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4 - Hang, the agreement that you have with the opinion should have been indicated in a proper manner in the...
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4 - Jessie as a simple statement that describes a meal that you remember, this essay is sufficient. It delivers all...
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2 - @CHIHYULIN while I appreciate the url for the graph that you provided, it is a must that you instead...
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2 - Anh, let me start by helping you with some advice about how to better develop an opening statement. You...
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3 - Hi, I found your essay quite clear but you should stress on the advantage part if you claim it...
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4 - @Holt Thankyou very much for all the suggestions. I will surely take them into consideration while editing...
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5 - To sum up, although increasing the number of sports facilities are a good way to improve the public health,...
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4 - Hi, I think you should make more effort on the structure of the essay. After the introduction paragraph, it...
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4 - Hi, I think it is better to add some examples on top of your explanation because it makes the...
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5 - Hi, I am a bit confused with the idea included in the second paragraph because I do not understand...
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|You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some ...
2 - Vijay, you have misplaced your things after a conference, you cannot give just your first name to the hotel...
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4 - Shirely, your essay shows that you did not spare at least 1 minute to understand what was required of...
Writing FeedbackShirely Fuokorobiadimma14 - Jul 31, 2017
|IELTS Tesk 2 - Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools.
3 - Hi joan, I think you shouldnt take a specific person (your friend) as an example. Instead, you could have...
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2 - Uyen, due to the fact that you did not provide the complete prompt instructions for this essay, I will...
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|Childhood experience which leave lifelong Impressions
5 - @okorobiadimma14 Thank you indeed Okoye, for pointing out the errors in my essay. As per your great input,...
Writing FeedbackRitiRiti - Jul 31, 2017
|My life in the United States. I need help with my college essay.
2 - Baki, the essay you wrote does not accurately detail the American Dream that you are pursuing. This is simply...
Writing FeedbackPlexusHolt - Jul 31, 2017
|[IELTS]Some people think that children should be studying all the mandatory subjects
7 - Hi Karen, there are some grammar mistakes in your essay and I've corrected a few. Remember to proofread your...
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|Personal Statement; Tell us more about you and why you are considering VCU/ International Transfer
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