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It is true that environmental problems are not received care enough from citizens

3 - Hi, I would like to point out your errors in your essay. 1. The first grammatical mistake is noticeable...

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Information regarding the proportion of energy generated from 5 sources in New Zealand and Germany

3 - Thank you so much! @Holt...

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Report: Evaluation of the 'International food' course in the Superior school of cookery.

2 - Observations should be either positive or negative. These are not references to what was learned in class. Such a...

Writing Feedbackisamj - Sep 9, 2021Holt - Sep 10, 2021
The bar graph below shows basic information about uses of leisure time among different age group.

2 - The writer used a topic restatement + opinion presentation for the first paragraph. A discussion format exclusive to the...

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The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.

2 - The paraphrase does not restate the original topic, nor any responses to the direct questions. The prompt restatement +...

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The line graph gives information about the fluctuations of food price index and average oil price

2 - There is a correlation measurement indicated in the original image. When the writer referred to the correlation, that specific...

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Everyone should become vegetarian because a healthy meal does not necessarily require meat

2 - This has nothing to do with the discussion provided. References must be suitable to the given topic. In...

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Target: Band 7- Writing Task 2: The influence of technology to lifestyle

2 - There are 3 seperate ideas presented in this long sentence. one of the ideas are properly depicted in...

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PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR KGSP/GKS undergraduate Scholarship, Pharmacy major

3 - @Maya2004 As the other consultant said you should try to write more about English . And this truly not...

ScholarshipMaya2004 - Sep 8, 2021Jessica05 - Sep 10, 2021
What should and should not be taught at school has been a perennial debate

2 - The prompt restatement must be a factual representation of the orginal within 2 sentences. No actual opinion coming from...

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Writing Task1 - conditions of an island before and after tourist facilities development

3 - The essay is not completed, I think it maybe a report more than an essay, since in reports con...

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WRITING TASK 2: UNPAID WORK

3 - I think your conclusion is incomplete as it is supposed to be at least 2 sentences. You should accentuate...

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The figures for acid rain emissions per million tons in four different sectors in the United Kingdom

3 - Thanks you very much. I'm a beginner, I'll try harder...

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BEGINNER- WRITING TASK 2 - Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism

2 - An economic discussion was not stated in the original prompt. The reference is for a general advantage reference....

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PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR KGSP/GKS UNDERGRADUATE COMPUTER SCIENCE ENGINEERING MAJOR

3 - Thank you for your feedback! I will come with a more professional and good essay....

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Writing Task 1: The reasons why adults take part in the course and how its cost should be shared

3 - oh thank you so much...

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Youngsters who commit crimes should be treated by authorities in the same way as adults

2 - While the opinion of the writer is required, the format used is incomplete. The extent of (dis) agreement...

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Statement of Purpose - UC Berkeley - Data Science

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the helpful advise and suggestion! I have revised the essay as the...

Graduatekittybetty - Sep 4, 2021kittybetty - Sep 9, 2021
Many people argue that high income is far more essential than job happiness

4 - Hi, I would like to give some feedback on your essay. 1. The first sentence of your introduction is...

Writing FeedbackTnhuuu - Sep 6, 2021huyjunnie - Sep 8, 2021
The authorities ought to limit individual wages at a certain level

2 - This is a redundant reference. Many countries already implies a global coverage. simply place a comma at the...

Writing Feedbackrachel18 - Sep 6, 2021Holt - Sep 8, 2021
IELTS 1: The bar chart depicts data about how many tons of waste was collected by recycling centre

3 - Thank you alot for your constructive comment^^ It really helps me ^^ Wish you have a nice day...

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Different views about the funding of traffic system - money on railways or on new roads?

3 - The first paragraph seem like repeat the topic without reasons why you choose to expend much more money on...

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2: TRAFFIC PROBLEMS AND SOLUTION

3 - Your essay lack of words. This task need at least 250 so you should add more ideas or making...

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Advertising as a compelling tool for convincing people to buy even unnecessary things

2 - The discussion is presented in current time form, not past time reference. Use the correct tense as indicated...

Writing Feedbackngoclee2001 - Sep 5, 2021Holt - Sep 7, 2021
It is believed that children should start learning a foreign language at primary schools

2 - This response is meant for an extent of agreement or disagreement essay. It is improperly used in this...

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Salary issue between famous athletes and other important professionals in society

NEW - Topic: Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people...

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IELTS 1: the first place Germans and Nigerians go to in order to access the news in a a typical week

3 - You should fix some mistakes: 1.[i]two countries 2. of the people because using expressing quantity with of, you need...

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Is hard work always good? Children are told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough

3 - Your writing is good. The clarity was made OK, although there are some unsuitable word usage, but it did't...

Writing Feedbacktaylortran - Aug 31, 2021aanh1009 - Sep 5, 2021
The number of students graduating from university in Canada in a period of 15 years

3 - You shouldn't put too much statistics in a Writing task 1 essay because this will bring fatigue for readers...

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Parents put too much pressure on their children for their future. Reasons? Positives or negatives.

3 - I think the word "socialize" in the sentence "Especially under the standard of modern socialize..." is in an incorrect...

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