|"Today many people are spending less and less time at home". What are the reasons and effects?
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|Personal Statement for MSc of Statistics and Data Science at University of KU Leuven
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|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Celebrities' viewpoints on a wide range of matters
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|SCHOLARSHIP or Graduate ASSistance STATEMENT OF PURPOSE IN MASTER IN MATERIAL SCIENCE AND ENGINERING
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|New technologies have changed the way children spend their time
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|The line graph illustrates the number of tourists travelling to an Caribbean island (2010 to 2017)
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|Reason for choosing your program and Waterloo- AIF form Math (Financial Analysis/Risk Management)
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|WRITING TASK 2 - should phones be forbidden for youngsters during the school time?
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|lELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Televised trials shared in public
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|Applying for nursing school and would like others to read my short answer response.
2 - Please clarify, are you already working as a nurse or in a related field ? This statement could...
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|Companies use a variety of methods to improve the sales of their products. What are those methods?
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|Many people argue that rather than reducing climate change, we should find a way to adapt to it
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|Apply MSc finance programme in Trinity College Dublin
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|WRITING TASK 2: INTERNATIONAL SUPPORT FROM INTERNATIONAL COMMUNITY FOR LESS DEVELOPED COUNTRIES
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|Statement of Purpose for masters program in Computer Science in the USA - Review request
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|Ielts graph about gold sales in Dubai during the year of 2002
2 - The currency of sales needs to be mentioned in the summary overview. As the writer, you need to let...
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|Some people say that physical education classes are an important part of a child's education. Others
2 - When using the 2 paragraph format for this comparative discussion, you must provide your point of view for each...
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|In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the govern
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|How Covid-19 have negative impact on my 12th marks
3 - Thank you Mr. Holt, I changed it a little bit ,pl. comment There was anxiety in the environment,...
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|IELTS TASK 2: Youngsters have problems but the government ignores this. Give solve problems?
4 - 'Adult in the house impose children their ...' This sentence is quite confusing, maybe due to the grammatical...
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|Grammar/Writing Techniques Cultural Competence in Healthcare as it Relates to the LGBTQ+ Community
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|Personal Statement for MSc in Data Science at University of Michigan
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|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Negative effects of fast food
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|IELTS Task 2: Advantages and Disadvantages of consuming organic food
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|The given bar chart illustrates the number of people visiting four certain museums in London
2 - The 4 museums have reference names in the chart. For summary compliance , you have to mention the...
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|Vietnamese blockbusters and Hollywood blockbusters
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|TRAFFIC CONGESTION IS BECOMING INCREASINGLY PROBLEMATIC IN MAJOR CITIES. WHAT ARE THE CAUSES?
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|Task 2 question: Some people believe it would be better to build houses in existing towns....
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|ESSAY - Failure and desire. It is believed that failure is the consequence of ambitions shortage
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|Writing task 1: The bar chart below shows the number of visitors to four London museums.
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