Undergraduate / Tell us about Spiders. University of Richmond Supplement. [3]

How does this relate to the topic "Tell us about spiders"? Your essay is a little bit off topic.

Writing Feedback / Parent should give smartphone to their school kids. [3]

The essay is well written but you need to tell use what type of essay are you dealing with is a TOEFL, SAT or other? so that we can give you a meaningful help. Anyway, I want to focus on the conclusion because it leaves the last impression to the reader. Your conclusion is missing the craft and the wit of the good writer. It's too short and shallow. So, you need to provide a more clear summary , raise a further debate and put emphasis on the limitation of your work. If you do this you will have a strong conclusion and a good essay.

Letters / Professor is asking to recommend an International student via common Application - College [14]

I am trying to avoid hurting his admission because I am not familiar with US Universities and admission offices
ok I will take your correction
you think it's suitable enough?

Letters / Professor is asking to recommend an International student via common Application - College [14]

I wrote another letter I guess that it's more stronger then the previous:

I have asked to write a recommendation letter for a student that I have the pleasure to teach him:XXX. So it's an opportunity to illustrate his talents .For 3 years in my Physics class, I have been always bound to discover something new in him. I found him as perfect student with high intellectual level since the first time I meet him in his 9th grade class. I was impressed by his diligence and work ethic. Also, he demonstrated a high level of maturity and leadership skills that seem outstanding to me.

XXX has astonishing analyzing and interpretation skills. He is able to successfully cope with Scientific Experiments with high proficiency and accuracy. When I present an experiment or an issue to discuss as part of the course, he is always there to answer concisely analyzing the experiment and providing a witty conclusion, he was even meticulous raising debate and searching for demonstration for even aberrant results. When I correct his tests, I found future scientist spirit in the answers especially with the detail and construe that other students are not able to provide. He was always seeking additional knowledge as we argue after each physics session with related topics. His curiosity is a character that I liked most in him. As part of a trimester project, he developed an innovative collaborative research about modern physics with his classmates. This research is now being considered for publication. Despite being under pressure Med Anouar not only headed the project but also ensured its success by demonstrating leadership abilities that his peers both admired and respected: He perfectly distributes the work between classmates and manages time in order to get the research ready in the time. I am, also, aware that XXX is fully responsible as he holds down a part-time job while keeping academic achievement.

I must also make note of XXX personal academic performance. Out of a class of 150 students, XXX graduated with honors in the top 5. His excellent performance is a direct result of his hard work and strong focus. I would say that he is in the top 10% of all students I have taught.

If your undergraduate scientific program is seeking superior candidates with a record of achievement, XXX is an excellent choice. He has consistently demonstrated an ability to rise to any challenge that he must face. I can not foresee any circumstances in which he would disappoint college level work and scientific research. I am certain he will succeed in scientific field. I give him my strong recommendation.

Letters / Professor is asking to recommend an International student via common Application - College [14]

You think that I must rewrite it? OR only take notice of your remarks only?

Letters / Professor is asking to recommend an International student via common Application - College [14]

'He deserves to be admitted' - Recommendation Evaluation for my International Student

Excuse me I am a teacher but english is my third language so I am glad to give me some help to complete this Recommendation Letter and thanks...

To whom it may concern:

I have the pleasure to write a recommendation letter for my student XXX, a core part in my Analytic Mathematics and Geometry class. So, I take the chance to illustrate his potential as a pool of talents and capacities because as I know him for almost 3 years. This familiarity with his personality helps me most to paint a clear picture of him.

I remember when I asked a question in 9th grade about the condition that makes two circles non-intersected. Pupils became confused and didn't get the answer, as he raised his hand and answered concisely that distance between the two centers must be superior of the sum of the two radiuses. His unique reflex as well as his self-confidence gives me a clear idea since the beginning of the year that, one day, he will have a big future not only in high school but also in any community that he will belong to.

As I see his contribution to class-debates, I came to realize his strong critical thinking and vision that even some teachers don't have. I see that he always give interesting insights that push forward the analysis of issues and increase the level of the debate. I pay attention to his meticulous, technical, eloquent and courageous yet concise interferences.

I am totally bedazzled by his capacity to deliver an accurate and deep intuitive understanding of even complex problems.

Another aspect of his personality is his rapid integration within the community. In fact, despite being new in the whole city and school, he takes part of a wide network of friendships, simply because he is helpful, respectful and tolerant. He is always a back for moral support when his peers go down. XXX, highly respected by his peers, becomes a leader of the community as he guides projects and plans programs regarding his wisdom and long-sight. His presentation (which I considered the most well-structured and well-organized project that I ever assist during my 17 year-career as teacher) demonstrates his high leadership skills. I praise his presentation as the fruit of hard-work during the all school year. Under the pressure of work Med Anouar makes his classmates comfortable as he always gives a thrill in the Air.

I recommend X enthusiastically to college and I see that he deserves the admission because the future belongs to the ones who believe in the beauty of their dreams". I see him as a strong competitor regarding his explosive qualities and I think that he is a pearl that should be exactly in its honorable community.

Writing Feedback / Responsible tourists to preserve about culture and environment [5]

This is a very meticulous essay and then I suggest that you pay more attention concerning the overall arguments unless you will get out of the topic. As for grammar I don't think that it causes a problem to the understanding of the essay.

Writing Feedback / IELTS writing Task-2 which type of teaching is better indoor or outdoor [4]

I think that the introduction needs more reformulation to delver a good impression to the corrector at first you should make a generalized view about the topic and then you include your point of view with a clear presentation of all the essay parts so that you will ensure a good start in your work. This plan included in the introduction should be written after finishing the body of the essay : it's a method used by playwrights to ensure the logic and the coherence of the essay. Good Luck

Letters / Professor is asking to recommend an International student via common Application - College [14]

In our country we do not have such courses so what can I report???