|Internet opinion from a common user
4 - Jaya, kindly provide the complete prompt instructions for our comparison with the essay that you wrote. It is important...
Writing FeedbackjaikrishnaHolt - Jan 13, 2017
|My university essay which delivers more info about me, my life, struggles and achievements
5 - Try to find something really special and unique about your background, that way it won't sound like ordinary essays....
UndergraduateAbdulZ1997l3atjin - Jan 13, 2017
|The cinema viewing vigures for all films, in millions
3 - hai @Diazalichsan i think you should explain bit about other genres like romance and comedy, instead of describing all...
Writing FeedbackDiazalichsanayuriska - Jan 13, 2017
|What really impressed me is that TEDxZYZ is really influential. Extra activities essay.
4 - Jiang, the problem with the essay is that is focuses on the organization and how it works rather on...
UndergraduateBennyooooHolt - Jan 13, 2017
|My essay for applying for Gender studies MA offered by Centeral European University.
9 - Alireza, you should have posted this essay in the other thread since this is a continued conversation of this...
GraduatealiDCHolt - Jan 13, 2017
|USC Supplemental: A time my beliefs were challenged
3 - @masonn8 So you just told us a story of you, but you don't have your conclusion. What do you...
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|Ielts writing TASK 2 - Sports professionals don't deserve such high salaries for their work
3 - hai george, well in my opinion sportmen duty is to not just entertain citizens, but also become a figure...
Writing Feedbackkrempetkovayuriska - Jan 13, 2017
|Uni Admission Essay - I am more than just my grades
3 - Wow, you seem very well rounded and all of these awards are really impressive. I don't think your essay...
UndergraduateHSYmasonn8 - Jan 13, 2017
|Robotics and software engineering really take my interest. USC supplement essay
5 - I'm also working on the USC essays and I had a few suggestions. Admissions knows what classes you need...
UndergraduateBennyoooomasonn8 - Jan 13, 2017
|Describe an experience from my life that demonstrates my character or helped shaped it
2 - Charlene, congratulations on overcoming such a huge educational obstacle. Your story is truly inspirational and I can understand how...
UndergraduatecharadeHolt - Jan 12, 2017
|Your essay should answer the following questions: What makes you a perfect candidate for FIT?
2 - Leana, it would be best if you complete the prompt requirement that was given to you for the development...
UndergraduateLeavalerHolt - Jan 12, 2017
|Motivation letter on Urban Studies - My dream scholarship
2 - Bunheng, you have to remove the aspects of this letter that are better presented as part of your statement...
ScholarshipBunhengHolt - Jan 12, 2017
|Briefly discuss a current global issue indicating why you consider it important and what you suggest
3 - Nima, please provide us with the complete prompt for your essay. It got cut off because you tried to...
UndergraduateCrewHolt - Jan 12, 2017
|Tell us more why you intent to finish the Computer Engineering Program?
2 - Nate, when you develop your reason for pursuing this academic program, make sure to relate it to a particular...
Undergraduatenhenderson98Holt - Jan 12, 2017
|Help me to decide the content, length, structures of the scholarship essay below.
6 - Nanda, I know that you follow current events and are proud to mention these in your essays because you...
EssaysnandasharmaHolt - Jan 12, 2017
|The field of Applied Physics with specialization on Plasma Physics. STUDY PLAN for Scholarship
2 - Fauziah, when you write a study plan for your masters degree, you must present a thorough discussion of your...
ScholarshiprahmifzhHolt - Jan 12, 2017
|The brain chemistry. USC Supplemental Essay: How will you pursue your academic interests
5 - @Holt I really appreciate your feedback. Can't tell you how much it helps!...
Undergraduatemasonn8masonn8 - Jan 12, 2017
|Bucknell University Scholarship for Creative Writing - Ray Bucknell!
9 - After searching through tons of Bucknellian archives and Linkedin pages, I found references to Fire & Ice dating from...
Scholarshipgaribarigaribari - Jan 12, 2017
|The features of nursing profession. NURSING PROGRAM ADMISSION ESSAY
7 - Excellent work Chloe, I strongly suggest that you use this version of the essay for your application. It is...
UndergraduateclrHolt - Jan 12, 2017
|Essay about motivation letter for German's university scholarship. How to make aroused letter?
3 - Dewa, in terms of presentation, your letter is confused. You have accidentally mixed the content of a letter of...
Research PapersdewakresnaHolt - Jan 12, 2017
|Creationism over Evolutionism
3 - I am not a moderator or an experienced essay writer, so take my opinion with a grain of salt....
Research PaperstollikyTRaw98 - Jan 12, 2017
|UNC supplement essays, University of North Carolina - something inspiring
5 - Jiang, by definition, an elder is described as any of the following persons: 1. a person of greater age...
ScholarshipBennyooooHolt - Jan 11, 2017
|Letter of Intent - MFA Child Culture Design - University of Gothenburg
4 - Ade, try to combine the first and last paragraph of your essay in order to create a more informative...
GraduateameadeliaHolt - Jan 11, 2017
|Are the real teachers replaceable?
4 - Hello, I found you've tried to discuss the both sides and, in my opinion, I think it is...
Writing FeedbackvonhuoclanArlen - Jan 11, 2017
|The possession of car in a proportion of no car, one car, two cars, and more than two cars in Canada
4 - Hello, First of all, the words account doesn't meet the 150 words requirement. I think your sentences address...
Writing FeedbackilmuholicArlen - Jan 11, 2017
|The Urgency of Prohibition to Mobile Phone Utilization in Public Places (Writing IELTS Task 2)
4 - Thanks for your suggestion @nandasharma. I have to admit that i did it intentionally, and that is my method...
Writing Feedbackilmuholicilmuholic - Jan 11, 2017
|Another late night at the hospital. Constructive Advice Needed on Nursing Program Entrance Essay
7 - Hi Chloe. I must say that you effectively applied the suggestions that I made for the improvement of your...
UndergraduateclrHolt - Jan 11, 2017
|Writing Task 2: People claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled.
3 - Arlen, you have to clearly show your opinion. It seem that there is no a completion in your writing....
Writing FeedbackArlenilmuholic - Jan 11, 2017
|What do you plan to do after completing your master's degree in Sweden?
3 - @Holt Thank you very much Mary. I am really grateful to received valuable comments for my essay. I will...
ScholarshipStreetwalkerStreetwalker - Jan 11, 2017
|The Ethical Pitfalls of Orphanage Tourism
2 - George, your discussion regarding "Orphanage Tourism" is very one sided. It does not deliver a balanced discussion because you...
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