Writing Feedback / What makes your town attractive? [2]

Topic: A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

Each town or community has some attractions or peculiarities which make it singular and unique. It is such singularities which prompt people to move place to place. For my part, my town has two interesting attractions and one repelling characteristic.

The first thing that makes my town appealing is it landscape. Due to important it weather, there are a lot of forest with great and exotic trees and rivers. This makes ambient temperature acceptable and appropriate to outdoor activities.Very often, people who visit this place used to wandering in the forest along with guide enjoying the beauty of nature.

One of our local dish known as "foufou" is the second attraction. Its main ingredients are: yarm, palm oil and coconut. In fact, cooked yarm is pounded to obtain a sort of mixture. Palm oil and coconut are used for the soup. We can also add every meat to the soup. Finally we eat it along with a local beer called "tchakpalo". It is an excellent dish by it flavor and the easiness of it cooking.

But my local tongue is said to be tough to learn. On average people have to spend much more than two years before mastering the language. The toughness of this language resides in its uniqueness and restraint number of speakers.

Overall, my town is an unique and very interesting place by its landscape and local dishes. However people have to spend a little time to master the language.

Writing Feedback / What's more useful: purchasing a business or a house? [6]

In three months i'll take the toefl ibt and i'm expecting 88(the last year i got 71). Am'i ready?
Topic: You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Wich would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.

As human beings, with limited resources, we are daily confronted to making choices. One most important of them is about money matters, how to manage and use it in a way that benefit us. There are numerous opportunities in which one can invest his financial resources. In my view, it seems more useful to purchase a business.

There is no doubt that owning a company makes people wealthy. In fact, by investing in a business we will annually ripe interests that can be reinvest in the same company or by buying shares from other companies. Consequently, the more investments grow, the more our benefits do. This explains why, more governments nowadays tend to advice unemployed youth to start their own business. Moreover our recent decade is rife with narrative about people you start from light financial resources but has become billionaires by making smart investment. It seems clear to spend money in enterprises if we want to become wealthy.

Another good point for purchasing a company is that this makes people feel more independent and responsible. Leading a company is synonym with freelance, because you are the one who conceive and design the conformation and composition of your staff according to your plan and without constraints. Also people have to refer to your consentment before taking any actions.

In conclusion I strongly believe that a profitable way of making use of our financial resources is by purchasing a business. It is truly the path to become quickly and consistently rich. And finally it makes us less stressed and more independent.

Writing Feedback / What's more important? Roads or public transport? [5]

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Topic: Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways or should governments spend more money on improving public transportations? Why? Use specific reasons to develop your essay

In recent years, many governments have allocated huge amount of financial resources to the transport sector. However the issue whether those resources should be use for improving roads and highways or improving public transportation means has remained a controversial one. From my point of view I can stand for the second option for three reasons.

In improving transportations mean there will be more jobs created. More engineers and technicians are needed to conceive and construct newly and ingenious buses and trains. There will be also a great demand for drivers and mechanics to wield those engines. More public stations will be needed which mean more personnel resources to manage those areas.

Public transportation will create more socialization and friendship. Being together in a bus or train station very will make people interact with one another and become acquaint. As a result a result they will share their daily problems, and long lasting friendship.

Finally, as many public buses or trains have a departure and arrival station; people will walk to those areas helping them stay healthy. Recent studies have shown that people who exercise walking everyday are less likely to experience health diseases.

In conclusion, it seems to me that, public transportations means are more appropriate to our modern life because this will create more jobs, make people socialize and increase our health state .

Writing Feedback / Should public authorities spend money on outer space exploration or not? [3]

outer space exploration as the priority?

In recent years, many governments have put priority on outer space exploration by investing huge amount of money to support spatial projects. Even if those investments will deepen our understanding of surrounding planets, I think public authorities should rather spend these financial resources to address critical issues on earth.

Firstly, human society is dealing with numerous problems that public authorities should normally tackle with. One of these problems is the lack of drinking water and sanitation which cause a lot of water related diseases. As a result rate of morbidity is increasing in some regions on earth

The global warmth with its disastrous consequences represent another serious threat public authorities should not neglect. More researches should be undertaken to find alternative ways to provide energy and therefore reduce our dependence upon fossil energy which is harmful to the environment. Also, an accent should be put preservation and conservation of threatened species for future generations.

Finally, unemployment especially among youth has become a great concern in many countries. Therefore investments should be made towards job creation and promotion of self-employment. To sum up, our governors should spend financial resources to tackle the numerous challenges humans are facing on earth. Only at this condition, our resources will be equally and fairly redistributed.

Writing Feedback / Should educators be paid according to their students performance? [2]

Recently there are debates among education professionals on whether or not teachers should be paid according to their student's achievement. Some people think that teachers' wages should be proportional to how much students learn. In my view, teachers should not be paid according to how much their students learn for three reasons;

First, in the learning process, teachers are not the only people responsible of student studies. During school hours, teachers have a few hours to present informations to students and arouse in them the desire to learn. Once at home parents and elder siblings have the responsibility to make students learn their lessons and do their homeworks.

Secondly, all students do not have the same learning ability. Due to our natural conformation some people learn more quickly than others. For example students with autism disability have difficulties in learning. Another point is that some students learn very quickly scientific subject like mathematics and physics but have difficulties with linguistic subjects.

Finally, this system of payment based on student's performance is unfair. In the education process there is two main actors: teachers and students. For education to be meaningful and excellent, equal pressure should be put on these two actors. If only teachers are under pressure, they will present only informations needed to have good grades on examinations. Students will not have a wide range of information about some subjects. The laters will have good grades but not sufficient in formations to think and act independently.

In conclusion it is not fair to pay teachers according to how much their students learn. This will reduce the value of education to student's performance rather than the various and sound knowledge and skills they have, what is not good for student's education.

Writing Feedback / Importance of advertisement in our modern society [2]

Nowadays, advertisement is the tool which many companies and enterprises use to inform prospective customers about their products and services. Tough advertisement agencies often present only the best side of product; I think that advertisement tells us about new items that may be good for our lives.

First, advertisement educates people about new products and their uses. Advertising message about the utility of a product enables the people to widen their knowledge. It is advertising which has helped people adopting new ways of life and giving-up old habits. It has contributed to the betterment of the standard of living of the society. As an example, pharmaceutical companies use advertisement to present their new drugs. Those drugs which are the result of new researches are more effective to cure diseases like malaria and so on.

Second, advertisement facilitates consumer choice because of the wide information he has about products. It enables consumers to purchase goods as per their budget requirement and choice. For example to choose between the wide ranges of communication network available, customers refer to the price and quality given in advertisements.

Finally, advertisement informs the buyer about the benefits they would get when they purchase a particular product. The benefit can be a discount on the price of goods. It helps buyers save money for other uses. The benefit can also be the more effectiveness of a product compare to others.

In short, advertisement is a good way to present new devices and items from which buyers can benefit. It also helps us in making responsible choices. Therefore buyers obtain good quality products and save money.