Writing Feedback / Treating pets as family members is not a good way for human beings even though they are our friends. [3]

(182): Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Last week I met with my friend, she saied to me that she wanted me to see her daughter Lucy some day. So I pick up a day to her house. But when I arrieved there, I found lucy was her dog. My frieng loves it very much, she spends whole night with it and talk to it. She said she cannot image her life without lucy.

Indeed, it is no denying to say many people like my friend now have a close relationship with their pets. They not only treat them as animals but also as friends, or even family members. In my view of point, the disadvantages of this relationship far overweight the advantages.

As we are human beings, thinking is one of the most remarkable characterisitics for us to tell from animals. Whatever we think about, we need to communicate with other persons, and we want to get feedback, which pets cannto fulfil, they cannot understand what we say, neither talk to us. Having too close relationship sometimes may make people lose communication skill for society.

Notably, from a scietific research, it is said that people who have close relationship with their pets prefer to say alone than people who don't. That way, to a greater extent, have influenced their social life. My friend is a case, she had been a very active girl when she got her dog, she invited people to have dinner, hang out when she was free. While, after she got her dog, every time we called to her, she always refused to come out. Instead, she spent her whole space time with her dog. Gradually, no one invited her to have dinner, or go to a movie.

To sum up, treating pets as family members is not a good way for human beings even though they are our friends.

Writing Feedback / Music can kill much time if people are bored - sound is part of our lives [2]

169: People listen to music for different reasons and at different times. Why is music important to many people? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Sometimes I really believe that music has a power which can make people relaxed. Almost everyone listens to music everyday. We will be happy when we hear our favourite song. Sounds like a magic,right? But it dose.

Music or even just a piece of beautiful sound, can release some motion which cannot be found easily in real life, especially which is from movie. For instance, what comes in your mind when hearing "my heart wil go on" from Titanic?... in my mind, I seems I can feel the truly love between Jack and Kate. Everytime I hear this music, I can't help crying because of move, there is something special in this music, which make me also fall in love with someone.

Music is one of best ways to relax according to a research on "How can people relax", music is in third place following stay with family and travel. It also shows that people who are in higer position listen to music more frequently then ones in lower position, what's more, it indicates that in daily life, music seems to be the top 1 method of relaxig for everyone. For example, students listen to it before the exams because it will reduce nervise. Besides, listening to music help going to sleep well and deeply.

More notably, no one can deny that music is another language people can use worldwide. Here is a old saying goes " no border in music", people from everywhere can communicate with each other with music. Sometimes it is better than real language such as English and Spanish, etc.

Amoing the benefits shown above, more basicly, music can kill much time if people are bored, you can see people listenning to their MP3 players in the metros, buses and cars.

In sum, music is a part of our lives, which benefits us a lot.

Undergraduate / "The university fund project" - Why are you considering The Ohio State University? [4]

Why are you considering The Ohio State University?

The university fund project in Ohio State first caught my attention, because I'm applying for a similar project in my school in which we try to raise funds by running marathon. The purpose of our project is to support sports and the disabled children. With this experience, I hope I can do something special to Ohio State University.

I'm applying for fisher college of business because it has a creative learning atmosphere and will provide prospective students with strong analytical and cooperative skills which are necessary for dealing with real-world cases. I am very confident because I successfully took part in the Guinness World Record's " The Largest Percussion Ensemble" on 2 July 2002, during which, I got to know that team-work is really important through this program and I benefit a lot from participating these activities.

All above are the external elements of my decision. No one can make sound decision without following his or her heart. So am I! I believe the Ohio State University will bring me the opportunity to enter and experience a unique, global learning environment - one that with different world views and the energy of motivated students who are interested in changing the way people do business. I believe I will have a huge gain through this experience, which will make my life more brilliant and give me valuable tools for my success oneday .That's the main reason that I choose Ohio State University: starting my new life there.

Ohio State University, starting my new life there.