|More funds to science education rather than other disciplines for the country's development
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|Problems of having domestic animals - IELTS task2
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|Criminal Reoffence - Causes and Solutions
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|Discuss: COMPUTER INTELLIGENCE
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|The number of people who opt to live alone are increasing in many countries around the world
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|IELTS- Task 2: How to reduce car use
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|Teaching discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, or it's parents duty?
7 - Hi. In my opinion, you should eliminate the last paragraph. The 4th paragraph is more suitable to become the...
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|Solutions to reduce car use. What can be done to discourage people from using their car?
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|Some people use the Internet to search for solutions to their medical problems, is this +ve/-ve ?
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|Nowadays the football supporters behave violently. What is the cause? How can we solve it?
3 - Since you are not being asked to determine the validity of the given discussion, you do not need to...
Writing Feedbackkimk - Jul 27, 2020Holt - Jul 27, 2020
|Some say that domestic waste is not recycled well, therefore, authorities should make relevant laws
3 - For better TA scoring, always outline your discussion reasons in the paraphrase. This will allow the first paragraph to...
Writing Feedbackluivy567 - Jul 27, 2020Holt - Jul 27, 2020
|The modern parents almost don't take their free-time to enjoy their children's companies
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|Which is more important for a sport, is it mental strength or physical strength, and explain why.
4 - This is a 3 reasoning paragraph presentation. While you did an acceptable paraphrase of the given discussion, and you...
Writing FeedbackITW - Jul 26, 2020Holt - Jul 27, 2020
|Whether traveling on our own or with a group headed by a tour guide is better remains controversial
2 - Hi, I found your supporting examples interesting. However, in the topic it mentions " travel in a group led...
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|[IELTS-T2] Using smart phones and online platforms leads to lack of human face-to-face communication
6 - The prompt paraphrase should represent the topic statement, the response to the question, and a direct response to the...
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|High wages are believed as a prominent part of delighted life rather than a sense of satisfaction
7 - Agree you showed a very wide range of vocabulary use. However, it seems to me some vocab are not...
Writing FeedbackElsa - Jul 6, 2020keithkwan14 - Jul 26, 2020
|TASK 2: Helping other countries - Financial or Non-financial Aid is better?
2 - The overall essay structure is well organised, covering both sides of views in a smooth flow. Some sentences...
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|IELTS Writing task 2: opinions on rising the price of petrol to reduce the effects
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Writing Feedbackhayenbui - Jul 25, 2020keithkwan14 - Jul 26, 2020
|Physical therapy can help enhance an individual's body, mobility, and health
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Research Papersdmaier - Jul 26, 2020Holt - Jul 26, 2020
|Essay for common app: montage structure essay about my planner.
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|"Dreamers cannot be tamed." - Common Essay --Aiming for the elite colleges
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|The two pie charts illustrate the post academic qualifications of students in Canada
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|Virtual information session - Why Lafayette?
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|Today more people are overweight than ever before. What's are the primary causes of this?
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|In the modern world it is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing or medicine. To what
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|Age at which children are supposed to enter the structured education system in schools
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|A different language' foreigner can overcome problems by changing, adapting, and growing personality
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|IELTS TASK 1: THE GRAPH SHOWS THE INCOME OF FOUR CAFE IN NEW YORK OVER LAST YEAR (HANNAH)
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|Variety of ways in which parents can prepare their children for future life - teaching finances
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|Population aged 65 and older
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