|Airplanes - the revolution in transportation
4 - I think in terms of this independent essay, you're topic sentences are very clear in explaining how transportation has...
Writing FeedbackJana11 - Oct 24, 2019rachelmaddiee - Oct 25, 2019
|Write a short paragraph introducing your country's traditional food.
2 - I think you do a good job of introducing your country's traditional food in the paragraph. When comparing your...
Writing FeedbackThu Lee - Oct 24, 2019rachelmaddiee - Oct 25, 2019
|Topic: Many animals are facing extinction in the wild. Why is this happening? What protect them?
3 - Hi, I'd like to give you my opinions about your essay. First thing, I see you break your body...
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|Advertising - (write a thesis statement).
2 - Hi, there. I would rewrite your statement as below: There are different methods of advertisement are utilized in...
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|toefl essay: A large manufacturing plant in the neighbourhood
Writing Feedbackku3r - Oct 11, 2019ku3r - Oct 25, 2019
|Photography and African culture - Chevening Networking Essay review
ScholarshipTobechukwu - Oct 21, 2019Tobechukwu - Oct 25, 2019
|Framework for Businesss Leaders: Chevening Essay - Career Goals
2 - Good day, Your Essay is first of all vague, it is filled with intentions and less plans on how...
ScholarshipRSQL001 - Oct 24, 2019Tobechukwu - Oct 25, 2019
|Chevening Networking Essay - Networking has greatly helped my teaching career.
4 - @Maria As a teacher, being involved with quite a number of parents, going for workshops, symposia, inter-schools competition, among...
ScholarshipQuizzy - Oct 22, 2019Quizzy - Oct 24, 2019
|Chevening Essay - Career Plan. My career plan and how i plan achieving it.
3 - @Maria wow...thank you so much Maria. I really appreciate all these feedback. I will work on them and post...
ScholarshipQuizzy - Oct 23, 2019Quizzy - Oct 24, 2019
|Chevening Study in UK essay. Why I chose these Universities
4 - @Maria You have really been of great help. Thanks for the ideas you have given me to improve my...
ScholarshipQuizzy - Oct 23, 2019Quizzy - Oct 24, 2019
|Stanford students have a sense of intellectual vitality. Intellectually engaging idea or experience.
3 - More of an deep-insight-tip here, Stanford is prestigious for their weirdness and quirkiness, so you should try to make...
UndergraduateJKANG - Oct 22, 2019Tuguldurgnrdn - Oct 24, 2019
|Robot "02618" - Common App Essay (Setback/Failure) - Is it to cliche? Is it any good?
3 - Try to write like you talk. The descriptive writing you're going for is not working out that well for...
Undergraduateiswhars - Oct 22, 2019Tuguldurgnrdn - Oct 24, 2019
|Social and tech - I have a homework to write a paragraph about technology influence on kids
2 - Hello, I'd like to give you my opinions about your essay. You have to check your essay carefully....
Writing Feedbacktuduong - Oct 24, 2019Krystal318 - Oct 24, 2019
|Surviving Awkward Networking Experience - A Chevening Essay
Scholarshipndhnif - Oct 23, 2019RSQL001 - Oct 24, 2019
|Leadership is about helping a team reach a goal- Chevening Scholarship on Leadership
3 - Just like Maria said you should utilize the STAR principles when writing your essay. S - situation T -...
ScholarshipLawrencia169 - Oct 16, 2019RSQL001 - Oct 24, 2019
|Letter of motivation | Master's Degree in Sound and Music Computing ; UPF Barcelona
2 - @IValdivia Welcome to the forum. I'm going to evaluate and give feedback on this essay, and I hope this...
LettersIValdivia - Oct 23, 2019Maria - Oct 24, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - The closure of small local shops
2 - @Lallity Welcome to the forum! I hope that this feedback becomes beneficial for your writing. Hopefully, this will enhance...
Writing FeedbackLallity - Oct 23, 2019Maria - Oct 24, 2019
|Profession and academic background
2 - @Kibreab Welcome to the forum! I'm here to give you feedback on your writing. Hopefully, this will somehow help...
ScholarshipKibreab - Oct 23, 2019Maria - Oct 24, 2019
|Teamwork Theory Just discuss several theories of teamwork
2 - @Irenekiki Welcome to the forum. Hopefully, this feedback is helpful for you. Please do come again if you have...
Writing FeedbackIrenekiki - Oct 23, 2019Maria - Oct 24, 2019
|IELTS Cambridge 11 Task1 - CO2 emissions/person in the UK, Italy, Sweden and Portugal in 40 years
2 - @DAN770320 Hello! Welcome here. We appreciate new people coming in all the time. Next time, however, it would be...
Writing FeedbackDAN770320 - Oct 23, 2019Maria - Oct 24, 2019
|[IELTS Writing Part 1] Making coffee at industrial level - all the process described
2 - @chibib0 Hi there! We're glad you found the forum too. For now, I'll provide you with an extensive feedback...
Writing Feedbackchibib0 - Oct 22, 2019Maria - Oct 24, 2019
|The development of creative and cultural industries in Viet Nam - Chevening - Career Plan Essay
2 - @pionpt Hello there. Thanks for being in the forum! We'll be more than happy to assist you if you...
Scholarshippionpt - Oct 22, 2019Maria - Oct 24, 2019
|A Leader Without Title - Leadership Essay for Chevening
Scholarshipndhnif - Oct 22, 2019Maria - Oct 24, 2019
|The excelled student. Letter of Recommendation from my Principal for Scholarship application
2 - @HaiderAli Hi there! Welcome to the forum. Hopefully, this feedback will give you an idea on how to revise...
LettersHaiderAli - Oct 22, 2019Maria - Oct 24, 2019
|Teaching experience - Chevening Essay - Leadership and Influence
3 - You could focus more on the the "actions" or "situations" that made you exhibit true leadership skills. Overall it's...
ScholarshipQuizzy - Oct 22, 2019RSQL001 - Oct 24, 2019
|When my dog died - Most Significant challenge I faced - MIT Prompt
2 - @prmchpra7 Hello there! Good luck on your MIT application. I'm going to provide you with feedback on your writing....
Undergraduateprmchpra7 - Oct 22, 2019Maria - Oct 24, 2019
|My passion for aviation. Congressional Nominational Essay for Air force Academy
2 - @Bpriley1414 Welcome to the forum. I hope this feedback becomes beneficial for you! Please don't hesitate to approach us...
UndergraduateBpriley1414 - Oct 20, 2019Maria - Oct 23, 2019
|The chart bellow shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables
2 - @amanda shao Your second paragraph must be well punctuated to give clear understanding of the vital information you are...
Writing Feedbackamanda shao - Oct 22, 2019Quizzy - Oct 23, 2019
|Essay about the importance of computers over the last hundred years.
2 - @Volpe99 In your second paragraph, ad should rather be and Just think that many universities offer degree courses online!...
Writing FeedbackVolpe99 - Oct 23, 2019Quizzy - Oct 23, 2019
|Bike ride - A story from your life which could illustrate your character
2 - @thfdlrla Taking a first example by you learning to ride a bike, I think it's good move. Learning...
Undergraduatethfdlrla - Oct 23, 2019ndhnif - Oct 23, 2019