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2 - The essay is a relaxing read that covers all of the elements required in the discussion. However, I feel...
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3 - Maybe you can answer the question directly first and then explain your reason(s). For example: I am applying...
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2 - Kick off the essay with the Indonesia-Australia Cooperation Covid 19 Response plan first. That way you immediately catch the...
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2 - A reviewer will read this presentation and realize that there is nothing special about you. What you consider achievements...
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