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Learning culture in 21st century

2 - There is no reference to the 21st century in the original topic. A strong recommendation does not exist as...

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We live in an age when unnecessary things are our only necessities - CBEST Writing Test

4 - Although I do agree with your statement, the smartphones topic is playout. we know the damages and quite frankly...

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LOR/Recommendation letter for undergraduate - Business Administration

2 - The letter does not contain the same academic tone that it should have, if a teacher had actually written...

Letterskayce - Mar 31, 2022Holt - Mar 31, 2022
Some people think young people should be free to choose his or her job, but other people think they

2 - The first paragraph contains several reference errors that will force the examiner to award a failing TA score to...

Writing FeedbackTracey Tran - Mar 31, 2022Holt - Mar 31, 2022
IELTS Writing task 2 - young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way

2 - Band score estimates are provided as a part of our private services. Kindly contact us privately to inquire about...

Writing Feedbackcandylee1711 - Mar 31, 2022Holt - Mar 31, 2022
Study plan for Canada visa application (study permit) - Bachelor of Computer Science

2 - The letter itself is too long and requiring a better information presentation. The visa officer is not interestedin your...

Undergraduatephamquang - Mar 31, 2022Holt - Mar 31, 2022
Data on the bird population essay

3 - You repeated the same structure "In...(year), the number of...." You can replace "the number of" with "the figure for",...

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Writing Task2: The advantages and disadvantage of children's horticulture and livestock activities

4 - @Thaoami412 These arguments are well described. The structure is clear and the essay is brief. The tone of your...

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Personal Statement for MSc. Internet of Things and Data Analytics

2 - Remove certain aspects of this presentation that are misplaced. Information about work experience, among others, should be discussed in...

GraduateKellsnotnice - Mar 30, 2022Holt - Mar 31, 2022
Provide any other information about yourself that you feel will help this college

2 - The presentation is not heartfelt. The reasons are unclear and shallow at the most. What comes across is the...

UndergraduateMegymarj - Mar 30, 2022Holt - Mar 30, 2022
Internet users as percentage of population. Summarise the information and Write at least 150 words.

2 - In the summary overview, the information regarding the list of countries in relation to the years indicated should have...

Writing FeedbackVanan - Mar 29, 2022Holt - Mar 30, 2022
Opinions about traditional and modern medicines

2 - Do not get into the habit of affirming statements within the opening sentence of of the restatement. It unnecessarily...

Writing Feedbackmewo23 - Mar 29, 2022Holt - Mar 29, 2022
Essay about ex-prisoner are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of crime

2 - The summary restatement is incorrect in format because the first sentence includes an attestation where it is not needed....

Writing Feedbackcandylee1711 - Mar 29, 2022Holt - Mar 29, 2022
Being able to speak a foreign language is an advantage these days

2 - The prompt restatement needs more accuracy. The exam taker is expected to rephrase the whole of the original discussion...

Writing Feedbackdang3cvt - Mar 28, 2022Holt - Mar 28, 2022
IELTS Writing Task 2 Is technological development positive or negative for distant work and learning

2 - When writing an opinion essay, the writer must realize that he has to target the completeness by which he...

Writing FeedbackKhoa Le - Mar 28, 2022Holt - Mar 28, 2022
The consequences of competing between older people and young ones for the same type of occupations

3 - I think the first point in body 1 should be explained a little bit more, why ' the consequence...

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The question whether rising price of fuel is the best solution to environmental issue

3 - Hello, I suggest using the structure PEER in each of your point in the body. P: point of view,...

Writing Feedbackqunhu270 - Mar 28, 2022huoqtruc2405 - Mar 28, 2022
IELTS TASK 1: The provided illustration depicts the information about the making of leather prced.

3 - I think your writing would look better when being devided into 2 main bodies (with 1 introduction and 1...

Writing Feedbacknavjot789 - Mar 27, 2022huoqtruc2405 - Mar 28, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Are newspaper the best way to learn news?

2 - The prompt restatement contains information inaccuracies and a lack of personal opinion presentation that forces it to receive a...

Writing Feedbackhuoqtruc2405 - Mar 28, 2022Holt - Mar 28, 2022
Software Engineering - statement of purpose

2 - While the program does not require work experience, some sort of related training or internship experience would help the...

Graduateabc_123 - Mar 28, 2022Holt - Mar 28, 2022
Essay AAS : Why did you choose your proposed course and institution*? Master Epidemiology

2 - In response to your question, allow me to cite the AAS policy on this matter. The ruling states that:...

Scholarshipkharismaridho - Mar 27, 2022Holt - Mar 27, 2022
Statement of purpose - I'm applying for master's in health informatics.

3 - @Holt Thanks for your feedback.. I really appreciate. I will look into your advice. Though, I will need your...

GraduateMoss95 - Mar 26, 2022Moss95 - Mar 27, 2022
Museums in London and tourists - IELTS writing part 1 (bar chart)

5 - @Holt First and foremost, I'd like to say thank you because of your detailed comments and I also have...

Writing Feedbackvananhxh2005 - Mar 22, 2022vananhxh2005 - Mar 27, 2022
Consumption of chicken - IELTS WRITTING TASK 1: LINE GRAPH

2 - A listing of the data for comparison should be indicated in the summary overview. The listing is used to...

Writing Feedbackphuong171100 - Mar 27, 2022Holt - Mar 27, 2022
Motivation Letter - Research Master in Business - Maastricht University - The Netherlands

2 - The response essay needs to be better structured by creating a clear relationship between the courses of interest to...

Lettershdmquan - Mar 27, 2022Holt - Mar 27, 2022
MY PLANET - A Common App Essay; what sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding

2 - Well, the choice of topic is good- how to help the environment and the birth of an environmentalist. However,...

Undergraduateeinklein - Mar 26, 2022Holt - Mar 26, 2022
Community development courses - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?

3 - @Holt Do you mean I need to add my work experiences?...

ScholarshipEi Ei - Mar 26, 2022Ei Ei - Mar 26, 2022
Travel around a city - IELTS WRITING TASK 1: The table and bar chart

2 - I am not sure what you mean by"raised" in reference to the city transportation. Since there is no image...

Writing FeedbackQuang23 - Mar 26, 2022Holt - Mar 26, 2022
Peer Review Eliminating Medication Overload Research Paper

2 - Establish the foundation for the research paper and information in a better manner. Create a more solid and interesting...

Writing Feedbackcoralwxo - Mar 25, 2022Holt - Mar 26, 2022
Endocrine Disruptors and Micro Plastics: Or How I Learned To Love The Homosexual Frogs

3 - @Holt Thank you very much for the input! I definitely felt like i had built towards a bit Doom'y...

Research Papersjaubuchon28 - Mar 25, 2022jaubuchon28 - Mar 25, 2022