agungdanprakoso
Sep 15, 2016
Undergraduate / There is only one occasion that solidly marked my transition from my childhood. Soccer -- Chemistry [4]
can i give you little bit suggestion ?
1." Knowing that this would be harder ..." should be KNOWING THE FACT, IT would be DIFFICULT that i had imagined ( i think, it is more clearly)
2. "I found my huge potential and interest in chemistry" should be i found my huge potential and INTERESTED in chemistry (because you use conjunction "and", Then the first sentence have to be same with the second sentence)
thank you
can i give you little bit suggestion ?
1." Knowing that this would be harder ..." should be KNOWING THE FACT, IT would be DIFFICULT that i had imagined ( i think, it is more clearly)
2. "I found my huge potential and interest in chemistry" should be i found my huge potential and INTERESTED in chemistry (because you use conjunction "and", Then the first sentence have to be same with the second sentence)
thank you