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IELTS Writing Task 2 - More and more people participate in extreme sports

2 - The prompt restatement is well done. It does not deviate from the original topic and the writer's opinion shows...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Feb 16, 2026Holt - Feb 16, 2026
Direct-PhD Physics Statement of Purpose for King Fahd University (KFUPM)

2 - You have delivered an excellent expanded resume in this essay. However, that is not what the statement of purpose...

GraduateHafsa - Feb 15, 2026Holt - Feb 16, 2026
GKS program / Korean drama - statement of purpose for master's degree

2 - The one thing that irritates the GKS reviewers are applicants who rely heavily on their characterization of Korea...

Scholarshipandi123 - Feb 15, 2026Holt - Feb 16, 2026
IELTS Writing task 2 - Agree & Disagree - Topic Transport (Cyclists should pass a test)

2 - A suggestion is different from an argument. This shows a lack of English vocabulary skills on your part. by...

Writing FeedbackMon4615 - Feb 15, 2026Holt - Feb 16, 2026
PTDF Masters Scholarship - Cyber Security

2 - You have effectively used AI hybrid writing to develop a masters letter of intent / motivational letter to meet...

ScholarshipJanetttt - Feb 13, 2026Holt - Feb 15, 2026
Business entrepreneurship - Turkey burslari scholarship essay application 2026

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your time You took the time to review my essay and i appreciate...

UndergraduateKpro123 - Feb 12, 2026Kpro123 - Feb 13, 2026
LETTER OF INTENT for Turkiye Burslari scholarship for medicine

2 - Since you are applying for acceptance into a college of medicine, the reviewer will expect you to have almost...

Undergraduatehelulu - Feb 11, 2026Holt - Feb 12, 2026
Motivation Letter Postgraduate Diploma in Earth System Physics The Abdus Salam International Centre

2 - I am not impressed by an application essay that is 80% AI generated. While the essay is highly academic...

LettersJeff Tetteh - Feb 10, 2026Holt - Feb 12, 2026
My Chosen UChicago Prompt: find the beauty in trash.

2 - Repeating this several times in the essay makes this declaration lose impact. Learn to position your hooks for...

UndergraduatePhanuel - Feb 10, 2026Holt - Feb 12, 2026
Becoming a scientist - my motivation letter for Stipendium Hungaricum

2 - How was this community directly affected by the drought? What was the catalyst that moved you in this...

Letterskerr000 - Feb 10, 2026Holt - Feb 12, 2026
Supply chain management - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR APPLYING MASTER DEGREE

2 - Your essay carefully balances your human context with an obvious AI polish throughout the essay. It created an interesting...

Scholarshipstarstruck076 - Feb 10, 2026Holt - Feb 12, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Many museums charge for admission while others are free

2 - Your prompt restatement is inaccurate and will receive a failing TA score. You are referencing reasons as a part...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Feb 9, 2026Holt - Feb 9, 2026
Technology - Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship

2 - Don't reference research or information from other sources. You should be able to make this reference in an...

Letterscateeoe - Feb 9, 2026Holt - Feb 9, 2026
Passionate about textiles - Personal Statement Master at Brunel University

2 - Most masters degree students believe that they need to reference their childhood interest in a particular field or course...

Scholarshipbakhtawa445 - Feb 8, 2026Holt - Feb 8, 2026
Clean water. Free or charged?

2 - It is incorrect for you to make a presumptive statement in the prompt restatement section. You are to...

Writing Feedbackquasal - Feb 7, 2026Holt - Feb 8, 2026
Question on a essay topic.

2 - Delusional is such a strong word to describe your interpretation of the topic. Yes, this may seem like an...

Essaysquasal - Feb 6, 2026Holt - Feb 8, 2026
Rising prevalence of travelling.

2 - While the essay comes in at more than the minimum word requirement, it does not fully allow the examiner...

Writing Feedbackquasal - Feb 6, 2026Holt - Feb 8, 2026
Technology regarding relationship. Positive or negative?

2 - The essay is well developed and written in a highly coherent manner. It successfully transitions within sentences, for the...

Writing Feedbackquasal - Feb 6, 2026Holt - Feb 8, 2026
Letter Of Intent For Turkey Bulsari scholarship, application for Medicine.

2 - The reason that you are having a difficult time editing this letter for length is simple. You did not...

Scholarshiprink - Feb 6, 2026Holt - Feb 8, 2026
IELTS TASK 2: Younger people replacing older people at work

2 - You need to learn how to properly allot your time when writing the task 2 essay. The more common...

Writing Feedbackquasal - Feb 5, 2026Holt - Feb 6, 2026
Study plan in Taiwan - molecular immunology and biomedical research

2 - Okay. The actual study plan starts at paragraph 4. That is where this essay should begin. It should end...

ScholarshipThang0807 - Feb 5, 2026Holt - Feb 5, 2026
Personal Statement for MIB (China Government Scholarship- University Track)

2 - It is highly unfortunate that you allowed AI to completely write this personal statement for you. So, while the...

Graduatemoonsph1nx - Feb 3, 2026Holt - Feb 4, 2026
Personal Statement for GKS-U Undergraduate in Architecture at PNU

4 - The reviewers actually look for your personality in your writing. An effective personal statement allows you to show your...

UndergraduateLannabia19 - Jan 29, 2026Holt - Feb 4, 2026
From flipping patties to winning awards GKS-G personal statement for Korean Studies major Emb.Track

3 - Thank you Holt for the feedback! I appreciate it!...

Scholarshipmkaru37 - Feb 3, 2026mkaru37 - Feb 4, 2026
What is the importance of education in a student's life?

2 - Education also helps students to become creative and logical thinkers. Information they read leads them to think of how...

Student Talkbangalorehometut - Feb 3, 2026Holt - Feb 4, 2026
"Describe achievement in your academic experience & how it supports your choice? Graduation plans?"

2 - Please indicate if this is a free certificate course of an open learning course without certification of completion....

Undergraduateeatcheese - Feb 3, 2026Holt - Feb 4, 2026
Erasmus Mundus application motivation letter for edu_mig

2 - There is no need to indicate this in the letter. Instead, try to show your excitement and motivation...

LettersAgnul - Feb 2, 2026Holt - Feb 4, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Newspapers have a significant influence on people's ideas and opinions

2 - The essay shows a good thought process coming from you. You obviously brainstormed the content of the essay prior...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Feb 2, 2026Holt - Feb 2, 2026
Gks Ug Personal statement for computer engineering

2 - I am not sure why you posted the same essay twice in the box. It did not help me...

ScholarshipNavya - Feb 1, 2026Holt - Feb 2, 2026
Wirting Ielts part 2: Pros & Cons remote natural

2 - The essay counts only 246 words in the total writing, which means this essay would receive an automatic failing...

Writing FeedbackHelenNguyen712 - Feb 1, 2026Holt - Feb 2, 2026
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