|Transported goods in the UK - IELTS Writing Task 1 - The Line Graph
Writing Feedbackminhthu0707 - Oct 5, 2020minhthu0707 - Oct 8, 2020
|Columbia Essay on an active role in my community. A sock drive for a local homeless shelter
2 - I like this essay. It is engaging, informative, and fun to read. You pretty much covered all of the...
Undergraduatejenincollege - Oct 7, 2020Holt - Oct 8, 2020
|Prompt: Discuss a popular stereotype that you believe people might have about YOU. Explain
4 - @Holt I have tried to make some adjustments according to what you have told me. I mainly added some...
Undergraduatejustagirl - Oct 6, 2020justagirl - Oct 7, 2020
|Task 1: Diagrams illustrate the transformation in the village of Strokeford in two different years
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Writing Feedbackvungochuyen25 - Oct 2, 2020twhin - Oct 7, 2020
|The Bar graph shows the number of tourists visiting two different cities by seasons
2 - The task 1 essay uses a 3 paragraph format for its information analysis and presentation. You only have two...
Writing FeedbackTrang Tran - Oct 7, 2020Holt - Oct 7, 2020
|My rather messy personal statement (gks-g 2021, undergraduate, embassy track)
3 - @Holt thank you for your frankness and the advice :) i knew it was really lacking as an essay,...
Scholarshiphanirrr - Oct 6, 2020hanirrr - Oct 6, 2020
|The table shows the ways people in Someland spend their time (different age group and timeframe)
2 - Most of your errors in the presentation have to do with word usage and sentence structure. For example, in...
Writing Feedbacknamdag - Oct 6, 2020Holt - Oct 6, 2020
|Personal Statement for an MBA Foundation / Afghanistan
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the constructive feedback. I have no experience of writing a personal statement and...
Graduatebenyamin1 - Oct 5, 2020benyamin1 - Oct 6, 2020
|IELTS Part 2 - Overseas visitors should follow local customs and behaviors.
4 - @Holt Thank you very much for reading my essay and feedback. I will work on it and will improve...
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|Common App Essay - A Year in Japan Prompt 1 - identity, interest, or talent
2 - Try to come up with a more interesting title for the essay. One more descriptive of the discussion you...
UndergraduateHaruka_na - Oct 5, 2020Holt - Oct 6, 2020
|Msc Business analytics study in the UK and Universities - My Chevening Essay
2 - The most complete university discussion pertains only to the first university choice. The last 2 choices do not contain...
ScholarshipMikasoba - Oct 5, 2020Holt - Oct 6, 2020
|Community Empowerment Through Networking - Chevening networking essay.
2 - This is a useless enumeration of "supposed" and "assumed" networks. These are not so much networks, in the sense...
Scholarshipimhana - Oct 5, 2020Holt - Oct 6, 2020
|Networking is all about connecting people with meaningful ideas for growth--Chevening scholarship.
ScholarshipObi1 - Oct 2, 2020Obi1 - Oct 5, 2020
|Pursuing a new challenge passionately -- GKS 2021 UNDERGRADUATE
5 - @Holt I rewrote that part. one of the requirements in this years application says to point out any hardships...
ScholarshipAnaPatricia - Oct 3, 2020AnaPatricia - Oct 5, 2020
|The two diagrams given show the whole process of cement making and concrete production
Writing FeedbackShiny Star - Oct 4, 2020Shiny Star - Oct 5, 2020
|Today's teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generation. Discuss and give opinion
3 - @Holt Thank you very much, sir, for giving your precious time to my essay. I really appreciate your helpful...
Writing Feedbackanmolpreetsingh1 - Oct 4, 2020anmolpreetsingh1 - Oct 5, 2020
|Essay about healthy life in children
Writing FeedbackLita - Oct 5, 2020Holt - Oct 5, 2020
|Essay about moving from another country to USA
2 - I assume that you have already completed the move from Vietnam to the USA. So you be saying :...
Writing Feedbackanjunjun1234 - Oct 4, 2020Holt - Oct 5, 2020
|Leadership as an Environmentalist - Chevening Scholarship
4 - Dear @Holt I highly appreciated your constructive feedback. I thought at first it is not necessary to mention the...
Scholarshipimhana - Sep 15, 2020imhana - Oct 5, 2020
|Food, drinks and tobacco spending - Cambridge 7 TEST 1
2 - You always aim to write more than just the required word count. 152 words is just not enough writing...
Writing Feedbackphhachi - Oct 4, 2020Holt - Oct 5, 2020
|Task 1: Bar chart (Timeline) - Annual average spending on 4 types of clothes per person in the US
3 - You can present the information in any way that you want, as long as all of the information from...
Writing Feedbackklee12 - Oct 4, 2020Holt - Oct 5, 2020
|BFA Photography and Video - Statement of Intent
4 - A statement of intent needs to prove that you are a qualified candidate for the course you hope to...
UndergraduateFreedomGround - Oct 3, 2020Holt - Oct 4, 2020
|Rough Draft on Climate Change - we have short time to react.
3 - You are making a hyperbolic claim in the first paragraph without first establishing the foundation for the claim. Where...
Research PapersKeeg - Oct 3, 2020Holt - Oct 4, 2020
|Tell us about who you are; I have the will and patience it takes to make a strong individual.
4 - The essay asks you to choose between your friends or community for the second description regarding how other people...
Undergraduatesaatvik7 - Oct 3, 2020Holt - Oct 4, 2020
|My SOP for admission into Msc linguistics
2 - The minimal requirement for a masters degree student is 2 years worth of professional experience. You have to discuss...
GraduateIamsorelee - Oct 2, 2020Holt - Oct 4, 2020
|The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, *20.., and future projecti
2 - Review your time references. You are talking about the current year of 2020 in the presentation. So that should...
Writing FeedbackThien Bui - Oct 2, 2020Holt - Oct 4, 2020
|The natural resources are consumed at an ever-increased rate. What are the dangers and solutions?
2 - Be conscious of your word count. While writing more than 300 words is admirable, it shows fast you can...
Writing FeedbackHenrypham - Oct 1, 2020Holt - Oct 4, 2020
|Studying media and communications - KGSP Undergraduate 2021 Personal Statement help
2 - As an undergraduate essay, you have not been able to satisfy the personal statement requirements for this written interview....
ScholarshipLanamaylie - Oct 1, 2020Holt - Oct 3, 2020
|How the media honed my interest in languages- Study Plan GKS 2021 undergradute scholarships
3 - The language study plan asks you to focus on several language skills development areas, Hangul, English, and a third...
ScholarshipJadella - Oct 1, 2020Holt - Oct 3, 2020
|What are the benefits of pursuing university education?
4 - Did you write this essay for a Task 2 essay or for an English class? The presentation is really...
Writing FeedbackHuyen1 - Sep 30, 2020Holt - Oct 3, 2020