tanty
Dec 23, 2008
Undergraduate / 'Why' Essay - Go For Wabash ! Go Wally! To Become A Gentleman [3]
oh getitlow, it's nice to learn that you're from VN. Me too.
oh getitlow, it's nice to learn that you're from VN. Me too.
tanty
Dec 9, 2008
tanty
Dec 9, 2008
Poetry / It drives me mad. This is my second poem. "What If life" [9]
"
What if Life
If Life were paper
I would write down all the lies
I would file them in parts
And let them die in my heart
If Life were a candle
I would blow all the bad
I would get all the warmth
And place in people's palms
If Life were a lip
I would keep all smiles sweet
I would kiss all the pains
And have it lain on my beloved
If Life were a sky
I would grind all the sorrows
I would enclose them in every kite
And burn them in the sunshine
If Life were snow
I would gather all the hate
I would make my own snowman
And break it down like a game
If Life were a fight
I would sacrifice my fears
I would rear my courage
And share what I pillaged
If Life were a tunnel
I would cover all miseries
I would ease them in the dark
And start again at the other end
If Life were a grave
I would cache all the wounds
I would ruin all the hurt
And turn them into mystery
If Life were a garden
I would bury all the grief
I would seek for new seeds
And sow them with happiness
But if Life were Love
I wouldn't hold to breathe
I would cease the day
I wouldn't stay to live
And just love only.
"
Friends told me it was a great poem. How about you?
"
What if Life
If Life were paper
I would write down all the lies
I would file them in parts
And let them die in my heart
If Life were a candle
I would blow all the bad
I would get all the warmth
And place in people's palms
If Life were a lip
I would keep all smiles sweet
I would kiss all the pains
And have it lain on my beloved
If Life were a sky
I would grind all the sorrows
I would enclose them in every kite
And burn them in the sunshine
If Life were snow
I would gather all the hate
I would make my own snowman
And break it down like a game
If Life were a fight
I would sacrifice my fears
I would rear my courage
And share what I pillaged
If Life were a tunnel
I would cover all miseries
I would ease them in the dark
And start again at the other end
If Life were a grave
I would cache all the wounds
I would ruin all the hurt
And turn them into mystery
If Life were a garden
I would bury all the grief
I would seek for new seeds
And sow them with happiness
But if Life were Love
I wouldn't hold to breathe
I would cease the day
I wouldn't stay to live
And just love only.
"
Friends told me it was a great poem. How about you?
tanty
Dec 9, 2008
Poetry / 5 senses poem - tropical beach [5]
It may make sense to anyone. But I didn't find this one remarkable. You may need some rhymes
It may make sense to anyone. But I didn't find this one remarkable. You may need some rhymes
tanty
Dec 9, 2008
Poetry / Night mare (poem) - I made it when i was 17 [5]
@EF_Kevin: reality is now not as good as nightmare. I simply cannot put up with this real life and I feel good in nightmare. That's why I prefer nightmare
Anyway, I need a more decent title
@EF_Kevin: reality is now not as good as nightmare. I simply cannot put up with this real life and I feel good in nightmare. That's why I prefer nightmare
Anyway, I need a more decent title
tanty
Dec 6, 2008
Poetry / Night mare (poem) - I made it when i was 17 [5]
NIGHTMARE
"
I wanna have the same last nightmare again tonight
The one where I have myself in my most parts, I woke up and I survived
Just as my two walls closed me within
My eyes are opened up with the purest light.
I think there're some places in this life you can't find
Where people have their souls connected
Where children have themselves run wild
Where every single tree has itself reach for the sky
It's nightmare.
Where sorrows are bunches of fragrant flowers.
Where pains are emphatic victories.
Where death is the most joyful celebration.
And where Hell could sow the seeds of affections.
In nightmare
I believe I won't feel a wraith.
I can feel no aggravation, no frustration.
I see no defection, no degradation, and no corruption.
No more evils. Then
I will treat my wounds by true repentance.
I will pour my blood into total sincerity.
I will imprison my soul in eternal truths.
Maybe my spirit is sleeping somewhere cold.
Keeping my great secret in nightmare.
Dreamers are all alone. But I believe I am not.
For it is a whole new world in my own nightmare.
Nightmare is home.
Anyway, we can build up the very new paradise, here.
Together, we deny our demise
Decimate all the hypocrisy
Demolish all the jealousy
From the shadows of our past
From the depths of our crash
Stepping forward into the light
We all make it together.
We are all to conquer this endeavor
Stronger than ever.
Make our ascension.
It was not mine.
It's our dream.
"
any comments?
NIGHTMARE
"
I wanna have the same last nightmare again tonight
The one where I have myself in my most parts, I woke up and I survived
Just as my two walls closed me within
My eyes are opened up with the purest light.
I think there're some places in this life you can't find
Where people have their souls connected
Where children have themselves run wild
Where every single tree has itself reach for the sky
It's nightmare.
Where sorrows are bunches of fragrant flowers.
Where pains are emphatic victories.
Where death is the most joyful celebration.
And where Hell could sow the seeds of affections.
In nightmare
I believe I won't feel a wraith.
I can feel no aggravation, no frustration.
I see no defection, no degradation, and no corruption.
No more evils. Then
I will treat my wounds by true repentance.
I will pour my blood into total sincerity.
I will imprison my soul in eternal truths.
Maybe my spirit is sleeping somewhere cold.
Keeping my great secret in nightmare.
Dreamers are all alone. But I believe I am not.
For it is a whole new world in my own nightmare.
Nightmare is home.
Anyway, we can build up the very new paradise, here.
Together, we deny our demise
Decimate all the hypocrisy
Demolish all the jealousy
From the shadows of our past
From the depths of our crash
Stepping forward into the light
We all make it together.
We are all to conquer this endeavor
Stronger than ever.
Make our ascension.
It was not mine.
It's our dream.
"
any comments?
tanty
Nov 20, 2008
Grammar, Usage / I need strategies in writing an analogy [2]
I need to write an analogy between two conpletely different things. I need some helps!!
I need to write an analogy between two conpletely different things. I need some helps!!