ershad193
Jul 5, 2010
Writing Feedback / GRE: argument51: antibiotics, a part of treatment for muscle strain patients?? [4]
Good job. Excellent points. You've found most of the flaws in the argument.
Another point would be -- a significant decision like the one mentioned by the author cannot be taken based on a single study. There must be multiple experiments and the reports should be peer-reviewed.
However, you have some grammatical errors. I know these can creep in when you are writing under time constraints, but you should make an effort to minimize them.
Good job. Excellent points. You've found most of the flaws in the argument.
Another point would be -- a significant decision like the one mentioned by the author cannot be taken based on a single study. There must be multiple experiments and the reports should be peer-reviewed.
However, you have some grammatical errors. I know these can creep in when you are writing under time constraints, but you should make an effort to minimize them.