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IELTS Writing Task--Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood [18]
Sean, take a moment and listen to what you are saying.
You keep saying that I'm making ad hominem attacks.
What is an ad hominem attack?
It's a personal attack; it doesn't examine the merits of the issue in question.
Yes, in a sense, it is true that I have made an ad hominem attack against you.
Unfortunately, you fail to realize that the ad hominem attack I make against you, is relevant and pertinent to the issue in question.
You cannot obscure facts. You cannot play stupid any longer. You cannot avoid the question. I've exposed you enough already in my ad hominem attacks against you.
I don't know, but for some reason, as direct and in your face as I may seem to some people, I feel that I can be even more direct and cut off every possible escape route. I stop short of that because once I've exposed you, intelligent people should be able to use the tools I have given them to do the rest by themselves. If you force me to, I can go the whole length. I excercise self-restraint because I don't want to make you feel more uncomfortable than you have to. Once you've learned algebra, what is the purpose in solving individual equations?
Let's go back to your latest post. There is no better way to form a rebuttal. This time I will back you into a corner. This time there will be only question.
"That said, virtually your entire post is an ad hominem attack. It is an ad hominem attack elevated to the status of an art-form, admittedly, and as such has its own beauty, but it is an ad hominem attack nonetheless. You spend all your time parsing out a single sentence of one of my posts, which you admit you don't have to interpret negatively, but are choosing to do so because you're, well, you. You then, on the basis of that one construction, attempt to profile me as a writer variously cunning, tricky, or cowardly, depending upon your mood. In so doing, you completely ignore my own arguments that your original phrasing was both wrong and meaningless (and this, after calling me selective!) and in fact cavalierly refuse to engage with them "I could prove that Israel is a terrorist state by fact (which I'm not inclined to do at this point)'"
This is the crux of your response, in that it tries in some degree, a tepid degree, to actually frame some of the problems I have presented. It actually tries to respond to some of the issues I have raised.
"'That said, virtually your entire post is an ad hominem attack.'"
I admit, it is in large part an ad hominem attack.
"It is an ad hominem attack elevated to the status of an art-form, admittedly, and as such has its own beauty, but it is an ad hominem attack nonetheless."
See, I'd have to disagree here. I've heard that art is vain because it only focuses on aesthetics, which really has no purpose but to be pretty. I don't make these attacks against you for the sole purpose of trying to sound condescending or demonstrate that I know how to construct an effective attack. The attack in itself has a grand purpose which you're overlooking. It facillitates; it redirects the ball into your court :
"You spend all your time parsing out a single sentence of one of my posts, which you admit you don't have to interpret negatively, but are choosing to do so because you're, well, you."
You're right here again, so now that's 2 out of 3. I don't have to interpret it negatively, but I feel compelled to do so, because it is what I believe to be true. I took that leap of judgment which I referred to in my earlier post. I choose to interpret what you say negatively, though I don't have to, because I feel I have satisfied beyond a reasonable doubt, by my own account, that, what I've tried to illustrate and prove against you.
"You then, on the basis of that one construction, attempt to profile me as a writer variously cunning, tricky, or cowardly, depending upon your mood."
Yes, I think it takes a variety of adjectives to describe you. One word cannot adequately describe your complex manner of working; it takes a combination of words that work together in cohesion.
"In so doing, you completely ignore my own arguments that your original phrasing was both wrong and meaningless (and this, after calling me selective!) and in fact cavalierly refuse to engage with them "'I could prove that Israel is a terrorist state by fact (which I'm not inclined to do at this point)'"
Hmmm, how can I say this?
I didn't completely ignore your arguments. That's wrong to say. I wrote up a lengthy ad hominem attack to explain why I am incapable of addressing those arguments. In case you didn't get the gist, or you don't remember, or you are omitting the short and sweet purpose of that diatribe purposely, I can quickly summarize and repeat it again for you, in child-like terms.
Here's the rub.
This is what it all comes down to.
This is the skinny.
According to you, it is wrong and meaningless to call Israel a terrorist state.
Let's suppose I'm adressing those arguments.
I can only argue that it is possible to call a nation a terrorist state.
I can defend against the allegation that calling Israel a terrorist state is meaningless, by perhaps, hypothetically proving that it is permissible to call a nation a terrorist state.
I cannot however, argue that it is not morally "wrong" to call Israel a terrorist state, insofar as you refuse in the face of overwhelming evidence, to admit that that is your opinion.
Mustafa: Sean, do you admit that you think calling Israel a terrorist state is wrong as a matter of your personal opinion, and are you willing to give your reasons why you feel that way?
Sean: No, I think that calling Israel a terrorist state is wrong, because terrorist state is a meaningless construction.
Mustafa: Sean, do you admit that you won't admit that you think calling Israel a terrorist state is wrong as a matter of personal opinion.
Sean: What opinion? I repeat, these are the facts...
How can I possibly argue against him saying that it's "wrong", when he adamantly refuses to admit that that is even the position he takes.
He has one foot in the box, and one foot outside the box.
On the one hand, he wants, in some degree, to say that it is wrong to call Israel a terrorist state because [Insert your reasons here], and on the other hand, for some reason he feels that he can't take the honest track, so he argues that it's wrong as a matter of some fact.
But as I so clearly demonstrated in my post above, is is very likely that when he referred to it being wrong, he was stating his personal opinion.
Essentially, Sean feels conflicting signals within himself. He tries very hard to stick to the detached, technically correct approach. However, he cannot resist but to state his personal opinion on the matter. When I spot his personal opinion, I might try to take him up on it. He senses that somebody might do as such, so for some reason he feels that he has to back out at the last second by reverting it back to the factual approach.
I love analogies. Comparisons are the preeminent foundation of thought.
Imagine the following. Two people sit across from a table. They are having a verbal debate about some topic. The verbal debate is the technical approach. Suddenly, one person punches the other in the jaw.
The other person who likes to debate verbally and to fight (inside the square -- outisde the square analogy in my earlier post in this same thread) says ok, great.
You want to fight, we can fist-fight.
Now all of a sudden, the person that initiated the fight by punching the other guy, says "No No, I don't want to fight. What are you talking about, we are merely debating"
Person 2: but you just punched me
Person 1: no, that punch was part of our debate
Person 2: how does a physical exchange fit into a verbal debate?
First let me say that it's not my place to tell someone if they should "verbally debate" or "fist-fight"
Ideally, it would be a combination of both, but like I said, if somebody chooses to do all one, or all the other, it's not my place to tell them not to.
However, when Person 1 suddenly strikes out at person 2, then refuses to engage Person 2 in a physical manner, much less admit that he even did as such, there is a problem.
It's called a sucker punch.
Can you guess who Person 1 one is?
I guess you could think of a varying number of ways, and words, to describe person 1, couldn't you?
For example: If you punch someone and then don't admit to it, what are you?
If not only do you not admit to it, but you manage to make a halfway convincing argument that it was a verbal dialogue which they have mistaken to be a punch, what are you?
If you feel the urge personally to fist fight, and then punch someone, but for some reason you can't bring yourself to let them get their chance, and you back out, what are you?
The ad hominem attack is purely an ad hominem attack when it serves absolutely no other purpose but to wage a personal attack on someone. However, I think I have done a good enough job of showing how my attacks on Sean tie in to the topic in a big way, namely that in Sean's mind there is nothing to discuss about the topic, at least in the sense that it is wrong.
So here's what I suggest. Either retract your statement that it is wrong entirely, or redefine what you mean when you say it is wrong.
Either way, you go back into your comfortable square, and everyone is content.
Then and only then will I explain why it is not a meaningless statement to call Israel a terrorist state.
I will not go half-way and let it loom that somehow I've failed to prove what I aimed.
Withdraw your half-hearted claim so that all that is left is square speak.
So that I can show that you are 100% wrong.