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Name: Gladys Muturi
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gmuturi   
Dec 29, 2016
Letters / Play Submission Letter-I wrote a cover letter for a play titled "White Mama" [2]

"White Mama"



Dear Anna,
I am writing to you to request permission to submit my play for Shakespeare Theatre Company production. The play titled "White Mama" is a full-length drama play running approximately 120 minutes. The cast includes fifteen women and fifteen men, ages 18, 20's to early 60's. This play uses an 80's costume wear and an apartment and New York City set requirements. The play "White Mama" is set in New York City during the 1980's, about Estelle Malone, a poor, white elderly widow becomes a foster mother to an African American troubled teen, B.T. Williamson for the support money to pay her bills. When Estelle gets, an eviction notice from her apartment, B.T. enters a brutal boxing match to fight for the money that Estelle needs. The two of them may have nothing in common but in the end, a special kind of friendship has grown in between them. I'm sending "White Mama" to Shakespeare Theatre Company because I believe this play will gain interest to an audience who have been through situations on being homeless and having troubles trusting someone plus it would audience an open eye on what they're missing from the novel.

As for me, I am an actress, a writer, and a student at Montgomery College studying Theater Arts Performance. I started acting at the age of eleven in my first play at Montgomery Village Middle School and continued pursuing acting. In the eleventh grade, I entered a Christopher Columbus state essay and won the contest. It became my first writing experience. This is my first play that I've ever written and I plan to write more including musicals. Enclosing with a synopsis, cast requirements, an overview of the settings, and full manuscript of White Mama. You may contact me via phone at (000)000-0000 or email me at x@gmail. Thank you for this submission opportunity.

Best Regards,
Gladys Muturi
gmuturi   
Dec 29, 2016
Letters / 'A great future awaits him' - This is a Letter of recommendation from a Math teacher [4]

Good letter, but some changes

He is the one who always wanted to learn.

... and Vedic Math club. He has always come up to take this opportunity and is always a step ahead among his peers to help others. He had always tried ...

He is certainly an extraordinary child because ...

He is a humorous , energetic and jovial student.
gmuturi   
Dec 29, 2016
Scholarship / Leader is the one that gets the people to do the greatest things [2]

..., to set direction, to build an inspiring vision , andto create something new.Leadership is about mapping out where you need to "win" as a team or an organizationor achieve organisational goals.

One of the Georgian Non-Organization by USAID assistance made a camp for children without parental care ...
The main objective of this project was to integrate ...

On the other hand, I discovered the personality clashes. On the negative side, some of them complain ...

... serious issue that may jeopardize the project. In the final analysis, I talked them who ...
... with them and had made altogether our group task.

... valuing their accomplishments. With this mind, I believe that the most effective teams view success as a shared experience.Fortunately, we were able to solve the problem altogether and did the greatest things. Our team won the Republican Debate Tournament. After the win, My supervisor came over and praised me for my hard work for the past week and he also informed me that they will offer me a team leader job once I finished my course.

... able to communicate and collaborate, in the process, inspire people to work towards the goal, w orking closely with others, ...

@ Redinkton
gmuturi   
Sep 17, 2016
Scholarship / Life Lessons Essay: What was the most dramatic change you ever had to make? [3]

The most sacrifices that I had to make was being a single mother. Before I had my child, I was very young, honor roll student with a very bright future. I pictured myself graduating high school, attending University of Maryland, majoring Theatre Performance, getting my degree, and opening my own dance studio teaching young children how to dance and teach acting class for disabled children and teens. When I was 14 years old, I met this guy named Simon, he was really nice to me until I found out he was a senior. After I was done with my freshman year of high school, I found him on Facebook and we started communicating with each other. When we started hanging out, things got really sexually when he started putting his hand inside my pants touching my private parts. I tried to keep his hand away from my area but he couldn't resist. He wouldn't stop putting his hand inside my pants but he told me to "Get used to it if I dare want to see him". At 15, I made my decisions and decided to lost my virginity to him. After we were having sex, I never heard from him again and thinking about what I did I regretted every minute of it. As hurt I was I even told my mom about it and she was so upset about it. I usually thought "big deal high schoolers have sex all the time." When it comes to my mother, she believes that me and my siblings should wait until marriage then we could knock boots. After I revealed my secret, I changed my ways and stopped talking to Simon.

After the incident, I totally forgot about it until I laid my eyes on a handsome boy with a red sweater during my third period class in high school. I fell for Barry when I first saw him in my history class during third period class. But, little did I know, he already had a girlfriend. When I found out that he had a girlfriend, I was really upset and I tried everything to forget about him so I joined tech crew for the school play just to get SSL hours and make new friends. While I was volunteering, he showed up at tech rehearsals. The strangest thing I noticed about him is that he wouldn't stop smiling at me and waving hi at me. During our second week of rehearsals, I will never forget the day he held me with his muscular arms around my waist then he kissed me said "I Love You". I'll admit I was kind of confused because no one has ever done that to me before and I thought he was dating someone else. Then I said, "Wait, I thought you have a girlfriend?" He looked at me and told me that his girlfriend broke up with a month ago. As excited I was, I thought why not he seemed like a great guy who loves me for me. After I told everybody that we were dating, most were overjoyed but some not so much. My best friend Peter didn't like the idea of me and Barry dating because he had history of cheating on his ex-girlfriends. Even my teachers felt the same way because all I could think about was him and not my schoolwork. At lunch, I supposed to meet Barry at the chorus room so I waited for twenty minutes so I left the room until I saw Barry kissing and embracing his ex-girlfriend at the computer lab. I confronted the both of them until I decided to call it quits with him. During the weekend, I tried everything to forget about him but I couldn't stop thinking about him. So I gave him another chance. Months later, we got back together and then I found out on Facebook that he was cheating on me again with the same ex. I was heartbroken again but I was still in love with him. When he made his decision to be with her, I made a decision that I never thought I would do by trying to commit suicide. So I went into my mom's room, took my mom's razor blade out of her drawers and put it in my backpack. The next morning, I hid in the girls' bathroom and cut myself on both of my arms. After I silted my wrists, one of my friends Rae found me saw the cuts in my arms and sent me to the nurse. At the nurse room, the school nurse treated my silted wounds then sit down with me and said, "Why did you this to yourself?" After I explained everything to the nurse on why I wanted to kill myself, my hot tears started rolling down through my eyes. I hated the fact that I did it but I did it because I was unloved. When the nurse called my mom told her everything, she was in tears. I could tell that she was crying because I could hear upset voice over the phone. My mom came in the nurses room with tears in her eyes she looked at me and said, "Why? Why are doing this yourself? Is it because of a boy? Or me? Don't I give you much love?" Of course, my mom does love me but I didn't want her to know that I was trying to kill myself because of a boy. I felt like an idiot doing that to myself. The nurse referred me to see a therapist at the Crisis Center. I started seeing my therapist for only a month and stopped communicating with Barry. Over the summer, Barry called me and asked to forgive him and that he broke up with his ex for cheating on him while they were together and beg me to come back to him for the final time. At first, something in my heart tells me I still love him but my mind is telling me that he's still back to his devious ways. I wanted to give him another chance but his girlfriend told me that "they're engaged". I was so pissed I didn't want to talk to him at all for lying to me and treating like I'm his second. I stopped talking to him for months until he told he's officially done with her for good. On August, he begged me the final time and I forgave him. We stayed together for 2 years until things became rocky and sexual at the same time during our relationship. Our sex life we never use protection, we had sex more than 10 times at his in his bedroom at his moms' house and we still got away with it. When we both started college, we barely hang out together, he hangs out with his friends than me, he doesn't want to go on dates with me anymore, and he doesn't treat me like the way he used treat me when we were together. Every time I tried to talk to him, all he does is push me away and tells his exes and friends, "That I'm giving him hell in life." for no apparent reason. The day I confronted him, I was emailing him then I came over to his house and we got into a huge argument because he was still making up lies just to get away from me. After the argument, he pushed me on the ground and said, "Everything that I'm doing is none of your business." I felt so abused never in my life that I ever felt neglected like that. In the end, he did feel bad and picked me up, hugged me and said, "Look, I didn't mean it. It just I don't like it when you around my face all the time."

Overall, I forgave him but I want forget him in my heart I wanted to be with him. During the summer of 2014, I was feeling strange my stomach was getting bigger I tried to lose weight but my stomach kept growing bigger and so were my breasts. I couldn't fit through my clothes, my jeans were too tight, my shirts made me look fat, and my bra was shrinking. My mom kept asking me, "Are you pregnant?" and I said, "No". I thought she was crazy until I was having food cravings, feeling exhausted all the time, missed periods, gaining a lot of weight. I thought to myself maybe I am "preggo" but I didn't want to believe it. Three days after my 19th birthday, my mom and I went to the doctors' office to find out what's going on with me. My doctor decided to give me a pregnancy test to find out I'm pregnant or not. In my mind, I didn't want to take the test but I had to take it just to be sure. Minutes later, the test came out positive. I was in shock I didn't even want to believe that I was pregnant until I felt some movement in my stomach. My mother was very disappointed that I went behind her back and lied to her. We went over to my grandmother's house to tell her the news about what happened at the doctor's office. My grandmother has been for there my mom ever since my dad left and if I have a something to say I turned to my grandmother. During the conversation, she touched my stomach and, "Who's responsible for this?"

I said, "I don't know". Of course, I knew who the father is I was just too afraid to say his name. Then she said calmly, "You can tell me if you don't want to tell your mom you can always tell me." When my grandmother says that, I feel like I was ready to her the truth. So I said, "Barry's the father." My mom was in disbelief when she heard his name. She hated him for what he did to me.

Then she said, "Does he know? Because he needs to know. He has to be there. YOU'RE PREGNANT FOR GODS SAKE." I begged my mom forgiveness for all the secrets I've hidden from her. I was glad that my mom forgave me and she decided that she will be there for me and my future child. On November, things got very hectic when one of my good friends, Mark told me that Barry has been cheating on me the whole time with his ex and sleeping with other women. I texted Barry and asked him if it was true. He denies everything, calls out Mark for being a "habitual liar" cussed me out said, "I was stupid." After things got heated between me and him, I finally revealed to him that I was pregnant with his child. His reaction was uncanny. He never cared about my pregnancy or me anymore. Then he said, "I don't care about you or that stupid baby. I have a new girlfriend in my life I'm choosing her over you." I was crushed I felt like he took my heart stabbed it with a knife and killed me.

Throughout the whole nine months, I have kept my pregnancy a secret because I was ashamed of what I have done to myself. On the outside, I was not proud it but on the inside I am really happy to have a happy baby in my life. During my pregnancy, I never thought about abortion or adoption because I didn't want to harm my child. At 7 am, I was feeling constant pain from my stomach to my legs. It felt like a sharp pin stabbed me in my back. That's when I knew it was finally time. So my brother called the ambulance and they took me to the hospital. On January 6, 2015, at 6pm, I gave birth to a beautiful, healthy baby boy, Xavier. After giving birth, it never hurt at all but the only thing that really hurts is Xavier's dad doesn't want to step up and chose his new girlfriend over his child. It makes no sense how a man chooses an object over a child and giving my child a horrible name. I felt abused and hurt because I spent sleepless nights taking care of my baby while he's out there saying bad stuff about me and my child. After 2 years, I've been with him he decided to turn his back and bully me.

If I could go back in time, I would have never met the father of my child. I was so stupid being in a relationship with him. I never thought I would end up being a single mom raising a son alone. Every day, I look at my sons eyes I see pain because my son doesn't know who his father is. After I had my son, I refused to hang with my friends, I lost my job, and my scholarship was terminated. Actually, I felt lucky, despite I face through hardships I enjoy taking care of Xavier. I thank God for my son every day for making me be my own person because I felt as an individual who has nothing and when I found out I was pregnant I felt that I had something that I'm going to keep for the rest of my life. Even though I have a baby doesn't mean I'll never stop continuing my education. In the end, I learned on having a baby the hard way but loving my child the easy way.
gmuturi   
Sep 16, 2016
Writing Feedback / Government and Society : What Governments Can Do ? [3]

In this present time, Roles of government is (...) inside of a society , because the government becomes a substantial ...
Although, in this recent years, a lot of people judge that government is...

... primary task to serve public services such as ...
... people who are living in poverty and joblessness are also its duties.
Accordingly, poverty and joblessness are the (...) as representative of country existence .
gmuturi   
Aug 20, 2015
Scholarship / How can companies improve current programs or develop new programs in order to promote flexibility? [5]

Essay Topic: Effective talent management is important for developing and retaining high potential employees, regardless of gender. A study by the global consulting firm, Mercer, indicates that traditional programs aimed at developing female talent through flexibility, such as adjustable work hours and leave programs, may actually slow the advancement of women in the future and lead to complacency within organizations on the issue of gender equity. Given these challenges, how can companies improve current programs or develop new programs in order to promote flexibility without jeopardizing the career development of women?

This essay 2,500 word count

Womanhood is a period of a lifetime in females after she passed through childhood, adolescences and adulthood. Over the years, women have managed to be mothers, wives, teachers, professors, and caregivers to face new challenges in the worldwide workforce today. Demographics of the worldwide workforce showed that women's participation has increased such shifts are affecting worker needs. But organizations have not adapted to the expanding caretaking responsibilities and work-life balance needs of their employees, and the current workplace paradigm is placing growing stress on individuals and families. A recent Women in International Security study found that many women who have served or are currently serving in mid- and senior-level positions in the national security arena question whether it is possible to successfully juggle caretaking responsibilities and senior-level decision-making positions in government (Shoemaker, Brown, Barbour 2011). Currently, women are still facing gender discrimination. In everyday language, "gender" and "sex" are used inter-changeably, but the two terms have different meanings. Social scientists use the term "sex" to refer to a person's biological or anatomical identity as male or female, while reserving the term "gender" for the collection of characteristics that are culturally associated with maleness or femaleness. Discrimination is generally illegal regardless of whether it is based on sex, or gender, or both sex and gender. Though women have acquired the legal right to work, there is still plenty of sexism in the workforce. On average, women get paid .75 cents to a dollar less that men make for doing the same type of work. Women are also encouraged to take up the stereotypical jobs such as secretarial, clerical, nursing, childcare, social work, elementary teaching and so forth. Many statistics also show that women are staying away from the math and science. The business world also lacks strong female figures; while there are plenty of secretaries and assistants working for major corporations, the number of female CEOs and women in power are few. These statistics demonstrate the unfortunate condition facing the women who do fight to work outside the home. According to the "Play like a Man, Win like a Woman: What Men Know about Success That Women Need to Learn", Fortune magazine recently ran a cover story on the 50 most powerful women in America. These women occupied---group presidents, vice presidents, founders of their own businesses. All the men would have CEO of large companies (Evans, 2000).The bottom line is that most women are at disadvantage. And what about men? Do they even care what women think? According to men, men believe that women should give up their careers and focus on their marriages and families while men do all the work to support their wives and children. For example, in the book, "Play like a Man, Win like a Woman: What Men Know about Success That Women Need to Learn", the preface talked about how the author gave up her career to focus on her marriage. When Evans graduated college and began working on her career, she took her mom's advice and gave up her career for her own marriage. The book says, "The manager of a chain of millinery (women's hats) stores in the stores in the 1920's, my mother gave up her career for marriage. But she never surrendered her drive or her belief in herself. Throughout my life, she gave me two sets of instructions: I must be a good and proper woman and I could be anyone I wished. I took that advice to heart. After leaving college in 1963, I began a successful career in politics, working on Capitol Hill and at the White House. But when I married, like my mother and most women of the time, I abandoned my career for my husbands." (Evans p.19). In reality, not all husbands are going to support their wives working. If the husband is not supportive of having the wife in the work field, it does not signify that she should give up. There are husbands who want their wives to only be housewives, to only care about the well-being of the family. Most of these men are concerned about how society would view them if they allowed their wives to work. They don't want to give the impression that they need the extra financial help that they are in such a dire economic state that the wife must forsake her kids to go out and work. While stay-at-home dads are increasing in number, they are still viewed as "deadbeat dads" rather than noble husbands. But society should not criticize those men who choose to stay at home while the wife works. Instead they should be praised more, since a women's job is never ending. All men need to stay at home, jobless, for at least a month to realize just how much work is put into the household without any form of compensation. (B.Kuz, 2008). Both sexes are thinking about expanding the traditional boundaries whether at work or at home. For instance, some men are now staying home to raise children. The way we nurture our children in our culture is a female-determined system. (Evans, 2000). Men believe they can handle being the main caregiver of the household than women taking care of the household. Since the 1970s, about 550,000 men would take on households like cooking, cleaning, doing laundry, and taking care of their children to avoid child care payments and focus on their marriage. According to Child Care Aware of America's 2013 report, the average annual cost of center-based care for a small child in the U.S. runs as high as $16,000. For two children the annual expense can average as much as $28,600. These numbers can be much higher in metropolitan areas, rivaling the cost of sending a kid to college. (Time, 2014).In the book, Lean In by Sheryl Sandberg, it points out that, "women's average annual earnings decrease by 20 percent if they are out of the workforce for just one year...30 percent after two to three years, which is the average amount of time professional women off-ramp from the workforce."

In the Old Testament, when God created Adam. Adam was lonely and looking for love. So God took Adam's ribs and created Eve as Adam's wife. If you read in Genesis, it says, "The Lord God said, "It is not good for the man to be alone. I will make a helper suitable for him." ....he took one of the man's ribs and closed up the place with the flesh. Then the Lord God made a woman from the rib he taken out of the man, and he brought her to the man." (New International Version, Genesis 2:18, 21-22). Eve was the first woman God created. In the early 1700's, women's work was essential to the colonial economy. Enslaved African women helped raise cash crops such as tobacco and indigo while most white women worked as farm wives performed tasks and made products their families needed like butter, soap, candles, spun fibers, wove cloth, sewed and knitted clothes, did many other chores in the house. Although women contributed to the colonial economy, they did not have many rights. Women could not vote. In most churches, they could not preach or hold office. Also, a married woman could not own property without her husband's permission. By law, even the money a woman earned belonged to her husband. Wealthy families went beyond reading and learning to writing and arithmetic. Poor children learned reading from their mothers. As for fathers and husbands, they became apprentice. An apprentice is a learned a trade from an experienced craftsman. (Garcia, Ogle, Risinger, Stevos p.120-121).In the mid-1800, the women's rights movement was ridiculed. Women still could not vote; however, single women enjoyed managing their own property but married women couldn't inherited their own property except for their husbands. (Garcia, Ogle, Risinger, Stevos p.427-428). There were two political cartoons mocking women's rights to vote. In 1855, the New York Herald, shows a political cartoon of a husband and wife fighting over pants. Another political cartoon, in 1896, showed women running into a store called, "Place of Registration" on the left side of the window it said, "A souvenir spoon given away latest styles in fall bonnets" and on the right side of the window it said, "Step in and register and see our newest dress patterns." In 1912, women had enough and decided get their rights to vote by getting women involved with politics. On May 6, 1917, millions of women began marching the Women's suffragists' parade in New York City carrying placards and signs giving the government a chance for women's rights. Victory was made when the 19th Amendment was passed in 1920 for women's right to vote. During World War I and II, while men were at war, women went to work in factories, shipyards, and offices. At first, heavy industries resisted hiring female workers including African Americans, but by 1944 some 3.5 million stood on assembly lines turning out cargo ships and bombers. Roosevelt outlawed discrimination in industries with federal contracts. (Garcia, Ogle, Risinger, Stevos p.576).

It has been almost 100 years since women got their right to vote. After the 19th Amendment made it legal for women's right to vote, women in the 21st century were still facing the reality of job discrimination. When a woman chooses a career, she also considers the effects it would have on her family life. While the "wife's presence in the labor force means higher income," the jobs women do take illustrate their concern for making time for the family (Duker). This doesn't encourage them to go after high-paying, high-demand jobs. Most women take on a typical 9-5 office workday so that they can be home to cook dinner, do the laundry and oversee the children's homework; they come home to a second shift. But household work is not compensated. Mama's apple pies do not have any value. At first, the thought of a woman leaving her family to go and find a job elsewhere was unfathomable. But the fight for women's rights was not to be deterred; it was just as much about economics as it was about making a stand. "In a sample of Irish Roman-Catholic families with at least one child of elementary-school age, we have shown that both in the working class and in the middle class the working wife exerts more influence in family decision-making than the non-working wife" (Heer). Because they had a source of income, women began to fight for the chance to have a say about how the money was used in the home. This paved the way for the notion of equality within the home. But a job hinted at financial independence and many men felt threatened by the idea. Therefore, HR and talent management professionals can help place recruitment, development and retention of women in senior leadership roles without jeopardizing their workplace by accessing your organization's actual and perceived gaps in the recruitment, development and retention of women and report any discrepancies to senior leaders, offer work flexibility and sponsor businesses.

Today, four out of 10 women in the U.S. workforce are working mothers and are their households' primary breadwinners (Shoemaker, Brown, Barbour 2011) First off, Women are not only increasingly the primary breadwinners, they are also the world's largest group in terms of purchasing decisions; studies show that women comprise between 80 and 85 percent of the U.S. consumer market. Combine this with the knowledge that companies with higher percentages of female senior-level managers tend to outperform their competitors (Storrie). The point is not that one of these perspectives is better than the other but that, from early childhood on, boys and girls play with different sets of rules. Men created rules in the game of business. Women are trying to be effective competitors. (Evans, 2000). For example, there are 3 kids (2 guys and 1 girl) named Michael, Danny, and Melanie. Michael invited Danny over his house to play a video game called "Mortal Kombat". Melanie comes in her brother's room and asked, "Can I play?" Her brother, Michael said, "You can't play video games with us. You're a girl! Girls play with dolls, not video games." Danny gives Melanie his controller and begins to play. She played as "Kitana" and her brother played as "Sub Zero". After playing two rounds of Mortal Kombat, Kitana beats Sub Zero. This story demonstrates Women can be effective competitors and men are just testing women to see if they can handle business. Workplace policies and requirements are drastically out of step with the needs of women, men, and the modern workforce as a whole. Recent research shows that 90 percent of mothers and 95 percent of fathers report a work-family conflict. Although the experiences may differ according to class, all families are experiencing increased stress in this balancing act. In the low-income bracket, work-family stress is compounded by the reality that poor families are not equipped to pay for care for dependents, and these workers have little or no job flexibility(Shoemaker, Brown, Barbour 2011).Today, the government thinks that no matter what age, race, sex, religion, political affiliation, or disability you are anyone can get a job. In July 2014, President Obama signed an executive order protecting federal employees from discrimination on the basis of gender identity. Today's business landscape, women is most likely to occupy a position of power when she started, or inherited, her own business. Gender discrimination has decreased, yet women, especially those with family responsibilities, continue to face obstacles to work-life balance, promotion, and advancement. Workplace flexibility and perceived advancement opportunities are key factors in women's decisions to leave the workforce. Secondly, women are less likely to get a promotion. Chances of promotion aren't much better even if women stick it out with one company. Women experience internal promotion rates that are 34 to 47 percent lower than for men. It also doesn't matter whether they're entry-level or at the top of their company: at every level, women are less likely to be promoted to the next rung by the following year (Covert, 2014). Also, women prefer to work part-time because husbands wants women to get minimum wage and have more quality time for mothers to take care of their children. But most women are likely to work full time to get more experience with their jobs to more gain leadership than men. In research, A New York Times/CBS News survey this year found that 49 percent of mothers wished to work part-time, compared to 27 percent who wished to work full-time. A Pew Research Center study found that married mothers are especially likely to prefer part-time work than Unmarried women. Women and men who are tempted to shift to a part-time schedule should first consider whether they could work a full-time schedule more flexible (Vanderkam, 2015).

In my opinion, Women are Gods beautiful creation, we were raised to feel comfortable inside our mother's womb for nine months and born to be independent .Without us women, we wouldn't be able to nurturer our children and men wouldn't learn how to take care of a child. As Sandberg points out in her book, "Girls growing up today are not the first generation to have equal opportunity, but they are the first to know that all that opportunity does not necessarily translate into professional achievement. (Sandberg p.36)".

Check and see if there are any errors I need to correct! Thanks!
gmuturi   
Aug 19, 2015
Writing Feedback / What other skill(s) should schools focus on to prepare students for the workplace? [3]

Most of students are future employees, so that they must have a strong communication skill, as they have to communicate with their colleagues and even their boss. Moreover, most of the current jobs requires employees to contact customers regularly.

Well just a few mistakes,but its a good essay
gmuturi   
Aug 19, 2015
Grammar, Usage / What do DEADLY SILENCE usually indicate? Read Between the Lines. [3]

What else can the "Deadly Silence" mean ?
Well A deadly silence can mean something is silent and deadly, like for example "a person dying from a deadly disease (like Ebola, Cancer, etc.) or when you define "deadly silence" think of a story about deadly silent story. Well I'm not sure if you have to write a story about it.

That's all I have to say.
gmuturi   
Aug 5, 2015
Scholarship / How scholarship would help me, debt-free - Essay 2 [4]

Education has an impact on my life. This scholarship would help me obtain a better life and I would worry less about money for college. As a full-time student, I am having a hard time finding a job. Recently, I lost my job as a student aide and I tried applying for jobs just to work part time, pay my tuition and take care of my son. Unfortunately, yet all the positions were filled. My mom is the only one who works full-time as a Geriatric Nursing Assistant (GNA) and she can't afford to pay my tuition because she needs to pay the rent and utility bills. Receiving this scholarship would help me tremendously because it would help me avoid debt and focus on my education. My mom has done so much in my life and I want to give her much more.

I fixed it. Anything I need to change on this essay.
gmuturi   
Aug 5, 2015
Scholarship / How scholarship would help me, debt-free - Essay 2 [4]

Essay 2: How would scholarship funds help you? Why do you feel you should receive a scholarship? Explain any unusual circumstances that affect your financial need.

Education is an important impact in my life and this scholarship would help me get a better life and I wouldn't have to worry about money for college. As a full-time student, I am having a hard time finding a job. Recently, I was terminated from my job as a Student Aide and I tried applying for jobs just to work part time, pay my tuition and take care of my son but unfortunately all the positions were filled. My mom is the only one who works full-time as a GNA and she can't afford to pay my tuition because she needed to pay utility bills and rent. Receiving this scholarship would mean a lot to me because it would give me a chance to stay away from debt and focus on my responsibilities. My mom has done so much in my life and I want to give her much more.
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