EF_Team5
Jun 1, 2008
Essays / Paper on Queen Elizabeth (I have a thesis statement) [5]
Good morning :)
You've got a good start here; how about this:
"Known for her endorsement of the arts, the childhood of Queen Elizabeth l vassilated(I believe the word you are searching for here is "vacillate", which means to hesitate; is that an appropriate description of her childhood? If her childhood was far from luxurious, you could say, "...Elizabeth I was cushioned with anything but the pompous surroundings one would expect from a pampered heir; instead it was closer to the dilapidation and neglect reserved for the bastard child of her father's new marriages.) A stunningly well-rounded and captivating individual, she rose through the ashes of her sister's reign to sit on the throne as one of E ngland's most successful and beloved rulers ."
I hope this helps!
Regards,
Gloria
Moderator, EssayForum.com
Good morning :)
You've got a good start here; how about this:
"Known for her endorsement of the arts, the childhood of Queen Elizabeth l vassilated(I believe the word you are searching for here is "vacillate", which means to hesitate; is that an appropriate description of her childhood? If her childhood was far from luxurious, you could say, "...Elizabeth I was cushioned with anything but the pompous surroundings one would expect from a pampered heir; instead it was closer to the dilapidation and neglect reserved for the bastard child of her father's new marriages.) A stunningly well-rounded and captivating individual, she rose through the ashes of her sister's reign to sit on the throne as one of E ngland's most successful and beloved rulers ."
I hope this helps!
Regards,
Gloria
Moderator, EssayForum.com