Holt Educational Consultant
Dec 23, 2016
Undergraduate / Why Tufts: On religions and compassions [26]
Okay, we now have the first paragraph perfectly written. At least, as far as I am concerned. I hope you feel the same way. Now, for the second paragraph. We need one more sentence to tie it up in a nice little bow. Just to close the paragraph. How would you like to close it? I have the following in mind as a potential closing sentence for your essay:
... political correctness. The very same traits that I try to promote as often as possible in my everyday life. These are the reasons why I chose Tufts.
You may have a different idea as to how you want to close the paragraph. I am open to reading it. This is the final step that we have to complete so that we can declare this statement ready to submit. If I find your suggestion applicable enough, I'll give it a like so that you will know that my opinion is that the essay is finally ready to submit.
Okay, we now have the first paragraph perfectly written. At least, as far as I am concerned. I hope you feel the same way. Now, for the second paragraph. We need one more sentence to tie it up in a nice little bow. Just to close the paragraph. How would you like to close it? I have the following in mind as a potential closing sentence for your essay:
... political correctness. The very same traits that I try to promote as often as possible in my everyday life. These are the reasons why I chose Tufts.
You may have a different idea as to how you want to close the paragraph. I am open to reading it. This is the final step that we have to complete so that we can declare this statement ready to submit. If I find your suggestion applicable enough, I'll give it a like so that you will know that my opinion is that the essay is finally ready to submit.