|Whether talents are of genetic origin or we can be taught to own that talent!
2 - Your discussion approach to the essay is incorrect. The format of your response is based on a measured extent...
Writing Feedbackdoublenok157 - Mar 17, 2020Holt - Mar 18, 2020
|Writing task 1- <table>the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales
3 - Your trending statement does not completely represent a complete trending observation. You should have also provided the numerical data...
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|Hospital - AAS Supporting statement for applications.
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|Music being benifical to bring people of other cultures and generation together
Writing Feedbackmeoubeolu - Mar 16, 2020meoubeolu - Mar 17, 2020
|Task 2: Increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems.
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|Writing exercise : a prompt about reading.
4 - @Holt thank you very much for pointing my errors out, especially the grammar which I have a serious problem...
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|[NTU] Scholarship on Father - 300 words
5 - Please, if it's possible, give me further feedback on this. The deadline for the submission of the essay is...
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|Chart - the percentage of owned and rented accommodations in two regions
2 - You first two paragraphs could use some adjustment in presentation. The clarity and coherence of your information report comes...
Writing FeedbackPhuongbo - Mar 17, 2020Holt - Mar 17, 2020
|IELTS TASK 2: Physical strength and mental strength. Which is more important for success in sports?
2 - It would be unjust of me to review this essay for information, format, and quality of discussion when it...
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|Children and Tech - New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time
2 - Your essay should not open with a direct quote from a source. You must properly build up your thesis...
Writing FeedbackHannah21820 - Mar 17, 2020Holt - Mar 17, 2020
|Writting essay about why action speak louder than words
2 - None of your examples illustrate or explain the meaning of the quotation through action. The first example, was about...
Writing FeedbackVin_phan11 - Mar 17, 2020Holt - Mar 17, 2020
|Playing video games - the happiest moment of my life
2 - You need to change the verb form in your first sentence from "... when I playing the computer game..."...
Writing Feedbackchienlin92086 - Mar 17, 2020Holt - Mar 17, 2020
|WRITING TASK 2 ONLINE SHOPPING (damage effect)
2 - This essay will be deemed only partially responsive to the task. That is because this 4 paragraph essay is...
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|IELTS Writing Task 2, effect of social networking sites
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|IELTS TASK2: The imprisonment should be longer for offenders with terrible crimes
2 - Your restated prompt approach is incorrect. The proper presentation requires that you inform the reader of the two points...
Writing Feedbackmeeha - Mar 17, 2020Holt - Mar 17, 2020
|Ielts a Film review - Aquaman
2 - IELTS does not do film review essays. The exam takers will not necessarily have all seen the movie prior...
Writing FeedbackLinhh - Mar 17, 2020Holt - Mar 17, 2020
|Many tourists today fly straight to their holiday resort and almost never leave it.
Writing Feedbackthuannnnn - Mar 17, 2020Holt - Mar 17, 2020
|Responsibilities of businesses besides making money
5 - @Holt @JasmineNguyen @Phuongbo Thank you very much!!!! You accurately point out so many oversights that I have not noticed....
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|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Countries are becoming more and more similar because...
Writing Feedbackphong3baotap - Mar 16, 2020phong3baotap - Mar 17, 2020
|A few languages are increasingly spoken in different countries, while the usage of others is rapidly
3 - You have amazing ideas with informative examples, but you still have some mistakes to be figured out. Firstly,...
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|Writing Task 2 Test 5 Cam 14 : Sharing information freely is the good ways ???
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|WRITING TASK 1 of IELTS: UK TELEPHONE CALLS - the total number of minutes by three categories
3 - @vanessazhang00 One more key feature that you can add to your essay as an alternative to making the conclusion...
Writing Feedbackvanessazhang00 - Mar 13, 2020phong3baotap - Mar 16, 2020
|IELTS Task 1: Birth and Death rates in New Zealand, from 1901 to the prediction for 2101.
3 - @kerry19910620 You can use the phrase "overtake that of ... and ended up at..." as an alternative to making...
Writing Feedbackkerry19910620 - Mar 16, 2020phong3baotap - Mar 16, 2020
|Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress
7 - @yennhut Dear Author, Based on the knowledge that I know, I suggest that you compose the introduction part...
Writing Feedbackyennhut - Mar 14, 2020ndhnif - Mar 16, 2020
|IELTS Writing Task 1 #Antarctic ozone hole and damaging gases
6 - @Eileen0216 You can use the phrase "LAGGED THAT OF" as an alternative to making the sentence sound better and...
Writing FeedbackEileen0216 - Mar 14, 2020phong3baotap - Mar 16, 2020
|Study plan for applying Master's program in Logistics and Management.
Scholarshipfangcao - Mar 14, 2020fangcao - Mar 16, 2020
|My essay is about why Western people should change their eating habit
3 - Sorry for my carelessness it was an IELTS essay but anyway I really appreciate. I hope I can do...
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|My way of learning English
3 - You have to study more about grammar , vocabulary and structure sentences to start writing essay . I think...
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|Writing Task 1 Test 5 Cam 14 : Doing Regular Physical Activity between Men and Women in Australia
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|Enterprise Resource Planning manager - solving a challenge and to implementing change or reform
2 - The main problem with the situation you posed in this essay is that it is too common a problem...
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