Writing Feedback / IELTS essay - Animals should not be exploited or humans must use animals to satisfy them [6]

A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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Animal-powered transport, Blood sporting and what not ? In the recent days, the best creatures of the world, the animals which help humanity in many ways are being abused. I strongly feel that such activities should be seized and measures have to be taken to protect animals.

Importantly they keep up the "Food Chain". Pets are the best friends for humans and it protects our society and environment. Even dogs are used for sniffing the criminals in police department & armed forces. Also, Sea lions and military dolphins work with navy department to search the enemy divers and lost police personnel.

There are numerous non-governmental organizations and societies striving hard for the protection of animals. Even I visited the blue cross society in Chennai which is doing great on serving food and building shelter for orphaned domestic animals. People for Animals is another committee spread up in many areas and concentrates on protecting the fauna around.

On the contrary, animals are being exploited in many industries. Research Departments uses rats & cats for initial testing for medicines and even in cloning. Cow, Sheep and Goats are hunted badly for Meat & Skin to be used in the leather industry. Also few months back, it is was in the news that hundreds of elephants were poached for their tusks in Kenya.

In a nutshell, animals are also a part of this universe and it is every human's responsibility to safeguard the natural resources. Not but the least, if not protecting them, let us not be a part to destroy them.

Writing Feedback / IELTS essay - Teaching children at home or put them in school- pls review n comment [6]

QN -Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Learning is one of the happiest experience in a child's life. Learning may happen anywhere, be it school or at home. Let us discuss in detail about whether it is necessary for children to attend school or learn at home.

A kid is very much capable of acquiring knowledge from every moment of its life. Putting a kid in school will greatly ameliorated their thinking capability. When looking at other students they get to know the different ways to solve a problem.

School going children, apart from studies adapt and grow aligned with the society and environment. They get to know of being obedient, disciplined and effectively manage their own time. To state my experience, I have put my 4 year old daughter at school where she is able to speak 3 other languages which no body at our home knows to speak.

On the contrary, there are people who feel that children need not be put at school. Since parents are the best teachers in the world, teaching at home may be very effective for the child to learn and understand in their mother tongue. One of my friend, even she resigned her high-paid job feeling that she needs to develop her child by teaching at home. Inspite she taught her kid so well, but her kid grew so timid and shy while interacting with other students of his age which would have easily been broken if she had put him in school. Also many support the fact that, during teenages kids need to burn their midnight oil for their career and why to suffer from childhood.

I strongly feel that children should be put in school which will fine tune them into a better student and later a better citizen.

Writing Feedback / "Every coin has two sides"; Effects of globalization - discuss [7]

In the modern era, globalization has played a prominent role in everyone's life.
Just as the saying - "Every coin has two sides", globalization has brought both positive as well as bad effects to the human kind and we will discuss on the same.

Nobody can deny that acquiring knowledge with the help of modern technology is amazing and fantastic. Being at home, we are capable of knowing the happenings around the world. There are many advancements like online shopping, commodity trading, chatting with friends in various countries, etc., Students of modern era are blessed with the Internet where they can find profound learning through texts, audios and video sessions/courses/tutorials.

On the other hand, there are few disadvantages because of globalization. People are turning to be lazy most of the times since we are able to find everything sitting in front of computers. Long hours are wasted over mobile phone, video gaming and chatting unnecessarily.Quality time spent with the family is also reduced due the above said factors. Importantly students are affected the most because of over exposure to the world. For example, I had a neighbour who pampered his child with all the modern gadgets and the kid spent most of his time playing internet games and watching unwanted movies which spoiled his career in studies.

Having said all these, to conclude there will always be advancements in technology and increase in globalization every year. It is how an individual perceives it and acts taking only the good things from the change.