often unaware that this is happening - what you think about this?

2 - No such word. The word is simply "unaware", specially when describing an ongoing action. Wrong word...

Writing Feedbackunknown vn - Jun 12, 2021Holt - Jun 13, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - SAVING ANIMAL SPECIES

4 - You are expressing an unclear opinion, you both agree and disagree. You should choose one side and explain with...

Writing Feedbackstevenlxag - Jun 11, 2021Paul16 - Jun 12, 2021
Some people believe that adverts are conducive to economic development, but others disagree

3 - @Holt Thanks for your suggestions....

Writing FeedbackAlexander Hu - Jun 11, 2021Alexander Hu - Jun 12, 2021
Task 2: It is argued that newspapers are an optimal way to learn news - what's your opinion?

2 - I cannot accurately review your paper as you wrote less than the 250 word requirement. Presenting an examiner with...

Writing FeedbackMekonguyen - Jun 11, 2021Holt - Jun 12, 2021
It is believed that money is the key to happiness. One can still feel happy regardless of being rich

3 - Thanks Holt for helping me. I'm reposting below my essay which I revised base on your notes. Hope you...

Writing FeedbackHarinn - Jun 11, 2021Harinn - Jun 12, 2021
WRINGTING TAKS 2 - NATURAL TALENT OR BEING TAUGHT?

3 - I think that you should put your own opinion in this essay instead of talking in generall like this....

Writing Feedbacklehoanglam1501 - Jun 9, 2021Samt Lee - Jun 11, 2021
IELTS Writing task 2 : Gyms and Sports clubs

3 - I think that you need to search for some model sentences in the opening as well as the way...

Writing FeedbackChanh - Jun 10, 2021Samt Lee - Jun 11, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 2_SELF-DRIVING SYSTEMS FOR VEHICLES

3 - Thanks for your advice !...

Writing FeedbackSamt Lee - Jun 10, 2021Samt Lee - Jun 11, 2021
With increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up

2 - For TA opinion scoring purposes, try to be more specific. Based on this writing, the clearer option would...

Writing Feedbacknguyenpham88 - Jun 10, 2021Holt - Jun 11, 2021
The role of computers and teachers in education

2 - Be specific about the areas where computers matter more. There is a direct qquestion provided ffor which a...

Writing Feedbackamietran - Jun 10, 2021Holt - Jun 11, 2021
Despite cars damage the environment, their manufacture and their use continue to increase

2 - Respond directly to the 2 questions to help outline you reasoning paragraphs. In 2 sentences, give your subject...

Writing Feedbackduyenb1602679 - Jun 10, 2021Holt - Jun 11, 2021
How to write a comparison essay about shopping online and shopping at stores

2 - These are rhetorical questions that you don't really addless in the rest of the writing. so keep your...

Writing FeedbackLinyPham - Jun 10, 2021Holt - Jun 11, 2021
With the help of advanced technology, the qualities of people's life has improve. However...

2 - Your prompt restatement is highly confusing to understand. Only a single prompt was provided for this writing but, you...

Writing FeedbackGoldenfish - Jun 10, 2021Holt - Jun 11, 2021
IELTS Writing task 2_tourism could endanger local inhabitant and environment

3 - thanks @Holt...

Writing Feedbackopangridwan - Jun 8, 2021opangridwan - Jun 10, 2021
Writing task1, Expected city visits by country of origin for 2018

3 - In the third paragraph:The second message is uncessary or even wrong because the chart depicts information in 2018, while...

Writing Feedbackphuongtrinh11200 - Jun 9, 2021nguyenthithuylin - Jun 10, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - Compare two maps - development in the layout of a university campus

3 - The second message in overall paragraph, you should use linking words such as : also, besides,.....

Writing FeedbackMoinhminh - Jun 9, 2021nguyenthithuylin - Jun 10, 2021
The pie chart illustrate what seniors in Beaufort, Westmont and Whitford High School invested on

3 - @Holt Thank you for your comments....

Writing FeedbackDungMai - Jun 8, 2021DungMai - Jun 10, 2021
What household chores do you usually do ?

2 - I am not sure about how I can help you. You did not give any writing instructions to give...

Grammar, Usageanan173 - Jun 9, 2021Holt - Jun 10, 2021
The chart illustrates the figures of five cities in Australia in terms of the habit of the citizen

2 - Do not just copy the image definition from the instruction. That is how you end up mis-identifying the...

Writing FeedbackAndy Nathan - Jun 9, 2021Holt - Jun 10, 2021
The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country

2 - Wasn't the country specifically mentioned? This is good. It can be improved further by adding a...

Writing FeedbackKim0303 - Jun 9, 2021Holt - Jun 10, 2021
The line graph illustrates the percentage of people who owned cars in Britain

2 - Upload the image next time. you are currently in violation of forum rules regarding image access. You have...

Writing Feedbackthuytrang21 - Jun 9, 2021Holt - Jun 10, 2021
Greetings from the President

2 - Ancestors did enjoy the group but, didn't they found/establish the group before enjoying it? Maybe you would like...

SpeechesSBG - Jun 9, 2021Holt - Jun 10, 2021
The following maps show some of the changes that have taken place in Dubai in recent decades.

3 - @Holt I do not intend to capitalize the first sentence, maybe it's my mistake when I post my writing....

Writing Feedbackyhai9959 - Jun 7, 2021yhai9959 - Jun 10, 2021
Personal Statement for apply GKS-U 2022 - Dept. of Nuclear Engineering

3 - @Holt Thank you for your review. I'll be back to you with the new personal statement in the next...

ScholarshipChanihyuck - Jun 3, 2021Chanihyuck - Jun 10, 2021
Local Creativities - Industrial Dynamics and Sustainability - Motivation letter for Glocal Programme

3 - @Holt I plan to apply for the next intake of the Glocal program. Since I had some spare time,...

Graduateloki898 - Jun 8, 2021loki898 - Jun 9, 2021
IELTS TASK 2: should government encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas?

3 - @Holt Thanks you for your wholehearted help. I will try my best to improve my skills, especially the CC...

Writing FeedbackSteven Ho - Jun 8, 2021Steven Ho - Jun 9, 2021