|Should the government control the salaries and limit money people earn.
3 - Anh, the score for this essay will be a 4. You only responded to the personal opinion side. There...
Writing Feedbackaley anhnguyenHolt - Mar 31, 2018
|IELTS ESSAY: REWARD STUDENTS WHO SHOW THE BEST RESULTS OR THOSE WHO SHOW IMPROVEMENTS
3 - Bao, this essay will gain you a final score of 4 due to the tangential discussion that you provided...
Writing FeedbackBaoanhHolt - Mar 31, 2018
|Should scientific research, business and the academic information be shared freely or not?
3 - Michelle, it will be useless for me to point out the scoring errors that you made in this essay...
Writing FeedbackemryshardingHolt - Mar 31, 2018
|IELTS test one - why students study and how much support do they get
6 - Kiki, your first statement is insufficient. It must be a proper representation of the information included in the original...
Writing FeedbackkikiyiuHolt - Mar 31, 2018
|IELTS Essay Some people think that having a set retirement age (65 years) for everybody is unfair
Writing Feedbacknanc90Holt - Mar 31, 2018
|People have a tendency to think that Art and music are too trivial compared to others subjects
Writing Feedbackyuletideyuletide - Mar 31, 2018
|Workshop about creating lesson material through e-module application - solving a challenge essay
3 - Rini, there should not be any reference to "we" in this essay because the focal point of the discussion...
Scholarshipavatar22Holt - Mar 31, 2018
|IELTS Writing Test - Does the coverage of sport on television discourage teenagers from exercise?
3 - This corrections might be useful ; This is suggestions ; discouragement from / to young adults the pressure...
Writing FeedbackNancy Huangabang yoga - Mar 31, 2018
|Personal Statement for Erasmus : Global Markets, Local Creativities Programme
Scholarshipssaadpashassaadpasha - Mar 30, 2018
|TOEFL independent writing - a better life with an undergraduate degree or a master degree?
2 - Hi, I think your writing is not too bad, but your essay needs a better introduction and conclusion. You...
Writing Feedbackanchitang0321TJLuschen - Mar 29, 2018
|Common wealth Benefits to Uganda: for Msc Food Tech and Quality Assurance at Reading University
2 - Claire, try to be more precise about how your studies at this university tie in with the Commonwealth Benefits...
ScholarshipKregHolt - Mar 29, 2018
|Applying for MSc in Finance Program in the National University of Singapore
3 - Laras, the problem with your presentation is that the motivation aspect of your presentation is not strong enough. The...
Graduateviolet96Holt - Mar 29, 2018
|IELTS: pollution and traffic growth - higher gas price as the obvious solution?
5 - Hi Amalia Hanifah, it is glad to see your writing here. So, you will get a number of feedbacks...
Writing Feedbackamalianhanifahfadlanmuzakki - Mar 27, 2018
|Colleges and universities have to enroll the same numbers of students in both genders in all subject
Writing Feedbackkikiyiukikiyiu - Mar 27, 2018
|Sharing information in a variety of fields freely
3 - Thank you so much for your reply!! I think maybe I misunderstood the topic. I will rewrite it...
Writing Feedbackyakoeyakoe - Mar 27, 2018
|Space travel vs environment problems? which one is important? PTE
2 - Hey! You have a good essay. Nice use of vocabulary and your ideas are put well together. There...
Writing FeedbackPeterBrownDoctorWho - Mar 26, 2018
|IELTS writing task 2: In your opinion, what has been the most significant transportation...
Writing FeedbackNKNam123NKNam123 - Mar 26, 2018
|The average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000
Writing Feedbackhuonggizahuonggiza - Mar 26, 2018
|Technological advances significantly change the way we live, which includes communication
5 - at the beginning I was not very sure whether this instruction "In what ways has technology affected the...
Writing FeedbackPhucnguyenPhucnguyen - Mar 26, 2018
|It is only a matter of time before teachers are replaced by technology in the classroom.
4 - In addition to what others have said, I believe that each paragraph must contain at least three sentences which...
Writing FeedbackharryhoangvnPeterBrown - Mar 26, 2018
|How your personal background has encouraged you to contribute to development in your country?
2 - Alao, you need to be less flowery with your presentation and more informational in content. You have to build...
ScholarshipAlao0702Holt - Mar 26, 2018
|Explain how your proposed study relates to a development need in your sector and country
2 - Alao, paragraph 2 doesn't help to move the essay forward. It does not really say anything of value and...
ScholarshipAlao0702Holt - Mar 26, 2018
|Higher taxes should be collected from industries causing higher industrial pollution?
3 - Anh, your opening statement is not a paraphrase of the original prompt, this means a failing score in the...
Writing Feedbackanhtho1412Holt - Mar 26, 2018
|Motivational letter to Bocconi University
NEW - Hi guys, I am applying to BSc program at Bocconi University in Italty. Could you have a look...
|Problem with water resources in Nigeria. Home Country Benefit Commonwealth
3 - @Holt thank you very much for your contribution. I have noted the errors, I will do the corrections...
ScholarshipEmcee_huckzEmcee_huckz - Mar 26, 2018
|Do the disadvantages of using e-mail surpass the advantages?
4 - Kavan, your response is inaccurate. This is a comparison of opinion discussion. Since you are being asked to weigh...
Writing FeedbackquocvietHolt - Mar 26, 2018
|"Find what you love and love it deeply" - Public administration statement of purpose
3 - Valentina, your statement of purpose actually lacks a purpose because you did not focus on a proper academic and...
GraduateValas177zHolt - Mar 26, 2018
|Studying a new yet similar branch to my previous one - motivation letter
4 - Mohammed, since I advised you to keep the letter down to the more appropriate 4 paragraphs, it would be...
UndergraduateheshammmHolt - Mar 26, 2018
|Which type of accomodation is best? Advantages of apartment living overweight house's disadvantages.
3 - spacious any hobby (any + singular) houses are considered as to be more advantageous In conclusion/To conclude, it...
Writing FeedbackSTAsumomoakiko - Mar 25, 2018
|Sharing confidential information for free and for everyone?
Writing Feedbackdimasnrwfadlanmuzakki - Mar 25, 2018