Student Talk / "Economic reason" - what does it mean? Scholarship [4]

the economic reason - this term relates to the money.
For example: from a economic reason someone can't afford something - a person or an institution is too poor to buy/sponsor something.

Undergraduate / Relentlessness and Dedication that led to Success [4]

For me it should be more like: IfIhad not talk to my sister's friends, ...

Writing Feedback / My Writing Improvement - I don't have a lot of writing experiences, especially in English [7]


It would be better to enhance your conclusion. Write in addition how your writing skills will help you in the future, help with your development, to become more familiar with the culture you live now, such things..

Maybe include an interesting/embarrasing anectode from your life, show what more encouraged you to learn. Try personalise more, give more of your feelings.
Maybe wait yet a little bit before print - here on PF are much better "guides" who may help you yet.

Grammar, Usage / Rephrase text about research paper (sentences) [9]


I trust
I conclude
I think
I reckon
I regard
...

Undergraduate / Science, Mathematics is the backbone of any country, it can't be exchanged by History and Literature [3]

... country. These ... economy. As ... mathematics. These ...literature, as ... narrow. And ...
and so on..
You should remember, that the dot, comma - all punctuation you should put directly after a word, and just then put the SPACE. The sentence can't be started from a dot.

Check for the web pages, books (and others writing) how it should look.

Faq, Help / Is it safe to post my essay here? Or should I be worried about Plagiarism? [175]

You shouldn't worry about plagiarism much. Check for example this discussion:

Essays / Motivation for participation in postgraduate program with emphasis on my occupation [4]

Whole the internet is filled with examples for this prompt.
But write from your experience - show your personal feelings, how you struggled with things, it must come from inside of your heart. Show your passion, what ignites you - describe the first moment that motivated you to participate. It must be convincing for the reader, try to be unique. Don't copy ideas of others. Find it in yourself, I'm sure you have something to say. Just put your ideas here, we will help you to develope it into one good piece of essay :)

Writing Feedback / In India, as in worldwide, the most famous organisation is 'Athithi Dev Bavo' [4]


Yes, it can be used. Multiple of examples for exact phrase "Crime is soaring" and of course "day by day" - so why not to merge it? It makes perfect sense for me.

Essays / How your day goes on April 29 2025 - UWC scholarship / speech writing [35]


essayforum.com/faq/safe-post-worried-plagiarism-1236/
Read this - you shouldn't be worried - it's your genuine content and you can always prove it.

Writing Feedback / Free education - reasoning and consequences of implementing the policy [4]

And what about explaining how these consequences shape your position? I didn't noticed a word - what means free education for you? How it might affect your educational/professional future? Show your personal perspective.

Faq, Help / Question about EssayForum - How does this site work? [103]

@DungMai
The same as you made that post above. Remember, that the comment should be not too short, else you may be at risk of suspension.

Faq, Help / Question about EssayForum - How does this site work? [103]

@Sally_Dao
Wait, I'll contact on your behalf with the administrators to solve your issue.
(It may take couple of hours)

Faq, Help / Question about EssayForum - How does this site work? [103]

The only explanation when someone can not respond to a thread question is when this thread is without answer yet, and the first reply belongs to EF contributors.

So try to choose an another topic, where for example Consultant Holt gave her advice already.
And do not repeat her words ;)