Writing Feedback / Summary TED: The best question that people always say [5]

The most common questions that people always ask are how succesfull you would be if you just work in a company, how much money you have nowadays, and how happy and healthy you would be today if you wake up and do personal exercice like a gym. The answer is the same: it is a 50:50 chance.

In modern era, there are some people who have enormous number of money. They believe that money cannot buy anything with it. Interestingly, althought they can purchase some luxuries such as a car, a huge expensive house or a travel around the world, they cannot fell so happy with all they have.

This condition have been happening in the speaker's daily life, but now he can solve the problem. He believes that to solve this problem, the people who have much money have to spend a third of their time on helping poor people. It is because sometimes this activity can give them positive feedback which leads to happiness.

Writing Feedback / In the modern era, demanding of aviation company increases dramatically. Impact on the air quality. [3]

Restricting air travel is the ony way to prevent air pollution.
Do you agree or disagree?

In the modern era, demanding of aviation company increases dramaticaly. Some expert believe that this circumtance has to stop, because aviation makes lavish number of exhaust fumes. Personally i argue with this statement because there are several other condition that provide bad impact.

According to some research, some people suggest to do not use air plane if we want to make a travel plan. It is because the research provides information that fumes of aviation can convey drawbacks for pollution. In addition, to make one flight, plane have to use lavish number of fuels. As we know, using a lot of fuels can increase global warming causes. It makes some people thinking to push the authority to make a policy which can stop flight permission.

However, plane is just only one of several air pollution problems. One thing that always spring in mind is the result of World Health Organization (WHO) reseach which describes that emission of car is the predominant factor of air pollution. Taking Jakarta as an example, the air condition in Jakarta is totally bad, it is because the number of vehicles. Deforestation is also the big cause of global warming. Cutting trees in large area can vanish one main element in our earth that can produce oxygen. As i was illustrated above that not only air plane but also fumes of vehicles and deforestation are the cause of global warming.

To conclude, making a rule to stop the aviation is a bad sollution. It is because there are lavish number of other problems that give demerit effect to our environment.

Writing Feedback / The Economist - What are the candidates' plans for America's budget? [2]

What are the candidates' plans for America's budget?

There is a different ideology between Barack Obama and one candidate of Amerika president selection. When the Barack Obama's era, they were controll the national debt and make it was a priority for Republicans. On the other hand, Democrats were less worried, and still saw the need for America to fix its long-run challenge: soaring spending on Medicare (public health insurance for the over-65s) and Social Security (public pensions).

Mr Trump as a candidate of Amerika's president selection eschews spending cuts. In fact that he wants to spend more The United States of America budget on infrastructure, the army, veterans, education and child care. But he has adopted other Republican orthodoxies. He wants big tax-cuts for the rich and for firms,

He believe that it would send the incomes of the top 1% of earners soaring by at least 10%. This would come at great expense: perhaps $7.2trn over a decade. In addition, Donald Trump said that tax-cuts and deregulation will boost economic growth to 3.5-4%, up from an average of 2.1% since the end of the recession, boosting the Treasury's coffers enough to pay for both lost revenues and spending increases. But that is just a fantasy. America is growing slowly for two reasons: the working-age population is shrinking, and productivity growth is low. If, as he promises, Mr Trump were to crack down on immigration and to shred trade deals, both problems would get worse, not better. For that reason, Mr Trump's fiscal policy would send the national debt soaring.