|People buy a range of household goods ( positive or negative development? )
3 - There is a slight inconsistency here. You stated in the introduction paragraph that "the drawbacks significantly outweigh the benefits."...
Writing Feedbackalice05 - Jul 15, 2022Minhhh2005 - Jul 16, 2022
|IELTS TASK 1 | The graph shows the average Japanese month salary, and the prices of different TVs
3 - Your essay is really too long for IELTS writing task 1, which only requires at least 150 words. You...
Writing Feedbackanhhkia - Jul 15, 2022Minhhh2005 - Jul 16, 2022
|Computers enable people to be able to work at home and children to study at home.
2 - Do not begin the opinion discussion in the first paragraph. While the writer believes he merely restated the prompt,...
Writing Feedbackjjgenius - Jul 15, 2022Holt - Jul 15, 2022
|Causes of a rising tendency of youngsters committing crimes in large cities. What can be done?
2 - The paraphrasing attempt of the writer is definitely successful. It stayed focused on the topic without adding or removing...
Writing Feedbackthehappyapple - Jul 14, 2022Holt - Jul 15, 2022
|Increasing the minimum legal age for driving is the best way to increase road safe
3 - @trlinh Hi I just have grammar corrections in your essay 1. "To illustrate, 60% patients' case ...". This should...
Writing Feedbacktrlinh - Jul 13, 2022alice05 - Jul 15, 2022
|Allocate money in railway lines or existing public transport. Discuss both view give opinion
2 - The essay is too wordy for a task that needs to be completed within 40 minutes. This should not...
Writing Feedbackthienduc2312 - Jul 14, 2022Holt - Jul 14, 2022
|IB STUDENT SMU REJECTION APPEAL (DRAFT 1) for Bachelor of Business Management and BSc Economics
2 - Please do not blatantly ask for a reassessment of your application. It is not going to sit well with...
Undergraduateavocado1509 - Jul 14, 2022Holt - Jul 14, 2022
|An essay about sport (discuss both views)
2 - Do not include a personal opinion statement at the start of the paraphrase. This opinion should not be included...
Writing FeedbackCurtistran - Jul 14, 2022Holt - Jul 14, 2022
|MANY MUSEUMS CHARGE FOR ADMISSION WHILE OTHERS ARE FREE. PROS OF FEES OUTWEIGH CONS?
2 - The writer had an almost correct approach to the discussion. The examiner will not be against his providing a...
Writing Feedbackphuongoanh476 - Jul 13, 2022Holt - Jul 13, 2022
|The most effective ways to deal with environmental problems
4 - This essay hasn't met the task response yet (the effective way to deal with environmental problems), there is no...
Writing Feedbackstellamnj - Jul 5, 2022phuongoanh476 - Jul 13, 2022
|The two pie charts illustrate how different kinds of waste released in one country (1960 - 2011)
2 - The topic restatement based on the existing images is insufficient in terms of reference. Yes, the number of images...
Writing Feedbackyentk - Jul 13, 2022Holt - Jul 13, 2022
|The 911 call. How did you manage the situation when something didn't go according to plan?
3 - Im being honest that this story did happen to me and also I don't get by character development. The...
Undergraduatefghibban - Jul 12, 2022fghibban - Jul 12, 2022
|The graph & chart give information and forecast about the vehicle and CO2 emission (England, Wales)
2 - The writer has not made an effort to provide a complete summary and analysis of the 2 images. Had...
Writing Feedbackkachyy - Jul 12, 2022Holt - Jul 12, 2022
|Pop stars earn much more than classical music performers. Some people think this is fully justified
2 - The word usage of the writer tends to be on the side of incorrect usage. Specifically,the use of the...
Writing FeedbackIwilltrymybest - Jul 12, 2022Holt - Jul 12, 2022
|Nowadays fashion plays an important role when people are deciding which clothes to wear
4 - you should divide the essay more appropriately, the introduction and the conclusion are too short compared to the body...
Writing Feedbackmiccc - Jul 9, 2022ashleyhoang - Jul 12, 2022
|Students learn what they like or study subjects that are useful for their future? Discuss both views
2 - The essay failed to pass the test the very minute the irrelevant prompt restatement and opinion sentence was presented...
Writing Feedbackphuongoanh476 - Jul 11, 2022Holt - Jul 11, 2022
|News media are important in modern society. Why are they so important?
2 - The writer has misunderstood the discussion question. This lack of proper question perception led to both a wrong opinion...
Writing Feedbackhellowdefrgtyj - Jul 11, 2022Holt - Jul 11, 2022
|Question about the benefits of universities. It is a topic for IELTS Writing Task 2.
3 - The third paragraph did not fully answer the second question. In the third paragraph, you only mentioned the benefits...
Writing Feedbackkenny311006 - Jul 5, 2022camtu0502 - Jul 11, 2022
|Study Plan for Canadian Study Permit - Art, Creation and Technology Program
2 - The study plan could use more educational background reference. It would help reinforce the idea that the applicant is...
Letterstxmdd - Jul 11, 2022Holt - Jul 11, 2022
|"Not everything that is learned is contained in books" the quote perfectly reflects my point of view
2 - A TOEFL test does not require a flowery and empty topic restatement. What sets it apart from the IELTS...
Writing FeedbackJnar - Jul 10, 2022Holt - Jul 10, 2022
|Should countries be given a right to interfere in other countries' internal affairs?
2 - There is no need to overstate the discussion topic in the task 2 essay. The examiner is just looking...
Writing FeedbackPham Bien - Jul 10, 2022Holt - Jul 10, 2022
|Whether or not the parents are the best teachers has been long discussed dilemma
3 - On the surface ur essay maynot meet length requirement of Ielts writing, even though i havent counted it yet....
Writing Feedbackuser999 - Jul 10, 2022Pham Bien - Jul 10, 2022
|Writing task 2; Which institution should be responsible for solving the housing shortage?
3 - perhaps I see your essay is not long enough. Try to use more supporting sentence to consolidate your opinion....
Writing FeedbackQuybao013 - Jul 9, 2022Hungneverlose - Jul 10, 2022
|Opinion: the ultimate time for children to commence their formal schooling is as soon as possible
Writing FeedbackHungneverlose - Jul 9, 2022Hungneverlose - Jul 10, 2022
|GKS undergraduate - personal statement, graphic design field
2 - The essay only covers the motivational aspect of your course of interest. It goes on to explaining how Korea...
UndergraduateFatimaGar - Jul 10, 2022Holt - Jul 10, 2022
|The tendency of replacing conventional classrooms by virtual ones
Writing FeedbackThuy Tran 07 - Jul 9, 2022Thuy Tran 07 - Jul 10, 2022
|Draft Peer Review "Students need a voice"
2 - Proofread the content of the essay. There is no "mist amendment". Even as a draft the essay must contain...
Research Paperscyber serpent - Jul 9, 2022Holt - Jul 10, 2022
|To Study in Romania - Motivation letter for Romanian Government Scholarship
2 - The application cycle for this scholarship is currently closed. I am not sure why you are preparing a motivational...
Lettersendlerviena - Jul 9, 2022Holt - Jul 9, 2022
|Students in UK at a university who were able to speak additional languages to their native language
2 - The summary overview is confusing. It is difficult to understand the information because of problems with sentence clarity and...
Writing Feedbackkimmiez - Jul 9, 2022Holt - Jul 9, 2022
|Charity in the USA - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - PIE CHARTS
2 - The summary is not as accurate as it could be. Some incorrect information was provided that reduced the authority...
Writing Feedbackjoeynguyen181 - Jul 9, 2022Holt - Jul 9, 2022