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Education reform gaps - Australia Award Scholarship

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your great advice. I will reanalyze my essay about choosing the universities and...

ScholarshipKyaw Mong - Feb 11, 2020Kyaw Mong - Feb 11, 2020
GKS Graduate Program 2020 PERSONAL STATEMENT - Urban Planning

4 - @Holt I do consider highlighting the programs that the university offer, however, the program website is only provided in...

Scholarshipanantatk - Feb 9, 2020anantatk - Feb 11, 2020
Motivational Letter to Study in Germany - Master in Computational Mechanics

2 - Pull back on the undergraduate references. Highlight your research ability and thesis, but connect it to a more definitive...

LettersRafaelRGindro - Feb 11, 2020Holt - Feb 11, 2020
Help with UWaterloo AIF Part A (Applying to Computer Eng.)

3 - @Holt Thank you for your comments, I'll do my best to work your suggestions into my essay...

Undergraduateangrypanda - Feb 10, 2020angrypanda - Feb 11, 2020
SOP for MS in Industrial Engineering; to make connections within the field and ultimately land a job

4 - As the major you're applying isn't in line with your undergraduate major (ME -> Industrial Eng), you need to...

GraduateAvenger214 - Feb 8, 2020Ulaai - Feb 10, 2020
'amazing, a wonderful friend and an even better person' - Other people's opinions of me

2 - If you just revise the beginning of the statement to exclude the reference to your brother and focus instead...

Undergraduateash1699 - Feb 10, 2020Holt - Feb 10, 2020
General Training - Task 1 - Type: Job Application - Subject: Social events' organiser

2 - It is important that you know that just because other people tell you how the might have written the...

Writing FeedbackGaucho - Feb 10, 2020Holt - Feb 10, 2020
My Younger Brothers Cancer

3 - Writing: Your writing is very good, I am just pointing out some grammatical and spelling mistakes that I found...

Undergraduatepaigecaskey - Feb 10, 2020Gaucho - Feb 10, 2020
Global Korea Scholarship - Personal Statement. Medical Doctor.

3 - Thank you for your valuable feedback @Holt i will try to develop my essay :)...

Scholarshipsheila_lala - Feb 8, 2020sheila_lala - Feb 10, 2020
I need commentary. My essay is about the justification of college vs its alternatives.

3 - To provide a stronger foundation for your argument that college is not always the best option for students, you...

Research Paperssch212 - Feb 9, 2020Holt - Feb 10, 2020
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF TRAVELLING ALONE

4 - Basically, your essay did not follow the original prompt at all. The original prompt is: Some people like...

Writing Feedbackjacinthejanny19 - Feb 9, 2020Holt - Feb 10, 2020
NFGL member - how you can apply the knowledge and experience gained from your time in Sweden

2 - The application to the workplace setting is acceptable. However, I feel like the application is a bit shallow and...

Scholarshipstuntuya - Feb 9, 2020Holt - Feb 10, 2020
General Training - Task 2 - Type: Agree or Disagree - Subject: television, laziness, socialisation

3 - @Holt Thank very much for your feedback, I appreciated it. I will use your suggestions to improve my next...

Writing FeedbackGaucho - Feb 9, 2020Gaucho - Feb 9, 2020
Discuss about child begging in Vietnam and state my opinion on it. (approximately 150 words)

4 - @Holt I am appreciated your help. Actually, this is the entrance essay for university. Also, since this is the...

Writing Feedbackdaphnepham - Feb 9, 2020daphnepham - Feb 9, 2020
Extreme sports are dangerous and should be banned - is it a good option?

3 - @Holt yeah, i see. thank you for your comment. have a nice day!...

Writing Feedbackrearthinkite381 - Feb 9, 2020rearthinkite381 - Feb 9, 2020
Computers are regarded as the most influential invention of the last century

3 - The whole discussion does not follow the required parameters of the original topic. I am not sure why you...

Writing Feedbackdieuthaonguyen - Feb 8, 2020Holt - Feb 9, 2020
REVIEW ON PTDF MSC MOTIVATION LETTER ON ENERGY AND ENVIRONMENTAL ENGINEERING

2 - The motivation letter does not respond to the most basic question being asked: "What is the professional motivation for...

Scholarshipoghenekevwe - Feb 9, 2020Holt - Feb 9, 2020
Review My Letter of Motivation for Masters in Finance and Economics in Germany

2 - I believe that paragraphs 4 and 5 have the most required information for a letter of motivation. However, both...

Graduateanjumnavid - Feb 8, 2020Holt - Feb 9, 2020
(IELTS WRITING TASK 2) Population aging: effects and solutions

3 - This is a task 2 essay. That means the first paragraph should be a paraphrase or restatement of the...

Writing Feedbacktuanhnguyen2611 - Feb 8, 2020Holt - Feb 9, 2020
A survey related to studying the purpose of adults and the distribution in their academic cost

3 - Thanks, I really appreciate that....

Writing FeedbackSteve Nguyen - Feb 6, 2020Steve Nguyen - Feb 8, 2020
Review my essay - Under the sea - 'the mother of mysteriousness and beauty'

3 - Hi, is it possible to delete this thread since i am submitting this essay for a national writing championship....

Writing Feedbackstevennn - Feb 1, 2020stevennn - Feb 8, 2020
Masters is Security and Information Assurance at KFUPM - Statement of Purpose

4 - Please write a totally new statement of purpose. What you have written above is an autobiography of your academic...

Scholarshipmhxlmx - Feb 7, 2020Holt - Feb 8, 2020
Eating vegetarian of Vietnamese people

3 - @Holt thank you so much!...

Writing FeedbackBig Boss - Feb 7, 2020Big Boss - Feb 7, 2020
Global Korean Scholarship Study Plan for Improve Language to reach my goals

2 - While your expertise in English writing is probably just as bad as your Hangul at this point, I can...

Scholarshipkarenntz_1097 - Feb 7, 2020Holt - Feb 7, 2020
Countries should try to produce all the food for the population and imports

2 - Based on the original prompt for this discussion, it appears that you have cut and paste some references from...

Writing FeedbackEveIssabelle - Feb 6, 2020Holt - Feb 7, 2020
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE OPINION

2 - You are still confused as to how to approach the public point of view with personal opinion essay. The...

Writing Feedbackthanhthanh96 - Feb 6, 2020Holt - Feb 7, 2020
Cost of living is rising. Effects and solutions?

3 - foods resources is are becoming scarcely -> you should get rid of "is". I agree with @Holt, you...

Writing Feedbackaprilmk - Feb 5, 2020emailbr - Feb 6, 2020
IELTS task 1- The places visited by different people living in Canada.

7 - @Holt Thank you so much. This assurance was so crucial to me. And now it is time to focus...

Writing FeedbackmywritingsTT - Feb 4, 2020mywritingsTT - Feb 6, 2020
Scholarship in a center for talented-student of Vinschool school (Vietnam)

2 - I am not sure what question you are trying to respond to with this personal statement. I wish you...

Scholarshiplebaothubn - Feb 5, 2020Holt - Feb 6, 2020
Global Korea Scholarship GKS 2020 - Master of Business Administration - Personal Statement

2 - The only part of this essay that you can use is the reference to the preparations you have made...

Scholarshipbecca9896 - Feb 5, 2020Holt - Feb 6, 2020