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Name: Hadeer
Joined: Sep 27, 2017
Last Post: Nov 5, 2017
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From: Egypt
School: Alexandria University

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Hadeer   
Nov 5, 2017
Scholarship / It challenge and process to discover people potentials, leadership essay [5]

@Holt
i try to edit it and write a new one according to your feedback, i hope you can give me your feedback as soon as possible please

A leader must be able to enlighten the future with new ideas and transform these ideas into a reality that helps shape a new world of tomorrow. He must be able to guide people through their potentials and lead them into the right direction.

One of my most effective experiences in my leadership skills was when my company was offered to consult a restoration project to an existing building as well as improving the environmental issues surrounding it; in order to improve that building's efficiency. Due to my interest in green architecture and environmental issues, my manager recommended me to follow up the work, but as a recent graduate, I had minimum practical experience. Therefore, I started contacting some senior engineers with major experience in this field who gave me some advice on how to deal with the problem on-hand.

While working on the project, I found a major issue regarding one of the supporting walls, as it has partially overlapped with one of the columns. I decided to return to the engineering consultant of the project but found out that he has been relieved of his duties and no one has been assigned to replace him yet and I had to make a quick decision. I checked the drawings of similar projects and found out that I had to redesign the buildings in a different and unusual way. It was a risky decision that needed to be done with accurate measures and hard work from everyone. I realized that I needed a different mechanism to engage the working team to collaborate in solving the problem. So, I made a half-day workshop with the working team to present them with my ideas to solve the problem, as well as reviewing the similar problems in other projects. Also, I started drawing a mind map and offered my suggestions for actions based on the mind map to all members of the team. I kept listening to all their suggestions as well as motivating them to come up with ideas as if they were leading the situation, though it was me who was really running the strings.

On the next day, I started working according to the plan; during construction, they were very supportive, responsive and so efficient. We finished our mission successfully. The work was received with great encouragement from the supervising consultant. I was happy as I was able to make a difference and have become more confident and dependent on my leadership skills.
Hadeer   
Nov 4, 2017
Scholarship / It challenge and process to discover people potentials, leadership essay [5]

the green architecture - my mission



A leader must be able to enlighten the future with new ideas and to transform these ideas to shape a new world of tomorrow, it challenge and process to discover people potentials, and direct them into the right direction.

The most experimental for my leadership skills was when my company got a project as a consultant to restore an existing building and improve the environmental issues that were already applied on it, in-order to improve building's efficiency. My manger recommended me to follow up the work, because he was aware of my interest about green architecture. I was just a fresh graduate with a limited experience and any mistake would cost the company a great loss. I started contacting some engineers who have an experience in this field whom I have known during undergraduate; they guided me and made me realize some important points.

On the next day, I started working according to the plan; I mingled with Foreman, contractor and trade's staff. They used to share a lot of stories about their experiences with green buildings, their frustrations about the quality of construction on the green buildings, and how the consultants never valued their concerns. Although the building looked like great, but it was very bad for the Operations and Maintenance. The building generated ten times more work orders than any other building, the staff was so frustrated.

I realized that I needed a different mechanism to motivate my staff to provide input and to engage them effectively with courage and collaboration. A one day workshop on how to improve construction in the green buildings could be a good solution. I discussed the idea privately with the facility managers and the trade's staff to introduce my plan to them and to set the vision, allowing people to communicate and share their perspective without being challenged by their superiors. They agreed on the idea and supported me to move a step forward.

During the workshop everyone wrote his /her own creative ideas regarding this topic, and then we read them. A bunch of great ideas came out supported by their peers.We dissected and analyzed every idea and then sorted and compared them. I started drawing a mind map and offering my suggestions for actions based on the mind map.I kept my ears open for counter suggestions.It made people feel that I was following them as well while I was leading them.

After the workshop they were responsive to the mission and were so efficient. What came out of the workshop, we got a report include the needs for civil work, building materials, electrical work and commissioning.The report was drafted, edited, vetted and used for the project. It was a grand success. During construction they were very supportive and we finished our mission successfully. The accomplished work was welcomed with a great encouragement from the supervision consultant. I was happy as I was able to make a difference and I have become more confident and dependent on my leadership skills.
Hadeer   
Nov 3, 2017
Scholarship / My Passion about the concept of sustainability and my vision of achieving development [5]

@Holt
I tried to improve it ..

My Passion about the concept of sustainability and my vision of achieving development focused on construction field alignment with my professional and academic experience were my compass to choose these three courses.

I have been combining between the practical and academic experience for two years, I work as an architect at XXX (Architecture consultant group) where I can impart sustainable knowledge in a professional practice. Work-based learning most clearly provides me with the opportunity to learn by doing. Also, my job as a lecturer at the Department of Architecture, Faculty of Fine Arts, aids me update my knowledge about sustainability which can be challenged, reinterpreted and developed.

My first choice is XX (Environmental Design). University of XX was selected as the best university of architecture earlier in 2017 as known. My decision to do this course stems from my desire to resolve the challenges which face the technical integration of sustainability and the construction process together. I strongly believe that this course will provide me with the needed sustainable architecture theories, which will help to achieve my vision. Moreover, I am interested in living in the beautiful, rural city of Bath, where historical and modern buildings harmoniously exist.

My second choice XXX (Sustainable Architecture). It would be great to study the modules of Advanced Construction and Building Analysis and BIM (Building Information Modeling). These courses will benefit me in reaching my goal of decreasing the inconsistency between the design and the construction. Moreover, they will teach me to consolida
Hadeer   
Nov 2, 2017
Scholarship / A well-established network has become an essential part of our live and valuable tool for our career [3]

network essay - chevening scholarship



Having a well-established network of supportive professionals, instructors and potential has become an essential part of our live and valuable tool for advancing our career.I have learned how to hone networking, connect with others, hopefully, growing my network through participation in a shared activity, events, and seminars or even through virtual professional network like LinkedIn.

Being part of company that participate in most of architectural exhibition and conferences and able to build strong relationships network with other companies, specialist and different clients helped me to make connections with different architects and specialist as I represented it in a lot of events and held a lot of clients' meetings.

I can't also deny that participation in various undergraduate events provided me with strong network of relationships which was very helpful for me when my company was responsible for the implementation and supervision of "mega project" facades using smart materials. I've been commissioned by my company to deal with the leading company in this field and get the best materials for the lowest prices. I immediately remembered the architect whom I met while attending the exhibition of Society of Egyptian Architect to present my graduation project, who's the head of designers at the company which I had been commissioned to deal with. I was in touch with him in the past two years, we had a trade discussions about architectural events. I contacted him and he gave me all the information I needed and helped me in the process the choice of materials as a specialist in this field. Later he gave me a lift to the engineer responsible for the financial part, which provided me the best deals and special discounts. Since then my company developed firm relationship with this company which benefited it and helped to increase profit, for they agreed to provide my company with the needed materials for the lowest prices.

Since I started working in my company, it has gained a lot the development of my professional network relationships. I was invited by old customers to our company which works in the field of sustainability and was aware of my interest in this field during our dealings in many interviews to be among the speakers at the seminar about the importance of sustainably and how the world is concerned with this idea in the 21st century, he always though that I have a different vision about this idea. By the end of the discussion he introduced me to a young architect who happened to have considerable experience in the field of sustainability and scientific research in a lot of countries which always offers me help when I need it.

Becoming a Chevening scholar will allow me to engage with other scholars in my field, extending my professional network, open many doors for me to build up my career. I plan to connect with the young architect who want to become a Chevening scholars, give them a tips and communicate effectively with the chevening alumni.
Hadeer   
Nov 2, 2017
Scholarship / The success of maintaining good relations - CHEVENING Essay [4]

@obbiescholar
give more details about how the good relations with both institutions facilitated you, Also the last paragraph, how you use your network to assist them in drafting the Village Fund Budget Plan for their village

i guess you should mention how your network helped in developing your carer.
Hadeer   
Oct 30, 2017
Scholarship / A leader must be able to enlighten the future with new ideas and transform these for a better future [5]

thank you for your valuable comment , pleas i need more explanation for that '' highlight how you influence, not not engaged, them in such a manner that the were able to successfully complete their work'' and also ''Kind of student'' you mean according to their academic potential, qualifications and also their weakness or their personal one that relevant to their character
Hadeer   
Oct 29, 2017
Scholarship / A leader must be able to enlighten the future with new ideas and transform these for a better future [5]

leadership skills essay - chevening scholarship



i would really appreciate if you could evaluate my leadership and influence essay, whether for the grammar or the overall content

A leader must be able to enlighten the future with new ideas and to transform these ideas to shape a new world of tomorrow, it challenge and process,

My leadership skills started developing since I was a child. I was the leader of the team that represented my school at events. At‏ college, I was the elected president of my class, More, I was among speakers in the "Egyptian Universities Youth Week" event.

After my graduation my leadership skills developed, due to my work as a lecturer. It is a big challenge to become a leader who help the students discover their potentials, and direct them into the right direction.

There are several incidents that pushed forward my leadership skills, especially the ones relevant to my students' graduation project. During introducing the project to the students, I thought that the best way to interest the students in the project was to thoroughly engage them in discussions. I paid attention to their ideas and carefully watched how their thoughts developed. I was always there when they needed help. Surprisingly enough, my strategy proved to be beneficial as the students achieved great success.

All of the students handed in their projects except for three students. This motivated me to support these students. I spoke to them, I make positive relationships trying to gain their trust and inducing their inner strength. As a leader, it is important to fundamentally change something in the life of people. Unexpectedly, they managed to submit excellent projects.

After the students had presented their projected, I noticed that their projects lacked a practical experience, I did not have a plan to solve this, but I had a vision. After that the solution I saw to this problem was to train the students at architecture companies. This training was the practical part that complemented their academic education. I suggested this idea to my team of the teaching staff, after discussing the idea they showed agreement, I introduced the idea to the dean. It was not an easy thing to convince him to make the practice part of the project evaluation. However, I managed to convince him.

I wanted to take a leading part in the implementation of my suggestion. I made advantage of my work in a consulting engineering company. It took a lot of time to convince my boss for such a thing. A person can be exposed to legal charges, if s/he makes a mistake in the construction field, my boss was convinced when I persuaded him of the students' potentials. I was afraid of being responsible for such a mission, but I trusted my intuition and my skills. My students and skills did not fail me, they were responsive to the mission under my leadership. They were so efficient that some of them were hired at the company. I was happy as I was able make a difference.

Its journey of my own leadership discover, I have become more confident in and dependent on my leadership skills.
Hadeer   
Oct 26, 2017
Scholarship / My Passion about the concept of sustainability and my vision of achieving development [5]

@inok26
Thank you for the correction

@Holt
thank you for raising those concerns, i mentioned the ranking which is relevant to my field and the courses i have been selected not a general ranking to show why i would have chosen a specific universities from all highly ranked university, Do you think it's still irrelevant information ?
Hadeer   
Oct 25, 2017
Scholarship / My Passion about the concept of sustainability and my vision of achieving development [5]

Hello, Please help me evaluate this essay.
Thank you in advance

Study in UK essay .. Chevening

My Passion about the concept of sustainability and my vision of achieving development focused on construction field were my compass to choose these three courses.

My first choice is the University of Bath (Environmental Design), University of Bath has been selected as the best university of architecture earlier in 2017. My decision to study this course stems from my desire to resolve the challenges which face the technical integration of sustainability and the construction process together. I firmly believe that this course will provide me with the needed theories about sustainable architecture, which will help to achieve my vision. More, I am interested in living in the beautiful, rural city of Bath, where historical and modern buildings harmoniously exist.

My second choice course is Sustainable Architecture at University of Huddersfield which has been dignified as a lofty university by the Teaching Excellence Framework (TEF). It would be great to study the modules of Advanced Construction and Building Analysis and BIM (Building Information Modeling). These courses will benefit me in reaching my goal of decreasing the inconsistency between the design and the construction. Moreover, they will teach me to consolidate theoretical and practical sustainable skills. The opportunity to study these courses will ease my future career plan of being a specialist in applying sustainability to the construction process.

My third choice is to study Sustainable Engineering (Architecture and Ecology) course at the University of Strathclyde which has been nominated as a first-rate university for sustainability by the Engineering Education for Sustainable Development. The chance to study at this university will help me to deeply understand the core of sustainability and the importance of projects funding and management. Consequently, I will be an excellent project manager who can enforce a market transformation.

All of the courses mentioned above are relevant to my academic and professional architectural experience. My graduation project which was within the top ten projects on the national level, introduced sustainability as an important concept. Further, I have been fortunate enough to be a part of a team that participated in two competitions about sustainability and Eco house at Ain Shams University and Arab Academy for Science and Technology. Also, recently, I have attended two workshops; one is about building performance simulation and the other is about how building modelling information supports the sustainable design and construction.

Thus, a master degree from a UK university will be extremely beneficial to my future career plans and visions.
Hadeer   
Oct 25, 2017
Scholarship / Chevening Post Study Plan: Helping Indonesia Using Data [5]

your essay is about the background of your study plan not your future career plan, you should discus more details about your future plans, your immediate plan and your long term plans and how this plans relevant to UK priorities in your country
Hadeer   
Oct 24, 2017
Scholarship / My long-term goals are based on the experience I am looking forward to gain - Chevening [5]

Please help me evaluate this essay

Career Plan question



Although Egypt has great architectural history and possesses excellent efficiency to teach modern architecture, the country is turning into an ugly cement jungle That's why a prolonged process of architectural transformation, is needed in Egypt. Which its impact can be seen on the social and investment levels

My first immediate plan upon returning home is to play a major role in this process that will push forward the architectural paradigm.
The concept of "Sustainability" will be my main point of concentration. Alignment with "Egypt's Vision 2030" and its strategy for sustainable development I will try to spread the concept among architects and laymen to show its importance. My job as a lecturer at the architecture department of the faculty of fine arts will aid me in playing this role. Being a lecturer enables me to reach a lot of professional architects and ambitious students through workshops, seminars, and conferences.

Further, I plan to apply for a job at a construction company and I would like to be responsible for sustainability, environmental management, and the follow-up of materials and products. I will focus on the construction field as a main factor that affects realizing sustainability, there is deficiency happens because of noticeable difference between the environmental design and construction as a result of the cost factor. I would very much like to solve this problem, which is a hindrance to achieving the sustainable development

Further, to achieve the role, which I dream of playing, I will engage in non-governmental and non-profitable activities. I will set up a non-governmental organization that will organize and regulate the relation between, the private and the public construction companies. The connections and relations that I will gain from the Chevening experience will facilitate the achievement of such a dream. In line with UK priorities according to DFID (Department for international development) to achieve the SDGs (The sustainable development goals) Sharing my experience knowledge to move forward development of Egypt

As a part of my career plan, I want to become an authorized professional at LEED (Leadership in Energy and Environmental Design). And I am sure that the gained course experience will help me to reach this goal. This will happen because it will provide me with the useful knowledge, from which I can start studying the different evaluation systems.

My long-term goals are based on the experience I am looking forward to gaining it. I want to start my own eco-friendly construction company. I want to participate in the making of magnificent and efficient constructions, which will combine the historical and modern identity of Egypt. More, I aspire to make a change to the architecture business in my country and make market transformation. My ambitious character and my ability to make critical decisions concerning my profession will be my base for these goals.
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