Writing Feedback / Making money or traveling before entering university is valuable for students [2]

In some countries young people are encouranged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

At present, it is commonly recommended that young people graduate from high school should go out to work or travel for one year before they enter university. In my opinion, the effective varies from the subject you plan to learn during the university.

Working or travelling before enter the university will be very helpful especially for these students who want to study subjects such as arts, humanities and social science. without high pressure of study in university, people can spend plenty of time to widen their scope and get the experience which can not be achieved from school. Through visiting different art gallaries, museums and culture center, they can gather many useful informations for their future university study. Besides, they can also acquire many valuable experience through communicating with people from different area with different diversity culture and habit.These valuable experience whcih is very hard to get from university will be great help for these students.

Whereas, for the people who will study science and engineering, will not get much help from the society practices through working and travelling. Students graduate from high school, have not accumulated enough theorical knowledge, are unlikely to understand the professional work, limited experience will be got even they managed to work for the certain area. Furthermore, without basic skills, students will lose their cofidences and enthusiasms if they work hard but can not understand the ordinary process of the technology. Besides, travelling will not benifit them for the future learning either, for nobody will impart you any professional skills related to society and engineering.

In conclusion, working and travelling before entering university will be very valuable for these people who plan to study arts, humanities and social science, however, people focus on socience and engineering during the university will get very limited experence related to these areas.

Writing Feedback / Fixed punishments for crimes may improve the efficiency, decrease the crime rate [4]

Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, However, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

As the development of society, there are intense controversial about the punishment of each type of crime, some people recommend that the punishment of each crime should be fixed while others believe that the punishment should be depend on different scenarios include circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation of crime.

Many people argue that it will be benefit for the society stability and human right if we treat the crime flexible, it is unfair that people who commence the crime with different motivation are executed the same punishment.

In some urgent situation, people commence crime without careful consideration can not be compared to those who have prepared the crime long time before. Besides, some crimes are careless but not deliberate, and the punishment should be alleviated accordingly.

However, the consequences of each type of crime are all the same and will not differ in term of the motivation and circumstances, and it is not fair for the victims if the punishment is not fixed.

Besides, the fixed punishment for each type of crime will improve the efficiency of justice and process of the judgment will be shortened, with the growing of population of each country, the more efficiency of the justice, the society will be more stable, and more criminal can be punished accordingly. Furthermore, the crime rate will be diminished by means of fixed punishments, with standardize and transparent regulation, the awareness of the people will be enhanced, definitely, less and less people will defy the rules. The guideline is understandable and acceptable. It is easy for all the society to monitor the wrong behavior and even the crime. At last, with the improvement of the efficiency and the decrease of crime rate, the investment related to this will drop, and the saved money can be put into education and social security, which will decrease the crime rate in the other part.

In conclusion, fixed punishments for each type of crime will improve the efficiency, decrease the crime rate and investment, it is indicated that with fixed policy, the society will have virtuous cycle.

Writing Feedback / Extinction of some languages will make life easier through improving the efficiency and employment [6]

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Nowadays, many minority languages become extinct as the rapid development of society. Some people believe that it will benefit for the life and society with less language around the world. In my opinion, there are some advantages for the extinction of some minority languages.

As for the native speaker of minority of languages, it will be beneficial for them to speak the dominant language, for it will help them to gain access to more information about scientific and technological developments. Articles about these state-of-the-art technologies are mainly written by dominant languages such as English, French and German. People without the language skills will be very hard to acquire these information.

Besides, it will promote the efficiency if people all speak the same language, especially during the work, study and daily life. The barrier of language will be removed and people can exchange their ideas smoothly without any misunderstanding. It is very common that native English speaker can find the job easier than these people speak English as the second language in Australia and Europe, even the technical level of native speakers are much lower. Furthermore, as we know, communication plays an important role in modern company, speaking the dominant language will bring more educational and employment opportunities for them. For the communities and regions they live, it will help them to increase trade and economic ties with the outside world, and thus will boost the development of these areas.

However, there are some negative parts of the language dying out. The cultural diversity will be reduced, such as folk tales and folk remedies will disappear, and the missing languages will diminish their sense of identity.

In conclusion, the extinction of some languages will make life easier through improving the efficiency and employment. Government should provide some opprtunities for these native speakers of minority languages to learn the dominant languages, and the native language and culture have to be conserved and respected.

Writing Feedback / Punishment for Children is important for them to learn the difference between right and wrong? [4]

It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them lean this distinction.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishement should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

the "appropriate" punishment

As we know, it is essential to let children understand and distinguish the good and bad behaviour in the early age. Some people hold the opinion that to facilitate the knowing of this distinction, punishment is necessary.

In some areas, excessive physical punishment is wildly used in the home and schools by parents and teachers. The abuse of excessive punishment will cause some side effects. For instance, children is tend to be more violent in their whole life. These children who experienced excessive physical punishment will exert this punishment and violence to other people if they get a chance. In the worst scenaris, an extremely crime will be conducted by these people who suffered punishment in their childhood. Besides, exerting too much punishment on their children will be the barrier between the parents and children. this will deepen the gap and obstacle the comminication between parents and children. The consequence is the children will not trust their parents and teachers and as everyone know, trustworthy is hard to be rebuilt. Furthermore, excessive physical punishment is harmful for the health of children or even destroy the confidence of the young children.

To make the children be aware of the right and wrong things, some mild punishment will be helpful. For example, giving the children farm work if they waster some food. This kind of punishment will teach them the hard working behind each rice. Or let them fix the toys if they intend to damage it. This sorts of punishment will guide them to the right direction in their life. It is easier for these children to accept this and acquire new skills. Moreover, this proper punishment will enhace the trustworthy and communication between parents, teachers and children.

In conclusion, excessive punishment will go to the opposite direction for education, however, appropriate punishment is highly recommended to guide the children to the right behaviour.

Writing Feedback / Share information in scientific research, business and the academic world. Good or bad [2]

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or to valuable to be shared freely.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

should crucial information be confidential or not?

Collaborations between different parties is playing an essential role in various aspects of industries include scientific, business and academic.
However, to what degree can we share the relevant information with others is still quite debatable. Some people hold the views that the more we share the better, however others prefer to censor the information before sharing.

Currently, with the explosive information flood all over the world, almost all of the fast developing technologies are propelled by the shared information.It is very limited scope for these individuals who want to study themselves without acquiring any other valuable message to support. All of the giant company with high reputation across different areas such as IT, finance, and research institutions have established the specific department to collect and share the information from the industry. Moreover, through sharing the information, it significantly improves the efficiency. It is much easier to get these information from online or libraries than decades before, this is time-saving and beneficial for every individual in the society.

However, some information is too confidential to be leaked to the other parties especially the core product of the company or institution. This has to be classified as several level and restrict the accessing from readers. Otherwise, the leakage of these secrets may be harmful and damage the interest of their own organization. Furthermore, some information related to the copyright has to be protected by the law, without proper restriction for these product will diminish the enthusiasm of creativity, or even violate the international law.

In sum, sharing valuable information will be a mutual benefit in various aspect of the society. However, it is important that the confidential information has to be classified to protect the core interest of the organization.