Writing Feedback / A Great Elephant Was Defeated By an Ingenious Ant Once upon a time, in the jungle forest, lived ass [2]

A Great Elephant Was Defeated By an Ingenious Ant

Once upon a time, in the jungle forest, lived assortment of animals, from the smallest as ants and the biggest animals like Elephant. The elephant was so arrogant, he felt the most powerful, due to the fact that he had ever defeated a tiger with his long trunk, the tiger lifted to the high and slammed on the ground. Wherefore the tiger has been defeated, so an elephant claimed to be sovereign in the jungle. Nowadays, afterwards, king of the jungle's role has been replaced by an arrogant elephant.

The elephant more and more felt very great and cocky, underestimated others, belonging the ant. As far as the ant defying him, and he takes the challenges. They immediately enter the battle areas, Ant trampled by elephant, nevertheless, the ant is dodgy and courageous, he found an elephant's weaknesses in his big and wide ears. The ant was get into the ears hole, slowly. The ant began to ate the contents of elephant ears, the elephant began to feel pain, his huge body roll around on the ground for resisting the pain. The elephant had tried to remove the ant out of his ears. Nonetheless, his efforts nothing.

'Mercy.... Ants! I plead guilty.' The elephant is Scream out. The elephant began to gave up.
Heard elephant's cries, the ant felt pity, and the ant out of the ears canal.
'Therefore, you should not be arrogant. You are the biggest, but there is more than you. Now, you are strong. But, there is stronger than you. The labor force is not always able to help you. However, intelligence is always on top of everything', he said.

The elephant only silences, he felt very embarrassed. Other animals only witness the defeated of elephant and cheering up. One of the animals who watched the fight, comments:

'Therefore, you should not underestimate other animals, even Ants very small. However, Ants is a hero could defeat the arrogance and pride.'

The moral of the Beast Fairy Tale: As great as us, there is always other people who have higher skills than us. The advantages, we have do not make us arrogant and forget yourself. Precisely, must be humble and grateful.

Writing Feedback / Summary: Sees the Progress of Tuberculosis Treatments [4]

Summary: Sees the Progress of Tuberculosis Treatments

Tuberculosis (TB) is an infectious disease caused by the bacterium Mycobacterium Tuberculosis. It affects the lungs, but can also affect other parts of the body, like bones, brain, liver, kidneys, and hearts. Most infections do not have symptoms, there is 10% chance of latent TB becoming active TB, this risk is much higher in people who have compromised immune systems, i.e. people living with HIV or malnutrition, or people who smoke. The disease affects young adults, mostly.

In 2012, 80% of reported TB cases occurred in just 22 countries. The World Health Organization says 8.6 million people became ill with available statistics. The diseases spread through the air when a person with TB (whose lungs are affected) coughs, sneezes, or talks. It is contagious, but it is not easy to catch. Most of people infected with TB live in developing countries.

The treatments for Tuberculosis can be cured when the right medication is available and administered correctly. The right type and length of antibiotic treatment depends on a person's age, overall health, system of immune, potential resistance to drugs, whether it active or latent, and the location of infection (as the lungs, bones, brain, kidneys). The treatments must be completed fully, moreover, if the TB symptoms have gone away. The bacteria that have survived the treatment could become resistant to the medication that has been prescribed.

The preventions of Tuberculosis, can be avoiding other people by not going to school or work, sleeping by yourself, and masks the mouth, will help to minimize the risk or germs from reaching anyone else.

In conclusion, must be keep the immune of body, the dietary habit, maintaining cleanliness of the body and environment, if already infected must be right treatments with completed fully, and trying to get some prevention. That is due to the fact that if TB is not controlled early, and drug resistant it caused the strains spread, and the world will face a far more deadly threat.

Writing Feedback / TED_Video: How to Be a Good Mentor [4]

TED_Video: How to Be a Good Mentor

A good mentor created many great students. Be a good mentor likened as a leader in the team. Which a good team or needs a good mentor to guide them. Like Mrs. Margaret Heffernan ever said that: "a good team, they had three characteristics, the really successful teams, First, they showed high degrees of social sensitivity to each other. Secondly, the successful teams gave roughly equal time to each other. Thirdly, had women in them. But, the keys, their social connectedness to each other."

It related to the ways to be a good mentor. There are some steps, as, approach each mentorship differently, set expectations together in the very beginning, take a genuine interest in your mentee as a person, know when to wait before giving advice, improve your emotional intelligence, do not assume anything about your mentee, be really forthcoming about mistakes you have made, celebrate students achievements, give more than you ask for, seek out classes or project related to skills your mentee wants to develop, solve for the long-term, lead by sample.

But, being a good mentor takes practice and patience. Understand how to communicate with the students, and you will learn a lot about yourself, whether you are able to provide a vision that motivates and help others, and so on. Like Mrs. Margaret ever said that "Arup believes that the culture of helpfulness is central to their success".

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