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|It has been awhile since the last time we met, how are you there? Letter to M. Sigit Varendra
3 - Hi here are my suggestions. remember that a good sentence always contains Subject and Verb, or in bahasa,...
LettersIrsyad - Nov 1, 2016 / amrillahmk - Nov 1, 2016
|'I am from Madura Island.' This Is a Letter To Bima - Unipdu FT C
2 - Please refer to this cleaned up version of your letter for corrections to your original work: Hi, ...
Lettersbimabayu666 - Nov 1, 2016 / Holt - Nov 1, 2016
|How are you? this is a letter to Naufal - Unipdu FT C
2 - Achmad, your letter is not good at all. Your letter could very well be considered offensive in some circles...
Lettersachmad naufal - Nov 1, 2016 / Holt - Nov 1, 2016
|UNIPDU FT C. How are you Ikbal? I hope you are always fine and healthy
2 - Your letter is affected by wrong spelling , lack of capitalization, and misdirected grammar. I suggest the following corrections...
LettersMujaki - Oct 31, 2016 / Holt - Oct 31, 2016
|MOTIVATION LETTER, APPLICATION FOR THE BACHELOR OF BUSINESS ADMINISTRATION AT KU Leuven Belgium
2 - Daniel, due to the fact that you have opted to discuss information such as your personal life in this...
LettersDanielBalici - Oct 30, 2016 / Holt - Oct 31, 2016
|UNIPDU FT C - this is a latter to Achmad Fatchur Roziq
3 - Rizky, you need to work n the sentence structure. The thought process is clear, but you have a problem...
LettersRizkydiwan86 - Oct 30, 2016 / Holt - Oct 30, 2016
|Unipdu FT C send message Satriyo Utomo to Hendrik Prasetyo
Lettershendrik prasetyo - Oct 30, 2016 / Holt - Oct 30, 2016
|Unipdu FT D-Letter to Deni - missing the rustic atmosphere
4 - The weather here Here, the weather is hot and polluted because ofthe number lots of vehicles a lot of...
LettersDeni - Oct 26, 2016 / saifuddin85 - Oct 30, 2016
|This is my letter - Unipdu FT C Letter to Mochammad Izzul Hidayatulloh
2 - Izzul, please consider the revised letter sample I am sharing with you as an example of a better structured...
Lettersmizzulh - Oct 29, 2016 / Holt - Oct 29, 2016
|This is my hobby now - Unipdu FT C Letter to Rachmat Bagus R.
2 - Hi Hudan, your letter shows a lot of promise with regards to your possible improvement in the use...
LettersHudan Aminulloh - Oct 29, 2016 / Holt - Oct 29, 2016
|My house with rural milieu. Unipdu FT D-Letter to Deni Stiawan
2 - Deni, here is a sample of how to better develop your letter using more complete and informative sentences: ...
LettersDeni dwi - Oct 27, 2016 / Holt - Oct 27, 2016
|UNIPDU FT-D LETTER TO ERSA; I've just moved into my home and live with my parents
2 - Nur, there are so many grammatical errors in your letter that is just best for me to revise the...
LettersLos Galacticos - Oct 27, 2016 / Holt - Oct 27, 2016
|Your new home sounds interesting, but check mine too. UNIPDU FT D-Letters to Uvi
3 - Mifta, here is a cleaned up version of your letter. I hope it helps you better analyze your sentence...
LettersMifta - Oct 26, 2016 / Holt - Oct 27, 2016
|Cover Letter for Resedential Volunteer ( Farmer- Chef) at Heifer International Farm
2 - Danielle, your cover letter should follow the same format as any application cover letter. That means it should also...
Letterscollegebound28 - Oct 26, 2016 / Holt - Oct 27, 2016
|unipdu FT-D_my letters to Deden - detailed description about my homeland
2 - Uhm.. I don't know where to start.. First, there are many grammatical errors in the letter and many...
Lettersirfan ian - Oct 26, 2016 / ichephe - Oct 26, 2016
|What is your new home environment there and are you happy with the atmosphere there? Letter to Feby
3 - Hello Anggi :) Let me check your letter :) Jl.gerilya 08 mancar, ==> Better if you use capital...
LettersAnggi Mega - Oct 26, 2016 / SarlindaDS_27 - Oct 26, 2016
|Unipdu FT-D letter to tell about my house in Belut, Jogoroto Jombang
2 - Hay ais how are you, I hope you're there always be fine, so am i. ... receive this letter,regarding...
LettersWiwit - Oct 26, 2016 / amrillahmk - Oct 26, 2016
|My house is bigger than before after the renovation. UNIPDU FTD- LETTERS TO ENI
2 - I assume that this letter needs major revision, especially with the letter format, grammar, and punctuations. Therefore, I would...
Lettersfera firina - Oct 26, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 26, 2016
|UNIPDU FT D-Letters to Mifta; I have moved into a new house
2 - Hi Uvi, Welcome to EssayForum :) Due to lots of grammatical issues that need to be addressed, I...
LettersUvi - Oct 26, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 26, 2016
|A [Job Application] Cover Letter: Why consulting is for me, and why this firm is the right place
Lettersdoktorrr - Oct 20, 2016 / doktorrr - Oct 21, 2016
|'Good connection with others' - Write a letter of application to the tourism office
9 - Hi @justivy03 I studied english before , and nowadays I've been studying english again. these days I am improving...
LettersSaharHdi - Oct 16, 2016 / SaharHdi - Oct 19, 2016
|A Letter of Recommendation From My Research Adviser--M.S. Program Application. How To Revise It?
3 - Mary, THX for your kind help. I didn't realize there were as many problems as this. Some revisions...
Lettersyangbowen - Oct 18, 2016 / yangbowen - Oct 18, 2016
|Letters of Recommendation from Professors for Obataining LoA
Lettersalfa7 - Oct 1, 2016 / justivy03 - Oct 2, 2016
|Write a letter to newspaper editor for elderly relative grateful the young man by telling story.
2 - Hi Amir, Welcome to EF Team! :) Here's my analysis towards your letter, especially in the beginning part...
LettersAmirgaul - Oct 1, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 2, 2016
|Ultra-Modern Community Center Letter for English Class
Letterssarak32 - Sep 10, 2016 / dils - Sep 21, 2016
|The requesting letter in regard to some important papers which have been left at the hotel.
2 - Hi. It is good you used paragraphs to accomplish task.. Here are some suggestions, Unfortunately, I am...
Letterszhouwei - Sep 9, 2016 / Mayank7g - Sep 9, 2016
|Motivation letter - Business Adminstration - Radboud University
5 - @ichanpants89 thank you for your comments. Please find below a revised version of the letter, appreciate if you...
Letterssosia1 - Sep 6, 2016 / sosia1 - Sep 8, 2016
|Letter or motivation for a Msc in Supply Chain at Jacobs University in Germany
2 - Greetings Mr. Carlos Cabrera in this opportunity, I'd like to share ... first of all, please start the...
LettersCarlosmcabrerap0 - Sep 6, 2016 / ramzi06 - Sep 6, 2016
|The recommendation letter to the esteemed program, how to improve quality of this letter?
2 - Hi, I think the letter is actually quite well-written with very few grammatical errors. It does seem a...
Lettersyegao - Aug 30, 2016 / TJLuschen - Sep 1, 2016
|The cover letter for Audit Recruiment / Tax and Advisory Recruiment
5 - Hello chomchom. These are several corrections for you. I amhave very impressed with the aim ... I found...
Letterschomchom - Aug 22, 2016 / hirani03 - Aug 27, 2016
|"Breaking The Limit 2016" competition - cover letter about audit internship recuiterment
3 - Hi ngocha, - I learned that the competition "Breaking The Limit 2016" replaced the ... . When I...
Lettersngocha1209 - Aug 22, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 23, 2016
|Write an email about yourself to a homestay family in that country
Lettersramiyoung - Aug 19, 2016 / Faridadwi18 - Aug 22, 2016
|'I want to be useful person' - Motivation Letter : My Motivation to Take Master Programme
2 - Hello tyar32 Keep writing :) 1. I realize that I need to become a specialist in particular field....
Letterstyar32 - Aug 17, 2016 / hirani03 - Aug 18, 2016
|A letter to friend with information, that one of your relatives is traveling to his/her country
Lettersyon959 - Aug 13, 2016 / yon959 - Aug 14, 2016
|Study Plan for Canadian study permit - application letter to the Visa Officer
Letterssandyvu - Aug 5, 2016 / Hiddengrace - Aug 6, 2016
|A motivation letter for European Commisson Traineeship programme.
6 - Hi Adem, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF and we are definitely delighted that we are...
LettersWriteandlearn - Aug 4, 2016 / justivy03 - Aug 5, 2016
|Letter of recommondation for Law School's scholarship
7 - Hi Minh, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF. It definitely boost our confidence whenever we receive...
Letterspizzatrasua - Jul 27, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
|Low GPA - Transfer Admission to Borough of Manhattan Community College
LettersTinamacias - Jul 21, 2016 / Hiddengrace - Jul 25, 2016
|My dearest brother, you are the best. No one can like you that is very good person.
Lettersmisakiakiko - Jun 22, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 22, 2016
|The boy inside of me is a dreamer. Help him get to college essay.
5 - We are always happy to help Juan! Just make sure that when you do launch your GoFundMe.com link, you...
LettersJuanSebastianR - Jun 11, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 16, 2016
|Motivation letter - Master's programme in International Business & Consulting
5 - Hi Yunus, you can always count on us in providing you with the most accurate and credible feedback that...
LettersMotivated - Jun 12, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 14, 2016
|Motivation letter - Student Exchange Chemical Engineering
3 - Bonar, apart from grammatical corrections that has been given by Robin, let me help you with your introduction paragraph...
Lettersbonar - Jun 10, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jun 10, 2016
|Motivation Letter - expressing interest in studying at the Summer School of Physics
5 - You don't need to start saying that: With this letter I would like to express my interest in studying...
Lettersadouloumis - Apr 28, 2016 / rods2292 - Jun 3, 2016
|Cam, the leader. A scholarship essay on leadership characteristics.
3 - Hmm, I started off liking your framing story, but I feel a bit betrayed at the end. Basically...
LettersJuanSebastianR - May 23, 2016 / TJLuschen - May 23, 2016
|I am driven to make significant contributions to the NUS community and the society at large. Appeal.
8 - Hi Jessia, no worries at all, we will always be here to assist you with any writing projects you...
Lettersearlgrey - May 13, 2016 / justivy03 - May 23, 2016
|You rented an apartment for a holiday last year and you were happy with it
4 - Some further comment: I personally prefer to use " south-facing bedroom had a lovely flower-filled garden" rather than "...
LettersMike Wong - May 9, 2016 / mersad - May 10, 2016
|I would like to express my interest in studying at one of the government universities in Malaysia
Letterssalam97 - Apr 30, 2016 / salam97 - May 8, 2016
|Letter writing: celebrating the end of the school year. Review it and help me locate my mistakes.
3 - Hi Simran, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope you will find this website to be the answer...
LettersSim123 - Apr 28, 2016 / justivy03 - May 5, 2016
|Letter of intent "Master's Degree in Communications and Multimedia Engineering" need to correction
5 - Hi Hala, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF, I make it a personal routine to check...
LettersHala - Apr 30, 2016 / justivy03 - May 5, 2016
|Keen to study Master's program of Food Science with specialisation in Food Innovation and Management
Lettersmita23 - Apr 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 28, 2016
|Why I want to undergo a month of training in the summer school? Motivation Letter
Lettersreneeiler - Apr 23, 2016 / reneeiler - Apr 24, 2016
|This is an essay about the life in the city. Reply for a letter.
3 - Hi Linh, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope you find this website to answer your writing...
LettersLinh Nguyen Chut - Apr 20, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 21, 2016
|International Software Systems Science program at University Of Bamberg - Motivation Letter
Lettersfirebaby - Apr 20, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 20, 2016
|'experience abroad is highly recommended' - Letter of motivation - Master in International economics
Lettersicra - Apr 9, 2016 / icra - Apr 11, 2016
|Cover Letter for pursuing a M.Sc degree in Petroleum Engineering at Petroleum Institute
Lettershasso0on91 - Mar 28, 2016 / hasso0on91 - Mar 30, 2016
|Cover letter for entry level sales position to check grammar and contents
2 - Ryan, as I finish reading your essay, I must say I was captivated by your passion on not only...
Lettersstarzia50 - Mar 26, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 27, 2016
|Undergraduate motivation letter to state my interest to apply for Bachelor in industrial engineering
8 - Hi Agung, you're most welcome, I hope to see the revision soon and while you're doing so, I suggest...
Lettersagikss - Mar 3, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 18, 2016
|"You must study hard for your future". KGSP programm self introduction.
4 - Put (,) after "first" Currently living and working in Korea with my family Currently, I am working and...
Lettersemmyjohn - Mar 13, 2016 / nelarizka79 - Mar 15, 2016
|Cover Letter for Erasmus exchange programme - hope to receive good advice and letter correction
5 - Hi Oleksandr, it definitely makes us proud od what we do when we receive feedbacks from the students and...
Letterstameimpala13 - Mar 10, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 15, 2016
|"Recommendation letter" for employee who wants to pursue his study and need to apply for an award
4 - I have revised my draft here. (God I am suck at writing formal letter, my head temperature increases a...
LettersChan Dara - Mar 10, 2016 / Chan Dara - Mar 13, 2016
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