|Being right or being kind, which is more important to you?
3 - @Holt thank you for your feedback. Hope you can make time to look through my rewriting of this topic...
Writing FeedbackSillyFox - Mar 23, 2020SillyFox - Mar 27, 2020
|IELTS Task 2: Advantages and Disadvantages - Children enjoy playing video game.
3 - @Holt Hi, I've read your response. Thank you for helping me to check this essay. Whenever I start writing,...
Writing Feedbackrosincent - Mar 26, 2020rosincent - Mar 26, 2020
|Banking Sector - How will the proposed study contribute to your career*? Australia Award.
GraduateLenabouillot - Mar 26, 2020Lenabouillot - Mar 26, 2020
|Many wild animals are in danger.
2 - Any essay, be it an academic or English exam presentation requires the same formatting presentation: -Introduction -Discussion 1...
Writing Feedbackanotherdth - Mar 26, 2020Holt - Mar 26, 2020
|Older generations have traditional values about how people should live, think and behave
2 - The question is "To what extent do you agree OR disagree with the given statement?" You are not being...
Writing Feedbackminhtram166 - Mar 26, 2020Holt - Mar 26, 2020
|What are the causes for changing jobs every couple of years?
4 - The essay restatement is good. It clearly restates the prompt and outlines the discussion paragraphs clearly. However, when it...
Writing FeedbackBrianstorm - Mar 26, 2020Holt - Mar 26, 2020
|IELTS Writing task 2: Public funds on the arts? Is the government wasting money?
5 - @bachache: I appreciate your idea about another upside of investment in art. As for the structures and language used...
Writing Feedbackbee_linhtinh - Mar 25, 2020bee_linhtinh - Mar 26, 2020
|IELTS TASK 2: Should animals be kept in zoos? Describe both views and give your own opinion
2 - There is a distinct possibility that you could score within the 5 range with this type of work. The...
Writing Feedbackbachache - Mar 25, 2020Holt - Mar 26, 2020
|There is disagreement on the impact of increased business and culture contact between the countries
2 - Your response deviated from the discussion reason that was provided in the original prompt. The only perspective that you...
Writing FeedbackThien Xuan - Mar 25, 2020Holt - Mar 26, 2020
|IELTS TASK 2: different views about teaching children to become a good citizen of the community
2 - First of all, the way you divide your argument into paragraphs is not completely logical. This is a "...
Writing Feedbacknguyenanh97 - Mar 25, 2020taeyonieee - Mar 26, 2020
|The government should sometimes infringe on people's freedom for the security of society.
Writing Feedbackducpronehaha123 - Mar 25, 2020Holt - Mar 25, 2020
|[IELTS Writing Task 2] Discussion about online courses
2 - There is a slight error in your discussion instruction paraphrase. You are not going to discuss the advantages and...
Writing Feedbackjohn221 - Mar 25, 2020Holt - Mar 25, 2020
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Should museum ask for entrance fee?
2 - Never use words of uncertainty in a Task 2 test. The essay is calling for a precise description of...
Writing Feedbackpotatowee - Mar 25, 2020Holt - Mar 25, 2020
|IELTS Task 2: Advantages and Disadvantges: Conveniece foods
Writing FeedbackTHC1310vn - Mar 17, 2020anhnn146 - Mar 25, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages?
Writing Feedbackkaisergod47 - Mar 20, 2020anhnn146 - Mar 25, 2020
|Advantages of living in a large city - quality of life?
3 - @Holt Thank you very much. My writing is very bad, so I just write this thread to practice and...
Writing Feedbackhoa1128 - Mar 25, 2020hoa1128 - Mar 25, 2020
|Students should study whatever they like or only allowed to study subjects that will be useful
2 - This is a comparative discussion with a personal opinion essay. The one thing this is not is a personal...
Writing Feedbackminhtram166 - Mar 25, 2020Holt - Mar 25, 2020
|The beneficial elements and the drawbacks of advertisements
2 - The discussion approach for this essay is a single opinion based defense of your opinion. That means, you respond...
Writing Feedbacknhatduy240203 - Mar 25, 2020Holt - Mar 25, 2020
|Government should protect environment and provide education / health care
3 - This writing is a combination of 2 different Task 2 essay topics. As such, it will be difficult to...
Writing Feedbackmohamedhashem - Mar 25, 2020Holt - Mar 25, 2020
|Essay about the benefits of completing university course for guarantee to get a good job
2 - Do you actually think that you can write 434 words during the actual test? Did you even bother to...
Writing Feedbacknqthienan123 - Mar 24, 2020Holt - Mar 25, 2020
|Research Paper Draft Review on Dissection into the Life of the Intersex, (Hermaphrodite) Gender.
3 - I really appreciate your candor. I will revise my work to show more of my personal feeling on the...
Research Papersluvrite - Mar 24, 2020luvrite - Mar 24, 2020
|Environmental Engineering - Personal Statement For Chinese Government Scholarship
3 - @Holt, what do you say to this pls? My choice of graduate degree in Environmental Engineering is to...
ScholarshipGabriela123 - Mar 24, 2020Gabriela123 - Mar 24, 2020
|Irish education and Vietnamese students - Master studies
2 - You do not accurately portray responses to either questions in your essay. A long term interest in Ireland would...
Scholarshipkhangdu8897 - Mar 24, 2020Holt - Mar 24, 2020
|Statement of purpose AMA+ K'art, Screenwriting
3 - In my view, your essay is too informative, which is difficult for the reviewer to get into your story....
UndergraduateMelitanh - Mar 24, 2020khangdu8897 - Mar 24, 2020
|IELTS 2: encouraging businesses to relocate from metropolitans to regional areas.
3 - @Holt Thank you so much. I really appreciate your thoughtful feedback. I do really need to look into this...
Writing Feedbacktaeyonieee - Mar 23, 2020taeyonieee - Mar 24, 2020
|Should we apply new ways of finding the compatible person for a job, in lieu of interviews
Writing FeedbackLam Trann - Mar 23, 2020Holt - Mar 24, 2020
|It is better to repuire school uniforms or not. (Argumentative Essay for IELTS)
Writing Feedbackmydafne - Mar 21, 2020mydafne - Mar 23, 2020
|Coffee and banana sales - IELTS Cambridge 10 test 2 task 1 by Amy
4 - i think you should check your grammar carefully.Besides, you need to have the comparison between figures to gain the...
Writing Feedbackamy_nyk - Mar 23, 2020thuthao121 - Mar 23, 2020
|A motivational statement (300 words) outlining their suitability to be considered for a scholarship
Essaysobene200 - Mar 23, 2020obene200 - Mar 23, 2020
|Satisfaction of a job plays a critical role in deciding one's overall happiness
Writing Feedbackvuthuylinh2611 - Mar 23, 2020vuthuylinh2611 - Mar 23, 2020