|ISO ideas writing "WHO AM I?" for NFL Pitch Brochure
NEW - NFL Draft Prospects brochure I need some guidance on concise writing for brochure I'm writing to pitch to...
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|[IELTS-Opinion Essay] Parents should spend more time with children helping them with their homework.
4 - I like your ideas ,however, I think you should use more compound sentences in order to enhance grammatical requirements,...
Writing Feedbackboreddao - Aug 23, 2023luuyennhi - Aug 31, 2023
|ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEMS CAUSED BY HUMAN ACTIONS AND SUGGESTED SOLUTIONS
NEW - You have such a good range of vocabulary and collocations. However, I can give you some advices : -...
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|The amount of phone usage time by teenagers is increasingly rising
2 - In my opinion, you are having some grammatical errors. - "lead to" should be followed by a noun or...
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|Essay for MSc Business Analytics Australia scholarship - demonstrating the University's values
NEW - Hello Everyone, Please help me with my draft for the MSc Business Analytics scholarship. Thank you Topic: Please...
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|IELTS Writing Task 1 - Bar graph: Multiple social networking sites used in Canada 2014-2015
3 - In the second paragraph " a decrease to 28%" should be changed to "a gradual decrease to 28%" ...
Writing FeedbackIlearnhowtowrite - Aug 22, 2023kainan - Aug 29, 2023
|Agree/disagreeScientific research should be controlled by the governments rather than individuals?
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|Application for Erasmus Mundus Scholarship - Europubhealth+ Program - motivation letter
NEW - Hi all, I kindly ask for your insights and feedback on my motivation letter, which I have prepared...
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|Cramming and immersion are becoming increasingly recognised as methods of gaining knowledge.
NEW - Cramming and immersion in education Although cramming and immersion have earned a reputation as favored and commonplace study...
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|Will schools be a thing of the past?
NEW - In the modern world, schools are no longer necessary because there is so much information available through the internet...
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|The widespread use of the internet has caused many problems. What are these? What solutions
3 - you should outline several solutions outright in the introduction and wrap them up when concluding....
Writing Feedbacktaljahy - Aug 22, 2023tinnucbebe - Aug 29, 2023
|What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment?
3 - refrain from using "we", "i", "our", "my"..., especially in an example. They will make your evidence less objective and...
Writing Feedbackmee_lina07 - Aug 26, 2023tinnucbebe - Aug 29, 2023
|Growing Up In The Family Restaurant
NEW - Growing Up In The Family Restaurant The experience of working in my family restaurant taught me the importance...
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|[IELTS T. 2] Remote working has its own pros and cons, but the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
NEW - Recently, some office workers have begun to work from home instead of commuting to an office each day, and...
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|Chevening essay - How networking helped me succeed in my career development
NEW - NETWORKING essay Chevening is looking for individuals with strong networking skills, who will engage with the Chevening community...
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|Different perspectives about the role of taking risks in both; their professional and personal lives
7 - Overall, good organization of the essay. I recommend to add 1 sentence of example to explain this point "Those...
Writing Feedbackvietnguyen2306 - Aug 25, 2023kn197 - Aug 28, 2023
|Some people believe it is better to work out in a gym, while others prefer to exercise outdoors.
8 - 1. Many sentences are grammatically incorrect. First, use free "Grammarlly" to correct your sentences. 2. In terms structuring your...
Writing Feedbackphudainguyen - Aug 25, 2023kn197 - Aug 28, 2023
|Chevening essay - Leadership and Influence - Inspiration and motivation for a common goal
NEW - LEADERSHIP essay Chevening is looking for people who will be future leaders or influencers in their home countries....
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|IELTS: Environment is damaged by human. Which human activities damage environment, what can be done?
NEW - environmental problems caused by human actions and suggested solutions It is undoubted that Human activities have a damaging...
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|Do you think it's essential for young people to learn about history?
NEW - is it essential for young people to learn about history? In the contemporary world, more and more young...
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|Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that govern
3 - For me, the most obvious minus is the TA. Your examples seem to deviate from the focus of the...
Writing Feedbackmahns - Aug 24, 2023Camlinh22 - Aug 27, 2023
|IELTS essay on health-related subject - is there anyone who doesn't mind leaving some comments?
NEW - Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their...
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|The percentage of people born in and outside of Australia living in cities, towns, and rural areas
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|Technology - Statement of Purpose for UGRAD undergrad exchange program 2024
3 - @basit123 I think you should discuss some more ideas that you are going to perform in the future...
Undergraduatebasit123 - Aug 23, 2023Minahil - Aug 26, 2023
|Write a reply to Sara. In your email - ask her what she want to do - suggest places
3 - @nguyenthuthuya35 How have your -> How has your Many thank -> Many thanks It's glad to -> It's nice...
Lettersnguyenthuthuya35 - Aug 26, 2023Duy Dang - Aug 26, 2023
|[IELTS WRITING TASK 1] UNEMPLOYMENT RATE AND PEOPLE LEAVING IRELAND FROM 1988 TO 2008
Writing FeedbackDuy Dang - Aug 26, 2023Duy Dang - Aug 26, 2023
|Describe a situation when you had to make a difficult decision. How did you make your decision?
2 - It did not seem like this was a difficult decision for you to make. You seemed comfortable in the...
Writing Feedbackturkeshhan - Aug 26, 2023Holt - Aug 26, 2023
|Essay about South Asian Mental Health Care Seeking Behaviors.
2 - In order to write a proper thesis paragraph, you have to outline the ojectives of the paper. You...
Research Papersvjs1615 - Aug 26, 2023Holt - Aug 26, 2023
|[IELTS Task 2] Discuss about the positive & negative effects of working/studying from home
2 - This is not the writing instruction. You were given a specific question to respond to as the basis...
Writing FeedbackHauau123456 - Aug 26, 2023Holt - Aug 26, 2023
|The opinion that we are getting more changes of choices in every field of our life
3 - Your overview : To show the reader your perspectives at the beginning and not simply merely paraphrase the question,...
Writing FeedbackBrianWang - Aug 21, 2023Duy Dang - Aug 26, 2023
|In at least 150 words, write an opinion paragraph about the topic below. Some parents teach their ch
2 - The topic for writing is not complete. Where is the writing instruction? I cannot really assess what you are...
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