Letters / Three years ago I was just a girl; Letter for requesting a scholarship [6]

Hi everyone
please give me some feed back regarding this letter...

I would like you to know that I appreciate the help and support you have showered on me from past four years. With your support and help, you have indeed made a difference in my life.

I wanted to thank you from depth of my heart for changing my life and attitude towards life.

Three years ago I was just an -------girl, but now I feel, I am not only a girl, but I am a responsible member of this society and a responsible human being.

I feel proud to b called as Josephite, attending College liberated me and allowed me to not only explore a wider array of subjects, including Math's, Accounts and business but also explored myself. And exposed to different types of societies. I grew into a strong independent woman.

A sense of responsibility, attitude, dedication and commitment has arisen within me; this could happen only after studying in such an esteemed college.

These developments were aided by JRS and especially you.
Abundant of thanks to you "Father"

I have already discussed with you about my sister ( ----------).
She is particularly interested in studying Computer Application offered in St. Joseph College of Art & Science., I believe that studying in St. Joseph College of Art & Science would deepen her understanding of not only the language, but of the culture, the people, and their history.

She is an open-minded and friendly person who is interested in international aspects and inter-cultural relations. Especially her friends and classmates, describe her as a team player who cares about her group members. She is ambitious and likes to handle challenging tasks and to take the responsibility for it, Thus she has taken a rigorous curriculum and maintained I and II grade in school.

College is a time for new and exciting experiences as well as a time to explore diverse and innovative ideas. What could be better than traveling to a foreign country to learn about their ideas, history, and culture? I believe studying abroad is something that every college student should do to help to avoid ethnocentrism, to expand their horizons, and to appreciate everything the world has to offer.

Here is an undeniable advantage of living and studying in India, Not only she will learn about India, but she will also come to appreciate other countries in the world from a different point of view. She will be able to apply her new-found knowledge to her entire life and the way she looks at the world around her. What could be more exciting than that?

Academically, it is very important to her that she continues studying in India. Going to India gives her the chance to learn in a different and higher standard environment, and I do not think there is any better way to internalize a language and develop fluency.

She would enjoy studying at St. Joseph college of Art & Science which has a high proportion of international students. It is possible to get to know people from more than one country. In normal circumstance, this would require a world tour. Furthermore, she is keen on looking beyond her own nose to learn from other nationalities and cultures. She is looking forward to receiving the opportunity to study at St. Joseph college of Art & Science and to make a great contribution to the college community and the world at large.

Dear Father!
I experienced the difference in education system of India and Afghanistan; it is very much obvious that it Afghanistan universities are lower than the world standard.

You are aware of current political and educational obstacles in Afghanistan, Getting a seat in her desired subject by way of Kankor exam is something impossible for my sister due to the corrupt situation of my country and studying in private colleges costs more than a middleclass family's turnover. Moreover; Sahar is very much interested to be as Josephite like her elder sister and have the social exposure.

Sahar will finish her 12th Standard by end of November; she has got A+ or O grad so far,
She is good in mathematics and science subjects, she attends English classes in the morning too.
Dear Father!
Behind the strong desire to learn. I hope that she completes her Bachelor's degree over the next years. And she would learn to evaluate life and her experience. It's through that, that I hope she become an instrumental member of society, using all of her energies to bring about constructive change and create a path to the "good life," not only for herself but also for others.

I am requesting you to consider this application and give her a change to prove herself, and support her further education through RJS.

Thank you in advance for considering my application.

Yours Sincerely,

Letters / I had the opportunity to be her mentor and teacher; Recommendation letter [2]

This is a recommendation letter .. written by me for myself please give your feedback soon , I have to submit it within 2 days

To Whom It May Concern:
I am privileged to write in support of my student, xxxx, xxxx was my student for three years, during that time I witnessed her tremendous growth and development. This development came not only in the area of business achievement and leadership, but in maturity and character as well.

xxxx is a rare type of student who combines exceptional natural ability with a willingness and eagerness to learn.
Initially she got home-sick in India but with little support and encouragement, she picked up courage to stay and study 3 years, and has never looked back. Therefore, she is able to cope in any situation with any type of circumstances after staying three years in typically Indian convent hostel.

During her time here, xxxx has consistently demonstrated a strong work ethic and a dedication to success. Her efforts have produced high quality results time and time again. She has always been very active in class, she used to take initiative in discussions, her presentations and assignments were up to date with the latest research, her research project in Service management and insurance was about "Indian Insurance Act & Insurance policies of 5 companies "in which she got 90% marks

she is aware of her own intelligence, as evidenced by her willingness to challenge herself with honors courses and extra credit work, she has an air of modesty about her that makes her approachable and well-liked among her classmates. In addition to her social work xxxx was very active in her studies as well, she always manages to get above 80% in my subjects, her assignments were on time and updated.

In addition to being xxxx's teacher, I also had the opportunity to mentor her for one year, I found xxxx active and participative in class activities, she was an active member of Rotract and ICUF club, she help in all the activities and meetings of these clubs.

She is an energetic, enthusiastic student in all jobs of his class as well as voluntary activities held by college. xxxx is also very responsible to her work and is able to handle the pressure of deadlines very well. She has an extremely amiable personality and is popular among his classmates as she shows great consideration and deep respect for others. On many occasions, she helps her classmates in various subjects, especially accounting. Being honest and hardworking, she demonstrates the best of behavior and excellent study habits.

She has been interested in obtaining a Master degree for some time now and I feel that she will be an excellent candidate for your esteemed program. And I strongly believe that her perseverance, intellectual ability and enthusiasm for learning and working are qualities that should help her well in his future jobs. She is undoubtedly the type of student that has the potential for great success at the college level. Her indefatigable efforts, combined with his work ethic and ability to self-improve, are recipes for success in the years to come. I wholeheartedly recommend her for admission to your institution and wish her the very best in her further endeavors.