Writing Feedback / Variety and exploring new ideas by people is spice of life [4]

variation is the only thing which makes life interesting and worth living. Life needs constant variation without it life becomes boring and stagnant. New innovations, technologies and knowledge are the ingrediants of variety. Experiancing new ideas and innovations broaden one's vision and increase efficiency. When a person will have new ideas. He will also make them part of his life and try to avail benefits from them.

For example a person want to bring some change in his life then the first of all he will adopt new fashion. People get bored of same trends in fashion and search for new trends in fashion. This attitude effects the designer's business that is why they always try to introduce new ideas regarding fashion to get the attention of people. Same case is with education sector. Till a school introduces new education trends, people dmit their childern in that school. When a new school opens with new education trends then people attract towards that school.

It is the common human behaviour that they always attract towards new things and these innovations emerge from exploring things. If people stop exploring the ideas then life will become stagnant and no thrill and excitment will remain in life.

Writing Feedback / LIFE SUCCEEDS IN THAT IT SEEMS TO FAIL [3]

The point depicted in the expression reveals that a person gets success in his life when he feels that no door has remained open for him in the world now and there is no use of hardwork . He forgets that success is always a hard nut to crack. All the great people in the world got success only on the basis of their hardwork. I can be better described with this statement, " hardwork is key to success".

Every person in the world is not lucky enough to get the immediate success. He had to strive hard to reach at the top or achieve his/her goals. It is also a harsh reality that sometimes people work very hard but still remain deprived of eating the fruit of success. At this point they lose their all hopes and become doubtful about their competence and skills. If they keep firm faith on their hardwork and leave no stone unturn to get success then surely one day they will come out with flying colours on the face of world.

History provides us various examples about those people who became a big name in the world just because of hardwork. The most renouned personality in the IT industry is Bill Gates, owner of the Microsoft. He belonged to a middle class family. He started his career with the " Micro Instrumentation and Telemetary System" (MITS) . He kept on hardworking and became the owner of Microsoft, The richest person of the world.

Another name is Abraham Lincon 16th president of America. He also belonged to a poor family. He used to earn his livelihood by manual labour and his hardwork eventually led him to the success.

There is also a case that some lucky people get success without any hardwork but they are in very small amount. Majority has to follow the rule of hardwork which is the only way for them to get success in life.

(Here is my essay please check and point out my grammatical, spelling and structural mistakes. I will appreciate if anyone tell whether I was relevant to topic or not and starting of topic is fine or not. How is my expression of writing?)

Writing Feedback / THE CHILD IS FATHER OF MAN [4]

THE CHILD IS FATHER OF MAN

The expression "The child is the father of man" has been picked from the poem "The rainbow" by William Wordsworth. It states that a child makes himself known by his actions whether his deeds are pure or impure further it reveals that a person carries all those traits, mentality and attributes whether positive or negative which he was used to express in his childhood. If one observes the children playing. They exhibit certain characteristics which last with them forever and impart a great role in their character building and career choice.

Having a look at history, it is followed by several examples which support this phenomenon. One of such people is Napoleon who was a great military commander and fond of playing fight games in his childhood and later on he proved himself as a great military genius. It shows that his childhood attributes accompanied him throughout his life and he chose the profession for which he had enthusiasm in his early age.

Secondly Albert Einstein who was the most influential physicist of 20th century and winner of noble prize in physics had a great interest in mathematics and physics in his childhood and were in the habit of making modules and mechanical devices for fun. This became part of his personality and later on when he grew up, emerged as the great scientist on the face of world.

Childhood attributes remain with the person even he grows old. Watching the behavior of children we can presume easily what he would be in his future life.