Writing Feedback / Harmful human activity damages the Earth [2]

Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity.Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live.What is your opinion?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I feel no one will deny the truth that the environment of the Earth is deteriorating as the increasingly activities of human beings,because of that a lot of species are on the edge of survival,human ourselves are also indirectly suffering from the result of our behaviors.Thus I strongly believe that the environment of the Earth are significantly damaged by human activity.

First,as we know,the Earth as a whole is a tremendous and abundant ecosystem,reasonably every part of the ecosystem is correlated,so if you destroy any sections of this body the rest of it will be affected too.Once we realize that an idea will instantly flash into our mind:we need to protect it." To further clarify what I mean,Take fishing as an example,,there is no doubt that adequate amount of fishes caught by human definitely can not make impacts toward the ecosystem,but that's before the coming of industry revolutions,the effectiveness of catching fish was dramatically increased,thus unfortunately a lot of fishes became the delicious foods on tables meanwhile permanently vanished from the sea,but the pain of disordering the ecosystem lasts,with the vanishment of certain type of fish,its predator also will step into the fate of their preys,not because of disease or other unexpected factors,but because of starving.

Second, I have to mention about carbon dioxide which is,a kind of important constituents that keep our earth warm,so itself actually only do benefits to the life on earth,but the problem is there are too much emission of carbon dioxide in recent years,consequently the Earth is becoming hot,I think the only reason for this is the human activities,because nearly in every part of our lives we rely on electricities and oils,both of them will produce carbon dioxide in the process of generating power or driving transportations.

In conclude,personally I can't say that my life becomes more colorful and comfortable today,on the contrary,I would rather live in a place filled with clean air and diversified creatures.

Undergraduate / 'Changing your road towards success' - Never Give Up essay [3]

The expression "Never, never give up"means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals.Do you agree or disagree with this statement?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Undoubtedly,persistence is one of the most significant factors contributing to success,but I have to say that it will never become useful if you fix it as your general principle,because when encountering different situations and challenges,we need to adequately make some changes in our plans so as to reach a desired goal. So in this topic,I definitely believe that it is necessary to become flexible in many situations instead of being unchanged.I'll defend my position in the next paragraphs.

First,I think "never give up" will sometimes become an embodiment of being stubborn and unwise,for example,many years ago,people always believe that the earth is the center of the universe simply as we are created by God,and it is reasonable for God to put the earth at the center because he loves us,but later with the show up of the truth,most people just easily choose to ignore it and even mocked at it,however, gradually,it is accepted around the world.Obviously the change is triggered by facts,people have to conform to facts instead of plugging their ears in case of hearing truths.

Second,It is inaccurate to regard temporarily stop working toward some specific goals is the representative of giving up,in this day and age,things just changed so quickly,we have the necessities to flexibly change ourselves too.Take myself for example,because of the urgence of reaching a destination, I force myself to finish 3 essays a day,but the result indicates that the method haven't gave me any touchable improvements,I just like a robot to do something according to some fixed codes,but later I changed my plan,I put all my attention to carefully perceive the structure of readings and the syntaxes of my working regardless how many essays I have done in a day,things magically becomes better.

In conclusion,it is not a fixed rule for people to do things conforming to some certain principles,usually it is really important to make changes in our road toward success.

Undergraduate / Reading,Practicing,Listening.Which way do you prefer as a learning method? [3]

People learn in different ways.Some people learn by doing things;other people learn by reading about things;others learn by listening to people talk about things.Which of these methods of learnings is best for you?Use specific examples to support your choice

Undoubtedly,the ways of learning are not merely limited to reading,listening and practicing is feasible too.Among these three,I can't assert that reading is the most effective approach to grasp of knowledge for everyone,but at least it is true for most of people,including me. Why?Gorky had once evaluated the value of books,as he said, ' book is the stage of progress ',I learned this proverb from books when I was young,and I gradually comprehend how accurate and insightful the proverb is. With books we can read,we can learn, we can always get something from it without any doubts.Naturally,books have become the major way of learning.In the next paragraph I will further strengthen my opinions.

To begin with,books have many merits that the other two can't compare with,first,you can easily take your favoriate books with you anywhere you go,therefore it will largely decrease the time needed to digest a book,time is precious,I think no one will sit on the seat of subways doing nothing,it's already a common scene that people are engaged in reading when they travel.Second,books are always available when you need them,unlike listening, you can't imagine how absurd the idea is if you insist on learning by taking a professor around you,moreover even if you've recorded their voice into your mp3,you can still be easily distracted by the noises comes from your surroundings;Third,learning by practicing is really a good way,but the problem is how you can make sure that you have the privileges to try everything appeared in the books,for example,a book told you that by using liquid hydrogen,greenhouse gas generated in the process of rocket launching will dramatically reduced,could you enter the NASA rocket laboratory asking them you want a try?

On top of that,books is the most convenient way of learning when compared to listening and practicing.To exemplify what I mean,think about participating a speech,of course s/he is the most famous professor in that field,why not go for a lesson,or a project is recruiting members for surveying of the impact of global warming,why not follow them deepening into the north arctic,this is a great experience for you?But please add this factor into consideration :not everyone's pocket is as big as yours .

Lastly,please tell me which way can enable you easily travel around the world at a very low cost,which is the fattest way to make you becoming cleverer,which method have the potential to enrich your life,to fresh your cognition?Only books.

Writing Feedback / 'Myths are the symbols of humans primitive cognition about the world' TOEFL ESSAY [2]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People should read only those books that are about real events,real people,and established facts.Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

We are living in a world that is consisted of substances,scientifically speaking,the product of Bigbang happened trillion years ago,all the things around us is real,touchable,or in other words,they are in the state of existence.Therefore myths is stupid ,simply because they are the symbols of humans' primitive cognition about the world, imagination that existed in children's brain is redundant,say,the emergence of imagination is only burdening people's daily work that has heavy enough,do you agree with that?I think I will give the same answer as yours toward these questions,including this one with no exception.

To begin with,when it comes to unreal books,especially I want to talk about scientific fictions,at first sight people who are suffering from failures from " the real world" may have some strong and negative reactions toward these books,they are something that only staying in the brains of freakish people,extremely boring and wasting of time.But what if I tell you it is these freakish people or books that are crazy enough in searching ways to provoke the creativities of the world,to exemplify what I am saying,look at phones,computers,televisions etc,all of them are just existing in the scientific frictions many years ago,people initially want something full of magics but never thought of the becoming real of those magics,but time tells us,magics can be true.

On top of that,"unreal books' power" are far more tremendous in many ways than the merit I just mentioned above,if you want to ask people why you fancy fictions especially some pilots that never happened in our daily lives,in fact that's the reason why people like it,the "unrealities",I think the first reason for interpreting this phenomenon is that everyone faces different levels of challenges everyday,so it is reasonable for them to search for a place that is safe enough and far away from the intense real world,say,people need it not only because of the attractive pilots but also it provides a way for the hi-effective society to release itself,in return society can maintain its effectiveness in long run.

Lastly,what I want to address is that unreal books' effect towards this world is so significant and no one who has proceeded the process of insightfully thinking can deny it.Though books established on real occurrences play an important role too,but that's not what I want to talk about in this limited time.

Writing Feedback / TOEFL essay - help / technology effects [4]

Please help me check the organization and language of this essay,thanks

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?With the help of technology,students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly.Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Technology is the only tool that constantly promote human society from the state of primitive to sophisticated,their appearance have one common purpose without consideration of the various function of them,that is to make our life easier. In this topic,I definitely believe that with the help of technology, students nowadays can get numerous information that related to their concerns at an unprecedented speed.In the next paragraphs,I will illustrate how technology changes the way people gaining information.

Take books as an example,in ancient times,all the books was finished by pure hand writing,if you are a christian and you want to have a piece of Holy Bible of your own,please make sure you are rich enough,why?you need to hire somebody to copy the whole book by hands,not only you should be abundant in money,but also you should have enough patience to wait for years for the completing of the book.So by providing this simple example we can clearly infer that book is so rare in the past,but book is the most common way to transmit knowledge,a lof of people can't achieve their ambitions because of the expensive of books.But with technology,we have printing press created in the 18 century which fundamentally unleash the power of books,the price and the time required to finish a book dramatically jumped,by this magic invention,people everywhere around the world can enjoy the readiness of reading books.

The second thing I want to talk about is internet,which is the grand product of technology in the 21 century,with internet you just can't imagine how fast information transmitted around the world,take google which is a search engine company for example,at first,you just need to enter what you want to know in the search bar,and lightly click on "search",within 1 second,hundreds of thousand entries will show up in front of you,and what you need to do is to check what is the information you want,It's purely amazing.

In conclusion,what I want to press is that there is nearly no bad effect of technology,the advent of technology is only increasing the effectiveness for people to get information,and it is especially true for people who want to get knowledge,like students for example.

Writing Feedback / Government expenses for roads and highways or public transportation - TOEFL essay [3]

Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways,or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation(buses,trains,subways)?Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

Transportation is the magic way that tightly compress the world into an earth village,in which people can communicate with each other at an unimaginable effectiveness;transportation is the power that makes the america the start point of dreams,through which people can achieve their goals at a speed that they never have experienced before.At a time when Union Pacific celebrates its 150th anniversary,it reminds me again how important the transportation is.So in this question, I am definitely inclined to spending money on improving roads and highways.

Both roads(highways) and public transportation takes an irreplaceable place in modern age,the common destination they have is to facilitate the speed people communicating,but they are varied in the function,public transportation is mainly serves as a convenient tool for people who are working and living in cities,but roads(highways)is a totally different thing,it's responsibility is to connect people from far distance,it is the only factor that makes the world an earth village.

With highways we can deliver people or goods from one place to another within a few days,it largely reduce the time we spend on traveling and transporting.When we step into the 21st,effectiveness represent everything, roads(highways) only become more and more significant in this high speed society,for example,companies want to get information about their products as quickly as possible,people demand the delivery services sending their package at their upmost speed,merchants also need to talk with their cooperators whenever they want.

All in all,roads(highways)play a much more important role in the process of modernizing and civilizing,It not merely deliver goods or people,more importantly,it transmit our dreams!

Ps:I'm preparing for the TOEFL iBt,I will appreciated with your little help!