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Posts by Att98
Name: Atthya Nadya
Joined: Sep 26, 2016
Last Post: Oct 6, 2016
Threads: 5
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From: Indonesia
School: senior high school 8

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Att98   
Sep 26, 2016
Writing Feedback / Summary Article: Keep your goals to yourself [2]

Everyone has a purpose in life and the dreams that they expect in the future will happen. All of people should start the imagination to imagine the dream. Then, if everyone shall say about all their dreams, would not the people will be near to their dreams? However, according to psychologists and psychologists tests proved that, if someone says about their dreams to others tend to happen it will be a little bit. Therefore, we recommend everyone to save their dreams so that they always remember about it and will do it. According to Kurt Lewin (inventor of social psychologists) in 1926, it is a substitute. In 1933, Vera Mahler found that when a case is justified by others, it felt real in our minds. There are several ways that everyone is not easily satisfied, is resist the temptation to tell anyone about the dream and goal of life. Hold for some time about the happy feeling that will be distributed to others. If there are people who want to say, there is only one effective way is a way that does not create satisfied quickly.
Att98   
Sep 26, 2016
Writing Feedback / Sports heroes in the field of badminton in Indonesia [3]

Summary Article: Tontowi Ahmad, the golden boy alongside Liliyana Natsir

Indonesian citizens cheered shortly after know sports heroes in the field of badminton Tontowi Ahmad and Liliyana Natsir out as a winner gold medalist in Rio De Janeiro in brazil. Tontowi was born in Banyumas regency in Central Java on July 18, 1987. The father to Danish Arsenio Ahmad and husband to Michelle Harminc first tried his hands on badminton when he was a third-grade elementary school student. Before paired with Liliyana Natsir (senior athletes) in 2010, he has get important achievements, including the gold medal at the Vietnam Open Grand Prix 2007. While clearly Liliyana Natsir has become the queen of Indonesian badminton mixed-doubles. Many achievements of the collaboration between Tontowi and Liliyana Natsir. Since 2010, Tontowi and Liliyana have made Indonesia proud through their achievements, ranging from their first victory together in the 2011 Malaysia Open GP Gold in the All England Super Series Premier and the Swiss Open Grand Prix Gold 2012, and their last victory when the Olympics in Rio DeJjaneiro in Brazil and get a gold medals.
Att98   
Sep 28, 2016
Writing Feedback / Land Degradation The pie chart provides an information about the main cause of unproductive farmland [2]

hallo, dinartika13. I have suggestion for you.

The pie chart provides ==>(you can paraphrase the word with describes, illustrates, shows, intences) an information about the main ...
Closerly look, what do you mean? the table another explanation ...
Overall,it can be seen that, raising animals in the openland ...

... there are three major factors which divided the chart...
... smallest percentage in under ten percents .

... Europe ranked the first position with 23 percents and ...
Att98   
Sep 28, 2016
Writing Feedback / The table shows percentage of travellers per form of transport and average age of a traveller. [3]

hello andika08. here i left my suggestion for you.

The table shows ==> (you can paraphrase the word with illustrates, describes, intences) percentages of travellers per form of transport ...
The bar chart shows CO2 emissions from different from of transport (emissions from different transport).
... car with one people, car with more several people, ...
In other handOn the other hand, train or bus is slightly different ...
Att98   
Sep 28, 2016
Writing Feedback / Summary article: Two Rafflesia flowers bloom in Bengkulu [3]

Indonesia popular with a lot of sites that shows the good scenery of nature. And also famous with a wide variety of flora and fauna. One of the type flora from Indonesia is often called to as the biggest flora in the world and the nearly extinct, namely Arnoldii Rafflesia. This flower has grown in two places, namely in Bengkulu and in Sumatra.

Many people who wanted to see live the largest flower in the world and almost extinct, the public could witness this rare event and can come to Taba Penanjung Forest in Central Bengkulu district, or to dam Monok Kepahiang Forest District.

Rafflesia Arnoldi Flower has attracted much attention of the public to view from the first bloom. Based on Gerhana.co. "People have come to visit, although it is not a holiday. The location is also not too deep in the forest."
Att98   
Sep 29, 2016
Writing Feedback / Summary 2 Pie charts represent water usage in San Diego,California and Worldwide [5]

hello dioba, here i left the comment for you

The pie charts represent ==>(you can paraphrase the word with shows, describes, illustrates, intences) about water usage in ...
Overall, it can be seen that, San Diego is the region in which (...) region which is the biggestthe highest water usage for industry.
... have the same number water usageutilize for industry.
On the other hand, ==> (you can paraphrase the word with in spite of that, on the other side) only a very small number ...
Att98   
Sep 29, 2016
Writing Feedback / Summary Article : You Asked: Should I Worry About Wi-Fi Radiation? [2]

Many researchers who have doing research since decades ago. This research search risks at health from dangerous radiation from the wireless network. And to this day never find the answer. Wireless networks can be found anywhere for example in the workplace, home, and other public places. The wireless network streaming radio waves do not have a connection that looks like cable, but can be connected to mobile phones, laptops, speakers and others. It becomes a question, and worried about how the effects on health of the wireless network streaming radio wave.

According to John Moulder, a professor emeritus of radiation oncology at the Medical College of Wisconsin. Radiation which is derived from the wireless network has become a scientific research since several years.In 2013, the Wi-Fi router to send and receive information using radio waves, which are a form of electromagnetic radiation.

Some research suggests that high-frequency, lectromagnetic radiation can promote tumor growth and cancer.
Att98   
Sep 30, 2016
Writing Feedback / The table shows secondary school attendance during period of 2000 to 2009 [3]

hello, here i left comment for you.

The table shows ==>(you can paraphrase the word with describes, illustrates, intences) secondary school attendance ...
Generally, the trend revealsexpose gradual descent of attendance(you have done repetition) in Specialist Schools,..
... over 2000 to 2005 and 2005-2009 gradually increased increased gradually ...
Att98   
Sep 30, 2016
Writing Feedback / The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars - Writing TASK [6]

Hello terminal23, i have some suggestions for you.

The chart displays ==> (you can paraphrase the word with shows, illustrates, describes, intences) prices alterations for fresh (...), and sweet, andas well as carbonat drinks ...

Fresh fruits and vegetables started at (you can paraphrase the word with stood at) just below 60 in 1979.
... fruits and vegetables dramatically increase increased dramatically almost catch up 350.
From 1991 to 2009 three of prices about (sugar and sweets, consumer price index and carbonat drinks) just below 150 stabled.
Att98   
Oct 6, 2016
Writing Feedback / Go Ahead, Make Up New Word! Summary Ted [3]

Lexicographer job is to write the words in a dictionary. Assignment to determine words are others too. Language is one part important of communicative. A group of people who decided to understand each other. Sometimes people do not have a reason to determine good and bad word. Sometimes people speak for grammar.

There are two types of grammar. There are already permanent grammar in the brain. And the person who is the native speaker or speakers who are proficient.

There are several ways to make a word in the English language. The first is to intergrated the two words commonly called combination. Furthermore, combining the words but there are some missing or commonly known shorten words.For example, "brunch" is an a bland of "breakfast" and "lunch". There are also other ways of making words by changing the function commonly called panning function. Another way to eliminate its extension and shortened slightly. The latter is, shorten the word by taking the words at the beginning in order to become a new word.

Everyone should make the words for this opportunity to express and convey messages and also as communication.
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