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3 - @Maria Thank you so much, am an international student and writing isn't my strength at all but I would...
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2 - Be careful with your singular and plural subject agreement. When you write more/some it should be followed by plural...
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3 - I could say that you have an organized essay on your writing since I could follow the flow of...
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2 - @surima Welcome! Here is my feedback that I hope can help you out. The first sentence immediately jolts...
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2 - @khangnguyen Welcome to the forum! Here is my feedback on your writing. While I appreciate how short and...
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|Discussing both views about the influences what children watch and the amount of time they spend on.
2 - @ratter Welcome to the forum. Here is my feedback. Ensure that you are using the appropriate sentence construction...
Writing Feedbackratter - Dec 17, 2019Maria - Dec 18, 2019
|IELTS writing task 2 - argumentative essay- Would life be better without sophisticated technology?
2 - @Hirumi Here's my feedback on your writing. Try your best to create simpler sentences when you can. This...
Writing FeedbackHirumi - Dec 17, 2019Maria - Dec 18, 2019
|Do you think that it's relevant ? -Globa UGRAD Program : What is your definition of a great leader?
2 - @FairuzDhiaKhalis Hi. This will be my feedback on your writing. While I appreciate the straightforward answer on the...
UndergraduateFairuzDhiaKhalis - Dec 17, 2019Maria - Dec 18, 2019
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5 - @sleepysharmrocks thanks for help any other editions ? how many other students have I helped..? none so far...
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3 - @Maria Thank you so much for the response. But I don't quiet understand what you mean by what your...
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3 - In describing both views, avoid using judging words and focus on supporting each statement from positive perspective. Your Body...
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|IELTS Task II; The problems of people living in urban areas - government should take some actions
4 - Organize sentences structure with appropriate verb in use more carefully. Like the phrase 'have been witnessed' should be 'have...
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|Chain management and me - Applying for Master studies in the United Kingdom
3 - @Maria Thank you so much for the feedback!!! Your comments are very valuable, especially pointed out the fact that...
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2 - @FairuzDhiaKhalis Hi. Here is my feedback on your writing. While I think that the first paragraph is decent...
UndergraduateFairuzDhiaKhalis - Dec 16, 2019Maria - Dec 16, 2019
|UBC- Reading buddy - ONE or TWO activities listed above that are most important to you.
2 - @ubcessayhelp Welcome here! I'll provide you with feedback on your writing. I think that the activity you have...
Undergraduateubcessayhelp - Dec 16, 2019Maria - Dec 16, 2019
|IELTS TASK 1 the process of solar power - energy from the sunlight
2 - @King heart Hi, welcome. Here is my feedback. There's a lot of confusion when it comes to your...
Writing FeedbackKing heart - Dec 15, 2019Maria - Dec 16, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 1 - From solar panels on the roof to hot water inside a house
2 - @M_amin_N Welcome to the forum! I hope that the feedback you receive here would help you in your writing...
Writing FeedbackM_amin_N - Dec 15, 2019Maria - Dec 16, 2019
|[IELTS Task 2] Impact of advertisements on our lives
2 - @ferbdeptrai Welcome to the forum! I hope that this feedback gives you an idea on how to improve your...
Writing Feedbackferbdeptrai - Dec 15, 2019Maria - Dec 16, 2019
|The life difficulties in a foreign country where you cannot speak your mother language
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|Water heating energy from the solar panels - explaining the whole process
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|[IELTS] Writing task 1, Three charts with average percentages in different types of nutrients
2 - You should write and paraphrase more simple and complex introduction, which can accommodate all the elements: For example: the...
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|From Germany to Florida - UBC Personal Profile: "Tell us about who you are..."
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2 - you cannot reach a score higher in Task Achievement since you fail to summarize the main report in the...
Writing FeedbackGhitamalia - Dec 15, 2019eddies - Dec 15, 2019
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3 - I dont need see any problem in the introduction. You did it well. However, it seems that some misconception...
Writing Feedbackirsaqisthi - Dec 11, 2019eddies - Dec 15, 2019
|WRITING TASK 1 USER ENGAGEMENT FOR FOUR SOCIAL MEDIA AND THEIR MARKET SHARE
2 - Please elucidate your inferences from the given data, instead of just stating the visual data. eg . LinkedIn has...
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