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People say that reading for pleasure helps people to develop imagination and better language skills

3 - If you look at the band descriptors for writing task 2, you will see the words "extend" and "develop"....

Writing FeedbackDragonKing - Jun 4, 2021phatpham332 - Jun 7, 2021
Do you agree that advancements in medical science and technology is one of the most important factor

2 - You did not properly respond to the discussion instruction which is: To what extent do you agree or...

Writing Feedbackngocngoc933 - Jun 6, 2021Holt - Jun 7, 2021
Writing task 2 - Marine pollution. Possible causes and effects on people and animals

2 - Your introductory paragraph is a rambling mess of big words and run on sentences that takes too long to...

Writing FeedbackGuest - Jun 5, 2021Holt - Jun 6, 2021
Everyone has a right to have access to university education without tuition

2 - Your second paragraph should be used to disprove the preceding reasoning paragraph. When you partly agree with the reasoning,...

Writing Feedbackminhductrinh - Jun 5, 2021Holt - Jun 6, 2021
The chart shows the proportion of women and men in one Asian country who passed their driving test

2 - In the summary overview, the image divisions need to be clearer. A reference to the number of columns representing...

Writing Feedbackhuynhuyn - Jun 5, 2021Holt - Jun 6, 2021
Bullying is a big problem in many schools. Causes and solutions [ielts writing p2]

2 - You come in with a strong, although a bit grammatically incorrect (in the first sentence) prompt restatement and thesis...

Writing Feedbackthaomycva - Jun 5, 2021Holt - Jun 6, 2021
Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. Opinion

2 - Actually, based on the original prompt, the proper term should be " much discussed" as there is no...

Writing Feedbackhhachoo - Jun 5, 2021Holt - Jun 6, 2021
The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing chocolate

2 - Use the word "man made" in reference to its noun form for grammar accuracy. Indicate "in this man..."...

Writing Feedbackvudao - Jun 5, 2021Holt - Jun 6, 2021
Writing task 1: household car ownership in Braitain from 1971 to 2007

4 - @ho chu diem my You should replace "illustrious" with "illustrates" or "shows" "The number of families owned one car...

Writing Feedbackho chu diem my - May 27, 2021phuongtrinh11200 - Jun 6, 2021
Parents or school? Who will teach children to be good citizens?

5 - Hi! I would like to have some feedbacks on your writing. The first thing, I agree with Holt that...

Writing Feedbacklaaaa0012 - Jun 3, 2021phatpham332 - Jun 6, 2021
Mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries, shops and on public transports

2 - Follow up this statement with your measured agreement to complete the response presentation. Your strong disagreement (Hint) response...

Writing FeedbackKhoaLee - Jun 4, 2021Holt - Jun 5, 2021
IELTS TASK 2 benefits and drawbacks of mobile phone on society, technology and health

2 - Your prompt restatement poses a discussion for a totally different essay. Your interpretation is nowhere near the original discusson...

Writing FeedbackPaul16 - Jun 4, 2021Holt - Jun 5, 2021
IELTS Writing Task 1 - Percentages of people living in the towns and cities in 4 different countries

5 - @zenosyne719 You should show the name of four countries " in four countries including USA, South Korea, India and...

Writing Feedbackzenosyne719 - May 31, 2021phuongtrinh11200 - Jun 5, 2021
Ielts writing task 2 - government and traffic combination topic

3 - I understand you want to use advanced words but there are some errors in the word choice and grammar,...

Writing Feedbackthank you 3000 - Jun 3, 2021Paul16 - Jun 5, 2021
Ielts writing task 1, Common sports played in the UK in 2008.

2 - Add another sentence that enumerates the relevant sports before the trending statement to give the reader a better...

Writing Feedbackphuongtrinh11200 - Jun 4, 2021Holt - Jun 5, 2021
Many children, spend hours by the screens, and it is detrimental to them

3 - @Holt thanks a lot Mr., your advice would be really helpful to me...

Writing FeedbackHelloHola - Jun 4, 2021HelloHola - Jun 5, 2021
In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animal as food or to use animal products

2 - You cannot use uncited information in a task 2 essay. Do not get used to using this incorrect writing...

Writing Feedbackbinhbii2104 - Jun 3, 2021Holt - Jun 4, 2021
Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention in school. What are the reasons?

2 - Use a general referenceinstead. That is because you are not being asked if the information presented is true...

Writing Feedbackngthuhang - Jun 3, 2021Holt - Jun 4, 2021
Coffee and tea lovers in Australia - IELTS Academic Writing Part 2 - Cambridge 15 Test 1

2 - 318 words are expected in a task 2 essay. The task 1 essay requires between 150-200 words only. Even...

Writing FeedbackLilyWD1814 - Jun 3, 2021Holt - Jun 4, 2021
Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers

3 - should be "on the one hand"...

Writing Feedbackquynhhuong656 - May 31, 2021winxangle - Jun 4, 2021
The comparison of total water utilized for different purposes in Sydney between 1997 and 2007

2 - Summarize the purposes as part of the important data short presentation. Mention the measurement type as well for...

Writing FeedbackMy Nguyen - Jun 2, 2021Holt - Jun 3, 2021
Writing task 2: My Father - Write about someone who inspires you

2 - The introduction should not focus on the importance of family since that is a general statement. The target person...

Writing Feedbackphuocsangle24 - Jun 2, 2021Holt - Jun 3, 2021
Ielts writing Part 2 - Strict punishment on road offences

2 - The prompt restatement should be divided into 2 separate sentences since these are 2 conflicting ideas and reasoning presentations....

Writing Feedbacktrangvnq - Jun 2, 2021Holt - Jun 3, 2021
The point of view for the situation when the young generation is a big part of society

2 - You will not get a passing score in any section of this test. Your prompt restatement is confusing and...

Writing Feedbackhieuho - Jun 2, 2021Holt - Jun 3, 2021
Ielts task 2: Many things can influence the academic achievements and emotional growth of a student

2 - In the first paragraph, deliver the subject of the sentence before the resulting action. Whose academic and emotional development...

Writing FeedbackHoaitrinhh - Jun 2, 2021Holt - Jun 3, 2021
IELTS Writing Task 2: Bring in foreign workers

2 - Wrong word usage. By meaning this refers to: a fact, occurrence, or circumstance observed or observable. Use a...

Writing Feedbackdongocbaotram - Jun 2, 2021Holt - Jun 2, 2021
Positive work environment and how it influences your work result

2 - Since this is your thesis statement, you cannot use an in-text citation for it. Rather, it would be...

Research Papersasha1310 - Jun 2, 2021Holt - Jun 2, 2021
The proportion of inhabitants by a variety of age groups in a city participated music events from 20

2 - Preciseness is key when describing the image source due to the mental picture, or imagined measurement chart. This...

Writing FeedbackSyawaluddin Alim - Jun 1, 2021Holt - Jun 2, 2021
IELTS Task 2: Discuss both view: Economic is the most important goal

2 - I love this part of your presentation. You successfully indicated 2 important elements in this presentation: -...

Writing Feedbackngocnhivn - Jun 1, 2021Holt - Jun 2, 2021
The information on the proportion of the entire population of the world over 100 years

2 - You need to learn how to better develop and present your sentence ideas per paragraph. Your sentences are understandable,...

Writing FeedbackRosePham - Jun 1, 2021Holt - Jun 2, 2021