|[ IELTS 2] Should animal experiments be banned or not, because they are benefitial to humanity?
3 - You almost got the 4 paragraph presentation for this discussion correct. There are 2 errors in the presentation that...
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|Individuals working hard get paid less in comparison to highly qualified in companies. Do you agree?
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|International travelling brings more advantages than domestic traveling because ...
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|People have freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication..
5 - @Holt Thank you for your thorough feedback. In my opinion, the question of this task requires us to discuss...
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|Influencing people - Leadership Chevening essay
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|Passenger activity of Toronto metro system
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|Describing my leadership and influencing skills to make an effective essay for Chevening application
2 - Okay, remove the reference to your teacher position. It is not a real leadership position because you are referencing...
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|A large number of animal species are likely to be extinct as human activities affect their habitats
5 - @dinhquynhmai Thank you for your advice a lot.I will try to write better and take care of my weak...
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|The pie charts compare the amount of energy taken from five different sources in the US (1980-1990)
4 - You should be combining your trending statement with the rest of the summary overview for a far more effective...
Writing Feedbackbanhbaooo03 - Jul 23, 2020Holt - Jul 23, 2020
|Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good...
2 - I will not be scoring this essay because the discussion format is incorrect. I believe this is your first...
Writing Feedbackjhhh11 - Jul 22, 2020Holt - Jul 22, 2020
|Diagrams depict how to make cement and the way cement is used in concrete production
3 - Try to be more specific with your image descriptions. Don't just call these diagrams. Describe these as "illustrative diagrams"...
Writing Feedbackbuiquynhhuong - Jul 21, 2020Holt - Jul 22, 2020
|IS IT BETTER TO HAVE A LONGER LIFE AND HIGH LIFE EXPECTANCY?
3 - You should try to change the words used in your prompt restatement from the original. If the original says...
Writing Feedbackmonica0407 - Jul 21, 2020Holt - Jul 22, 2020
|Is sport nothing more than a leisure activity?
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|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] The world is heavily dependent on oil for energy
2 - Your essay has too many words. You should practice being direct to the point and not being over analytical...
Writing FeedbackWoxic_145 - Jul 22, 2020Holt - Jul 22, 2020
|COVID 19 has changed the world in many ways. Share your views about it.
EssaysPreeti gupta - Jul 22, 2020Holt - Jul 22, 2020
|Concerning Chevening personal statement/essay - essays written separately 500 words each?
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|Physical or mental condition? A more crucial factor contributing to the success of a sports player
3 - Maybe your body one is kind of short, and I couldn't clearly see the main point in your passage....
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|It is suggested that adolescents should work in their spare time to benefit society
5 - Maybe you could try this way: It is suggested that adolescents should work in their spare time to...
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|Oversea traveling has become significantly popular - advantages and disadvantages to the community
3 - You did not properly deliver the restated prompt requirement. Although, you gave relevant reasoning topics in the discussion paragraph....
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|There's an increasing number of people who choose to delay childbirth due to several reasons
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|IELTS SPEAKING PART 2 - Describe a job you would not like to do in the future
4 - The job is called singing, and the person doing the job of singing is called a singer. Use the...
Writing FeedbackVictor Nguyen - Jul 20, 2020Holt - Jul 21, 2020
|The chart shows the sales revenue in dollars at three branches of a bank in the first quarter - 2000
3 - @Holt thank you so much! Your review has been really helpful to me since you not only corrected me...
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|What are the reasons for bigger wage for celebrities than politicians? Evaluate this development.
3 - @keithkwan14 Personally, I think your topic sentence for the second paragraph doesn't give a clear overview: Firstly, politicians are...
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|Creativity should be used as the only true measure of intelligence - GRE Issue
2 - You discussed this essay from a singular point of view. You focused only on the defense of your position...
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|It is believed that salary is the most important priority when choosing a job. I partially agree.
5 - There is a problem with the exam takers who insist on taking a "partly" stance in the given discussion....
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|The information on coffee and tea consumption and interest in drinks in 5 Australian cities
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|THE GRAPHS BELOW SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF DIFFERENT ELEMENTS IN THREE TYPES OF DIETS
4 - The paragraph splits are not proper and there is no coherency in the essay. Better transition will help the...
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|KGSP scholarship - I should not overlook this opportunity
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|Compare the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales; IELTS 1
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|Response to the recommendation from the Board of Directors of Monarch Books
2 - Amazing! I do believe that you have written a 5 scoring essay response here. Although there are some problems...
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