Belle15
Sep 30, 2011
Scholarship / 'My secret: Success does not come easy' - why interest in this scholarship [4]
I was taught to work hard in everything I do as my dad always says," There is no other substitution for success other than hard work" .
I want to experience handling the stress load of my studies on top of my demanding CCA and work.
Abraham Lincoln (1809-1865) 16th President of the United States once said," Always bear in mind that your own resolution to succeed is more important than any other thing."
Hello Miobox89, I truly liked your essay, but if the essay is for a scholarship I recommend browsing around other scholarship examples and tips,advice, etc; they truly help. I can't really tell you which sentences to delete because they all fit in pretty good, but I did try to help a little with the grammar:) Wishing you the best with your essay;)
Please help w/ my short biography, A short bio to help fundraise for students to go abroad...
I was taught to work hard in everything I do as my dad always says," There is no other substitution for success other than hard work" .
I want to experience handling the stress load of my studies on top of my demanding CCA and work.
Abraham Lincoln (1809-1865) 16th President of the United States once said," Always bear in mind that your own resolution to succeed is more important than any other thing."
Hello Miobox89, I truly liked your essay, but if the essay is for a scholarship I recommend browsing around other scholarship examples and tips,advice, etc; they truly help. I can't really tell you which sentences to delete because they all fit in pretty good, but I did try to help a little with the grammar:) Wishing you the best with your essay;)
Please help w/ my short biography, A short bio to help fundraise for students to go abroad...