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Posts by AndreiWindy
Name: PhongTran
Joined: Mar 24, 2017
Last Post: Aug 11, 2017
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From: Viet Nam
School: Hue University of Medicine and Pharmacy

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AndreiWindy   
Aug 11, 2017
Writing Feedback / Everyone should become vegetarian [6]

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AndreiWindy   
Aug 11, 2017
Writing Feedback / Everyone should become vegetarian [6]

Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?

To Eat or Not to Eat Meat



Nowadays, how to have a good health is always a large question for most of the people. There are many aspects of this problem but a vegetarian diet is more and more popular all over the world. It's so useful that some people suggested we should become vegetarian and don't need to eat meat. In my opinion, I don't absolutely agree with them.

Firstly, we can't deny how great a vegetarian diet brings. Many researches showed that we will use less fat and high in fiber through a vegetarian diet. As the result, we will reduce clearly the risk of illnesses including heart failure, obesity, diabetes which cause millions die each year. Additionally, plant foods supply enough nutrition for us without meat. For example, raw spinach providing all our nutritional needs is proved one of the best foods for the human. Thus, we don't need to eat meat anymore while vegetarian diet not only improves our health but also makes the environment better.

However, some of the plant foods don't supply enough energy for the need of us each day. So if we use it for a long time, our body will be lack of many nutrition. Therefore, we need to balance between vegetarian diet and non-vegetarian diet. Moreover, there are many methods to process plant foods which are different from the occident to the orient. Thus, people will find hard to eat what isn't suitable for their taste and meat is a good choice to make the more delicious meal.

In conclusion, we should eat flexibly both plant foods and meat although vegetarian diet is a good method. But if someone wants to eat absolutely vegetarian diet, they should check their health regularly to find whether their bodies are lack of nutrition or not.
AndreiWindy   
Mar 26, 2017
Writing Feedback / Fastfood is good or bad for our lives? [5]

@mastindersingh
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AndreiWindy   
Mar 26, 2017
Writing Feedback / Fastfood is good or bad for our lives? [5]

Fastfood is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular.Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinion in this?

Traditional Cooking is Better



Nowadays, with the striking development of economy, people have changed their lifestyle so much when compare to the others in the past. One of these changes is fastfood which is more and more popular in every country. Although this is cheap and convenient for officers and people who do not have enough time to cook, it brings many problems with we cannot guess.

First of all, these days, in everywhere, we can easy to find fastfood stores such as KFC, Lotte fried chicken,.... It's the best way to eat the meal which is save time, cheap and also very delicious. However, using fastfood regularly is harmful for health because it contains a great deal of fat. Gradually, people will get some serious diseases include hypertension, increasing blood lipid, and even diabetes. These illnesses are very hard to therapy and also cost of large of money, so it damages to the happiness of among people and the economy of every country.

Secondly, whereas people is used to eat fastfood, they do not want to learn to cook anymore. As the result, the fewer people can cook, the fewer traditional foods we can keep. If no one thinks about it, traditional foods will be disappeared forever one day. Finally, in the oriental, family meal is very special. It's a good chance to meet all the member in family. If fastfood becomes more and more popular, our traditional meal will be changed forever. After that, we will continuously lose many things which we can not imagine.

By the way of conclusion, although fastfood is cheap and convenient, among people have to decide themselves what they will do to protect their tradition. For me, cooking traditional foods is the best way to do it.
AndreiWindy   
Mar 26, 2017
Writing Feedback / Railroads vs Road Budget - IETLS CAMBRIDGE 11 TASK 2 [5]

@daiha20082009
With me, your essay is good, I can learn from it some academic words and good structures. But I wish you can add one more idea to protect your opinion because I am still not totally persuaded. Through it, your essay also will be longer.
AndreiWindy   
Mar 24, 2017
Writing Feedback / People can be closer eachother. How Internet affect on our life? [6]

Internet - blessing or a curse?



Nowadays, with the striking development of technology, special is the Internet. It has impacted to the life-style with people all over the world. In my opinion, it is great change so that people can be closer.

By the Internet, loved ones can meet together although how distance far they are, it's so great if we can see and hear the voice of our family when they far million and million of km to us.

By the Internet, we can look at everything all over the world such as famous places, sight-seeing landscape, special festival, etc... Admittedly, we also can stay at home and learn every lesson from school . It's very suitable for disability and people who are too busy to come to school.

Then, through the Internet, people are saving a vast amount of money when they can live in Vietnam and do a business in America which is very easy.

However, Internet is place for illegal activities such as buy and sell weapons, illegal trade, blackmail, etc...So, among government and people have to control closely to protect themselves and use the Internet right.

By the way of conclusion, Internet is the most important thing in the modern life. We need to control it to make our life more comfortable.
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