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Name: Trần Phương Nhi
Joined: Jun 27, 2019
Last Post: Jul 17, 2019
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From: Viet Nam
School: My Hung

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tranphuongnhi   
Jun 27, 2019
Writing Feedback / It is better for young students to learn English with Vietnamese teachers than native teachers [5]

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study new language with native or local trainers?



It is said that learning with Vietnamese teachers is better than native teachers for students because Vietnamese students can ask Vietnamese teachers easily. But as for me, I disagree with this statement because native teachers help students study more effective than Vietnamese ones.

First of all, students who study with native teachers get standard knowledge. In terms of language knowledge, native teachers certainly have a superior level. Their English knowledge is the dream of all Vietnamese teachers who teach English. In addition, they are trained in pedagogical skills at prestigious universities in the world and they have an opportunity to get access to modern and advanced educational methods. Hence, students can be assured when studying with native teachers.

On top of that, native trainers have a comfortable teaching way. Students are not forced to write much, they only need to listen attentively and carefully. Native teachers always combine playing with studying. For instance, when participating in an English class taught by native ones, they will hold a game that involves lessons before starting them. Or pupils are admitted to play English games after classes to review their vocabulary and improve their memory. This studying method is very useful without time - consuming.

Lastly, pupils have more knowledge about the native teachers' country and culture. If we have any intention of speaking English with foreigners and in foreign countries, we not only study grammar, and speaking and listening skills, but we also know their culture. To understand clearly the knowledge and culture, native teachers can help us. As an illustration, a student learns with an American teacher and he plans to travel to the USA, he can ask his teacher about America and its culture. When being asked about the country, native teachers always talk in detail. Hence, students are able to improve English skills and know American culture.

In short, learning with native teachers is such a fantastic way that students can improve their knowledge considerably. Therefore, if have an opportunity to study with native trainers, we should get it.
tranphuongnhi   
Jun 27, 2019
Writing Feedback / Development of economy required for fight against hunger and poverty. Threat for environment? [4]

Hello @Sun241
I hope my feedback will be useful for you
you should try to avoid repetition as much as possible.

On the one hand To start with, it is beneficial...

On the other hand However/Nevertheless/Nonetheless, the increase in aneconomy that is not unstainable unattainable may have ...
..., which provides energy for developing industrialization, is causing causes/results global warming.

... the economic growth plays an...
tranphuongnhi   
Jun 27, 2019
Writing Feedback / Which one is better: STEM or STEAM? [3]

Hello @solivagant
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Art subjects,... get students to make students use ...

Secondly, Following this, providing ...
tranphuongnhi   
Jun 27, 2019
Writing Feedback / Parents and some teachers recommend naughty and disobedient learners to be taught separately [3]

Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others.


Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree?


It is undeniable that disruptive students have a negative impact on others. Therefore parents and some teachers recommend that naughty and disobedient ones should be grouped to be taught separately. In my point of view, I totally disagree with the recommendation due to several reasons as following:

First of all, the importance of training bad students is time. It is honestly impossible for teachers to teach noisy ones in the short-term. It requires a long period, cooperation, enthusiastic responsibility of teachers from lower to the upper level, along with regular caring and sharing from parents and families. Therefore, families and schools take good care of uncontrolled pupils.

On top of that, the above suggestion is ineffective. In a class, there are only rebellious and noisy students without ordinary or gifted ones, not only do students feel bored, but the teachers are also fed up with and do not want to teach them. This will have a great effect on the social in the future. Besides, culling the undisciplined pupils means depriving the opportunity to change, to start again because there are no good exemplars.

In a nutshell, although families and schools pay great attention to this issue, I admit the fact that such a way is not only inefficient but also exacerbates the situation in many cases.
tranphuongnhi   
Jul 17, 2019
Writing Feedback / Advantages of reading online - cheapness, convenience, and portability [3]

e-books are popular these days



Over the past few years, the growth of the Internet, mobile banking and home delivery services have made online reading. And there has been a considerable increase in a number of people reading online. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this statement due to several reasons as following:

First of all, E-books are greatly cheaper than traditional ones. On the computers as well as smartphones, you merely pay 100 thousand dongs per month and you can read any books you want. For example, if you purchase Sexo Oculto, you have to pay nearly 420 thousand dongs. Yet when reading online, you only pay 6 thousand dongs.

On top of that, e-readers can be convenient and quick. Book buyers can choose books that are not physically sold in their local areas. It means that instead of having to travel, they can use the Internet to buy their expected ones at their home. Only by a click mouse, you will have a book immediately. For instance, when buying Shecklock Homes, it takes us 5 seconds to wait for it.

Lastly, the books we read online are portable. If you purchase electronic textbooks, it will be much easier to carry them home and back to class. You can even load all of your books to the phone that you already carry with you anyway. This allows you to keep your entire library in your pocket, so your textbooks will be available to you wherever you are.

At the end of the day, reading online is advantageous for readers due to cheapness, convenience, and portability. Therefore, it is advisable to have mobile devices to read e-books.
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