vangiespen
Dec 21, 2014
Undergraduate / Intramurals. Amateur Astronomers Association. Theater. The question is, what can't NYU offer me? [3]
Your essay sounds more like the brochure for the university than a well thought out response essay. Here is what I think you should do. Actually think of the course offerings and extra curricular activities that you look forward to attending and participating in. Discuss those for the "What does NYU have to offer you" part of the essay. After that, analyze yourself on a separate piece of paper. Think of the extra special qualities and traits as a student, friend, and possible mentor that you have which you can share with the academic and student resident community of NYU. These will be your responses to the "What can you offer NYU" portion of the prompt. Combine the two in a new essay and you should have developed a proper response to the essay prompt :-)
Your essay sounds more like the brochure for the university than a well thought out response essay. Here is what I think you should do. Actually think of the course offerings and extra curricular activities that you look forward to attending and participating in. Discuss those for the "What does NYU have to offer you" part of the essay. After that, analyze yourself on a separate piece of paper. Think of the extra special qualities and traits as a student, friend, and possible mentor that you have which you can share with the academic and student resident community of NYU. These will be your responses to the "What can you offer NYU" portion of the prompt. Combine the two in a new essay and you should have developed a proper response to the essay prompt :-)