Writing Feedback / Electronic inventions bring a negative effect on our health. Agree or disagree? [2]

As you know, developing new devices such as computer and television,... make people motionless to do some exercises, so it is resulted into more sicknesses and diseases. However, I think it depends on the behavior of each person because each person has different daily activities.

For most people, computer and television are the main devices which entertain people in their daily lives. However, using them too much in the office causes some problems in citizen's health. If you watch television or computer too much, it can not only cause some problems on their eyes but also influence their work. Also, the operating of computer for work causes a big problem on their vision. Most people spend their time watching, which causes many negative effects for citizen's health.

On the other hand, the newer technologies have more advantages for people's health. For example, Television is one of the entertain everyone who necessary for relax, laugh, and find news. Computers are very helpful some people to do their jobs. With computer, make people do many works easier, you can watch video, play games, and also browsing the internet. Therefore, technology is not the only reason that people do less physical activities. There are other tools which cause some physical problems . And nowadays, new product have used in many hospitals all over the world, which help the doctors detect the problem of their patients. But sometimes, they spend they leisure all day for lazy and make our body overweight.

In conclusion, in my view of our problem in gaining weight can be originated from less physical activities which is the main disadvantages of new inventions. Indeed, everybody in the world needs computer and television. However, sometimes we have remembers that we must be to exercise before and after use it.

Writing Feedback / Computers can help people save much time and money, but they are not flexible [3]

Describe some job positions that may be lost because of computers, and discuss at least one problem

In the modern world, the technology has developing more and more. Thank to technology, the life becomes easier. People can save much time and money with the help of this advanced technology. As you know, technology gives human a lot of benefits. Besides the advantages, there are disadvantages also.

A number of jobs have been lost as a direct result of the advanced technology. Postman are almost nonexistent at present. Nowaday, people prefer sending an e-mail message to using the usual hand-written letters. People use the ATM machines to send or get money instead of postman. Besides, when apps like Uber and Grab taxi are on a strong development, the taxi coordinator, will become gradually "extinct". They are replaced by the intelligent applications, which can help passengers self-selecting vehicles and places to go. For another example, if you go to the libraries now, many new computers have been installed for helping people instead of librarians like in the past. Therefore, the unemployment continues to get worse.

As you know, computers can help people save much time and money, but they are not flexible. If customers have a unique request or problem, it is difficult for computer to solve in the best way. An automated bank machine cannot provide assistance enthusiastically to customers. For example, if you lose your credit card, the bank machine can not help you. Besides, in the library, there are many elderly people who don't know how to use the computers and can't find anyone to help.

Technology plays the important role in many job positions. However, the technology have been increasing day by day is the reason for few losing job positions, especially some job positions require little education.

Writing Feedback / Nowadays, people like living in big and developed cities. [2]

The advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?

Nowadays, in the modern world, people like living in big and developed cities. However, the majority of people wanted to live in small and peaceful villages in the past. There were advantages and disadvantages to having living in small communities.

I think there were three reasons that make me want to live in small villages. Firstly, villages were peaceful and comfortable places. They were not polluted and noisy like the cities. Therefore, your health and morale would better. Besides, people were very friendly and good-hearted. When you had any difficulties or problems in the life, they were willing to help you enthusiastically without thinking. And one more thing, which made the small villages to become a good places for living was the security and safety. The small villages did not have many crimes, robberies as the cities.

I believe that living in the small villages, not the central, had three disadvantages. Firstly, living in the small communities would make you lose many opportunities to develop yourself and pursue your dream. Because most of the best company were located in the city. Moreover, quality of infrastructure was not good such as: school, hospital, library,... For example, if you were seriously ill, it took a lot of time for to go to the hospital in the city. The last disadvantages was the entertainments. In the small villages, there was very few entertainment center. As you know, in the evening, people there often watch television, talk to each other or teach their children, so you would feel bored.

In my opinion, although the advantages of small villages were greater than the disadvantages, I still choose the large cities to live. The reason is that I need to live in the good conditions like the city to realize my dream and develop my career.