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Masters of science in Agriculture and food security

2 - You need to revise this essay. There should be 2 university choices presented. Either 2 universities with the same...

ScholarshipOlinga Stephen - Mar 3, 2024Holt - Mar 7, 2024
Unrestricted fresh water usage - IELTS task 2

2 - There is no need to indicate this part. You already stated that this is your opinion. It is...

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Maritime and Logistics Management; how will the proposed study contribute to your career

3 - I have a goal or ambition of becoming a freight forwarder and I believe keenly that the proposed study...

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The Advantages and Disadvantages of Nuclear Energy

2 - The research paper had a very clear start and offered an exciting promise for the information to be presented....

Research Papersbamzooks - Mar 2, 2024Holt - Mar 6, 2024
The Crucial Role of School in Shaping Lives

2 - As an essay writing guide or outline, I would have to say that this bullet listing works well. It...

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IELTS writing task 2 - Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning...

2 - You are not providing a thesis statement as required in this paragraph. You must provide the reason for...

Writing FeedbackAlbyMan - Mar 1, 2024Holt - Mar 6, 2024
IELTS Wrinting Tast1: The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in...

2 - You need to create a better summary overview. Follow the required 3-5 sentence format for that section to achieve...

Writing Feedbackdravenliao - Mar 1, 2024Holt - Mar 6, 2024
IELTS writing task 2: personal info online

2 - The prompt restatement is barely related to the original prompt. This will be judged to be unrelated to the...

Writing Feedbackalex83 - Mar 1, 2024Holt - Mar 6, 2024
Tet holiday is believe to be the most favourite one among Vietnamese people

2 - As an English writing exercise, I appreciate the efforts you have placed into the writing of this short essay....

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Freight forwarder - Why did you choose proposed course and institution - AAS

2 - The reviewer is not interested in the story of corruption in your country. He is interested in the reasons...

ScholarshipAroma - Feb 29, 2024Holt - Mar 5, 2024
3. The pie charts show the results of a survey in which undergraduates and postgraduates were asked

2 - The summary overview and trending statement are clear and quite strong in this case. The comprehensive presentation of these...

Writing Feedbackmannhi113 - Feb 28, 2024Holt - Mar 5, 2024
IELTS Writing task 2: "In many countries, the fast fashion industry has gained significant ..."

3 - @maidong You should address at least 2 problems and propose a solution that relates to fast fashion. In this...

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Computers are becoming an essential part of education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

3 - @phuongstella You should further explain your first point before jumping to the next one. Be specific about it. Each...

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IELTS Writing task 2: More and more people are becoming seriously overweight.

4 - @sophiemoore62 When one is thinking, one is considering all options and uncertain of the correct response. That is why...

Writing Feedbackcaohuyen93 - Feb 15, 2024Holt - Mar 1, 2024
NTU Personal Statement Essay - Skills or experiences that are relevant to the programmes applied for

2 - I think there is not enough passion displayed in this essay because of the mix and match approach you...

Undergraduatekneesbees - Feb 28, 2024Holt - Mar 1, 2024
secondary students believe that a university degree is the only passport to later success in life

3 - Please Grape, you have done well in giving an explicit explanation to both side of the argument but you...

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Writing task 1: The line graph and table show the average monthly temperatures and annual hours

3 - I think this can be shortened into just one sentence and you should only mention the most significant...

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IELTS Writing task 2. Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication.

3 - @Miyu2k7 if you often cause misunderstanding in your writing, I think it's best to state your opinion about whether...

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2_ ENVIRONMENT

3 - @phuongmai123 I think generally you shouldn't ask questions in an IELTS writing task 2. Each body paragraph should contain...

Writing Feedbackphuongmai123 - Feb 26, 2024sophiemoore62 - Feb 29, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university...

3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback! I understand....

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Personal statement as a medical scholar undergraduate gks

3 - @Holt Thanks so much sir I will amend my mistakes...

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ut austin transfer for mechanical engineer

3 - @Holt Sorry, there was supposed to be a quotation at the start, I forgot to add it. "Here comes...

Undergraduateymahdy - Feb 19, 2024ymahdy - Feb 27, 2024
202x GKS U - Personal Statement (University Track - Physical Therapy)

2 - The first thing I will advise you to do is write a totally new essay. Do not rehash your...

Scholarshipstarshineanon - Feb 27, 2024Holt - Feb 27, 2024
A leader of people - a short essay on a subject of personal importance to you

2 - The essay has room for improvement. For example, you should have had an expanded discussion regarding how you ended...

ScholarshipXUANHUA - Feb 26, 2024Holt - Feb 27, 2024
Engineering Project Management - skills and knowledge do you hope to gain from your study programme

4 - Please, your essay is full of ambiguity; be specific and give practical examples on how you will use the...

Scholarshipraihandimasm - Feb 16, 2024Aroma - Feb 27, 2024
GKS essay - biology/bioengineering

2 - Which type of GKS application did you write this for? Undergraduate? Masters? Doctoral? It will be difficult for me...

UndergraduateFredd1k - Feb 25, 2024Holt - Feb 27, 2024
IELTS Writing Task 2: Some people think children should start school at a very early age

2 - There is a lack of proper comparison discussion in this compare and contrast + personal opinion essay. The writing...

Writing Feedbackvuduyan8 - Feb 25, 2024Holt - Feb 27, 2024
Writing task 2 : Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal.

2 - You cannot use a conjunction to start a sentence since there are no words, phrases, or clauses to...

Writing FeedbackSandra Charloote - Feb 25, 2024Holt - Feb 27, 2024
EPFL Master's program in Applied Mathematics Statement of Purpose

2 - Since you are applying for a masters degree course, it will be best to highlight your college education, work...

Graduatevalg01 - Feb 24, 2024Holt - Feb 27, 2024
Design in Architecture - AAS Scholarship - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?

3 - you should more focus on connecting your academic background/professional experience to your motivation on choosing the course and major...

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