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Chevening Career Plan - to make our nation one step forward through science and technology policy

7 - @sehatdinati The essay looks alright. I would advise to expand on career plans and talk in depth how it...

Scholarshipilskyilskyjermaine7 - Feb 19, 2017
Chevening - to lead the organization and contribute to social development.

9 - @ilskyilsky Dear Taekeun Lee, Are you Chevening applicant for this year? Have u received shortlisted announcement for interview?...

Scholarshipilskyilskysehatdinati - Feb 19, 2017
Critique on literature Review Introduction on Carbohydrate feeding on exercise performance

3 - Amanda, make the second paragraph the first paragraph instead. The actual topic paragraph is located in the second paragraph....

Writing Feedbackjermaine7Holt - Feb 19, 2017
Nowadays overpopulation and crowding of large cities are considered a big problem in the world.

6 - Thanks for your feedbacks :)....

Writing Feedbackrozhnazrozhnaz - Feb 19, 2017
[TOEFL] Moving to a new city or country is not agood idea because you will lose your old friends

4 - The full prompt for the essay dictates that you either agree or disagree with the statement provided. Therefore, you...

Writing Feedbackgoo9danHolt - Feb 19, 2017
I was born and grown up in the northern country. 2017 Scholarship, Self-Introduction letter

11 - Ali, as a reminder, please post your questions in a separate, new thread instead of hijacking the thread of...

ScholarshipSiiaBirillHolt - Feb 19, 2017
Opinions of celebrities are powerful for young people who haven't decided their major. TOEFL Writing

2 - Asol, once again, I will remind you to please post the complete instructions for your essay prompt. Do not...

Writing Feedbackgoo9danHolt - Feb 19, 2017
Selected program of study and the aim to make durable, easy to fix, and upgradable electronics

5 - @greyhamster I just came here to cheer you up! I'm a writing learner too. Let's keep it up and...

Undergraduategreyhamstergoo9dan - Feb 19, 2017
Music cannot be substituted. People can't live without it.

6 - Thanks, this is really great opening....

Writing Feedbackadamrahimovadamrahimov - Feb 19, 2017
IELTS Writing Task 2: Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.

6 - Sehat due to the fact that I am a native English speaker and my opening statement covers all of...

Writing FeedbacksehatdinatiHolt - Feb 19, 2017
I plan to get a doctorate in Clinical Neuropsychology - UNIV. OF TEXAS SOP (PSYCHOLOGY/NEUROSCIENCE)

6 - Tana, I see where you are coming from now. The essay that you wrote includes the important elements I...

UndergraduateNerveraHolt - Feb 19, 2017
Different techniques to encourage children for higher activity. Competitiveness or cooperativeness?

3 - Hi First, introduce your topic. The introductory paragraph should briefly orient the reader to the topic and provide a...

Writing FeedbackMH_twrozhnaz - Feb 18, 2017
The figure illustrates the number of three kinds of fast food eaten by youths in Australia

6 - @foyuliu Dear @Foyuliu, 150words is the minimum words, not the maximum. Thankyou, anw!...

Writing Feedbacksehatdinatisehatdinati - Feb 18, 2017
Percentage of the variation of old people, who are above their sixties

2 - To, you need to provide the graph so that I can confirm the accuracy of the information you are...

Writing Feedbackmaitouyen2021Holt - Feb 18, 2017
When I was small, I have covered many wonderful places in India. Need correction and better words

3 - @Holt Thanks! and it is amazing how you choose the words to convey the same information....

Grammar, Usagemastindersinghmastindersingh - Feb 18, 2017
PTE Summarize written text in one sentence. IT and blue-collar workers

3 - Thank you Mary! I didn't realize there are three stages. I only got the division by IT and blue-collar...

Writing Feedbackfoyuliufoyuliu - Feb 18, 2017
Goals to implement; being professional means being successful

5 - Here is the thing, you are writing a post study plan and yo have to be truthful about this...

GraduatelukmeHolt - Feb 18, 2017
I'm really expecting a lot from studying in Korea. SOP for applying to a scholarship (KGSP)

24 - @Holt Okay :) thank you sooooo much for your help, I really appreciate it . :)...

Scholarshipamelhopeamelhope - Feb 18, 2017
The pie charts illustrate how the proportion of annual expenditure was changed in a UK school

4 - Add a little comment, regarding following sentences, it seems no need to mention the data in 1991 since you...

Writing Feedbackkocc2003foyuliu - Feb 18, 2017
Task 2 IELTS The line graph illustrates amount of UK employee transporting every day

5 - You find below my example of a more properly developed overview summary statement. It includes an analysis of the...

Writing Feedbackmaitouyen20Holt - Feb 18, 2017
Mesmerizing world of Chemistry - Personal Statement on my activities and plans for next years

2 - Pam, the only revision to your essay that I can suggest at this point is the removal of the...

UndergraduatepamveerapenHolt - Feb 18, 2017
Evolution on people's quality of life through the making of foods

4 - For example, when you said "humans have invented enumerated tools...", you created a confusing sentence because the correct development...

Writing FeedbackjaikrishnaHolt - Feb 17, 2017
LSE. You must present a personal statement with your application form, between 1,000 and 1,500 words

15 - Holt, I will make that final adjustment and get ready to send it off. Thank you very much for...

GraduateZak CannonZak Cannon - Feb 17, 2017
PTE Essay: should age discrimination be made illegal

3 - Indeed, I was far away from the topic being asked, such a super mistake. Thank you Mary!...

Writing Feedbackfoyuliufoyuliu - Feb 17, 2017
The consequences of deforestation would be even more serious than the global warming

4 - Rain, you should have place a period instead of a comma at the end of the second sentence in...

Writing Feedbackrainman9tHolt - Feb 17, 2017
Our life is very different from this life that our parents and grandparents used to live

4 - Hi Van, You should not repeat the complete question in your answer. Also, for every 2 lines a...

Writing FeedbackVan Nhi Nguyenjaikrishna - Feb 17, 2017
Writing Task 2 - Travelling to other countries with appreciation for different customs

4 - @Abrahamlincoln In the conclusion, the sentence seems very complicated. It is good to use complex sentences without hampering...

Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincolnhaleshi - Feb 16, 2017
Writing Task 1 - how many people took computer science at university of UK?

4 - Hi Abrahamlincoln, It is important to give more stress on sentence structure. For example, Meanwhile, in the...

Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincolnhaleshi - Feb 16, 2017
Modern building versus buildings from the past

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for correcting my essay....

Writing Feedbackhaleshihaleshi - Feb 16, 2017
Chance to choose for change your future- 2017 Scholarship Letter of Self Introduction

4 - Thank you for the advices. I will re-write it again.....

Scholarshipmichaelhmichaelh - Feb 16, 2017