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( WRITING TASK 1 DOUBLE CHARTS) THE NUMBER OF FOREIGN TOURISTS VISITING XCOUNTRY IN 2019 AND 2020:..

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Writing FeedbackCobehocielts - May 15, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
i am accustomed to the atmosphere here, it is a bit chilly and cool but the landscape is great

2 - Hi Sunny, what is this post all about? I am not sure what advice you want to receive based...

Grammar, Usagesunyy - May 14, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
There are more challenges and risks than benefits to new technology.

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Writing FeedbackNghian - May 14, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
[WRITING TASK 1] The map below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010

2 - This is too formal for the task 1 presentation. Also, you misidentified the drawing. It is a map,...

Writing FeedbackEcec243 - May 13, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
In many countries, people decide to have children at a later age than in the past. Why?

2 - Your writer's opinion presentation is incomplete. You have only answered 1 out of 2 opinion questions. Therefore, your opinion...

Writing Feedbacknpaa11k27 - May 12, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries

2 - For this type of question, you should have used the disproving style of opinion presentation. A discussion based on...

Writing FeedbackNhatquangg - May 12, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later

2 - The writing format for this essay is that of a single opinion presentation. That is why you were asked...

Writing FeedbackSally Soo - May 12, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
Persuasive Research Essay Petitioning Against Street Circuits on the F1 Race Calendar - Review

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Research PapersJDMoyer - May 12, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
Some countries have more youngsters than older ones.

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Writing FeedbackSamiyaSana - May 11, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
Help writing a motivation letter for scholarships

2 - You could base your motivation letter on your experience living in Gaza. Look at the architecture around you, discuss...

LettersMalaknasser_07 - May 10, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
Research paper regarding AI-generated art

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Writing Feedbackroonilwazlib13 - May 9, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
Asian countries in terms of the proportion of population living in cities - [Ielts cambridge 18]

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Writing Feedbackloitoiphoi - May 9, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
Cinema attendance : by age group in Great Britain

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Writing Feedbackan68 - May 9, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
How can an organization effectively address a major employee relations issue?

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Writing Feedbacktessabob - May 9, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
Women who were employed in four countries - A REPORT DESCRIBING THE INFORMATION

2 - Your efforts in writing this analysis paper is commendable. However, that does not mean that you did it properly....

Writing Feedbacklyblybubliki - May 8, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
Statement of Interest for a PhD position at KU Leuven (Physics graduate)

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Graduatekaran1999 - May 8, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
Students' evaluating teachers

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Writing Feedbacknbvietha - May 8, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
Some old buildings are more worth preserving than others?

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Writing Feedbacklinhohlala - May 7, 2024Holt - May 17, 2024
1.Talk about benefits for Viet Nam as a member of international organizations.

4 - You should correct some mistakes. "Joining in different international" -> "Joining different international", "WTO" -> "the WTO", "made easier...

Writing Feedbackhuongthu - May 2, 2024Rosecute2k10 - May 16, 2024
Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations.

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Writing Feedbackpnib - Apr 25, 2024Rosecute2k10 - May 16, 2024
How to write self-introduction part and detailed research plan parts?

2 - For the self introduction, you can discuss your interests beyond the academic and professional goals. While you can discuss...

Essayscosmina - May 5, 2024Holt - May 12, 2024
All university students should do some voluntary work to help the local community

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Writing FeedbackZenpix_loan - Apr 30, 2024an68 - May 10, 2024
Information technology is changing many aspects of lives and now dominates our home, leisure, work

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Writing Feedbackan68 - May 5, 2024Holt - May 9, 2024
The charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library

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Writing FeedbackTeresa_sssa - May 5, 2024Holt - May 9, 2024
The Nostalgic Memories Linked by Smell - research paper review for english paper

2 - The research paper is good. However, the chronological order for the information presentation can be improved. Try to consider...

Research Papersjayde777 - May 4, 2024Holt - May 9, 2024
Imprisonment is the best solution to crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

3 - I believe that quality assurance is the factor that went missing in your writing process as you have made...

Writing Feedbackchanpu - Apr 17, 2024Sakuradesu - May 4, 2024
Do you think people in your community are generally happy or unhappy?

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Writing FeedbackRozalin - Apr 25, 2024Sakuradesu - May 4, 2024
Good ratings for five main fields of a college - IELTS essay

2 - The summary overview should be composed of 2-3 sentences. You provided only 1 sentence. That will result in a...

Writing FeedbackNgo Dang Viet - May 4, 2024Holt - May 4, 2024
Some think that the government should support retired people financially.

2 - This sort of essay requires you to present varied justifications in the reasoning paragraphs. You need to support your...

Writing FeedbackLearn2rite - May 3, 2024Holt - May 4, 2024
Having emotions makes me human -

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