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Name: Chuni lal
Joined: Jun 5, 2018
Last Post: Jun 28, 2018
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From: India
School: Jyoti shah

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Chuni lal   
Jun 17, 2018
Writing Feedback / Practical ideas, and the life guidance suggestions [5]

@jessig
you cannot use and so many times to connect sentences, it is better to use connectors like: Because when you dress well when you dress in good taste, and you make up, and you will have confidence.... it is better to have like this... because when you dress well with good taste in addition to make-up your style, will boost your confidence.
Chuni lal   
Jun 16, 2018
Writing Feedback / In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents' home. [3]

some youngsters choose to live away from parents



In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents' home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Do you agree or disagree with this approach? Give your opinion.

Self-dependent is nowadays a trend observed in many countries where the youngster after finishing their school leave their hometown to another region of the world to become motivated, independent and can stand on their feet. In my opinion, I completely agree with this approach and in details are discussed in the following paragraphs.

Firstly, the approach of living independently makes us confident, strong enough to face the world challenges, living without parents allow people to understand the real world and an opportunity to learn things themselves. Take for an example, In India, most students after finishing their school life tend to move abroad leaving behind their families to acquire higher studies and better job possibilities to grab as much as the knowledge they can from the world.

Secondly, Living alone or with friends provide the platform for the youngster to have an independent decision in critical situations and teaches a lot to the person about his decision-making capabilities and teaches about the human behaviour, such as dealing with other people around you independently, taking medical care of your ill roommate and helping your friend in assignments, creating shared values with friends and neighbour are beneficial and memorable for the young generation to have a good human touch.

In conclusion, allowing a youngster to live away from the parent is a very hard decision but it has a fruitful output and teaches their children to understand the real world and build up their self-confidence and make them stand on their feet.
Chuni lal   
Jun 16, 2018
Writing Feedback / Should share information as much as possible? IELS 12 Test 5 Task 2 [3]

your conclusion and third paragraphs are contradicting, in the other point of view, you have described that knowledge/information of companies are essential and critical for them to remain secret as business point of view but in conclusion you have pointed out, if 2 business models can share their information would lead to benefit their business.
Chuni lal   
Jun 5, 2018
Writing Feedback / International aid for the development plans for developing countries [3]

Many developing countries are given aid from international organizations to help them in their development plans. some people argue that financial aid is important but others suggest practical aid and advice are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

the economic gap between rich and poor countries is huge, any solution?



To minimise the economic gap and help in the development of the poorer nations mostly world level organizations like UNO, do support the developing nations financially and in many other ways. Few individuals say that financial help is valuable while others emphasize on practical help and guidance, Both the conditions are important according to the situation of developing nations.

Financial Support is very crucial and valuable for any nation to survive and support the countries economy, to minimise the poverty level in the nation and provide the basic necessity to people it is very important for a country to be strong economically, Organizations like United nations support these poorer nations to keep the surviving conditions in a better way by providing loans from world bank. Recently, United Nations have decided to forgive the loan interest of the poor nation, Nigeria to support them to sustain the life during the crises period.

Looking at the second view, support in the practical terms like situations of war, natural disasters or epidemic disease are very critical situations for any nation to survive and struggle in these conditions, during this period suppport from international organizations are quite valuable for any nation, mostly we have observed during these crises time mostly all the nations come together to support their friendly nations, for an instance recently during the epidemic of AIDS, South Africa was mostly affected by the infection, during that period France made a tremendous effort to bring back South africa by providing medicinal support and medical staff to cure from the infection and eradicate the virus.

In conclusion, in my opinion, both the views are equally important for the survival and development of nations, It is mostly dependent on the circumstances for the nation.
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