|Letter of explanation for study permit in Canada
2 - I am reading this from the point of view of a visa officer. Frankly speaking, the letter of explanation...
LettersKyryloLvov - May 21, 2020Holt - May 21, 2020
|Master of Urban and Regional Planning - why I chose my proposed course and institution
ScholarshipEastman - May 20, 2020Eastman - May 21, 2020
|IELTS 1: how the water passes from the ocean to land through a natural process called 'water cycle'
Writing Feedbacknhiduong2001 - May 21, 2020Holt - May 21, 2020
|These days, it is true that parents do not spend much time on their children
2 - Excellent work on the reasoning paragraphs. The dual topic presentation was well presented. It used good transition methods from...
Writing Feedbackthuhabk - May 21, 2020Holt - May 21, 2020
|The chart illustrates changes in the figure for electricity generated by three different sources
3 - You should write 1 or 2 more sentence in your overview, I think yours is short and not enough...
Writing Feedbackpha - May 17, 2020nhiduong2001 - May 21, 2020
|Living in the urban areas may cause many awful effects on citizens' health and I am aware of it
Writing FeedbackLinh TTran - May 17, 2020nhiduong2001 - May 21, 2020
|Leisure is a growing industry
2 - Your restatement is still unclear. It is confusing and you are not properly assessing the original discussion requirements. ...
Writing FeedbackGATE - May 20, 2020Holt - May 21, 2020
|Scholarship Essay for Australia Awards Q.2) How will the proposed study contribute to your career?
ScholarshipLunn Htar Moe - May 20, 2020Holt - May 20, 2020
|Ielts Writing task 2: the cause and influences of traveling
2 - The essay was going strong until you took a misstep in the second reasoning paragraph. That is the part...
Writing FeedbackKhanguyent - May 20, 2020Holt - May 20, 2020
|The advantages and disadvantages of living in the modern world
4 - I will not mention the grammar error anymore because you already have the feedback. Here, I would like to...
Writing Feedbackphx - May 16, 2020Lunn Htar Moe - May 20, 2020
|Today parents spend little free time with their children. Why is it the case ? Who are more affected
3 - The facts that you mentioned in the essay are not strong enough to describe the disadvantages.You should provide more...
Writing Feedbackhhoaianhh2905 - May 17, 2020Lunn Htar Moe - May 20, 2020
|Writing task 2 - Discuss the view and give the opinion of dangerous sports
2 - In your reasoning paragraphs, you cannot start the second presentation with "I argue" because you have yet to present...
Writing FeedbackSmile12_12 - May 20, 2020Holt - May 20, 2020
|Some people think that children perform better in a single-sex school compared to a mixed school.
2 - Your prompt restatement is too short and does not properly respond to the given discussion question. You need to...
ScholarshipHanguyen921123 - May 20, 2020Holt - May 20, 2020
|Money is the best option when choosing a career, do you agree or disagree?
Writing FeedbackNgocHai - May 19, 2020NgocHai - May 20, 2020
|Less international travel in the future.
2 - I will not score this essay on the individual scoring considerations because it will automatically fail in the TA...
Writing FeedbackGATE - May 19, 2020Holt - May 20, 2020
|Compare and contrast essay: The culture of small towns and cities
2 - Your essay is very good because your brilliant ideas and vocabularies used in the essay. however, you made some...
Writing FeedbackTynna - May 18, 2020khanhvnntc - May 19, 2020
|Teaching national literature and history vs. world literature and history
2 - This is an extent essay. So the format for the discussion should be in a degree that supports the...
Writing FeedbackHoa Thanh Nguyen - May 19, 2020Holt - May 19, 2020
|How many marriages and divorces took place in the UK, in the period of 25 years
3 - @Holt Thank you a lot for helpful advices to my essay, i really appreciate it. Can this essay get...
Writing Feedbackhance9x - May 18, 2020hance9x - May 19, 2020
|With the growing world population, there's the problem of feeding such a large number of people
3 - thanks for the feedback holt. i have one more query. in the questions "to what extent.." or "do you...
Writing FeedbackGATE - May 17, 2020GATE - May 19, 2020
|Career change from Finance to Bioinformatics - MS SoP review
2 - This is an excellent personal statement. It doesn't really provide the necessary information to prove that you have a...
Graduatestankunas - May 19, 2020Holt - May 19, 2020
|Advertisements have appeared ubiquitously in today's daily life
Writing FeedbackLe Thuy Vy - May 17, 2020Le Thuy Vy - May 18, 2020
|advantage and disadvantage essay - With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books.
2 - The maximum paragraph requirement of the task 2 essay is 5. You are over by 1 paragraph because you...
Writing FeedbackmywritingsTT - May 18, 2020Holt - May 18, 2020
|You have just spend a week with a friend for holiday. You realised you had left your wallet there.
2 - Spelling Errors: Fedex ( Proper Noun) - FedEx noddle = noodle Vocabulary Errors: Wonderfully / wonderful -...
Writing Feedbackjarodshen - May 18, 2020Holt - May 18, 2020
|The issue of communicating using the second language in foreign countries
4 - The essay will most definitely get a score of 1. The overall discussion format is incorrect. There is no...
Writing FeedbackKhai - May 17, 2020Holt - May 18, 2020
|Governments should impose heavy tax on car drivers and make improvements to public transportation
3 - I cannot deny that you have a rich lexical resource which contributes the best to rising your band score....
Writing Feedbackmarkus97 - May 17, 2020mywritingsTT - May 18, 2020
|Society should make efforts to save endangered species if humans affected
5 - @Holt Thank you so much for your response. I will definitely work on my content and post it again...
Writing FeedbackNamangarg147 - May 17, 2020Namangarg147 - May 17, 2020
|Dreams, plans for the future and reasons for choosing KAIST
3 - @Holt Wow, thank you so much for the detailed feedback. Really though, I see you everywhere, pretty much a...
Undergraduategabriellesinaga - May 14, 2020gabriellesinaga - May 16, 2020
|From the chart: Australians in terms of physical activity they partook in on a regular basis in 2010
Writing FeedbackLaurel Pham - May 16, 2020Laurel Pham - May 16, 2020
|Tourism except benefits can also pose several problems
4 - My apologies. The vocabulary explanation for a different post was accidentally attached to your essay. No worries though. You...
Writing Feedbackvlnga - May 16, 2020Holt - May 16, 2020
|Writing task 2 - Education is free. Do you agree or disagree?
2 - There are actually 2 discussion prompts based on your discussion topic. Since you did not provide the original prompt,...
Writing FeedbackTrinh Phon Tinh - May 16, 2020Holt - May 16, 2020