Writing Feedback / Discussion of the impacts of modern means of communication. [3]

Hello, this is my essay about the influences of the modern forms of communication. Please help me find out what is wrong. I extremely appreciate for any comments.

Long ago, people communicate with friends via telephone, fax, letters...There life was more realistic. Nowadays, people usually use Internet communicate. They make friends with people all over the word, but they spend less time to meet friends and family in real life. However, it is not so certain that this has caused negative effects for people.

In the past, the amount of time people spent seeing their friends was more often, for instant, when someone's birthday, everyone came together and celebrated his or her birthday. They felt closer. Unlike modern people, they usually send greetings through social networking sites such as Facebook, Twitter, Gmail.....In my opinion, this is meaningless. Although they have lots at birthday greetings, but they still feel lonely. Moreover, when the social networking sites were developed, people were less interested in each other, they always hold the cellphone in hand, and immersed in a virtual world.

However, the advent of internet also helps our life better. We have more friends, can know what are they thinking, how they look, what are they doing and the changes of the world. The communication becomes easier and more convenience than ever. People can study, run business, meet their friends without leaving home. As a result, our social relationship is extended.

On the other hand, the modern life makes people too busy. They don't have enough time to care about everything around. They are rushing to do their job, so people no longer see each other much anymore. That's why we should not blame modern forms of communication for decreasing the time people spend seeing their friends.

In conclusion as far as I concerned, people feel happier now, modern communication has improved our social life. However, we need to make sure that we should not be addicted to the social networking sites.

Writing Feedback / The advantages caused to humans when the computer was invented. [5]

Nowadays, with the development of computers, people have invented a lot of modern technologies. When the computer was born, people used it to make their work more efficient. However, besides various benefits, computers have caused unemployment and many other problems.

First of all, most handicraft villages are fading because of the mass production technology. The traditional manufacturing takes more time, needs more employees and the design is not varied. In industrial production, more and more computers work on behalf of humans, as it has high accuracy and productivity. Moreover, the army is also studying to create weapons controlled via computers, such as pilotless aircraft, radar, or rocket... people have explored the universe by satellite. So, the computer is very important, the more developed society, the more helpful computers are.

However, in my view, there are many problems. Initially, because computers do all so people should be unemployed. The companies apply computer technology, it oporates mạhines, checks products, and does all of the production stages, workers will be fired to decrease the costs. Also, the products of mass production are not featured and specific. Only the special meticulous man can create unique products. After that, another problem is health issues. People who use computers a lot may get a lot of different diseases, like myopia, backache, or loss of memory...

All in all, I think the computers bring for us many advantages, in the globalization era, without computers, people can not thrive and develop strongly. But, on the other hand, computers have affected many people, it raises too many questions to be answered. How we do to solve the problems caused by computer ?

Writing Feedback / Rural life and modern life. What is better ? [3]

Hello everyone, this essay is my homework. It's very important. Please help me edit this homework as soon as possible. Thank you very much.

In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays. most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. So, which is better : living in the large city or a small comunity. The advantages and disavantages when we lived in small villages.

In my opinion, there were four main benefit. Firstly, people in small villages always knew each other, so when someone got into troubles, everyone in the villages would help to solve the problems. Sencondly, the people who lived in small villages were very friendly and generous. The inhabitants were in a quiet way of life. Next, the children in there could grow up in natural way. They did not play video games or watched TV a lot, they could play with many friends, and they enjoyed doing outdoor activities more than indoor activities. Also, the atmosphere in small villages is cleaner and fresher than in large cities, so the people were in a healthy lifestyle.

However, I think the disadvantages of living in a small comunity were education, healthcare and technology. Firstly, people lived in small villages would be backward because they could not approach to advanced sciene and technology. The children in a small village also could not access to the better education. They did not learn with modern education facilities. The schools were too far and there was no public transports, so the children went to school very difficult. The other site, people did not get good healthcare, they were treated in the absence of medical equipments because the hospitals were located too far away the villages.

All in all, I think the people who lived in small villages were happier. The children lived in a small comunity grown up healthy, they have better health and less illnesses. The inhabitants formed a stronger relationship, they helped each other when they had problems. However, if young people were ambitious, they had to move away from the village, they did not want to be limited to a small villages. Nowadays, there are more advantages to living in a large city.