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|unipdu FT-D_my letters to Deden - detailed description about my homeland
2 - Uhm.. I don't know where to start.. First, there are many grammatical errors in the letter and many...
Lettersirfan ian - Oct 26, 2016 / ichephe - Oct 26, 2016
|What is your new home environment there and are you happy with the atmosphere there? Letter to Feby
3 - Hello Anggi :) Let me check your letter :) Jl.gerilya 08 mancar, ==> Better if you use capital...
LettersAnggi Mega - Oct 26, 2016 / SarlindaDS_27 - Oct 26, 2016
|Unipdu FT-D letter to tell about my house in Belut, Jogoroto Jombang
2 - Hay ais how are you, I hope you're there always be fine, so am i. ... receive this letter,regarding...
LettersWiwit - Oct 26, 2016 / amrillahmk - Oct 26, 2016
|My house is bigger than before after the renovation. UNIPDU FTD- LETTERS TO ENI
2 - I assume that this letter needs major revision, especially with the letter format, grammar, and punctuations. Therefore, I would...
Lettersfera firina - Oct 26, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 26, 2016
|UNIPDU FT D-Letters to Mifta; I have moved into a new house
2 - Hi Uvi, Welcome to EssayForum :) Due to lots of grammatical issues that need to be addressed, I...
LettersUvi - Oct 26, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 26, 2016
|A [Job Application] Cover Letter: Why consulting is for me, and why this firm is the right place
4 - Thank you. I am reducing the size a bit...
Lettersdoktorrr - Oct 20, 2016 / doktorrr - Oct 21, 2016
|'Good connection with others' - Write a letter of application to the tourism office
9 - Hi @justivy03 I studied english before , and nowadays I've been studying english again. these days I am improving...
LettersSaharHdi - Oct 16, 2016 / SaharHdi - Oct 19, 2016
|A Letter of Recommendation From My Research Adviser--M.S. Program Application. How To Revise It?
3 - Mary, THX for your kind help. I didn't realize there were as many problems as this. Some revisions...
Lettersyangbowen - Oct 18, 2016 / yangbowen - Oct 18, 2016
|Letters of Recommendation from Professors for Obataining LoA
3 - Hi Alfa, I would like to help you out and we're going to do it, one letter at a...
Lettersalfa7 - Oct 1, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 2, 2016
|Write a letter to newspaper editor for elderly relative grateful the young man by telling story.
2 - Hi Amir, Welcome to EF Team! :) Here's my analysis towards your letter, especially in the beginning part...
LettersAmirgaul - Oct 1, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 2, 2016
|Ultra-Modern Community Center Letter for English Class
3 - Dear Sara, In keeping with this letter, here some advices from me. 1. This is important, you...
Letterssarak32 - Sep 10, 2016 / dils - Sep 21, 2016
|The requesting letter in regard to some important papers which have been left at the hotel.
4 - Hi, your letter is good. I have some remarks for you. I think you have some trouble with using...
Letterszhouwei - Sep 9, 2016 / thphuong1911 - Sep 13, 2016
|Motivation letter - Business Adminstration - Radboud University
5 - @ichanpants89 thank you for your comments. Please find below a revised version of the letter, appreciate if you...
Letterssosia1 - Sep 6, 2016 / sosia1 - Sep 8, 2016
|Letter or motivation for a Msc in Supply Chain at Jacobs University in Germany
2 - Greetings Mr. Carlos Cabrera in this opportunity, I'd like to share ... first of all, please start the...
LettersCarlosmcabrerap0 - Sep 6, 2016 / ramzi06 - Sep 6, 2016
|The recommendation letter to the esteemed program, how to improve quality of this letter?
2 - Hi, I think the letter is actually quite well-written with very few grammatical errors. It does seem a...
Lettersyegao - Aug 30, 2016 / TJLuschen - Sep 1, 2016
|The cover letter for Audit Recruiment / Tax and Advisory Recruiment
5 - Hello chomchom. These are several corrections for you. I amhave very impressed with the aim ... I found...
Letterschomchom - Aug 22, 2016 / hirani03 - Aug 27, 2016
|"Breaking The Limit 2016" competition - cover letter about audit internship recuiterment
3 - Hi ngocha, - I learned that the competition "Breaking The Limit 2016" replaced the ... . When I...
Lettersngocha1209 - Aug 22, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 23, 2016
|Write an email about yourself to a homestay family in that country
5 - Hi young, - I'mMy name is Young and i come from Korea. Today, i writeam writing this letter...
Lettersramiyoung - Aug 19, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 22, 2016
|'I want to be useful person' - Motivation Letter : My Motivation to Take Master Programme
3 - Hello tyar32 Keep writing :) 1. I realize that I need to become a specialist in particular field....
Letterstyar32 - Aug 17, 2016 / hirani03 - Aug 18, 2016
|A letter to friend with information, that one of your relatives is traveling to his/her country
3 - Many thanks for your help. I will keep your comments in my minds so as to write a...
Lettersyon959 - Aug 13, 2016 / yon959 - Aug 14, 2016
|Study Plan for Canadian study permit - application letter to the Visa Officer
4 - Hi Sandy Vu! Welcome to Essay Forum! I think you have a great start to your essay. I really...
Letterssandyvu - Aug 5, 2016 / Hiddengrace - Aug 6, 2016
|A motivation letter for European Commisson Traineeship programme.
6 - Hi Adem, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF and we are definitely delighted that we are...
LettersWriteandlearn - Aug 4, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 5, 2016
|Letter of recommondation for Law School's scholarship
7 - Hi Minh, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF. It definitely boost our confidence whenever we receive...
Letterspizzatrasua - Jul 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
|Low GPA - Transfer Admission to Borough of Manhattan Community College
5 - Hi Tina! I'm not here to edit your essay- I would if I had time but right now I'm...
LettersTinamacias - Jul 21, 2016 / Hiddengrace - Jul 25, 2016
|My dearest brother, you are the best. No one can like you that is very good person.
4 - Hi Misaki, below are my thoughts on your essay. To my dearest brother, - Thank you so much!(...
Lettersmisakiakiko - Jun 22, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 22, 2016
|The boy inside of me is a dreamer. Help him get to college essay.
5 - We are always happy to help Juan! Just make sure that when you do launch your GoFundMe.com link, you...
LettersJuanSebastianR - Jun 11, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 16, 2016
|Motivation letter - Master's programme in International Business & Consulting
5 - Hi Yunus, you can always count on us in providing you with the most accurate and credible feedback that...
LettersMotivated - Jun 12, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 14, 2016
|Motivation letter - Student Exchange Chemical Engineering
3 - Bonar, apart from grammatical corrections that has been given by Robin, let me help you with your introduction paragraph...
Lettersbonar - Jun 10, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jun 10, 2016
|Motivation Letter - expressing interest in studying at the Summer School of Physics
5 - You don't need to start saying that: With this letter I would like to express my interest in studying...
Lettersadouloumis - Apr 28, 2016 / rods2292 - Jun 3, 2016
|Cam, the leader. A scholarship essay on leadership characteristics.
3 - Hmm, I started off liking your framing story, but I feel a bit betrayed at the end. Basically...
LettersJuanSebastianR - May 23, 2016 / TJLuschen - May 23, 2016
|I am driven to make significant contributions to the NUS community and the society at large. Appeal.
8 - Hi Jessia, no worries at all, we will always be here to assist you with any writing projects you...
Lettersearlgrey - May 13, 2016 / justivy03 - May 23, 2016
|You rented an apartment for a holiday last year and you were happy with it
4 - Some further comment: I personally prefer to use " south-facing bedroom had a lovely flower-filled garden" rather than "...
LettersMike Wong - May 9, 2016 / mersad - May 10, 2016
|I would like to express my interest in studying at one of the government universities in Malaysia
7 - @justivy03 thank u soo much :)...
Letterssalam97 - Apr 30, 2016 / salam97 - May 8, 2016
|Letter writing: celebrating the end of the school year. Review it and help me locate my mistakes.
3 - Hi Simran, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope you will find this website to be the answer...
LettersSim123 - Apr 28, 2016 / justivy03 - May 5, 2016
|Letter of intent "Master's Degree in Communications and Multimedia Engineering" need to correction
5 - Hi Hala, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF, I make it a personal routine to check...
LettersHala - Apr 30, 2016 / justivy03 - May 5, 2016
|Keen to study Master's program of Food Science with specialisation in Food Innovation and Management
2 - Hi Mita, as much as I like the facts and details of your essay, I must say that the...
Lettersmita23 - Apr 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 28, 2016
|Why I want to undergo a month of training in the summer school? Motivation Letter
4 - Thank you so much!...
Lettersreneeiler - Apr 23, 2016 / reneeiler - Apr 24, 2016
|This is an essay about the life in the city. Reply for a letter.
3 - Hi Linh, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope you find this website to answer your writing...
LettersLinh Nguyen Chut - Apr 20, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 21, 2016
|International Software Systems Science program at University Of Bamberg - Motivation Letter
3 - Hi Firebaby, I would like to share a few insights to your letter. I find this letter well...
Lettersfirebaby - Apr 20, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 20, 2016
|'experience abroad is highly recommended' - Letter of motivation - Master in International economics
3 - Thank you very much!! :)...
Lettersicra - Apr 9, 2016 / icra - Apr 11, 2016
|Cover Letter for pursuing a M.Sc degree in Petroleum Engineering at Petroleum Institute
5 - Many thanks Ivy!...
Lettershasso0on91 - Mar 28, 2016 / hasso0on91 - Mar 30, 2016
|Cover letter for entry level sales position to check grammar and contents
2 - Ryan, as I finish reading your essay, I must say I was captivated by your passion on not only...
Lettersstarzia50 - Mar 26, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 27, 2016
|Undergraduate motivation letter to state my interest to apply for Bachelor in industrial engineering
8 - Hi Agung, you're most welcome, I hope to see the revision soon and while you're doing so, I suggest...
Lettersagikss - Mar 3, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 18, 2016
|"You must study hard for your future". KGSP programm self introduction.
4 - Put (,) after "first" Currently living and working in Korea with my family Currently, I am working and...
Lettersemmyjohn - Mar 13, 2016 / nelarizka79 - Mar 15, 2016
|Cover Letter for Erasmus exchange programme - hope to receive good advice and letter correction
5 - Hi Oleksandr, it definitely makes us proud od what we do when we receive feedbacks from the students and...
Letterstameimpala13 - Mar 10, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 15, 2016
|"Recommendation letter" for employee who wants to pursue his study and need to apply for an award
4 - I have revised my draft here. (God I am suck at writing formal letter, my head temperature increases a...
LettersChan Dara - Mar 10, 2016 / Chan Dara - Mar 13, 2016
|Letter to a congressman about an issue (ESSAY)
2 - Dear Aileen, It is a pleasure to be working with you. The essay is well written and...
Lettersaleemolina26 - Mar 9, 2016 / JuanSebastianR - Mar 13, 2016
|Telling to my English teacher my English-level and also discussing about my certificate.
3 - Your letter is fine as stated, but needs some improvement/help. You do need to write more, the letter...
Lettersarjedda - Feb 18, 2016 / EF_Carol - Mar 6, 2016
|'Tact, patience, justice, firmness, kindness, and charity' - US Naval Academy NOMINATION LETTER
4 - Thank you for the suggestions!...
Lettersdavidm327 - Feb 26, 2016 / davidm327 - Feb 27, 2016
|Motivation letter for masters in Photonics; collaboration with several leading European universities
5 - Thanks a lot ADIE for pointing out my mistakes. Really grateful for you....
LettersLuckshadi - Feb 22, 2016 / Luckshadi - Feb 27, 2016
|LETTER OF MOTIVATION FOR RWTH, AACHEN ADMISSION
8 - I kept that "in other perspective..." paragraph in order to answer this questions that have been asked to be...
Lettersprince98 - Oct 27, 2015 / prince98 - Feb 24, 2016
|150-words introductory essay for 6-grader
4 - Dear Sir/Madam, in my country I will use Dear Sir/Ma'am Well, The usage may differ in each country, but...
Lettersjeannie9a8tdn - Feb 21, 2016 / gilbertwidjojo - Feb 21, 2016
|Intern. master degree appl. letter - clear goals, motives, qualifications, experiences and qualities
3 - Thank you very much for your help aniani :)...
LettersNOUNOU1989 - Feb 19, 2016 / NOUNOU1989 - Feb 19, 2016
|My interest and passion for taking part in master program of energy conversion and management
2 - Try separating the paragraph by using extra Enter . ... in the energy aspects and mechanical energy converter...
Lettersgol1363 - Feb 15, 2016 / nav3057 - Feb 18, 2016
|Motivation Letter for CEMS-Master of International Management in University of Economics, Prague
6 - Thanks again! Based on ur suggestion, I choose the main thread "to be a globally competitive leader with...
Lettersderek1993 - Feb 12, 2016 / derek1993 - Feb 17, 2016
|Arts management field, Letter of recommendation; Master Program. Light, sound control, house manager
4 - I add some sentence to emphasize what I actually did, the new sentences will be marked in bold. If...
Letterseric41061 - Feb 9, 2016 / eric41061 - Feb 10, 2016
|Email to my teacher for UBC references
6 - Hey @vangiespen, thank you for replying with thoughtful suggestions. I learned something new again today! I learned how to...
LettersEthanchen1998 - Jan 27, 2016 / Ethanchen1998 - Jan 27, 2016
|Reinstatement Appeal into the College of Letters & Science at University of California
3 - During this time, I was working to resolve these issues by going to court and meeting with Suzanne...
LettersDameworld - Jan 26, 2016 / Hiddengrace - Jan 26, 2016
|Re-admission from suspension essay; circumstances, procedures (University of Houston)
6 - Thank you so much! I was having such a hard time with this...personal essays were never my thing....
Letterssnsantana91 - Jan 25, 2016 / snsantana91 - Jan 26, 2016
|Is facebook a toxic addiction? Threats associated with the enormous usage of social networking sites
2 - Riaz, are you writing an op-ed piece for a newspaper? I mean, are you supposed to be writing a...
LettersRiaz148 - Jan 26, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 26, 2016
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