Scholarship / In UWC I will represent my country and share my culture and tradition, help it in any way possible. [3]

I am a UWC applicant. This is my essay as a practice.
I am not so good at English. But i have tried. I hope to receive feedback and suggestion very soon. It will be a great help.Thank you!!

The title is:
Please write an essay of not more than 300 words explaining why you are interested in attending a UWC and reflecting on UWC's mission and values, what you might contribute to the school/college and what you would hope to gain from the experience.

Last June my brother texted me from the USA, told me about UWC and "definitely" applying. Then I thought, my destiny is about to roar in glee. It felt like I was about to knock the door of a place where I actually belonged. I am interested in attending a UWC. A travel buff and a nature freak like me who can't afford going abroad can get a chance to explore the world. I will get the taste of a diverse community where I learn to respect others and celebrate cultures. I will learn important instincts and skills. I will be inspired to team and lead and serve. I will get excellent undergraduate placements. Honestly, my family will economically sustain.

If I become a part of UWC, I will represent my country and share my culture and tradition. I will learn to care for this earth. I will be a productive member of the school engaged in clubs, forums and services with dedication and commitment. I will respect other and their opinions. I will appreciate their talents and skills. I will share my understanding for wellbeing of everyone. As a potential student, I might also take new initiations or start new programs and clubs which is genuine and benefits everyone.

I hope that UWC will discover my strengths and weaknesses. It will inspire me to contribute and serve. I hope it will teach me the complexity of this world and motivate me to be a part in changing it. I hope I get to use my skills to bring changes in my society and make differences. I hope this experience will last for my entire life. I hope UWC resides in my heart with all my wishes and gratitude and I shall help it in any way possible.

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Undergraduate / My background and an experience of meeting new people [7]

I am applying for scholarship in UWC. This is my essay. I hope you will suggest me and improve it. Let's try to erase the flaws and obtain a perfect shape soon. Inspect this from a perspective of a UWC committee selector.

In the space below, please write an essay of not more than 300 words describing your background and family. Include an account of any experiences you have had in meeting people from other backgrounds than your own.

I am a Nepali origin. Aryan by race and Hindu by religion I am a Brahmin. I come from the hills of Lamjung where my ancestors migrated before centuries. My dad brought my family to Kathmandu for our education. I have five members in my family. It is my dad, mom, me and my two siblings. My dad is the only working member of my family. He works in remote Rolpa(mid hills) despite of his lung and nerve problems so that our expenses can be met. He is always away from family. My mom raised us. She sacrificed her career and looked after us three children. She is weak and ill due to those entire burdens she had. My brother and sister study in seventh and sixth grade respectively. We love each other very much. With dad retiring very soon and the real expenses just starting with our age, it is me the hope of everyone. A hope, which will shine and return to support this family in the near future.

During one of my vacations, dad took me to Rolpa. I was invited to a Magar (a nepali caste) family. Before entering their house, the put white tika on my forehead and welcomed me. They insisted that it is a must. Beautiful girls dressed in chaubandi cholo and patuki offered me garlands made from maize. They danced in different songs. I was presented with variety of foods in a shining, spacious brass plate. Though they ate boiled corn flour as their meal, they offered me rice nourished in pure ghee. A bowl of curd added beauty. They prepared a special dish of nettle that was a new taste. They were illiterate. They were poor. But they respected their culture and were committed to preserve it. Only their house was small, but not their heart.

Writing Feedback / Mathematics is the essence of numbers!! This is a debate where I have shared my view. [2]

This is a debate where I have shared my view. Please help me to improve them.

"Mathematics is a challenging subject, but of little practical use".Discuss
Mathematics is the essence of numbers.It is a subject dealing with numbers and their operations.It is a universal language created by the human itself and is capable of demonstrating many miracles.Students who seem are influenced innately seem to achieve easiness in mathematics . Students often find tough to deal with mathematics.Mostly,the girls refer it as a male dominant subject.And actually,it is.

Mathematics is a language entirely different from the language like English or Latin that are used to express ones feelings.Rather it is factual and it possesses its own beauty.The supreme beauty of accuracy and results.

Scholars hardly find Mathematics as easy and simple subject to rely .They don't prefer Mathematics for their further studies and try to trace the fact that Mathematics has no practical implications.But the thing it totally wrong.

Actually,everything that exists is Mathematics. Ranging from the carrying capacities of the earth to the height of the Everest or the depth of the Mariana Trench to to the hotness of Kalahari,everything is Mathematics.Mathematics is the base of Science.Internet, robots, network protocols everything were the outcome of Mathematics. In fact, the estimation we do is mathematics.So we can judge ourselves. And now, isn't mathematics implied practically?

Mathematics is used in every fraction of our daily life.From buying vegetables from the vendors to compound money in the banks,mathematics is implied everywhere.Economics,Business or accounts,mathematics is the crucial part of every financial fields.Mathematics is the tool for designing and engineering.Mathematics is the key to modify the nature and its contents innocuously. Mathematics helps to survey,analyse data and formulate plans.While building a bridge or a tunnel or paying service charge in cafes,mathematics is in fact implied everywhere.

Mathematics is challenging though,the students who are capable of understanding the power of numbers can turn out their relations with this subject very very well.Ignoring mathematics is much like ignoring oneself

because the universe implies maths,the society implies maths,the science implies maths and we human aren't an exception.