Writing Feedback / The amount of China and India's population from 2000 until now and the predicted number up to 2050 [3]

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IELTS TASK 1 Population in India and China since the year 2000

The line graph illustrates the amount of China and India's population from 2000 until now and the predicted number up to 2050. Overall, it is very clear that the population in both countries has been rising and will continue growing except Chinese population which will fall afterwards.

At the beginning of the period, the number of Chinese people in China was more than India's population by being 1.200 and 1.000 billion respectively. The figures has been growing up to the moment by having almost 1.500 billion for china and nearly 1.350 billion for India.

In the future, the graph expects that population will continue growing in both countries and it will become about 1.420 by 2030. After 2030, the number of people in China starts declining and it becomes almost 1.400 in 2050. But when it comes to India, the population will continue to grow even after 2030 which exceeds China in that respect. It is expected that India's population will reach almost 1.600 billion in 2050

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Writing Feedback / IELTS task 1 - comparing three types of food prices [8]

various food products and their price index

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This is the first time I do this type of line graph that compares the items with price index. I hope you can tell me whether I have created a correct link between the foods and the price index.

The line graph illustrates how the price of fresh fruits and vegetable, sugar and sweets and carbonated drinks changes from 1979 to 2009. Overall, the price of all the tree foods changed over the period, but fresh fruits and vegetables' value is remarkable.

In 1979, the prices of fresh fruits and vegetable, sugar and sweets and carbonated drinks were around 65. From the beginning of the period to 1981 all the foods showed a steady rise and got stuck in around 80. From 1981 on, both sugar and sweets and carbonated drinks experienced some fluctuations by being higher and lower than 100 and then it followed by a constant rise the rest of the time to be almost 200 and 2010 by 2009.

Fresh fruits and vegetables price underwent a calm growth from the beginning of the period to 1983. From 1983 to 2009 it experienced some ups and downs but

continued climbing and stopped at nearly 335 in 2009 which is the highest among all the three types of food.

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Writing Feedback / IELTS line graph - task 1 - thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. [4]

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comparison of car theft

The line graph illustrates car thefts in the UK, Sweden, France and Canada from 1990 to 1999. Over all, despite some fluctuations, car theft almost remained the same in Great Britain, France and Canada. While the rate in Sweden rose during the period given.

In 1990, the rate of stealing cars in France and Canada were about 6 and 7 subsequently. Then they both experienced some ups and downs to be stable at nearly the same amount at the end of the period. In addition to that, car theft in the UK was almost 18 in 1990, then the rate underwent some fluctuations that made a slight change to become about 17 in 1999.

On the other hand, the number of stolen cars in Sweden was about 8 in 1990 and then it showed a steady rise to 1996. From 1996 it remained the same until 1998 which followed by another a gradual growth to be to hit nearly 14 at the end of the period.

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