|It is true that environmental problems are not received care enough from citizens
3 - Hi, I would like to point out your errors in your essay. 1. The first grammatical mistake is noticeable...
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|Information regarding the proportion of energy generated from 5 sources in New Zealand and Germany
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|Report: Evaluation of the 'International food' course in the Superior school of cookery.
2 - Observations should be either positive or negative. These are not references to what was learned in class. Such a...
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|The bar graph below shows basic information about uses of leisure time among different age group.
2 - The writer used a topic restatement + opinion presentation for the first paragraph. A discussion format exclusive to the...
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|The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit.
2 - The paraphrase does not restate the original topic, nor any responses to the direct questions. The prompt restatement +...
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|The line graph gives information about the fluctuations of food price index and average oil price
2 - There is a correlation measurement indicated in the original image. When the writer referred to the correlation, that specific...
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|Everyone should become vegetarian because a healthy meal does not necessarily require meat
2 - This has nothing to do with the discussion provided. References must be suitable to the given topic. In...
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|Target: Band 7- Writing Task 2: The influence of technology to lifestyle
2 - There are 3 seperate ideas presented in this long sentence. one of the ideas are properly depicted in...
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|PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR KGSP/GKS undergraduate Scholarship, Pharmacy major
3 - @Maya2004 As the other consultant said you should try to write more about English . And this truly not...
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|What should and should not be taught at school has been a perennial debate
2 - The prompt restatement must be a factual representation of the orginal within 2 sentences. No actual opinion coming from...
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|Writing Task1 - conditions of an island before and after tourist facilities development
3 - The essay is not completed, I think it maybe a report more than an essay, since in reports con...
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|WRITING TASK 2: UNPAID WORK
3 - I think your conclusion is incomplete as it is supposed to be at least 2 sentences. You should accentuate...
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|The figures for acid rain emissions per million tons in four different sectors in the United Kingdom
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|BEGINNER- WRITING TASK 2 - Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism
2 - An economic discussion was not stated in the original prompt. The reference is for a general advantage reference....
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|PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR KGSP/GKS UNDERGRADUATE COMPUTER SCIENCE ENGINEERING MAJOR
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|Writing Task 1: The reasons why adults take part in the course and how its cost should be shared
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|Youngsters who commit crimes should be treated by authorities in the same way as adults
2 - While the opinion of the writer is required, the format used is incomplete. The extent of (dis) agreement...
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|Statement of Purpose - UC Berkeley - Data Science
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the helpful advise and suggestion! I have revised the essay as the...
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|Many people argue that high income is far more essential than job happiness
4 - Hi, I would like to give some feedback on your essay. 1. The first sentence of your introduction is...
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|The authorities ought to limit individual wages at a certain level
2 - This is a redundant reference. Many countries already implies a global coverage. simply place a comma at the...
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|IELTS 1: The bar chart depicts data about how many tons of waste was collected by recycling centre
3 - Thank you alot for your constructive comment^^ It really helps me ^^ Wish you have a nice day...
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|Different views about the funding of traffic system - money on railways or on new roads?
3 - The first paragraph seem like repeat the topic without reasons why you choose to expend much more money on...
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: TRAFFIC PROBLEMS AND SOLUTION
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|Advertising as a compelling tool for convincing people to buy even unnecessary things
2 - The discussion is presented in current time form, not past time reference. Use the correct tense as indicated...
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|It is believed that children should start learning a foreign language at primary schools
2 - This response is meant for an extent of agreement or disagreement essay. It is improperly used in this...
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|Salary issue between famous athletes and other important professionals in society
NEW - Topic: Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people...
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|IELTS 1: the first place Germans and Nigerians go to in order to access the news in a a typical week
3 - You should fix some mistakes: 1.[i]two countries 2. of the people because using expressing quantity with of, you need...
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|Is hard work always good? Children are told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough
3 - Your writing is good. The clarity was made OK, although there are some unsuitable word usage, but it did't...
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|The number of students graduating from university in Canada in a period of 15 years
3 - You shouldn't put too much statistics in a Writing task 1 essay because this will bring fatigue for readers...
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|Parents put too much pressure on their children for their future. Reasons? Positives or negatives.
3 - I think the word "socialize" in the sentence "Especially under the standard of modern socialize..." is in an incorrect...
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