Writing Feedback / [IELTS TASK 2] Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled... [2]

Topic: Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Whether governments should legislate for recycling is an issue of broad interest. While there are still disparate arguments, I personally concur with the need for regulation due to some reasons.

First and foremost, the detrimental impacts rising from free-of-law recycling are undeniable. Without restriction of laws, violation continues escalating, thus sparking serious repercussions. As unrecycled waste will be mainly brought to landfill, pollution will expand at an alarming rate, posing great environmental threats to different agencies working on the environment such as waste processing companies, tourism, economy, etc. Handling these problems would cause significant loss to the national budget, since governments have to allocate financial assistance to various related departments.

Furthermore, legislating for recycling ensures wider compliance in the community. Stringent penalties accompanied with laws such as forfeit, arrestment, imprisonment, etc. would stimulate people's rigorous adherence to the regulations as well as urge companies to address environmental problems. For example, a dairy company in Vietnam called Vinamilk has introduced bio-degradable bags and hydro flask metal bottles to consumers for recycling purposes. Their inventions under the influence of social media have resulted in great amount of consumption and support from customers, especially the adolescents, therefore not only contributing to the economy but also disseminating environmental messages. These productive approaches together with strong consciousness of people would enable further sustainable development targets in our community.

In brief, bringing in recycling laws is necessary to raise people's awareness and conformity. Governments had better come up with appropriate legislation in order to gain as much benefits as possible. (254)

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Writing Feedback / [IELTS TASK 1] Numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum before and after it was refurbished [2]

Topic: The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided table illustrates the numbers of guests visiting Ashdown Museum in the year before and the year after its refurbishment. The two given pie charts describe visitors' contentment during the same two periods. The measurement in pie charts is percentage.

As the first pie chart suggests, before the reconvention, half of the guests had negative feedback. Meanwhile, there were only 10 percent of visitors very satisfied and nearly a third of them satisfied. The dissatisfied ones accounted for the largest part of the chart, which is 40 percent, whereas the smallest part belongs to the ones with no response, which was 5 percent.

After being remodeled, the number of visitors increased almost a quarter according to the table. The percentage of positive feedback also uplifted sharply, which took up three quarters of the whole, including over a third of visitors very satisfied and nearly a half of visitors satisfied. In contrast, there were only 15 percent and 5 percent of guests dissatisfied and very dissatisfied comparatively. The percentage of people with no response was similar to the previous year.

Overall, there were more people disappointed with their visit before the museum's reconstruction, while the contradictory happened after that. The proportion of guests with no response stayed unchanged. In the subsequent year, the total number of visitors upsurged. (218)

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Writing Feedback / [IELTS Writing task 2] Countries are becoming more and more similar [3]

Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.

Many people have argued that countries are becoming more and more similar as people can buy the same products anywhere in the world. While this seems like a positive development, I think that there are significant disadvantages from it.

Firstly, the ability to buy similar commodities anywhere serves as favourable signals of economic growth, transportation sector advancement, trading route increasing, key indicators of world development. Secondly, there is another advantage of this capability relating to living standards, since being able to purchase products everywhere meets the requirements of every consumers even the most grumpy ones. Moreover, this means that people can buy foreign manufactures without wasting time travelling further as well as worrying about origins.

However, there are certain negative effects from this development. When purchasing foreign commodities, consumers as well as companies have to pay higher due to tax, freight cost and service fee. This will result in smuggling and selling counterfeit goods in order to increase profits. Furthermore, during transforming process, products can be crashed or broken down, which makes the quality declined. These problems are considered to have direct impact on customers' psychology as well as companies' income. Besides, being able to buy everything anywhere results in people's thoughts that countries are becoming the same. This is not a positive idea since each countries has its own attractions as well as conditions, and all of them make the world around us more enticing as well as diversified.

In conclusion, although being capable of buying similar products anywhere in the world has several advantages, there are various troubles arising from this. Governments and citizens had better come up with suitable regulations as well as applications in order to make this development more productive. (285)

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