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Name: Isabel
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isamj   
Sep 16, 2021
Writing Feedback / IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - ENVIRONMENT PROBLEMS: THE LOSS OF ANIMALS AND PLANTS OR OTHER ISSUES? [11]

I think that you should revise the grammar of the essay, sometime you miss the -s of the third person and the tense of the verbs. Regarding the punctuaction, I think that some sentences are too long, you can make them shorter by adding semicolons or commas.

Ohterwise, I think the content is really well elaborated.
I would appreciate it, if you cold see my writings as well.
isamj   
Sep 11, 2021
Writing Feedback / Love always wins! REVIEW OF A FILM [4]

REVIEW:

You are the arts review writer for a magazine. Your editor has asked you to review a film. Choose a
film that you have seen. Describe the plot and the characters involved. Say who the film is suitable for
and why. Mention any special effects or aspects of the film that stood out in some way.
Would you recommend the film? Why, why not?
Write your review.

Love always wins!



Yesterday, I watched an incredibly moving film. It's called 'The last letter from you lover'. It's a drama and romance film which is based on the bestseller romantic novel written by JoJo Moyes.

The film shows the unbelievable story of a journalist called Ellie (Felicity Jones), when she discovers an intriguing love letter. As she is getting more and more involved in the love story that the letters hide, she empathises a lot with the couple. They happen to be an enchanting couple that have to live their love in secret, they are just lovers, and they cannot live together. To make matters even worse, the girl, Jennifer loses all her memories in a car crush accident so, she has to retry all of them progressively.

The aspects of the film that I liked the most were the charming places where the film is set in and the incredibly realistic dialogues between the characters of the film.

Teenagers and adults will enjoy this film, since it makes the mature audience realise it is a story that could happen to everyone. You will want to help the couple to get together and restart their lives as I did when I watched it.

I strongly recommend watching "The last letter from your lover", it will make you realise the value of real love and appreciate the help of the people that surrounds you in your daily life.
isamj   
Sep 9, 2021
Writing Feedback / Report: Evaluation of the 'International food' course in the Superior school of cookery. [2]

You have just completed a cooking course. As part of the school's research and efforts to offer superior classes, they have asked you to write an evaluation of your experience as a student. Your report should discuss what you learned from the class and what you thought of the teachers and their instruction methods. Mention any ways you think the class could be improved and say whether you would or would not recommend the course to a friend or relative.

To: The School of Cuisine.
From: Isabel.

Subject: Evaluation of the 'International food' course.


Date: 9/9/2021

The aim of this report is to evaluate the 'International food course' offered by the School of Cuisine, which I have completed.
The first observation to make concerns the cooking techniques that I have learned during the course sessions. It was extremely valuable to learn how to improve simple cooking methods, such as frying and boiling. Specially, I have learned a Spanish frying system to fry vegetables with the specific oil measures so that, I can recognise when the fried elements are ready to be served.

With regard to the teachers and the instruction methods they have satisfied my expectations. One of my teachers possesses some traditional gastronomy awards, i.e. The III National Competition of innovative typical dishes'. Concerning the instruction methods, since the trainers must cooperate with other professional chefs and their own classmates, the instruction methods are highly interactive and intuitive for the future culinarians.

To improve the classes, it would be practical to use more spacious classrooms, so that the student would be more comfortable when practising cooking activities. Moreover, the cookery equipment should be renewed since they are a bit obsolete.

Finally, I would strongly recommend taking this course to my friends because it can widen their scope of international dishes.

In conclusion, multiple cooking techniques have been useful to cook on my own. The professional teachers and the interactive instruction methods are highly prestigious.However, as I commented above there are two aspects that should be improved in this course.