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|Low GPA - Transfer Admission to Borough of Manhattan Community College
5 - Hi Tina! I'm not here to edit your essay- I would if I had time but right now I'm...
LettersTinamacias - Jul 21, 2016 / Hiddengrace - Jul 25, 2016
|My dearest brother, you are the best. No one can like you that is very good person.
4 - Hi Misaki, below are my thoughts on your essay. To my dearest brother, - Thank you so much!...
Lettersmisakiakiko - Jun 22, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 22, 2016
|The boy inside of me is a dreamer. Help him get to college essay.
5 - We are always happy to help Juan! Just make sure that when you do launch your GoFundMe.com link, you...
LettersJuanSebastianR - Jun 11, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 16, 2016
|Motivation letter - Master's programme in International Business & Consulting
5 - Hi Yunus, you can always count on us in providing you with the most accurate and credible feedback that...
LettersMotivated - Jun 12, 2016 / justivy03 - Jun 14, 2016
|Motivation letter - Student Exchange Chemical Engineering
3 - Bonar, apart from grammatical corrections that has been given by Robin, let me help you with your introduction paragraph...
Lettersbonar - Jun 10, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Jun 10, 2016
|Motivation Letter - expressing interest in studying at the Summer School of Physics
5 - You don't need to start saying that: With this letter I would like to express my interest in studying...
Lettersadouloumis - Apr 28, 2016 / rods2292 - Jun 3, 2016
|Cam, the leader. A scholarship essay on leadership characteristics.
3 - Hmm, I started off liking your framing story, but I feel a bit betrayed at the end. Basically...
LettersJuanSebastianR - May 23, 2016 / TJLuschen - May 23, 2016
|I am driven to make significant contributions to the NUS community and the society at large. Appeal.
8 - Hi Jessia, no worries at all, we will always be here to assist you with any writing projects you...
Lettersearlgrey - May 13, 2016 / justivy03 - May 23, 2016
|You rented an apartment for a holiday last year and you were happy with it
4 - Some further comment: I personally prefer to use " south-facing bedroom had a lovely flower-filled garden" rather than "...
LettersMike Wong - May 9, 2016 / mersad - May 10, 2016
|I would like to express my interest in studying at one of the government universities in Malaysia
7 - @justivy03 thank u soo much :)...
Letterssalam97 - Apr 30, 2016 / salam97 - May 8, 2016
|Letter writing: celebrating the end of the school year. Review it and help me locate my mistakes.
3 - Hi Simran, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope you will find this website to be the answer...
LettersSim123 - Apr 28, 2016 / justivy03 - May 5, 2016
|Letter of intent "Master's Degree in Communications and Multimedia Engineering" need to correction
6 - Hi Hala, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF, I make it a personal routine to check...
LettersHala - Apr 30, 2016 / justivy03 - May 5, 2016
|Keen to study Master's program of Food Science with specialisation in Food Innovation and Management
2 - Hi Mita, as much as I like the facts and details of your essay, I must say that the...
Lettersmita23 - Apr 28, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 28, 2016
|Why I want to undergo a month of training in the summer school? Motivation Letter
4 - Thank you so much!...
Lettersreneeiler - Apr 23, 2016 / reneeiler - Apr 24, 2016
|This is an essay about the life in the city. Reply for a letter.
3 - Hi Linh, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, I hope you find this website to answer your writing...
LettersLinh Nguyen Chut - Apr 20, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 21, 2016
|International Software Systems Science program at University Of Bamberg - Motivation Letter
3 - Hi Firebaby, I would like to share a few insights to your letter. I find this letter well...
Lettersfirebaby - Apr 20, 2016 / justivy03 - Apr 20, 2016
|'experience abroad is highly recommended' - Letter of motivation - Master in International economics
3 - Thank you very much!! :)...
Lettersicra - Apr 9, 2016 / icra - Apr 11, 2016
|Cover Letter for pursuing a M.Sc degree in Petroleum Engineering at Petroleum Institute
5 - Many thanks Ivy!...
Lettershasso0on91 - Mar 28, 2016 / hasso0on91 - Mar 30, 2016
|Cover letter for entry level sales position to check grammar and contents
2 - Ryan, as I finish reading your essay, I must say I was captivated by your passion on not only...
Lettersstarzia50 - Mar 26, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 27, 2016
|Undergraduate motivation letter to state my interest to apply for Bachelor in industrial engineering
8 - Hi Agung, you're most welcome, I hope to see the revision soon and while you're doing so, I suggest...
Lettersagikss - Mar 3, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 18, 2016
|"You must study hard for your future". KGSP programm self introduction.
4 - Put (,) after "first" Currently living and working in Korea with my family Currently, I am working and...
Lettersemmyjohn - Mar 13, 2016 / nelarizka79 - Mar 15, 2016
|Cover Letter for Erasmus exchange programme - hope to receive good advice and letter correction
5 - Hi Oleksandr, it definitely makes us proud od what we do when we receive feedbacks from the students and...
Letterstameimpala13 - Mar 10, 2016 / justivy03 - Mar 15, 2016
|"Recommendation letter" for employee who wants to pursue his study and need to apply for an award
4 - I have revised my draft here. (God I am suck at writing formal letter, my head temperature increases...
LettersChan Dara - Mar 10, 2016 / Chan Dara - Mar 13, 2016
|Letter to a congressman about an issue (ESSAY)
2 - Dear Aileen, It is a pleasure to be working with you. The essay is well written...
Lettersaleemolina26 - Mar 9, 2016 / JuanSebastianR - Mar 13, 2016
|Telling to my English teacher my English-level and also discussing about my certificate.
3 - Your letter is fine as stated, but needs some improvement/help. You do need to write more, the letter...
Lettersarjedda - Feb 18, 2016 / EF_Carol - Mar 6, 2016
|'Tact, patience, justice, firmness, kindness, and charity' - US Naval Academy NOMINATION LETTER
4 - Thank you for the suggestions!...
Lettersdavidm327 - Feb 26, 2016 / davidm327 - Feb 27, 2016
|Motivation letter for masters in Photonics; collaboration with several leading European universities
5 - Thanks a lot ADIE for pointing out my mistakes. Really grateful for you....
LettersLuckshadi - Feb 22, 2016 / Luckshadi - Feb 27, 2016
|LETTER OF MOTIVATION FOR RWTH, AACHEN ADMISSION
8 - I kept that "in other perspective..." paragraph in order to answer this questions that have been asked to be...
Lettersprince98 - Oct 27, 2015 / prince98 - Feb 24, 2016
|150-words introductory essay for 6-grader
4 - Dear Sir/Madam, in my country I will use Dear Sir/Ma'am Well, The usage may differ in each country, but...
Lettersjeannie9a8tdn - Feb 21, 2016 / gilbertwidjojo - Feb 21, 2016
|Intern. master degree appl. letter - clear goals, motives, qualifications, experiences and qualities
3 - Thank you very much for your help aniani :)...
LettersNOUNOU1989 - Feb 19, 2016 / NOUNOU1989 - Feb 19, 2016
|My interest and passion for taking part in master program of energy conversion and management
2 - Try separating the paragraph by using extra Enter. ... in the energy aspects and mechanical energy converter systems....
Lettersgol1363 - Feb 15, 2016 / nav3057 - Feb 18, 2016
|Motivation Letter for CEMS-Master of International Management in University of Economics, Prague
6 - Thanks again! Based on ur suggestion, I choose the main thread "to be a globally competitive leader with...
Lettersderek1993 - Feb 12, 2016 / derek1993 - Feb 17, 2016
|Arts management field, Letter of recommendation; Master Program. Light, sound control, house manager
4 - I add some sentence to emphasize what I actually did, the new sentences will be marked in bold. If...
Letterseric41061 - Feb 9, 2016 / eric41061 - Feb 10, 2016
|Email to my teacher for UBC references
6 - Hey @vangiespen, thank you for replying with thoughtful suggestions. I learned something new again today! I learned how to...
LettersEthanchen1998 - Jan 27, 2016 / Ethanchen1998 - Jan 27, 2016
|Reinstatement Appeal into the College of Letters & Science at University of California
3 - During this time, I was working to resolve these issues by going to court and meeting with Suzanne...
LettersDameworld - Jan 26, 2016 / Hiddengrace - Jan 26, 2016
|Re-admission from suspension essay; circumstances, procedures (University of Houston)
6 - Thank you so much! I was having such a hard time with this...personal essays were never my thing....
Letterssnsantana91 - Jan 25, 2016 / snsantana91 - Jan 26, 2016
|Is facebook a toxic addiction? Threats associated with the enormous usage of social networking sites
2 - Riaz, are you writing an op-ed piece for a newspaper? I mean, are you supposed to be writing a...
LettersRiaz148 - Jan 26, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 26, 2016
|Motivation letter for Norwegian Language Course in Volda University Collage
3 - elena, as you describe your interest in learning about Nyorsk, you should always remember to relate it to the...
LettersElena_Hatle - Jan 23, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 23, 2016
|Banking and Capital Markets Traineeship: Motivation for the department
6 - Thank you very much for your prompt response vangiespen! Those additional sentences make the overall essay much stronger, I...
LettersAsiaL - Jan 22, 2016 / AsiaL - Jan 23, 2016
|I am applying for a Medical Summer Program at GTU, and some Criticism would be really helpful!
4 - - Also, ( avoid using "Also" as this depicts a minor or lesser importance in the sentence ) The...
LettersDanimal15 - Dec 31, 2015 / justivy03 - Jan 17, 2016
|A letter to my 45 years old self
2 - Pan, the assumption of the letter to your 45 year old self is that you have already achieved all...
LettersCrystal angel - Jan 14, 2016 / vangiespen - Jan 14, 2016
|'preliminary preparation' - Motivation Letter for Master Program in Sustainable Energy Technology
3 - Reza, I'd like to share my remarks for the last 2 paragraphs of your essay as the other parts...
Lettersraditya - Jan 5, 2016 / justivy03 - Jan 14, 2016
|'Dear Partner' - an opinion letter to a company, help me edit this text
3 - thank you so much. I was afraid that no one would help me. i need it for tomorow, my...
Lettershaiyen123 - Jan 12, 2016 / haiyen123 - Jan 12, 2016
|IELTS GT: contact insurance company for the item lost
3 - Hi Louisa, Thanks a lot for your suggestion and example. I do learn a lot from your reply,...
Lettersrralex - Jan 11, 2016 / rralex - Jan 11, 2016
|Absorbing breadth of knowledge to fulfil my background - motivation letter for Holland Scholarship
10 - Not necessarily English culture, but it does have to do with culture. When one says; "a basic understanding of...
LettersCharlottefang - Dec 11, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 15, 2015
|'Enjoying electronics' - Motivational letter for erasmus mundus master's program.
4 - Leena, in my opinion, there is only one section of this extremely long and irrelevant motivational letter that should...
LettersLeena_06 - Dec 18, 2012 / vangiespen - Dec 14, 2015
|Facebook a "toxic addiction" a persuasive letter.
2 - Riaz, since I don't have a copy of the article by Ms. Street-Porter to refer to in the overall...
LettersLord_business - Dec 14, 2015 / vangiespen - Dec 14, 2015
|IELTS WRITING TASK1: Your friend wants you to take care of her child in the weekend
3 - Hi, vangiespen. Thank you for your advice, coz they are sooooo helpful. You really hit the nail on the...
LettersMike Wong - Dec 6, 2015 / Mike Wong - Dec 7, 2015
|Motivation letter for Erasmus mundus scholarships - English isn't first language
7 - This is my sixth draft for Erasmus Motivation letter Hi, Ive done this six times, but I will...
Lettersroseochoa - Nov 27, 2015 / roseochoa - Dec 1, 2015
|'immersed in fine arts' - Motivation letter for applying for BA International Studies to Leiden Uni.
16 - Charlotte, as much as you want to highlight all your achievements in one go, I mean one essay, this...
LettersCharlottefang - Nov 17, 2015 / justivy03 - Dec 1, 2015
|Write a card to send to Jo - you need to delay visit.
7 - Hi Tu, just to make sure that I would not miss any vocabulary words, I just edited and revised...
Lettershuutu289 - Nov 14, 2015 / vangiespen - Nov 18, 2015
|Letter of Reccomendation for Education Master Program - on behalf of my Professor
8 - Fadila, you have been specific as you clearly stated the year so there the "about" should go away. ...
Letterskookycuckoo - Nov 11, 2015 / yan500 - Nov 16, 2015
|No longer attend regular English class
4 - Thank you so much for your valuable feedback.....
Lettersdenish1987 - Nov 15, 2015 / denish1987 - Nov 15, 2015
|'benefit from the opportunities' - Letter of Motivation for Master Program in Development Studies!
9 - Hi Mayara, don't worry about the posts or replies on your letter, somehow it got rolled over and the...
Lettersm4louso - Nov 8, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 12, 2015
|Formal Letter to my local council
3 - Juan, let me give you a direct remark in writing a letter. Lucena, Córdoba 10th November 2015...
Lettersjuangl23 - Nov 10, 2015 / justivy03 - Nov 10, 2015
|I will be a exchange student. This is a letter that I will sent my future host family.
2 - Hi Vy, you are still young but your English is good. I guess English is not your first language...
Lettershoangtram - Nov 4, 2015 / fahmisadja - Nov 4, 2015
|I wasn't very happy about perspective sharing my place with a roommate - Stanford letter
3 - Celine, I am of a different opinion than Saskshi. I am looking at the letters that you wrote from...
LettersCeline12345 - Oct 31, 2015 / vangiespen - Nov 1, 2015
|Argument paper review - letter to the President of United States - question about Foreign Policy
3 - Thank you for the quick response. And no, it is not a direct one to the president, it...
LettersYooavponi - Oct 27, 2015 / Yooavponi - Oct 27, 2015
|'My interest on Forestry' - Letter of Motivation
1 - Letter of Motivation My interest on Forestry was sparked when I entered into the realm of the environment...
Letterssheel30 - Oct 27, 2015 / — -
|Recommendation Letter on behalf of my Supervisior - For MBA
5 - Dear Vangiespen, Thankyou so so much. Your words have really give a boost to my confidence. :)...
LettersErudite - Oct 20, 2015 / Erudite - Oct 20, 2015
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