|IELTS writing practice test review - enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office
3 - Actually, your opening is too general, you need to specify it clearly. Which kinds of inquiries include??? Review grammar...
Writing Feedbackdaydreamer - May 17, 2021uyenmy0025 - May 31, 2021
|Personal statement - reason to take the specialization: boost my career vs problem to solve
2 - Neither. For the personal statement, you should show the progression of your interest leading into data science. The...
Graduateevita126 - May 30, 2021Holt - May 31, 2021
|IELTS Writing Task 1 - Amount of money spent by school and percentage of students getting passed
2 - After indicating the number of bar graphs, end the sentence. Follow it up with 2 separate sentences that...
Writing Feedbackfranklywritten - May 30, 2021Holt - May 31, 2021
|Geodata sciences - cover letter - applying for PhD Student Position
3 - I think it is of paramount importance to align your research interest with what the PhD program can offer....
LetterstechnoDevelopper - May 23, 2021ayuhutami - May 31, 2021
|Elevate Mental Health Awareness Scholarship
3 - In my opinion, the entire story has yet to justify your decision of becoming a nurse. I think it...
Scholarshipsjplumphippos - May 28, 2021ayuhutami - May 31, 2021
|Fossil fuel and renewable resources - IELTS task 2 essay
Writing Feedbacktatanh - May 27, 2021jane49 - May 30, 2021
|Australia Award Scholarship for Master of Architecture - proposed course and institution choice
2 - This is not a competitive presentation. You sound like you are writing a personal statement than a professional motivation....
Scholarshipjhatesnakeu - May 29, 2021Holt - May 30, 2021
|TOPIC: Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams
2 - For clarity and prompt adherence, you can state your opinion directly provided it will help show support for...
Writing FeedbackTranght - May 29, 2021Holt - May 30, 2021
|Vocational training is needed - there is lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers
2 - This shows the part of the discussion instruction that you did not understand. You are discussing the 2...
Writing Feedbackhuyn2511 - May 29, 2021Holt - May 30, 2021
|Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health
2 - The prompt for this essay falls under the 3 paragraph requirement based on the writing instruction "Discuss both points...
Writing Feedbackhoangmanhcuong - May 29, 2021Holt - May 30, 2021
|TASK2 Some countries have single-sex education models while in others mixed schools are prefered
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your advice but actually, the question is "discuss both views and give an...
Writing Feedbackjane49 - May 28, 2021jane49 - May 29, 2021
|IELTS - promoting hosting in a country
2 - There was never a reference to equestriane sports in the original prompt. Whatever compelled you to change the...
Writing FeedbackKakaka - May 28, 2021Holt - May 29, 2021
|IMSISS 2020 Personal Statement - Scholarship declined
2 - Please do not think or believe that you were not considered for the scholarship based on a weak motivation...
ScholarshipJourneyman - May 28, 2021Holt - May 29, 2021
|Erasmus Mundus Masters in Social Work for Children and Family
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|Writing task 2: People say that a country will benefit greatly if its students study abroad.
3 - =>> A nation can benefit from letting its students pursue education in an international environment. =>>...
Writing Feedbackwinxangle - May 28, 2021phuongtrang56780 - May 28, 2021
|Essay about the process of manufacturing tea bags
2 - The essay cannot be renewed - properly without the reference image. However, I can offer a brief review of...
Writing Feedbackyathh2k4 - May 28, 2021Holt - May 28, 2021
|IELTS task 1 - two charts demonstrating a research about adult education
3 - ''There are two charts demonstrating'' should be ''demonstrate'', cause it always demonstrates, not only at the moment You have...
Writing Feedbackphamhuong - May 22, 2021huen - May 28, 2021
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: THE NUMBER OF TRAVELLERS USING THREE LARGE BRITISH AIRPORTS
2 - Flag carriers are airlines. The reference points used are airports. Be careful with your references. You just created...
Writing Feedbackthaovy1405 - May 28, 2021Holt - May 28, 2021
|According to Confucius, education is a key to success
2 - You did not meet the 250 word requirement. When you do this during an actual test, this could garner...
Writing Feedbackuyenntunn02 - May 27, 2021Holt - May 28, 2021
|I've just seen a brilliant program about dolphins on television. Which program have you enjoyed?
2 - The first half of your essay is nothing but an unrelated information presentation. This is actually a statement response...
Writing Feedbacktmt2306 - May 27, 2021Holt - May 28, 2021
|The amount of money people in the US spend on mobile and landline phone calls and other services
2 - What? This reference has no meaning. Perhaps you mis-translated from your native tongue to English? This is why...
Writing Feedbackmih - May 27, 2021Holt - May 28, 2021
|Letter of Advice: Pamela Wilson is a freshman majoring in English. She needs a part-time job.
Lettersanniemit182 - May 27, 2021Holt - May 28, 2021
|Ielts writing task 2: The advances in agriculture and the increase in world hunger
2 - Be conscious of GRA requirements. You do not seem to be familiar with punctuation marks and howto use these....
Writing FeedbackGiang87 - May 27, 2021Holt - May 28, 2021
|The positive and negative effect of globalisation
2 - If, I am not mistaken, you have mis-analyzed the prompt. Based upon what I know of the original...
Writing Feedbackbo288144 - May 27, 2021Holt - May 28, 2021
|WHY DID YOU PROPOSED COURSE AND INSTITUTION - AAS MASTER OF PUBLIC HEALTH
5 - With what NGO or government entity? Cooperation with such groups early on shows that the studies connote a...
ScholarshipVi_Dar - May 27, 2021Holt - May 28, 2021
|South Korea is developed technologically - GKS-U Personal statement review
3 - @Holt Oh, sorry I didn't mentioned earlier but this essay is from last year's application. We were instructed to...
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|Australia Bureau of Meteorology - the ielts exam task
2 - What sort of diagram? Your identification is incomplete. It does not help the reader create a mental picture...
Writing FeedbackThienan2409 - May 27, 2021Holt - May 27, 2021
|Why some people can't success even if they have practiced hard
2 - Did you mean to use this presentation as a Task 2 essay or just for basic English writing practice?...
Writing FeedbackTsan - May 27, 2021Holt - May 27, 2021
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: how elderly people in the United States spent their free time
2 - Wrong time reference. The measurement represents 40 years or, if you want tobe more specific, 4 decades. Your...
Writing FeedbackMinhAnh111124 - May 27, 2021Holt - May 27, 2021
|IELTS writing task 1: The reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country
2 - Familiarize yourself with the task 1 images. These are all charts by default. The specific image name is...
Writing Feedbackquynhtam10 - May 26, 2021Holt - May 27, 2021