Writing Feedback / Using the power - the benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages [4]

The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace but nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

more energy is needed

Along with the superior high-tech industry of the current world, it requires much more energy to maintain all the system than ever before. While the natural energy is having signs of exhausion, the advert of nuclear power seems to be optimal solution for this catastrophe. This essay will give some specific reasons to answer for the question how effective the nuclear power is.

Firstly and foremost, the amount of energy released in a nuclear fission reaction is ten million times further than the amount released in the other natural energy sources like coal or gas. This abundant energy source will meet the energy demand of the world today. Secondly, nuclear power is very cheap compared to the other energy sources, the amount of money on building nuclear power plant takes less than the other energy factories, because it does not demand too much acreage. One more important reason to make the nuclear power is considered as well as the most valuable energy recently is clean, very clean, it does not have much bad impact on our environment as the others have really done. This thing helps us save a fresh atmosphere for the next generations and maintain our good health at this our time.

However, everything has both sides of it, radioactive waste can possess a threat to the environment and is really dangerous to human. Radiation infected people can get some kinds of cancer, genetic modifying or fetal toxicity causing ... We can remember to the two traumatic historical events which are concerned to nuclear power, Chenobyl disater on 26 April 1986 in Ukraina and The Fukushima Daiichi nuclear disaster on 26 March 2011 in Japan, both of them have been leaving the aftermaths until now.

All in all, I have a great inclination on the advandtages which are gained by using nuclear power rather than the harmful things causing of it.

Writing Feedback / With the development of online communication, people is easy to make new friends [5]

internet not always useful

With the development of online communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends?
To what extend do you agree?

In the few past decades ago, online communicating methods were born to be the bridge to connect many people around the world just by one click or typing on the key board in front of the computer. This invention helps people to be easy on making new friends and talking together without any footprints from one place to another place. But actually, many people in this recently modern world are still alone and being harder to get into a real relationship, this essay will give some specific reasons why we have this trouble in the modern life.

Social network was born to help many people from the very far different distances can meet and talk together easily, what they just need to do is turn on the computer connecting with the Internet and sit there in front of the computer desk from day time to night time for talking and seeing each other through video call. This thing partly dispels the current loneliness, for instance, someone on their business trip so far from their home calling to their family members to solve their instant homesickness or a couple from different countries can talk and meet each other daily through the support of online tools. But it just can help them solve the temporary problem, as flesh and flood human, we all desire to reveal our love to our loved ones by kisses, or hugs ... those actions are only completed by touch from skin to skin. This brings many physical values as well as the scientific evidence.

With invention of the Internet, making new friends have been become the fastest and easiest action than ever before, we can send the friend request to someone new just by one click on the "friend request" button on Facebook or Writter interface, then, we and that stranger become friends, we thought that, is it really simple as we imagine? So it depends on the conception of friendship of every individual. However, in my view friendship means the strong bond between two or many specifics we have interaction, we give our friend a hand when catastrophe comes or we can share everything even our own secrets. Hence, the friendship are happening on the social network nowadays can be called virtual companionship.

All in all, we can not refuse all the amazing benefits which the internet brings for the recent society, but in some paticular aspects the internet could not be useful as well as it have ever been.

Writing Feedback / Should government control excessive salaries? [5]

state position towards huge earning

In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many of us think that earning lots of money will bring a mutiltude of different benefits and give them the sense of financial freedom, they could affort the things they would like to possess without any hindrance or restraint. While another group perceive that paying higher taxes for the government and being secured for the unforeseen risks such as unemployment or illness is the best choice. This essay will discuss both views as well as giving the pros & cons of the issue.

On one hand, the government should encourage the citizens work hard to create money as well as let them free to manage their salaries by low tax collection. These things could enhance the total assets of the country which will determine where the power of a nation is in the rankings of the world. When the people feel freely to use the amount of money they earn they would like to put more effort in making more money, in order to do this thing they have to try more on getting higher education and compete to achieve the highest position in the society. Those are better for any countries, but one more disadvantage about this is that will create the big gap between the rich & the poor.

On the other hand, some countries in which the citizens who have to pay higher taxes for the government will get more benefits from the taxes they pay for. Such as, the financial ministry will make sure to support a certain amount of money for someone who is fired from their job until they have chances to get a new job, or free education for children under 18 year old, and universal health care to all citizens. These things will secure for all people to maintain their life if something wrong happens in their unforeseen future. However, everything has two sides of it, if government makes sure for all of the basic needs of a citizen, this thing will let the people feel so secure and they will be more lazy to compete for their determined attempt. It creates some people lazy to work because they can take something for granted from the government, besides, the hard-work people feel more unfair because the money they earn is used for the wrong purposes through paying the higher taxes.

All in all, it has a little inclination of agreement on letting people making more money and freely to manage their finance through the low tax collection.

Writing Feedback / Having more money and less free time is better than earning less and having more free time? [4]

Time consumption issue

Nowadays, many people are always arguing to themselves how to balance between the time spending on earning money and the recreation time. Time consumption for both these purposes have approximately equal importance so we could not take this one and leave the other. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of two aspects.

Human are trying much more than ever to get their determined attempt in this mordern world, they are going to school to get higher education, spending their precious time to get high score in every single test with illusion that they are on the top of the world and one of the important things for this effort is making more money in the furture. Money seems to be the indispensable condition to maintain the life, paying for the monthly bills or using money like a tool to demonstrate their abilities their power but the currency have meant nothing if you do not have the time for spending them. You will soon realize that how time flies so quickly and you just desire for turning back the hands of time to get more free time for the other things such playing with your children or spending more time for your own hobbies ...

Besides, having much more free time is very harmful for the youth generation, the youth should be kept busy because the idle hands are the devil's tools. They will be neglected on the way to explore wealth of knowledge of the mankind and may get struggling in some social issues or be indebted without keeping track on work to earn money.

So in order to have an ideal life, we should learn how to balance between making money and entertainment even knowing that there is still much controversy.