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4 - I think your essay is good and easy-to-follow. But it would be better if you explain more in two...
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|[IELTS] Schools are no longer necessary because of the Internet... Agree or disagree?
4 - Hello YuAnne, Your essay is good, you wrote it with topic sentences, which made your essay clear. I think...
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3 - Ricardo, you were not able to properly paraphrase the original prompt. You mistook the presentation of facts in your...
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 : Give opinions on teaching a foreign language in primary school years.
7 - @Holt Yes, because I do not know how to lengthen my essay, I give 3 elements in each paragraph...
Writing Feedbackthaongocthaongoc - Jul 18, 2017
|Narrative essay for English about overcoming fears
2 - There is an unanswered question in your presentation. You said "Never give up without trying because you will never...
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4 - overall, good essay. I would fix some of the grammar mistakes tho such as find=found in the first sentence,...
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|[TOEFL iBT INDEPENDENT TASK] THE INTERNET OR PRINTED MATERIAL FOR RESEARCH?
3 - Minh, your body paragraph for your reasoning is acceptable. The problem is that your opening paragraph and concluding paragraphs...
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|Some people say it is wrong to keep animals in captivity. Others say that are benefit for animal
2 - Nguyet, the next time that you post your essay for review, please post the complete original instructions along with...
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3 - Lavonna, unfortunately the topic that you chose, the one that you highlighted in black is not really a belief...
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5 - I would also say that the essay above does not have a proper balance idea and number of words...
Writing Feedbackhailunglamabeto - Jul 16, 2017
|Protecting the environment by any person is welcomed but multinational cooperation is more important
2 - Robin, if you say that the solution to the problem lies in a multilateral solution, then you must take...
Writing FeedbackRobin_NiHolt - Jul 16, 2017
|Teaching context outline and an action plan containing measures to benefit a community
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6 - @tunglinh0907@daiha20082009 Thank you for your responses! @thuy_nguyet I think there's no maximum limit to the length of your...
Writing Feedbackchantiehchantieh - Jul 16, 2017
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3 - Hi Nguyet, i'm glad to have a chance in sharing with you about writing, especially academic writing. i suppose...
Writing Feedbackthuy_nguyetputjaaa - Jul 16, 2017
|Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Writing FeedbackYuTingJimYuTingJim - Jul 15, 2017
|Motorways have both positive and negative impacts on the social community
3 - @Holt Thanks for your advice ,Holt ! I understood that its was my mistake to forget the question but...
Writing FeedbackHieugod28102001Hieugod28102001 - Jul 15, 2017
|Chevening scholarship: my response to the leadership and influence prompt
3 - @Holt Thank you immensely Holt for the prompt reaction. I have assimilated your advice and the new version will...
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3 - Sana, your paraphrasing is not in the acceptable format. It does not clearly explain the original topic for discussion...
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|Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems.
Writing Feedbackanuthomas121anuthomas121 - Jul 15, 2017
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2 - Farhad. you need too develop the evolutionary story of Dolma from the Yaprag stage before you being to discuss...
Writing Feedbackfar2124696Holt - Jul 15, 2017
|[TOEFL] Students take distance-learning courses or in a real class. Which one is better?
3 - @Holt Thank you very much for the careful comments. I didn't notice I missed the conclusion at the last...
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