|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: the life expectancy of the modern people
2 - The writer has not taken the correct approach to this discussion. Not only does he fail to provide a...
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|Physical activity in Australia - Writing task 1
6 - The overall section should be clearer with trends, the group with highest figure and lowest figures. You should replace...
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|Children activities in Australia - IELTS Writing Task1- Bar chart
3 - In the overall sentence, please don't provide specific information (figures). Providing more about patterns in the overall section....
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|The diagram below shows how honey is made in small-scale commercial production.
2 - The writer must be conscious of the 20 minute limitation on the completion of this essay. He cannot write...
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|Things that need to be improved - Chevening - leadership essay
2 - The essay is very technical in presentation. It does not carry an ounce of humanity in the leadership and...
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|Intelligence is the most important component of leadership. Do you agree or disagree?
2 - There are 2 immediate problems with the restatement and opinion paragraph. The first is the irrelevant first sentence that...
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|FCE ESSAY"Some people say that using the internet is the best way of learning things. Do you agree?"
2 - There is a specific way of discussing an FCE essay. It has to do with specific topic considerations provided...
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|Sports Betting essay, argumentative essay
2 - When referring to the Supreme Court decision in 2018, do not forget to die the case record including the...
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|"Journey of Understanding" - Common app Personal essay
2 - Which of several common app essay prompts is this essay supposed to respond to? Since you did not provide...
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|Common App essay 2022. Single mother,CS
2 - Let me put it bluntly, the reviewer will not be interested in the life travails of your mother, grandmother,...
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|A bucky badger - why you decided to apply to the University of Wisconsin-Madison
2 - Here is the thing, the essay is devoid of true passion in the sense that there is no evidence...
Undergraduatenataliely - Oct 28, 2022Holt - Oct 29, 2022
|What are the reasons for the rise in obesity? How could it be tackle?
2 - When reading the restatement and writer's opinion, the examiner will see that the writer does not fully grasp the...
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|Some believe that newspapers and TV programs are pointless because it's irrelevant to people's lives
2 - The main score reduction will occur in this essay not due to the irrelevancy of the discussion because the...
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|Personal statement for a Joint Master regarding Eastern Europe, Russia, Eurasia
2 - First of all, remove the political references in the essay. As a student, the focus should be less on...
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|IELTS 2: Many people use written language in a less formal way and in a relaxed way than in the past
2 - There are 3 responses that need to be addressed by the first paragraph. As listed, these scoring requirements are:...
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|"Tell a story from your life that developed or help you develop your character" essay
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|Challenges found in Indonesia fashion startups: A Chevening Essay on Studying in the UK
3 - Hi, You have to state clearly why Chevening should select you for the scholarship award not the other....
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|[IELTS - TASK 1] The line graph of tourists to Scotland.
6 - "the survey's years, while the figure of " "undergoing a few minor factors, it .." => no "it", use...
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - I need some comments about grammar. Topic is about the use of the internet
4 - "with a dramatic rise was seen in Canada" "in Mexico was consistently the lowest" "while Mexico seen saw/witnessed an.."...
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|Master of Fine Art RESEARCH PLAN for MEXT Scholarship Japan 2022
3 - @holt Thank you so much for your advice! It makes sense how i should open it with Indonesia first...
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|Women empowerment - Common app essay on event that sparked period of personal growth
4 - Merged: Common App Essay- incident that sparked a period of personal growth Please review and give honest...
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: OLDER GENERATIONS' TRADITIONAL MORAL CODES
3 - Add a thesis statement that summarises what your essay is about and has your view on it For the...
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|The choir teacher - UBC: Explain How You Responded To A Problem
3 - @Wigic I think you need to structure the essay with more context. I would suggest you use the STAR...
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|External validation - What is important to you? Why?
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|Online education is becoming more and more popular. Discuss about their advantages and disadvantages
2 - Since online education is already an existing phenomenon, it is incorrect for the student to structure the introductory sentence...
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|Parents who have children in private schools should be taxed to support the state education system
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|Some workers choose to dedicate their professional life to one corporation only, others switch jobs
2 - Avoid overwriting a task 2 essay. Specially when the writer is not even sure if he is actually following...
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|Ielts writing task 2 - pros and cons of scientific research made by private companies
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|Which kind of form I need to use ? will be to infinitive/ will "bare verb"
4 - @burcuner Did you mean "bare infinitive"? If so, I would say that there is no structure "will be to...
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|Erasmus Mundus Scholarship - Global Market Local Creativities personal statement - Study Track B
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