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4 - Alicia, , reading through your essay, I cannot help but feel that the information provided is incomplete. For example,...
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4 - Hello Forum Members, I am applying for Masters in Computer Science at ETH Zurich. Above SOP is the...
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|The percentage of U.K. university students in England who were capable to speak different languages
Writing Feedbacklouislo1006louislo1006 - Nov 26, 2017
|Eng 102 research paper on the recent decline of nurses
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2 - Zahil, try to create a more purpose driven essay. After all, this is supposed to be a Statement of...
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|My plan to pursue my masters degree in US be scholarship.
2 - Naseer, I find the first 3 paragraphs to be highly uninteresting to read. You have gone into so much...
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|Help to start my essay conclusion - a character from the book called To Kill a Mockingbird
4 - hello empyru, since you didnt provide any information about the character or the book. i guess it will be...
EssaysEmpyruCodex1717 - Nov 25, 2017
|Some school have special course for sports while others do not provide any of the kind.
Writing FeedbackH962018H962018 - Nov 25, 2017
|Leadership position and what I did individually to make a change
4 - @Codex1717 I think its a good essay, but I believe that you're trying to stuff too many things in...
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|My Struggle Through Teen Bullying/Suicide -Common App Prompt
4 - @jiholee5217 Hello! I totally agree with Holt. I believe that you should you Hannah only as a catalyst to...
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|What's the probability of existing? Make something out of it!
4 - hello isabella, I didn't really get carried along in your essay, I got lost at some point, I don't...
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|What are the things most crucial to you and why?
7 - hello warisha, i agree strongly with isabella, recounting an experience that reflects your desire for personal growth will help...
UndergraduateWarishaCodex1717 - Nov 25, 2017
|Addressing an issue in my country with my degree choice
3 - thank you very much for your contribution and feedback@Holt I removed the second and paragragh and added this as...
Research PapersCodex1717Codex1717 - Nov 25, 2017
|Compare/Contrast news story from the last year to historical event/era before the 1500s
2 - Hi Jeff, you could probably reference the Islamic invasion of India in reference to the Egypt events. This massacre...
Essayskola98Holt - Nov 25, 2017
|SOP for Data Science Admission; What exactly is a hacker?
4 - Hi all, I've taken your advice and modified my essay accordingly, could you all please check the 2nd version...
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|Learning new things has always been a great motivator for me. Essay for MasterCard
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|Being Indifferent - Tell us about who you are. UBC
UndergraduateMichell20Michell20 - Nov 24, 2017
|Major choice - to gain valuable training and obtain access to a wider range of possibilities
5 - @TJLuschen yes, my English is not good. Thank your suggestion. I fixed the essay many times, revised essay is...
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|Outline what you believe are particular challenges (eg. in the economy, education, healthcare, etc.)
5 - Your essay does not provide solutions for the educational problems in your community.. How do u plan to use...
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|'The Art of Paper-Folding' - writing CommonApp Prompt #1
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|"The limit does not exist!" - Personal essay - Canadian destination
3 - @Holt im applying to a highschool. I believe they only asked me to write a personal statement without any...
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|Motivation Letter for a Scholarship application to study in Ms.c Computer Science.
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|OBESITY IS A NEW DISEASE FOR CHILDREN
3 - please give me the site to read some English documents and also, to check some writing. to increase the...
Writing Feedbackamateuramateur - Nov 24, 2017
|Helping the poor and the underprivileged. Essay on my values and passion as a person
4 - Thank you very much @qin6882060 and @Holt.. I really appreciate your feedback..I will make necessary corrections...
ScholarshipCodex1717Codex1717 - Nov 24, 2017
|TOEFL Integrated task - three possible explanation regarding the origin of this old manuscript
2 - Behzab, your opening paragraph could have been stronger if you have indicated the criteria that was to be discussed...
Writing FeedbackpierHolt - Nov 24, 2017
|Contrast paragraph between adulthood and childhood.
Writing Feedbackfrankovidaxtfrankovidaxt - Nov 24, 2017
|Each househole and family produces a large amount of rubbish every week [IELTS]
Writing Feedbacktrandangkhoatrandangkhoa - Nov 24, 2017
|Single-gender profession brings more advantages owing to numerous differences in sexual physiques
Writing Feedbacklinhluong158linhluong158 - Nov 23, 2017
|Transformative effect of learning experience.
ScholarshipCodex1717Codex1717 - Nov 23, 2017
|TASK-2: schools are no longer necessary because there is so much information available through WWW
4 - fiZa, here is the scoring breakdown: TA - 4, your opening paraphrase and body of paragraphs are only...
Writing FeedbacksfizaHolt - Nov 23, 2017