|Personal Statement for Tourism Development and Culture EMJMD
2 - Although I was quite into my major, I was doubtful ... Personally, I don't think this sounds very positive....
GraduateKhamidova - Dec 24, 2019Ulaai - Jan 2, 2020
|Task 2: Should air travel be restricted due to its impact on environment?
2 - @phuongthuy1212 Hi there. Thanks for coming to the site! I hope that this feedback welcomes you properly into the...
Writing Feedbackphuongthuy1212 - Dec 24, 2019Maria - Jan 2, 2020
|Letter of motivation for EMJMD critical care nursing
3 - @luke matu Hi there. Thanks for coming to the site for feedback! Since you are working with a...
Graduateluke matu - Dec 23, 2019Maria - Jan 2, 2020
|Motivation Letter for Smart Systems Integration Erasmus Mundus scholarship program
3 - @Maria Thank you for the review, I appreciate it. I will start making changes on the letter. Thanks...
Lettersshingeki1996 - Jan 2, 2020shingeki1996 - Jan 2, 2020
|Erasmus Mundus Scholarship, Track B Global market and Development
2 - @Tati 237 Hi there. Thanks for coming to the forum. Here is my feedback on your writing. Since...
ScholarshipTati 237 - Dec 23, 2019Maria - Jan 2, 2020
|The importance of gun control. Answer these three questions (educational studies)
2 - @Jibarra Hello. Thanks for approaching the forum. I hope this feedback somehow helps you. Try to be more...
Research PapersJibarra - Dec 22, 2019Maria - Jan 2, 2020
|Point out three things I did well (Amazons effect on the business world)
2 - @Nix111 Hello. Welcome to the forum! I hope that this feedback gives you clarity on what you can do...
Research PapersNix111 - Dec 22, 2019Maria - Jan 2, 2020
|Arabic music rhythm. Last minute Stanford Application Essay
2 - @Abraham29 HI there. Welcome to the forum. I hope that my feedback suits you well. While I find...
UndergraduateAbraham29 - Jan 1, 2020Maria - Jan 2, 2020
|Describe your current possibilities (in terms of role/position, mandate) to influence
NEW - -- 866 of 1000 characters limit. Due to the characters limit, I try to make is as efficient as...
Scholarshiplililalu - Jan 1, 2020 -
|Global UGRAD to look for solutions in the fields of education, human rights, and emancipation.
2 - It is great to hear about your experience teaching the kids and that is the highlight. However, I think...
ScholarshipNurul Aisyah - Dec 23, 2019anan1249 - Dec 31, 2019
|UBC Personal Profile: The Idealistic Dreamer
3 - @Maria Thanks for the feedback! Actually, the essay doesn't even have a title, I just included it to highlight...
UndergraduateFamai - Dec 26, 2019Famai - Dec 29, 2019
|This is my ENG 102 research essay about Kickboxing
2 - @Joe1rou Hello. Welcome to the forum! Here is my feedback on your writing. When you're trying to use...
Research PapersJoe1rou - Dec 28, 2019Maria - Dec 28, 2019
|"Stipendium Hungaricum" program - Motivation letter
2 - @Munkhuu9969 Hi. Welcome to the forum. Here is my feedback. First and foremost, try to stick with language...
LettersMunkhuu9969 - Dec 25, 2019Maria - Dec 28, 2019
|A speech about white lie - can people tell lies in a good faith?
2 - I believe that after correcting and extending the sentences, it could be possibly lengthened to 3 minutes. Anyways, below...
Speechescaizi - Dec 22, 2019Emily Chiang - Dec 25, 2019
|Whole New Galaxy - Draft for ' Why NYU' essay .
2 - lol I'm also applying to NYU this year. The metaphor is perfect but I think it takes too much...
Writing Feedbacktaemy - Dec 24, 2019Jiaxin Ye - Dec 24, 2019
|Good habits - what you learned from and felt during curricular and/or extracurricular activities
2 - Hi, here are some suggestions for you. 1.You may want to rearrange the proportions, emphasizing more on the...
UndergraduateLongho22042001 - Dec 20, 2019Emily Chiang - Dec 24, 2019
|What to write about? - Study Plan for Chinese Government Scholarship
3 - Merged: Suggest me a study plan for Chinese government scholarship to study Masters in Computer Science. Please...
EssaysMona_Saleh - Mar 21, 2019Tayyab_Shehzad - Dec 24, 2019
|UBC Personal Profile #1: To Grow and Excel
NEW - This is the first question on UBC's personal profile. I essentially talked about how my character has evolved over...
UndergraduateYQUnionville - Dec 24, 2019 -
|UBC Personal Profile - A person of Family and Friends
2 - It's great overall. But I think you can elaborate more on "stepping away from safe zone" because the sentence...
UndergraduateDhiyoU - Dec 21, 2019Jiaxin Ye - Dec 23, 2019
|IELTS Writing task 2 - Staying in one place or various places?
2 - @Duy Anh I don't know others but for me your writing is pretty smooth, thus its coherence and cohesion...
Writing FeedbackDuy Anh - Dec 23, 2019Thangnguyen315 - Dec 23, 2019
|Erasmus Mundus in Security and Cloud Computing - expectations, career aspirations, experience, etc.
GraduateYusufbek - Dec 19, 2019Yusufbek - Dec 23, 2019
|Motivational letter for stipendum hungaricum scholarship, Bsc Biochemical Engineering
6 - @hadilakk It's a motivational letter. Please can you help pin point my grammatical errors so as I would correct...
LettersAhmadjb225 - Dec 9, 2019Ahmadjb225 - Dec 23, 2019
|Essay topic: Carey Business school shapes business leaders who seize the opportunity
2 - @dichangwei Hello. Welcome to the forum! Here is my feedback on your writing. Be cautious of your...
Graduatedichangwei - Dec 19, 2019Maria - Dec 23, 2019
|IELTS -Writing Task 1 : One country's exports value in various categories during 2015 and 2016
3 - @kanzanism Thank you so much for all the suggestions, I really appreciate it and will definitely keep on...
Writing FeedbackEmily Chiang - Dec 20, 2019Emily Chiang - Dec 23, 2019
|The comparison of user involvement for four different online social platforms
3 - @Maria Thanks a lot for your advises. I will take them all into account to improve my writing skill....
Writing FeedbackWaddahHamzah - Dec 12, 2019WaddahHamzah - Dec 22, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Children should be free to choose activities in their free time?
2 - Dear Nguyen, Overall, it is a well-writen essay that only contains minor errors, for example: 1. "There are...
Writing FeedbackHuyen Nguyen - Dec 22, 2019irsaqisthi - Dec 22, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 1 : Solar Energy for Water Heating and Panels Location
4 - Hi Mr. Bilal, Thank you for providing me with insightful advices related to IELTS writing task 1. In return,...
Writing Feedbacksantrinabawi - Dec 15, 2019irsaqisthi - Dec 22, 2019
|My race has made me both the insider and outsider - Duke University
2 - It's great overall. But I'm not quite sure of what you mean by "both an insider and an outsider"....
Undergraduatesleepyshamrocks - Dec 19, 2019Jiaxin Ye - Dec 22, 2019
|SOP for my application in German university in master in mechatronics and robotics program.
Writing FeedbackRushilkumar - Dec 10, 2019Rushilkumar - Dec 22, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 - Are celebrities over-paid ?
Writing FeedbackThangnguyen315 - Dec 11, 2019Thangnguyen315 - Dec 21, 2019