|David Mosse (2004) asks whether good policy is unimplementable? How far is this true in relation...
4 - Thank you for responses they have been very helpful, I will take your advice. However my tutor did say...
EssaysSweetness7Sweetness7 - Apr 14, 2017
|Essay for English: Legalization of Marijuana: The Future is here
2 - Kory your essay is composed of more than 30 percent of quotes. This is something that poses a problem...
Research Papersbballkid19Holt - Apr 14, 2017
|The community in which I live, of which I am a member.
2 - Hann, you took a research approach to responding to the essay rather than the personal, contemplative approach which is...
UndergraduatedefneHolt - Apr 14, 2017
|Veganism -- Giving advice on my essay! This is for a final grade.
2 - Fabia, you can actually lengthen the content of your essay if you continue to respond to the questions that...
Writing FeedbackFabia2Holt - Apr 14, 2017
|The primary reasons behind low productivity of agriculture land. Two graphs description IELTS TASK 1
2 - Hadeel, you must avoid redundancies of information in your essays. Your irst 2 paragraphs contain the same information in...
Writing Feedbackhadeel21Holt - Apr 13, 2017
|The influence of gory games for behaviour of gamers in reality. Research on Video Games and Violence
2 - Estevan, when writing a research paper, you must do so from a third person point of view. In order...
Research PapersestgilvidHolt - Apr 13, 2017
|IELTS Task 1 Exercise "comparation among UK student who didn't go into full-time work"
3 - Rista, the comparison method that you used throughout the essay is the best presentation that I have seen so...
Writing Feedbackardy_rpHolt - Apr 13, 2017
|Should we help people from other countries ?
Writing Feedbackfrenchfriesfrenchfries - Apr 13, 2017
|AFRICAN LIFE STORY/JOURNEY - SMU PROMPT
4 - Try to change your approach to the prompt question Adrian. The current essay has too much unnecessary information such...
Undergraduateaocharo10Holt - Apr 13, 2017
|I decided to study in Canada. Review my Study plan for Study permit
5 - Your response to the top most prompt is incorrect and not applicable. You are being asked to explain why...
GraduateTazNisHolt - Apr 13, 2017
|I NEED HELP WITH THIS LETTER OF INTENT FOR ADMISSION IN CANADA
2 - Franklin, your letter of intent needs to introduce the development of your interest in Philosophy as well as your...
Graduatemizcee16Holt - Apr 11, 2017
|West Europe electricity generation resources
2 - Abeeb, when you write the summary overview, it is imperative that you accomplish that paragraph using at least 3...
Writing FeedbackabeerbasHolt - Apr 11, 2017
|My Engineering & Construction Experience for Scholarship Essay Purpose
2 - Ananto, your essay is extremely difficult to read sure to the horrible English sentence structure and development. Collectively, the...
ScholarshipansufwHolt - Apr 11, 2017
|Rotary's motto is Service above Self. How have you served your community in the past and now?
2 - Joseph, due to the length of the word requirement of essay for the prompts provided, I'm constrained by forum...
Scholarshipjoseph256Holt - Apr 11, 2017
|Announcement about constructing a great manufacturing plant in the area - TOEFL Independent writing
2 - Yin, there is an extreme prompt understanding problem in your essay. You did not properly parasite the prompt discussion...
Writing FeedbackjoannasephiraHolt - Apr 11, 2017
|The employment pressure of graduate students
3 - Mirror, I wish that you had given me an inclination as to what the actual prompt for this essay...
Writing FeedbackmirrorHolt - Apr 11, 2017
|Understanding your credit and how it affects your life. "NEED" Peer Review
2 - Joshua, this essay is really difficult to read. The premise is unclear, the point of the discussion needs to...
Research PapersdeckerjnohatinHolt - Apr 11, 2017
|Personal statement "why I wish to be considered for a Scholarship"
3 - @missayufitri I used advices that Holt gave to me in my previous thread: essayforum.com/scholarship/education-investment-statement-76061/ Of all the...
ScholarshipArchFArchF - Apr 10, 2017
|How do we eradicate illiteracy in Ghanaian society
2 - Daniel, the topic of your essay is the eradication of illiteracy in Ghana. The premise of the essay is...
Writing Feedbackyaww phanyeHolt - Apr 10, 2017
|Post Study Plan for Bachelor Degree in International Hotel Management (Switzerland school)
2 - Bao, your post study plan should cover the first 5 years of your post tertiary educational career. So your...
UndergraduateBao VoHolt - Apr 10, 2017
|Reason for learning a foreign language
3 - Hiền, I think that "I admit that many people learn foreign languages with a view to travel or work...
Writing Feedbacknguyenhienngocanh_97hanu - Apr 10, 2017
|Some solutions aimed at increasing students' attendance
3 - Chu, this research paper is severely flawed. The most well developed portion needs to be the thesis statement. That...
Research Papersngocanh_97hanuHolt - Apr 10, 2017
|Is eating meat good for health or not ?
3 - Hi You should take more notice of verbs as well as some structures.For example:contain-contains,avoid to eat-avoid eating In addition,your...
Writing FeedbackAgustina Nababannguyenhien - Apr 10, 2017
|Popular movie goers - 1 ietls academic
3 - @Strikeracad30 The sentence "The age group of 7-14 and 25-35 has similar figures in 1984" must be in past...
Writing FeedbackStrikeracad30Agustina Nababan - Apr 10, 2017
|Transported goods and rail - task 1 academic for correction and comments
3 - @Holt Thank you for your advice and comment, I am sorry it that the graph was not uploaded. I...
Writing FeedbackStrikeracad30Strikeracad30 - Apr 10, 2017
|Life among the crowd or in a remote area?
Writing FeedbackHoang LinhStrikeracad30 - Apr 10, 2017
|The Struggles Women Face Entering or Rentering College
3 - @miana13 Hi Miana, this research paper is very informative and well prepared. My only suggestion is for you to...
Research Papersmiana13Strikeracad30 - Apr 10, 2017
|"A plethora of opportunities"- Waitlist Essay for UC Davis
3 - Amanda, since you were wait-listed the last time, it is understood that you continued your education at some college...
UndergraduateamrenworthHolt - Apr 10, 2017
|The best way to solve the problem of traffic is to force people to pay toll. Agree or Disagree?
3 - Thank you Holt for the great feedback. Could you write an introduction for this essay that would respond to...
Writing Feedbackadib_yzadib_yz - Apr 10, 2017
|Why I chose the following Master's programs and institutions
3 - @kacanakya try answering the following questions in your essay: What is your college major? If you are a high...
Scholarshipkacanakyaayazemj - Apr 9, 2017