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Question about the advantage and disadvantage of working from home.

2 - Do not make reference to current events in your restatement. The original topic is not connected to this...

Writing FeedbackNhido - Nov 15, 2021Holt - Nov 16, 2021
[IELTS WRITING TASK 1] The charts below show the most popular films by genre for men and women

3 - @hanhnguyennn you can use another vocabulary to explain film types. such as genre, category, etc...

Writing Feedbackhanhnguyennn - Nov 11, 2021aryabhaskara - Nov 16, 2021
IELTS 1 - The expenditure on consumed goods. The data was collected in France and the UK in 2010

6 - @Dason what the unit is used in the chart? Dollars or pounds? the number of car sales...

Writing FeedbackDason - Nov 1, 2021aryabhaskara - Nov 16, 2021
'Self-development is paramount for research engineers'; Chevening Essay: Part 3 - Studying in the UK

NEW - Hi everyone! Greetings from Indonesia. My name is Arya. I would like to have my essays reviewed (although it...

Scholarshiparyabhaskara - Nov 16, 2021 -
Management and team building - My Chevening Leadership Essay - Leadership and Influencing Skills

3 - @houston17 the linking paragraph and the achievement is so cool. But, I think it is better if you could...

Scholarshiphouston17 - Oct 31, 2021aryabhaskara - Nov 16, 2021
One act of kindness will eventually lead to another compassion. Relationship-building - Chevening

NEW - Hi everyone! Greetings from Indonesia. My name is Arya. I would like to have my Chevening essay reviewed (although...

Scholarshiparyabhaskara - Nov 16, 2021 -
Chevening - Study in the UK - three university choices; LSE, QMUL, and Goldsmiths

4 - @asrykaloko "I discovered knowledge and professional gaps ..." What knowledge gap did you trying to explain? It...

Scholarshipasrykaloko - Oct 29, 2021aryabhaskara - Nov 16, 2021
I want to embrace my potential - my Chevening Essay (Leadership and Influence)

4 - @popochanel By using STARL method, I think you could elaborate more detail here on your achievement : -...

Scholarshippopochanel - Oct 29, 2021aryabhaskara - Nov 16, 2021
My leadership experiences in various renewable energy projects as a government research engineer

NEW - Hi everyone! Greetings from Indonesia. My name is Arya. I would like to have my essays reviewed (although it...

Scholarshiparyabhaskara - Nov 16, 2021 -
Today's schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today.

2 - The prompt paraphrase and opinion paragraph has deviated from the original topic and required response format. The restatement should...

Writing Feedbacknhatlam6306 - Nov 15, 2021Holt - Nov 16, 2021
The bar charts show the comparison of salt intake between men and women in different ages in America

3 - I think that your sentences using humans as the subject are too much in your essay. Use more like...

Writing FeedbackMay55 - Nov 11, 2021greencoconut - Nov 16, 2021
Material Engineering and Nanotechnology - Motivation Letter for Master degree

2 - Do not confuse the personal statement with the motivation letter. The motivation letter can be completed between 3-5 paragraphs...

LettersNicole007 - Nov 15, 2021Holt - Nov 15, 2021
The energy produced by France in the course of two years (1995 and 2005)

3 - @Holt thank ya' very much....

Writing Feedbackkhangngudot - Nov 14, 2021khangngudot - Nov 15, 2021
IELTS TASK 2: IS GOVERNMENT RESPONSIBLE FOR TAKING CARE OF CITIZENS' HEALTH and diet?

3 - 1. I think your thesis statement in the first paragraph should not just have your opinion but also the...

Writing Feedbackkimkhue - Nov 13, 2021Khushi123 - Nov 15, 2021
The Courage To Do The Right Thing at Right Time - My Chevening Leadership & Influencing Skills Essay

2 - The main leadership and influencing example has to prove or provide evidence of your abilities asa emerging national, business,...

ScholarshipAbbas007 - Nov 14, 2021Holt - Nov 15, 2021
Some have a strong preference for studying alone while others tend to go for learning in a group

2 - The essay asks for your direct opinion. So the examples must be based on first person,rather than 3rd party...

Writing Feedbackthungoc13 - Nov 14, 2021Holt - Nov 15, 2021
Why are vaccines important?

2 - Kindly review your in-text citations. You have not seperated it from the actual text, making the paragraphs highly confusing...

Research Paperslyssamariet - Nov 14, 2021Holt - Nov 15, 2021
New student enrollment in Top Australian university and their applications majors

3 - @Holt Thank you very much...

Writing FeedbackKund7 - Nov 12, 2021Kund7 - Nov 15, 2021
Marketing Analytics Master Letter of Motivation

NEW - application letter for marketing analytics program Hi! This is a general letter of motivation for a graduate program...

Lettersadventurous_donu - Nov 14, 2021 -
Technology trend that may impact your target career. - MS Business Analytics Essay for CUNY.

2 - Based on the emerging trend, how do you see it affecting your current carell as an obstacle towards your...

GraduateKhushi123 - Nov 13, 2021Holt - Nov 14, 2021
There are serious concerns about the sale and production of genetically modified food.

2 - It is not necessary to define what genetically modified foods are to the reader. The task 2 essay...

Writing FeedbackPHAMNGOCHUONG - Nov 13, 2021Holt - Nov 14, 2021
Writing task 2: Students should be primarily taught academic subjects so that they can pass exams

4 - @beloyal Thank you. Can you give me some particularly example about conjuction words in this essay?...

Writing FeedbackTranThanhLuy - Nov 9, 2021TranThanhLuy - Nov 14, 2021
Some believe that importing foreign movies and TV programs is beneficial for their country's culture

4 - @Holt Thank you for helping me! It's a meaningful instruction :)...

Writing Feedbackslintii_302 - Nov 12, 2021slintii_302 - Nov 14, 2021
Is maintaining public libraries a waste of money since the Internet is now replacing their function?

2 - Review the writing instructions. The writing is to be based on "to what extent" a response that you...

Writing FeedbackNathan531 - Nov 12, 2021Holt - Nov 13, 2021
MOTIVATION STATEMENT FOR MASTER OF ART IN POPULATION STUDIES

2 - You have written this essay without any consideration for the readily available discussion guidelines for the motivational letter. There...

Graduatefkoomson - Nov 12, 2021Holt - Nov 13, 2021
Rough draft peer review on why play is important for children

2 - The opening statement and the introduction were placed in reverse in the presentation. The second paragraph makes for an...

Research Paperstabithasenff123 - Nov 12, 2021Holt - Nov 13, 2021
GKS SCHOLARSHIP LANGUAGE STUDY PLAN - My Plan Before and After Coming to Korea

2 - For the Korean language learning after arriving in Korea, you seem to think that you can take the TOPIK...

ScholarshipGalatea - Nov 11, 2021Holt - Nov 12, 2021
Data on Australia exports to four regions: Japan, US, China, and India, over the period of 22 years

2 - This is a confusing statement as there are no categories enumerated in the line graph. Percentage points we...

Writing Feedbackngthuylinh1011 - Nov 11, 2021Holt - Nov 12, 2021
More people put their personal information online (address, telephone number...) for everyday (ielts

2 - Good restatement but it should have had a direct reference to the indicated channels where the use of...

Writing FeedbackPham Ngoc Anh - Nov 11, 2021Holt - Nov 12, 2021
Social Media on the Brain and Mind

2 - The introduction to the topic will be helped if a previous paragraph is presented showing the history of human...

Writing Feedbackhan2206320 - Nov 11, 2021Holt - Nov 12, 2021