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|Applying for a business school in Netherlands - Motivation letter for Business Administration
3 - I think you should show your reasons why you want to choose this major and tell people about your...
LettersCroma - Mar 30, 2017 / frenchfries - Mar 31, 2017
|A plant breeder - my PhD cover letter
Lettersjasimpstu - Mar 26, 2017 / jasimpstu - Mar 27, 2017
|Reconsidering my application - how to write a good appeal for sdsu?
3 - Tammy, the tone of your letter is too informal for an appeal letter. this must carry a serious and...
Lettersttran0408 - Mar 25, 2017 / Holt - Mar 26, 2017
|Canada Visit - Reply a friend's invitation.
2 - Dang, your letter should be better developed than this. All of your paragraphs are too short and do not...
Lettersthunga251090 - Mar 24, 2017 / Holt - Mar 24, 2017
|A letter for airline company about lost suitcase.
2 - Li, your letter lacks information for the reader. The description that you gave of your bag, along with your...
Lettersindanx - Mar 21, 2017 / Holt - Mar 23, 2017
|Employment Letter for the embassy of Canada to issue my study permit
2 - @Azazm_952 I think you letter already content all the information as required. and the words are smooth and clear!\...
LettersAzazm_952 - Mar 7, 2017 / ylin0233 - Mar 7, 2017
|A professor request for recommendation letter email
Letterstoffytata - Mar 2, 2017 / toffytata - Mar 4, 2017
|FILLED SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION - academic study/training related awards, prizes or publications
5 - Exactly 4 accomplishments with the backstory included. That is exactly what the prompt required and that is what you...
Lettersdigaprasiska - Mar 4, 2017 / Holt - Mar 4, 2017
|You took your family to a nearby restaurant. Disappointed with the meal and complain to manager
8 - Hi@jaikrishna "I write this email to complain about..." would be a better sentence than "This email is to complain...
Lettersjaikrishna - Feb 20, 2017 / kalyn - Mar 1, 2017
|A perfect world does not exist. My Values and Beliefs - NTU Scholarship Essay
3 - Jon, you have portrayed strong character traits of a person. These are not to be confused with the values...
Lettersjontargaryen - Feb 26, 2017 / Holt - Feb 26, 2017
|Coffee vs. Tea for the English - an attempt for summing-up the text into one sentence
6 - Really appreciate your excellent sample and bearing my poor writing Mary:) I will practice with the test set, and...
Lettersfoyuliu - Feb 22, 2017 / foyuliu - Feb 23, 2017
|Write a letter to your friend to tell him about how to protect the environment in your area
5 - thank you very much for your comments. They are so helpful for me . In fact, my letter hasn't...
Lettersconanhy - Feb 20, 2017 / conanhy - Feb 22, 2017
|Planning to meet a stranger and asking him his interests.
3 - @Holt Thanks, Holt. Yes, putting the question mark is always an issue for me. I know we can still...
Lettersmastindersingh - Feb 19, 2017 / mastindersingh - Feb 19, 2017
|Writing a pitch for discover magazine - would it be accepted by an editor?
Letterscolumbiabound - Feb 9, 2017 / columbiabound - Feb 12, 2017
|He has sterling communication skill - giving approval for talent of a student
7 - Bagu, I will be focusing on grammar correction now because the content is already perfect. I told you we...
Lettersbagusetyawan - Feb 7, 2017 / Holt - Feb 8, 2017
|Statement of Purpose - My Motivation to Join Information System in University of Melbourne
Lettersbagusetyawan - Feb 3, 2017 / Holt - Feb 7, 2017
|Study and Future Plan about KGSP program
2 - Julian, you can only post one essay per thread buddy. So I will only respond to the Study Goals...
LettersAlbUnal - Feb 3, 2017 / Holt - Feb 3, 2017
|Letter of Recommendation from Supervisor - expressing support for a student
Lettersbagusetyawan - Feb 2, 2017 / bagusetyawan - Feb 2, 2017
|My motivation letter for a scholarship purpose - expressing interest in studying at the University
2 - Asma, since this motivation letter is for a scholarship, you need to present the essay in such a manner...
LettersAsma08 - Feb 2, 2017 / Holt - Feb 2, 2017
|Oracle technical skills, diagnosis expertness and other abilities. MS in Data Science recommendation
5 - @ashivash Hi Ashivash, I will correct the grammar part a little bit. --has been appreciated by...
Lettersashivash - Jan 23, 2017 / Streetwalker - Jan 31, 2017
|A most undervalued candidate misjudged by many of his counterparts - recommendation letter
2 - Ashwin, you need to clarify paragraph 2 of this letter of recommendation. It is highly confusing and doesn't really...
Lettersashivash - Jan 30, 2017 / Holt - Jan 30, 2017
|Reference Letter for my employee teacher
2 - Sari, your reference letter is improperly written. It does not contain the correct references, structure, nor information that is...
Lettersbuahati - Jan 26, 2017 / Holt - Jan 26, 2017
|Letter of postponing job appointment on November 15th.
Lettersjaijkrishn12 - Jan 24, 2017 / Holt - Jan 24, 2017
|U.S. Naval Officer Motivational Statement Essay - Navy's core values in order to protect USA
2 - Alexander, I am wondering if your motivational statement essay came with some guide questions as most military officer school...
LettersCookieMonster666 - Jan 23, 2017 / Holt - Jan 23, 2017
|My friend need some information about my country for visiting
5 - the transportation-> The transportation (I think you should add "Furthermore, Apart from, etc. So I think the letter will...
LettersTrang Le - Jan 10, 2017 / nguyenlykimngan1 - Jan 14, 2017
|Cross Culture Internship 2017 - Motivation Letter
5 - Aasma, here is the first rule of writing any sort of paper, always sit down, relax, and then write....
Lettersmujer_loca - Jan 7, 2017 / Holt - Jan 8, 2017
|Play Submission Letter-I wrote a cover letter for a play titled "White Mama"
2 - I believe that this is enough if you include a motivation. Everybody loves to be flattered, so why Shakespeare...
Lettersgmuturi - Dec 29, 2016 / TVLAERE - Dec 29, 2016
|'A great future awaits him' - This is a Letter of recommendation from a Math teacher
Lettersabdon786 - Dec 15, 2016 / gmuturi - Dec 29, 2016
|Doctoral Program at Birmingham Website Application - Letter to supervisor candidate
4 - Thank you all for your suggestions. I would like to pursue professor as supervisor candidate to continue my degree...
Lettersahmadmaulinnaufa - Dec 27, 2016 / ahmadmaulinnaufa - Dec 28, 2016
|ERASMUS MUNDUS Scholarship - great honour, great responsibility and an obligation to work hard
11 - @Holt Thanks, Mary, I think that the current version of the essay is way better than the initial draft...
Lettersserikbar - Dec 18, 2016 / serikbar - Dec 26, 2016
|Cover letter for a School Counselor?
4 - Yes, you can use that statement that I wrote as an example for you. Just remember that you need...
Lettersngokhoa99 - Dec 21, 2016 / Holt - Dec 21, 2016
|Counselor's Letter of Recommendation for MIT
8 - Holt, thank you very much, you've been very helpful. I will add those things you suggested, I'm really happy...
Lettersluisgonzalo - Dec 12, 2016 / luisgonzalo - Dec 14, 2016
|He has always been consistent and punctual in classes. LoR on behalf of Mathematics teacher.
11 - I would suggest you to convince your teachers to prepare the letters on their own because universities can easily...
LettersPallaw - Nov 27, 2016 / sus_007 - Dec 8, 2016
|Music Resume: Identifying Points of Confusions & Possible Solutions
4 - Zhang, there is no right or wrong in writing, especially in writing a resume / curriculum vitae about yourself....
LettersFaithfulEnya - Dec 5, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Dec 7, 2016
|Study plan for my Canada study permit - to Global Business Management PGC.
20 - @Holt I really don't know how to thank you! You're so patient and kind, damn I should buy you...
Lettersdunno_EF - Nov 22, 2016 / dunno_EF - Nov 24, 2016
|Architectural Engineering to enrich my education and lead to a start of a successful career
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|Unipdu FT D - Fakhrizal Mabruri - I hope you're okay
3 - Letter to my friend Fakhrizal Hi Fakhrizal, how are you? I hope you're okay rizal! If you have time...
LettersHalmy - Oct 26, 2016 / Halmy - Nov 15, 2016
|My house has been renovated from the front to the back. FT D - Balasan surat untuk jeri
2 - Hi Affan, I have some minor corrections for your letter. In terms of sentence structure and grammar, you obviously...
LettersAffan_Nafis - Nov 15, 2016 / Holt - Nov 15, 2016
|My dispatch is fine! Unipdu_FT_D A Letter to kiki
2 - Inna, your letter is really difficult to understand as you were not able to properly develop your letter. You...
LettersInna Waffi - Nov 4, 2016 / Holt - Nov 15, 2016
|Conversation about living in a house - Unipdu_FT_D A Letter to Affan
2 - How are you affan? I hope you are fine there, what is the situation in your house?how about the...
LettersJeri_Asidik - Nov 13, 2016 / amrillahmk - Nov 13, 2016
|UNIPDU FT-D letters to Halmy ijul. Beautiful city
LettersFahrizal Mabruri - Nov 10, 2016 / Hujjatul19 - Nov 10, 2016
|UNIPDU FT-D Balasan surat Anggi - it's been a long day we haven't meet each other
3 - Hello Anggi, I've recavedreceived your letter and ... ... life here, I hashave adapted well. I've already getgot...
LettersFebyputri - Oct 26, 2016 / hitam_manis - Nov 10, 2016
|My house in a crowded neighbourhood. UNIPDU FT D-Letters to Wiwit Krisdiyanti
3 - Hi Ais. it seems you have problems with grammar, it is okay as long as you are determined enough...
LettersAIS SALIMATUS S - Oct 26, 2016 / amrillahmk - Nov 9, 2016
|UNIPDU FT-D A letter to Wakid; I heard you are working in Tanggerang
4 - @ichanpants89 thank you mate, i'll learn everything about my mistakes :) and i hope you do not mind if...
LettersErsaN - Oct 26, 2016 / ErsaN - Nov 9, 2016
|Application for the position of PhD student subsidized by CSC
Letterskukujide - Nov 9, 2016 / kukujide - Nov 9, 2016
|I hope you are always in good condition. UNIPDU FT_D - Letter To ms.Inna
Letterskikiyanti - Oct 26, 2016 / kikiyanti - Nov 4, 2016
|unipdu FTD-letters to Fera - I will tell about my house
LettersEni dwi - Oct 26, 2016 / kiki23 - Nov 3, 2016
|It has been awhile since the last time we met, how are you there? Letter to M. Sigit Varendra
3 - Hi here are my suggestions. remember that a good sentence always contains Subject and Verb, or in bahasa,...
LettersIrsyad - Nov 1, 2016 / amrillahmk - Nov 1, 2016
|'I am from Madura Island.' This Is a Letter To Bima - Unipdu FT C
2 - Please refer to this cleaned up version of your letter for corrections to your original work: Hi, ...
Lettersbimabayu666 - Nov 1, 2016 / Holt - Nov 1, 2016
|How are you? this is a letter to Naufal - Unipdu FT C
2 - Achmad, your letter is not good at all. Your letter could very well be considered offensive in some circles...
Lettersachmad naufal - Nov 1, 2016 / Holt - Nov 1, 2016
|UNIPDU FT C. How are you Ikbal? I hope you are always fine and healthy
2 - Your letter is affected by wrong spelling , lack of capitalization, and misdirected grammar. I suggest the following corrections...
LettersMujaki - Oct 31, 2016 / Holt - Oct 31, 2016
|MOTIVATION LETTER, APPLICATION FOR THE BACHELOR OF BUSINESS ADMINISTRATION AT KU Leuven Belgium
2 - Daniel, due to the fact that you have opted to discuss information such as your personal life in this...
LettersDanielBalici - Oct 30, 2016 / Holt - Oct 31, 2016
|UNIPDU FT C - this is a latter to Achmad Fatchur Roziq
3 - Rizky, you need to work n the sentence structure. The thought process is clear, but you have a problem...
LettersRizkydiwan86 - Oct 30, 2016 / Holt - Oct 30, 2016
|Unipdu FT C send message Satriyo Utomo to Hendrik Prasetyo
Lettershendrik prasetyo - Oct 30, 2016 / Holt - Oct 30, 2016
|Unipdu FT D-Letter to Deni - missing the rustic atmosphere
4 - The weather here Here, the weather is hot and polluted because ofthe number lots of vehicles a lot of...
LettersDeni - Oct 26, 2016 / saifuddin85 - Oct 30, 2016
|This is my letter - Unipdu FT C Letter to Mochammad Izzul Hidayatulloh
2 - Izzul, please consider the revised letter sample I am sharing with you as an example of a better structured...
Lettersmizzulh - Oct 29, 2016 / Holt - Oct 29, 2016
|This is my hobby now - Unipdu FT C Letter to Rachmat Bagus R.
2 - Hi Hudan, your letter shows a lot of promise with regards to your possible improvement in the use...
LettersHudan Aminulloh - Oct 29, 2016 / Holt - Oct 29, 2016
|My house with rural milieu. Unipdu FT D-Letter to Deni Stiawan
2 - Deni, here is a sample of how to better develop your letter using more complete and informative sentences: ...
LettersDeni dwi - Oct 27, 2016 / Holt - Oct 27, 2016
|UNIPDU FT-D LETTER TO ERSA; I've just moved into my home and live with my parents
2 - Nur, there are so many grammatical errors in your letter that is just best for me to revise the...
LettersLos Galacticos - Oct 27, 2016 / Holt - Oct 27, 2016
|Your new home sounds interesting, but check mine too. UNIPDU FT D-Letters to Uvi
3 - Mifta, here is a cleaned up version of your letter. I hope it helps you better analyze your sentence...
LettersMifta - Oct 26, 2016 / Holt - Oct 27, 2016
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