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'troop of cheeky boys' - Descriptive writtng: Childrens birthday party [21]
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The room was filled with delicate ornaments that were garnished with affection. Balloons glide across the brightly painted ceiling; in all the colours of the rainbow. Sequined confetti filled the atmosphere; the children were astonished at the glitter that poured down like an immense waterfall. There stood a vast, majestic table that had a wonderful selection of foods. The table also had a large modern vase, which was filled with the most extravagant and unusual flowers; lavender, cypress, dahlia. Their refreshing scent filled the air. A big ribbon had been tied with care on each of the affectionately wrapped presents that lay peacefully in the corner, waiting to be opened. Nearby a group of girls quietly whispered, curious to know what was hidden inside them. They point towards a floral patterned casing, with beautiful ribbons of all different colours. Their eyes gleam in awe. Other children were running, playing and screaming with glee.
Outside, the thrill of excitement filled the summer breeze; the magnificent weather had put a smile on the children's faces. A giant, yet tremendous bouncy castle was the main attraction to the youngsters. Some sat cross-legged in the corner of the castle whispering precious secrets to each other, while others cheered and yelled with their friends in a joyous state. A funny man stood beside the bouncy castle selling balloons to a group of giddy girls, and they were laughing hysterically at his jokes. A concealed troop of cheeky boys hid behind large tree, they held water balloons in their hands. They launched them in all directions and waited for amusing reactions, but the victims just screeched and ran after them...
....Families and trustworthy friends were gathered around a big and shallow fountain. They held pennies tightly in their fists, while they closed their eyes and made a wish. They then made a big blow on the coin one last time and flipped it until it dropped into the water. The fountain floor was over-crowded with silver and golden coins, beneath them were multi-coloured mosaics, almost invisible to the naked eye.
The sound of faint, distant bells rang in our ears. Children stopped skipping; running or causing mischief instead all of them ran towards the party hall. "Cake, Cake!!"- They cheered with bright and sunny grins on their faces. The girls ran swiftly, their beautiful gowns with soft ruffles, float past with elegance. Pearls and crystals were carefully embroidered on each of the luxurious dresses. The boys briskly ran across the freshly cut grass. They were smartly dressed in checked shirts and a range of different ties. They all made it towards the finish line! They were so lively and optimistic. They looked at the beautiful masterpiece in front of them. Their taste buds were tingling just at the sight of this irresistible delicacy. The chocolate cake was covered with a sweet sugar paste, and hand-decorated with dainty roses. There were snow-white swirls going around the finely decorate cake. The birthday girl was about to cut the cake. She pierced the perfect cake with her sharp knife; it was oozing with indulgent chocolate. Everyone took a slice for themselves; some even had three or four, seeing as it was so delicious.
It was getting late. It was getting dark, millions of stars shone in the navy blue sky. It was time to say our goodbyes, to friends and families. Memories like this one will forever stay in our hearts.
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