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IELTS Students who gave a ''very good'' rating to the resources

4 - @rishabhk4896 thank you so much <3...

Writing Feedbackxuanmai2911 - Feb 12, 2023xuanmai2911 - Feb 13, 2023
IELTS 2: Country is already rich, any addition in economic wealth does not make its citizens happier

3 - Thanks very much for your comment. I noticed my high verbosity and will try my best to improve....

Writing Feedbackd2507 - Feb 12, 2023d2507 - Feb 13, 2023
Essay about educational policy which favor certain subjects

2 - The prompt restatement is slightly incorrect. The first presentation, which you are restating does not indicate that the government...

Writing FeedbackNamLeHanoi - Feb 12, 2023Holt - Feb 13, 2023
Even though governments have worked hard to bring about improvements in the healthcare system

2 - Avoid exaggerations in the prompt restatement. This paragraph in particular must be as true to the original presentation...

Writing Feedbackkesky101 - Feb 12, 2023Holt - Feb 13, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: The chart shows the percentage of people born in and outside of Australia...

3 - Your number of sentences is quite short for writing task 1. Moreover, the descriptive comparison is quite simple. Especially...

Writing Feedbacknh_thanhnha - Jan 30, 2023someoneishere - Feb 12, 2023
Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through online learning - pros and cons

2 - While some people truly type quite fast and could manage to click off a series of sentences within the...

Writing Feedbacksomeoneishere - Feb 12, 2023Holt - Feb 12, 2023
Ielts Writing Task 1: The supplied line graph indicates the consumption of beef, lamb and fish

4 - Also I notice other small mistakes: taken => took, stayed remain over a period of ten years => remained,...

Writing FeedbackTommy Jasper - Feb 9, 2023someoneishere - Feb 12, 2023
IELTS Writing task 1 - Museum Maps

4 - You did a great job keeping the word count around 200. The numbers included in the bulk, are outstanding...

Writing Feedbackrishabhk4896 - Feb 10, 2023someoneishere - Feb 12, 2023
The bar chart below gives information about four countries' spending habits of shopping on consumer

2 - An examiner would consider this task 1 essay under developed because it contains only the minimum word count number....

Writing Feedbackmoonsun06_56 - Feb 11, 2023Holt - Feb 12, 2023
Reasons to choose Waterloo and Computer engineering, educational goals & interest in chosen program

3 - @Holt Thank you so much Holt!...

Undergraduatesami21 - Feb 11, 2023sami21 - Feb 11, 2023
The rise in the production of consumer items leads to the damage of the natural environment

3 - I think the essay is very well written but most of the sentences are in informal language, like cause...

Writing Feedbackwho know - Feb 11, 2023rishabhk4896 - Feb 11, 2023
Technology inventions making people socially less interactive

3 - I think this essay is overdone and you need to understand the essay type prior to plan your essay....

Writing Feedbackthanhtammm - Feb 10, 2023rishabhk4896 - Feb 11, 2023
Writing task 1: Top seven movie genres from 1995 to 2005

2 - 235 is considered an overwritten task 1 report. It is impossible to complete this type of long form analysis...

Writing Feedbackdominhhieupro69 - Feb 11, 2023Holt - Feb 11, 2023
Management position - scholarship to contribute to the organisation's human development needs

2 - This is an incorrect response to the question. A proper response will show how the applicant has assessed his/her...

ScholarshipTutu000 - Feb 11, 2023Holt - Feb 11, 2023
Essay about whether technology has made shopping today easier or not.

2 - The opening statement is acceptable but could use improvements in relation to the effectiveness of the restatement and opinion....

Writing FeedbackThanhvinhtran - Feb 10, 2023Holt - Feb 11, 2023
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] The role of constructing free libraries in town.

2 - You should "render" your position at the start of the essay to meet the task accuracy requirement for a...

Writing Feedbackjeangrrr - Feb 10, 2023Holt - Feb 11, 2023
Master in IT project Management - knowledge and skills important to Botswana's development

3 - Good content, you've mentioned the problems in your own country and most likely how they can be addressed. Try...

ScholarshippalePale - Feb 4, 2023Tutu000 - Feb 11, 2023
The annual expenditure on cell phone, national and international fixed-line services of Americans

3 - I found these mistakes yearly expenses ... from 2000 and 2001 to 2010. phone services had...

Writing Feedbackhuukim - Feb 9, 2023rishabhk4896 - Feb 10, 2023
An underprivileged community - Australian award Scholarship preferred choices

3 - @holt Thanks for the review, I need a wake-up call and you just gave me. Appreciated....

ScholarshipAhmadjb225 - Feb 10, 2023Ahmadjb225 - Feb 10, 2023
A poem about being a dreamer (01/23/23)

2 - Being given the opportunity to use a freestyle poem writing method did not help this essay. The subjects per...

Poetryetherealil - Feb 10, 2023Holt - Feb 10, 2023
Rich countries often give financial aid to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty

2 - 323 words would not be easily achieved in an actual test. Not if you are aiming for properly developing...

Writing Feedbackmariachiarafico - Feb 9, 2023Holt - Feb 10, 2023
Expenses for mobile phones, domestic and global fixed-line, and services in America

2 - This is another example of an overwritten and impossible to complete within 20 minutes task 1 essay. the task...

Writing Feedbacksomeoneishere - Feb 9, 2023Holt - Feb 10, 2023
TASK 2: Would it be better for children to grow up in rural areas or cities?

3 - I think most of the problems I saw have been resolved by @Holt. Nevertheless, the most important aspect of...

Writing Feedbacklehmy - Feb 9, 2023Ahmadjb225 - Feb 9, 2023
Artificial intelligences and their role in modern life.

2 - The one thing that a task 2 essay does not do is over discuss a given topic to the...

Writing FeedbackGiorgi_2059 - Feb 9, 2023Holt - Feb 9, 2023
Is the primary function of music to reduce stress?

2 - You have a presentation over 300 words here. While it allowed you present a proper reasoning series, it affected...

Writing Feedbackquocdat - Feb 8, 2023Holt - Feb 9, 2023
Task 2 - Caring for children is important in any society

2 - The response provided contradicts itself. The writer used the term "concur" which literally means "I agree" but, in the...

Writing FeedbackMinh Tri - Feb 8, 2023Holt - Feb 8, 2023
ielts writing: Describe a city that you have visited (Ha Noi)

4 - @tsyiaa99 thanks a lot...

Writing Feedbackhuychamchi - Feb 3, 2023huychamchi - Feb 7, 2023
The essay about the question: Should people restrict video games?

3 - ... many disputes between ... or schools (excessive). In fact (unsuitable transition) In my opinion, electronic games are thought...

Writing Feedbackdinhhavan16 - Feb 7, 2023mylittlepony - Feb 7, 2023
The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten

4 - It much better to replace "they prefer eating them to the main dishes" with " they prefer to eat...

Writing Feedbackyennguyenkim - Feb 1, 2023tsyiaa99 - Feb 7, 2023
A positive situation of owning a home rather than renting one

5 - Hi @han0212! There is one mistake that I noticed in your essay is the word "theirselves". It has to...

Writing Feedbackhan0212 - Jan 30, 2023selenakieu - Feb 6, 2023