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Improve my Motivation Letter for Masters in Environmental Engineering

2 - The reviewer reads over a thousand applications that have students claiming to have experienced one thing or another....

LettersAbeershaykh - 1 day ago / Holt - 18 hrs ago
Civil Engineering - Motivation Letter for ETH Zurich Master's Application

2 - The weakness of this essay lies in how you do not really portray your strengths as a researcher and...

Lettersarjit - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
Review my PhD motivation letter for aligned LLM companions

2 - Since you were part of a research and development team, you cannot claim to be the single developer...

Lettersvishalk - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
Motivation Letter for MSc Human Computer Interaction in Universität Siegen

6 - Maybe you can say "With all aspects and desires stated" instead of "With everything said"...

Lettersmariegold - Nov 10, 2024 / Edukid2309 - Nov 17, 2024
Motivation Letter for Erasmus Mundus Joint Master Image Processing and Computer Vision AI

2 - Kindly edit this paragraph in particular to not sound like an extended version of your resume. The reviewer...

Lettersdarent - Nov 6, 2024 / Holt - Nov 6, 2024
Information Engineering - Letter of Motivation for Bachelor

3 - Focus more on skills and experience directly tied to embedded systems rather than general IT knowledge....

Lettersjashimuddin - Oct 25, 2024 / jasminee - Nov 2, 2024
Motivation letter for CERN 2025 Technical Student Internship programme for civil engineering.

4 - thanks @jasminee i have make suitable improvement kindly check it on my new threads Thank you again : )...

Lettersmilan123 - Nov 2, 2024 / milan123 - Nov 2, 2024
Nuclear power - Erasmus Mundus Sarena motivation letter

6 - @milan123 Noted. Thanks...

LettersKinami1 - Oct 29, 2024 / Kinami1 - Nov 2, 2024
Motivation letter for Radboud University Artificial Intelligence

4 - Nice write up. Just a little suggestion. Your introductory paragraph should capture more of statistical problem, probably a...

Lettersthunderk3g - Oct 20, 2024 / Kinami1 - Oct 29, 2024
Motivation Letter - M.Sc. Mechatronics

4 - @LazyWillow7 When I am writing a motivational letter, I am often advised not to dwell on motivations that started...

LettersLazyWillow7 - Oct 22, 2024 / ryayra - Oct 28, 2024
Clinical experience - Erasmus Mundus motivation letter

3 - Focus on conciseness by highlighting key experiences and specific program alignment, and consider streamlining early achievements to strengthen relevance...

LettersFlorence Dambani - Oct 21, 2024 / alian - Oct 26, 2024
Environment and Economics - motivational letter for University of Eastern Finland

2 - The letter is too long. A motivational letter should not have more than 400-600 words in its entirety because...

LettersShanto856 - Oct 23, 2024 / Holt - Oct 24, 2024
Motivation Letter for Master's Degree in Electrical Engineering at TU Delft

2 - Your essay does not flow as a solid document because you have divided it into chapters or discussion points...

LettersAnastasis_k - Oct 16, 2024 / Holt - Oct 17, 2024
Motivation Letter - MSc In Quantitive Finance ETH UZH

3 - Hello, - If there is a format that you have to follow, it would be helpful to give us...

Letterssnane - Oct 16, 2024 / Anastasis_k - Oct 16, 2024
Motivational Letters - MSc in Sustainable Outdoor Hospitality Management

3 - Ensure each paragraph has a clear focus. You could structure it around your experiences, skills gained, and how they...

Lettersjudyyy123 - Oct 10, 2024 / Nandia20060709 - Oct 13, 2024
Medical Field - Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship Motivation Letter

2 - This is more of a personal statement than a motivation letter. Specifically, this is not an essay that was...

LettersNandia20060709 - Sep 28, 2024 / Holt - Sep 30, 2024
Is This a Good Motivation Letter ? to Master Program Transport and Geinformation Technology at KTH

3 - Thanks for your review @Holt I have written another version based on your valuable comments. Do you think...

Lettersmhmdazmi - Sep 22, 2024 / mhmdazmi - Sep 23, 2024
Letter of Motivation for M.Sc Data Science Germany.

2 - This does not come across as a motivational letter. It will be seen mostly as an essay form of...

Lettersemnikkhil - Sep 11, 2024 / Holt - Sep 15, 2024
Bachelor in Psychology - MOTIVATION LETTER ERASMUS MUNDUS (applying again)

2 - The essay covers only the reasons you are interested in the program and the foundation of that interest (unnecessary...

Lettersmaydreams - Sep 10, 2024 / Holt - Sep 12, 2024
Molecular Biology, Biomedicine, and Clinical Research (BMBIC) -Motivation letter for PhD application

2 - I believe that the case study you have chosen to present as having inspired you is too old to...

Lettersmidori13 - Sep 5, 2024 / Holt - Sep 7, 2024
Motivation letter for Public Policy and Developmental Studies review DAAD

2 - You have mnade the same error that the other DAAD applicants make when writing a letter of motivation. The...

Lettershamzamarwat - Aug 30, 2024 / Holt - Aug 30, 2024
A forestry graduate - motivation letter for master's studies in Europe

2 - Harish, only paragraph 3 is useful in this case. That is the only aspect that has references to your...

LettersHarishpandey - Aug 29, 2024 / Holt - Aug 30, 2024
Software engineer - Motivation Letter for CERN Technical Studentship

2 - Your desire to be an inspiration to the students from your village is admirable. However, that should not be...

LettersAbhishekbhardwaj - Jul 26, 2024 / Holt - Jul 28, 2024
Motivation letter for PhD at University after M.Sc. in Biotechnology

2 - You need to reference the current work of the professor as well. Create a relationship between his research, and...

Letterslibrarymyth - Jul 25, 2024 / Holt - Jul 28, 2024
Study Plan/ SoP for Canadian study permit

3 - @Holt Hi, thank you so much for a swift response! I know it was quite difficult to read...

Letterscccremebrulee - Jul 20, 2024 / cccremebrulee - Jul 20, 2024
How convincing is my narrative for my motivation statement for CERN's administrative student program

2 - This is supposed to be a motivational letter, It is not a paragraphical form of your work related experiences....

Letterswannabdiplomat - Jul 19, 2024 / Holt - Jul 19, 2024
A short motivation letter for studying mathematics - 400 to 500 words, but involves change of fields

2 - This letter is very weak. It is not the kind of motivational letter that would catch the attention of...

Lettersraj8799 - Jun 11, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Motivation Letter to Apply for Ministry of Foreign Affairs and International Cooperation Grants

3 - The 1st paragraph, you miss a dot (.) here "while pursuing my studies". 2nd paragraph, you listed some...

Letterssholdril - May 23, 2024 / viscaria - May 29, 2024
Motivation letter for Masters Program on Applied Computational Mechanics at Skoltech University

2 - Sadly, you wrote an academic biography instead of a motivational statement. So the majority of this essay, except for...

LettersAli Ur Rehman - May 20, 2024 / Holt - May 27, 2024
Letter of Recommendation for undergraduate college / commitment and consistency

2 - The problem with this letter is that you are claiming to be the counselor at the school. So the...

Lettershxddsu - May 16, 2024 / Holt - May 17, 2024
Help writing a motivation letter for scholarships

2 - You could base your motivation letter on your experience living in Gaza. Look at the architecture around you, discuss...

LettersMalaknasser_07 - May 10, 2024 / Holt - May 17, 2024
Motivation Letter For Kazakhstan Government Scholarship

2 - The first thing you have to do is delete this essay. This is not a motivational letter. You mistook...

Lettersraffyqurtuba - Apr 30, 2024 / Holt - May 4, 2024
Motivation Letter for Master's program in "Advanced Systems in Automation and Information Technology

3 - @Holt Thanks Sir, Your advice was very helpful, how about this: To a new thread please....

LettersSteve24kh - Apr 17, 2024 / Steve24kh - Apr 21, 2024
International arbitration and environmental law - Motivation letter for master admission

2 - What you have written is a personal statement. There is very little motivation focus in the letter so this...

LettersLeila321 - Apr 20, 2024 / Holt - Apr 21, 2024
Education at the University of Twente - motivation letter

2 - This is not a well developed motivational letter. It is short, which makes it a good draft. An acceptable...

LettersNovellaleedeman - Apr 15, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
MSc in Information and Communication Technology - Letter of motivation for sweden University

2 - Okay, you have to stop with the over excitement. You should not be emphasizing information in your letter with...

LettersKunal_Gujar - Apr 4, 2024 / Holt - Apr 13, 2024
Mathematics and technology - motivation letter to a german university

2 - Paragraphs 3 and 4 are out of place in this presentation. You do not need to give a summarized...

Letterssara1999 - Apr 3, 2024 / Holt - Apr 13, 2024
Motivation letter for MSc in Data Science.

2 - Remove the reference to your academic training. Those are normally a part of a motivational letter. You should sell...

Letterssupunchandi - Apr 3, 2024 / Holt - Apr 13, 2024
MotivationalLetter: Master's degree in Microbiology and Microbial Biotechnology

2 - Since you already have an existing master's degree, you should be justifying why you would want to pursue a...

LettersDam94 - Mar 31, 2024 / Holt - Apr 3, 2024
Faculty of Management and Tourism at Hanoi University - MOTIVATION LETTER FOR ERASMUS SCHOLARSHIP

2 - This is not a very effective ML letter for EM. It is more applicable towards a non scholarship based...

LettersHuiMin - Mar 25, 2024 / Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Motivation letter for master of fine art master in Amsterdam

4 - I believe that it's very nice but for some improvements i would totally agree with holt...

Lettersedenlan - Mar 11, 2024 / smichalo - Mar 18, 2024
Motivational essay to study a bachelor degree at the Copenhaguen Business School

2 - Please edit the beginning of your essay. You should be focusing only on the motivational aspect of your interest...

Lettersoller210 - Mar 6, 2024 / Holt - Mar 10, 2024
Motivation letter to Germany embassy in computer science for master degree

3 - @Nazfe73 Your motivation letter only talked about your personal interest. How does it benefit the people of Yemen; I...

LettersNazfe73 - Feb 26, 2024 / Aroma - Mar 8, 2024
Motivation Letter for Erasmus Mundus - Advanced spectroscopy in chemistry (ASC)

2 - Being an Erasmus Mundus motivational letter, I was expecting a far more interesting and informative presentation than this. Your...

Lettersblanicen - Feb 15, 2024 / Holt - Feb 18, 2024
For Review- Letter of motivation for Global Scholarship under Lund University, Sweden

2 - Paragraph 5 should be further developed. That paragraph offers you the opportunity to further enhance your qualifications as a...

Lettersnafiz33 - Feb 12, 2024 / Holt - Feb 18, 2024
Motivation letter on why I should be given the AXEL ADLER SCHOLARSHIP.

2 - Do not waste the time of the admissions officers with petty information such as how to address you. That...

Lettersbenadine30 - Feb 10, 2024 / Holt - Feb 11, 2024
Motivation letter for Erasmus mundus program in Applied Ecohydrology

2 - There are so many things wrong with this letter that I do not know where to begin. I guess...

LettersOkpokwu - Feb 6, 2024 / Holt - Feb 9, 2024
Letter Of Intent For Turkey Burslari Scholarship - Human Behavior

2 - Your intent to study Human Behavior in Turkey, through this scholarship is not one that will impress the reviewer....

LettersSibgha - Feb 4, 2024 / Holt - Feb 7, 2024
Personal statement for Erasmus mundus IMSISS programme (self-founded)

2 - Consider finding a connection between your interest in Pathway A and your thesis research. You will do well...

LettersMartssm - Feb 2, 2024 / Holt - Feb 7, 2024
Letter of Motivation for Master's Degree in Cognitive Neuroscience and Clinical Neuropsychology

3 - Dear @Holt, Thank you for your feedback! I also agree regarding that specific section. Could I inquire further...

Lettersalizarincrimsons - Jan 26, 2024 / alizarincrimsons - Jan 28, 2024
Motivation Letter for Master's Degree in IT project Management in Sweden

2 - Avoid turning the motivational letter into an academic and professional biography. The motivational factors in your presentation are quite...

LettersTasosCh - Jan 23, 2024 / Holt - Jan 24, 2024
Motivation Letter for Master's Degree in Computer Science at University

2 - Dandy, remove the first and second paragraphs. Those are not relevant to the motivation. Replace those instead with paragraphs...

LettersDaFabian - Jan 22, 2024 / Holt - Jan 23, 2024
Motivation letter for HAN university in the Netherlands

3 - @Holt appreciate your help! :) I'll check all the parts that need to fix later on....

Letterstlinh nguyen - Jan 20, 2024 / tlinh nguyen - Jan 21, 2024
COVER LETTER to apply Event Marketing position

2 - Is this supposed to be a practice essay? Or is it an actual application email? My review will vary...

LettersThu Hieu - Jan 19, 2024 / Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Motivational letter for Erasmus mundus Euroculture program

2 - Try to reduce some aspects of the essay so that you can discuss your professional aspirations in the essay....

LettersY_Saleh - Jan 19, 2024 / Holt - Jan 20, 2024
A motivation letter for a program at the University of Rome.

2 - There are actually too many screened information in this presentation for me to give you a useful observation but...

LettersLeila321 - Jan 18, 2024 / Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Motivation letter for stipendium hungaricum, for BSCS (undergraduate),Pakistani student

2 - You first indicated that your reason for applying to the scholarship is the positive experience of your friend. You...

LettersManahilFatima - Jan 14, 2024 / Holt - Jan 14, 2024
KU Leuven 2024 Bachelor of Philosophy Mot. Letter.

3 - @Holt Greetings, Halt. The fact that you said that this text was made with the help of an AI...

Lettersssennyyaa - Jan 6, 2024 / ssennyyaa - Jan 13, 2024
My Electrical Engineering Motivational letter for Stipendium Hungaricum

2 - Remember that Hngaricum Stipendium is an international scholarship that hopes to have their graduates make a difference in their...

LettersAndern - Jan 8, 2024 / Holt - Jan 13, 2024
Motivation Letter for Master's Degree in Management of Technology at TU Delft

3 - Hi DandyFabian, offering my two cents on your essay: 1. One part that I find unique from your...

LettersDandyFabian - Jan 3, 2024 / himca - Jan 12, 2024

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