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2 - @hoanglinh0510 Hey, welcome. As I always tell others, I hope this feedback becomes helpful for you. Don't hesitate to...
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|Who should be responsible for teaching children good manners: school or family?
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|Life has become more stressful. As a result, stress-related illnesses are on the increase
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|In the past museums stored information about culture and history. Nowadays everything is online.
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|Holiday in Vietnam - writing ielts 4.5
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|Writing Ielts - Chart about the figure for urban people in developed regions and developing regions
2 - @Estelle133 Hi, there. I would like to advise you some tips about your IELTS writing. 1. Be careful...
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|The unemployment level in Australia 2012 (IELTS Writing Task 1)
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|Personal Statement (KGSP Undergraduate application) - Motivations, background, experiences...
4 - Hai! I've made a revised version. would you mind giving your opinion on what is lacking and what...
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|Writing IELTS Task 1/Bar chart/ Economic sectors in the UK in the 20th century
2 - The bar graph compares the percentages of each of three sectors contributed in Britain economy from 1900 to 2000.Overall,...
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|Teaching job - time in your life when you had difficulty making an important decision. CBEST
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|SOP/Motivation Letter for PhD in Environmental Economics
3 - @Maria - Thanks for response. I am new to this forum and not aware about the policy. Posting the...
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|Environmental problem and increasing the price of fuel
3 - You have some good points. I have few observations- Avoid so many long sentences. Secondly, always make each topic...
Writing Feedbackpleiziii - Sep 13, 2019Norbsidy - Sep 19, 2019
|Nomination essay (As a language enthusiast) // preservation of Language
3 - @Maria Thank you maria for the response. Can you be specific about what you have said ? 'Because of...
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|TOEFL - What to do if the teacher of meeting leader says something incorrect
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|Humanitarian club - leadership and influencing skills to prove that you're a good leader
2 - First I think you should be very proud of what you've accomplished; it's difficult to find things to write...
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|Describe problems connected with overpopulation and propose resolutions to this issue
2 - @longpm2k Hi longpm2k! I'm not an expert, so please just ignore if my advice doesn't actually help... I think...
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|Is the space exploring just money and energy waste?
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|KGSP undergraduate - International Relations Scholarship in South Korea
3 - Dear @ochanlebong7 The reason I wrote about it, was because I want the judges to know I have what...
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|UC Personal Insight Question #2: Every person has a creative side...
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|Write about a person who has made a meaningful impact on you. Hasan Minhaj.
2 - @quavius Hey there. I'll be providing you with feedback on this essay - no worries! I hope that you...
Undergraduatequavius - Sep 17, 2019Maria - Sep 18, 2019
|Charles Dickens' lengthy complex sentence
2 - @charlesthefirst Welcome here! If you appreciate and enjoy the forum, don't hesitate to continuously come back. To answer...
Grammar, Usagecharlesthefirst - Sep 18, 2019Maria - Sep 18, 2019
|Efficiency of human with respect to social class (Common app essay)
2 - @Browny Welcome, Browny! I hope you have been lurking around and enjoying what we offer in this site. If...
UndergraduateBrowny - Sep 17, 2019Maria - Sep 18, 2019
|IGNORANCE OF THE LAW EXCUSES NO ONE: AN OFFICIAL EXPOSE
2 - @REXLEGISSTANLEY Hi there. Welcome to the forum! I hope that this feedback serves you well in the future. If...
Research PapersREXLEGISSTANLEY - Sep 17, 2019Maria - Sep 18, 2019
|ENGL102 - Visual Analysis Paper (Twin Adventurers)
3 - The paper's assignment was a Descriptive Analysis project on two pictures. We could use paintings, photographs, or digital images....
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|Study Plan for learning language for KGSP Undergraduate Program - before and after entry
3 - thank youu...
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|One change in the college experience
3 - @chuckmane Thank you for your feed back. Will work on elaborating the idea of how I could have improved...
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|My internship - PTCAS PERSONAL STATEMENT ESSAY CRITIQUE - a meaningful experience and its influence
4 - your personal statement is spot on, it was coherent and easy to follow, my only criticism is you added...
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|Statement of Purpose for Schwarzman Scholarship
4 - @Alasa505 one of my mentors told me, don't repeat the things which you can reflect in your CV...
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|My passion in Politics and International Relations, GKS Personal Statement
3 - @Maria Hi, thank you for your helping. your assistance to give me a feed was really essential for me....
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