Writing Feedback / Some people argue that those who live in apartment tower is far from social life; IELTS [2]

Some people say that living in a high-rise apartment block is lonely experience because there is no community spirit. Others say that people who live in a high-rise apartments a much better sense of community than those who live in houses.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The number of skycapper, including high-rise apartment block, has grown rapidly. So does the number of people living in high-rise tower, which has increased significantly and more common in recent years. Regard to this issue, while some people argue that those who live in apartment tower is far from social life, I believe that they can create togetherness among occupants.

The majority of people have some arguments that they do not opt to live in apartment block due to lack of communication among dwellers. For instance, the average residents are normally urban society and busy workers who spend more time at their workplaces, so when they go back to apartment, sometimes there is no time to maintain relationship each other. This is the reason why dwelling in residential tower makes they more likely to have less community spirit and are reclusive.

On the other hand, I prefer to disagree with those statements. To turn with, dwellers in high-rise apartments, in their pastime, can enjoy leisure activities together among neighbors, which is a great opportunity to socialize. As an example, they can hold weekend parties or just luxuriate the facilities provided by apartment developer such as working in gym or walking around park together. In addition to this, thay can make simple interactions to strengthen the bound they might have, like say 'Hi' when meeting each other in elevator, parking area or main entrance of the building.

To conclude, even though some community think that being a resident in apartment block is not a right choice to have rich relationships among dwellers because of the sense of alienation, I uttery believe that occupants can establish community spirit among them by create simple interactions or spend free time together. However, to live either in a residential apartment or in a residential house is a personal decision.

Writing Feedback / Tourism can cause some problems in socio-culture due to its bad influence. [2]

Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to.
How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?

Tourism brings both posiitive and negative impacts in several sectors, particularly in socio-culture. Some people argue that demerits outweigh the merits. However, government and individuals have to solve this controversial issue.

In term of problems, especially in socio-culture, it is true that harmful impacts can be occured. First of all, local people could feel unrespected since some tourists often do not appreciate their moral values and customs. Secondly, tourism could turn the fungtion of traditional religious ritual, for instance Bali's culture Tari Kecak (Kecak Dance) which is originally only performed on special religious ritual, now can be performed on a daily occasions. Furthermore, tourist destinations could be a center of crime or other activities which are possibly illegal such as illegal trade.

Regard to solutions, I believe both society and government can work together to offer and apply some solutions. We can copycat a Palestinian peace builder Aziz Abu Sarah's notion, that utilize tourism as extraordinary way to approache peace-keeping, besides by media and education as well. He realizes that tourism is the perfect medium to get people connected each other and build friendships so that he established Mejdi Tours in 2009, a social enterprise which have successfully turned the misunderstanding often occurs between religions to good views. Trough this, he shows how simple interactions among people in different cultures can erode decades of hate. In addition to this, government should be responsible to make strict and clear regulations regard to tourism in order to minimize the adverse effects that may occur.

Therefore, it is clear that tourism can cause some problems in socio-culture due to its bad influence. But if governments and community share a beneficial mutualism to make solutions applied properly, the disadvantages could be reduced. And they can focus to develop turism due to many benefits which could be gained.

Writing Feedback / TV shows like The X Factor, Idol, Got Talent, Everybody's Superstar, etc. - just for entertainment? [2]

Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today.
Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment?

Talent shows, such as The X Factor, Idol, Got Talent, Everybody's Superstar, Beauty Pageant, etc, have popped up as the highest-rated of broadcasting programs on television in these days. While some argue that this is only a source of entertainment, I believe that this is a good medium for talented people to show and improve their ability as well as their self-esteem and confidence.

Those of people who oppose televised-talent-hunt shows think that these programs are only aiming to entertain viewers. Everybody's Superstar for instance, the showcase is packed well-organized and well-structured by producer team. Some people argue that it has been known that several segments are scripted to get more attention of the audiences so that the producer gains more profit. This case is a reason why some community think that talent programs are just pastime viewings.

However, I strongly believe that these are more than just entertainment series, these provide a good occasions where participants can perform their talents and skills; moreover, during the quarantine period, participants will be trained professionally to be professionals. In addition to this, these are attested can grow the spirit for people, particularly youngsters, to be able to compete, as well as boost their self-esteem and confidence. Certain programs, like Abang None Jakarta (a tourism ambassador contest in Indonesia), are established with the expectation can be a positive canvass for young generation to be better, and with other objectives such as to prevent negative bahaviour which are vulnarabe with juvenile delinquency.

To sum up, even though some of the programs are probably scripted, but it is not entirely. By contrast, I would argue that the talent showcases are actually right ways which have an edge over any other ordinary television programs.

Writing Feedback / 'keep-in-touch with the entire world'; Without the internet, the world would be completely different [2]

The Internet is probably the most significant invention of the last 30 years. Without it, our lives would be completely different.

To what extent do you agree or disagree!

The internet has become the most notable human invention over the last three decades. I agree with the statement that without the internet, the world would be completely different. It can not be denied that it has led changes in our lives. However, this invention not only has brought a merit but also a demerit as well.

These days, the internet is far from obscure. I think it is the center of attention for individuals around the world since it plays central role in this era. It is not arguable that it has affected the way we work, live and learn. Besides the comfort and the convenience offered, people get connected to the internet for some reasons, but most of internet users use it as a medium to keep-in-touch with the entire world since you can stay involved in the day-to-day lives of other people. Facebook for instance, a place where you can share information and a great deal of other activities that might be useful and beneficial in many terms. This is an evidence that alternation in our lives caused by the internet brings positive effect.

However, besides conveying the positive change, unfortunately the internet also brings a risk as well. When using the internet, people are sometimes not aware of the negative influences. Consequently, they could be vulnerable to get themselves involved in activities which are inappropriate or possibly illegal, such as pornographic and cyber bullying.

To sum up, I agree that the internet has brought a change, without it our lives might be absolutely different. Regarding to its positive and negative impacts inflicted, I would say the wisdom of people, particularly internet users, are really needed.

Writing Feedback / Having a job you love doing is not the only factor that makes you happy. (IELTS WRITING TASK 2) [2]

Some people say that in order to be happy, you must have a job you love doing. Others say that others factors are more important.

Do you think that people can only be happy if they have a job really enjoy?

As the saying goes, "Love what you do and do what you love". Similarly, regarding to the job. Although some people believe that it is very important to have an occupation that you enjoy the most since it can make you happy, I strongly believe that having a job you love doing is not the only key to make you pleased.

You, who deal with a job you love, will feel happier and more satisfied because you work with passion. This is a good thing since you might assume that workload as something you enjoy, furthermore this can help you meet your goals.

However, I would argue that there is another reason why this is not the only factor that determines someone's happiness. Another key, such as a good work environment, plays an important role in this case. A friendly workplace involves many things including the relationship you build among employees as well as your relationship with your boss. A day seems to run much better when you are surrounded by nice sociable coworkers and are willingly to help you anytime you need. In order to improve the relationship among colleagues, you can start from simple things like say "thank you" or "sorry" as a culture, or have mealtime and celebrate special occasion together. Truthfully, the strong bond with people nearby will lead to happiness. In addition, a good relationship between top management and staff member can also establish a great workplace. Many things can be done to improve this, such as respect and appreciation, which eventually brings a positive impact.

To sum up, it is acceptable that doing a job you love can make you glad since you work with passion. But as far as I concern, a friendly workplace in which you work is another vital aspect that influences the feeling, it makes you convenient and happy at work so that you can love your job, which eventually helps you do the job more productive.