|People say that reading for pleasure helps people to develop imagination and better language skills
3 - If you look at the band descriptors for writing task 2, you will see the words "extend" and "develop"....
Writing FeedbackDragonKing - Jun 4, 2021phatpham332 - Jun 7, 2021
|Do you agree that advancements in medical science and technology is one of the most important factor
2 - You did not properly respond to the discussion instruction which is: To what extent do you agree or...
Writing Feedbackngocngoc933 - Jun 6, 2021Holt - Jun 7, 2021
|Writing task 2 - Marine pollution. Possible causes and effects on people and animals
2 - Your introductory paragraph is a rambling mess of big words and run on sentences that takes too long to...
Writing FeedbackGuest - Jun 5, 2021Holt - Jun 6, 2021
|Everyone has a right to have access to university education without tuition
2 - Your second paragraph should be used to disprove the preceding reasoning paragraph. When you partly agree with the reasoning,...
Writing Feedbackminhductrinh - Jun 5, 2021Holt - Jun 6, 2021
|The chart shows the proportion of women and men in one Asian country who passed their driving test
2 - In the summary overview, the image divisions need to be clearer. A reference to the number of columns representing...
Writing Feedbackhuynhuyn - Jun 5, 2021Holt - Jun 6, 2021
|Bullying is a big problem in many schools. Causes and solutions [ielts writing p2]
2 - You come in with a strong, although a bit grammatically incorrect (in the first sentence) prompt restatement and thesis...
Writing Feedbackthaomycva - Jun 5, 2021Holt - Jun 6, 2021
|Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. Opinion
2 - Actually, based on the original prompt, the proper term should be " much discussed" as there is no...
Writing Feedbackhhachoo - Jun 5, 2021Holt - Jun 6, 2021
|The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing chocolate
2 - Use the word "man made" in reference to its noun form for grammar accuracy. Indicate "in this man..."...
Writing Feedbackvudao - Jun 5, 2021Holt - Jun 6, 2021
|Writing task 1: household car ownership in Braitain from 1971 to 2007
4 - @ho chu diem my You should replace "illustrious" with "illustrates" or "shows" "The number of families owned one car...
Writing Feedbackho chu diem my - May 27, 2021phuongtrinh11200 - Jun 6, 2021
|Parents or school? Who will teach children to be good citizens?
5 - Hi! I would like to have some feedbacks on your writing. The first thing, I agree with Holt that...
Writing Feedbacklaaaa0012 - Jun 3, 2021phatpham332 - Jun 6, 2021
|Mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries, shops and on public transports
2 - Follow up this statement with your measured agreement to complete the response presentation. Your strong disagreement (Hint) response...
Writing FeedbackKhoaLee - Jun 4, 2021Holt - Jun 5, 2021
|IELTS TASK 2 benefits and drawbacks of mobile phone on society, technology and health
2 - Your prompt restatement poses a discussion for a totally different essay. Your interpretation is nowhere near the original discusson...
Writing FeedbackPaul16 - Jun 4, 2021Holt - Jun 5, 2021
|IELTS Writing Task 1 - Percentages of people living in the towns and cities in 4 different countries
5 - @zenosyne719 You should show the name of four countries " in four countries including USA, South Korea, India and...
Writing Feedbackzenosyne719 - May 31, 2021phuongtrinh11200 - Jun 5, 2021
|Ielts writing task 2 - government and traffic combination topic
3 - I understand you want to use advanced words but there are some errors in the word choice and grammar,...
Writing Feedbackthank you 3000 - Jun 3, 2021Paul16 - Jun 5, 2021
|Ielts writing task 1, Common sports played in the UK in 2008.
2 - Add another sentence that enumerates the relevant sports before the trending statement to give the reader a better...
Writing Feedbackphuongtrinh11200 - Jun 4, 2021Holt - Jun 5, 2021
|Many children, spend hours by the screens, and it is detrimental to them
Writing FeedbackHelloHola - Jun 4, 2021HelloHola - Jun 5, 2021
|In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animal as food or to use animal products
2 - You cannot use uncited information in a task 2 essay. Do not get used to using this incorrect writing...
Writing Feedbackbinhbii2104 - Jun 3, 2021Holt - Jun 4, 2021
|Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention in school. What are the reasons?
2 - Use a general referenceinstead. That is because you are not being asked if the information presented is true...
Writing Feedbackngthuhang - Jun 3, 2021Holt - Jun 4, 2021
|Coffee and tea lovers in Australia - IELTS Academic Writing Part 2 - Cambridge 15 Test 1
2 - 318 words are expected in a task 2 essay. The task 1 essay requires between 150-200 words only. Even...
Writing FeedbackLilyWD1814 - Jun 3, 2021Holt - Jun 4, 2021
|Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers
Writing Feedbackquynhhuong656 - May 31, 2021winxangle - Jun 4, 2021
|The comparison of total water utilized for different purposes in Sydney between 1997 and 2007
2 - Summarize the purposes as part of the important data short presentation. Mention the measurement type as well for...
Writing FeedbackMy Nguyen - Jun 2, 2021Holt - Jun 3, 2021
|Writing task 2: My Father - Write about someone who inspires you
2 - The introduction should not focus on the importance of family since that is a general statement. The target person...
Writing Feedbackphuocsangle24 - Jun 2, 2021Holt - Jun 3, 2021
|Ielts writing Part 2 - Strict punishment on road offences
2 - The prompt restatement should be divided into 2 separate sentences since these are 2 conflicting ideas and reasoning presentations....
Writing Feedbacktrangvnq - Jun 2, 2021Holt - Jun 3, 2021
|The point of view for the situation when the young generation is a big part of society
2 - You will not get a passing score in any section of this test. Your prompt restatement is confusing and...
Writing Feedbackhieuho - Jun 2, 2021Holt - Jun 3, 2021
|Ielts task 2: Many things can influence the academic achievements and emotional growth of a student
2 - In the first paragraph, deliver the subject of the sentence before the resulting action. Whose academic and emotional development...
Writing FeedbackHoaitrinhh - Jun 2, 2021Holt - Jun 3, 2021
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Bring in foreign workers
2 - Wrong word usage. By meaning this refers to: a fact, occurrence, or circumstance observed or observable. Use a...
Writing Feedbackdongocbaotram - Jun 2, 2021Holt - Jun 2, 2021
|Positive work environment and how it influences your work result
2 - Since this is your thesis statement, you cannot use an in-text citation for it. Rather, it would be...
Research Papersasha1310 - Jun 2, 2021Holt - Jun 2, 2021
|The proportion of inhabitants by a variety of age groups in a city participated music events from 20
2 - Preciseness is key when describing the image source due to the mental picture, or imagined measurement chart. This...
Writing FeedbackSyawaluddin Alim - Jun 1, 2021Holt - Jun 2, 2021
|IELTS Task 2: Discuss both view: Economic is the most important goal
2 - I love this part of your presentation. You successfully indicated 2 important elements in this presentation: -...
Writing Feedbackngocnhivn - Jun 1, 2021Holt - Jun 2, 2021
|The information on the proportion of the entire population of the world over 100 years
2 - You need to learn how to better develop and present your sentence ideas per paragraph. Your sentences are understandable,...
Writing FeedbackRosePham - Jun 1, 2021Holt - Jun 2, 2021