|The line graph illustrates the number of people aged 65 and more - over 100 years period
2 - The summary overview is complete in content. However, the presentation will not help your GRA score as you did...
Writing Feedbacknhuquinhh - May 16, 2020Holt - May 16, 2020
|Children watch a lot of TV and play video games - writing task 2(IELTS)
2 - The TA score for this essay will be 1. Your answer was completely unrelated to the task. You did...
Writing FeedbackGATE - May 15, 2020Holt - May 16, 2020
|IELTS- T2: Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished?
Writing FeedbackMinhthuy1993 - May 15, 2020huyjunnie - May 16, 2020
|KGSP 2020 Undergraduate Personal Statement / Media and communication - why KGSP?
Scholarshipbondareva - May 11, 2020bondareva - May 15, 2020
|Writing task 2 - IELTS Academic - economic growth as the only way to end hunger and poverty?
3 - Thank you so much for your comments. They've helped me a lot in figuring out how I should write...
Writing Feedbackhangvu248 - May 15, 2020hangvu248 - May 15, 2020
|The graph illustrates the fish, lamb, beef and chicken consumptions in an European country
3 - I think the organization of paragraphs should be considered more carefully, as Holt has suggested. I would also recommend...
Writing FeedbackSally 205 - May 15, 2020hangvu248 - May 15, 2020
|Assistant Principle - Scholarship Essay for Australia Awards How I chose propose course
ScholarshipLunn Htar Moe - May 14, 2020Lunn Htar Moe - May 15, 2020
|Proposed study essay for AAS - Water Resource Engineering
4 - @TaraAryal23 thank you so much for the feedback, i will revise my essay again, thanks again and good...
Scholarshiptasslia - May 8, 2020tasslia - May 15, 2020
|Psychologists and color schemes
2 - Your summation of the original prompt needs more work. You did not use synonyms for the terms offices and...
Writing Feedbackkhoa1102 - May 14, 2020Holt - May 15, 2020
|I trust my government to take care of my life and climate change
NEW - Climate change is a big problem Government can not be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility...
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|IELTS2 - governments, companies and people have equal responsibilities for combating global warming
Writing Feedbackylc125 - May 14, 2020ylc125 - May 14, 2020
|IELTS 9 wiriting task 1 : maps of an island before and after constructed
2 - I cannot properly review this essay because of 2 reasons: - You did not provide the images for...
Writing Feedbackholymolly - May 14, 2020Holt - May 14, 2020
|Magister of Human Rights Law and Policy - AAS (Australia Award Scholarship)
3 - The first paragraph is superfluous. It does not add to the information regarding why you have chosen your proposed...
ScholarshipRafaza - May 14, 2020Holt - May 14, 2020
|Cybersecurity - how did you choose your proposed course and institution?
3 - @ChrisPra One of the poorest essays I have ever seen. Think twice, thrice before you write an important thing....
UndergraduateChrisPra - May 11, 2020TaraAryal23 - May 14, 2020
|Building more sports facilities as the efficient way to promote public health. Any other measures?
Writing Feedbackafzalmd - May 13, 2020Holt - May 13, 2020
|Internet against Public Libraries
2 - This is an almost excellent essay that should score above the simple passing band score. In my opinion, this...
Writing Feedbackgekani - May 13, 2020Holt - May 13, 2020
|The importance of art, music and drama especially at primary level
2 - Being a simple agree or disagree essay, you do not need to offer an emotional or measured response to...
Writing Feedbackfrulymuly - May 13, 2020Holt - May 13, 2020
|Environmental issues around the world are so severe that an individual cannot make a difference
2 - The overall discussion is sound. It is applicable to the given prompt requirement except, you offered solutions to the...
Writing Feedbackngochathanh - May 13, 2020Holt - May 13, 2020
|The problems and solutions of education in undeveloped countries
2 - Your paragraphs do not truly discuss the related problems within a paragraph. Neither do you present related solutions in...
Writing FeedbackPee_Tee - May 13, 2020Holt - May 13, 2020
|Writing a letter to apply for joining an oversea language traing
2 - The letter has a misrepresentation of information from the original prompt. Organising a language study program is different from...
Lettersrofdroot - May 13, 2020Holt - May 13, 2020
|Fulbright essay-personal statement- economic development
3 - @Holt How can I contact you privately? You may contact us at: firstname.lastname@example.org (request me for a private service)....
UndergraduateNiko_s - May 12, 2020Niko_s - May 12, 2020
|Minimizing or deafiting climate change
2 - While you did a wonderful job in responding to the prompt question and staying on point with your reasoning...
Writing Feedbackphhth - May 12, 2020Holt - May 12, 2020
|The issue as to whether some types of food advertisements should be prohibited remains controversial
2 - Before you start writing essays that are extremely worded, you should first make sure that you are responding to...
Writing Feedbackphoebenguyen - May 12, 2020Holt - May 12, 2020
|IELTS T2: The best way for government to solve traffic congestion is provding free public transport?
2 - The essay asked you to deliver an extent or measured agreement or disagreement with the given topic. Based on...
Writing Feedbackuyenton - May 12, 2020Holt - May 12, 2020
|The total of books read by gender at the library of Starmouth School from 2009 to the present
2 - Due to the lack of image accompanying your essay, I will be unable to review your essay for content...
Writing FeedbackKl17122004 - May 11, 2020Holt - May 11, 2020
|Is technology useful for education in the modern time?
4 - Since Holt has already commented extensively on your content, I'll just add a few feedback on major writing style...
Writing Feedbackrosa1310 - May 11, 2020anhnguyenhai333 - May 11, 2020
|More people are choosing to live with their friends or alone rather than with their families.
2 - I am afraid to review this essay for prompt responsiveness because there are 2 task 2 essay prompts that...
Writing Feedbacknnminhnhu02 - May 11, 2020Holt - May 11, 2020
|Mechanical engineering at Kohl TU
GraduateKid1975 - May 11, 2020Kid1975 - May 11, 2020
|Write a letter of reference for yourself in the third person - how to start?
3 - Wow this is so great I really appreciate the energy your putting in to support the people that you...
EssaysTonnixellah - May 10, 2020Tonnixellah - May 11, 2020
|Motivation Letter - Stipendium Hungaricum Programme (Bachelor)
6 - It still isn't clear. When you talk of Design Engineering, you are speaking of combining several engineering concepts to...
Lettersjulialisboa - May 10, 2020Holt - May 11, 2020