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volunteering at a summer school - Waterloo AIF - Question #2

3 - You have written a lot of background information, however if anything, this information is being against you, especially that...

Undergraduatexers - Jan 5, 2025danyal_asghar21 - Jan 7, 2025
Whole Foods Macaron (topic) for "group and its unofficial member" (UChicago Creative Prompt)

2 - I think that the essay can be further improved by looking into what created the batter? Representative of your...

Undergraduatety101807 - Jan 5, 2025Holt - Jan 6, 2025
Motivation Letter to KTH - Real Estate and Construction Management

2 - Details regarding this competition would help to create a more informative paragraph. Provide the name of the competition,...

Lettersnganlyn5520 - Jan 5, 2025Holt - Jan 6, 2025
The Head of Technology - Waterloo Computer Science Application - Question #2

4 - @danyal_asghar21 This is a very strong paragraph which highlights how u managed a leadership role effectively. however...

Undergraduatedanyal_asghar21 - Jan 4, 2025xers - Jan 5, 2025
A passion for computers - Waterloo Engineer Application - Question #1

2 - I am not sure about how a passion for computers will translate to your possible achievements as an Electrical...

Undergraduatexers - Jan 4, 2025Holt - Jan 5, 2025
"independent-minded" - UBC Personal Profile help

2 - The essay deviated from the actual focus. The reviewer does not need to know about your family traits in...

Undergraduatesab07 - Jan 4, 2025Holt - Jan 5, 2025
Strategic business mind - GLOCAL Erasmus Mundus Application - Personal Statement

2 - Kindly name the NGO that you worked with and also, a few of the brands that you assisted with....

Scholarshiptahsinjalal - Jan 4, 2025Holt - Jan 5, 2025
PlayTouchless Project - UBC Admission - Important Activity

2 - The requirement is for an activity that you have listed in the previous section of the requirements. I am...

Undergraduateayred_99 - Jan 3, 2025Holt - Jan 3, 2025
Statement of Purpose for the GLOBAL MINDS Erasmus Mundus scholarship in Social and Cultural Psy

3 - Thank you very much for your feedback. You have no idea how much it means to me. I...

ScholarshipPsychwizard - Jan 2, 2025Psychwizard - Jan 3, 2025
Essay on The Role of Renewable Energy in Climate Change

2 - The research paper contains relevant and up to date information. It is informative for the most part and does...

Research PapersJeremiah17 - Jan 2, 2025Holt - Jan 3, 2025
Design and structure - Motivation Letter - Stipendium Hungaricum

2 - The information contained in the essay is not really geared towards a motivation letter. This is more of a...

Letterssafiraes - Jan 2, 2025Holt - Jan 3, 2025
Some people say the fashion industry has a bad effect on people's lives. Do you agree?(IELTS WRITING

2 - Please be mindful of the word count for the task 2 essay. The minimum requirement for a passing score...

Writing Feedbacknanaaa6 - Jan 2, 2025Holt - Jan 3, 2025
Captivated by numbers - ERASMUS MUNDUS SCHOLARSHIP LETTER OF MOTIVATION

2 - While it is admirable that your father was your role model when it came to the development of your...

LettersOsatoOsazuwa - Jan 1, 2025Holt - Jan 2, 2025
motivation letter for master of science by a data analyst with mechatronic bachelor degree

2 - You developed a personal statement rather than a motivational letter. The content of this paper are only an expanded...

LettersKyaw Aung - Jan 1, 2025Holt - Jan 2, 2025
Some people say that it's better to work from home than work in an office. Do you agree or disagree?

2 - The first problem with this task 2 piece is that it is under the word count minimum of 250....

Writing FeedbackKingnevergiveup - Jan 1, 2025Holt - Jan 2, 2025
short fuse guy - ubc personal profile. who i am what/im proud of/how would people describe me

3 - It would be better if you could extend and clarify the character development to make a better profile...

Undergraduateghosthunter81734 - Dec 31, 2024Edukid2309 - Jan 2, 2025
The 5th Industrial Revolution - Stipendium Hungaricum Motivation Letter

3 - @Holt Thank you for your advice. I've made the revision based on your review, please check it out:) ...

Letterssaddamprayogo - Jan 1, 2025saddamprayogo - Jan 2, 2025
Searching Beyond the Surface- Common App Essay

2 - Grace is not really relevant to the rest of the story so her inclusion at the beginning is...

Undergraduatealexmorales - Dec 31, 2024Holt - Jan 1, 2025
Focused Study vs. Multidisciplinary Learning-IELTS Writing Task 2

2 - The prompt clearly states that you should state your opinion on the topic. The requirement for stating your...

Writing Feedbackhasham_hawk - Dec 31, 2024Holt - Jan 1, 2025
Academic and Giving back to the community activities - KAIST undergraduate

3 - @Holt Thankyou so much for the feedback. Seems like I got a lot to work on. Do you mind...

UndergraduateNoTeCh - Dec 30, 2024NoTeCh - Dec 31, 2024
Should punishments be fixed or based on circumstances and motivation? - IELTS WRITING TASK 2

3 - Always start with paraphrasing the given question....

Writing Feedbacktrangdo75 - Dec 28, 2024hasham_hawk - Dec 31, 2024
Imagination and Design - Supplementary Application Essay - UOFT

2 - There is too much emphasis on the past in your essay. You have solidly established your background in design...

Undergraduatej2easy - Dec 29, 2024Holt - Dec 30, 2024
"Impact of sports on my life as an asthmatic" - CMU Prompt

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your feedback! I agree with your points and worked to fix them. I'm...

Undergraduateazheng2006 - Dec 28, 2024azheng2006 - Dec 29, 2024
Focused intention and effort - the UWC values / personal challenge

2 - This is an interesting response to the question provided. However, I believe it is too abstract for the reviewer...

ScholarshipZoeeoz - Dec 29, 2024Holt - Dec 29, 2024
My final match - College Application Question

2 - The response that you have provided is good, but not aligned with the requirements of the prompt. A more...

Undergraduatedoomar321 - Dec 29, 2024Holt - Dec 29, 2024
The Dual Crisis of Gun Violence and Rights: A Mutual Understanding

2 - The first edit you have to make to this research paper is in the introduction + thesis statement. You...

Research PapersJES2172453 - Dec 29, 2024Holt - Dec 29, 2024
A Chinese language teacher - Motivation Latter- Stipendium Hungaricum 2025

2 - Your motivation to study Languages as a masters course needs to be better focused on the study of languages,...

LettersChiaoChiao - Dec 28, 2024Holt - Dec 29, 2024
Afghanistan's challenges - My Career Plan for Chevening

2 - While your career plans clearly state the motivation for your desire to help Afghan women, it is not properly...

Writing FeedbackAhmadzai Hezb - Dec 28, 2024Holt - Dec 28, 2024
Balancing Urban Growth: Should Parks Make Way for Housing? - WRITING IELTS TASK 2

2 - The writer shows an understanding of the topic that was provided through his accurate restatement of the problem and...

Writing Feedbackhasham_hawk - Dec 27, 2024Holt - Dec 28, 2024
A driven and dedicated person - UBC Personal Profile

2 - Try to present a well rounded personality in the essay. You can do that by separating the descriptions that...

Undergraduatewdeng592 - Dec 27, 2024Holt - Dec 27, 2024
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