Writing Feedback / People visit museums when they travel to new places; 'National Museum of Iraq' [6]

TOPIC:Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit
museums?

Museum is like a lake which you can grasp your lack. Some people make a tour just to visit museums. Visiting museums would also be my priority if I travel to a city because:

Originally, what do you do when you encounter a something which you don't have any information about it? Surely, you should refer to its catalog to get information.

Like that I think museums are the catalog of cities which can give us a lot of information and rise our Wittig. For example I spent my vacation in Iraq last year. I saw the National Museum of Iraq in Baghdad. Almost I did not know anything about Iraq. When I saw the ancient statues in the National Museum of Iraq I deduced that Iraq is ancient country.

Secondly, a lot of people wish to travel by Time Machine. I think museum fulfill this desire. You travel to hundreds or thousands years ago and you see how our ancestors lived? When I was a teenager I visited the Louvre Museum. That was really fantastic. For a while I felt that I live in the past.

Besides, museums may give us some idea. One of my best experiment was done after visiting of The National Automobile Museum in Nevada. There was some tiny automobile

like a toy, but those work like their real ones. That time an idea sparkled in my mind. I tried to make tiny fan with the characteristic of real fan. After that I made a tiny motorboat. I think I became somewhat creative after visiting that museum.

However, in my view museums are like a pool of historical and useful information that every people in any age and any caste might use and enjoy that.

Writing Feedback / TOEFL; What's more important: hard work or luck? not reckon on luck in our plan [3]

Topic: When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above?

What do you think when you see a beautiful building? And also when you see an airport? Do you think they have built by chance? Of course don't. Also it is ridiculous if you think world wide webs such as Google, Yahoo etc. created by chance. Howbeit some people think that luck is cause of a lot of success, but to be frank I cannot agree with them. I would explore my primary reasons here.

To begin with, famous people are usually diligent people not lucky people. Hard work make you a professional man/woman which are powerful in his or her job. I mean, when you work hard you decrease portion of chance in your success. For example in football game it is said that penalty-kick need good chance to be goal. Statically the chance of being goal is fifty-fifty. But I think Ronaldo make a goal from a penalty-kick with more possibility than me. It is not for which Ronaldo is more fortune than me. Definitely it is for which he have more practice and exercise than me. He do a lot of exercise in football field every day, so it is not for which he is luckier than me.

Moreover, we cannot always lean on our luck to be successful .I don't want to disavow the role of luck in success, but as you know it hardly accompany us. So. For example you prepare for TOEFL or other multiple-choice test which has four option to choose in every question. You cannot prepare for it without any study and Rely on your luck, even if you be a very lucky. If you pick up any choice by chance you would fail the exam. Undoubtedly it is wise advice which you have hard study to success on exam.

Finally, you have to work hard to learn and to get a lot of information before doing a project in good way. The most fortunate people in the word cannot manufacture an automobile or build a high tower just by her or his chance. These plans is done by someone who is mastered in his/her work. Undoubtedly such people do work hard and have great experiences because of their hard works.

In the end, I think any great success need great work not great luck, even though luck is one factor in reaching goal but its impact is extraneous and we must not reckon on luck in our plans.

Writing Feedback / TOEFL topic: STUDYING ABROAD - LIKES AND DISLIKES [4]

Topic: You are planning to study abroad. What do you think you will like and dislike about this experience?

Is Studying Abroad Difficult?

Some people think that study abroad really good experiment and other people abhor it. But in my view this have some Advantage and disadvantage which I would explore most primary of them as follows. First I think when I go to new place I would get new information which make me stronger in my major. For example last week I went to my neighborhood country and saw that those student studied just in university. It was very usual behavior between them. They said that atmosphere of university motive us that study more.

Second when I go to new place I would be accustomed with new method and would be helpful for me. For example for a chemist student which is my major it is very important to be costume with variety of purification method. I often use crystallization for purification of my product, but it is not always useful. In my traveling to Japan, I went to a chemistry lab which was used chromatography method for purification.

However, I think generally change is good, by the way there is some disadvantage in study abroad. For example when you be far away from your home for long time, you may get homesick.

Another disadvantage of study abroad is being unaccustomed at first. For example when was in International University of China saw they eat meat of dog or had some special behavior in their greeting. These stuff was very awesome for me at the first.

In the end I like study abroad, although has some difficulty. I can be accustomed with another culture and get new information and new method for solving my problems.

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