|Bioinformatics personal statement for graduate school
2 - It sounds confusing, self-defeating, and illogical. The presentation needs a lot of work. Since the course you want to...
Graduateqguo551 - Feb 5, 2020Holt - Feb 6, 2020
|It is right that university graduates should earn more money than less well educated people
3 - Being a degree discussion essay, your paraphrase will be seen as lacking in addressing the task requirement. You cannot...
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|Chinese Government Undergraduate Scholarship (Personal Statement - Economics)
3 - @Holt Thank you for your thoughts! I will edit my personal statement and repost the revised one....
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|The comparison on how much the petroleum was produced and consumed in 7 areas in the year of 2002
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|U of T Engineering Supplementary Essay - extracurriculars and developed skills
2 - You don't really need that long-winded introduction at the start. Your essay will be better helped, due to the...
Graduateyellowjello123 - Feb 5, 2020Holt - Feb 5, 2020
|Essay Scholarship (NZAID) - Study Relevance
2 - Since you are applying for a scholarship, you need to be a bit more detailed when explaining the skills...
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|Master of Economics - Scholarship statement on choosing the proposed course and institutions
2 - The choice of your proposed course is not very clear in this essay. You are discussing an academic interest...
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|The distance between the rich and the poor is enlarging due to development of technology - Ielts 2
3 - Well, in your introduction, I think you mean the fast-moving of technology has created ? Anyway, come to your...
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|IELTS Writing task 1 - Pie chart about population rate
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|IELTS task 1 - comparing three types of food prices
8 - You should try some advance phrase to boost your LR score. For example, in the ovrall part, instead of...
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|[IELTS Writing Task 1] Australian and New Zealand children favourite activities in 2007
4 - I agree that the struture your essay was good and easy to understand. But I think it is better...
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|Erasmus Mundus Scholarship - Masters in Models and Methods of Quantitative Economics (QEM)
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 TOTAL WORLD OIL RESOURCES AND CONSUMPTION
2 - The foremost concern I have with this essay is the fact that you did not bother to spellcheck your...
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|Essay on the American identity and fast-food places with image analysis
2 - There are only 2 sections of this essay that I have a problem with. The first, is the introduction...
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|Peer Review Research paper titled: When are people more likely to dream?
2 - The first weakness that I see in this essay is the age of the literature being used. In order...
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. Give reasons and solutions
4 - One of the major mistakes that students make when writing these reason and solution essays is that they tend...
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|IELTS writing task 2 - the power of spoken communication
4 - You should state your own opinion "Do you agree or disagree" and if you agree, do you agree partially...
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|ietlswritask2 It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with parent
4 - sample introduction It is true that college education is certainly important in shaping a student's personality or helping them...
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|Neighbouring towns - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - MAP
4 - Hi I think your 'overall view' sentence is a bit short. e.g. Over the time period, while both areas...
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|Personal Statement- Education Administration major- KGSP
3 - Hello Holt Thank you very much for your kind advice, I truly appreciate it. It means a lot to...
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|Ielts: Provide help directly to the community or give money to charitable organizations.
2 - Please remember to provide a copy of the original prompt next time so that you can receive a more...
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|Master in Materials Science - Motivation and Plans
3 - @Holt Thank you for very much for your input! I will surely use your suggestions for a more solid...
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|Applying to the MAIA to be fully educated - SOP
3 - You cannot use any part of this essay for your statement of purpose. This will work as a personal...
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|WRITING ESSAY (500-700 words) - Discuss the drawbacks and benefits of stress
NEW - Topic: 'Some people regard stress as a significant threat to humans' physical health and recollection. Others, however, believe that...
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|Master in Translational Cosmetics and Dermatological Sciences Motivational Letter
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|IELTS Task 1 - the regularity of eating at fast food places among people in the USA (2003-2013)
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|Relevance of research to the development of my country
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|Admission Essay for Master of Health in Sweden
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your feedback. Actually, this is a Letter of Intent for master degree program....
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|Critical judgment of work from experts has little value - GRE
2 - There is a lack of clarity in some sentences that tend to hinder the message of the writer the...
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|Is better for kids to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than at secondary?
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